shojimeguro wrote:

coyyyyy JT123 dah lama gk maen bareng ma indra

back to main topic
sesuai request mod,saya datang membantu.....ini dia XD

Easy
Coba pake fitur distance snap deh biar diatur jarak tiap beat biar rapi
01:14:960 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1) - coba di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Normal
01:15:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - sama seperti d easy,di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Hard
01:15:284 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1) - ini jg sama aja,di tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

Insane
01:15:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - kayaknya smua diff slalu d sini yg tinggal,tiap akhir note slidernya tuh di kasih suara finish biar rythme lagu lebih terasa

dari smua diff,beat tidak ada yg false and smuanya pada ketukan yg tepat

then i shall take my leave
btw,good work! and i'm sure your map will be ranked for sure!

dubbadeni wrote:

From ★ ~ dubbadeni ' s Beginnner Modding Queue ~ ★
I'm a beginner, don't expect too much!
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General

Sorry, I couldn't find much because this map already is very good!

Easy

00:13:987 (5) - Maybe remove this? It's hard to see for beginners. (i don't think so )
00:38:636 (1) - New Combo (uh-uh)
00:57:447 (4) - You could make this slider longer to 00:59:393 It fits better. (u r right )
01:18:203 (4) - New Combo (uh-huh)

Normal


00:13:987 - Add a circle here?
00:19:501 (1) - New Combo
00:46:744 (7) - New Combo

• 00:11:393-00:14:311 - looks very strange. sliders have not same lengths, use 1/2 snap (because other parts have 1/1 pauses), no rithm (don't follow vocal/music) -> hitsounds broken. It's imposible to play for newbie. Remember - it's diff for players, who play one-two day in osu
  00:13:987 (5) - hidden circle very-very hard for newbie players. you MUST change this
  00:21:122 - there a NC (follow vocals), but you use slider.. delete or move it (and delete NC 00:21:771)
  00:23:717 - ^ probably same problem
  00:33:447 (4) - don't sound here. move to 00:34:095 (with nc)? and add circle on place before
  00:36:690 - NC
  01:09:771 (4) - make it no overlap with 01:11:068 (1)
  01:19:501 (5) - make it no overlap with 01:20:798 (1)

• 00:23:393 (4) - this slider don't sound. two circle is better or move this slider on white tick.
  00:28:906 (1,2) - very confuse. this repeat points must be visible all time. move one of these
  00:36:690 - probably NC, but you have there slider..
  00:41:879 (2,3,4) - try make it more beautifully http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398494
  00:46:744 (7) - NC?
  00:50:960 (3) - move it (because 300 make it hidden) or stack with 00:49:663 (1). first is better
  01:00:041 (6) - NC?
  01:22:744 (3) - you use hidden circle once on all time. it's can be suprise. change this please

• 00:16:906 (3) - hidden repeat point it's unrankable. must fixed
  00:37:663 (3) - looks strange. mb move it outside of slider?

• 00:24:690 (13,1) - too close
  01:22:744 - 01:24:041 - First: NC at 01:22:744, 01:23:230 and 01:23:717. remove others. Second: try ctrl+shift+r 30 on 01:23:230 (1,2,3) and ctrl+shift+r 60 on 01:23:717 (1,2,3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398502

DarkTigrus wrote:

Just random mod. Sorry, my second try at all time

Easy

• 00:11:393-00:14:311 - looks very strange. sliders have not same lengths, use 1/2 snap (because other parts have 1/1 pauses), no rithm (don't follow vocal/music) -> hitsounds broken. It's imposible to play for newbie. Remember - it's diff for players, who play one-two day in osu
  00:13:987 (5) - hidden circle very-very hard for newbie players. you MUST change this
  00:21:122 - there a NC (follow vocals), but you use slider.. delete or move it (and delete NC 00:21:771)
  00:23:717 - ^ probably same problem
  00:33:447 (4) - don't sound here. move to 00:34:095 (with nc)? and add circle on place before
  00:36:690 - NC
  01:09:771 (4) - make it no overlap with 01:11:068 (1)
  01:19:501 (5) - make it no overlap with 01:20:798 (1)

Normal

• 00:23:393 (4) - this slider don't sound. two circle is better or move this slider on white tick.
  00:28:906 (1,2) - very confuse. this repeat points must be visible all time. move one of these
  00:36:690 - probably NC, but you have there slider..
  00:41:879 (2,3,4) - try make it more beautifully http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398494
  00:46:744 (7) - NC?
  00:50:960 (3) - move it (because 300 make it hidden) or stack with 00:49:663 (1). first is better
  01:00:041 (6) - NC?
  01:22:744 (3) - you use hidden circle once on all time. it's can be suprise. change this please

Hard

• 00:16:906 (3) - hidden repeat point it's unrankable. must fixed
  00:37:663 (3) - looks strange. mb move it outside of slider?

Insane

• 00:24:690 (13,1) - too close
  01:22:744 - 01:24:041 - First: NC at 01:22:744, 01:23:230 and 01:23:717. remove others. Second: try ctrl+shift+r 30 on 01:23:230 (1,2,3) and ctrl+shift+r 60 on 01:23:717 (1,2,3) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/398502

Flow and sliders forms looks not very good. You can make it better
Good luck

OumaZhu wrote:

awwww, I love this map
but i newbie player ._.
I can't help many
and this is my first post

[easy]

00:03:284 (3) -not Shaped well
00:06:041 (2) - ^
00:48:690 (5) - -1 revers aro

[normal]

00:33:122 (4) - not shaped well
00:35:717 (4) - -1 revers aro
00:36:690 add note
01:21:771 (2) - not shaped well

[hard]

01:00:690 (2) - not shapped well
00:54:041 (6,7) - change same as 00:54:366 (8) -
00:31:825 (2) - change with reverse aro
00:41:555 (2) - not shaped well
00:04:906 (1) - ^

[insane]

uhmm... no comen





that's all my mod
I hope this map will be ranked soon

Konei wrote:

Ok, here comes my mod~

Make sure you know what the colors I use mean.

red = you have to change it

blue = I would like to know why you don't want to change

purple = I wanted to mention it for you thinking about it

black = suggestion etc.


General

Uncheck countdown and letterboxes during break, beacuse there are no breaks

remove JT123 from tags, because the beatmap creator can be found without his name in tags

SPOILER

Easy

You use your hitsounds in a inconsinstent way, so it's really cracky to listen to them

You should take a hitsound pattern like this

SPOILER

black = clap white = no clap

That's easy to follow and sounds well


00:11:393 (3) allign with 1 and 2

00:17:555 (2) allgin with 1

00:17:555 (2) make it a bit rounder for a perfect blanket with 1 like this: http://puu.sh/R0C9

00:29:555 (4) This slider looks pretty ulgy >.< Change it a bit: http://puu.sh/R0D5

00:43:176 (2) ugly, make it look like 1

00:51:609 (2) you can make this more neat by changing it like this: http://puu.sh/R0Nz

00:57:447 (4) change to this: http://puu.sh/R0Ox

01:02:636 (3) change to http://puu.sh/R0PA


Normal


Same about hitsounds like in Easy

00:28:906 (1,2) Stack them perfectly http://puu.sh/R0S8

00:41:555 (1) allgin with 2

00:53:230 (5) This are too many repeats, because newbies often have problems with so many repeats, change into: http://puu.sh/R0U8

00:55:501 (1) This long slider is not really fitting, you should follow the vocals in this part



Hard


Same Hitsound problem


00:15:933 (1) Very ugly :/ Make it like 3

00:17:879 (4) ^

00:19:176 (6) ^

00:37:663 (3) Stack it perfectly with 4's end

00:39:933 This part is to empty, map it



Uhm, you should look at your sliders and try making them look nicer, also you must fix this hitsounds


Good luck for ranking~

HanzeR wrote:

The BPM here is definately 185.


[Insane]
00:01:231 - You have an unsnapped timing section here
00:02:798 - remove, add a quarter note slider instead to match the guitar riff
00:05:393 - Add a note, it follows the sax better
00:07:176 - Remove this note, and start the 1/4 note sliders here instead
00:08:149 - Start the spinner here, the rhythm here should look like this now http://puu.sh/R4bV

00:09:933 (1) - snap this to here 00:09:609
00:10:420 - start this combo here 00:10:257 - instead
00:12:041 -add a note
00:12:202 (7,8) - move these over 1 tick
00:18:041 - add a note here, then move the rest of the combo over one tick
00:25:663 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - snap this entire combo back one tick

00:41:717 - Add a note to this stack here, and move the slider over one tick, and have it end here 00:42:203
00:47:555 - Add a note here and move the reverse over one tick

00:52:257 - Change this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/R4kB

00:55:176 - Start new combo, then make this rhythm like this http://puu.sh/R4lP

00:56:798 - this rhytym works better http://puu.sh/R4nh

01:10:906 - Add a note

Great job for a first map , Your sliders and patterns and such look great, just make sure in the future you follow the rhythm of the music more closely.

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

From BakaHuang & TTTTTTTTTTTT's modding queue

Hi~

[Easy]

00:13:014 - spacing error
00:15:609 - x:56 y:248
00:27:609 - move 1 grid up
00:33:447 - move 1 grid up for the parallel
00:44:474 - spcing error
01:00:041 - move 2 grid down
01:15:609 - kiai start at here
01:19:501 - remove clap,finish mix with clap that is a bit loud.

[Normal]

00:01:231 - useless timing
00:19:825 - I don't think finish fit this note.
00:23:393 - Finish doesn't fit the music here.
00:24:690 - spacing error
00:28:257 - ^
00:57:122 - If you want add a finish hitsound,I think you can move this finish to 00:57:447
01:15:609 - kiai start at here
01:18:203 - add a NC

[Hard]

Slider velocity is too high for a hard difficulty.

2.2 or 2.4 would be better to play.

and switch slider tick rate to 2.

[Insane]

00:01:231 - useless timing
00:41:555 - add a NC
01:14:960 - This spinner is too faster..I mean that should get at least 2000 points on auto mode.
01:17:879 - remove some finsh.

Good luck!

Special thx:
Arn0ld : Mod my map so detail

Arnold0 wrote:

Special thx:
Arn0ld : Mod my map so detail

O_O O_o o_O

Fake Dx

Aloiz wrote:

I think This map is almost done

[insane]

00:24:690 (5) - i think this slider is to long
00:34:095 (1) - add clap
00:36:852 (6,7) - R clap
00:38:474 (3,4) - ^
00:39:609 (6,7) - add clap
00:50:636 (2) - R clap
00:50:798 (3,4) - add slap
01:17:555 (2,3) - stack with 01:17:068 (1) -

[hard]

00:01:663 (1) - slider end 00:01:987
00:02:149 add note

That's only i can mod so far

Nemis wrote:

From my modding queue

[General]
Use the Distance snap, this map is random distanced! All diffs are more hard of what they are (except insane)

[Easy]
00:13:014 (4) - Distance it more from 00:11:393 (3) -
00:15:609 (1) - Distance it more from 00:14:311 (6) -
00:20:474 (3) - Move it as the screen http://puu.sh/XI6D
00:21:771 (1) - Move it one square to down in the grid level
00:24:365 (3) - You should make it better
00:29:555 (3) - Same ^
00:31:501 (1,2,3,4) - Move them as the screen http://puu.sh/XI7E
00:33:447 (4,1,2,3,1) - Use distance snap to distance them
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4) - Make these sliders better, they aren't easy for beginners!
01:00:690 (2) - Distance it more from 01:00:041 (1) -
01:05:230 (1) - Distance it more from 01:04:582 (5) -
01:20:798 (1) - You should make it better
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

00:10:744 (3) - You should make it better
00:12:041 (5) - Same ^
00:13:663 (2) - Same ^
00:22:095 (2) - It's not stacked
00:25:987 (1) - Move it one to left in the grid level
00:34:420 (2) - You should make it better
00:42:528 (3) - Same ^
00:44:474 (6) - New combo
00:47:717 (3) - You should make it better
00:49:014 (5,1) - Same ^
00:52:257 (1,2,3) - Same ^
01:05:230 (1) - Put it as the screen http://puu.sh/XIda
01:06:852 (3) - Distance it more from 01:05:555 (2) -
01:10:744 (1) - You should make it better
01:20:798 (1,2) - Same ^
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

I don't mod sliders and distance in Hard and Insane diffs 'cause the errors are the same.

[Hard]
00:54:366 (7) - Move it one square to up in the grid level
01:03:609 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - A lot of beats to be in hard diff
01:13:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Same ^
01:22:582 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Same ^
Map from 1:24:690 to 1:25:663

this is hard not easy

[Insane ]
01:22:744 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Please change this D: (cool man)
Create streams with 1/4, they looks good (i don;t think so)
Map from 1:24:203 to 1:25:663

PLEASE, use the distance snap and make all slider's form better! Anyway, good luck

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi~~
M4M from King's Lair!

[Easy]

1. 00:11:393 (3,4) - Spacing Error, fix it with distance snap.
2. 00:13:014 (4) - Add New Combo.
3. 00:14:311 (6,1) - Spacing Error.
4. 00:29:555 (3) - Ugly Slider: Try this http://puu.sh/XIUu / Also move it down a bit, it crosses the lifebar otherwise.
5. 00:33:447 (4) - Move it down one grid.
6. 00:35:717 (2,3) - Spacing Error.
7. 00:41:230 (1,2,3,4) - Bad Cluster, better try this: http://puu.sh/XIXH
8. 01:14:311 (3,1) - Spaaaciiiing :3
9. 01:23:393 (3) - Slider crosses lifebar, move it down a few grids.

Okay I suggest you to resnap all notes with distance Snap x0.8 or x0.9 here.
Also it would be nice if you could rework some sliders, especially the short ones.
Make them straight instead of curved that makes stuff much easier for you

[Normal]

1. 00:15:609 (1,2) - Too high they cross the lifebar, move them a bit down.
2. 00:22:095 (2) - Deactivate grid snap and move that note to x: 235 y:161 to stack it perfectly with (1).
3. 00:23:393 (1,2) - Spacing Error.
4. 00:27:933 (4,1) - Spaaacing Error.
5. 00:30:852 (3) - ^
6. 00:42:528 (3) - Too high, move it down!
7. 00:44:474 (6) - Flip this Slider horizontally with ctrl+j and fix spacing afterwards so it won't overlay with (4).
8. 00:54:203 (3,1) - Spacing: They are to close together!
9. 01:11:717 (2) - Move the Slidertail down, it crosses the lifebar.

Same Problems as in Normal here: You must resnap all note with distance snap. This is important!

[Hard]

1. 00:04:257 (8,1) - Spacing: Too close.
2. 00:13:014 (5,6,1) - Make it like this: http://puu.sh/XJf2
3. 00:21:771 (3,4) - Spacing: Too far away.
4. 00:22:906 (5,6) - ^
5. 00:29:879 (6) - Unrankable Slider: It is forbidden to make slider slower with so many red Sliderpoints.
6. 01:00:365 (1,2) - Spacing: Too close.

[Insane]

1. 00:02:798 (5) - Add Finish.
2. 00:52:582 (4,5) - Spacing: Too far away

Okay Insane looks actually quite good.

All in all this is a good first map.
If you could fix the spacing between all notes with distance snap enabled this would turn out to be a proper map.
You can use the AIMod to find all spacing errors btw. Just go to "File" and then to "Open AIMod".
Also you need to practice to make curved sliders, here's a good thread where I learned how to make them:
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194

Alright, Good luck and have fun Mapping!

Ayu wrote:

Hey there~

[OVERALL]
I played your diff's, just to take a quick look. I saw your sliders aren't your best thing, so have this nice link: viewtopic.php?f=56&t=37194
This thread shows you what you have to know about sliders.

Your patterns also lack a bit of creativity, so I'll help you with that later. because right now, I'm going to focus on your sliders.

[Easy]

00:11:393 (3) - This slider is ugly. Move the middle anchor 3 grids to the left to make it better.
00:14:311 (3) - Move the ending anchor back to the middle of the slider ending and put an anchor in the middle and then move it 2 grids up.

Hmm.. What's with all the ending anchors being so far away from the slider ending? Here, have a list of them so you can fix it;

List of fail slider endings and ugly sliders

00:11:393 (3) -
00:13:014 (1) -
00:14:311 (3) -
00:17:230 (2) -
00:20:474 (3) -
00:22:420 (2) -
00:24:365 (3) -
00:26:960 (1) -
00:28:257 (2) -
00:36:690 (1) -
00:38:960 (3) -
00:41:230 (1) -
00:43:501 (4) -
00:44:474 (1) -
00:49:663 (1) -
00:51:609 (2) -
00:54:203 (1) -
00:56:149 (3) -
01:00:690 (2) -
01:02:636 (3) -
01:03:609 (4) -
01:05:230 (1) -
01:07:176 (2) -
01:09:771 (5) -
01:11:717 (1) -
01:15:609 (1) -
01:18:203 (3) -
01:19:501 (4) -
01:20:798 (1) -
01:22:095 (2) -
01:23:393 (3) -

I also mentioned ugly sliders, so you should fix all of these above. Probably even more if I forgot some.

Hmm.. Also the hitsounds.. Did you know that you can also place a hitsound on only the Slider start and/or Slider end?
Well, have a list of hitsound errors..

List of hitsound errors

00:14:311 (3) - Only put a finish where you click, so only on (3)'s start in this case.
00:26:960 (1) -
00:31:501 (1,2,3) - Finish spam, also they sound ugly.
00:41:230 (1) -
01:19:501 (4) - Finish error
01:23:393 (3) -

[Normal]

Same things as the previous difficulty, so I'll make 2 lists again:

List of fail slider endings and ugly sliders

00:10:744 (3) -
00:12:041 (5) -
00:13:014 (1) -
00:13:663 (2) -
00:14:636 (3) -
00:16:582 (2) -
00:17:555 (4) -
00:18:528 (2) -
00:22:420 (3) -
00:23:393 (1) -
00:24:690 (3) -
00:26:311 (2) -
00:27:933 (4) -
00:28:906 (1) -
00:29:879 (2) -
00:31:825 (2) -
00:33:122 (4) -
00:34:420 (2) -
00:35:717 (4) -
00:36:366 (1) -
00:37:014 (2) -
00:42:528 (3) -
00:44:474 (6) -
00:47:717 (3) -
00:49:014 (5) -
00:49:663 (1) -
00:52:257 (1) -
00:53:230 (2) -
00:54:203 (3) -
00:57:447 (5) -
00:58:420 (6) -
01:00:690 (3) -
01:02:636 (1) -
01:03:933 (3) -
01:05:555 (2) -
01:07:501 (5) -
01:09:122 (3) -
01:10:744 (1) -
01:11:717 (2) -
01:12:690 (3) -
01:15:933 (2) -
01:16:906 (3) -
01:18:852 (3) -
01:20:798 (1) -
01:21:771 (2) -
01:23:068 (4) -

List of hitsound errors

00:23:393 (1) - Well this is only one this time, because here again you use unneeded finishes.

Like I said, I'd only focus on sliders. But yeah. I mentioned a lot of them now for easy and normal, so you would be able to find them in the other diffs yourself.

I'll mod your map again if you fix all of these sliders. Then, I'll also help you with patterns. We can discuss this in-game. So, catch me up in-game if you're ready.

Sonnyc wrote:

Hi~ Sorry for the delay..

　
[General]
-- Every difficulty has quite lots of distance problems, so I won't mention every. (Minor jumps in Easy difficulties don't look good)


[Easy]
00:19:825 (2) - Distance
00:26:960 (1) - ^
00:31:501 (1) - ^
00:38:311 (2) - ^
00:33:447 (4) - 1 Grid up
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4,5) - Organized distance please
01:13:663 (2) - Delete Finish
01:14:311 (3) - Add Finish


[Normal]
00:14:636 (3) - Distance
00:20:474 (6) - 1 Grid Left
00:23:393 (1) - Make some change for the distance
00:30:852 (3) - Make a Triangle with (1,2)
01:24:690 (1) - Add Finish


[Hard]
00:03:284 (7) - Add New combo
00:04:906 (1) - Delete New combo
00:06:690 (3) - Add New combo
00:23:717 (6) - ^
00:25:825 (1) - Delete NC
00:26:960 (2) - Add NC
00:26:508 ( ) - Add a note?
00:54:366 (7) - Stack to (6)
01:02:311 (7) - Add NC
01:03:609 (1) - Delete NC


[Insane]
-- btw, can 01:15:771~ could be playable?? hahaha cookiezi can play that

00:03:122 (7) - New combo?
00:08:149 (11) - Finish
00:08:474 (1) - Start at 00:08:311, end at 00:09:447
00:43:825 (5) - Stack with (3)
01:24:041 (4) - Stack with (1)

You should work more harder~ Good luck

BL-Daisuki wrote:

Thanks for choosing our queue! I hope my mod can be useful to you and sorry for late...

[General]

Inconsistency in combo colours: http://puu.sh/10QkF

[Easy]

00:11:393 (3): Short this spinner to 00:12:041 and add a note in 00:12:690.
00:15:609 (1): Move this slider to 00:15:284, short this spinner to 00:15:933 and add a note in 00:16:582.
00:19:176 (1,2,3): Make spacing like this: http://puu.sh/10QCI
00:24:365 (3): End slider in 00:25:663: http://puu.sh/10QLA
00:33:447 (4): End slider in 00:34:095 and add a note in 00:35:068.
01:03:609 (4,5,1): Make like this: http://puu.sh/10RLo
01:11:717 (1): Move slider to 01:12:041, end in 01:13:014 and add note in 01:11:717
01:14:960: Add a note?
01:24:690 (1): Make like this: http://puu.sh/10RRd


No kds for now
Too much tired for mod now. Will edit this post with mods for the others diff tomorrow.

176,40,16582,2,0,B|120:56|104:120,1,100
208,136,17230,1,0
248,232,17555,2,8,B|312:216|312:128,1,100

32,216,37014,2,8,B|40:272|104:304,2,100

Aldwych wrote:

Hello! From my modding queue :

[General]

Why not for hard and insane diff start at 00:00:366 If you do it, don't forget to make a lead-in.
You took risks in hard and insane diff with Ds = x1,20, of course it could be rank with it but it make a map harder when DS and SV are not the same.

[Easy]

Why sometimes you make x1,00 Ds and sometimes x 0,80?
Combo colours must be the same for all diff. Your have one wrong here.

00:31:505 Wrong Ds too close
00:41:230 Why everything is too far here?
00:51:609 Can you make similar slider (like the previous one)?
01:05:230 Too close from the previous one.
01:09:771 456/192 => 440/176 (the middle of the slider) and 456/69 (the reverse arrow) to make it more curve for the circle.
01:17:55 Distance snapping is too far
01:20:798 Can you make it more curve?

[Normal]

00:09:447 Imo, it's an overmapping, there's no really sound we can hear here.
00:12:041 Move it one grid to the up
00:13:663 You can move this slider to make it curve about the previous slider.
00:15:609 :

176,40,16582,2,0,B|120:56|104:120,1,100
208,136,17230,1,0
248,232,17555,2,8,B|312:216|312:128,1,100

And of course change placement after these changements.
00:18:528 Too close (DS) and can you make it morve curve?
00:24:365 Too far
00:24:690 Use same slider like the previous one
00:27:933 ^
00:29:879 You can make it morve curve from the circle.
00:37:014

32,216,37014,2,8,B|40:272|104:304,2,100

It will be better from the previous circle
00:49:014 like at 29:879
00:53:230 Use the end of slider to make the next slider somthing curve
00:54:203 ^
00:58:420 ^
01:01:987 ^
01:03:933 ^
01:05:230 too close
01:09:122 Can you make it more curve from the previous circle?
01:10:744 Near!

[Hard]

00:04:744 Add circle?
00:08:149 Delete circle and make a spinner? End like insane diff. If not, break time imo.
00:22:909 Why jump?
00:23:717 Too much far, for an insane diff it's ok but for and hard diff not really (when i make an hard diff, if i make a jump, i don't create it over x1,5).
00:25:663 Start the slider here or add circle?
00:27:284 Why jump?
00:28:582 Too close
00:29:879 Too far
00:31:825 Too close
00:34:420 Can you make it more curve?
00:36:365 Those sliders have problems, make one curver (I just say do like at 00:37:014 in the normal diff) to make it more beautifull to see.
00:39:771 With an high HP drain, make nothing here could fail the player, can you fix it?
00:43:825 Too close
00:54:365 Can you stack it better?
00:56:798 Finish the slider at 00:57:284 and start the spinner at 00:57:447?
01:16:744 Make the same slider like the previous one?

[Insane]

00:03:933 Too bad slider when you can make a stream here
00:08:149 Same as hard diff
00:10:420 I think you can make something more beautifull with those for 4 sliders.
00:13:825 Imo, there's too much reverse arrow, can you change it with a slider?
00:19:663 ^
00:20:230 to 00:20:960 What a nice stream you don't use here.
00:25:663 Add circle?
00:47:555 Streeaaaaaammm!
01:12:041 Too close
01:15:771 That's a so much beautifull end, i'm jalous!! Just to say at 01:18:852 to 01:19:338 The stop cut the end and it's ugly imo.

Fiiuu that's all. The biggest problem in your map are DS which is not really respected around all diff and patterns around sliders which can make this map a little ugly but you choose circle and sliders at good time and you don't really make overmapping so that's good.

Good luck and sory for late and nazi mod.

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 165,114,207
Combo3 : 219,219,219

SPOILER

[Easy]
- Its easy.. Don't force yourself to fit the notes with the vocals xD
- http://puu.sh/13bTC remove all clap that on the 3rd line and 1st line.. and add to 2nd and 4th (its okay if the note weren't there) I'll try to give mods that will fit the clap points
- remember to
00:08:149 - how bout add spinner here? and end it 00:09:447
00:11:393 (3) - this. too forced.. end it 00:12:041 and reversed it
00:10:744 (2) - add finish
00:13:987 (2) - move 00:13:663 and add clap
00:14:311 - add clap
00:15:609 (1) - if you want to do the rhythm like this, move the slider to 00:15:933 and add circle 00:15:609 and add clap
00:17:879 - remove clap
00:19:176 (1) - move 00:18:852
00:19:825 (2) - delete and add 1/1 slider reverse at 00:19:501 . and add clap at 4th and second white line
00:20:474 - don't you think the whistle sound, sounded very annoying?
00:21:122 - ^ remove whistle and add finish
00:21:771 (1,2) - move to 00:21:447
00:24:041 (3) - add circle
00:24:041 (4) - whistle..?! its so annoying to here.. ><
00:26:311 - add circle and add finsih
00:26:960 (1) - uh... finish nya ribuuuuttt ><
00:26:960 (1,2) - this sound weird.. so :
- delete (2)
- (1) should end 00:28:257 (with reverse already)
- add 1/1 slider here
00:29:555 (3) - delete, supaya waktu main, keluar perasaan Wawwww kereenn xD and add break tapi kalo ga juga gapapa sih xD
00:31:501 - starting here, sliders are more fit with slider reverse. so
- 00:33:447 - 1/1 slider reverse
- 00:35:068 (1) - delete . change beat snap divisor to 1/2 and add slider 00:34:420 till 00:34:906, reverse it.
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ritemnya lebih bagus kalo di geser ke 00:40:906 xD
00:45:771 - if you did ^ this part will so blank
00:44:150 (1) - the finish is so annoying again =w=
01:11:717 (1) - whistles ^ ><
whistles whistles whisltes not fit on this song.. remove it and remove it please... xD
-Oh.. xD snap all spacing.. -

136,80,9771,2,8,B|360:80,1,200,2|10
424,128,10744,2,0,B|448:80|424:32,2,100,8|0|8
336,172,11717,1,8
236,188,12041,2,0,B|244:252|296:268,2,100,10|2|10
156,128,13014,6,0,B|156:232,1,100,0|8
76,164,13663,2,0,B|68:100|16:84,2,100,8|0|8
156,228,14636,2,0,B|244:268|356:252,1,200
296,168,15609,6,0,B|416:160,2,100,8|0|8
196,148,16582,2,0,B|172:80|104:80,1,100,0|8
104,172,17230,1,0
8,192,17555,2,0,B|24:256|88:268,1,100,0|8
104,172,18203,5,8
104,72,18528,2,0,B|144:72|144:72|188:96|216:136|212:192|192:224,1,200,8|0
200,308,19501,1,0
280,248,19825,1,8
376,248,20149,1,0
472,248,20474,1,12

Teru21 wrote:

HI xD From our mod queue xD

Lets start

Kiai times should be
00:49:663 ~ 01:15:609

2 Blues as combo colour..? how bout

[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,128,255
Combo2 : 165,114,207
Combo3 : 219,219,219

Hitsound suggestion xD
- http://puu.sh/13bP3
- http://puu.sh/13bT7

SPOILER

[Easy]
- Its easy.. Don't force yourself to fit the notes with the vocals xD
- http://puu.sh/13bTC remove all clap that on the 3rd line and 1st line.. and add to 2nd and 4th (its okay if the note weren't there) I'll try to give mods that will fit the clap points
- remember to
00:08:149 - how bout add spinner here? and end it 00:09:447
00:11:393 (3) - this. too forced.. end it 00:12:041 and reversed it
00:10:744 (2) - add finish
00:13:987 (2) - move 00:13:663 and add clap
00:14:311 - add clap
00:15:609 (1) - if you want to do the rhythm like this, move the slider to 00:15:933 and add circle 00:15:609 and add clap
00:17:879 - remove clap
00:19:176 (1) - move 00:18:852
00:19:825 (2) - delete and add 1/1 slider reverse at 00:19:501 . and add clap at 4th and second white line
00:20:474 - don't you think the whistle sound, sounded very annoying?
00:21:122 - ^ remove whistle and add finish
00:21:771 (1,2) - move to 00:21:447
00:24:041 (3) - add circle
00:24:041 (4) - whistle..?! its so annoying to here.. ><
00:26:311 - add circle and add finsih
00:26:960 (1) - uh... finish nya ribuuuuttt ><
00:26:960 (1,2) - this sound weird.. so :
- delete (2)
- (1) should end 00:28:257 (with reverse already)
- add 1/1 slider here
00:29:555 (3) - delete, supaya waktu main, keluar perasaan Wawwww kereenn xD and add break tapi kalo ga juga gapapa sih xD
00:31:501 - starting here, sliders are more fit with slider reverse. so
- 00:33:447 - 1/1 slider reverse
- 00:35:068 (1) - delete . change beat snap divisor to 1/2 and add slider 00:34:420 till 00:34:906, reverse it.
00:41:230 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ritemnya lebih bagus kalo di geser ke 00:40:906 xD
00:45:771 - if you did ^ this part will so blank
00:44:150 (1) - the finish is so annoying again =w=
01:11:717 (1) - whistles ^ ><
whistles whistles whisltes not fit on this song.. remove it and remove it please... xD
-Oh.. xD snap all spacing.. -

SPOILER

[Normal]
ctrl a , w 2 times (it'll disappear all slider whistle..
Note that i use grid level 4.. so, the mod will be on grid level 4 and beat snap divisor to 1/4, coz, I can't shape the slider freely when I use 1/1
oh... how bout (contoh ya)

136,80,9771,2,8,B|360:80,1,200,2|10
424,128,10744,2,0,B|448:80|424:32,2,100,8|0|8
336,172,11717,1,8
236,188,12041,2,0,B|244:252|296:268,2,100,10|2|10
156,128,13014,6,0,B|156:232,1,100,0|8
76,164,13663,2,0,B|68:100|16:84,2,100,8|0|8
156,228,14636,2,0,B|244:268|356:252,1,200
296,168,15609,6,0,B|416:160,2,100,8|0|8
196,148,16582,2,0,B|172:80|104:80,1,100,0|8
104,172,17230,1,0
8,192,17555,2,0,B|24:256|88:268,1,100,0|8
104,172,18203,5,8
104,72,18528,2,0,B|144:72|144:72|188:96|216:136|212:192|192:224,1,200,8|0
200,308,19501,1,0
280,248,19825,1,8
376,248,20149,1,0
472,248,20474,1,12

much better.. but if you don't want to use it, at least, copy the slider.. xD
00:20:474 (6) - agak bosen yah kalo (4,5,6) semua linear2 aja.. so, (6) x:452 y:180
00:21:122 (1) - if change ^ , spacing please
00:22:095 (2) - better if stacked under (3)
00:23:393 (1) - aline it with (3)
00:24:366 (2) - x:220 y:164
00:24:690 (3) - slidernya gimana gitu ya.. copy dari yang punya ku
00:26:311 (2) - panjangin sampe 00:26:960. jadi si (3) gimana..? ilangin reverse nya, geser ke 00:27:284
okei... selebihnya, slider yg 1/1, copy aja... ada yang bentuknya gimana gituu...
00:38:311 (1) - why spinner here..? OAO
00:36:366 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/13bVe
oh.. and, when I said the slider are ugly, then its ugly.. Dx
00:42:528 (3) - Ugly http://puu.sh/13bWV
00:44:474 (6,1) - (1) placement is so ugly because its not constantly overlapped with (6)
00:47:717 (3,5) - (5) bentuknya aneh kalo diliat sama2 sama (3x sama lol) (3), tapi waktu (5,6) hasilnya bagus, jadi gimana ya... ><
00:49:663 (1) - change into 2/1 slider
00:53:230 (2,3,5,6) - ugly sliders ><
01:01:987 (5) - x:444 y:164
01:02:636 (1) - x:380 y:344
01:03:933 (3) - http://puu.sh/13bZq
01:05:230 (1) - spacing if you change ^
01:05:555 (2) - Overlap if you change ^
01:21:771 (2,3) - swap notes. so (3) will be at (2) place and (2) at 01:22:095

[Hard]
00:00:366 - start here. oh don't worry, see the next mod
song setup > Audio > Lead in 1.5 s xD if you change ^
00:11:068 (3,4) - the placing looks ugly
00:13:338 (1) - make an U shape slider?
OMG... too lazy to mod this diff... >< gomen, ask another people...

OMG again... >< I'll ask another people on the mod queue to mod the hard and Insane diff.. (but if they want...)

Okay.. too tired mod this.. Ask me to recheck on easy and normal when you finish correcting your map

Sadly.. this still doesn't deserve my star..
but good Luck (i'll give you my star on the rechecking if it turn out good )