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From my Q

Easy
  1. 00:03:437 (2) - add finish all the 3 parts or at least on head and arrow, like these 00:08:923 (2,3) -
  2. 00:19:209 (4,1) - switch NC?
  3. 00:21:266 - finish
  4. 00:32:237 (3,1) - follow other combo, you should NC at '3' and remove NC at '1' and NC at 00:34:980 (2) - as well
  5. 00:39:095 (3) - end point 00:39:780 - is more fit with me
  6. 00:43:209 (1) - NC?
  7. 00:48:695 (3) - NC
  8. 00:50:066 (4,5) - really strange, can you find other way? or at least finish at 00:50:066 (4) - to flow your finish sound pattern
  9. 00:53:495 (3) - 1grid down to be symmetry with 00:52:809 (2) -
  10. 00:54:009 (1) - finish with low volume
  11. 00:55:895 (1) - if i were you, i would delete it and add a circle at 00:56:237 - and start a slider from 00:56:752 -
  12. 01:06:523 (2,3) - same as 00:50:066 (4,5) -. or at least NC at 01:09:266 (4) -
  13. 01:25:037 - add a circle here
  14. 01:29:837 (1) - finish
Normal
  1. 00:28:809 (6,7) - whistle at 6 and remove whistle from 7?
  2. 00:39:780 (6,1) - switch NC, this combo seems start from 00:39:780 (6) -
  3. 00:45:095 (1,2) - ^
  4. 00:48:009 (1,2) - ^
  5. 01:05:152 (1) - end point 01:07:209 - ?
Hard
  1. 00:16:980 (4,1) - follow 00:12:695 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - , you should NC at 00:16:980 (4) - and remove NC from 00:17:837 (1) -
  2. 00:19:723 (5) - same reason, NC
  3. 00:54:009 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - a little confusing.. well..
Insane
  1. 00:09:609 (1) - you don't need to NC it
  2. 00:54:866 (4,5,6,1) - copy/paste 00:54:180 (1,2,3) - from 00:54:866 - , and add a circle at 00:55:723 -
  3. 01:03:609 (1) - considering player's movement, ctrl+h will be soft
  4. 01:28:895 (7) - delete it, pretty annoying sound
that's all i think
Laurier
kosiga
Sure
Hello there :D


[Insane]
00:18:352 (5) - NC. There is no reason to change NCing pattern at this time. Your NCing patterns were 00:12:866 (1,2,3) and 00:15:609 (1,2,3)
00:21:095 (5) - NC
00:46:294 (4) - Add finish. But lower volume than 00:45:952 (3)
00:51:780 (2) - Add finish


[Hard]
00:17:837 (1) - Remove NC
00:45:952 (1) - Try to add finish to tail. But lower volume than head.
00:50:580 (6) - Add finishes
01:18:180 (7,1,2) - Maybe this way is better? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/317837


[Normal]
00:46:295 (3) - Add finish. But lower volume than 00:45:952 (2)


[Easy]
AR -1?
00:13:037 (1,2) - You'd better delete 2 and extend 1's length to 00:14:237.
00:15:780 (1,2) - Same suggestion with above
00:19:895 (1) - Try to make something other rhythm. It should start from 00:19:723, but it will not fit to music at reverse arrow and end.
00:22:637 (3) - Start from 00:22:466
00:50:409 (3) - Add finish to reverse arrow
01:06:866 (2) - ^
01:25:723 (1) - Move to 01:25:552
01:27:095 (1) - Shorten its length to 01:28:295. And add finish to tail.
01:29:837 (1) - Add finish

Easy diff doesn't mean that most of notes should be put on the white bar.


Good luck ;D
Leorda
Hello there

[Easy]
00:39:095 (3) - Add clap at tail slider?
00:50:409 (3) - Add finish at repeating slider?
00:58:295 (2) - Move to previous red tick for following vocal


[Normal]
* AR +1 or +2?

00:11:666 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for beginners


[Insane]
00:44:580 (5) - New combo? Like 00:39:094 (1)?
01:25:380 (3,4) - If you do this, some players will hard to see which is the beginning and the end. You should unstack it for this one


Good luck~
kosiga

ykcarrot wrote:

[Normal]
00:46:295 (3) - Add finish. But lower volume than 00:45:952 (2) Certainly there are sound here. but sound strange to me here if i put :(

Leorda wrote:

[Normal]
* AR +1 or +2? AR+1 :D
00:11:666 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Sometimes, beginners are slowly to read object, so this possibly hidden for beginners
http://puu.sh/v7XF http://puu.sh/v7Xr This is a problem o.o? The starting point of the slider is visible from the first. and hitburst disappears before push a slider. I make it in consideration of this :D
thank you~ :oops:
Mixagji
wmfchris
Taiko mod as requested.

[tTaiko]
- tTaiko? ttaiko? I guess you used the second one for quite a number of times before.

00:07:723 - feeling that it's a bit empty here - (comparing with the music there's nothing after but you streamed there, so there should be some sort of 1/2 notes here imo) ddk kkd d k is a possible solution
00:46:552 - You may consider to add one here since most of the simliar sentence starts with duplets.
00:47:837 - ^ it's just a bit odd to use consecutive sentences starting with duplets and I feel like these two phrases can be connected.
01:19:723 - kdd may not fits with a relatively higher vocal note. Try ddk

In overall:
- Finishes: In most of the time you placed finish on notes with chamber sound in the music but some aren't like 00:50:580 - . In that case there're some more notes that worth finishing like 00:11:837 - , etc.
- Slider: As usual it's not recommended in slow/soft/quiet section because it represents 1/4 drumroll freestyle which do not fit with the feeling of music.
- Quite nice, but the flow can be made in a smoother way :3
Laurier
Tenshi-nyan
Heya. Didn't mod in a while, so this may suck.

General
How about you lower the quality of the JPEG pics a bit to save some space in the .osz ? You could save 1MB if done correctly.
I recommend you getting a custom hitfinish - the default one sounds like crap.

Insane
00:45:094 (3) - The finish is a bit too quiet
01:07:552 (3) - add clap
01:08:580 (4,5,6) - I don't like this back'n forth combo. Maybe move (6) somewhere else?
01:23:666 (7) - remove clap
01:29:837 (1) - how about you lower the volume for the finish near the end?

tTaiko
Is the name supposed to be like this? Looks weird.

Hard
Is this a guest diff or why is the hitsounding different from Insane?

00:11:666 (1,2,3,4) - remove whistles, add claps
00:12:695 (1,2,3) - add claps
00:24:009 - starting here, lower volume by 20%
00:39:094 (1) - feels bad, maybe remove and replace by simple 1/2 slider
00:48:009 (1) - bad antijump right here, confused me a bit.
00:53:494 (7,1,2,3) - add a bunch of claps here.
01:29:837 (1) - how about you lower the volume for the finish near the end?

Normal
00:02:150 - what's with this green line?
00:21:266 (1) - I'd put a spinner here instead.
00:23:994 - lower volume, 20%
00:56:752 - lower volume 10%, the same goes for all following parts
01:29:837 (1) - how about you lower the volume for the finish near the end?

Easy
I trust this is fine...
Shohei Ohtani
Kawaii.

Overall:
Tick Rate 2?

Insane:
:D

Hard:
00:41:923 (4,5) - These two notes sound forced to me, mostly because count 2 is blank, so there's build-up for nothing ;~;
00:53:494 (7) - Add clap on end of slider
00:54:180 (2) - ^
00:54:866 (1) - Add clap on full slider
01:08:923 (4) - Remove whistle, add clap

Normal:
Sugoi

Easy:
00:13:037 (1) - Add clap on end of slider
00:15:780 (1) - ^
00:17:837 (3) - Add clap on repeat
00:58:295 (2) - Add clap on end of slider
01:01:037 (3,4) - ^
01:04:809 (3) - Add clap
01:06:866 (2) - Add clap on beginning of slider
01:09:952 (4) - Add clap on end of slider
01:10:637 (1) - ^
01:12:009 (2) - Add clap on repeat
01:14:752 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
01:15:437 (4) - Add clap on repeat
01:18:180 (3) - Add clap on end of slider
01:18:866 (1) - ^
01:26:409 (2) - ^
01:29:495 (3) - Add clap

Kawaii.
those
@sp3: used the last three suggestions, thanks :3

wmfchris wrote:

[tTaiko]
00:07:723 - feeling that it's a bit empty here - (comparing with the music there's nothing after but you streamed there, so there should be some sort of 1/2 notes here imo) ddk kkd d k is a possible solution Would it make more sense if 00:07:552 (5) - was D? 00:07:895 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - is being mapped to the light hihat.
00:46:552 - You may consider to add one here since most of the simliar sentence starts with duplets.
00:47:837 - ^ it's just a bit odd to use consecutive sentences starting with duplets and I feel like these two phrases can be connected.
01:19:723 - kdd may not fits with a relatively higher vocal note. Try ddk Done these^

In overall:
- Finishes: In most of the time you placed finish on notes with chamber sound in the music but some aren't like 00:50:580 - . In that case there're some more notes that worth finishing like 00:11:837 - , etc.
- Slider: As usual it's not recommended in slow/soft/quiet section because it represents 1/4 drumroll freestyle which do not fit with the feeling of music. It was suggested I "do it how MMzz does it". Is a volume change necessary?
- Quite nice, but the flow can be made in a smoother way :3
Thanks for the mod :3
DJPop
- AR shouldn't be below OD more than 1, if you set AR8, OD should be 7 or 8


~Easy~
00:45:266 (1) - should be on left red tick, current position doesn't fit
00:46:637 (1) - ^
00:46:980 (2) - remove finish at the end

~Normal~
Fine

~Hard~
01:08:923 (4) - add clap

~tTaiko~
- Why tTaiko? =o

~Insane~
00:47:323 (1) - remove finish
00:51:780 (2) - add finish at start (I heard a cymbal here)
01:07:209 (1) - move to 212:320
01:07:552 (3) - move to 136:228
Topic Starter
Mythol

DJPop wrote:

- AR shouldn't be below OD more than 1, if you set AR8, OD should be 7 or 8 hm.. i dont see any diffs with higher od than ar o.o

~tTaiko~
- Why tTaiko? =o "those"Taiko = tTaiko

~Insane~
00:47:323 (1) - remove finish ok
00:51:780 (2) - add finish at start (I heard a cymbal here) yes, but i dont like finish here
01:07:209 (1) - move to 212:320 ok
01:07:552 (3) - move to 136:228 its already there.. :/
ty!
Mixagji
Laurier
Topic Starter
Mythol
All diffs updated~
DJPop

Mythol wrote:

- AR shouldn't be below OD more than 1, if you set AR8, OD should be 7 or 8
hm.. i dont see any diffs with higher od than ar o.o
I meant OD is too low :?

-_Easy - has AR 4 so set OD 3 or 4
Normal - has AR 5 so set OD 4 or 5
_ Hard - has AR 7 so set OD 6 or 7
Topic Starter
Mythol
All fixed ._.
DJPop
Bubble :D
Andrea
[Easy]

00:55:895 (1) - Too soon after spinner.

[tTaiko]

Overall Difficulty +1.


Hard is really nice, Insane feels like overmapped imo. Oh well, everything else seems good, let me know your thoughts and I'll rank!
Topic Starter
Mythol
I don't really see anywhere else the spinner could end from the song ><
I think its fine because it's pretty close to the center..
but taiko OD was originally 6 before bubble, so I don't mind changing it back :o
Suimya
Inb4 Andrea goes like this =w=

ok then, I guess everything looks good~ I think i can rank it now~

Ranked~
Andrea
After changing the spinner on Easy with a quick IRC Mod I can say that this map is now...

Ranked~
Topic Starter
Mythol
yay! :D
ty~~
kosiga
mythol :333
Suimya

osuplayer111 wrote:

After changing the spinner on Easy with a quick IRC Mod I can say that this map is now...

Ranked~
=3= gratz ~
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omedetou!!!
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you're getting better and better in mapping, i wanna see more from you. congratz on the rank ;)
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nice !
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this is I have been waiting so long ! good map ~

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