JauiPlaY wrote:

Hi
一些建议

[General]
osb干掉 哦
kiai time太长了点 既然这样0 0 咱把前两个kiai段分成两个了

[Normal]
00:33:658 (4,5) - 看上去怪怪的 可以考虑把(5)的尾巴逆时针90度之类的 平行很怪么 稍微调整了角度
00:35:210 (1) - 折返加clap 这些加了
00:39:348 (1) - ^
00:42:451 (4) - 折返和尾加clap
00:46:589 (4) - ^
00:47:624 (1,2) - 类似00:33:658 (4,5)的问题 主要是间距迷惑新手 这么善良的全滑条图稍微迷惑一下不行么
00:59:003 (4) - 折返和尾加clap
01:04:951 (2) - ^
01:32:106 (4) - 到了这里这种slider变成了折返和尾需要加whistle...由于太多了就不一一列举 只是说我认为这样的加法比较好
后面全是对这种slider的音效建议 我就懒了=A=
另外我觉得还需要加个easy恩 咱巨懒XD

[Hard]
00:38:055 (2) - 改个1/4折返slider 没动 咱好不容易把combo凑到777....(slap
01:23:831 (5,1) - 中间不加东西真是浪费... 空着挺好的 咱说
01:38:313 (3) - 折返尾clap 加了
01:48:400 (2,3) - 这个就听起来比较怪了 哦 把第二个滑条延迟了
01:51:503 (1,2,3) - ^ 三连改到下一个红线去了
01:53:313 (7) - 可以移到01:53:184然后01:53:572加个圈 跟着另一音轨来的
02:55:641 - 加圈 combo啊combo(slap again

要我能给泡现在就给了

stickmeister wrote:

This song is nice. Here's a mod for you. Red means I highly recommend you fix this. Blue means it's entirely up to you whether or not you want to fix it. Pink means it's cosmetic, such as hitsounds.

General Notes

Hard
Spacing is kind of strange. as most of them won't make players mess up the notes, i think it to be ok
00:14:520 - This pause between this note and the spinner is too long. It drains your meter. There is also not enough time between the end of the spinner and the next note. I would suggest moving the spinner back to 00:14:779 and extending it to 00:18:141, solving both problems. what it was suit the music well imo
00:21:115 - Perhaps move this a little closer to the end of the previous slider?
00:22:796 - Don't stack/overlap this under the previous slider. i saw this pattern in a ranked map, and i use ->http://osu.ppy.sh/b/132173
01:33:658 (1, 2) - I think you shouldn't overlap these sliders.
01:35:727 (3) - Also move these overlapping sliders. The reason I'm pointing all these out is because I believe you can't overlap the ends of the sliders, it's unrankable. You can only overlap sliders that do not cover the ends. Don't quote me on that, though.
02:08:313 (1) - ^ Same thing.
02:46:331 (6) - This is too close to (5).
02:47:106 (3) - ^
03:03:658 (7, 8, 9) - ^
03:22:796 - Whistle hitsound added

Normal
This difficulty has no circles. Not only is that boring, but that is really boring. You need to completely redo this one and change it up, or get someone to guest difficulty for you. There's no point in playing this because it's just slider after slider.

Fix up your Normal and ask me if you want to recheck it. That's all. sorry but i won't change my normal, for i think play this level will be noobs, who can't play too hard, and i don't think they will feel boring

1. 关掉Countdown吧？

1. 00:16:589 (1) - 唔……我觉得这里节奏做成和前面一样似乎会更好一点……？spinner感觉不是很必要呢…………而且不用spinner就可以在00:19:175 - 补个note了让节奏感觉更完整一点～
2. 00:33:658 (4) - 感觉应该和前面一样是结束在后面白线上的吧？
3. 00:42:451 (4) - 这里我觉得用1/2长度的折返要比3/4的舒服很多～
4. 01:57:193 (5,6) - 我的话会把这里做成一个折返再加一个note在downbeat上来突出那个鼓点的重音～
5. 02:27:710 (2) - 不是很确认啦但是我记得有rules说slider的tick point不能被完全遮挡（除了insane）

1. 00:14:650 - 虽然不太明白你的目的但是我觉得这里既然音乐没有变化的话，为什么要留空档呢……
2. 00:19:046 (2) - 听节奏的话这个应该是向前移动到蓝线，然后00:19:693 - 补note。而且你前后似乎也确实都是这么做的～
3. 00:22:538 (6) - 考虑删掉？
4. 00:23:184 (2) - 同样是建议向前移动到蓝线，然后空出来的白线补note
5. 00:26:288 (7) - 考虑做成note在白线上？因为蓝线那里似乎并没有节奏呢……
6. 00:49:951 (2) - 考虑减少一个折返，然后在后面红线补个note？
7. 00:50:598 (1) - tricky spinner.....
8. 01:23:572 (4) - 这里给一个纯属个人口味的节奏建议～～～
   
9. 01:25:382 - 和01:26:675 - 的空档有一点点不舒服……
10. 01:41:805 (2) - 这里有可能会被读成1/2的note吧。。。
11. 03:22:796 (1) - 我觉得静音收尾要比whistle好一点？

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~m4m~

[General]

1. 关掉Countdown吧？ 关掉了

[Normal]

1. 00:16:589 (1) - 唔……我觉得这里节奏做成和前面一样似乎会更好一点……？spinner感觉不是很必要呢…………而且不用spinner就可以在00:19:175 - 补个note了让节奏感觉更完整一点～ 转盘的加分声音咱感觉和原曲很搭的
2. 00:33:658 (4) - 感觉应该和前面一样是结束在后面白线上的吧？ 这边有个新加进来的鼓声，就跟上去了
3. 00:42:451 (4) - 这里我觉得用1/2长度的折返要比3/4的舒服很多～ 嗯 改了
4. 01:57:193 (5,6) - 我的话会把这里做成一个折返再加一个note在downbeat上来突出那个鼓点的重音～ 嘛 上一个mod还说咱这个难度全是滑条很无聊请remap 貌似你都没注意到，算了 不remap了（死
5. 02:27:710 (2) - 不是很确认啦但是我记得有rules说slider的tick point不能被完全遮挡（除了insane） 嘛 真有这种奇葩规则咱等XAT来挑了..XD

[Hard]

1. 00:14:650 - 虽然不太明白你的目的但是我觉得这里既然音乐没有变化的话，为什么要留空档呢…… 硬要说目的的话就是咱感觉这样留白比较好 前面每小节都有钢琴的音 咱只是想在这边换条音轨跟上去
2. 00:19:046 (2) - 听节奏的话这个应该是向前移动到蓝线，然后00:19:693 - 补note。而且你前后似乎也确实都是这么做的～ 咱真的想方设法跟了很多音轨 因为一开始找人去test的时候大家都说单调（嘛 loop什么的咱也没办法）可能初见显得比较乱吧 不过这边两个map思路都没问题的情况下咱表示懒了
3. 00:22:538 (6) - 考虑删掉？ 嘛 这个梗（抄你的来的XD）表示咱很喜欢用
4. 00:23:184 (2) - 同样是建议向前移动到蓝线，然后空出来的白线补note
5. 00:26:288 (7) - 考虑做成note在白线上？因为蓝线那里似乎并没有节奏呢…… 嘛 有鼓点啊..
6. 00:49:951 (2) - 考虑减少一个折返，然后在后面红线补个note？ 折返太多确实有点奇怪 咱把它拆成两个了
7. 00:50:598 (1) - tricky spinner.....
8. 01:23:572 (4) - 这里给一个纯属个人口味的节奏建议～～～ 嘛 这里本来也是map掉的 但是自己test的时候觉得这边连同后面一直没有小的break打起来很纠结所以改成这样了- - 后面一个提出来的break也是为了适应这边这个新加的
   
9. 01:25:382 - 和01:26:675 - 的空档有一点点不舒服……
10. 01:41:805 (2) - 这里有可能会被读成1/2的note吧。。。 嘛 既然提出来了 稍微动了一点XD（找人test还没在这种问题上出现读图问题呢（骄傲状）
11. 03:22:796 (1) - 我觉得静音收尾要比whistle好一点？也是

差不多就这样啦～～好图好曲果断star之～～加油的说！

a3272509123 wrote:

GhoslFinal大好!我可以把你的图写到我那张的creator's words吗:3

Jayel wrote:

Hey, from my queue.

All suggestions.

[General]
Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point at 03:04:275.
Snap it to 03:04:305. fixed

[Normal]
AD+1, because the notes in this diff are somewhat confusing. you mean AR? i think AR5 is ok

02:42:451(1) - This one looks a little odd with the spinner. Removing it might be better. just want to keep

[Hard]
00:14:520(1) - This single note looks a little bit weird. I think some players (including me) might misconsider that
the next event after this note might be break time, not a spinner. break time have spoil box, and i don't like it here, so i removed the break time
00:21:503(3) - This one does not match with the music, I think. this point has a drum(or something like that..) sound
00:27:451(2,3) - The space between these two notes would be better if it is the same space with 00:27:839(4,5). make the spacing bigger
00:30:813(7,1) - Cannot see the second slider well. removed the stack here and changed it to (1,2)
00:45:296(4,1) - This kind of overlapping sliders looks bad IMO. lol...though i think it to be nice
00:47:882(2,3) - ^
01:35:469(2,3) - ^
00:50:469(x) - Adding one circle on this place might look better. not change
01:07:020(x) - ^, but not necessarily this place.
01:08:184(1) - Put this slider in other place. Recommened place is start - x:256 y:88 end - x:256 y:136. this place is ok to me, and i think no one will care about center of the playfield in gameplay
01:18:658(1,3) - Put these circles on x:256 y:192.
01:38:313(3) - The shape of this slider looks weird...
02:02:494(3,4) - The space between these two sliders might be difficult to play... i asked many people to test this map and no one got a miss here
02:38:313(1) - This one looks a little odd with the spinner. Removing it might be better. nice to me though
03:04:434(x) - Add some break time here? HD6 is ok to pass this section

Alright, done. I love this music..
Good luck~!!

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from All map will be modded ~

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

General

1. 很OK...

Hard

1. 00:51:632 (1,1) - 這明明就是兩個音，前一個note根本不需要加NC做強調效果，所以把後面那個NC刪掉吧 删了
2. 總覺得後面那個part可以多加一些soft-whistle，那樣會更合適 嗯 不过用的是已经是自定义音效 加一套不方便什么的- -（懒..

Normal

1. 01:01:072 (2) - 把這slider往負方向轉20度後放回原位，以避免01:01:072 (2)的尾部與01:00:038 (1)相碰，不好看 [/color]
2. 唔，soft-whistle放得不對路呢lol 音效咱确实不太擅长..会加油学习的..
   

改檢查的都檢查了
沒啥好挑的啊lol
話說GhostFinal系列真的很讚，尤其這首真的好治癒！><
將來如果有機會的話我也想加入製作(GD)行列
恩，好歌好圖值得star啊
good luck ~

感谢支持~
上面那個MOD我傻了，是能挑出這麼多喔！？

Banana wrote:

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~m4m~

[General]

1. 关掉Countdown吧？ 关掉了

[Normal]

1. 00:16:589 (1) - 唔……我觉得这里节奏做成和前面一样似乎会更好一点……？spinner感觉不是很必要呢…………而且不用spinner就可以在00:19:175 - 补个note了让节奏感觉更完整一点～ 转盘的加分声音咱感觉和原曲很搭的
2. 00:33:658 (4) - 感觉应该和前面一样是结束在后面白线上的吧？ 这边有个新加进来的鼓声，就跟上去了
3. 00:42:451 (4) - 这里我觉得用1/2长度的折返要比3/4的舒服很多～ 嗯 改了
4. 01:57:193 (5,6) - 我的话会把这里做成一个折返再加一个note在downbeat上来突出那个鼓点的重音～ 嘛 上一个mod还说咱这个难度全是滑条很无聊请remap 貌似你都没注意到，算了 不remap了（死
5. 02:27:710 (2) - 不是很确认啦但是我记得有rules说slider的tick point不能被完全遮挡（除了insane） 嘛 真有这种奇葩规则咱等XAT来挑了..XD

[Hard]

1. 00:14:650 - 虽然不太明白你的目的但是我觉得这里既然音乐没有变化的话，为什么要留空档呢…… 硬要说目的的话就是咱感觉这样留白比较好 前面每小节都有钢琴的音 咱只是想在这边换条音轨跟上去
2. 00:19:046 (2) - 听节奏的话这个应该是向前移动到蓝线，然后00:19:693 - 补note。而且你前后似乎也确实都是这么做的～ 咱真的想方设法跟了很多音轨 因为一开始找人去test的时候大家都说单调（嘛 loop什么的咱也没办法）可能初见显得比较乱吧 不过这边两个map思路都没问题的情况下咱表示懒了
3. 00:22:538 (6) - 考虑删掉？ 嘛 这个梗（抄你的来的XD）表示咱很喜欢用
4. 00:23:184 (2) - 同样是建议向前移动到蓝线，然后空出来的白线补note
5. 00:26:288 (7) - 考虑做成note在白线上？因为蓝线那里似乎并没有节奏呢…… 嘛 有鼓点啊..
6. 00:49:951 (2) - 考虑减少一个折返，然后在后面红线补个note？ 折返太多确实有点奇怪 咱把它拆成两个了
7. 00:50:598 (1) - tricky spinner.....
8. 01:23:572 (4) - 这里给一个纯属个人口味的节奏建议～～～ 嘛 这里本来也是map掉的 但是自己test的时候觉得这边连同后面一直没有小的break打起来很纠结所以改成这样了- - 后面一个提出来的break也是为了适应这边这个新加的
   
9. 01:25:382 - 和01:26:675 - 的空档有一点点不舒服……
10. 01:41:805 (2) - 这里有可能会被读成1/2的note吧。。。 嘛 既然提出来了 稍微动了一点XD（找人test还没在这种问题上出现读图问题呢（骄傲状）
11. 03:22:796 (1) - 我觉得静音收尾要比whistle好一点？也是

差不多就这样啦～～好图好曲果断star之～～加油的说！

好球 谢支持~
另外感谢angelfix同学

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From modding queue

[General]
make your grid level into 4 and make your note placement more precisely. actually i seldom use grid snap

[Easy]
00:00:296 - how about moving your spinners to this point and extend it till 00:02:106 ok and make the hard to be the same
00:02:624 - adding a note won't be a bad idea emm, i used to think it's too quick, but i test it in AImod and find it to be ok, so changed

[Hard]
01:29:003 (1) - delete NC fixed
00:14:520 (1) - how about making this part as two consecutive spinners like http://puu.sh/uR4U add a spinner and keep the circle
00:16:589 (1) - how bout shortening this a little so it'll end at 00:18:141 ok to me so not change
01:07:150 (6) - adding a note sounds fine imo. not change
01:07:150 - how about this spinner starts at 01:07:279 ? ^

edit: sorry for late kudosu, i must forgot

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. combo color 6和7有些在分辨上有些接近...交换下5 6?

1. 00:02:624 (1) - 手动添加new combo~
2. 00:04:175 (2) - 这里开始的tick音效没看懂~我觉得还不如在长白线加whitsle要正常的多.
3. 00:41:417 (3,4) - 这里的节奏有些古怪，尝试下下面2种里的一种？
   
4. 03:00:038 (1,2) - 这里spacing加大到1.25左右,和前面的间距保持一致.(因为有变速绿线所以1.0的DS实际上会小,新人可能会误读为1/4节奏)

1. 00:00:555 (1) - spinner开始位置和normal最好统一下.
2. 00:07:150 (4,5) - 似乎有些突然o o
3. 00:27:451 (2,3) - 和4,5的间距保持统一吧?
4. 00:42:063 (3,4,5) - 3,4的间距并不算问题,但和5在一起就容易造成误读..建议增大4,5的间距o o
5. 00:51:632 (1) - 手动new combo.
6. 00:59:779 (7,1) - 唔,把7挪到(232,136)吧?
7. 02:02:494 (3,4) - 缩小点间距?......>.>
8. 02:45:813 (4) - New combo for consistency?

JoJo wrote:

hello 香蕉君 > </
可以提前预约个m4m么:D (炸 噗 只要不嫌弃咱的mod
喜欢这曲子所以来了 =w= 不算full mod只是些建议啥的 miao~

1. Purple - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to follow this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

[General]

1. combo color 6和7有些在分辨上有些接近...交换下5 6?

换了

[Normal]

1. 00:02:624 (1) - 手动添加new combo~ 这么没意义的unrankable 谁定的加了
2. 00:04:175 (2) - 这里开始的tick音效没看懂~我觉得还不如在长白线加whitsle要正常的多. hard先做的 这边是想保持一致 不过音量好像大了点- - 改了音量
3. 00:41:417 (3,4) - 这里的节奏有些古怪，尝试下下面2种里的一种？ 嗯 第二种
   
4. 03:00:038 (1,2) - 这里spacing加大到1.25左右,和前面的间距保持一致.(因为有变速绿线所以1.0的DS实际上会小,新人可能会误读为1/4节奏) 噗 漏了- -（话说哪个新人这么厉害能读出1/4..）

[Hard]

1. 00:00:555 (1) - spinner开始位置和normal最好统一下. fixed
2. 00:07:150 (4,5) - 似乎有些突然o o 嘛 因为这首歌相同的节奏loop了很多次 所以间距看edit稍微有点奇怪的地方打起来应该没什么问题 实际上我给三个#10000左右的同学test都没有读图上的问题 另外即使有这些跳好多人打完还说有点单调- - 所以关于读图上的pattern问题基本都turn down了- -
3. 00:27:451 (2,3) - 和4,5的间距保持统一吧? 前面也有人提- - 嘛 我感觉一上来就二连间距很大会不好打才把第一个的间距缩小的 看上去也没啥问题我就等mat提好了= =
4. 00:42:063 (3,4,5) - 3,4的间距并不算问题,但和5在一起就容易造成误读..建议增大4,5的间距o o miao
5. 00:51:632 (1) - 手动new combo. 貌似用错成蓝色了的样子fixed
6. 00:59:779 (7,1) - 唔,把7挪到(232,136)吧? 这个是.. 因为后面的(1)还有个clap 又在重音上 所以咱感觉用一样的间距不合适 前面又跳了 就改成缩小间距了
7. 02:02:494 (3,4) - 缩小点间距?......>.> miao
8. 02:45:813 (4) - New combo for consistency?

这边加combo好纠结的 (3)nc和后面一致 (4)nc和前面一致..纠结了好久就放这里过渡了

就这样了~~ 谢mod~
Good luck > </

Xakyrie wrote:

hello there, sorry for taking so long! It's been quite a rough month u.u same to me though XD
here's the mod from my queue :3

All of the following suggestions are made based on the most recent update for each colour-coded section. If a section is excluded from one diff but included in another, this is because there are no problems or suggestions to be made and therefore is removed.
[General]

1. combo colours 6 and 7 look almost identical. even without looking through each combo colour individually, it was hard to tell the difference. either remove one of them or adjust the shade. removed 7
2. keep the breaks consistent maybe? just a suggestion. keeped for i think longer break for normal is ok

[Normal]
[notice]

• Song Setup
  (Suggestions for appropriate difficulty based on the song to offer more fluent and comfortable playing.)
  

1. Circle Size +1? keeped this two, if i make the CS bigger then i need more work to worry about the overlap, and this diff. has no circle, so i think OD5 is not too hard, you know it is easier to get a 300 on a slider
2. OD -1?

Issue/unrankable stuff
(Problems that must be fixed because of its unrankability, something you should take care of.)

1. 01:33:141 (1) - no. just, no. please do not change the slider velocity in the middle of the song where it isn't indicated or called for. it might not be totally unrankable, however it is completely uncalled for and it definitely needs to be changed because it will confuse beginner players. Adjust it so it's x1.00 again, and make sure you use slider velocity changes sparingly. fix the slider lengths once you change it after this. oops.. sv change here is indeed confusing.. so i changed the end time of the 0.75* section
2. 02:52:796 (2) - very questionable. it's close to the lifebar, try moving it around so it's not as close. two grids down

thanks for your mod, and i will become busy this days so i may check other things latter

GhostFinal wrote:

路过支持个

GhostFinal wrote:

路过支持个

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Make same combo colors every diff. fixed


[Hard]
00:00:296 (1) - Add finish
01:05:469 (2) - Change its shape to make some pattern? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/360046
03:22:796 (1) - Fade out


[Normal]
03:22:796 (1) - Fade out

oh~ all the suggestions are took, thanks for your mod

There was no major issue. Try to find a MAT? ok i'll try
Good luck! thanks again~

Leorda wrote:

Yo Yo~


[Normal]
* No circle?! This is MASTERPIECE!!!! (lol, just kidding)

00:42:193 (4) - Add whistle at head slider? added
00:47:624 (1) - Maybe extend to white tick and add clap at tail slider is better, IMO i think it was ok so i'll keep it
02:21:762 (4) - The tail slider is almost offscreen fixed
02:27:710 (2) - The sliderpath is overlapped by hitbursts, so beginners are unable to read them (sometimes, beginners are slowly to read) i will keep it for now, anyway, i will change it if anyone else point it out


[Hard]
* AR -1? AR8 is ok to me so keeped

00:34:434 (4) - Add clap at tail slider? nice idea and added
00:46:072 (2) - Why finish at tail slider? i've forgot, so i removed it
01:15:813 (4) - Move 2 grid right for allign the pattern? (nazi) ok
01:41:805 (2) - I think it would be hurt if this overlapped by sliderpath.... changed
01:54:865 (5) - This distance should be 1,10x like others spacing. Maybe it's just me? i think it's ok to use 1.35* here, for they are still overlapped and will be not too hard to read


Good luck!!

angelfix wrote:

这个坚决不能坑掉啊

qkenan wrote:

好好听！做的也很好！

以我的渣渣水平mod不能

那就先射个星啦~

加油！

angelfix wrote:

我又来督促巨懒的banana了，希望能催出你的第一张rank

angelfix wrote:

我又来督促巨懒的banana了，希望能催出你的第一张rank

Athena Tennos wrote:

angelfix wrote:

我又来督促巨懒的banana了，希望能催出你的第一张rank

qkenan wrote:

我也来督促巨懒的banana了，希望能催出你的第二张rank

1. Remove "ghost" from the tags. It's already in the title, so you can search it up using the word ghost and still find it without the tag.

1. 00:21:244 (3) - Curve this slider in the opposite direction like this. It flows better in my opinion because now (2) curves upward nicely into (3).
2. 00:35:210 (1) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider. It's not in the music, and there's already a slidertick clap where it should be.
3. 00:39:348 (1) - ^
4. 00:45:555 (3,4) - I don't like how these sliders overlap. It looks sloppy in my opinion.
5. 00:46:589 (4) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider for the same reason as stated above.
6. 00:59:003 (4) - ^
7. 01:44:520 (3) - Re-arrange this slider to be something like this. It looks neater than what you currently have.
8. 02:12:451 (4) - This looks sloppy and lazily made. I would just make it a simple one node slider.
9. 02:18:658 (1) - There should be a whistle at the beginning of this slider to follow the music and your hitsound pattern.
10. 02:50:727 (3) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider.
11. 02:51:762 (1) - Sloppy slider.

1. 00:22:538 (6,1) - This pattern looks odd and also doesn't flow very well. To fix both of these problems, I would do something like this with both of these sliders.
2. 00:45:296 (5,1) - Same as above.
3. 00:47:882 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:50:210 (3) - There should be a clap at the beginning of this slider. You can hear it clearly in the music.
5. 00:56:417 (2) - ^
6. 01:07:150 (1,1) - Delete the slider after the spinner and extend the spinner all the way to the long white tick. It feels awkward to play a short slider after a spinner right before a break.
7. 01:35:469 (2,3) - This pattern again..
8. 02:08:055 (8,1) - ^
9. 02:51:244 (6) - There should be a clap at the beginning of this slider.

Jacob wrote:

[General]

1. Remove "ghost" from the tags. It's already in the title, so you can search it up using the word ghost and still find it without the tag. fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:21:244 (3) - Curve this slider in the opposite direction like this. It flows better in my opinion because now (2) curves upward nicely into (3). fixed, and checked all issues on sliders or patterns and all fixed
2. 00:35:210 (1) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider. It's not in the music, and there's already a slidertick clap where it should be. also all fixed, and did a self check afterwards
3. 00:39:348 (1) - ^
4. 00:45:555 (3,4) - I don't like how these sliders overlap. It looks sloppy in my opinion. ops, though changed, I think they are not that bad...
5. 00:46:589 (4) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider for the same reason as stated above.
6. 00:59:003 (4) - ^
7. 01:44:520 (3) - Re-arrange this slider to be something like this. It looks neater than what you currently have.
8. 02:12:451 (4) - This looks sloppy and lazily made. I would just make it a simple one node slider.
9. 02:18:658 (1) - There should be a whistle at the beginning of this slider to follow the music and your hitsound pattern. added
10. 02:50:727 (3) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider.
11. 02:51:762 (1) - Sloppy slider.

In my opinion, this difficulty looks like it was lazily made because it's all sliders and all of the sliders look exactly the same. I'm sure you could've improved the sliders a bit. However, this does flow nicely and has good hitsounds.
acturally this difficulty had circles, and then I managed to remove them all. for I made a map with no more than ten circles and start to think it will be nice to have none.. and I promise not to make any map without a circle, ever.

[Hard]

1. 00:22:538 (6,1) - This pattern looks odd and also doesn't flow very well. To fix both of these problems, I would do something like this with both of these sliders. well, it did looks a bit odd, but it flows exactly the way to me, especially 00:45:296 (5), the piano start, and go up, and back to the original pitch. in this pattern, start with the slider end, go up to leave the slider, and back to the slider head. so I prefer keep them.
2. 00:45:296 (5,1) - Same as above.
3. 00:47:882 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:50:210 (3) - There should be a clap at the beginning of this slider. You can hear it clearly in the music. checked them and all added
5. 00:56:417 (2) - ^
6. 01:07:150 (1,1) - Delete the slider after the spinner and extend the spinner all the way to the long white tick. It feels awkward to play a short slider after a spinner right before a break. it is in the consistancy with 00:51:632 (1), it may be strange to play this kind of notes, but the music is that, and I keep it.
7. 01:35:469 (2,3) - This pattern again..
8. 02:08:055 (8,1) - ^
9. 02:51:244 (6) - There should be a clap at the beginning of this slider.

This difficulty looks okay, but there's missing claps and whistles scattered throughout the map. Look through this difficulty again and try to fix missing hitsounds where they should be.
I think you found all missed ones, (actually I'm not good at catching missed hitsound...)after selfcheck..

1. 01:44:520 (3) - Clap shouldn't be on the reverse of this slider.
2. 02:00:038 (3) - There should be a whistle on the beginning of this slider.
3. 02:01:072 (4) - Whistle on the reverse of this slider.
4. 02:08:313 (3,4) - Rotating (4) to look like this will make this pattern look much neater.
5. 02:26:158 (5) - There should be a whistle on the beginning of this slider.
6. 02:57:969 (3) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider.
7. 03:00:813 (2) - This slider shouldn't be slowed down. Even though it's near the end of main melody, the music doesn't really call for it.

1. 00:27:451 (2,3) - These are slightly too close together, making them look out of the ordinary. Space them farther away according to distance snap.
2. 00:46:072 (2) - Should be a whistle at the end of this slider.
3. 00:46:589 (3) - Why didn't you use a slidertick clap for this?
4. 00:59:779 (7,1) - Should be a whistle on this circle and the start of the slider.
5. 01:38:313 (3) - Remove the clap from the repeat of this slider and add a slidertick clap after the repeat.
6. 01:47:106 (5,6,1) - This looks akward because it's overlapping the combo multiplier.
7. 01:56:417 (2) - There should be a clap at the beginning of this slider.
8. 02:18:658 (1) - Whistle at the beginning of this slider.
9. 02:48:917 (3) - ^
10. 02:50:727 (4,5,6) - Use distance snap for this stream. It seems odd to suddenly increase the stream spacing.
11. 02:51:762 (7) - Whistle on this note.
12. 02:54:348 (1) - Whistle at the end of this slider.
13. 02:59:520 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this stream symmetrical, like this (paste the code into the .osu file):
    Stream picture and code

    

    140,316,179520,1,8,0:0:0
    184,304,179650,1,0,0:0:0
    220,272,179779,1,0,0:0:0
    252,304,179908,1,0,0:0:0
    296,316,180038,1,2,0:0:0

14. 03:00:813 (3) - Should be whistles on the beginning and end of this slider.
15. 03:14:520 (3,4) - These sliders looks cluttered in my opinion. I would move (4) slightly farther away like this.

Jacob wrote:

Rechecking (mainly for hitsound consistency). Don't give me kudosu.

[Normal]

1. 01:44:520 (3) - Clap shouldn't be on the reverse of this slider.
2. 02:00:038 (3) - There should be a whistle on the beginning of this slider.
3. 02:01:072 (4) - Whistle on the reverse of this slider.
4. 02:08:313 (3,4) - Rotating (4) to look like this will make this pattern look much neater.
5. 02:26:158 (5) - There should be a whistle on the beginning of this slider.
6. 02:57:969 (3) - Remove the clap from the reverse of this slider.
7. 03:00:813 (2) - This slider shouldn't be slowed down. Even though it's near the end of main melody, the music doesn't really call for it.

[Hard]

1. 00:27:451 (2,3) - These are slightly too close together, making them look out of the ordinary. Space them farther away according to distance snap.
2. 00:46:072 (2) - Should be a whistle at the end of this slider.
3. 00:46:589 (3) - Why didn't you use a slidertick clap for this?
4. 00:59:779 (7,1) - Should be a whistle on this circle and the start of the slider. the whistle sound is at 00:59:650, and is 1/4 earlier than (7)
5. 01:38:313 (3) - Remove the clap from the repeat of this slider and add a slidertick clap after the repeat.
6. 01:47:106 (5,6,1) - This looks akward because it's overlapping the combo multiplier.
7. 01:56:417 (2) - There should be a clap at the beginning of this slider.
8. 02:18:658 (1) - Whistle at the beginning of this slider.
9. 02:48:917 (3) - ^
10. 02:50:727 (4,5,6) - Use distance snap for this stream. It seems odd to suddenly increase the stream spacing.
11. 02:51:762 (7) - Whistle on this note.
12. 02:54:348 (1) - Whistle at the end of this slider.
13. 02:59:520 (7,8,9,10,11) - Make this stream symmetrical, like this (paste the code into the .osu file):
    Stream picture and code

    

    140,316,179520,1,8,0:0:0
    184,304,179650,1,0,0:0:0
    220,272,179779,1,0,0:0:0
    252,304,179908,1,0,0:0:0
    296,316,180038,1,2,0:0:0

14. 03:00:813 (3) - Should be whistles on the beginning and end of this slider.
15. 03:14:520 (3,4) - These sliders looks cluttered in my opinion. I would move (4) slightly farther away like this. I can't get the image successfully, so I can only do change according to your words, hope it will be fine.

Your mapping style it a bit cluttered in my opinion. However, both difficulties usually flow pretty well and are fun to play, and hitbursts don't interfere too much either. Call me back.