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Rare

Leorda wrote:

Did add the clap at 01:04:888 (4) in swish's diff. No KD ok? okay~

Bubbled
thanks for Bubble and Recheck :)
Shohei Ohtani
Bubble modding time since people are all like "Hey let's not post in CDFA's queue when he re-opened it"

Note about bubble mods: I'll only mod bubbles if there's something unrankable, so you'll have to unbubble the map. Then I add suggestions to make the map a bit better, if I feel any are needed :D

ANYWAYS

Overall
Your BG is 960x768. Find a BG that is 1024x768~

Insane:
00:11:194 (1) - Add whistle
00:14:252 (7) - ^
00:49:411 (4) - Make this a triangle shape?
01:18:073 (4) - This look awkward. Center this in between (3) and (5). You can still make this a jump, but it just looks odd and probably plays odd.

Hard:
Tick rate 0.5 is unrankable
01:07:755 (5) - Add finish

Normal:
00:37:373 (1) - Add finish on beginning of slider
00:38:710 (3) - ^
00:40:239 (5) - ^
00:41:959 (1) - ^
00:43:487 (3) - Add finish

Easy:
Add whistles on 2 and 4 for the soft section!
00:08:328 (3) - Make this symmetrical~. The issue is that it's too wide. Use the scale tool to fix it :D
00:36:608 (4) - This touches the HP bar
00:53:424 (1) - unsymmetrical. The issue is the middle sliderpoint being too far from the 4th point
01:26:672 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:27:436 (2) - ^
01:27:436 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
01:29:729 (1) - Add clap
01:30:111 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
01:35:271 (1) - Add clap on repeat

Whee.
Topic Starter
Rare

CDFA wrote:

Hard:
Tick rate 0.5 is unrankable

Easy:
Add whistles on 2 and 4 for the soft section!
00:08:328 (3) - Make this symmetrical~. The issue is that it's too wide. Use the scale tool to fix it :D
00:36:608 (4) - This touches the HP bar
00:53:424 (1) - unsymmetrical. The issue is the middle sliderpoint being too far from the 4th point
01:26:672 (1) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:27:436 (2) - ^
01:27:436 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
almost fixed.
thanks for modding~
swish
Leorda
Well, ok then~

Rebubbled
Topic Starter
Rare

Leorda wrote:

Well, ok then~

Rebubbled
thanks for rebubble ;)
haha5957
according to this(Click!) you HAVE to remove (Short Ver.) from your song's title.

Make sure you follow Title changing Guideline(Click!) to prevent duplicating issues!

seems like we HAVE to change those unless there is a really good reason for it..

I don't think you would like to change since this is bubbled, but why not just ask for rebubble after change to prevent this issue ;o;?
Miya
Sorry, i have to pop your bubble due to the new rule forbiding us to write short ver, if the official name doesn't consist the short. ver.
I check the vgmdb http://vgmdb.net/album/11198 and don't found any short ver in the album.
Topic Starter
Rare

haha5957 wrote:

according to this(Click!) you HAVE to remove (Short Ver.) from your song's title.
Make sure you follow Title changing Guideline(Click!) to prevent duplicating issues!
seems like we HAVE to change those unless there is a really good reason for it..
I don't think you would like to change since this is bubbled, but why not just ask for rebubble after change to prevent this issue ;o;?

Miya wrote:

Sorry, i have to pop your bubble due to the new rule forbiding us to write short ver, if the official name doesn't consist the short. ver.
I check the vgmdb http://vgmdb.net/album/11198 and don't found any short ver in the album.
fixed title.
thanks for advice~
Miya
Made a few mod too before bubble.

log
15:18 <R a r e> : hi Miya~
15:18 <Miya> : hi Rare
15:19 <R a r e> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/31270
15:19 <R a r e> : changed the title.
15:20 <Miya> : oh ok
15:20 <R a r e> : can rebubble?
15:20 <Miya> : yup :3
15:20 <Miya> : wait
15:25 <Miya> : before rebubble, i have a few suggestion first regarding the map
15:26 <Miya> : on easy, 00:38:137 (2) - i think you can add a whistle here on slider start to make whistle more consistant
15:26 <Miya> : 00:39:666 (2) - ^
15:26 <R a r e> : fixed
15:28 <R a r e> : Is that all?
15:28 <Miya> : nope
15:28 <Miya> : i'm still searching
15:28 <Miya> : wait a moment
15:29 <R a r e> : okay
15:31 <Miya> : change swish diff name into swish's Normal to reflect the difficulty name
15:32 <Miya> : and change the difficulty name 5item into 5item's Hard too
15:32 <R a r e> : fixed
15:33 <Miya> : on swish diff, how about finish at this slider start 00:52:659 (6) - ?
15:33 <Miya> : i hear a cymbal sounds there
15:34 <Miya> : 01:03:360 (2) - same here too
15:34 <Miya> : 01:27:818 (3) - here too >.<
15:36 <R a r e> : 01:27:818:(3) - added finish start slider only.
15:37 <Miya> : yup :3
15:37 <R a r e> : but, I ask to swish. Check this point out.
15:37 <Miya> : okay, no problem
15:37 <Miya> : 5item diff is already good imo
15:38 <R a r e> : 5item so pro ><
15:39 <Miya> : >.<
15:44 <Miya> : on insane
15:44 <Miya> : 00:03:169 (4) - move this 356,312 to make the spacing consistent
15:44 <R a r e> : fixed
15:45 <Miya> : 00:31:258 (3) - finish on this slider start?
15:46 <Miya> : 00:37:373 (1,2,3,4) - i feel this normal hitsounds is weird imo
15:46 <Miya> : it's better to use defaul soft hitsounds here
15:47 <Miya> : and yes, after you use default soft hitsounds, put a clap on this slider end 00:38:328 (4) -
15:48 <Miya> : 01:13:869 (1) - a finish on this slider start is good and consistant too imo
15:49 <R a r e> : almost fixed
15:50 <Miya> : hmm that's all for my suggestion imo
15:50 <Miya> : ok, you can upload now
15:51 <R a r e> : thanks for recheck ><
15:51 <Miya> : yup :3
15:53 <Miya> : call me back after you done with those mod~
15:55 <R a r e> : uploaded~
15:55 <Miya> : ok
15:56 <Miya> : no fix on swish diff? o.o
15:56 <Miya> : or not yet fixed?
15:56 <R a r e> : really?
15:56 <R a r e> : I forgot save? lol
15:57 <Miya> : yeah >.<
15:59 <Miya> : aw on easy
15:59 <Miya> : 00:41:194 (2) -
15:59 <Miya> : put whistle on the start
15:59 <Miya> : not the end
16:04 <R a r e> : done!
16:05 <Miya> : ok, update again
16:05 <R a r e> : already upload~
16:05 <R a r e> : already uploaded*
16:07 <Miya> : good~
16:07 <Miya> : well, all good now >.<

Ah, fixed kiai time inconsitencies too.

And now i think it's fine for bubble. There's no major issue. Good luck with ranking~
Topic Starter
Rare
@Miya
thanks for rebubble ><
wmfchris
[General]
- You used S:C1 only but there's N:C1 and S:C2 hitsound in the file.
- You don't need a lead-in except insane.

[Insane]
HP6 too low for insane and such note density?

[Hard]
moe moe quin
OD4 is again too low.

I don't find other errors, so when you're done just find me again.
Topic Starter
Rare
all fixed~
thanks for modding!
wmfchris
looks good now, ranked!
YTYuyu
OMG another R a r e map O_O. i'm starting to look up to you as a mapper and not a player... i really miss your live recordings but your account got terminated :(. anyways congratz on the rank ;)
Topic Starter
Rare

wmfchris wrote:

looks good now, ranked!
thanks for Rank :lol:
Topic Starter
Rare

Byakugan249 wrote:

OMG another R a r e map O_O. i'm starting to look up to you as a mapper and not a player... i really miss your live recordings but your account got terminated :(. anyways congratz on the rank ;)
thanks 249 sensei~ :)
I play the drum is very noob lol
thanks ><
Snow Lover
ランクドおめです!!! :) :) :)

以前ここにコメと動画を撮ったよとか言ってた者です。
Ryafuka
congratz :)
Topic Starter
Rare

remirya1234 wrote:

ランクドおめです!!! :) :) :)
以前ここにコメと動画を撮ったよとか言ってた者です。
覚えてます!

Ryafuka wrote:

congratz :)
いつもありがとう~
Mythol
you again gratz! :D
alacat
congrats ~~ rare san :oops:

I Love rare
Kanari
Congrats ~
DeadAlready
My diff really get big change. lol I almost can't know this is my map.
But right, who cares a person who get disappear because of fuckin' society for this 1 year?
That's more well if you can delete my name from my diff before you get big change on it. lol
ma but it's no use for now. Anyway grats for this map got ranked and big wishes for your after mapper life.
Quilt
おめでと!
Topic Starter
Rare
thanks everyone~
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