wmfchris wrote:

[Controllable]
AR8 would be enough as observed...?if it must be fixed, i will do sorry
00:40:584 (2,3) - quite a sudden jump for me... try http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329144 ok
00:40:884 (1,2) - it'll also look better if you rotate them 180 degrees pointing upwards to reduce overlappingok
01:45:984 (3,4,1) - such arrangement is not recommended as they covered (1) pretty much.ok
01:50:484 (1,2,3,4,5) - again there's some sort of better placement can be done here, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329148 if you want to make (1,2) on the symmetrical position ok
02:58:434 - the accent is here instead of 1/4 beat eariler so you can make the first slider a 3/4 beat ones instead of the second sliderok
03:01:584 - why an easier diff (Harmony) has triplet but a harder difficulty don't have?because i don't need it

don't have much to complain (except the BG too moe and it distracts me to mod) but the difficulty spread is a bit too hard. You may need to make [controllable] and [harmony] slightly easier. Other than that, the map sounds fine.
If I changed AR8 and it will be more easier, I try to do. But now I don't feel that.

wmfchris wrote:

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[Uncontrollable]
00:16:434 (6) - [Nazi] it curves around (5) perfectly when 1 grid left lv4 ok
00:30:684 (5,6,7) - the flow of these notes can be improved, suggested placement: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/328699 nice placement
00:32:484 (3) - remove the clap? The normal-hit seems to fit the vocal better ok
01:08:484 (3,4) - stack properly ok
01:52:284 (7) - NC here like the coming streams (because the melody is similar to the coming ones) ok
01:55:584 (8,9) - imo the music don't really need an acceleration here not acceleration here.....

[Harmony]
02:43:884 (1,1) - they can be stacked properly, move (3) to make the entire placement symmetrical too ok

don't have much to complain (except the BG too moe and it distracts me to mod) but the difficulty spread is a bit too hard. You may need to make [controllable] and [harmony] slightly easier. Other than that, the map sounds fine. [harmony] was easy because deleted range note part

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Timing is = =||||||||, well, offset +16 (700)
02:27:384 - at this point, use a very low volume here may create a effect fits the music (hard to describe), lower to 30% and have a try?ok I tryed.
[Controllable]
...AR-1? leave an easier Insane for players like me. ok
01:07:734 (3) - just use 2 circles here?changed
02:07:884 (1) - the volume of those soft hitsounds seems a bit high, try 50%~60% maybeI used 55%
great.<333

NatsumeRin wrote:

[General]
Timing is = =||||||||, well, offset +16 (700) fixed
02:27:384 - at this point, use a very low volume here may create a effect fits the music (hard to describe), lower to 30% and have a try? very nice idea! All diff fixed

[Puppet]
00:05:334 (4,1) - just stack them? in this diff it mostly follows 1/1 (and its spacing), 1/2 like this seems a bit crowded. ok
01:23:784 - add a note? nope

[Harmony]
00:39:084 (1) - http://puu.sh/AdgN this will follows the music better imo (check the place of sliders.) I thought too. fixed
00:45:684 (2,3) - farther a bit to make it look nicer? http://puu.sh/Adhl ok
00:51:084 (1,2,3,4) - this part is a bit ugly imo.. = =||| I'm sorry. it was rough. re-placement
01:17:484 (1) - same as 00:39:084 (1) fixed
01:45:984 (7) - not a big deal but still prefer to change the direction a bit to make the reverse arrow more obvious (my hit300 is a little bigger..?) ok reverse arrow is down

[Uncontrollable]
00:32:934 (1) - silence the end? good idea
00:43:434 - add a note? (normal hitsound) add note
01:11:334 (1) - silence the end? fixed
01:21:834 - add a note? add note
02:05:634 (1) - feels a bit strange in this part. the heavy sound is quite obvious, but all your sliders here start from a red line, it feels not so good to me...(just make 02:05:334 (7) a circle-circle-slider 1/4 triple then start this part?) fixed

cRyo[iceeicee] wrote:

bubbled YAY
[Uncontrollable]
but i think this note 02:03:925 (3) - should be here 02:04:000 (or make triplet) ^^ sorry no change. guitar follow this part

Garven wrote:

<3 <3

[General]
Tick rate 2 fits this song best sorry no fixed.Tick rate 2 is a little noisy imo...

[Harmony]
00:39:100 (1) - This was kind of hard to see under the hitburst from 00:38:050 (1) - fixed
03:01:450 (1) - A little soon after a spinner for a Hard. Ending the spinner at 03:01:150 - goes with the guitar, if anything. fixed

[Controllable]
01:29:200 (4) - This is covered by a hitburst from 01:28:000 (4) - fixed

Sexy.