ZLOdeuka wrote:

02:10:343 (2,3) - to do so http://puu.sh/JSoq
- No changed

Chewin wrote:

02:19:154 (1) - I don't see a reason to use NC here. Remove it?
02:22:511 (1) - ^
02:42:651 (1) - ^
- They're looking better for me

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

01:37:196 (3,4,5,6) - Stack of two(?) o: They look wrong xD
01:43:909 (3,4,5,6) - ^
01:57:336 (3,4,5,6) - Stack of two(?) o:
02:04:049 (3,4,5,6) - ^
- Those stacks are to make notes noticeable for hidden players
01:53:979 (4) - Unrankable Slider :c
- It's legit in this shape =o

Pagliaccio wrote:

01:34:259 (2) - those types of sliders with normal s.v. looks short and strange; I suggest to use ~1,25 s.v. that make their length equal to normal sliders http://puu.sh/KdSb
- Fixed
02:39:713 (3) - x:256 y:168
- That stack is to make note noticeable for hidden players

1. Kiai Time: In hard diff, maybe make same with collab and normal diff??

1. 00:51:042 (1) - maybe, add finish sound in beginning be better. I can hear a bit cymbal sounder
2. 00:57:336 (6) - add clap sound? because the vocal and piano sound is a bit heavier imo. also, in here was good for clap because before upbeat before downbeat
3. 00:57:755 (1,2) - also, add finish in slider end? seems fit with vocal and cymbal sounder effect in bg music. not bad imo..
4. 01:03:630 (4) - add clap too in the end? I felt a bit weird without clap in there orz for consistent too..
5. 01:04:469 (1,2) - same think with 00:57:755
6. 01:11:182 (1,2) - ^
7. 01:17:056 (4) - same lol, add clap in the end
8. 01:17:895 (1,2) - same think with 00:57:755
9. 01:24:609 (1,2) - maybe, add clap in the end? also, add finish in beginning is better imo
10. 01:49:574 - ngg, if possible can you add a note in here? I felt empty in here orz yeah, more following the vocal if you follow they
11. 02:14:959 (1) - same with 00:51:042
12. 02:21:253 (4) - add clap too? similar think with before about this
13. 02:21:672 (1,2) - hehe.. same.. add finish in the end?
14. 02:28:386 (1,2) - ^
15. 02:35:098 (1,2) - ^, oh yeah, curve these slider more a bit sharp? in (2) shape, that's a bit weird since that not blanket with (3). I guess that make a bit weird to see when game play orz. btw the I mean like this
    

    268,132,155099,6,0,B|224:108|180:132,1,90,4|8
    224,212,155937,2,0,B|184:240|136:212,1,90,0|8

16. 02:41:392 (5) - add clap~
17. 02:41:811 (1,2) - same lol add finish in the end
18. 02:48:526 (1,2) - same with 01:24:609
19. 03:10:343 (3) - why clap in the end? I think that should be whistle 0.0 like (1)
20. 03:18:734 (1,2) - same~ add finish in the end. nee, maybe move this a bit down? (2) was touching score number during gameplay orz
21. 03:25:448 (1,2) - ^ just add finish..
22. 03:32:161 (1,2) - ^
23. 03:39:294 (2,4) - ^
24. 03:45:588 (1,2) - same with 01:24:609

1. Rename this diff into "Scorpiour's Hard" ? make consistent between Normal and Collab. also, this one is not insane/extra/chaos lol diff or something similar like that
2. 00:02:371 (3) - add finish in the end too? the sound similar with 00:00:693 (1,2) - and this (3)'s beginning
3. 00:09:084 (1,2,5) - add whistle for piano sound? making more better effect when click this orz
4. 00:15:378 (6) - maybe make this linear with (5) 's end? like this ? the flow more good imo
5. 00:17:476 (1) - add finish for cymbal sounder
6. 00:20:413 (4) - move this 1 grid right for make spacing consistent?
7. 00:24:189 (1) - add finish in beginning.. similar reason with before about this~
8. 00:30:902 (1) - add finish~ fit with bg music effect
9. 00:37:616 (1) - add finish again
10. 00:44:329 (1) - ^
11. 00:47:056 (3) - add clap in the reverse for drum sound?
12. 00:49:783 (3) - ^but in beginning. should be add clap too in 00:50:623 (6) - for consistent
13. 00:51:042 (1) - add finish in beginning.. again orz
14. 00:55:028 (4) - I guess.. the new combo should begin in here not in the next note. since (4) more near (1) instead the (3). also, this way is for make same combo set like before or after
15. 01:06:357 (2) - missing clap in the reverse? o-o
16. 01:21:462 (2) - ^
17. 01:34:679 (1) - add finish again..
18. 01:41:392 (1) - ^
19. 01:47:895 (8) - move 2 grid up right? make symmetry with between (6) and (7) and linear with (5)
20. 01:48:105 (1) - add finish again
21. 01:54:818 (1) - ^
22. 01:56:077 (4) - move this into x:292 y: 288? more symmetry imo. although, the result make this pattern jump.. but I think that's still playable lol
23. 02:08:245 (1) - add finish in beginning
24. 02:11:182 (4) - add clap for drum sound
25. 02:13:699 (3,6) - add clap too
26. 02:14:958 (1) - add finish in beginning~
27. 02:28:804 (2) - move this 2 grid left? seems more symmetry~
28. 02:36:986 (2) - missing clap again in the reverse oAo?
29. 02:48:525 (1,1) - end this in the white tick and remove new combo in 02:49:364 (1) - ? make same pattern with 01:24:609 (1,2) -
30. 03:05:308 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I think more be good if the combo set just (1-2-1-2-1-2...) more simple~
31. 03:40:133 (4) - missing clap in beginning?
32. 03:45:588 (1,2) - make this end in white tick~

• popner

1. 00:27:651 (1) - add clap in here? in the end spinner, the drum sound was hear..
2. 00:47:266 (4) - ^
3. 00:50:623 (5) - add whistle in beginning~
4. 00:51:042 (1) - add finish in beginning for cymbal sounder~
5. 01:17:476 (5) - add clap too~
6. 01:27:755 (break) - maybe drag this break into next long white tick? following the music
   DJPop
7. 02:39:713 (3) - maybe, stack this properly? more tidier orz
8. nice diff orz

• 00:34:259 (1) - suggestion.http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380856
  00:56:077 (5) - nazi..this slider isn't symmetry. try this.http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380857
  01:09:504 (3) - new combo? SU TE KI !
  01:22:930 (1) - ^ ki mo chi~
  01:49:994 (3) - this pattern is too difficult for newbie.I know you follow vocal but suggestion.
  02:33:421 (3) - new combo?
  02:46:847 (3) - ^
  03:43:909 (3) - ^

• 00:00:693 (1,2) - remove finish and add clap on slider start.and add a finish on slider end.imo.
  00:02:371 (3) - remove finish and add clap on slider start
  00:34:469 (1) - distance,,this pattern is nice.but difficult...
  00:47:056 (3) - suggestion.http://puu.sh/LjdB
  01:06:357 (2) - add clap on reverse.forget?
  01:21:462 (2) - ^
  01:24:609 (1,2) - add a finish or clap on slider end.
  01:26:287 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - move on nyaruko <3 so cute ! http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/380874
  01:54:818 (1) - finish
  02:17:266 (3,5) - this object too close..
  02:36:986 (2) - clap
  02:48:525 (1,1) - why are these sliders shorter than 01:24:609 (1,2) - ? i like 01:24:609 (1,2) -
  03:45:588 (1,2) - ^
  03:05:308 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - it is little boring.

• 00:27:651 (1) - add clap
  02:18:315 (1,1) - i dont like this slider...nazi..
  02:34:469 (4) - ^

Yasora wrote:

DJPop
02:39:713 (3) - maybe, stack this properly? more tidier orz
- It's easier for hidden mode

-Bakari- wrote:

[Collab]
DJMoe
speed up here 01:34:259 (2) and here 01:53:979 (4)
- Already done that
but not here 02:18:315 (1,1) and 02:34:469 (4) why you didn't speed up sliders like 02:40:133 (1) - and 02:18:315 (1,1)?
- I don't get it...

jamxx wrote:

Collab
02:18:315 (1,1) - i dont like this slider...nazi..
02:34:469 (4) - ^
- X

Katty Pie wrote:

Collab
01:34:259(2) - unrankable slider
- This shape is fine
01:46:846(3,2) - stack better
- No, it ruins the pattern
02:10:448(2) - put this slider on red tick, it's sounds better
- Not synced
02:34:469(4) - this slider unrankable
- This shape is fine
02:40:133(1) - ^
- Fine for me, but let's see if it's really unrankable
02:47:895 (4) - ^
- This shape is fine

Katty Pie wrote:

Hi from my mod Q

Collab

00:46:217(1,2,3,4,5) - hm very strange what you have identical distance between this notes, if you not whant change spacing add NC on note 3 ok, add a NC

Good luck~~ other diffs is fine~

Katty Pie wrote:

I ask BAT about it, and he sayd what this sliders unrankable.

h3k1ru wrote:

[Collab]
02:18:315 (1,2,1,2) - found this part hard readable on first try
- It fits with slower slider, this is just an alternate way
02:39:713 (3,1) - stack it propertly like the others did?
- I just want the stack readable for hidden players

Reisen Udongein wrote:

[Collab]
02:09:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - these are not fit to any drum line or melody or vocal
maybe change like this? http://puu.sh/NGZA http://puu.sh/NH0a <- Example
- It does following the melody, not that hard to notice :/

Mio_chan wrote:

DJpop's
02:40:133 (1) - I find this slider strange:
1. I can't hear anything special in the music that you need to put a crumble slider here
2. The beat does not suits the music
I suggest something like notes at 02:40:133 and 02:40:762 and a 1/2 slider start at 02:40:343
- It was my first popped-up idea while listened to the music, because that part has hoarse voice

Chewin wrote:

SPOILER

Hi popner, mod from my special queue :3

[General]

sb\lyric\lyric_1_5.png is an unused file. Did you forget to use it or maybe are you using an other one? orz a mistake in SB code, fixed
If you are using an other one delete it and full submit your mapset

[Taiko]

It's fine for me

[Normal]

00:27:546 (1) - Move the first slider's redpoint 1 grid down to make it symmetric done
00:29:224 (2) - I'd use new combo here according to the new vocal's rhythm. You should also add a whistle to emphasize the one you can hear from the music ok
00:30:902 (1,2,3,4) - Mh you could blanket (1) with (2) and make a symmetric triangle using (2), (3)'s start and (4) . Something like this that imho would flow really much better: hmm..I like the line here since it makes some difference from other patterns

SPOILER

256,44,30902,6,0,B|240:88|256:136,2,90,4|8|2
344,92,32161,1,8
400,160,32581,2,0,B|400:252,2,90,0|8|2
488,148,33840,1,8

00:51:042 (1) - Finish, I guess you forgot it fixed
00:54:818 (2,4) - I really don't like how these claps sound D: I think that whistles here would fit much better this part changed
00:57:755 (1) - Since you are starting to map the kiai time I'd increase this finish's volume till 90/100% to fit that cymbals better sounds similar to me..so keep atm.
01:24:609 (1,2) - Claps should be on sliders' end not on the heads and maybe add a finish on (1)'s start? ok
01:53:141 (2) - Same of 00:29:224 (2) ok
02:14:959 (1) - Same of 00:51:042 (1) fixed
02:21:672 (1) - Same of 00:57:755 (1)
02:45:168 (1) - Instead to use the same slider of 02:45:168 (1), why don't you make it with a normal curve? I think the actual slider you are using breaks completely the flow of your map. nope..I want symmetry here

SPOILER

212,192,165168,6,0,B|153:221|142:296|194:343,1,180,0|0

02:48:526 (1,2) - Same of 01:24:609 (1,2) ok
03:18:734 (1) - Same of 00:57:755 (1)
Fine

[Collab]

00:31:112 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like the pattern you used here with these straight sliders and clenched spacing D: This pattern would flow much better instead: ok

SPOILER

116,48,31112,6,0,B|76:56|36:48,2,80,0|8|0
204,84,31741,1,2
128,144,31951,1,0
216,184,32161,2,0,B|256:172|296:184,1,80,8|0

00:46:217 (1,2,1) - What about to make 2 jumps here? Something like this for example: I'd like to keep the polygon since it is interesting..

SPOILER

280,32,46217,5,2
148,120,46637,1,2
256,240,47056,5,2
352,256,47266,1,2
400,172,47476,1,2

00:57:755 (1) - Same of Normal
01:03:105 a circle here could be fine It will break the pattern.. so I will keep this for now
I love the flow of hinacle's part aww

Clear mapset, I just disagree some rhythms djpop used in his part D:
You can call me back when you have fixed

Chewin wrote:

[Scorpiour]

00:10:133 This missed sound could be confusing çç add a circle?
choose to add a slider here for completeness of vocal :>

00:34:049 (6) - 1 grid right for 1.22x spacing consistency okay
00:34:469 (1,2,3) - I'd avoid this antijump :\ It breaks the flow. What about to move these elements in this way? I think it'd be much better

SPOILER

432,308,34469,5,0
432,308,34574,1,0
432,308,34679,2,0,B|428:268|398:248,1,72,8|0

should say it's better than mine , accept~~~ not very same to yours (due to the direction of music) but based on that :>

00:51:042 (1) - Finish with 50% volume would be perfect here, to fit cymbals of the song ahh.. seems forget the finish here >_< add it and also adjust 00:44:329 (1) - 02:08:245 (1) - & 02:14:958 (1) -
00:56:497 (2) - Remove this clap, it fits nothing and it sounds really bad imho i think it's okay because 1. here's a stress of vocal, 2. keep the hitsound consistant :>
00:57:755 (1) - Same of Normal it's okay
01:41:182 (8) - Mh overlap with 01:40:553 (5)? oh.....it's intended pattern... sorry no change
01:48:105 (1) - Finish fixed
02:10:133 (1,2,3) - Whisles on these circles? They would sound good imo nice~~
02:20:413 (2) - Same of 00:56:497 (2)
02:21:672 (1) - Same of 00:57:755 (1) same :>
03:17:056 (3) - Finish on this slider's start to keep consistency with 03:16:217 (3)? here has a finish already >.<
03:18:734 (1) - Same of Same of 00:57:755 (1) fixed~~
Nice diff scorpiour :3 thanks =v=

Chewin wrote:

[Collab]
02:09:923 (1) - You should use this rhythm to fit the vocal sound:

02:13:280 (1) - ^

- Still confirm using melody synced
02:21:672 (1) - Same of 00:57:755 (1)
03:18:734 (1) - ^
- Current pattern sounds better for me