fufe wrote:

Change Easy timing also. RESNAP ALL NOTES in red text from timing tab at the top for me.


00:37:41 (3) - spacing. too close.
00:41:74 (4) - too far. unless it is a jump. If it is a jump i think it needs to be new combo.
00:49:37 (5,6,7) - ugly. move one or two grid(lvl 3) left
00:50:94 (1) - Someone told me this is not allowed anymore. Spinners need to go at least 2000 bonus in autoplay. This is not in the official post yet so maybe we have to ask more.
00:56:02 (1) - same as above.
01:16:81 (1) - what is this hit for?
01:18:15 (1) - fast spinner.
01:25:20 (1) - spacing. too far, hidden, and hard to understand. Maybe you need to make your combo colors a little more different.
01:57:22 (1) - move forward 1/4 beat

This map is good. But it might be a little too hard. (YES ~)
Did you add the small jumps on purpose? ( I will ~)
If not, i can go back and help find bad ones. The spinners are too much for me. (I will try it ~)
It is also too hard to see new combos, the colors are almost identical. (change it ~)

Also, what does First@STER and Ease@STER mean?
(Let me see....... I have to change ~ ^^)

fufe wrote:

Easy@ster
00:18:19 (1) - spacing. too close.
00:54:02 (1,1,2) - spacing. too close.
00:57:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nudge all 1/4 forward.
00:59:68 (6) - reduce by 1/2 beat ??
01:15:06 (1) - maybe end sooner? This might be hard for easy difficulty. I don't know.

Hard-
00:51:28 (1) - Sounds like it should start 1/4 backwards ? (means you have to break next slider) see what you think.
00:55:19 (1) - 1 grid right ?
00:55:69 (4) - 1 grid left ?

? = light suggestion
Looks Much better now! Star!
(Think You ^^)

Can you help me to find someone to give me some opinion?

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:21:32 (1) - delete and replace break
can you explain to me why every note at the beginning is a new combo? it looks strange

Because I think that, at the beginning will be easier .
But I will change that ^^

[Hard]
00:18:40 (5) - whistle
00:44:23 (1) - increase volume a bit and all inherit sections for samplese/volume changes should happen a tick before the note they intend to affect
01:40:40 (1) - finish
why so many new combos @-@ you dont need them there

am....I will change them ^^

Shinde wrote:

What an interesting custom skin. That gives me ideas for the future.

Normal
00:21:40 - What the hell? Lol. o_O; This spinner skin is crazzzyy. That's not bad though.
** = =
00:37:73 (1) - Move 1/2 a beat right? It feels early.
* Changed
01:11:73 (1,2,3) - This is all distance snapped perfectly, but I think you should arrange it a bit differently. I've attached a picture of what I was thinking.
*Changed

Let Fun!!
00:20:49 (1) - I'm thinking one grid down and right. This makes a perfect square with the notes after it.
*Yes! Changed
01:05:74 - NEAT.
*I don't know what are your saying ??

This beatmap is awesome. It flows really well and the custom skin is beautiful. Everything about this song felt like it had a lot of energy. I would star it ten times over if I could.
*Thank you ^^

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Normal]
00:44:57 (4) - the finishes sound weird
*fixed

[FUN!!]
remove the space in the difficulty name between the N and the !!
*OKEY~
the volume changes sound erratic and out of place, maybe make them not as much?
*am... I think I can remove some ~
02:01:07 (3,4,5,6) - spacing

Metruzero wrote:

I'm gonna sound like a noob but I'm new to this, how do I give a star?

You have not yet given this beatmap a star. If you like what you see, and want to help this beatmap get attention, then shoot a star in its direction!
Star this map! (does not use kudos)

Echo wrote:

Can you replace the mp3 with this one which doesn't have the smoke sound at ~45s and the popping sound at ~1:50? You'll need to readjust the offsets (I get offset:18000)

* I have this mp3 ~ But it is not fixed to the redio ~ So I cannot use this sorry ^^

also, can you map the rest of normal? Ending it at the key change is waaay too abrupt.
* I think it is the good place to end ~

Finally, I made a difficulty for this years ago but I never finished it... do you mind if I finish it now and include it with your beatmap?

*I have see your map already it is no problem^^
But can you use my (mp3, and the skin)? You map is not fixed to my Go my way~

Changing this back to star for now, you can PM me if you do anything.

Echo wrote:

What do you mean it's not fixed?

al2e10 wrote:

Echo wrote:

You can give the video any offset you like.

But I don't like your mp3 SORRY

Echo wrote:

al2e10 wrote:

Echo wrote:

You can give the video any offset you like.

But I don't like your mp3 SORRY

I can return the bubble if you "don't like" the mp3, but I seriously think that the smoke sound ruins the whole song. I disapprove of the current mp3. And not mapping the second half of normal? It's like... one chorus.