grumd wrote:

Lissette wrote:

[*]00:15:094 (3,4) - Well, this is a serious spacing error as for me. Move (3) to 448;232 (one grid right and one grid up on level 3), move (4) to 432;320 (2 grids up and 3 grids right) I dont see a problem here, but I'll let liz to take care of it

Oh well, lemme explain.

As you can see, the sliders don't go straight and the distance between them is different.
That must be fixed if you want them (00:14:003 (1,2,3,4)) to make straight pattern like you made before (00:09:640 (1,2,3,4))

Is fixed now, thanks for noticing.

Hi Liz & Liss

General

Sleeping

Walking

Dancing

Wow Nice song, Really good job Liss & Liz!, Hope it was helpful

Good Luck ! And Star !

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi Lizbeth

General

1. Unsnapped inherited timing point at (but it anyways doesn't matter): no it doesn't matter ^^
   
   00:18:213 (x) - snap it to 00:18:230 (x)
   
   
2. Edit: The Preview time should be 27094 IMO because 26003 Doesn't seems to be the appropiate part to add it the vocals sounds cutted in that point D:

Sleeping

1. 00:08:003 (x) - I think if you add a inherited section whit 20~30 in audio will work better, since the drums stop playing normal-hitnormals doesn't sounds good there ok
2. 00:08:549 (2) - Add a finish at the end like you did in "Walking" and "Dancing" ok
3. 00:18:367 (1) - Same as above, also i think that more than 1 reverse arrow in a Easy difficult doesn't work for new players but i think that since the slider velocity its low then will be ok (consider removing a reverse arrow) These are good, like you said slider velocity is really low, if someone else point it, i'll consider changing it tho
4. 00:26:549 (6) - Add a clap, i think it keeps the consistency at hitsounds and sounds well I don't want clap here, like Dancing
5. 00:27:094 (1) - Make a blanket whit this slider over 00:28:731 (2) IMO looks better (something like this http://puu.sh/HL0d ) Liz will take care
6. 00:29:276 (3) - Make a blanket whit this slider over 00:30:912 (4) Should looks better http://puu.sh/HL3k ^
7. 00:43:458 (1) - Add a finish, i think it flows whit the music ok

Walking

1. 00:08:003 (x) - I think if you add a inherited section whit 20~30 in audio will work better, since the drums stop playing normal-hitnormals doesn't sounds good there ok
2. 00:15:094 (2) - I really think that this slider will play better (and look better) whit 00:14:003 (1), like this http://puu.sh/HLcW Liz will take care
3. 00:16:185 (3) - Add a clap at the end, to keep the consistency at hitsounds and follow the instrumental done, missed that one

Dancing

1. 00:08:003 (x) - I think if you add a inherited section whit 20~30 in audio will work better, since the drums stop playing normal-hitnormals doesn't sounds good there ok
2. 00:24:912 (1) - Add a clap at the end, i think it gives some fun rhythm to the song like i alrady said, i dont want claps in this part~
3. 00:26:549 (1) - Add clap, same reason as above ^

Wow Nice song, Really good job Liss & Liz!, Hope it was helpful thanks, it was <3

Good Luck ! And Star !

Thank you for modding~

That's a short song...
I will edit this after I finish my mod. ~






Actually, this is a nice mapset, it needs to be ranked soon♫

Gabe wrote:

That's a short song...
I will edit this after I finish my mod. ~

General
The background's size is not rankable. You could use this one: I fixed mine, thnx
Also, for the Storyboard, the "Liz&Liss" should fade at 00:44:003 and ends at 00:44:549 done
Every difficulties has an unsnapped point at 00:18:213

There's something I have to point out, I don't know if it's a mistake or not.
Actually, on Sleeping, there's a finish at 00:43:458 (2) - and not 00:44:003 (3) - like the others.
I am suggesting you to :

1. First choice: Delete the finish for Sleeping at 00:43:458 (2) - and add a finish at 00:44:003 (3) - done
2. Second choice: Delete the finish at 00:44:003 (3) - for Walking and Dancing and add a finish at 00:43:458 (2) -

Walking

Circle emplacement
00:29:822 (4) - This slider is closer than 00:28:731 (2,3) - . You should move the slider at x:8- y:120 so it will be perfectly spaced Liz will take care

Dancing

Circle emplacement
00:44:003 (7) - Deplace this circle at x:480 y:176 to be symmetrical. i didn't meant to be symmetrical, but ok did something there

Actually, this is a nice mapset, it needs to be ranked soon♫

Thanks for modding and starring <33

44sec w

map is nice :3 (b-but ..black bg with gray(black?) combo color is ...>.<b

fighto~ >w</

Still alive is better and longer

Hi ^^
I just can give some suggestion @@

[General]
- Fix the BG in 640x480 ?

[Sleeping]
looks Great!

[Walking]
00:02:549 (4) - upward one grid? x:440 y:256
00:17:276 (4) - downward + left one grid? x:240 y:200

[Dancing]
00:41:549 (1) - upward one grid? x:104 y:200
00:42:640 (1) - remove this New Combo?

----
Great mapset!! Good job!~
Good Luck!~ >w</

Hi there

[General]
* White combo color can hurt eyes while kiai, change it into blue combo color?


[Sleeping]
00:33:094 (2) - Replace this note into slider for better rhythm?


[Dancing]
00:11:822 (5,1) - Swap new combo?
00:16:185 (5,1) - ^


Good luck

Hihi m4m here~ >w<~

Sleeping:

00:05:276 (1): Hmm, no es recomendable cambiar el spacing en una dificultad Easy, ademas no queda muy bien que ese slider este tan pegado al anterior. Podrías simplemente espaciar los 2 sliders anteriores con 0,8x en vez de 0,9x, y luego mover un poco el slider que sigue para que no quede tan pegado
00:09:640 (1): Agrega Finish al principio del slider, suena bien.
00:10:731 (2): Lo mismo acá D: (Aunque yo mapeo con Grid Level 4, pero podrías moverla para que mas o menos tengan el mismo spacing, como esto:
00:24:912 (5): NC acá para que el combo no se haga tan largo? 6 para una Easy es mucho imo
00:38:003 (1,2,3): Para que haya la misma distancia entre estas 3 notas te recomiendo que muevas (3) a x:384 y:216, queda mucho mejor. (Y si lo haces no olvides arreglar el spacing en las notas que vienen)
00:44:003 (3): Agregale un Clap a esta nota, suena bien, y ademas si escuchas bien se escucha un sonido parecido al Clap en esta parte

Walking:

00:07:458 (1): Borra NC, lo siento medio innecesario.
00:09:640 (1): Lo mismo que en la diff anterior.
00:16:185 (3,4,5): Podrías intentar esto ? se ve mas bonito .
00:27:094 (1): Ctrl+H?, se ve mejor.
00:29:822 (4): Si hiciste lo anterior, Ctrl+H en este slider también para que el pattern quede mas lindo.
00:34:731 (1): Lo mismo que en 00:07:458.
00:44:003 (1): Borra NC, y agrega Clap al final del slider.

Dancing:

00:09:640 (1): Lo mismo que en las diffs anteriores.
00:13:185 (2): Se siente algo vacio el espacio después de este slider, podrías poner una nota comun, y mover el slider 1/2 hacía adelante, para que te quede algo como esto: , queda mejor a la hora de jugar.
00:29:276 (4): Como en 00:27:094 imagino que pusiste el NC siguiendo la vocal, en esta nota te sugiero que también lo agregues.
00:31:458 (4): ^
00:43:185 (1): Borra NC, se siente muy innecesario acá.

Bien, eso es todo lo que pude encontrar. Buen mapa :3, mucha suerte y espero que mi mod te sea útil ^^.

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

Hi ^^
I just can give some suggestion @@

[General]
- Fix the BG in 640x480 ?

[Sleeping]
looks Great!

[Walking]
00:02:549 (4) - upward one grid? x:440 y:256 no big difference there
00:17:276 (4) - downward + left one grid? x:240 y:200 done death the kid mode

[Dancing]
00:41:549 (1) - upward one grid? x:104 y:200 done
00:42:640 (1) - remove this New Combo? eeem I think i want to keep this... Liss too.

----
Great mapset!! Good job!~
Good Luck!~ >w</

Thanks

Leorda wrote:

Hi there

[General]
* White combo color can hurt eyes while kiai, change it into blue combo color? I think the white is fine.. does anyone else have problem with this? >:


[Sleeping]
00:33:094 (2) - Replace this note into slider for better rhythm? i'd like to keep it


[Dancing]
00:11:822 (5,1) - Swap new combo? no, is not the idea i had
00:16:185 (5,1) - ^


Good luck

Thanks for your time

Darksonic wrote:

Hihi m4m here~ >w<~

Sleeping:

00:05:276 (1): Hmm, no es recomendable cambiar el spacing en una dificultad Easy, ademas no queda muy bien que ese slider este tan pegado al anterior. Podrías simplemente espaciar los 2 sliders anteriores con 0,8x en vez de 0,9x, y luego mover un poco el slider que sigue para que no quede tan pegado
00:09:640 (1): Agrega Finish al principio del slider, suena bien.
00:10:731 (2): Lo mismo acá D: (Aunque yo mapeo con Grid Level 4, pero podrías moverla para que mas o menos tengan el mismo spacing, como esto: Lo veo bien o_o
00:24:912 (5): NC acá para que el combo no se haga tan largo? 6 para una Easy es mucho imo
00:38:003 (1,2,3): Para que haya la misma distancia entre estas 3 notas te recomiendo que muevas (3) a x:384 y:216, queda mucho mejor. (Y si lo haces no olvides arreglar el spacing en las notas que vienen)creo que lo arregle
00:44:003 (3): Agregale un Clap a esta nota, suena bien, y ademas si escuchas bien se escucha un sonido parecido al Clap en esta parte

Walking:

00:07:458 (1): Borra NC, lo siento medio innecesario.
00:09:640 (1): Lo mismo que en la diff anterior. no hay cambios
00:16:185 (3,4,5): Podrías intentar esto ? se ve mas bonito . Me gusta mas como esta ^^
00:27:094 (1): Ctrl+H?, se ve mejor. no me gusta
00:29:822 (4): Si hiciste lo anterior, Ctrl+H en este slider también para que el pattern quede mas lindo.
00:34:731 (1): Lo mismo que en 00:07:458. no entiendo
00:44:003 (1): Borra NC, y agrega Clap al final del slider.

Dancing:

00:09:640 (1): Lo mismo que en las diffs anteriores.
00:13:185 (2): Se siente algo vacio el espacio después de este slider, podrías poner una nota comun, y mover el slider 1/2 hacía adelante, para que te quede algo como esto: , queda mejor a la hora de jugar. preferiria dejar el espacio, quiero la pausa para cambiar de patron
00:29:276 (4): Como en 00:27:094 imagino que pusiste el NC siguiendo la vocal, en esta nota te sugiero que también lo agregues. es mas por el inicio del kiai
00:31:458 (4): ^
00:43:185 (1): Borra NC, se siente muy innecesario acá.

Bien, eso es todo lo que pude encontrar. Buen mapa :3, mucha suerte y espero que mi mod te sea útil ^^.

Gracias por el mod~

Did some changes too, thanks for modding<3

Updated

Yo -w- ~

[General]

-The background should be 640x480 if you want it the correct size. Of course, no one would notice because of the only black colour beside the blue logo, but for the sake of perfectionist you might stretch it just a little

[Dancing]

*(NAZI)00:00:912 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move this whole pattern to the right by 1 Lv3grid so (1) & (4) have the same amount of off-grid -> looks more symmetric
*(KIAI) 00:27:094 - Increase the volume for the KIAI by 10~15 %
*00:30:640 - On patterns like these, how about forming one with this timeline : *00:34:731 (4) - New Combo this one

[Walking]

*00:21:640 (2) - Make this not hit off-grid

[Sleeping]

*00:31:458 (1) - Remove the new combo here and add it to the next note
*00:40:185 (1) - ^
*00:42:912 If you followed the upper suggestion - Remove the new combo here. Instead do it on the last note(or not)

This map is as good as flawless. There aren't any major mistakes to see at all, and as a Intro would be, this map is held relaxing yet interesting by clean mirrored patterns. The hitsounds are simple but solid and are nothing to complain about.
I was honestly surprised that this map turned out rather non-jump-existent but I guess that's my personal icing on the cake.
Good luck on ranking !

I do hope this qualifies for a m4m as there's barely anything to point out : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/40940

I'm still alive.

[General]

The background you currently have should be 640x480 in terms of dimensions. Here's a fixed version.
You have unused timing sections at 00:09:503 and 00:18:367.

[Sleeping]

00:03:094 (2,1) - These sliders almost overlap slightly. It looks rather odd, so please space (1) just a bit farther.
00:03:094 (2) - This should have a NC to be consistent with all of the other combos in the song, like what you did at 00:18:367 (1,1).
00:07:458 (1,2) - The sliders here in this volume section are barely audible. Since there are vocals at this point, you should raise the volume to at least 30%. This goes for all of the other difficulties, also.
00:23:822 (3,4) - These should be spaced slightly farther apart.

[Walking]

00:15:094 (2) - It would look more visually appealing if you made the curve of this in the opposite direction.
00:27:094 (1) - Same as above.

[Dancing]

00:41:549 (1,1) - Having these overlap is odd as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty. It's uncharacteristic.

Nice work. Good luck!

Magicphoenix wrote:

Yo -w- ~

[General]

-The background should be 640x480 if you want it the correct size. Of course, no one would notice because of the only black colour beside the blue logo, but for the sake of perfectionist you might stretch it just a little ok ><

[Dancing]

*(NAZI)00:00:912 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Move this whole pattern to the right by 1 Lv3grid so (1) & (4) have the same amount of off-grid -> looks more symmetric Done
*(KIAI) 00:27:094 - Increase the volume for the KIAI by 10~15 % I don't want to do this
*00:30:640 - On patterns like these, how about forming one with this timeline :

SPOILER

*00:34:731 (4) - New Combo this one Liz will take care

[Walking]

*00:21:640 (2) - Make this not hit off-grid its ok ><

[Sleeping]

*00:31:458 (1) - Remove the new combo here and add it to the next note combo will be too long ><
*00:40:185 (1) - ^
*00:42:912 If you followed the upper suggestion - Remove the new combo here. Instead do it on the last note(or not)

This map is as good as flawless. There aren't any major mistakes to see at all, and as a Intro would be, this map is held relaxing yet interesting by clean mirrored patterns. The hitsounds are simple but solid and are nothing to complain about.
I was honestly surprised that this map turned out rather non-jump-existent but I guess that's my personal icing on the cake.
Good luck on ranking !


I do hope this qualifies for a m4m as there's barely anything to point out : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/40940

Thanks~

Jacob wrote:

I'm still alive.

[General]

The background you currently have should be 640x480 in terms of dimensions. Here's a fixed version. yay! thanks~
You have unused timing sections at 00:09:503 and 00:18:367. Removed

[Sleeping]

00:03:094 (2,1) - These sliders almost overlap slightly. It looks rather odd, so please space (1) just a bit farther. Done, I think @.@
00:03:094 (2) - This should have a NC to be consistent with all of the other combos in the song, like what you did at 00:18:367 (1,1). ok
00:07:458 (1,2) - The sliders here in this volume section are barely audible. Since there are vocals at this point, you should raise the volume to at least 30%. This goes for all of the other difficulties, also. increased to 20%
00:23:822 (3,4) - These should be spaced slightly farther apart. ok

[Walking]

00:15:094 (2) - It would look more visually appealing if you made the curve of this in the opposite direction. Liz will take care
00:27:094 (1) - Same as above. ^

[Dancing]

00:41:549 (1,1) - Having these overlap is odd as to how you mapped the rest of the difficulty. It's uncharacteristic. mmm i have to agree.... changed >.>

Nice work. Good luck!

Thanks~

[Dancing]

00:34:731 (4) - New Combo this one

I dont wanna, all this: 00:33:912 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - should be in same set

[Walking]

00:15:094 (2) - It would look more visually appealing if you made the curve of this in the opposite direction. Liz will take care
00:27:094 (1) - Same as above.

Already mentioned this before, I prefer them as they are.

checked and all fine
bubbled

Yay !

\:D/

[General]

1. 00:08:003 - You can't silence hitsounds because they provide a feedback to the player (10% isn't audible with the soft sampleset here). So without them it is confusing. Thus increase the volume of this section to 30% at least.
2. You should consider adding a spinner in each difficulty to make varied scores if different players SS it. (Maybe start it at 00:44:150 and end it at 00:46:195 or 00:46:741).

Kurai wrote:

\:D/

[General]

1. 00:08:003 - You can't silence hitsounds because they provide a feedback to the player (10% isn't audible with the soft sampleset here). So without them it is confusing. Thus increase the volume of this section to 30% at least. Done
2. You should consider adding a spinner in each difficulty to make varied scores if different players SS it. (Maybe start it at 00:44:150 and end it at 00:46:195 or 00:46:741). I thought of this when we were mapping it, but song is so short that I didn't find a good place to one, and didnt like the one you suggested either, so ill keep it without spinners ><

Thanks for modding *.*

Yay! Ranked :3

I'm still alive

congratz~

Gratz! ♥

That was fast~

<3 yay. another BIGBANG map ranked. gogo liss and liz o/

I thought the title is supposed to be "Alive (Intro)" and not the other way around? o3o

Just a minor thing tho... *nazi-slapped*

Winshley wrote:

I thought the title is supposed to be "Alive (Intro)" and not the other way around? o3o

Just a minor thing tho... *nazi-slapped*

The Title is fine.
http://www.ygfamily.com/artist/Album.as ... BzmbR8rEjY.

I guess Wikipedia is to blame tho.

Thank you guyss!! *.*

Graaatz ! <3

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Grats (:

Impossible to get into the top 40.
Lol