mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Easy:]

00:05:729 (1): A combo/ pattern with just a Note (Slider in this case) doesn't look fine Really. Following the Vocal I think that you can unify this note and the previous note making a good Comboing. In General, I suggest you to Remove this New Combo. Also in this Slider, listening the music make a good effect if you add a Clap at the beginning of this Slider The clap pattern is on the other white ticks, it would sound weird if I added on the other ones
00:07:408 (1): In this case make a good effect a Clap at the beginning of this Slider too. ^
00:26:708 (4): I can percive a Change in the Vocal and following your Combo patterns is better if you Add a New Combo in this Note and to reduce this Combo a bit more was already done by bakaplayer
00:41:813 (3): This Slider doesn't covered all the dimensions of the Vocal and Instrumental, the Slider Tick doesn't sound enough listening the Music. So, to follow better that you should Reduce this Slider by 1/1 (Add a Clap at the end of this Slider) and then add a Note in 00:42:653, also it's not a Hard pattern in this difficulty, really. Here is an Screenshoot to solve any question:

SPOILER

I think it's fine imo
00:56:918 (4): This note sounds empty, the Vocal needs an emphatisize here because the Vocal sounds high. For consistent I would add a Clap in this Note like I said before, it would sound weird if I added a clap there. added a whistle instead
00:59:885 (3): Sounds really empty the end of this Slider, I would try with a Clap here too, but the double Clap doesn't fit at all here, so, maybe you can add a Whistle or a Finish I usually add hitsounds from what I can hear. I don't think a finish, not a whistle would fit there
01:06:569 (3): (^) ^
01:24:191 (4): There is nothing necesary in the music to have a Note with Clap here. And especially looking that it's an Easy difficulty, Would be better if you remove this Note. It's better to New Players at the hour to follow the Rhythm it would kill the flow
01:53:352 (1,3): Well, This overlapped is aesthetic, for this reason looks bad you should have to change the position of this Sliders. Hmm... Maybe you can move (3) to x:0 y:76 it wont show up until the end of the previous slider. and in play mode it get snaked and I like that (if you have it enabled, and you should have it on)
01:57:338 (4): Following the Vocal, because it's the higher thing that appear in this section, this Slider is not following the music properly. Sounds better if you reduce the lenght of this Slider by 1/2 (Should finish in Red Tick, 01:57:967) nah, reducing it to 1/2 makes it harder and it will be the only place too which has a note on a 1/2
02:07:408 (4): Do you Really think that this Should be a Slider with a Repetition? The Vocal change in the middle, so this can't be a unify pattern. If you want a better Rhythm here, you should rearrange this pattern (especially the Spacing between Notes). I think that adding notes is the best way I agree
02:39:296 (2): At the end of this Slider sounds a bit empty comparing with the music. I think that you can fix that adding a Whistle at the end having a whistle there while having one on the next slider makes it sound abit weird imo

- Wait!! Saten mapping an Easy!? The Weirdest thing ever

1. 2373 - SB\lrc\A-3.png looks awkward just appearing from the middle of the screen, given that A-1.png and A-2.png fly in from outside the screen.
2. 24191 - SB\lrc\C-5.png would be better if you used "楽しい" instead of what you have. Also, don't add unnecessary spaces between the characters.
3. 29226 - SB\lrc\C-6.png would be better if you removed the brackets.
4. 71184 - SB\lrc\E-5.png should read "chaos！chaos！I wanna chaos！"
5. 77897 - SB\lrc\E-7.png should read "chaos！chaos！うるせぇなchaos！"
6. 86289 - You shouldn't be using the same sequence for SB\lrc\A-3.png, since A-1.png and A-2.png have a different sequence.
7. 108107 - SB\lrc\F-5.png would be better if you didn't add unnecessary spaces between the characters.
8. 113142 - Like C-6.png, remove the brackets.
9. 141674 - SB\lrc\H-1.png should read "経済なんて危険なんだ".
10. 165170 - SB\lrc\H-8.png has unnecessary dots between おしまい.

those wrote:

There it go. spboxer3, did you even check the SB?

[SB]

1. 2373 - SB\lrc\A-3.png looks awkward just appearing from the middle of the screen, given that A-1.png and A-2.png fly in from outside the screen. added a short fade-in and fade-out :3
2. 24191 - SB\lrc\C-5.png would be better if you used "楽しい" instead of what you have. Also, don't add unnecessary spaces between the characters. it's following the rhythm of the special lyric so i wanna keep it :3
3. 29226 - SB\lrc\C-6.png would be better if you removed the brackets. OK
4. 71184 - SB\lrc\E-5.png should read "chaos！chaos！I wanna chaos！" OK
5. 77897 - SB\lrc\E-7.png should read "chaos！chaos！うるせぇなchaos！" OK
6. 86289 - You shouldn't be using the same sequence for SB\lrc\A-3.png, since A-1.png and A-2.png have a different sequence. e........why? we can say "uu--" or "nyaaa---" in different ways, but world is always dark, aren't it? 0 0
7. 108107 - SB\lrc\F-5.png would be better if you didn't add unnecessary spaces between the characters. it's following the rhythm of the special lyric so i wanna keep it too :3
8. 113142 - Like C-6.png, remove the brackets. OK
9. 141674 - SB\lrc\H-1.png should read "経済なんて危険なんだ". OK
10. 165170 - SB\lrc\H-8.png has unnecessary dots between おしまい. it's following the rhythm of the special lyric so i wanna keep it three(?) :3

kanpakyin wrote:

激萌

osuplayer111 wrote:

Wow, cRyo just showed me a great cover for this song.

osuplayer111 wrote:

Wow, cRyo just showed me a great cover for this song.

Saten wrote:

lots of love

That cover is amazing
brb, replacing old mp3 with this one