Explorer09 wrote:

Hello. Mind if I mod your map?

[Hard]
1:47:651 (6) - I cannot see this note when hidden mod is on. Probably because the direction of the previous slider.


[Normal]
The stack leniency may be too low in this difficulty. It would be better to stack notes that are a whole beat distant.(I mean time distance) Of course this is optional.

0:12:401 (1 and 2) - Feels a bit strange here. Also note 1 cannot be seen when hidden mod is on. (I rarely see the note "sandwiching" like this, so I don't have a solution here yet.)
1:17:401 (2) - I can hardly see this when hidden mod, too.
1:26:651 (3) - This slider bounces too many times. I don't like it. (Maybe add a note at 1:27:651 in the same position as 1:28:151 ?)

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Leorda wrote:

Annyong

[Normal]
Fine~

[Hard]
02:30:651 (6) - Make symetric?

Well, good job
STAR

Sushi wrote:

[Normal]
maybe slider tick rate 2?
02:23:151 (x) - this feels terribly empty.
ㄴlol.. you may love 'terrible' this word.. added
01:11:651 (5) - why suddenly linear? o.o (this is really personnal, a really suggestive thing)
02:20:151 (6) - ^
ㄴumm.. singing method.. like linear curve

[Hard]
maybe slider tick rate 2?
00:39:401 (6) - First I was like o.o but it's well used during the song, and fits. good job.
01:04:151 (4) - if you're on the "Nooo~" you should definitely move it 1/4 earlier
ㄴ1,2,3 are nonono, 4 is drum~
02:30:651 (6) - this is ugly.


there you go.

Shiirn wrote:

Normal:
00:22:651 (5) - Snap to the grid so that it's the same distance from 4 that 3 is.
ㄴfixed
00:42:651 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This might be hard to read for a normal difficulty player, but can be left as-is.
02:15:151 (1,3) - This overlapping feels "ugly" like Sushi said. The entire map uses a nice, flowing style that doesn't overlap and curves in nice arcs.
02:42:401 (7) - ^

Hard:
00:26:151 (4) - Overlapping. These can really be left alone, but they break the mood for me. And this map gives a very good mood.
00:27:401 (6) - Overlapping~
00:33:651 (4,5) - ^. I'll say it again: These are just very whimsical suggestions of mine; they're not DO THIS.
00:39:401 (6) - What is this demonic-looking dildo-like thing?
ㄴugh... disgusting.. what ARE you thinking about?
01:02:401 (7,8) - Overlap
01:43:401 (8) - This time the dildo is white!
ㄴ-_-


A very nice, relaxing song. Worthy of a star? Definitely.

jericho2442 wrote:

this set would really be much better as a 3 diff set, a easy i would advise since it would suit soo good, your choice though

128kbps, sounds ok, not fantastic but its fine

Normal
01:11:651 (5) - putting a new combo here really suits, due to the break in the vocals, it looks <3 then
fixed~ sweet~
02:41:401 (5,6,7) - the other overlaps dont look too bad, but this one is truely horrid, please like this :/
fixed~

Hard
(suggestion) 01:35:151 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - by DS this is right, but still because of the pattern it looks like some of the notes have different spacing when playing, its not a big thing and only change it if you really want, but if you do it like this i think it does make it play better
fixed~
(suggestion) 03:00:651 (6) - to me a new combo goes nice here, so it starts the new vocal and also flows perfect with the combos after
fixed~ sweet!

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all i can say overall is i <3 the maps, nice flow, nice job o/

jericho2442 wrote:

well i do think a easy diff would go nice, but your lowest atm is pretty much spot on 3 star and it plays smoooth so im happy with that

enjoy your floaty thing