JauiPlaY wrote:

T.T嗚嗚嗚

[General]
.osb砍了
請使用萌妹子BG

[Basic]
請告訴我你還有一個更簡單的難度沒做
00:10:329 (2,3,1) - 總覺得有點難 跟歌啊
00:18:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - 即使放NM里我都會說太難了...
00:29:259 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
00:48:511 (1) - 感覺這spinner拆成2個好點 第一個在00:49:634結束 第二個在00:49:794開始 以为可以 但1的结尾位置有点猎奇
01:02:147 (2) - 拉到01:01:986再加個折返
01:06:799 - 總覺得少個圈 星数怕悲剧
01:10:329 (1) - 為啥這個長一截...聽起來怪怪的 因为是小节末尾
01:30:222 (4,1,2,3) - 恩很奇葩 还是跟歌
後面kiai用得太頻繁了可能會被挑

[Advanced]
00:18:671 (5,1) - 間距略不科學 这没办法 只能说player知道前面是设计变化值
00:21:398 (12,1) - ^
00:26:372 (7,1) - ^ 这俩都是正常间距啊
00:28:938 (7,1) - 好吧我知道是故意的但真心別扭
00:54:928 (1) - 聽習慣前面那2個這個反而覺得怪 +1
後面kiai用得太頻繁了可能會被挑

[Extreme]
00:31:826 (1,2,3,4) - 我覺得1423的排列好點
00:36:960 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:41:131 (5) - 移前面藍線再在00:41:291加圈...
00:47:548 (2) - Ctrl+R ok
00:50:115 (2) - 略多馀
00:51:559 (4,5,6,7) - 聲音太小了 +6%
01:09:366 - 加圈 ok
01:18:029 (1) - 在01:18:270結束
01:21:158 - 加圈

太鬼畜

popner wrote:

评论。。有些地方节奏比较奇怪，比如00:14:420 (2,3) - 这两个排列一样但节奏不一样。所以前半部分比较难抓住节奏感

tutuhaha wrote:

评论
normal的节奏前半部分感觉不像normal像我做的hard- ._............
个人不喜欢在normal出现这种节奏而且还是用note代替
00:18:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - 跟歌啊
....但是其实我是必须喜欢狂放slider的所以..........恩...........
01:11:612 (1,1) - 没反应过来啊..........如果以后有更好的排法希望换下............. 为啥 间距是0.81啊
A开头的那个
00:30:543 (6,7,8) - 没直线啊直线吧 我也是直线的 但有人让我改成这样了 再看看
Extreme
AHO鬼畜风既视感嘛太鬼畜了.......不好做评论.....但是节奏感觉不错
嘛以上

jesse7419 wrote:

MY 評論:
觸圖....
Extreme的HP Drain似乎好高??打了4,5次還是在1分27秒那邊垮了.. BAT非喜欢这种
雖然打多PC應該是沒什麼太大問題~
跳是不會非常跳 難再拍子屬於2連打的Slider上比較多 不好抓
00:29:019 (6) - Slider似乎檔到了 可能會當成單點打 等继续建议
00:29:259 - 00:31:666 - 到 不太好讀圖 (拍子無誤)
01:27:735 (9,10,11,12,13) - 間距這邊改一下比較好 (我垮在這..) 改了

整體來說很好玩
副歌前單點+3連以及後面的連打超有Sense
STAR~☆

OnosakiHito wrote:

00:59:740~01:01:746 - I don't think this fits well here. Try to follow more the music : I guess at least its rhythm is suitable
01:05:837(451,451) - delete?
01:24:126~01:25:569 - d k dkkdk kddkd d d : based on dk dk dk dk dk dk and adding k as the music goes on
01:26:933(634) - delete?
01:28:297 - this stream dosen't fit well and dosen't have a good flow with the coming one. Try to make another one? : ^

12BARRY21 wrote:

評論:

[Extreme]

01:19:152 (6,7,1) - 喂喂這也太鬼觸了=3=
1/8還是乖乖用slider折返吧.. 打了好幾次每次都掉Orz.. 其实你把他当做三连打就特别简单
以上

Star~ 加油~

1. ok, no problems.

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. 感覺Hp拉上1格會比較好。
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:01:986 (x) - 我總是覺得在這裡加音會比較好因為有一個強烈的鼓聲在00:01:986 - .跟音樂反而有一種不自然的感覺 = =
   2. 00:09:687 - ^同
   3. 00:48:511 (1) - 我覺得這裡不太適合spinner.因為音樂沒有"拖長的感覺" 建議繼續map下去
   4. 01:22:521 (3) - 個人人為這slider略醜, 試試把紅色折點移過(左)一點?

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:39:527 (1,2,1,2,1) - 在這裡我有一個想法.可以試試在00:39:928 - ,00:40:489 - ,00:41:131 - 都加上一個note並且疊在slider的上面.然後把00:40:008 (2) - 00:40:650 (2) - 00:41:291 (2) - 移開
   2. 00:49:634 (5,1) - 我覺得這個也弄成折返3連會比較好
   3. 01:15:061 (x) - 在這裡加個音?感覺效果不錯

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. 可考慮OD / HP +1
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:457 (5,6,7) - 感覺不太配合音樂...我覺得繼續放藍線音就可以了.
   2. 00:28:858 (5,6) - 打起來不舒服....看你的決定
   3. 00:33:270 (8) - 感覺你漏了個new combo.這串combo有點長了
   4. 01:18:992 (5,6,7,1) - 大丈夫?
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:10:810 (1) - Sliderslide的聲音略吵.

1. 00:46:906 (301) - Change this to kat?
2. 00:56:211 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385) - This patten is more difficult than overall.Please simpify the pattern.
3. 01:06:478 (458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474) - ^
4. 01:12:254 (505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514) - so fake.

kanpakyin wrote:

As per your request.

[General]

1. ok, no problems.

[Basic]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. 感覺Hp拉上1格會比較好。
   ok
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:01:986 (x) - 我總是覺得在這裡加音會比較好因為有一個強烈的鼓聲在00:01:986 - .跟音樂反而有一種不自然的感覺 = = 试着把下一个slider拉回来 放在重音上了但听起来很monotonous 所以还打算保持
   2. 00:09:687 - ^同
   3. 00:48:511 (1) - 我覺得這裡不太適合spinner.因為音樂沒有"拖長的感覺" 建議繼續map下去 好 我努力压个星..
   4. 01:22:521 (3) - 個人人為這slider略醜, 試試把紅色折點移過(左)一點? 改了

我先把改完spinner的basic传了 显示是3星半 实际是3.29 你看看怎么处理

[Advance]

1. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:39:527 (1,2,1,2,1) - 在這裡我有一個想法.可以試試在00:39:928 - ,00:40:489 - ,00:41:131 - 都加上一個note並且疊在slider的上面.然後把00:40:008 (2) - 00:40:650 (2) - 00:41:291 (2) - 移開
   2. 00:49:634 (5,1) - 我覺得這個也弄成折返3連會比較好ok
   3. 01:15:061 (x) - 在這裡加個音?感覺效果不錯 ok

[Extreme]

1. Difficulty setting
   (I suggest the difficulty setting for better gameplay.)
   
   1. 可考慮OD / HP +1
   OD加了 HP还是算了
   
2. Beatmap design/suggestion
   (These are totally suggestion only,you can ignore them if you disagree.)
   
   1. 00:13:457 (5,6,7) - 感覺不太配合音樂...我覺得繼續放藍線音就可以了. 删掉了5
   2. 00:28:858 (5,6) - 打起來不舒服....看你的決定 换了位置
   3. 00:33:270 (8) - 感覺你漏了個new combo.這串combo有點長了 ok
   4. 01:18:992 (5,6,7,1) - 大丈夫?
   换成一个slider
3. Hitsound
   (These are totally my thought only,it base on my taste,feel free to ignore them)
   
   1. 00:10:810 (1) - Sliderslide的聲音略吵. 加了个sliderslide

[31's Taiko]

1. 00:46:906 (301) - Change this to kat?
2. 00:56:211 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385) - This patten is more difficult than overall.Please simpify the pattern.
3. 01:06:478 (458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474) - ^
4. 01:12:254 (505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514) - so fake.

That's it.感覺沒啥可以mod

tsuka wrote:

把basic hp-1不就三星完破了

tsuka wrote:

Extreme :

00:10:970 - 这个slidertick可以消音

00:41:131 (5) - 这个slider应该 前移1/4拍 然后这里节奏应该是这样的

SPOILER

01:12:575 (1) - 建议取消Newcombo

01:19:313 (1,2,3,4) - 同样一段节奏 前面是3/4 这里突然成1/2而且间距却还是一样 打起来不是很顺手
-- 前半段几乎没有音效 未完成？

others fine
excellent map

把basic hp-1不就三星完破了

kanpakyin wrote:

[31's Taiko]

1. 00:46:906 (301) - Change this to kat? 这个不太想改 因为红蓝对比感觉什么的
2. 00:56:211 (369,370,371,372,373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385) - This patten is more difficult than overall.Please simpify the pattern. 改了
3. 01:06:478 (458,459,460,461,462,463,464,465,466,467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474) - ^改了 我觉得比之前简单 思路跟上面的基本一样
4. 01:12:254 (505,506,507,508,509,510,511,512,513,514) - so fake. no change

kanpakyin wrote:

Looks cool.

Bubbled~

wmfchris wrote:

[adv]
00:26:372 - 按照規律(5->5->3->3->.../ 旋律向上3連 向下5連)這個+個reverse tick？ 其实没安排..so不改
01:02:468 (3,1) - 略不順 ._. reverse (3)再排一下？ reverse了 但没什么其他好排的方式就没动
01:10:008 (4) - [Nazi] spacing修正 左一格 ok

[ext]
00:10:810 (1) - 稍移一下？ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/345923 ok
00:32:789 (6) - NC...? ok
01:14:981 (10) - ^？後面只有這個是跳 ok

[Basic]
00:18:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - 聽起來不太順 還不如2/1 beat 改这个留下面
00:29:259 - ^

- 重音加了finish的話在太鼓打起來好看點 solo沒分別 這個隨你了 这首没太弄音效 有太鼓diff所以我觉得大丈夫
- basic能弄容易一點點嗎 <_<

[Taiko]
checked before

Jacob wrote:

There's barely any hitsounds on this. What gives?

Do not overuse kiai time (the general guideline is one toggle per minute of playtime). Kiai is meant to accent chorus sections, so don't use it just for fountains unless you're doing this extremely rarely. You can toggle kiai off and back on halfway through the chorus if it fits, but using it constantly every few beats/measures is just ridiculous and can distract players.

ykcarrot wrote:

Do not overuse kiai time (the general guideline is one toggle per minute of playtime). Kiai is meant to accent chorus sections, so don't use it just for fountains unless you're doing this extremely rarely. You can toggle kiai off and back on halfway through the chorus if it fits, but using it constantly every few beats/measures is just ridiculous and can distract players.

There are 8 times kiai fountains during 15 seconds.
Some mappers give undue value to decorating thier maps. Such as SB, skins and kiai.
Since kiai can't be removable, thus you should be careful when you add kiai.
I can say you overused kiai in this case.