fufe wrote:

Easy@ster
00:18:19 (1) - spacing. too close.
00:54:02 (1,1,2) - spacing. too close.
00:57:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nudge all 1/4 forward.
00:59:68 (6) - reduce by 1/2 beat ??
01:15:06 (1) - maybe end sooner? This might be hard for easy difficulty. I don't know.

Hard-
00:51:28 (1) - Sounds like it should start 1/4 backwards ? (means you have to break next slider) see what you think.
00:55:19 (1) - 1 grid right ?
00:55:69 (4) - 1 grid left ?

? = light suggestion
Looks Much better now! Star!
(Think You ^^)

Can you help me to find someone to give me some opinion?

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:32 (1) - delete and replace break
can you explain to me why every note at the beginning is a new combo? it looks strange

Because I think that, at the beginning will be easier .
But I will change that ^^

[Hard]
00:18:40 (5) - whistle
00:44:23 (1) - increase volume a bit and all inherit sections for samplese/volume changes should happen a tick before the note they intend to affect
01:40:40 (1) - finish
why so many new combos @-@ you dont need them there

am....I will change them ^^

Shinde wrote:

What an interesting custom skin. That gives me ideas for the future.

Normal
00:21:40 - What the hell? Lol. o_O; This spinner skin is crazzzyy. That's not bad though.
** = =
00:37:73 (1) - Move 1/2 a beat right? It feels early.
* Changed
01:11:73 (1,2,3) - This is all distance snapped perfectly, but I think you should arrange it a bit differently. I've attached a picture of what I was thinking.
*Changed

Let Fun!!
00:20:49 (1) - I'm thinking one grid down and right. This makes a perfect square with the notes after it.
*Yes! Changed
01:05:74 - NEAT.
*I don't know what are your saying ??

This beatmap is awesome. It flows really well and the custom skin is beautiful. Everything about this song felt like it had a lot of energy. I would star it ten times over if I could.
*Thank you ^^

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:44:57 (4) - the finishes sound weird
*fixed

[FUN!!]
remove the space in the difficulty name between the N and the !!
*OKEY~
the volume changes sound erratic and out of place, maybe make them not as much?
*am... I think I can remove some ~
02:01:07 (3,4,5,6) - spacing

Metruzero wrote:

I'm gonna sound like a noob but I'm new to this, how do I give a star?

You have not yet given this beatmap a star. If you like what you see, and want to help this beatmap get attention, then shoot a star in its direction!
Star this map! (does not use kudos)

Echo wrote:

Can you replace the mp3 with this one which doesn't have the smoke sound at ~45s and the popping sound at ~1:50? You'll need to readjust the offsets (I get offset:18000)

* I have this mp3 ~ But it is not fixed to the redio ~ So I cannot use this sorry ^^

also, can you map the rest of normal? Ending it at the key change is waaay too abrupt.
* I think it is the good place to end ~

Finally, I made a difficulty for this years ago but I never finished it... do you mind if I finish it now and include it with your beatmap?

*I have see your map already it is no problem^^
But can you use my (mp3, and the skin)? You map is not fixed to my Go my way~

Changing this back to star for now, you can PM me if you do anything.

Echo wrote:

What do you mean it's not fixed?

al2e10 wrote:

Echo wrote:

You can give the video any offset you like.

But I don't like your mp3 SORRY

Echo wrote:

al2e10 wrote:

Echo wrote:

You can give the video any offset you like.

But I don't like your mp3 SORRY

I can return the bubble if you "don't like" the mp3, but I seriously think that the smoke sound ruins the whole song. I disapprove of the current mp3. And not mapping the second half of normal? It's like... one chorus.