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MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)

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bakabaka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月2日 at 下午 01:54:05

Artist: MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Title: Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Source: Joshiraku
Tags: strawberry rucker momoiro clover z momoclo takagi reni momota kanako ariyasu momoka tamai shiori sasaki ayaka
BPM: 160
Filesize: 15625kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.03 stars, 87 notes)
  2. Extra (4.89 stars, 415 notes)
  3. Normal (3.06 stars, 107 notes)
  4. Rucker's Insane (5 stars, 323 notes)
  5. Straw's Hard (4.92 stars, 245 notes)
Download: MomoKuro-tei Ichimon - Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
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[Easy] by.Me
[Normal] by.Me
[Straw's Hard] by.Strawberry
[Rucker's Insane] by.Rucker
[Extra] by.Me
Kotone
baka QAQ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!I love uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
我看了十分感动

要GD么, /.\ http://puu.sh/Wrri 这我的图

好鬼畜ww
Strawberry
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW

\WAHHAHA/ \YOHHOHO!/

★★★

Amazing Lunatic
Skystar
0.0
Topic Starter
bakabaka
:3
wonders
QAQ终于回来作图了
Glazbom
:3
hvick225
:3
No_Gu
baka²好久不见
Topic Starter
bakabaka
好久不見 \:3/
LKs
:3
Axey
:3
Topic Starter
bakabaka
:3
Darksonic
:3
No_Gu
[Normal]
这难度tick虽然都压上音但是感觉跟音乐合不来,我的话不会这么放
01:01:489 (5,6) - 音乐里面没有whistle的这个音,放上去听着不自然
其他除了slider感觉不太美观还好

[Straw'S Hard]
不少combo都过10了我觉得可以一条downbeat一个NC
00:03:739 (8) - 我觉得结尾都应该静音但是不知道你啥想法
00:04:489 (1) - tick故意响?。我觉得还是静音比较好
00:13:676 (3,4) - 这里应该1/2+3/4才对vocal,你现在这个节奏不知道你故意的还是听错,反正很不舒服
00:14:051 (4,5,6,7,8) - 可以稍大点不overlap,更美观
00:19:489 (1,2) - 我觉得这样的可以再修修,图形感觉弄的半身不遂。。
00:22:676 (5) - 这样行么。。你那样太难看了 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410121
00:27:082 (1) - whistle足够了,后同
00:29:801 (5,6) - 我觉得这个可以换成俩1/2,现在听着很怪
00:37:864 (1) - 再往下放点,容易打早
00:41:801 (5,6,7,8,9) - 这形状和上面一样
00:49:676从记事本里删了break效果更佳
00:56:989 (9,1) - 觉得hard这样还是危险
01:01:489 (7,8,9,10,11,12) - 为何不放跳,这里音乐这么激
01:09:739 (3,1) - 这梗来不起
01:14:989 (1,2,3,4) - 这样更整齐。(AR放低了方便看 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410129
01:26:239 (7) - 这里只有一个1/1到后面的节奏,为什么你还弄出来个三连
感觉这难度还不够档次,首先你把3/4都压到slider下面,editor看就够闹眼,然后打的时候stack更难看,导致整张图看起来很乱,加1AR能好点但是感觉还是不够整洁。其次我感觉那些3/4节奏不适合这首歌,而且用和风音效的话你多音很明显就能听出来。

[Rucker'S Insane]
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - 音乐里好像没这个音吧。。
00:12:739 (1,2,3) - 间距一样可能好点
00:14:426 (8,1) - 这梗还是慎重点比较好
01:20:989 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 稍微设个图形出来?现在看着感觉有点没条理
其他没了

[Lunatic]
教练救我有baka²有鬼畜²

hard和normal之间加个diff,感觉差的有点远
☆²
Strawberry
fixed mostly ^^ thx
SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 50520
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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[Editor]
Bookmarks: 2239,44989
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Artist:MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Creator:bakabaka
Version:Straw'S Hard
Source:Joshiraku
Tags:Strawberry Rucker

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

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180,128,77239,2,0,B|136:116|100:80,2,90,0|2|2
312,148,77989,6,0,B|284:80|208:60,1,135,12|8
210,69,78364,2,0,B|184:108|132:104,1,90,8|2
44,108,78739,1,0
64,196,78926,1,2
132,256,79114,1,0
152,344,79301,1,2
64,328,79489,2,0,B|148:292|248:288,2,180,4|4|4
152,344,80426,1,2
132,256,80614,1,2
288,168,80989,5,4
344,260,81176,1,4
452,260,81364,1,4
440,92,81739,2,0,B|396:172,1,90,0|2
344,260,82114,1,4
180,148,82489,5,4
77,181,82676,1,4
53,287,82864,1,4
231,299,83239,2,0,B|157:245,1,90,0|2
77,181,83614,1,4
180,148,83989,6,0,B|236:96|312:116,1,135,12|8
308,124,84364,2,0,B|328:190|380:226|456:222,1,180,8|2
400,144,84926,2,0,B|340:228,1,90,2|0
288,288,85301,1,2
212,336,85489,2,0,B|192:288|212:248,1,90,4|8
292,200,85864,2,0,B|288:300,1,90,12|0
368,336,86239,2,0,B|388:296|368:248,1,90,4|0
368,248,86520,2,0,B|411:224,1,45,0|4
Topic Starter
bakabaka

gudbye wrote:

[Normal]
这难度tick虽然都压上音但是感觉跟音乐合不来,我的话不会这么放
01:01:489 (5,6) - 音乐里面没有whistle的这个音,放上去听着不自然
其他除了slider感觉不太美观还好

fix :3

[Lunatic]
教练救我有baka²送分²
謝謝谷掰 \;3/
sherrie__fay
mod req via PM
可能mod慢一點所以有些被提過了o.o☆

[Normal]

  1. fine其實是懶得看
[Straw'S hard]

  1. 00:09:176 (6) - NC
  2. 00:12:176 (6) - ^
  3. 00:13:020 - 建议节奏
  4. 00:14:989 (8) - NC
  5. 00:35:989 (7) - ^
  6. 00:41:801 (5) - ^
  7. 00:49:489 - 拿掉break
  8. 00:52:489 (8) - NC
  9. 01:01:489 (7) - ^
  10. 01:26:520 (8) - 改成三连 这个短滑条不是很好打o.o
[Rucker'S Insane]
  1. 00:11:989 (5) - NC
  2. 00:14:614 (1) - ……這spacing故意的嗎 打圖的時候看上去會亂呢 還是做成stack...?
  3. 00:29:614 (6) - 好像沒有對齊的樣子o.o..?
  4. 00:30:364 (8) - clap
  5. 00:32:989 (5) - 這spacing..不NC嗎
  6. 00:32:989 (1) - +note
  7. 00:34:489 (5,6) - 兩個都開頭加clap
  8. 00:40:114 (1) - +finish
[Lunatic]

  1. 00:06:739 (3) - 建議節奏
  2. 00:11:614 (1) - 開頭+whistle
  3. 00:17:989 (6) - NC
  4. 00:29:801 (1,1,1) - 試著排成這樣?
  5. 00:31:676 (5) - NC
  6. 00:35:614 (2) - 變速不NC嗎?o.o
  7. 00:39:551 (3) - 1 grid down(level 4
  8. 00:47:239 (1) - remove clap
  9. 00:47:614 (1) - +clap
  10. 00:48:551 (4) - NC
  11. 00:51:739 (6) - NC
bossandy
Hi hi~ 我來惹~ wtf!
  
[ General]
 
  1. 強烈建議加一個Normal 現在的Normal太難了
  2. 感覺唱歌的人不只一個 可以把唱歌的人的名字都加到tags裡 不然現在好少 而且加了也可以增加這歌曲貝搜尋到的機會
  3. 其實difficulty的's不要用'S比較好 是因為動畫有什麼跟"S"有關的嗎? 沒有的話建議改成小寫s
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:10:864 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to consistent with other patterns , although there is little break here 00:10:864 ~ 00:11:614
    2. 00:16:864 (1,2,3) - I prefer to move these notes like this move (3) to slider 00:15:739 (3) - 's end , then make them to a triangle , Better flow in my option
    3. 00:18:739 (5,1) - If I was the mapper , I would prefer to make them to a repeat-slider :3
    4. 00:28:864 (5) - Hmm... Maybe a New Combo here? sense this combo pattern is a little long for now
    5. 00:44:989 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a circle with New Combo 00:46:489 - ? The rhythm will become this :
    6. 00:50:614 (1) - I really really don't like kiai time start during slider moving , I think you can remove a repeat and move forward 1/1 beat , then Ctrl+R to fix the spacing problem , oh , if you don't like it , try to add a circle 00:50:614 - , same rhythm but different arrangement
    7. 00:56:614 (5) - New Combo here? Previous pattern set New Combo to Follow the vocal , I think it is the best way to follow vocal like previous pattern
    8. 00:58:489 (1,3) - Swap New Combos to make patterns have the same length
    9. 01:08:614 (5) - New Combo , Same reason as above
    10. 01:10:489 (1,3) - Swap New Combo again
    11. 01:14:989 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders looks very novel , This arrangement is very ok , but I prefer to get a nice flow , I would to change them to some submissive sliders , but it's up to you :3
    12. 01:18:364 - Add a circle here? , music became louder but rhythm become easier , so add a circle here is better than a short break
    13. 01:19:114 - Same as above , music still loud here
    14. 01:24:364 - Same ~
    15. 01:25:114 - Same too :3
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:27:739 (4) - Clap on the arrow isn't fits the music well , I prefer to remove it
    2. 01:06:364 (2) - Whistle on this slider's head sounds strange for me ... Hmm... Maybe just for me though :3
    3. 01:26:614 (8) - Whistle sounds not loud enough , try to add a clap too? clap fits the music well actually
 
[ Straw'S Hard]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None! 草莓醬moew~ ♡
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:03:739 (8) - Curve to the other side looks better to me , and can get a better flow IMO , I feel more comfortable while gameplay :3
    2. 00:11:614 (5) - Ctrl+R ? This flow is not good for me
    3. 00:23:801 (3,1) - A jump here looks better
    4. 00:23:239 ~ 00:25:489 - I have a pattern I want you try , more fun while gameplay ^_^
      248,248,23239,6,0,B|292:260|340:248,1,90,4|2
      400,312,23614,1,0
      424,224,23801,1,4
      464,380,23989,5,0
      400,312,24176,1,8
      424,224,24364,2,0,B|456:188|448:124,1,90,0|8
      328,80,24739,6,0,B|252:80|192:32,1,135,0|8
      192,36,25114,2,0,B|127:101,1,90,8|8
      128,100,25489,1,4
    5. 00:29:801 (5,6) - I really don't like these two slider , I prefer to remove first/second slider , and move forward/backward 1/2 ( Chosen one ) and than add two circle , 00:29:801 - and 00:30:364 - I prefer the pattern which I tell you , but it's up to you
    6. 01:02:614 (7,8,1) - Maybe move circle (8) to x:439 y:194 to make a equilateral triangle?
    7. 01:05:426 (4,1) - It probably me only, I feel like a jump here , Maybe you can move to x:156 y:64 , more fun !!
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:50:989 (3) - This sounds not loud enough , I suggest you to add a finish hitsound here , better to me because kiai time start here :3
 
[ Rucker'S Insane]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:05:614 (4) - Use 1/4 to follow the music well , like Baka²'s Lunatic
    2. 00:08:614 (5,6,7) - I think you can stack them , so many maps have analogous pattern like this , maybe you can try
    3. 00:12:270 (6,7,8,9) - Do something as above?
    4. 00:14:426 (8,1) - Although you use a New Combo to separate them , but I still hope you move this circle to other place , sometimes players may think this stream still going , confusion >_<
    5. 00:32:989 (5,6) - 4 repeats-slider isn't follow the music well , at least remove a repeat on slider (6)
    6. 00:44:989 (6,1) - Swap New Combos to make the Set like previous pattern :3
    7. 00:59:801 (2) - I think stack to 00:59:426 (1) - 's head is better than stack to arrow , or you can put to other place also
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:17:989 (3) - Add some green line and make the volume up gradually? Follow the music very well IMO
 
[ Lunatic]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:06:739 (3) - I really don't like this shape , looks so messy to me try this ? better in my eyes :3
      320,348,6739,2,0,B|252:360|184:292|216:208|288:192|336:236|300:300,1,260
    2. 00:17:989 (6) - A huge jump here , so add a awesome New Combo is needed IMO
    3. 00:59:051 (5,1) - This jump is too huge , plz reduce it a bit
    4. 01:26:239 (1,2) - Move to center....
    5. I really can't mod Amazing in fact... sorry about that Q_Q
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. Amazing!!!
 
  --------------------------------------------------------
我一不注意就全部用英文惹... 希望別介意...
這歌真的好聽 加油了!!!~
Good Luck :3
spboxer3

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. lead-in好像有點太短了 全部調成750ms吧
  2. 影片的offset需要check一下 因為有些地方看起來準 但是過場的地方看起來又好像不太準 所以需要check

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    00:53:989
    00:54:176
    00:54:739
    00:54:926
    01:10:114
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:989 (1,2) - move to x296 y216? 讓這個note在slider內緣中心
  2. 00:35:989 (3,4,5,6) - 何不放個正方形呢? 目前這樣是歪的 ((由spacing可以知道這個確實是歪的
  3. 00:51:739 (2,3) - 你可以讓這個pattern的弧度對整齊 這樣會好看些
    ((圖形那些之前IRC講過了

Straw'S Hard


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    01:02:239
    01:15:739
    01:16:114
    01:17:239
    01:17:614
    01:20:989
    01:21:739
    01:23:239
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 01:06:741 - normal感覺會更好些 妳下了whistle讓我感覺有點畫蛇添足的感覺:( 當然 這是個人感覺問題~所以妳也可以不改^^"
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:07:489 (1,2) - 刻意的人工SL? 如果是的話放遠點會好看些 現在這樣太近了 會讓人感覺stack不是 SL也有點太近了
  2. 00:10:489 (1,2) - 同^
  3. 00:11:614 (5,1,2) - 不如讓00:12:176 (1) - 擺至00:11:614 (5,2) - 中間 這樣雖然沒有spacing 但是看起來會比較好看
  4. 00:13:676 (3,4) - 同00:07:489 (1,2) - 額...後面的自己看一下吧 因為這個也不一定會改 也不好意思用這個洗版面>_<!!
  5. 00:43:114 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 何不擺放平行? 你可以將00:43:114 (1,2,3) - move下去去check看看 現在沒有平行喔^^"

Rucker'S Insane


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:59:989 (1,2,3,4) - 分開些吧 有部分有overlaps了
  2. 01:17:989 (3,2) -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:04:489 - to 00:05:989 - 聲音漸小會比較有感覺~
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:14:614 (1) - lol'd this 這個NC其實看不到吧 看不到吧看不到吧 ((哀怨
  2. 00:29:614 (6,7) - 未stack note 把這個stack好吧
  3. 00:50:614 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 用間距作出區隔來? 例如:00:50:614 (1,2,3) - 用0.75DS 00:51:364 (1,2,3) - 用1.0 DS 00:52:114 (1,2,3) - 用1.25 DS這樣

Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    00:23:989
    01:01:489
    01:03:176
    01:18:551
    01:19:489
    01:23:989
我想吐嘈這星數根本不科學 Insane比Lunatic星數高

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感覺聲音應該漸小會比較好~
mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1) - 一開始這樣下說實話真的有些難辨認 如果一開始是有reverse的話會好read些...
  2. 00:05:989 - 建議用x0.5速度會比較有音樂的氣氛 那個yo~~~的聲音
  3. 00:06:739 (3) - 如果上面改了這個就用x1.0吧
  4. 00:08:989 (6,2) - stack?
  5. 00:11:145 - 加個音 感覺會讓音樂更流暢些
  6. 00:53:239 (1,2,3,4) - 這個節奏2連說實話感覺不出適合音樂~感覺比較像單純想放這個節奏的感覺
  7. 00:56:239 (6) - NC? 這個地方slider返回數有變化 但是slider長度太短所以難以分辨 加個NC會讓人了解這地方是有變化的
  8. 01:16:864 (4,2) - stack 如果改了01:18:364 (2,2) - 別忘了這也要對齊

Done~GL
Skystar
LS三個約好的?
Topic Starter
bakabaka

sherrie__fay wrote:

mod req via PM
可能mod慢一點所以有些被提過了o.o☆

[Normal]

  1. fine其實是懶得看

[Lunatic]

  1. 00:06:739 (3) - 建議節奏
  2. 00:11:614 (1) - 開頭+whistle
  3. 00:17:989 (6) - NC
  4. 00:29:801 (1,1,1) - 試著排成這樣?
  5. 00:31:676 (5) - NC
  6. 00:35:614 (2) - 變速不NC嗎?o.o
  7. 00:39:551 (3) - 1 grid down(level 4
  8. 00:47:239 (1) - remove clap
  9. 00:47:614 (1) - +clap
  10. 00:48:551 (4) - NC
  11. 00:51:739 (6) - NC
All fixed ;D


bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ 我來惹~ wtf!
  
[ General]
 
  1. 強烈建議加一個Normal 現在的Normal太難了
  2. 感覺唱歌的人不只一個 可以把唱歌的人的名字都加到tags裡 不然現在好少 而且加了也可以增加這歌曲貝搜尋到的機會
  3. 其實difficulty的's不要用'S比較好 是因為動畫有什麼跟"S"有關的嗎? 沒有的話建議改成小寫s
tags之後加,其他想維持原狀呢 :<
 
[ Normal]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:10:864 (4,1) - Swap New Combos to consistent with other patterns , although there is little break here 00:10:864 ~ 00:11:614
    2. 00:16:864 (1,2,3) - I prefer to move these notes like this move (3) to slider 00:15:739 (3) - 's end , then make them to a triangle , Better flow in my option
    3. 00:18:739 (5,1) - If I was the mapper , I would prefer to make them to a repeat-slider :3
    4. 00:28:864 (5) - Hmm... Maybe a New Combo here? sense this combo pattern is a little long for now
    5. 00:44:989 (2) - Remove the repeat and add a circle with New Combo 00:46:489 - ? The rhythm will become this :
    6. 00:50:614 (1) - I really really don't like kiai time start during slider moving , I think you can remove a repeat and move forward 1/1 beat , then Ctrl+R to fix the spacing problem , oh , if you don't like it , try to add a circle 00:50:614 - , same rhythm but different arrangement
    7. 00:56:614 (5) - New Combo here? Previous pattern set New Combo to Follow the vocal , I think it is the best way to follow vocal like previous pattern
    8. 00:58:489 (1,3) - Swap New Combos to make patterns have the same length
    9. 01:08:614 (5) - New Combo , Same reason as above
    10. 01:10:489 (1,3) - Swap New Combo again
    11. 01:14:989 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders looks very novel , This arrangement is very ok , but I prefer to get a nice flow , I would to change them to some submissive sliders , but it's up to you :3
    12. 01:18:364 - Add a circle here? , music became louder but rhythm become easier , so add a circle here is better than a short break
    13. 01:19:114 - Same as above , music still loud here
    14. 01:24:364 - Same ~
    15. 01:25:114 - Same too :3
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. 00:27:739 (4) - Clap on the arrow isn't fits the music well , I prefer to remove it
    2. 01:06:364 (2) - Whistle on this slider's head sounds strange for me ... Hmm... Maybe just for me though :3
    3. 01:26:614 (8) - Whistle sounds not loud enough , try to add a clap too? clap fits the music well actually
 All fixed :3

[ Lunatic]
 
  1. Unrankable stuff
    ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
    1. None!
     
  2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
    ( Most of them are my suggestion , you can disagree if you want )
    1. 00:06:739 (3) - I really don't like this shape , looks so messy to me try this ? better in my eyes :3
      320,348,6739,2,0,B|252:360|184:292|216:208|288:192|336:236|300:300,1,260
      換了節奏跟形狀了 :P
    2. 00:17:989 (6) - A huge jump here , so add a awesome New Combo is needed IMO
      OK~
    3. 00:59:051 (5,1) - This jump is too huge , plz reduce it a bit
      大丈夫的 lol....
    4. 01:26:239 (1,2) - Move to center....
      OK~
    5. I really can't mod Amazing in fact... sorry about that Q_Q
    很好了/w\
     
  3. Hitsounds
    ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
    1. Amazing!!!
 
  --------------------------------------------------------
我一不注意就全部用英文惹... 希望別介意...
這歌真的好聽 加油了!!!~
Good Luck :3


spboxer3 wrote:

※ 注意

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改
藍色的是需要討論的問題
黑色就只是建議

general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. lead-in好像有點太短了 全部調成750ms吧
  2. 影片的offset需要check一下 因為有些地方看起來準 但是過場的地方看起來又好像不太準 所以需要check
把影片關掉了沒注意到...

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    00:53:989
    00:54:176
    00:54:739
    00:54:926
    01:10:114

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:11:989 (1,2) - move to x296 y216? 讓這個note在slider內緣中心
  2. 00:35:989 (3,4,5,6) - 何不放個正方形呢? 目前這樣是歪的 ((由spacing可以知道這個確實是歪的
  3. 00:51:739 (2,3) - 你可以讓這個pattern的弧度對整齊 這樣會好看些
    ((圖形那些之前IRC講過了
All fixed :3


Lunatic


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. 01:26:614 - [suggestion]閃個kiai? 就像影片最後放個hanabi一樣~
  2. 多餘的綠線:
    00:23:989
    01:01:489
    01:03:176
    01:18:551
    01:19:489
    01:23:989
All fixed :3

我想吐嘈這星數根本不科學 Insane比Lunatic星數高
哼哼~我善良吧 ;3

Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1) - 感覺聲音應該漸小會比較好~
其實感覺還好耶~

mapping
(These are about your patterns.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:04:489 (1,2,3,4,1) - 一開始這樣下說實話真的有些難辨認 如果一開始是有reverse的話會好read些...
    先暫時不改
  2. 00:05:989 - 建議用x0.5速度會比較有音樂的氣氛 那個yo~~~的聲音
    OK~
  3. 00:06:739 (3) - 如果上面改了這個就用x1.0吧
    原本就是1.0 lol ~改了形狀
  4. 00:08:989 (6,2) - stack?
    OK~
  5. 00:11:145 - 加個音 感覺會讓音樂更流暢些
    保持原狀好排版:3
  6. 00:53:239 (1,2,3,4) - 這個節奏2連說實話感覺不出適合音樂~感覺比較像單純想放這個節奏的感覺
    確實是 lol...
  7. 00:56:239 (6) - NC? 這個地方slider返回數有變化 但是slider長度太短所以難以分辨 加個NC會讓人了解這地方是有變化的
    OK~
  8. 01:16:864 (4,2) - stack 如果改了01:18:364 (2,2) - 別忘了這也要對齊
    這邊對齊有點麻煩~保持原狀;D


Done~GL

謝謝 膜姐 , 剝思思 , 盒子 的MOD \:DD/
Axey
bakabaka :3

Normal

00:18:739(2,1)- =.=我觉得2的朝向是往右的 所以(1)放在右边会比较顺 不过这是normal就无所谓了 不过我觉得2向左弯会更好
00:19:489(1,2)-(1)可以换成和(2)一样的slider (2)的话我觉得可以不要加折返 因为歌词正好结束咯
00:20:989(3)-加个像(2)一样的slider


其他2个gd不错 luna太鬼畜不会mod X<

:)
Strawberry
>< 基本都改了 谢谢mod~
SPOILER
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Title:Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Artist:MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Creator:bakabaka
Version:Straw's Hard
Source:Joshiraku
Tags:strawberry rucker momoiro clover z momoclo takagi reni momota kanako ariyasu momoka kamai shiori sasaki ayaka

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Topic Starter
bakabaka

BakaHuang wrote:

bakabaka :3

Normal

00:18:739(2,1)- =.=我觉得2的朝向是往右的 所以(1)放在右边会比较顺 不过这是normal就无所谓了 不过我觉得2向左弯会更好
00:19:489(1,2)-(1)可以换成和(2)一样的slider (2)的话我觉得可以不要加折返 因为歌词正好结束咯
00:20:989(3)-加个像(2)一样的slider


其他2个gd不错 luna太鬼畜不会mod X<

:)
謝謝阿黃 \:3/
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
hi~


Rucker's Insane

  1. 00:17:989 (3) - 这里加个绿线, 音量25%-30%, 然后结尾的地方加绿线100%, 不然有点吵 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410881
  2. 00:19:114 (4) - 75%速度 3/4? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410883
  3. 00:32:239 (3) - 这个感觉3/4好点o.o
  4. 00:32:989 (5,6) - hao dan teng...
  5. 00:36:364 (1) - 删new combo吧没这个必要..
  6. 00:59:801 (2) - 这个放在滑条头比较科学吧o.o ...
  7. 00:59:989 (1,2,3,4) - 怎么能这样, 前面都那么overmap了这里kiai还不放满么233
  8. 01:09:176 - 可以加两个 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410890
  9. 01:18:739 (1,2,3,4) - 不给力啊 x1.5倍间距比较好
  10. 另外还有就是像01:25:114 (1,2) 这种样子的滑条, 柔和一点比较好看, 像这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410898
  11. 话说路克好善良 我都能FC了233
Straw's Hard

  1. 00:02:239 (3) - 60% volume?
  2. 00:03:739 (5) - 尾上的whistle换clap
  3. 00:12:364 (2) - blanket wwwwww
  4. 00:15:364 (2) - 往上两格
  5. 00:57:364 (1,2,3,4) - ._.这个.. 不太好吧 要不然叠到(4)上
  6. 01:26:520 (8) - ._.放circle 总断尾啊
  7. 01:24:364 (2) - 这样放 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410902
Lunatic

  1. 怎么这么鬼畜..
  2. 00:09:966 - 这一段new combo太多感觉有点乱啊o.o suigemazu一句4个note一个combo就行吧 这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410908
  3. 00:27:270 - 可以加个note啊.. 叠(2)上面
  4. 00:54:739 - 这样。。? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410932
  5. 00:56:239 (1) - 隔一个放一个clap o.o吧
  6. 01:02:426 (1,2) - o.o感觉好诡异的梗
  7. 01:06:364 (2) - 加reverse
  8. 01:08:426 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - zhe ge hao
Normal

  1. 感觉变速有点.. normal难度可以这么放么o.o ...
  2. 00:02:614 (2) - 可以去掉的..
  3. 00:09:364 (2) - x:456 y:260 blanket
  4. 00:10:864 (1) - (84,300) ..或者空的地方可以1/1 slider+reverse +circle补上
  5. 00:46:864 (3) - 也可以去掉..
  6. 01:07:489 (4) - blanket o.o
  7. 略乱.. 最低难度的话, 间距可以小一点... 然后绿线是怎么回事..
话说为什么叫lunatic, 这不科学啊又不是th, 改成extra吧 或者another ReMiX也行啊 也比较适合这个难度...

Good luck~
Topic Starter
bakabaka

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Lunatic

  1. 怎么这么鬼畜..
  2. 00:09:966 - 这一段new combo太多感觉有点乱啊o.o suigemazu一句4个note一个combo就行吧 这样 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410908
    OK :3
  3. 00:27:270 - 可以加个note啊.. 叠(2)上面
  4. 00:54:739 - 这样。。? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410932
  5. 00:56:239 (1) - 隔一个放一个clap o.o吧
    改成1/2放一個 :P
  6. 01:02:426 (1,2) - o.o感觉好诡异的梗
    O.O
  7. 01:06:364 (2) - 加reverse
  8. 01:08:426 (5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - zhe ge hao
Normal

  1. 感觉变速有点.. normal难度可以这么放么o.o ...
  2. 00:02:614 (2) - 可以去掉的..
  3. 00:09:364 (2) - x:456 y:260 blanket
  4. 00:10:864 (1) - (84,300) ..或者空的地方可以1/1 slider+reverse +circle补上
  5. 00:46:864 (3) - 也可以去掉..
  6. 01:07:489 (4) - blanket o.o
  7. 略乱.. 最低难度的话, 间距可以小一点... 然后绿线是怎么回事..
有調一下形狀跟排版了~綠線是為了tick /.\

话说为什么叫lunatic, 这不科学啊又不是th, 改成extra吧 或者another ReMiX也行啊 也比较适合这个难度...


Good luck~
謝謝 CSGA 的MOD ;3
fanzhen0019
鬼畜
Strawberry

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Straw's Hard

  1. 00:02:239 (3) - 60% volume? done
  2. 00:03:739 (5) - 尾上的whistle换clap done
  3. 00:12:364 (2) - blanket wwwwww done
  4. 00:15:364 (2) - 往上两格 done
  5. 00:57:364 (1,2,3,4) - ._.这个.. 不太好吧 要不然叠到(4)上 因为想燃一点。。虽然是hard但是觉得这个还是在范围之内。。
  6. 01:26:520 (8) - ._.放circle 总断尾啊 done
  7. 01:24:364 (2) - 这样放 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/410902 done
thanks
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NatsumeRin
[General]
Consider add an Easy plz... current Normal is a bit too hard to be the easiest diff.
offset:+6
Try to use 4 combo colors? I think it may be useful in some situations (like Rucker's Insane 00:23:989 (1,1,1,1) - )
Rename Rucker's Insane to Hard+ and Lunatic to Insane...? see Lunatic in a non-Touhou beatmap is really weird.

[Normal]
01:02:239 (4) - Consider this beat..? http://puu.sh/Ykno (I think you probably need an Easy so don't take difficulty into account)
01:07:489 (4) - I prefer 3 notes here... the lyric is not that fast/consistent as 00:55:489 (4) -

[Straw's Hard]
00:03:364 (3) - remove?
00:13:957 (4) - start 1/4 later. the current one just sounds not right...
00:16:489 (5) - 我有点为难,你懂。
00:25:582 (1,1) - a bit waste of those beats..
00:31:582 (1,1) - ^
00:35:801 (6) - prefer to remove this... or make 5 a 1/2 slider would also be better imo.
00:43:114 (1,2) - you use a single combo 00:40:114 (1) - here to stress the lyric, but nothing special here...? (expect for a small jump myself, if the combo is too hard, maybe make 2 a 1/2 slider would help)
00:57:364 (1) - In fact, i think 2 sliders here may fit better than this jump. I can know this idea, but the way to do it seems split the lyric into a "back-forth", not two words.
01:17:989 (1) - spacing is too close...

[Rucker's Insane]
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - add whistle to reverse+end? also i think the volume could be made lower...
00:08:989 (1) - such 1/4s kinda breaks the song imo... the song is more jumpy, not 1/4s moving in a low pace... This kind happens a lot in this diff and i don't really like... (hope it's just me)
00:40:301 (2) - remove
00:57:457 (2,2) - remove. I think as the lyric is very clear 1/2 here (and strong enough), the 1/4 seems too extra.
01:02:614 (8) - stack with next (1), also switch new combo.

[Lunatic]
00:04:114 (6) - flow..?
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - it's a series of 1/3s... using such sliders makes the clicks on the irregular place, i prefer you to put it in a more common way...
00:49:207 (2,3) - ..emm what's this for...?
Honestly i think this is made too hard... which isn't really needed.
Strawberry

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Straw's Hard]
00:03:364 (3) - remove? done.
00:13:957 (4) - start 1/4 later. the current one just sounds not right... 恩 换梗;_;
00:16:489 (5) - 我有点为难,你懂。换了个形状TAT 这回没有叠到了 后面的那个同样形状的也改了
00:25:582 (1,1) - a bit waste of those beats.. 这里我感觉spin的话还蛮好
00:31:582 (1,1) - ^
00:35:801 (6) - prefer to remove this... or make 5 a 1/2 slider would also be better imo. 恩 换成一个1/2 slider:3
00:43:114 (1,2) - you use a single combo 00:40:114 (1) - here to stress the lyric, but nothing special here...? (expect for a small jump myself, if the combo is too hard, maybe make 2 a 1/2 slider would help) NC了
00:57:364 (1) - In fact, i think 2 sliders here may fit better than this jump. I can know this idea, but the way to do it seems split the lyric into a "back-forth", not two words. 恩 改了:3
01:17:989 (1) - spacing is too close... 改了~
:) 基本都改惹>< 谢mod!!
SPOILER
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Title:Nippon Egao Hyakkei (TV Size)
Artist:MomoKuro-tei Ichimon
Creator:bakabaka
Version:Straw's Hard
Source:Joshiraku
Tags:strawberry rucker momoiro clover z momoclo takagi reni momota kanako ariyasu momoka kamai shiori sasaki ayaka

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96,240,75176,1,4
192,292,75364,1,4
332,128,75739,2,0,B|376:116|412:80,2,90,0|2|2
456,140,76489,5,4
416,240,76676,1,4
320,292,76864,1,4
180,128,77239,2,0,B|136:116|100:80,2,90,0|2|2
332,28,77989,6,0,B|272:64|196:32,1,135,12|8
196,48,78364,2,0,B|148:44|118:83,1,90,8|2
32,108,78739,1,0
56,196,78926,1,2
128,252,79114,1,0
148,340,79301,1,2
60,324,79489,2,0,B|144:288|244:284,2,180,4|4|4
148,340,80426,1,2
128,252,80614,1,2
288,168,80989,5,4
344,260,81176,1,4
452,260,81364,1,4
440,92,81739,2,0,B|396:172,1,90,0|2
344,260,82114,1,4
180,148,82489,5,4
77,181,82676,1,4
53,287,82864,1,4
231,299,83239,2,0,B|157:245,1,90,0|2
77,181,83614,1,4
180,148,83989,6,0,B|236:96|312:116,1,135,12|8
308,124,84364,2,0,B|308:192|360:240|440:256,1,180,8|2
404,144,84926,2,0,B|340:236,1,90,2|0
289,289,85301,1,2
212,336,85489,2,0,B|192:288|212:248,1,90,4|8
292,200,85864,2,0,B|288:300,1,90,12|0
368,336,86239,2,0,B|388:296|368:248,1,90,4|0
388,236,86520,1,8
412,232,86614,1,4
Topic Starter
bakabaka

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Consider add an Easy plz... current Normal is a bit too hard to be the easiest diff.
OK finished!
offset:+6
all fix
Try to use 4 combo colors? I think it may be useful in some situations (like Rucker's Insane 00:23:989 (1,1,1,1) - )
added :P
Rename Rucker's Insane to Hard+ and Lunatic to Insane...? see Lunatic in a non-Touhou beatmap is really weird.
ok

[Normal]
01:02:239 (4) - Consider this beat..? http://puu.sh/Ykno (I think you probably need an Easy so don't take difficulty into account)
還是保持原狀好了..
01:07:489 (4) - I prefer 3 notes here... the lyric is not that fast/consistent as 00:55:489 (4) -
OK~

[Lunatic]
00:04:114 (6) - flow..?
fix ;3
00:04:489 (1,2,3,4) - it's a series of 1/3s... using such sliders makes the clicks on the irregular place, i prefer you to put it in a more common way...
換了個排法
00:49:207 (2,3) - ..emm what's this for...?
Honestly i think this is made too hard... which isn't really needed.
OK~fix
謝謝NTR的mod ';DD
等待小路的diff :3
Topic Starter
bakabaka
OK~All fixed ;3
Uploaded :)
NatsumeRin
Bubbled.
bossandy
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