KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Pereira's Hard
02:25:506 (4) - This slider sounds bad... >.< Change it somehow or replace it with circles o: keep it
02:27:184 (4) - ^ change
02:28:863 (4) - ^ change
02:30:541 (8) - ^change
02:32:219 (2) - ^ keep it
02:33:897 (2) - ^ change
02:35:576 (2) - ^ change

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

Hello there! xD

General
Add 2nd Kiai time(maybe?)

Easy
It's good, nothing to mod ^^

Normal
It's good, nothing to mod ^^

Pereira's Hard
02:25:506 (4) - This slider sounds bad... >.< Change it somehow or replace it with circles o:
02:27:184 (4) - ^
02:28:863 (4) - ^
02:30:541 (8) - ^
02:32:219 (2) - ^
02:33:897 (2) - ^
02:35:576 (2) - ^

Gonna give a star XD

Rules wrote:

All uninherited sections must be on the downbeat of the measure.

SPOILER

SPOILER

cx040156 wrote:

Hard:
00:42:606 (2) - move it forward and make 2 more reverses keep it
01:47:640 - add one more note
02:02:744 (1) - shorten the slider and do a reverse i like this away, because so many drums so i decide slider as is hard
02:25:401 - add a note here
02:32:219 - ^ is fit listen 25% playback
02:35:890 - ^ ? ^ same
02:57:918 (1) - shorten the slider and sorry no
02:58:547 - add a note here
03:26:449 (1) - maybe its better to make a reflection or have some new ideas, this shape is a bit wired fixed
02:51:205 (1) - shorten the slider,no sorry
02:51:834 - add a note
03:04:631 (1) - ^ sorry no

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....

[General]
delete .osb file... Done 0=(^-^)=0
delete Girl.jpg file...u not use it... this is last time....i forgot delete....

[Timing]
BPM is right.
Offset is fine in playablility. But you must change to 3376 so that long white tick is on downbeat. Done 0=(^-^)=0

Rules wrote:

All uninherited sections must be on the downbeat of the measure.

[Easy]
00:44:495 (3) - try this....i feel more good~.....~this can more embody rhythm~xD Done 0=(^-^)=0

SPOILER

00:46:173 (5) - ^~ Done 0=(^-^)=0

00:47:852 (2) - this is too close with 1...maybe u can keep a little space~like Done 0=(^-^)=0

SPOILER

[Normal]
02:12:607 (4,6) - hmm......i think this overlap to normal diff is too hard?....idk...maybe u can change it?......im no sure..orz

[Hard]
look fine..... The Magic of Pereira006

nice song and mapset~ Thanks
Star~☆♪~sor....im not KDs..... Now Have 1 Congratulations ~xD
Good Luck~xD

Thanks

Athena Tennos wrote:

shoot star now~~~
sor my late mod....

cx040156 wrote:

General: There is a problem with the offset of the first timing point? Ask someone to test it and it should be around 500.
keep the kiaitime longer till 01:23:514 - ? 0=(^-^)=0 Done
Hard:
00:42:606 (2) - move it forward and make 2 more reverses
01:47:640 - add one more note
02:02:744 (1) - shorten the slider and do a reverse
02:25:401 - add a note here
02:32:219 - ^
02:35:890 - ^ ?
02:57:918 (1) - shorten the slider and
02:58:547 - add a note here
03:26:449 (1) - maybe its better to make a reflection or have some new ideas, this shape is a bit wired
02:51:205 (1) - shorten the slider,
02:51:834 - add a note
03:04:631 (1) - ^
Normal:
00:21:628 - add a note?
01:57:922 - ^
02:18:053 - from here u should add some sliders&notes to full-fill it otherwise it would be bored
02:36:103 - add a note
02:36:523 (1) - make it a slider
Easy:
00:42:397 - make a twice reversed slider and remove the note
01:59:180 - start it earlier?
03:00:439 - one more note

So many suggestions about adding notes... u can use it or ignore it if u dont like it
Good luck ~

Dark_Ai wrote:

Here is your > > SB < <
I hope you like it >.<

Then full submit after you copied everything into your map folder~

Katty Pie wrote:

Hard

00:47:011(1) - make this slider more symmetcic http://puu.sh/GS4n ok
00:48:689(1) - ^ok
02:51:204(1) - make this slider shorter and add short slider http://puu.sh/GS7T it's sound better and better follow the music ( use this patern in other identical places) sorry no the slider end bluetick is overmapped (if listen 25% playback or 50%) so no sorry my slider is fit song imo

Katty Pie wrote:

hi)

Storyboadding

• Points on lines SB not don't correspond points on timeline. Desing ---> Move all elements in time ---> -15 ms
• Put epilepsy warning, bcz in SB there are bright flashes

Insane

00:42:375(4,5) - correct spacing between this notes Done(I think :c)
01:02:304(7,8) - better stack it. Done
00:58:528(5,6,7) - make identical spacing between notes Done
01:09:017(6,7,8) - stack it better Done
01:35:450(11,1) - unstack it. It so difficult to read Done
01:38:178(5,6) - correct spasing Done
02:01:674(6) - this slider unrankable. Changed
02:03:772(7) - ^ Changed
02:07:128(11) - ^ Changed
02:31:053 - this break time is very long, maybe you started maped from this time 02:37:757 ? Did it >.> Dunno if it's good though
03:00:414(1,2) - correct spacing Done
03:07:127 - remove clap Done
03:17:197 - this slider unrankable too Changed
03:31:462 - i think better map here. to finish it earlier it is not meaningful. the impression is made what to you is simply lazy to complete up to the end. Did it >.> Dunno if it's good though

Good luck~~

Katty Pie wrote:

hi)

Storyboadding

• Points on lines SB not don't correspond points on timeline. Desing ---> Move all elements in time ---> -15 ms
• Put epilepsy warning, bcz in SB there are bright flashes

Normal

oh this randomly hitsounds >.< plz check it (on Insane it's sounds good) i try make the hitsounds :$

00:16:802 - remove clap Done
00:47:851 - better replace on 2 sliders 1/2 Done
01:14:285 - here NC Done
01:20:159 - ^ Done
01:37:362 - better replace 1 repeat and add note after slider Done
02:27:711(1,2)- make this sliders more symmetric http://puu.sh/GSfn Done
03:11:767 - NC Done

Good luck~~

frans_niko wrote:

here my mod~

Easy~
timing kiai finish at 01:22:257
2nd kiai start at 01:59:192

Normal~
finish kiai at 01:23:935
2nd kiai start at 01:58:341

just that

Really i cant make this changes why i need that the kai time are the same in all diffs

KRZY wrote:

[Easy]

Combo Mods

00:37:362 (4) - NC
00:37:781 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:299 (5) - NC
00:41:138 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:886 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:306 (2) - NC
01:13:026 (1) - Remove NC
01:13:865 (1) - NC
01:15:543 (1) - Remove NC
02:20:159 (1) - Remove NC
02:20:998 (6) - NC
02:26:872 (1) - Remove NC
02:28:550 (5) - NC
02:41:138 (6) - NC
02:41:977 (1) - Remove NC
02:54:145 (1) - Remove NC
02:54:564 (7) - NC
03:00:858 (1) - Remove NC
03:01:278 (6) - NC
03:03:795 (1) - Remove NC
03:04:634 (6) - NC
03:10:508 (1) - Remove NC
03:11:348 (5) - NC
03:13:865 (1) - Remove NC
03:15:124 (5) - NC
03:27:292 (1) - Remove NC
03:28:131 (6) - NC

00:31:068 (3) - Break this slider down into a slider and a note like below to better fit the music:

SPOILER

http://puu.sh/H47B

00:32:746 (4) - ^
00:52:047 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - Try this to better fit the music:

SPOILER

03:00:019 (4) - Make this a slider, since there is no logical reason to leave 03:00:438 blank.
03:07:152 (6) - ^

[Normal]

Combo Mods

00:34:005 (5) - NC
00:34:424 (1) - Remove NC
00:40:299 (5) - NC
00:41:977 (1) - Remove NC
00:52:886 (1) - Remove NC
00:53:725 (8) - NC
00:55:403 (1) - Remove NC
01:05:473 (1) - Remove NC
01:14:285 (5) - NC
01:14:704 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:159 (1) - Remove NC
01:20:578 (5) - NC
01:40:718 (6) - NC
02:33:585 (1) - Remove NC
02:34:424 (7) - NC
02:40:299 (1) - Remove NC
02:41:557 (6) - NC
03:21:417 (5) - NC
03:21:837 (1) - Remove NC
03:28:131 (5) - NC

02:13:865 (6,1,2,3,4) - Ctrl+H

[Kiyoshi's Insane]
I'd like to skip this difficulty.

Fight69 wrote:

[Pereira's Hard]

Meh, no custom hs D: what o.o mean custom hitsound ? have o.o only kiai 2º

02:25:470 (4,1,2) - Actually, these beats are in 1/3, you have to make them like

that : http://puu.sh/GZMp
02:27:184 (5,6,7,1) - 1/3 here too : http://puu.sh/GZNm
02:28:862 (4,5,6,1) - Same here
02:30:540 (4,5,6) - ^
02:32:219 (2) - ^
02:33:897 (2,3,4) - ^
02:35:575 (2,3,4) - ^

Nice job Pereira :3

everthing fixed and some remap part, thank you mod

Gabe wrote:

Hard
This is the funniest map on this mapset. This is my opinion.

New combos
00:52:046 - Delete the new combo? done
01:02:116 - Also remove the new combo.done
01:08:829 (3) - Remove the new combodone
01:15:542 - Remove the NC. q.qdone
03:06:309 - Add a new combo here. no

some remap "NC and RNC"

Circle emplacement
00:35:053 (6,7,8) - move these circles at x:188 y:60 to align it with the previous circles done.
00:51:416 - Can you move the slider at x:256 y:76 and do something like this: it will just play better. done
01:07:150 (1) - Align this with 01:05:472 (1) - done

Fight69 wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

Please don't use Grid lvl 2 for your map, especially if it's an Insane, there is

huge spacing errors a bit everywhere like here 01:38:073 (5) or 01:38:807 (10)
Use at least grid lvl 3 or 4, then replace each circles/sliders one by one

00:39:648 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing...I highly recommend you to change this, or if

you don't want, you can at least add a new combo on 00:40:068 (5)
01:35:346 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is so confusing o.o
01:41:220 (4) - Why the spacing is suddently higher ?
01:45:940 (1) - No new combo
01:46:254 (1) - No new combo
01:46:569 (1) - No new combo
01:47:618 (8) - New combo

01:57:478 - I don't like the Speed up at all, but it's just my personal

opinion...

02:03:772 (3) - This slider moves in an abnormal way.
02:04:716 (1) - No new combo
02:07:128 (11) - This slider is way, too, weird
02:08:597 (5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is just confusing as hell,

delete 02:09:226 (1,2), then add a circle at the end of the slider 02:08:911 (6)

(don't forget the clap !)
You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365686

03:00:624 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing...I highly recommend you to change this, or if

you don't want, you can at least add a new combo on 03:01:044 (5)
03:17:197 (1) - Don't make weird sliders like that

Sorry, but I really don't like this diff :/

That's all, good luck !

Gabe wrote:

Insane

New combos
00:46:990 - Add a new combo here and delete the combo to the next note. - Fixed <3
00:55:381 - Add a new combo. - Fixed <3
01:02:304 - Add a new combo - Fixed <3
01:09:017 - Add a new combo - Fixed <3
01:12:164 - ^ - Fixed <3
01:13:843 - ^ - Fixed <3
01:45:940 - Remove the combo - Fixed <3
01:46:254 (1) - ^ - Fixed <3
01:47:618 - Add a combo - Fixed <3
02:04:716 - Delete the new combo. - Fixed <3
02:07:548 - New combo - Fixed <3
02:08:072 (4) - Delete the new combo. - Fixed <3

Circle emplacement
01:57:478 - Give us at least a warning for this speed ? - Will be fixed I hope :c

Hitsounds
what with these hitsounds...?
Try to make something consistent. Not random hitsounds placed randomly. o3o - Fixed <3
01:33:982 - Delete the clap and add a finish - Fixed <3
01:35:660 - Same as ^ - Fixed <3
01:37:339 - ^ - Fixed <3
01:39:017 - ^ - Fixed <3
01:40:695 - ^ - Fixed <3

Dark_Ai wrote:

H-HE?! D:
I'M not a guy DDD: I'm a GIRL

and what?

Gabe wrote:

Mod 4 Mod.
Looks like I have lots of thing to do here...

First of all, can you fullsubmit, please? There's missing the Insane difficulty. I had to download it manually.
Second, move the beatmap topic to Pending. So it could get bubbled and blablah ~

General
There's an inconsistency in Timing Points, The Kiai time and the Preview Point.
Every redtiming must be placed at 00:03:376, with a BPM of 143,000The PreviewPoint must be placed at 117502And for the Kiai time, every kiai times must be placed at these places:
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:57:082, ends on 01:23:514
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:57:502, ends on 02:10:929

Easy

Circle emplacement
Try to make something more natural and fun to play. Because only having straight sliders isn't really fun to play.
00:42:816 (5) - Align this circle with the previous circle. So x:408 y:128

Hitsounds
Try to look at your Hitsounds and try to keep the consistency.
00:20:159 - Add a clap here to keep the consistency
00:26:872 - Also add a clap here to keep the consistency
00:33:585 - ^
00:36:942 - Replace the whistle by a clap
00:37:362 - Delete the clap here if you decide to add a clap at ^
00:40:299 - Also add a clap here.
00:42:816 (5) - Add a whistle here to keep the consistency with your previous whistle.
00:47:012 - Add a clap
00:53:725 - ^
02:49:949 - Add a clap here to fit with the storyboard.

Normal

Circle emplacement
Try to make something more natural and fun to play. Because only having straight sliders isn't really fun to play.
00:26:872 (1,2) - Move these two circles, there are hitting the windows bar. (Well, almost. But move it.)

Hitsounds
Try to look at your Hitsounds and try to keep the consistency.

Hard
This is the funniest map on this mapset. This is my opinion.

New combos
00:52:046 - Delete the new combo?
01:02:116 - Also remove the new combo.
01:08:829 (3) - Remove the new combo
01:15:542 - Remove the NC. q.q
03:06:309 - Add a new combo here.

Circle emplacement
00:35:053 (6,7,8) - move these circles at x:188 y:60 to align it with the previous circles.
00:51:416 - Can you move the slider at x:256 y:76 and do something like this: it will just play better.
01:07:150 (1) - Align this with 01:05:472 (1) - .

Insane

New combos
00:46:990 - Add a new combo here and delete the combo to the next note.
00:55:381 - Add a new combo.
01:02:304 - Add a new combo
01:09:017 - Add a new combo
01:12:164 - ^
01:13:843 - ^
01:45:940 - Remove the combo
01:46:254 (1) - ^
01:47:618 - Add a combo
02:04:716 - Delete the new combo.
02:07:548 - New combo
02:08:072 (4) - Delete the new combo.

Circle emplacement
01:57:478 - Give us at least a warning for this speed ?

Hitsounds
what with these hitsounds...?
Try to make something consistent. Not random hitsounds placed randomly. o3o
01:33:982 - Delete the clap and add a finish
01:35:660 - Same as ^
01:37:339 - ^
01:39:017 - ^
01:40:695 - ^

Fight69 wrote:

Hi, sorry for the delay :<

EDIT : FU- Updated while modding ;~;

[General]

Add the epilepsy warning for this map, I think it's better to be careful about

it.
Also, only one break in Easy and Normal ?

[Easy]

00:22:676 (4) - This slider is weird o.o
03:28:131 (1) - What about a Soft-Finish here ?

[Normal]

00:56:243 (6,1,2) - You shouldn't make this pattern in a Normal
03:29:809 (1) - What about a Soft-Finish here ? The Custom Finish sound really

weird

[Pereira's Hard]

Meh, no custom hs D:

02:25:470 (4,1,2) - Actually, these beats are in 1/3, you have to make them like

that : http://puu.sh/GZMp
02:27:184 (5,6,7,1) - 1/3 here too : http://puu.sh/GZNm
02:28:862 (4,5,6,1) - Same here
02:30:540 (4,5,6) - ^
02:32:219 (2) - ^
02:33:897 (2,3,4) - ^
02:35:575 (2,3,4) - ^

Nice job Pereira :3

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

Please don't use Grid lvl 2 for your map, especially if it's an Insane, there is

huge spacing errors a bit everywhere like here 01:38:073 (5) or 01:38:807 (10)
Use at least grid lvl 3 or 4, then replace each circles/sliders one by one

00:39:648 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing...I highly recommend you to change this, or if

you don't want, you can at least add a new combo on 00:40:068 (5)
01:35:346 (10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This part is so confusing o.o
01:41:220 (4) - Why the spacing is suddently higher ?
01:45:940 (1) - No new combo
01:46:254 (1) - No new combo
01:46:569 (1) - No new combo
01:47:618 (8) - New combo

01:57:478 - I don't like the Speed up at all, but it's just my personal

opinion...

02:03:772 (3) - This slider moves in an abnormal way.
02:04:716 (1) - No new combo
02:07:128 (11) - This slider is way, too, weird
02:08:597 (5,6,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - This part is just confusing as hell,

delete 02:09:226 (1,2), then add a circle at the end of the slider 02:08:911 (6)

(don't forget the clap !)
You should get something like that : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/365686

03:00:624 (2,3,4,5) - The spacing...I highly recommend you to change this, or if

you don't want, you can at least add a new combo on 03:01:044 (5)
03:17:197 (1) - Don't make weird sliders like that

Sorry, but I really don't like this diff :/

That's all, good luck !

espiritur00 wrote:

Dark_Ai wrote:

H-HE?! D:
I'M not a guy DDD: I'm a GIRL

and what?

nothing xD
are to the Epilepsy warning in the sb .
But i already make it

• 00:57:501 (2) - many time reversed slider may be a little hard for beginners. separate to some non-reversed sliders.
  00:59:599 (4) - ^
  01:02:117 (3) - ^
  01:58:341 - put some note
  01:58:760 - ^

• 00:42:711 (6,7) - blue tick - blue tick..it a little hard to read rhythm imo.

• 00:28:550 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes don't have regular rhythm. but you arranged them as if they have regular rhythm. who can read the rhythm from these notes?
  00:32:956 (2,3,4) - the distance of previous stream is this:00:27:921 (4,5,6). and this stream has double of it. do you think that who can pass it?
  00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why?
  01:43:760 (1,2,3) - same as 00:28:550
  01:57:501 - why did you change SV so suddenly? it is just only confusing.
  03:18:480 (4,5,6) - same as 00:28:550
  03:19:424 (7,8,9) - ^
  03:24:040 (1,2,3) - ^
  
  overall, you must fix that too random placement whole of this diff.
  I recommend you to learn more about mapping from other ranked maps.
  and don't forget to consider whether players can enjoy your map.

h-728 wrote:

from PM

[Easy]

• 00:57:501 (2) - many time reversed slider may be a little hard for beginners. separate to some non-reversed sliders. Done ^^
  00:59:599 (4) - ^ Done ^^
  01:02:117 (3) - ^ Done ^^
  01:58:341 - put some note is to that in the "Ai Mod" show that is a "easy" lvl dont normal.
  01:58:760 - ^ same ^

[Pereira's Hard]

• 00:42:711 (6,7) - blue tick - blue tick..it a little hard to read rhythm imo.

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

• 00:28:550 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes don't have regular rhythm. but you arranged them as if they have regular rhythm. who can read the rhythm from these notes?
  00:32:956 (2,3,4) - the distance of previous stream is this:00:27:921 (4,5,6). and this stream has double of it. do you think that who can pass it?
  00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why?
  01:43:760 (1,2,3) - same as 00:28:550
  01:57:501 - why did you change SV so suddenly? it is just only confusing.
  03:18:480 (4,5,6) - same as 00:28:550
  03:19:424 (7,8,9) - ^
  03:24:040 (1,2,3) - ^
  
  overall, you must fix that too random placement whole of this diff.
  I recommend you to learn more about mapping from other ranked maps.
  and don't forget to consider whether players can enjoy your map.

anyway, good luck

h-728 wrote:

[Kiyoshi's Insane]

• 00:28:550 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - these notes don't have regular rhythm. but you arranged them as if they have regular rhythm. who can read the rhythm from these notes? - Fixed
  00:32:956 (2,3,4) - the distance of previous stream is this:00:27:921 (4,5,6). and this stream has double of it. do you think that who can pass it? - Everyone.
  00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why? - Can't understand what you mean ;-;
  01:43:760 (1,2,3) - same as 00:28:550 - Fixed
  01:57:501 - why did you change SV so suddenly? it is just only confusing. - Warning SB will be added soon for this
  03:18:480 (4,5,6) - same as 00:28:550 - Fixed
  03:19:424 (7,8,9) - ^ - Fixed
  03:24:040 (1,2,3) - ^ - Fixed
  
  overall, you must fix that too random placement whole of this diff.
  I recommend you to learn more about mapping from other ranked maps.
  and don't forget to consider whether players can enjoy your map.

anyway, good luck

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

00:38:620 (6,1) - this distance is almost same as 00:39:669 (2,3), but rhythm is one-quarter. why? - Can't understand what you mean ;-;

Distance A

Distance B

1. why storyboard a warning when you can use the option lol
2. 02:13:753 - this storyboard volume falling down, try to fade out each column in different speed, or maybe grid by grid lol

1. I think grid 2 is too large, this makes some spacings look very bad
2. 00:28:550 (3,1,2) - why the spacing
3. 00:40:299 (2) - remove the whistle at slider end
4. 00:41:033 (4) - turn off gris snap, put in the middle of 3 and 5 0.0 this doesn't look good
5. 00:58:236 (3) - better move note (4) to next 1/4 beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371253
6. 01:12:187 (1,2) - it's hard for me to get the rhythm here, maybe remove (2) and stack (1) at slider end ..?
7. 01:17:012 - I think adding 3 notes here is better to play, don't cut the one part in the music o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot978.jpg
8. 01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - gridsnap makes this stream weird, plz turn off grid snap and remake it
9. 01:36:837 (8,9,10) - 1/8 slider o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot979.jpg
10. 01:38:096 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing weird o.o
11. 01:41:243 (4,5,6,7) - what
12. 02:01:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - after you speed up the sliders, spacing needs to be larger for streams, otherwise it plays very awkward imo
13. I suggest you use a smaller grid size and make the stream spacings better...

1. 00:36:942 (1) - why don't make it end at 1/1 ..?
2. 00:38:620 (6) - ^
3. 00:55:403 (5) - you can make blanket better like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot980.jpg
4. nice diff o.o

1. 01:17:222 (1,3,1) - missing claps here..
2. 02:16:671 - you should break when it falls down... at least turn down volume gradually orz
3. 02:34:424 (1,2) - move up 3 grids
4. 02:41:977 (2,4) - this may be hard to read for beginners._.
5. 02:51:208 (1) - not centered o.o
6. 03:23:935 (4) - right 1grid
7. nice map :3

1. maybe use more 2/1 notes and long sliders, less 1/1 notes, making a better diff spread...
2. 02:16:671 - same with normal diff
3. nice map too :3

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Pereira's Hard

1. 00:36:942 (1) - why don't make it end at 1/1 ..? sorry no, as this slider is fit
2. 00:38:620 (6) - ^ ^ no
3. 00:55:403 (5) - you can make blanket better like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot980.jpg well ok
4. nice diff o.o

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

hi~

Kiyoshi's Insane

1. I think grid 2 is too large, this makes some spacings look very bad - Tried. D:
2. 00:28:550 (3,1,2) - why the spacing - I don't get what's wrong with it
3. 00:40:299 (2) - remove the whistle at slider end - Fixed
4. 00:41:033 (4) - turn off gris snap, put in the middle of 3 and 5 0.0 this doesn't look good - Sounds better, fixed.
5. 00:58:236 (3) - better move note (4) to next 1/4 beat http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/371253 - Fixed
6. 01:12:187 (1,2) - it's hard for me to get the rhythm here, maybe remove (2) and stack (1) at slider end ..? - Fixed
7. 01:17:012 - I think adding 3 notes here is better to play, don't cut the one part in the music o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot978.jpg - Fixed, I hope it's ok.
8. 01:22:257 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - gridsnap makes this stream weird, plz turn off grid snap and remake it - Did my best ;-;
9. 01:36:837 (8,9,10) - 1/8 slider o.o http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot979.jpg - No, It's really confusing '-'
10. 01:38:096 (5,6,7,8,9,10) - spacing weird o.o - Fixed
11. 01:41:243 (4,5,6,7) - what - Changed the distance, I hope it's easier to read now >.<
12. 02:01:068 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - after you speed up the sliders, spacing needs to be larger for streams, otherwise it plays very awkward imo - Fixed and did some changes as well
13. I suggest you use a smaller grid size and make the stream spacings better...

I think just the Insane diff needs more work, other diffs are good - ;-; I'm doing my best ;c Thanks.

Good luck~