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Yellow Zebra - Tsuki no Ritsudou ~ Rhythm of the moon~ [Osu|

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Topic Starter
Loneight
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年12月21日 at 下午 08:58:36

Artist: Yellow Zebra
Title: Tsuki no Ritsudou ~ Rhythm of the moon~
Source: Touhou
Tags: DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night Ran-T Yoshiha
BPM: 146
Filesize: 14102kb
Play Time: 04:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. D.N.Angel18 (5 stars, 730 notes)
  2. Hard (4.78 stars, 495 notes)
  3. Normal (2.89 stars, 279 notes)
  4. qoot8123's Taiko (4.83 stars, 1020 notes)
Download: Yellow Zebra - Tsuki no Ritsudou ~ Rhythm of the moon~
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#5
Enjoy it!

Lyric's picture ----- done by me
StoryBoard ----- done by DarknessAngel

Normal ----- done by me
Hard ----- done by me
D.N.Angel18 ----- done by DarknessAngel and me
qoot8123's Taiko ----- done by qoot8123

Special thanks
DarknessAngel does "collab" and the SB with me
qoot8123 does "Taiko" for this map
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx finds bigger BG for this map
Kiddo-Kun bubbles this map
spboxer3 rebubbles this map
MMzz rebubbles this map
Melophobia rebubbles this map
LKs Ranks it!!

Thanks them for modding or star
xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx
pimpG (timing help)
L_P
Flask
12BARRY2
Frostmourne
xxheroxx
h-728
forevehappy
eLtigreXXx
DarknessAngel
Scorpiour
Mixagji
Neptunus
Leorda
W h i t e
- t e n n y a -
dragonxcz
wantuole
Lan wings
Kiddo-Kun
spboxer3
MMzz
LKs
bossandy
嗯... Timing有點off~ 我的Timing :

BPM : 146
Offset : 1043


對了 Yellow Zebra是人還是團體啊 如果是團體的話把團體的團員成字都加到tags裡
如果不是的話 artist應該就要改了 因為有兩個人在唱歌 >_<
Topic Starter
Loneight

bossandy wrote:

嗯... Timing有點off~ 我的Timing :

BPM : 146
Offset : 1043


對了 Yellow Zebra是人還是團體啊 如果是團體的話把團體的團員成字都加到tags裡
如果不是的話 artist應該就要改了 因為有兩個人在唱歌 >_<
團體!! 恩 我會加的 ~
賺到kd了(被打
謝謝老大幫我測試那麼多次 ...

Upload!!!

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pimp
irc timing help request

i would use - 2 in all timelines, but your current timing is awesome, no need to change

remove the 3rd timeline and all fine ^^

good luck :)
Topic Starter
Loneight

pimpG wrote:

irc timing help request

i would use - 2 in all timelines, but your current timing is awesome, no need to change

remove the 3rd timeline and all fine ^^

good luck :)
only remove 3rd timeline :3
but thank you accept my timing request :)

Upload!!!
Kanari
Halloww ~
You requested in-game ~


[General]
- Background should be 1024x768 or 800x600
- You use alot of kiai time at the end. owo ~


[Normal]
00:48:303 - Add a note ?
00:57:755 (2) - Place where 00:55:289 (1) was.
02:04:124 - Add a note?


[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
01:48:507 (3) - Stack properly ~


L18 so pro ~ owo
Star and good luck ! >w<
Topic Starter
Loneight

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Halloww ~
You requested in-game ~


[General]
- Background should be 1024x768 or 800x600 :arrow: I know , but I can't find much bigger and like this BG
- You use alot of kiai time at the end. owo ~ :arrow: yeah~


[Normal]
00:48:303 - Add a note ? :arrow: k
00:57:755 (2) - Place where 00:55:289 (1) was. :arrow: k
02:04:124 - Add a note? :arrow: k


[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
01:48:507 (3) - Stack properly ~ :arrow: k~


L18 so pro ~ owo :arrow: not >~< , i think i am new~
Star and good luck ! >w<
Thank you for modding .star ,and find much bigger BG , Crystal >w<
Upload!!!
L_P
如果急的话。。。嗯?

先吐槽tag

把 of 还有 the删掉了 毕竟没人会搜寻the? 两个字母也不能搜。。。
加DNA下去...?

DNA
00:19:125 (1,2,3,4) - 这个看上去就很。。。叹气

00:43:782 (1) - 离上个note远点?打起来不大舒服(你们这种触手不明白沙包的痛苦哈哈?

02:18:713 (3) - 这里感觉whistle可以删

02:24:261 (3) - 头whistle?

02:27:548 (1) - ^

afk一下 带回来


Hard
00:07:618 - 下次试试看慢sv?这样感觉比较有层次感...

00:47:070 (1,2,3) - NC?毕竟通常大家都会跪了orz

01:02:686 (3) - 感觉尾巴whistle删了比较配vocal

02:02:891 (1,2,3) - 如果上次NC了

感觉whistle 的用法有待改善?

这种歌比较趋向没有梗的map法。。无法看出什么来了,祝好运

rank加油~
Neptunus
hey M4M~
General: Clear~ Great hitsound applied~ BUT, it is not recommended that you snap in part that fades out

Normal:
00:24:878 (2) - remove this whistle or clap in 00:26:111 (3) - could be ambiguous, just try this~
00:27:344 (1) - same here
01:24:056 (4) - maybe mislead since the vocal here 01:23:851 - why not try this (rhythm)


01:25:700 (2,3,4) - same these three
better if you follow vocal here since vocal outstands BGM in this part, like what you did here 01:41:521 (4,5,6) -


Hard:
00:02:481 (1) - remove this and try this please


00:29:810 (5) - maybe remove this
nothing much on this diff, I was impressed with the awesome flow of this ,great job~

D.N.A 18's :
00:15:426 (3,4) - maybe change positions of these two to make it flow better?
00:43:782 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - awesome part!
01:07:412 (2,6) - make these two notes unstacked and in lower positions please although they are not continuous ones, reason is that when doing this 01:07:618 (3,4,5) - , 01:08:029 (6) - could be easily overlooked
03:03:609 (1,2) - necessary? do these really count for a "unique style"?


Good luck on ranking~ :idea:
Flask
來了~~Request From Game-Pm ~

Val01688 東方控

[General]
這首歌應該有原曲吧 OAO 把歌名加進Tags 我不知道是哪首

沒了~~

[Normal]
00:43:782 (1,2,1,2) - 能不能都換成一顆note就好??
01:59:603 (1,2,1,2) - ^
01:42:137 (5) - 這裡為啥有clap
02:02:891 (1) - (吐槽)嚇死我了
03:07:719 (1) - 被壓到了
03:20:870 (1) - ^
03:56:623 (1,2) - 移開啦!!!!!

畫說...我明天下課再來補完其他的~~~先no kd~


Topic Starter
Loneight

L_P wrote:

如果急的话。。。嗯?

先吐槽tag

把 of 还有 the删掉了 毕竟没人会搜寻the? 两个字母也不能搜。。。
加DNA下去...? 咱刪了 DNA咱記得有加說?!

DNA
00:19:125 (1,2,3,4) - 这个看上去就很。。。叹气 :arrow: 有修改了 >w<

00:43:782 (1) - 离上个note远点?打起来不大舒服(你们这种触手不明白沙包的痛苦哈哈? :arrow: k

02:18:713 (3) - 这里感觉whistle可以删 :arrow: 咱覺得還是加著好了

02:24:261 (3) - 头whistle? :arrow: 因為有finish , 加了whistle變得好奇怪 所以沒加QAQ

02:27:548 (1) - ^ :arrow: ^

afk一下 带回来

Hard
00:07:618 - 下次试试看慢sv?这样感觉比较有层次感... :arrow: 這裡沒改 不過後面部分到是改了

00:47:070 (1,2,3) - NC?毕竟通常大家都会跪了orz :arrow: 我覺得還可以

01:02:686 (3) - 感觉尾巴whistle删了比较配vocal :arrow: 同上面難度QAQ

02:02:891 (1,2,3) - 如果上次NC了

感觉whistle 的用法有待改善? :arrow: 嗯...我主要是對歌

这种歌比较趋向没有梗的map法。。无法看出什么来了,祝好运 :arrow: 我知道 ...

rank加油~ :arrow: 謝謝了~
謝謝L_P的modding :3

Neptunus wrote:

hey M4M~
General: Clear~ Great hitsound applied~ BUT, it is not recommended that you snap in part that fades out :arrow: I'm not good in sound QAQ

Normal:
00:24:878 (2) - remove this whistle or clap in 00:26:111 (3) - could be ambiguous, just try this~ :arrow: k
00:27:344 (1) - same here k
01:24:056 (4) - maybe mislead since the vocal here 01:23:851 - why not try this (rhythm) :arrow: changed~ but not as your picture


01:25:700 (2,3,4) - same these three same ~
better if you follow vocal here since vocal outstands BGM in this part, like what you did here 01:41:521 (4,5,6) -


Hard:
00:02:481 (1) - remove this and try this please :arrow: no QAQ!


00:29:810 (5) - maybe remove this :arrow: i know , but i find remove it let feel a little strange
nothing much on this diff, I was impressed with the awesome flow of this ,great job~ :arrow: thanks

D.N.A 18's :
00:15:426 (3,4) - maybe change positions of these two to make it flow better? :arrow: k~
00:43:782 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - awesome part! :arrow: thanks >w<
01:07:412 (2,6) - make these two notes unstacked and in lower positions please although they are not continuous ones, reason is that when doing this 01:07:618 (3,4,5) - , 01:08:029 (6) - could be easily overlooked :arrow: k~ changed~
03:03:609 (1,2) - necessary? do these really count for a "unique style"? :arrow: yeah~


Good luck on ranking~ :idea:
Thank you for modding >w<

Flask wrote:

來了~~Request From Game-Pm ~ :arrow: yeah~

Val01688 東方控 :arrow: .....各種黑法

[General]
這首歌應該有原曲吧 OAO 把歌名加進Tags 我不知道是哪首 :arrow: 咱能加的都加了 .. 就變成現在這樣

沒了~~

[Normal]
00:43:782 (1,2,1,2) - 能不能都換成一顆note就好?? :arrow: 總覺得要對歌聲才會對得起自己 所以沒改QAQ(被打
01:59:603 (1,2,1,2) - ^ :arrow: 同上~~
01:42:137 (5) - 這裡為啥有clap :arrow: 對音樂的鼓:3
02:02:891 (1) - (吐槽)嚇死我了 :arrow: what.. 為甚麼嚇死你QAQ ... ?!
03:07:719 (1) - 被壓到了 :arrow: 嗯 改了~
03:20:870 (1) - ^ :arrow: k~
03:56:623 (1,2) - 移開啦!!!!! :arrow: 咱覺得挺美觀的?~

畫說...我明天下課再來補完其他的~~~先no kd~ :arrow: 好的~


:arrow: ..........
謝謝Flask醬的部分modding ?! 明天待續 ?! lol!

Upload!!!
Flask
接昨天的 分開讓你比較好quote owo
順便騙SP

[General]
-太鼓少一條紅線 在01:36:590 - 加上一條
BPM : 146.00
Offset : 96590
-Letterbox During Breaks 不一樣
Collab那個沒打勾
-Kiai time 不一致 (太鼓根本lol)

然後看了一下AIBat 他說Tags不一致 ... 可是看了很多遍都一樣啊OAQ??

[Hard]
00:23:029 (2) - 你喜歡這種嗎 lol

324,120,23029,2,0,B|368:88|408:160|360:224|316:192,1,160,2|2
其實我沒有很建議修改
00:40:906 (2,3,4) - 好討厭黏在一起 (吐槽)
01:00:529 (2) - 這個能不能對準(3)? 像這樣
01:31:453 (1) - 這樣好不好lol (有一點點改變)

328,76,92070,2,0,B|358:94|388:88,2,60.0000022888184,0|2|0
01:41:521 (1,2,3) - 為啥我覺得包的不好看orz 大概是(3)的角度問題
02:17:685 (1,2) - 略獵奇 ... 我建議改掉 QAQ
02:53:746 (1) - 這個會被300擋到
03:05:870 (1) - ^
03:20:048 (1) - ^
03:45:527 (1) - ^
03:20:048 (1) - 現在還有nc bug的問題嗎?? 有的話就補上

好棒...

[DN和val]
那多出的兩個combo colour是要區別part嗎

00:22:412 (1) - 這能不能長這樣
大概個樣子而已lol
184,228,22412,38,0,B|128:228|96:276|100:340|156:368,1,190,2|8
01:07:412 (2,3,4,5) - 有點難read (我自己覺得) (2)能不能藏到(1)的屁股下面?
01:33:097 (1) - 前面那三顆刪了 然候spinner移到01:36:385 - (或者可以跟Hard一樣)
01:54:980 (2,3) - 沒stack好的樣子
02:53:746 (1) - 會被300擋到

沒啦~~~Nice Nice Nice !!!
給星給星~ 給我KD(去死
Topic Starter
Loneight

Flask wrote:

接昨天的 分開讓你比較好quote owo
順便騙SP

[General]
-太鼓少一條紅線 在01:36:590 - 加上一條 :arrow: 加了~
BPM : 146.00
Offset : 96590
-Letterbox During Breaks 不一樣
Collab那個沒打勾 :arrow: 天阿! 不是collab沒打勾 是其他的忘記把打勾取消掉
-Kiai time 不一致 (太鼓根本lol) :arrow: 我記得太鼓沒差的樣子?

然後看了一下AIBat 他說Tags不一致 ... 可是看了很多遍都一樣啊OAQ?? :arrow: 咱也看了一下是一樣的

[Hard]
00:23:029 (2) - 你喜歡這種嗎 lol :arrow: 額 ... 我覺得咱的這個flow比較好?!

324,120,23029,2,0,B|368:88|408:160|360:224|316:192,1,160,2|2
其實我沒有很建議修改
00:40:906 (2,3,4) - 好討厭黏在一起 (吐槽) :arrow: 黏在一起感情好 (被打
01:00:529 (2) - 這個能不能對準(3)? 像這樣 :arrow: 我是故意的
01:31:453 (1) - 這樣好不好lol (有一點點改變) :arrow: 不好..咱覺得不太美觀

328,76,92070,2,0,B|358:94|388:88,2,60.0000022888184,0|2|0
01:41:521 (1,2,3) - 為啥我覺得包的不好看orz 大概是(3)的角度問題 :arrow: 我沒有要包阿OAO ...
02:17:685 (1,2) - 略獵奇 ... 我建議改掉 QAQ :arrow: 嗯 改了~
02:53:746 (1) - 這個會被300擋到 :arrow: 我覺得還okay.
03:05:870 (1) - ^
03:20:048 (1) - ^
03:45:527 (1) - ^
03:20:048 (1) - 現在還有nc bug的問題嗎?? 有的話就補上 :arrow: 補上了

好棒...

[DN和val]
那多出的兩個combo colour是要區別part嗎 :arrow: 是阿

01:07:412 (2,3,4,5) - 有點難read (我自己覺得) (2)能不能藏到(1)的屁股下面? :arrow: 嗯 修改了

沒啦~~~Nice Nice Nice !!!
給星給星~ 給我KD(去死 :arrow: 自重 lol! (被打
謝謝flask醬的modding和star ~ 其他的part是闇天使的了~ (戳
Upload!!!
Dino99
Yo!!~~~

<General>
D.N.Angel18's Rhythm 的Combo顏色跟其他難度不同!! 改成一樣吧!!~~~ 不一樣記得是Unrankable.. QAQ

<Normal>
  1. 00:04:125 - 加個圈圈~~ 或把轉盤改成這裡開始~~~ 好些!!
  2. 00:31:864 - clap
  3. 02:49:226 (5) - 移到[X:292 Y:232]~~ 這樣才有對到(1)(2)的斜率x3
  4. 04:07:308 (2,3,4,5,6) - 最後做個星星要嘛ww?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/383150
    412,116,248130,1,0
    487,207,248541,1,8
    421,308,248952,1,0
    306,276,249363,1,8


<Hard>
  1. 00:09:262 (1) - (2)有點沒包好~~QAQ 試著把它包好唄ww Nazi..
  2. 00:10:906 (2) - 這樣打起來比較順!?? http://puu.sh/LUyN
  3. 01:05:152 (1) - 這邊覺得這樣好些~ http://puu.sh/LUDP
  4. 01:09:262 (3) - Ctrl + R~
  5. 02:23:850 (4) - 往下1格或2格?
  6. 02:48:815 (3) - 嘛.. Ctrl + R 打起來還不賴x3~~~~~
  7. 03:06:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 這弧度可以再排好些的>w<
<D.N.Angel18's Rhythm>
  1. 00:22:412 (1) - 有點醜醜的喔O3O....
  2. 01:42:343 (5) - 移到[X:300 Y:76]吧!!~~ 才是個正矩形ww <改的話(6)(7)也要一起移喔!!~~>
  3. 03:58:472 (2,3) - 位置對調?
就醬啦~ 目前星星短缺.... 先不射星了QAQ
加油吧!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ >w<b
Topic Starter
Loneight

12BARRY21 wrote:

Yo!!~~~

<General>
D.N.Angel18's Rhythm 的Combo顏色跟其他難度不同!! 改成一樣吧!!~~~ 不一樣記得是Unrankable.. QAQ :arrow: 這個咱再問看看阿三醬 OAO!

<Normal>
  1. 00:04:125 - 加個圈圈~~ 或把轉盤改成這裡開始~~~ 好些!!
  2. 00:31:864 - clap
  3. 02:49:226 (5) - 移到[X:292 Y:232]~~ 這樣才有對到(1)(2)的斜率x3
  4. 04:07:308 (2,3,4,5,6) - 最後做個星星要嘛ww?? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/383150
    412,116,248130,1,0
    487,207,248541,1,8
    421,308,248952,1,0
    306,276,249363,1,8


<Hard>
  1. 00:09:262 (1) - (2)有點沒包好~~QAQ 試著把它包好唄ww Nazi..
  2. 00:10:906 (2) - 這樣打起來比較順!?? http://puu.sh/LUyN
  3. 01:05:152 (1) - 這邊覺得這樣好些~ http://puu.sh/LUDP
  4. 01:09:262 (3) - Ctrl + R~
  5. 02:23:850 (4) - 往下1格或2格?
  6. 02:48:815 (3) - 嘛.. Ctrl + R 打起來還不賴x3~~~~~
  7. 03:06:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - 這弧度可以再排好些的>w<
<D.N.Angel18's Rhythm>
  1. 01:42:343 (5) - 移到[X:300 Y:76]吧!!~~ 才是個正矩形ww <改的話(6)(7)也要一起移喔!!~~>
就醬啦~ 目前星星短缺.... 先不射星了QAQ :arrow: 嗯..QAQ
加油吧!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ >w<b
全改了~
謝謝barry醬的modding ~
Upload!!!
Leorda
Hi there

[General]
* Disable the Letterbox for all diff?
* What lyric SB for? Did you unfinish yet?


[Normal]
00:08:029 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, which beginners can't tell which should start
02:04:124 (2,1) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners
02:54:568 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
03:20:870 (1,2) - A bit too far from spinner, can you make it closer to center of spinner?


[Hard]
00:23:851 (3,1) - Swap new combo?
02:13:987 (5) - Reverse this slider to make better flow?
03:24:774 (3) - These pauses feels awkward.... Perhaps, add note at 03:24:568?


[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
01:50:870 (4,5) - Not stack correctly with tail slider (look at test mode)


[qoot8123's Taiko]
* Snap the 3rd red timing section to 02:29:192 for consistency of each diff


Good luck
Topic Starter
Loneight

Leorda wrote:

Hi there :arrow: so fast...

[General]
* Disable the Letterbox for all diff? :arrow: oh no ! I forget
* What lyric SB for? Did you unfinish yet? :arrow: finish, but SB is let DarknessAngel to do


[Normal]
00:08:029 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu, which beginners can't tell which should start
02:04:124 (2,1) - Stack under slider can confuse beginners
02:54:568 (1) - Overlapped by spinner-osu, it makes hidden for beginners (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read)
03:20:870 (1,2) - A bit too far from spinner, can you make it closer to center of spinner?
:arrow: all fix~

[Hard]
00:23:851 (3,1) - Swap new combo? :arrow: no~
02:13:987 (5) - Reverse this slider to make better flow? :arrow: I am deliberate , but you propose , i fix it~
03:24:774 (3) - These pauses feels awkward.... Perhaps, add note at 03:24:568? :arrow: k~

[qoot8123's Taiko]
* Snap the 3rd red timing section to 02:29:192 for consistency of each diff :arrow: fix~


Good luck
Thank you for modding ~ Leorda
Upload!!!
DarknessAngel
thank for modding ~ :)
http://puu.sh/MaRl
Beige
Hello~ I'm late.. sorry~ I'm newbie modder.. sorry~

You hate this mod... you ignore that

[Hard]

01:09:262 (3) - How about Ctrl+R ?
02:48:815 (3) - How about 02:48:404 (2) - 's Ctrl+(> or <) x 2 ?

[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]

01:26:316 (6) - How about Ctrl+R ?

Good mapper :? that's all

sorry :(
Topic Starter
Loneight
:o

W h i t e wrote:

Hello~ I'm late.. sorry~ I'm newbie modder.. sorry~ :arrow: Do you late ?! I think not :3 . it's okay~

You hate this mod... you ignore that

[notice]

[Hard]

01:09:262 (3) - How about Ctrl+R ? :arrow: yeah , this is I originally set , k~
02:48:815 (3) - How about 02:48:404 (2) - 's Ctrl+(> or <) x 2 ? :arrow: no~

sorry :(
Thank you for modding
Upload~
Frostmourne
Hi :D from my mod queue

actually, you are late but nevermind. I will mod it anyways :P

Normal
I suggest about hitsound a bit.. pure finish is good but... FINISH+WHISTLE (you use as bass drum) will be the best method to be used here
please add both whistle (bass) every point that you have Finish :) (I use theory of Drum instrument since I'm drummer, I know it's good to use it :D)
^ let you consider it once. add it as you want if you see it's good for you \o.o/
01:47:685 (2) - I feel it should be snare not drum (snare=clap here)
03:08:130 (2) - whistle here
03:09:774 (4) - ^
03:14:705 (2) - ^
03:21:280 (2) - ^
03:22:924 (5) - ^
and some point there , hope you check it once again ;)

Hard
00:32:070 (1) - new combo here ? since it has blank period more than usual (+1/2 beat) , people might hit it early and get missed eventually
01:10:392 (2,3) - I will place at the position instead because it will make confusion to player (player might hit early like I mentioned above) ^
at least, you should separate it more obviously , that is :P
01:12:755 (3) - hard to see this from under slider. maybe normal stacking ? , I'm not sure that hard diff will meet unrankable stuff if you place note like this , just beware of it :D:D:D
01:27:960 (4) - nazi o.o'' , move up 2 grid because the distance you use in this song is not equal to the current you use :P (1.43 should change to 1.3)
02:13:062 (2,3) - as I already mentioned, you may separate it more obviously at this point either :oops:
I find this position is the best for me ww because it's covered by slider :P
02:59:294 (2) - maybe whistle at the end and clap at the start ? , I find it sounds better :D
03:26:212 (3) - eh.. remove whistle here ? , I think it sounds better haha. I don't know why. =_=''
nice hitsound >w<b

D.N.Angel18's Rhythm
HAHAHA , I didn't notice that D.N. will make diff to Touhou map also :P (I always see you from eroge OP stuff 8-) )
02:08:439 (2) - I think it should be jump at this position. It's a bit strange to see this short distance here. (I find it should be jump from vocal accent and better flow \:D/)
okay , add Finish following these point for more attraction and exciting :3b
03:56:623 (3) - the head
03:57:445 (6) - ^
03:58:678 (3) -
03:59:089 (5) - only first point

haha Good luck for ranking. Star because hitsound is kinda awesome :3b
Topic Starter
Loneight

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi :D from my mod queue :arrow: Hi

actually, you are late but nevermind. I will mod it anyways :P :arrow: yeah.. , i think i be ingnore , in fact is not . Thank you >w< Frostmourne

Normal
I suggest about hitsound a bit.. pure finish is good but... FINISH+WHISTLE (you use as bass drum) will be the best method to be used here
please add both whistle (bass) every point that you have Finish :) (I use theory of Drum instrument since I'm drummer, I know it's good to use it :D)
^ let you consider it once. add it as you want if you see it's good for you \o.o/ :arrow: all add ?~
01:47:685 (2) - I feel it should be snare not drum (snare=clap here)
03:08:130 (2) - whistle here
03:09:774 (4) - ^
03:14:705 (2) - ^
03:21:280 (2) - ^
03:22:924 (5) - ^
and some point there , hope you check it once again ;)
:arrow: In fact, I deliberately do this , but you propose , i fix all :3

Hard
00:32:070 (1) - new combo here ? since it has blank period more than usual (+1/2 beat) , people might hit it early and get missed eventually :arrow: k~ add >w<
01:10:392 (2,3) - I will place at the position instead because it will make confusion to player (player might hit early like I mentioned above) ^
at least, you should separate it more obviously , that is :P :arrow: fix~
01:12:755 (3) - hard to see this from under slider. maybe normal stacking ? , I'm not sure that hard diff will meet unrankable stuff if you place note like this , just beware of it :D:D:D :arrow: k ~ i fix ~
01:27:960 (4) - nazi o.o'' , move up 2 grid because the distance you use in this song is not equal to the current you use :P (1.43 should change to 1.3) :arrow: lol! i not notice this , thanks
02:13:062 (2,3) - as I already mentioned, you may separate it more obviously at this point either :oops:
I find this position is the best for me ww because it's covered by slider :P :arrow: k~ fix~
02:59:294 (2) - maybe whistle at the end and clap at the start ? , I find it sounds better :D :arrow: i also think ... changed~
03:26:212 (3) - eh.. remove whistle here ? , I think it sounds better haha. I don't know why. =_='' :arrow: k~
nice hitsound >w<b

D.N.Angel18's Rhythm
HAHAHA , I didn't notice that D.N. will make diff to Touhou map also :P (I always see you from eroge OP stuff 8-) ) :arrow: yeah , I forced ... (just a joke) , he also do a GD in Yellow Zebra - Prism Love
02:08:439 (2) - I think it should be jump at this position. It's a bit strange to see this short distance here. (I find it should be jump from vocal accent and better flow \:D/) :arrow: change ~
okay , add Finish following these point for more attraction and exciting :3b
03:56:623 (3) - the head
03:57:445 (6) - ^
03:58:678 (3) -
03:59:089 (5) - only first point
:arrow: all add .
haha Good luck for ranking. Star because hitsound is kinda awesome :3b :arrow: thank you again , Frostmourne
Thank you for modding and star , Frostmourne :3
Upload!!!
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency.
    Open all .osu files and change...
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 219,217,168
    Combo2 : 255,138,138
    Combo3 : 154,150,211
    Combo4 : 255,196,214
    Title: Tsuki no Ritsudou ~Rhythm of the moon~
    Tags: add "Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night"

[Normal]

  • 00:56:933 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
    01:00:221 (1) - ^
    01:10:084 (1) - ^
    01:24:673 (5) - Add "New Combo".
    01:24:878 (1) - Remove "New Combo".
    02:12:754 (1) - ^
    02:16:042 (1) - ^
    02:25:905 (1) - ^

[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]

  • Rename this difficulty "D.N.Angel18's Insane"

Really nice beatmap, good job~
Topic Starter
Loneight

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Suggestion.
You should fix this.
You must fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • The SB images contains unnecessary trasparency. :arrow: yeah ~ I know , SB is editting >w<
    Open all .osu files and change... :arrow: i think the color is okay . so no change
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 219,217,168
    Combo2 : 255,138,138
    Combo3 : 154,150,211
    Combo4 : 255,196,214
    Title: Tsuki no Ritsudou ~Rhythm of the moon~ :arrow: no >~<
    Tags: add "Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night"add~

[Normal]

  • 00:56:933 (1) - Remove "New Combo".k
    01:00:221 (1) - ^ :arrow: k~
    01:10:084 (1) - ^ :arrow: k
    01:24:673 (5) - Add "New Combo". :arrow: no >~<
    01:24:878 (1) - Remove "New Combo". :arrow: no , sorry OTZ
    02:12:754 (1) - ^ :arrow: k~
    02:16:042 (1) - ^ :arrow: k
    02:25:905 (1) - ^ :arrow: k~

[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]

  • Rename this difficulty "D.N.Angel18's Insane" :arrow: i want to more creative , so no change >~<

Really nice beatmap, good job~ :arrow: thanks >w<
Thank you for modding and star ~ xxheroxx >w<
Upload!!!
h-728

Thank you for request

[General]
  • SB is WIP? I couldn't find them in screen.
[Hard]
  • 00:27:138 - I feel there is enough sound to put note.
    00:31:248 (4,1) - this stacking may be confusing. how about move to other place?
    00:57:241 (2,3) - how about replace with 1/4 slider so that players can be used to this rhythm?
    02:02:891 (1,2,3) - consider that this is Hard, replace with reverse slider.
    02:07:822 (1) - I think the flow becomes better if you do Ctrl+R to this slider.
    02:12:754 (1,2) - before the stream, this jump may be difficult for Hard.
    02:50:870 (1,1) - it's too short interval between these notes. how about remove circle and lengthen spinner to 02:53:746 ?
    03:04:020 (1,1) - ^ but I couldn't find any way to solve this.
    03:48:198 (3,1) - I think this jump is difficult because the angle of jump and the slider is different. consider to reduce the distance..for example, do Ctrl+R to the slider.
[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
  • 00:02:070 - I want here some note because there is enough sound in the song. how about reverse 00:01:659 (3) ?
    00:47:070 (1,2,3) - it looks almost same as 00:43:782 (1,2,3) or 00:45:426 (1,2,3), and we may regard this 1/3 rhythm as in 1/2 rhythm.
    01:57:959 (1,2) - nazi. how about stack them to unify with other section?
    02:48:198 - according to previous section, how about add note here?
    02:54:774 - ^ and there is enough sound to put note here imo.
    03:07:924 (2,3,4,5) - first you use two circles to make stream in this rhythm, then in next section, you use kick slider in this rhythm like 03:27:650 (2,3).
    this rhythm is new in this diff, so I think it's kind to players if you put kick sliders at first and we can be used to this rhythm, then become easy to follow the stream. please consider to adjust the turn of them.
that's all. sorry for huge delay ><
Topic Starter
Loneight

h-728 wrote:


Thank you for request

[General]
  • SB is WIP? I couldn't find them in screen. :arrow: yes , it doing now >w<
[Hard]
  • 00:27:138 - I feel there is enough sound to put note. :arrow: k~
    00:31:248 (4,1) - this stacking may be confusing. how about move to other place? :arrow: change~
    00:57:241 (2,3) - how about replace with 1/4 slider so that players can be used to this rhythm? :arrow: k ~
    02:02:891 (1,2,3) - consider that this is Hard, replace with reverse slider. :arrow: k~
    02:07:822 (1) - I think the flow becomes better if you do Ctrl+R to this slider. :arrow: I deliberately do that , but you say , i change
    02:12:754 (1,2) - before the stream, this jump may be difficult for Hard. :arrow: i think is okay
    02:50:870 (1,1) - it's too short interval between these notes. how about remove circle and lengthen spinner to 02:53:746 ? :arrow: no~
    03:04:020 (1,1) - ^ but I couldn't find any way to solve this. :arrow: ^
    03:48:198 (3,1) - I think this jump is difficult because the angle of jump and the slider is different. consider to reduce the distance..for example, do Ctrl+R to the slider. :arrow: i think a little jump is okay ?~
[D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
  • 00:02:070 - I want here some note because there is enough sound in the song. how about reverse 00:01:659 (3) ? :arrow: k ~
    00:47:070 (1,2,3) - it looks almost same as 00:43:782 (1,2,3) or 00:45:426 (1,2,3), and we may regard this 1/3 rhythm as in 1/2 rhythm. :arrow: but , when i play , i think it can read
    01:57:959 (1,2) - nazi. how about stack them to unify with other section? :arrow: no ~ I deliberately do
    02:48:198 - according to previous section, how about add note here? :arrow: k
    02:54:774 - ^ and there is enough sound to put note here imo. :arrow: no~
    03:07:924 (2,3,4,5) - first you use two circles to make stream in this rhythm, then in next section, you use kick slider in this rhythm like 03:27:650 (2,3).
    this rhythm is new in this diff, so I think it's kind to players if you put kick sliders at first and we can be used to this rhythm, then become easy to follow the stream. please consider to adjust the turn of them. :arrow: k, i change~
that's all. sorry for huge delay >< :arrow: it's okay :3
Thank you for modding ~ h-728 >w<
Upload!!!
forevehappy
>~< 飛翔君安安..
Open!
Normal
GOOD! 都出安全牌 找沒要修的地方XD

Hard
00:14:193 - 到 00:19:125 - 感覺很多slider and circle都很壅擠
----------------------------------------------------------------------
02:07:822 (1) - slider start 移除whistle... add finish...
02:20:973 (1) - ^
02:27:548 (1) - slider start and end remove finish ...add whistle (綠線可能要延後一格..
02:44:294 (1) - slider start add finish
02:47:582 (1) - ^
02:57:445 (1) - ^ ...移除whistle
在這裡我個人認為 每段歌詞的開頭或許finish比較好則結尾用whistle...
像是這邊03:10:596 - 因為在kiai區域 所以就是(裏歌詞!?)感覺也會被加強 所以就不用特地finish(原本是覺得都該加finish的~~)
----------------------------------------------------------------------

D.N.Angel18's Rhythm

00:40:495 (1,2) - 1尾巴疊在2的開始,我覺得會更好
00:58:577 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:47:274 (3,4) - 3尾巴疊在4的開始,我覺得會更好
02:12:754 (1,2) - ^
02:25:905 (1,2) - ^(不過我覺得這移動曲線看起來比較自然,跟上面的截然不同..
02:53:746 (1) - 這note會不會太趕了?


qoot8123's Taiko

00:45:426 (3) - D??
-------------------------
01:01:762 - remove note
01:01:864 (1) - K(我覺得這邊的聚有power~,如果增加finish..就把前一個note移除吧:D

-------------------------
02:01:247 (3) - D??
03:10:596 (3) - D(後面都有finish就這裡沒有,有點違和的感覺
Good luck
存KD好像無用 來給你射星星好了>_>
KokoroStudiox3
Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [D.N.Angel18's Rhythm] : 0
- [Hard] : 0
- [Normal] : 0
- [qoot8123's Taiko] : 1

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [D.N.Angel18's Rhythm] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night
- [Hard] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night
- [Normal] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night
- [qoot8123's Taiko] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night ← between Moron and Eirin is a space of more

Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:

- [D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:192, BPM of 146.000
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:192, BPM of 146.000
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:192, BPM of 146.000
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

- [qoot8123's Taiko]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:193, BPM of 146.000 ←
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

[Norma]
03:28:678 (4) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:29:294).

[Hard]
00:42:138 (5) - Add NC.

nice map and nice song >w<
DarknessAngel

forevehappy wrote:

D.N.Angel18's Rhythm
00:40:495 (1,2) - 1尾巴疊在2的開始,我覺得會更好 //我幫他反駁,我覺得不重疊超好-0- lol <3
00:58:577 (1,2,3,4,5) - //...這樣不好看。而且我覺得我的排法也算是個梗:3
01:47:274 (3,4) - 3尾巴疊在4的開始,我覺得會更好
02:12:754 (1,2) - ^
02:25:905 (1,2) - ^(不過我覺得這移動曲線看起來比較自然,跟上面的截然不同.. //不重疊超好 O_o :3 Dx
02:53:746 (1) - 這note會不會太趕了? //不會不會
謝謝MOD ~ :)

To 飛翔 :
why didn't you write "StoryBoard ----- WIP by DarknessAngel" to Creator's Words ? -0-
其實我很早之前就想說了lol,這樣就不會有反覆被吐嘈的問題的說..
Topic Starter
Loneight

forevehappy wrote:

>~< 飛翔君安安.. :arrow: 永樂醬早灣 >w<
Open!
Normal
GOOD! 都出安全牌 找沒要修的地方XD

Hard
00:14:193 - 到 00:19:125 - 感覺很多slider and circle都很壅擠
----------------------------------------------------------------------
02:07:822 (1) - slider start 移除whistle... add finish...
02:20:973 (1) - ^
02:27:548 (1) - slider start and end remove finish ...add whistle (綠線可能要延後一格..
02:44:294 (1) - slider start add finish
02:47:582 (1) - ^
02:57:445 (1) - ^ ...移除whistle
在這裡我個人認為 每段歌詞的開頭或許finish比較好則結尾用whistle...
像是這邊03:10:596 - 因為在kiai區域 所以就是(裏歌詞!?)感覺也會被加強 所以就不用特地finish(原本是覺得都該加finish的~~)
----------------------------------------------------------------------

D.N.Angel18's Rhythm

00:40:495 (1,2) - 1尾巴疊在2的開始,我覺得會更好
00:58:577 (1,2,3,4,5) -
01:47:274 (3,4) - 3尾巴疊在4的開始,我覺得會更好
02:12:754 (1,2) - ^
02:25:905 (1,2) - ^(不過我覺得這移動曲線看起來比較自然,跟上面的截然不同..
02:53:746 (1) - 這note會不會太趕了?

:arrow: 糟糕 咱都沒改...

qoot8123's Taiko

qoot8123 wrote:

00:45:426 (3) - D?? :arrow: 沒改
-------------------------
01:01:762 - remove note :arrow: 改了~
01:01:864 (1) - K(我覺得這邊的聚有power~,如果增加finish..就把前一個note移除吧:D :arrow: 加了~

-------------------------
02:01:247 (3) - D?? :arrow: no~
03:10:596 (3) - D(後面都有finish就這裡沒有,有點違和的感覺 :arrow: 加了
Good luck
存KD好像無用 來給你射星星好了>_>
謝謝永樂醬的modding和star~ :)

eLtigreXXx wrote:

Inconsistency in LetterboxInBreaks:
- [D.N.Angel18's Rhythm] : 0
- [Hard] : 0
- [Normal] : 0
- [qoot8123's Taiko] : 1 :arrow: fix~

Inconsistency in Tags:
- [D.N.Angel18's Rhythm] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night
- [Hard] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night
- [Normal] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night
- [qoot8123's Taiko] : DarknessAngel qoot8123 fujimiya yuki ucchi History Moon Eirin Yagokoro Kaguya Houraisan Imperishable Night ← between Moron and Eirin is a space of more
:arrow: fix~
Inconsistency in uninherited (red) timing sections:

- [D.N.Angel18's Rhythm]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:192, BPM of 146.000
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

- [Hard]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:192, BPM of 146.000
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

- [Normal]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:192, BPM of 146.000
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

- [qoot8123's Taiko]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:043, BPM of 146.000
01:36:590, BPM of 146.000
02:29:193, BPM of 146.000 ← :arrow: no notice...
02:41:007, BPM of 146.000

[Norma]
03:28:678 (4) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:29:294). :arrow: oh,i forget! thank you~

[Hard]
00:42:138 (5) - Add NC. :arrow: i don't NC but i change distance

nice map and nice song >w<
Thank you for modding and star , eLtigreXXx :3
Upload!!!

DarknessAngel wrote:

To 飛翔 :
why didn't you write "StoryBoard ----- WIP by DarknessAngel" to Creator's Words ? -0-
其實我很早之前就想說了lol,這樣就不會有反覆被吐嘈的問題的說..
對吼..咱怎麼想到 ;w;
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