meiikyuu wrote:

Easy
00:00:874 (1) - add whistle at beginning of slider done
00:39:193 (3) - please move the last point of the slider one grid to the left (to form a neater blanket around 2) done

nice diff.~

Normal
seems fine, nothing important i could find XD

Insane
00:19:782 (4) - move center point 2 grids to the right (more neater slider shape) fixed shape


nice map , gl

-Bakari- wrote:

yo~

kinda recheck

[General]
same tickate for all diffs have I unify them? it looks too bad if I use tick rate 2 in Easy because there are tick tick tick...

[Easy]
HP Drain and OD -1 (too hard now) HP -1 but no change about OD. 2 is fit to this diff imo
00:53:311 (1,3) - please avoid overlaps like this. beginner aren't able to read patterns like this I like this arrange and don't want to change. then, these slider is not continued. there is a circle between these slider. so I didn't change this.
01:06:924 (2,4) - make it more readable maybe done
01:30:874 (3) - seems too short (unreadable for beginners) consider the low BPM, no changed this. sorry
01:31:630 (1) - whistle~ done
01:35:159 (2,3) - still a bit overlapped with spinner's hitburst moved a little below.

[Normal]
hitsounds are a bit loud for me? maybe -5-10%? hmm..I don't think so, and well audible hitsounds are not bad things. so nochange
AR +1 to keep consistency in ar and lider velocity. it looks better with AR 5 tried 5, but it looked a little fast. I want AR 4.5 ><
00:27:092 (4) - nazi: third point: x164 y152 done
00:39:193 (1) - remove nc? (nc pattern: NC each 2nd big line) you're right!

[Insane]
01:22:807 (2,4) - ctrl + r. won't cause so many rages while playing with hidden I don't like the continual rotation to same direction
01:31:630 (1) - end at white line (shorter) + whistle it seems that vocal ends here. so no change.
01:35:664 (1) - ^^

those wrote:

Hey there. Nice to see you've applied the (Short Ver.) to the map, but in case anyone was wondering, here's the source: thanks!


[General]

1. When you mouseover pause-back, it touches the CAFE SOURIRE at the bottom of pause-overlay. http://puu.sh/LD0F
   See what edits you can make to this image to make it look better. oh yes...but I'm very poor at editing images...it may be fixed but I just deleted "CAFE SOURIRE".
2. 01:13:485 - Having the Kiai end here doesn't make a lot of sense. Try 01:21:552 - . fixed
3. 01:23:569 - Try adding a Kiai flash here. hmm..ok, I'll try it. but previous kiai time ends just 2 sec before and I feel it may use kiai effect a lot.

[Easy]

1. 00:31:132 (3,4,5) - This kind of overlapping may be confusing to newer players. fixed. I hope new pattern is alright...
2. 00:55:334 (3) - A lot of this slider is being covered by 00:52:812 (4,1) - . Consider a reposition, or even something like this: I loved that pattern, but too many modders said you should fix, so changed the rhythm as you show.
   

[Normal]

1. 00:06:930 (1) - Remove new combo from spinner; it's seemingly a continuation of 00:04:914 (1,2) - , and HP drain would be a lot better if you didn't get a burst of it in the middle of "kokoro no tane". I see. fixed
2. 00:47:519 (4) - Anchors make this slider bend at unnecessarily large angles. If you're doing that just so you can stack 00:48:779 (5) - with (3), then I don't think you're doing it right. Something like this would be more fitting; of course, please do your best to make it symmetrical: fixed the shape of slider.
   
3. 01:34:157 (1) - Remove new combo; best if you made 01:31:636 (1,1,2,3) - one entire combo. ok

[Insane]

1. 01:35:670 (1) - Would be a lot better if you mapped this drum fill instead of using a spinner. This is the Insane diff and you have three spinners at the end, which makes this not so attractive. Best if you could also map through 01:31:636 (1) - as well. yes I was thinking about this...ok, both done, then changed the flow around these parts and the pattern of NC.

I'll be back.

those wrote:

Everything's looking great.

[General]

1. Tag "vn"; really useful for in-game searching. hmm..it's new for me. added
2. See if you can do something about making the insides of cursor.png more centered. done, but I don't know it was perfectly solved.

Please PM me after this has been addressed.

wmfchris wrote:

[Insane]
00:24:577 (6) - [Nazi] down 1 grid lv4 to make the spacing accurately I want to make these notes symmetrically, so adjusted whole the distance.
00:38:948 (3) - add clap? Similar to 00:37:939 (4,5) - this (3,4) is also slightly heavier. added

[Easy]
00:47:267 (3) - As you didn't put finish across the whole diff, do the same here? removed the clap

That's not, the map looks ready and when you're finished find me again.