cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

[Insane]

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1. 00:18:055 (2) - whistle ok
2. 00:18:698 (1) - remove whistle (add it at 00:18:912 (2) - ) added to both
3. 01:12:912 (3) - whislte head ok
4. 01:43:127 (2) - whistle tail ok
5. 01:47:198 (3) - whistle ok
6. 01:48:270 (4) - whistle head ok
7. 01:52:555 (3) - whistle ok
8. 01:55:127 (3) - whistle head and tail only head
9. 01:57:698 (2) - whistle ok
10. 01:58:555 (3) - whistle ok
11. 01:59:412 (1) - whistle ok
12. 02:01:984 (1) - whistle ok
13. 02:02:841 (2) - whistle ok
14. 02:04:555 (5) - whistle ok
15. 02:08:841 (1) - whistle only head
16. 02:09:698 (2) - whistle only head
17. 02:10:555 (3) - whistle tail ok
18. 02:13:127 (3) - whistle ok
19. 02:15:698 (2) - whistle ok

Nice diff

whistle mod sry (/ω＼)

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
00:27:591, 02:24:162 - excess timeline I'm not entirely sure what you mean on that. ._.
01:45:269 (4,5,6) - this may be quite hard for beginners...
02:19:984 (2,3) - sliders with 2 reverse ticks are kinda hard to players, but this is even harder for players to predict the time <_<
feeling that the clap in the first half is a bit too loud comparing to the rest of the diff...

I've done a lot of changes before you posted your mod, man. Its just that my difficulty wasn't updated before hand. ):

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
I wonder why there's no tag like cirno...

[Insane]
*many excess timeline between 0:23 ~ 0:56, you may want to delete them.
nice o.o

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in overall they looked nice so I think we can have a try there...when you find some more mods later ask me for rechecks.

Garven wrote:

This song is too beautiful to be ignored.

[General]
Update your tags due to number changing his name. fixed
Check the green lines in the guest difficulties. Looks like they weren't updated quite right with the mp3 change and the kiai fountains are way off. fixed

[Hard]
03:11:367 (3) - eew whistle on sliderslide fixed for him
There's a ton of small overlaps, but it seems to be your thing. I'd prefer the map without them though.

[Insane]
00:37:725 (4,5) - It'd be cool if you could have the 5 slider centered through the 4 slider fixed
01:49:939 (2,3) - Easily avoidable overlap :< fixed
02:32:367 (1,2,3,4) - The hitsounds feel overpowering here lowered their volume a bit
02:43:510 (1,2,3,4) - ^ etc. Applies to the instances in Extended as well, if you wish to change them ^
03:06:225 (5) - Remove clap fixed

[Extended]
Mostly just the 1/4 stream hitsounds with the clap spam really. Nice work on this one. lowered their volume a bit

[Taiko] I haven't heared from them for quite a long time so I'll take over, also changed Soft hitset to Normal
Whoa, fix that first note. fixed
Volume feels way too loud during the quiet intro.
00:27:010 (1) - Speed up feels better starting here I agree
01:30:224 (89,90,91) - :/ changed
01:37:939 (104,105,106) - aaah whyyy changed
02:17:367 (1) - Snap the green line so the sv change isn't wonky changed
02:44:689 (169) - Uh changed
I really with you two used more finishes. There were plenty of spots where it could have been awesome to have them. Added some in obvious spots

wmfchris wrote:

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Having kiai flash in taiko diff is unrankable. fixed

[Extended]
00:39:332 (2) - imo (1,2,3,4,5) should be equally spaced considering the music, you may consider placing like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329176 fixed
01:13:725 (6,7) - it's discouraged to hide slider under another slider like that. Maybe you can curve (6) more so that the ending of (7) is more visible. fixed
02:17:367 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:43:510 - the drum sound in the music is heavier in the white tick and consecutive claps might be a bit loud. Remove clap or reduce the loudness in (2,3,4)? fixed
02:50:796 (3) - A bit nazi, but this is not curving (1) well comparing with (2,4). fixed
04:47:367 (1,2) - similar to 1:13. fixed
05:35:046 (2,3,4) - similar to 02:43 fixed

[Hard]
HP3 and OD3 is toooooo low for hard. Try HP4 OD5. fixed

not much to complain with upon last mod, taiko looks fine. Find me when stuffs are fixed.

wmfchris wrote:

[Normal]
...and it seems that this difficulty setting is harder than hard? Yea and Glass was able to fix that. I suppose I'll just decrease the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one anyway.
00:19:725 (2,3,4) - these notes are heavily covered by the previous slider Okay, those are rearranged.
not much problem but some claps maybe too loud comparing with the song like 01:24:653 (2,4) - Not really. It sounds fine the way it is.

not much to complain with upon last mod, taiko looks fine. Find me when stuffs are fixed.

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[596 Taiko]
02:31:082 (89) - no finishes at the beginning of a 1/4 stream. Double-checked with people in #taiko and this shouldn't be ranked Fixed

[Extended]
00:01:939 (5) - new combo at the beginning of a new musical phrase please Fixed
00:08:796 (5) - ^ etc. Fixed
00:39:010 (1,2,3) - the sudden switch between melodic lines combined with the spacing change makes this feel unintuitive I like it :/
02:18:867 (5,6) - this overlap looks ugly (both of them) Fixed
03:06:225 (3) - I don't think that this jump is really necessary or particularly fitting here. Jumps are like spices, they work best if you put them in places that work with the rest of the dish and can end up being rather distasteful if you put them in places they don't belong. This isn't a *terrible* place for a jump because it is during a rather exciting general area of the song, but there isn't anything in the song or the patterns of the map to induce a jump here and thus it feels a bit out-of-place. Generally, jumps work well when either 1. they make up an entire phrase of the song that stands out 2. they occur between musical phrases (a sort of phrase-breaker if you will) 3. they are required to form a symmetrical pattern in your map or 4. there is a discernible shift in the music midphrase (a random note much higher or lower than the rest, a key change, etc). Usually, placing jumps in a location that does not fit one of these will be suboptimal for your map. Fixed
04:07:082 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - nice thanks (:
05:54:546 (2,3) - could you increase the spacing on these three combos so that the timing of the notes is a little more obvious? you have them spaced the same as 1/2 notes from the previous combo but they aren't Fixed

[Taiko]
you might want to consider looking over the places where you put finishes around and during the kiai time and consider making the ones that fall on cymbal crashes into katsu-finishes instead of don-finishes change some

Popped for 593 Taiko, call me back when you are ready to be rechecked. Talk to me in IRC if you have any questions about my mod and I'll be happy to clarify and talk things out with you.

1. 00:27:653 - 01:25:939 - I just found custom soft sound didn't used in this part, on purpose?

Breeze wrote:

[Impossiblexu's Hard]

1. 00:27:653 - 01:25:939 - I just found custom soft sound didn't used in this part, on purpose?

Other than that, this map is awesome, simple but funny
I had to ask SFG the "bubble back" is 1st or 2nd bubble so I can 2nd bubble or apprpval this map

IceBeam wrote:

hi Glass Hi IceBeam

this mapset is fantastic,I can't get enough of it Glad you like it
few issues for guests:

[Roddie's Normal]
00:38:367 (1,2) - honestly I don't get this rhythm well maybe something like this? I'll let Roddie do the change

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[Impossiblexu's Hard]
00:55:082 - maybe use a custom normal clap for this part as well? I don't think standard soft clap fits well here + the volume is really low,so normal hits would be extra cool I'll enable custom set for this section
01:44:367 (3,4) - it plays really weird to me,I just can't skip a note at 01:44:582,so please start a slider there Added a note

also you could extend 01:42:225 (5) and 02:02:796 (5) to the next red tick. there's no good reason to make such a simplified rhythm in Hard imo (even for slow part) Done

and Glass,your custom clap weights 200 kb,maybe reduce the size a little,as your folder is over 10mb? reduced the size of the BGs instead since I don't wanna mess with the sound

IceBeam wrote:

[Roddie's Normal]
00:38:367 (1,2) - honestly I don't get this rhythm well maybe something like this?

SPOILER

I rearranged that part to something different.

Loli Cjj wrote:

This absolutely deserves a rank <3

wmfchris wrote:

I guess app fire icon is to be used? anyway you deserve for it :3 gratz

Kite wrote:

i love you glass