No_Gu wrote:

from in-game

[Proper]
00:28:410 (3) - 加条40%线然后去掉whistle可能比较好，直接听感觉像是音乐没音似的 Yes
别的没了

[Decent]
01:19:174 (1,2,1) - 开头都应该有finish I think it's okay now.
01:46:867 (1) - 低难度0.5x没问题? I think it's readable for newbies.
01:50:658 (2) - 开头clap Oppps done
02:37:636 (1,1) - 我觉得这个真心相当悬 I think it's okay(?

[Space]
00:58:075 (1,2,3,4) - 前后好像都不是这个间距
01:47:526 (4) - 至少加个NC吧。跟前面slider那么像还连个tick都没

I will leave it to Regou.

[Interstellar]
01:00:218 (1) - 跟背景类似管道穿梭那种声音至少要把这slider拉到 01:00:548
02:08:790 (1) - ^

All done

[Cosmic]
真找不出来了

射颗星好了。。 Thanks a lot

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

Hi again ~~~B(~~~~


[Proper]

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1. 00:12:586 (1) - whistle ? Yep
2. 00:15:223 (1) - ^^ Yep
3. 00:41:592 (3,1) - sounds strange a bit....vocal and music hit very hard here 00:42:086, i think pattern should play this tick, mb smth like this x.x http://puu.sh/Jfx8 (#3 finish revert to fit BG music, #4 slider can be replaced with short spam sliders) Good idea!
4. 00:47:526 (1,2) - hmm....mb this ? http://puu.sh/JfyN Yes,madam!
5. 00:54:119 (1) - i think slider note like previous pattern sounds better, but not a big deal here huh..?
6. 00:54:119 (1,1,1) - not good NC spam, 00:54:119 (1) - RNC here and 00:55:438 (1,1) - combine them in 1 color Although there's really many NC spam,but I think these NC fit my NC pattern ,so fine.
7. 01:12:251 (2,2) - imo this overlap is bad idea for easiest diff..... It isn't too overlapping,the pevious note disappears when the new one comes.
8. 01:37:636 (1,2) - hmm mb change it to long slider ? fits with vocal and easier to catch new rhytm Good idea!
9. 01:48:185 (1,2,3,1) - well again hard finish sound hit red ticks here and pattern not playing it....sounds not good for me...you can do this http://puu.sh/JfCi It 's fine IMO..
10. 01:54:779 (2,3) - change this to long slider like previous o.o? fits better imo Yep
11. 01:56:097 (1,2) - same as before Done
12. 02:02:691 (1) - and here no
13. 02:02:691 (1,1,1) - and same NC suggestion here copy-paster B( no
14. 02:31:043 (1,1,1) - this one sounds funny with normal whistles on head/body
    
    i tried to play it www and i can say those parts were a bit uncoumfortable
15. 00:47:526 (1,2) - Done
16. 01:12:251 (2,2) - No since I feel it 's fine.
17. 00:59:724 (1) - yeah this one too x.x dunno why ww (i feel better if there were note there o.o http://puu.sh/JfIt ) also u can change it on short rever slider, fits better with vocal No...
    ^didnt point similar parts, if you would like to change those 3 make sure to change all simmilar parts in this map B(

[Decent]

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1. 00:09:949 (1,3) - hmm why no whistles here ? make it same with your proper diff ? Sorry
2. 00:12:586 - 00:23:135 place same whistles with your proper diff Yep
3. 00:25:113 (4) - remove whistle tail Yep
4. 00:29:065 (1,2) - hmm....as i said before its better to start pattern either with long slider or short sliders spam, easier to catch rhytm, start pattern with note and then stop plays a bit weird x.x ...I think it's okay in normal
5. 00:44:889 (1,2) - hmm....why not smth simple here B( http://puu.sh/JfVl , arrows can be *whistled* Yeah
6. 00:48:680 (1,2) - long slider fits better for me Yeah
7. 00:58:075 (1,3) - not symetrick B) I suppose it isn't a symetrick
8. 01:00:383 (3) - mb whistle ? No
9. 01:33:021 (4) - same as before um...
10. 01:50:658 (2,3) - would be nice if you place this note like this http://puu.sh/JfXG Yes!
11. 01:52:636 (7,8) - B) No this time
12. 01:57:251 (1,2) - same as before, long slider B(
13. 02:08:955 (3) - yep no
14. 02:15:878 (3) - NC here like before o.o? OPPs I forgot it.
15. 02:31:043 (1,1,1) - same about N whistles
    
    ok i played it too B(
16. 01:38:295 (1) - hmm this plays hard after spinner for me.....mb just slider ? http://puu.sh/Jg1W ww no.
17. 00:44:889 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - and this part plays very bad for me x.x, if you dont want to change it you can do at least this 00:46:207 (1) - http://puu.sh/Jg34 changed as above you suggested.
    plays better if those 2 sliders will follow same rhytm.
18. 01:46:867 (1) - would be really nice if you increase SV a bit (0.75x), changing 1 to 0.5 was confusing for me x.x

Done
[Space]

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1. 00:22:476 (4) - i guess you forgot whistle o.o
2. 00:25:113 (4) - you can use arrow whistle like here 00:27:751 (4) -
3. 00:52:801 (1,2,3,4) - was a bit hard to catch this when i played if first time, mb because i was waiting sliders like before x.x.... just saying
4. 01:00:383 (3) - you can use whistle here
5. 01:12:251 (4) - you forgot finish here o.o
6. 01:20:575 (1) - imo sounds much better with whistle on soft sound ==!
7. 01:42:251 (6,7,8,9) - i can say that this overlap is most confusing part in this map
8. 01:46:867 (1,2,3,4) - oh this too www, because of low spacing it plays rly weird, hard to understand, is this 01:47:196 (3) - short slider or 2 notes....orz.....increasing spacing like this will make it much more readable http://puu.sh/Jgib
9. 01:50:163 (4,5,6,1,2) - dont like this part...... mb smth like this ? http://puu.sh/Jgkk
10. 02:08:955 (3) - same as before
11. 02:27:746 (1,1,1) - unnecessary NC spam
12. 02:31:043 (1,1,1) - you can use N sound and place whistle on head/body
13. 02:38:295 (1,2) - was hard to catch new rhytm, would be rly nice if you start this pattern with slider

Leave it to Regou
[Interstellar]

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1. 00:21:816 (1,2,3) - hmm....mb use same spacing for this o.o yes
2. 00:38:295 (1,2,3,4) - same here, imo u wanted same spacing here and missclicked a bit x.x no
3. 00:40:933 (1) - curve a bit B( http://puu.sh/Jgps done
4. 00:55:933 (2,2) - why not ctrl+r x.x They're fine IMO
5. 00:58:075 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - hmm, well maybe mine not following BG music correctly, but it sounds better for me B( http://puu.sh/Jgrf well,I think my rhythm is better o.o.
6. 00:59:724 (1,1) - i understand your idea here, but i wanted to play vocal here x.x, just saying... X)
7. 01:05:163 (2,3,4) - well this is biggest jump on this map, imo better to change it.... http://puu.sh/Jgt No
8. 01:20:575 (1) - i guess i didnt said that before, but i think spinner tail sounds much better with soft sound+whistle ok
9. 01:46:867 (1,2) - hmm....why not 0.75x ? No I feel here's 0.5 speed fits better.
10. 02:06:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - same here No
11. 02:08:295 (1,1) - and here x.x no..
12. 02:13:240 (1) - curve a bit B( http://puu.sh/JgvM yep
13. 02:22:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - star should looks better B( ...I think it's good though.
14. 02:31:043 - same about N whistles Yes
15. 02:38:295 (1,2,3,4,5) - 5 note stream at the end B( A slider instead it.
16. 02:39:284 (1) - this one also sounds funny with N whistle ...I don't think so this time.

[Cosmic]

SPOILER

1. 00:09:949 (1,2) - why no whistles for this B( yes
2. 00:15:223 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - im not aggree with this NC, imo it should be like this http://puu.sh/JgEo no..Since I NC it for my pattern but not song this time.
3. 00:20:498 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,1) - same here, 4/4 fits much better for me no as above.
4. 00:42:251 (6) - hmm, if you remove this slider you will hear that down beat dont have any sound here o.o, the meaning is why not put this long slider here http://puu.sh/JgFG, it follows both vocal and music, if you change this i guess it will be better if you change it also in your [Hard] diff, seems like i missed it x.x No,I think this long slider is better than click click and click in this case,it's intention.
5. 00:44:889 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - NC....http://puu.sh/JgGX , this one fits with ur spacing and music done
6. 00:46:207 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - same NC here, 1234,123 done
7. 00:48:185 (5,6) - wow this one rly hard to read, probably u need to add NC at 00:48:185 (5) - to show this jump and changing rhytm done
8. 00:53:790 (3,4,1) - also suggest to use same combo color for this....imo it will be more readable no...
9. 01:04:669 - 01:05:988 this loud parts, i think it would be fun if you increase SV here, to emphasize music \o.o/ (same goes to all similar parts) no:(
10. 01:22:471 (1,2) - both whistle ? yes
11. 01:38:790 (3,1) - same here, about long slider no...
12. 01:49:174 (7,1) - and here.....imo long slider sounds better if it starts at 01:49:339 no...
13. 01:56:097 (1,2) - dunno but this confusing a bit....its like, NC starts and showing antijump and then suddenly jump on triplet with same color....orz..mb its just me.... no...
14. 01:59:724 (4) - mb stack it with next slider ? plays better for me ==!! no..
15. 02:01:043 (4) - and this no..
16. 02:23:790 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i was waiting bigger spacing here.....much bigger (half screen jumps orz...)
    and same ending with N whistles ==! yea

Nice song, but i prefer your previous bg then this one B(
Good luck B) B(

1. 01:48:185 (1) - This anti-jump may be confusing to play for some players. They may click it earlier than they should.Use the normal spacing please.

1. 01:15:713 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is a bit confusing here and doesn't really follow the music well. I'd rather do this rhythm instead:
   
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2. 02:24:284 (2,3,4) - ^
3. I love this normal <3 really well made!

1. 00:53:955 (5) - This slider doesn't fit the music, it starts earlier that it should so it sounds awkward and doesn't playt well. This rhythm sounds better :
   
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1. 02:31:702 (2) - I think it is too far from the previous slider, it's hardly palyable. It should have a maximum of "Prev: 4,50x"
2. 02:34:339 (2) - ^
3. 02:36:977 (2) - ^
4. 02:37:636 (4) - ^

Kurai wrote:

[Proper]

1. 01:48:185 (1) - This anti-jump may be confusing to play for some players. They may click it earlier than they should.Use the normal spacing please. It's intention,since here 's a slower part from 01:46:867 to 01:47:856 .I don't want players move too fast during this time becasue for me,it's a relax time(during the relax part),that's why I leave a anti-jump here.I know it 's not good to put anti-jump in Easy.But 2 sec between 2 objects,so I think it's okay.Hope you understand.

[Decent]

1. 01:15:713 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is a bit confusing here and doesn't really follow the music well. I'd rather do this rhythm instead:
   
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2. 02:24:284 (2,3,4) - ^ Umm...I really don't like 1/1 1/1 and 1/1 everywhere,so I make some funny rhythm here,you 're a taiko player,you know,
   here's a rhythm that like a red blue , blue red.And the rhythm is like that on 01:04:669 (1,2,3),01:09:944 (1,2,3,4,5) 02:13:240 (1,2,3) etc. too.Hope you understand why I make them like this.
3. I love this normal <3 really well made! Thanks a lot

[Space]

1. 00:53:955 (5) - This slider doesn't fit the music, it starts earlier that it should so it sounds awkward and doesn't playt well. This rhythm sounds better : I know why you suggest the slider starts on 00:54:119 since the vocal is here.However,listen in 25%,on 00:54:119 ,only a vocal,no other drum.But on 00:53:955 ,here's a drum.Also,the rhythm follow is two 1/2 .That's mean two objects on 00:53:295 and 00:53:460.And two objects on 00:53:790 and 00:53:955,a kind of rhythm follow,for me,it won't misleading to click earlier or later.Hope you understand .
   
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But I did some change in this diff.I changed a clap to a finish.00:50:163 (1) - Here,the head clap to finish

[Cosmic]

1. 02:31:702 (2) - I think it is too far from the previous slider, it's hardly palyable. It should have a maximum of "Prev: 4,50x" They're fine im my mind.Firstly,they are intention.Secondly,they play fine.Finally,if I put them closer,I can't get the feeling of a long sound like from 02:31:043 to 02:31:702 to a sudden drum sound (in the song).That's why I do it like that.
   ,
2. 02:34:339 (2) - ^
3. 02:36:977 (2) - ^
4. 02:37:636 (4) - ^

nold_1702 wrote:

Kurai wrote:

[Decent]

1. 01:15:713 (2,3,4) - The rhythm is a bit confusing here and doesn't really follow the music well. I'd rather do this rhythm instead:
   
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2. 02:24:284 (2,3,4) - ^ Umm...I really don't like 1/1 1/1 and 1/1 everywhere,so I make some funny rhythm here,you 're a taiko player,you know,
   here's a rhythm that like a red blue , blue red.And the rhythm is like that on 01:04:669 (1,2,3),01:09:944 (1,2,3,4,5) 02:13:240 (1,2,3) etc. too.Hope you understand why I make them like this.
   Well yeah, but that doesn't fit. So you shouldn't use this kind of rhythm if it doesn't fit ther song well. Specially in Easy/Normal diffs since it would confuse the player who is a beginner.

[Space]

1. 00:53:955 (5) - This slider doesn't fit the music, it starts earlier that it should so it sounds awkward and doesn't playt well. This rhythm sounds better : I know why you suggest the slider starts on 00:54:119 since the vocal is here.However,listen in 25%,on 00:54:119 ,only a vocal,no other drum.But on 00:53:955 ,here's a drum.Also,the rhythm follow is two 1/2 .That's mean two objects on 00:53:295 and 00:53:460.And two objects on 00:53:790 and 00:53:955,a kind of rhythm follow,for me,it won't misleading to click earlier or later.Hope you understand .
   Player won't play with 25%, just make the pattern that flow the best, following the drum doesn't flow well imo, it has suprised me when I testplayed
   
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But I did some change in this diff.I changed a clap to a finish.00:50:163 (1) - Here,the head clap to finish

[Cosmic]

1. 02:31:702 (2) - I think it is too far from the previous slider, it's hardly palyable. It should have a maximum of "Prev: 4,50x" They're fine im my mind.Firstly,they are intention.Secondly,they play fine.Finally,if I put them closer,I can't get the feeling of a long sound like from 02:31:043 to 02:31:702 to a sudden drum sound (in the song).That's why I do it like that.
   I know what you wanted to do, but 6x is too huge imo. Let's say max 5.0x then.
   ,
2. 02:34:339 (2) - ^
3. 02:36:977 (2) - ^
4. 02:37:636 (4) - ^

NoHitter wrote:

Congrats!

thelewa wrote:

welp, seems like xsrsbsns is a Hidden master

Laurier wrote:

kraster <3333333
grats!!

L_P wrote:

靠 x君FC了

IkkiMinami wrote:

:)

terametis wrote:

Congrats~~~~~~~~~~~~~~<3

Regou wrote:

Yeahhhhhhhhh
去了旅行 現在開手機看forum突然看見這圖ranked了<3

Regou wrote:

去了旅行