ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello

[General]

Idol Master Battle Theme ~Cheria~.mp3 < Change the bit rate to 192kbps.

[Easy] → Change name to "Normal" will be fit owo

AR+1 OD-1
01:19:979 (1) - Don't overlap
01:19:979 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Too Hard. 1/2 beat don't suitable Easy or normal.

[Hard]

Od-1 HP-1

That all

pimpG wrote:

nice map

General
mp3 bitrate is too high.. change for a 192 kbps

offset 585 ???? ...... 678 is totally outsync here

Inconsistency in PreviewTime: - [Hard] : 79908 - [Normal] : 79980

skin

Missing Skin Files

spinner-background.png
spinner-circle.png
spinner-metre.png
spinner-clear.png
spinner-spin.png
spinner-osu.png
scorebar-kidanger.png
scorebar-kidanger2.png

Skin Dimensions
approachcircle.png's dimensions must be exactly 128x128 (currently 130x130).

Unused Image Files

default-comma.png
default-dot.png
default-percent.png
default-x.png

normal

Spinner New Combo 00:48:325 (2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly.

hard

fine



everyting looks perfect... but i think the hitsounds seems a litle repetitive/simple... IMO

eg91022a71w wrote:

Random MOD

[General]
Tag - add "Dazzling World" doesn't relate to song

[Normal]

SPOILER

circle size +1
00:12:148 (1) - remove NC
00:13:031 (3) - NC
00:15:678 (1) - remove NC
00:17:001 (2) - NC
00:18:766 (1) - remove NC
00:20:531 (3) - NC
00:21:413 (1) - remove NC
00:37:295 (1) - remove NC
00:37:737 (2) - NC
00:43:030 (2) - too far from (1)
Break - It is too long. map here.
01:10:825 (1) - remove NC
01:12:148 (1) - remove NC
01:13:030 (3) - NC
01:29:795 (1) - remove NC
01:30:678 (3) - NC
01:32:001 (1) - remove NC
01:32:663 (2) - NC

[Hard]
Good MAP!
Break - It is too long. map here.

Mythol wrote:

Just a general mod.. since this map needs a lot of work.

[General]
I'm getting around +13 for offset, you should get some more checks on this. Don't forget to re-snap all timing points/notes.
Map in some or all of that break, its too big and doesn't really fit there.
The hard and normal should have a bigger circle size.. the current ones are way too small~ Fixed

[Normal]
You should stick to a set distance snap on the normal, since beginners can get confused over spacing changes. Fixing now

[Hard]
Don't be afraid to change spacing once in a while, since the map feels very linear.
Maybe include a few patterns also, and this map will look a lot better!
Until you find a style that fits you, I suggest taking a few ideas from other successful maps to start off, like slider designs/patterns/note placements etc.. Working on that

Good luck~
EDIT : You should remember to kd Philippines, he mentioned a lot of unrankable stuff in your song folder than needs to be fixed~

Tag - add "Dazzling World" doesn't relate to song

eg91022a71w wrote:

Tag - add "Dazzling World" doesn't relate to song

This song is the off-vocal of the music named Dazzling World from "THE iDOLM@STER Dearly Stars".

Jayel wrote:

Hey, from my queue.

[General]
Your comboburst images look a little bit bad... I suggest you to change it to another ones. Removed Them

[Normal]
00:48:338(2) - Put a new combo on this note so the previous spinner ends properly. Done
00:33:338(1,2,3) - These notes look a little bit awkward. Make them look more symmetrical. Done

[Hard]
00:39:514(4) - I think it is not really necessary to make slider like this one. I would like to make it in different shape. Done
01:12:823(7) - NC. Done
01:23:632(1) - Place the endpoint of this slider at (x:324 y:164) so that the slider would seem better. It Does

Nothing else.

OK, that's all.
Here's my guest diff as promised. Awesomeness

Hope you liked this image as bg.

Frostmourne wrote:

Hi , from my queue

Jayel's Easy
00:16:132 (3) - move to x:225 y:230 for better balance spacing between 00:16:573 (1) - and 00:15:690 (2) - Done
00:41:279 (1,2) - spacing Done
01:15:690 (2) - It looks good to add whistle at the end of this slider , it combines well with music Done

Normal
00:39:514 (3,1) - this is too short from previous note. the distance between these notes should be 0.8 same as the others Done
01:09:514 (3) - new combo , long combo is not good in this diff Done
01:33:558 (7) - finish at the end ? , feel empty here It does sound better with finish

Hard
00:39:073 (2) - move to x:168 y:256 , (2) is very near with (3) , make some confusion. I think moving to this point or new combo 00:39:514 (3) - are good Done
00:45:911 (3,4) - too far without any expression from the song , reduce it to default like the other Done
01:20:102 (1) - finish at the head Done

Idol Master Special
AR 7 or AR 8 , AR9 doesn't even fit with this song. Done
reduce HP drain to 7 or 6 , 8 is cruel for this lovely song Im sorry Done
00:12:648 (x) - add note here , sound is still going on to this point Done
00:23:899 (8) - move 1 grid left and 1 grid up , this note placed different from these 00:23:457 (4,5,6,7) - Done
01:29:634 (6) - really confusing , new combo here can relief this confusion. Done

Good Luck for ranking ~~~

4bpa wrote:

modding:

SPOILER

Like the map generally...
[J.'s Easy]
AR -> 2 Done
Good map .o.
[Normal]
Circle size -> 3? Done
00:55:838 (1) - Position. 196,368 is a better place. Done
01:20:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Hard jump for normal lvl. Stack each 2 together is a better idea ╮(╯▽╰)╭ Done
01:43:926 (6) - Position. 256,184. Done
[Hard] Going to remap this diff
Place notes a bit more separate? DS -> 0.9 or 1
00:27:161 (1) - DS error.
00:30:029 (5) - Slider shape trolololol
00:45:911 (3,4) - DS.
00:47:676 (1,2,3,4) - ^. Or even make it a jump?
00:49:220 (5,6,7,1,2,3) - ^
00:50:764 (4,5,6,7) - make it a star shape ☆?
[IMAS spec]
00:36:472 (4) - DS. Done
00:39:340 (3,4,5) - looks weird. make a jump? Done
01:17:281 (1) - (OK goooood I love it) Thank you
[Other things]
The combo abort sound is scary that made me fail >///< plze lower the volume

combo abort .........ooooohhh you mean the screams gotcha

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi ~ Mod from our q ~

Idol Master Special All Done

00:10:222 - add finish
00:27:428 - remove finish
00:38:457 - add finish
00:50:369 - add clap
00:51:251 (6) - ^
01:13:751 - add finish
01:20:369 - remove finish
01:20:810 - add finish
01:24:340 - ^
01:27:869 - ^
01:31:398 - ^
01:38:678 - ^
01:41:546 - remove finish
01:41:987 (1) - add finish
01:47:501 (6) - remove clap

Hard All Done

00:09:514 - add finish
00:37:749 - ^
01:13:043 - ^
01:37:749 (1) - ^
01:41:279 (1) - ^
01:44:808 - ^
01:47:896 - remove clap

Normal All Done

00:42:602 - remove finish
00:44:367 - ^
00:49:661 - ^
00:55:396 - add finish
01:13:043 - ^
01:14:808 - ^
01:20:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wrong spacing
01:23:632 - add finish
01:30:249 - remove finish
01:33:558 - remove finish and add here 01:34:220
01:37:749 - add finish
01:47:896 (4) - remove clap @_@

Jayel's Easy

Fine

Good luck ~

GiNa wrote:

[General]
-Take off "Enable countdown" (song setup -> Storyboarding) Countdown stays

[Jayel's Easy] All Done
00:32:014 (4) – add clap
00:38:632 (2) – I think whistle fits more
00:48:338 (1) – finish too loud here, add a green line at 00:51:867 and lower the volume to 60%
01:05:985 – (only if you follow the previous suggestion) add a green line here and change the volume back to 75%
01:08:632 (4) – change to whistle
01:15:690 (2) – second repeat change to whistle too and add finish at the end
01:18:338 – (only if you follow the previous suggestion) add a green line here and change the volume to 60%
-From kiai, you use some finishes and they sound really loud to me. Here’s an example what I would like you to do:
01:20:102 – lower the volume here to 60%
01:20:543 – add a green line and change volume back to 75%
01:23:632 (1) – I think music like this would fit with finish, so maybe add finish
01:29:808 (2) – finish at the end
01:37:308 (4) – ^
01:44:808 (5) – change the beginning from whistle to finish

[Normal] All Done
00:27:161 (1,2) – add finish at the end for both of them
00:41:279 (1) – add clap at the end
00:43:043 (2) – change finish to clap at the end
00:48:338 (1,2) – ^
01:14:808 (3) – remove finish at the end
01:20:102 (1) – add finish here instead
-You can try to add more finish during the kiai or just look at the suggestions I gave in Easy
01:47:896 (4) – change finish to clap

[Hard] All Done
00:42:382 (3) – change whistle to clap
01:13:926 (3) – change finish to clap at the end
01:30:029 (6) – stack this perfectly
01:33:338 (7) – try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/342955, I add clap at the end of the slider btw
01:47:235 (8) – change finish to clap at the end

[Idol Master Special] All Done
-Don’t know how to say, usually … the Source and Tags must be the same in all diff. I think you need to ask MAT/BAT/Pro Modders to help you with this.
00:30:075 (7,8) – stack this perfectly
00:38:898 (2) – ^
01:33:825 (8) – NC here would be good
01:40:884 (1) – unrankable spinner, auto must get at least 2000 bonus when testing in Edit Removed spinner
01:47:943 (8) – change finish to clap at the end
01:48:825 (9) – add a note here

HelloSCV wrote:

Hi~ From my Queue
Almost Modding is Suggestion so you can ignore this

SPOILER

Two mp3 files? delete one ( should ) i recommend Idol Master Special this diff's mp3 file 2 mp3 are ok
and you have 2 osb files delete it Done
and add more tags in Idol Master Special diff Done

Jayel's Easy
00:44:808 (1,2,3,4,5) - how about making this pattern for perfect pentagon? Done
01:47:896 (2) - add finish Done

Normal
00:13:043 (1) - add clap on slider tick ( 00:13:485 here and 00:14:367 here ) Don't know how to do that
01:20:102 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - i think this pattern is looks little bit hard for Normal diff Done
01:47:896 (4) - add finish Done

Hard
00:38:632 remove finish and add whistle Done
01:43:485 (7) - NC No change
01:47:896 add finish Done


Idol Master Special
00:12:207 (6,7,8,9,10) - how about more roundly pattern? Done
00:59:634 add more notes or slider here this break time isn't good i think No change, good time for a break
01:08:237 (3) - how about making this slider not to touch start of 01:07:575 (2) - this slider? done
01:45:737 (1,2,3,4) - unstack? boring pattern

Done

If you changed mp3 file from two from one PM for me then i'll mod again

Edit : mod is completed good luck!

PandaRoflmao wrote:

Hi here's my mod

Idol Master Special

- The end of the slider at 01:07:354 move it from x:352 y:276 to x:340 y:276
- 01:08:237 this slider is asymmetric change this points:
Delete x:188 y:52 (2nd point)
Move x:112 y:60 to x:140 y:52 (1st point)
Move x:216 y:96 to x:212 y:92 (3rd)
Move x:216 y:164 to x:212 y:164 (4th)
Move x:156 y:204 to x:156 y:232 (6th)
Move x:136 y:284 to x:156 y:312 (7th)
Move x:248 y:368 to x:256 y:312 (8th)
Move x:360 y:236 to x:352 y:236 (10th)
Move x:296 y:160 to x:296 y:164 (12nd) All Done
- The heart at 01:17:281 is assymetric too try changing this points That was on purpose no Change
Move:
1st x:212 y:72 to x:256 y:104
2nd x:112 y:4 to x:164: y:8
3rd x:-44 y:152 to x:24 y:56
4th x:140 y:280 to x:0 y:192
5th x:248 y:352 to x:256 y:348
6th x:504 y:164 to x:512 y:192
7th x:468 y:32 to x:488 y:56
8th x:244 y:-28 to x:344 y:8
9th x:248 y:96 to x:256 y:104
You should use the grid level in 3 because is more easy to place the sliders
Good luck!

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

Hi there~
heres my mod~!

Overall

SPOILER

the skin is not made by you right? so you should ask the skin maker for the permission at least.
BTW, nice hitsound

Idol Master Special

SPOILER

OD-2 -1
shape of the sliders should be paid more effort. try to make them symmetric and round done
00:55:884 (4,5,6) - use DS to map this part done
the break part should be mapped since the song is really short, therefore its no need to make such a long break. how do you think? Break stays, short but going 1min non stop
01:10:222 (4,3) - you really need to change them... stay
needs more work

Hard

SPOILER

lol,a different sound track~!
OD-1 done
00:14:808 (1,2,3,4) - better rotate 1 four times to make this pattern done
00:38:852 (1) - stack with 00:37:529 (4) done
00:41:279 (1) - better change this.. no change
also map the break section no change
01:26:499 (5,6) - 1 grid down and 1 grid right done
01:35:323 (2) - down 1~2 grid done(s)

Normal

SPOILER

00:37:308 (6) - clap done
00:41:279 (1) - clap at the end done
00:56:720 (2) - use DS done
also map the break part no change
01:07:749 (2) - Ctrl+R done
01:12:602 (5) - DS done
01:14:808 (3) - make it symmetrical, or it looks...you know done

Jayel's Easy

SPOILER

map the break section no change
others are fine~

Good luck~!

Opening with File > Open .osz in notepad set "AudioFilename: Idol Master Battle Theme ~Cheria~.mp3" in the "Jayel's Easy"
Inconsistency in PreviewTime, set 80089 in the "Idol Master Special" diff
Inconsistency in Source.. You should set "Idol Master" in all diffs
Set 691 offset and 136BPM in the Idol Master Special like other diffs
Inconsistency in combo colours. Consider to fix this.
Still in "Idol Master Special" inconsistency in kiai times. You have to set:
Use the video in all diffs.
Remove letterbox during breaks.
And what. The idol master special has got the vocal.. Oh god plz you must use the SAME .mp3 file for every diff of your mapset <.<

200,188,43043,2,0,B|252:220|308:176|288:120,1,150,0|2

Chewin wrote:

Hi mod request from my queu ;3

[General]
Delete "combobreak-old1" and full submit. Unused file.
There are 2 .mp3 files in your folder omg.. Delete "Ryo- Dazzling World M@ster Version - YouTube" one and full submit.
Opening with File > Open .osz in notepad set "AudioFilename: Idol Master Battle Theme ~Cheria~.mp3" in the "Jayel's Easy"
Inconsistency in PreviewTime, set 80089 in the "Idol Master Special" diff
Inconsistency in Source.. You should set "Idol Master" in all diffs
Set 691 offset and 136BPM in the Idol Master Special like other diffs
Inconsistency in combo colours. Consider to fix this.
Still in "Idol Master Special" inconsistency in kiai times. You have to set:
Use the video in all diffs. No it works best with idol master special (keyword: special)
Remove letterbox during breaks.
And what. The idol master special has got the vocal.. Oh god plz you must use the SAME .mp3 file for every diff of your mapset <.<[/color]

[Jayel's Easy] Done
00:43:043 (2) - Improve this slider's shape using this code: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/361357

200,188,43043,2,0,B|252:220|308:176|288:120,1,150,0|2

01:26:279 (1) - Remove NC and use it on 01:27:161 (3) for consistency with the previous part
01:28:043 (1) - Remove NC
01:44:808 (5) - Add NC
01:47:014 (1) - Remove NC

[Normal]
I think this SV is enough high for a Normal. I suggest you to decrease it
00:27:161 (1) - Remove finish, it's too loud..
00:28:926 (2) - ^
00:43:043 (2) - Remove clap on the end for consistency with 00:41:279 (1) no change
01:12:602 (5) - Distance snap no change

[Hard]
00:13:043 (5) - Add NC here and remove from 00:13:264 (1) Done
00:16:573 (5,1) - ^ done
00:29:588 (4) - Remove finish, too loud no change
01:43:926 (8) - NC no change
Rhythm is good but.. the map is, meh.

[Idol Master Special]
00:43:531 (3) - Improve the overlap with 00:42:207 (1) Done
00:50:810 (4) - New combo no change
00:52:134 (1) - Remove NC no change
00:53:016 (2) - Use NC no change

Please you must follow stuff I wrote above in "General"
Good luck ^^

1. Timing: offset 1,417 is better.
2. If you have the skin,you should add below code in your all .osu file

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

   SPOILER

   
3. If no make SB,please delete .osb file in your folder.
4. Add Jayel in your Tags.
5. The Jayel's Newbie's BG 0.0?

• 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
  00:10:222 (1) - add finish. Umm..and you can set Inherited to make low Vol.
  00:43:752 (2) - prev fix to 0.8x
  01:28:752 (1) - ^

1. This is Normal? If yes,the distance should be to consistency in every note.
   00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
   00:40:222 (3) - distance fix to 0.8x
   00:43:751 (2) - ^
   00:57:428 (2) - ^
   00:58:310 (4) - ^
   01:11:546 (1) - remove NC
   01:11:987 (2) - NC
   01:20:810 (1) - this is blocked by 01:15:516 (3)
   01:23:457 (1) - move to x:320 y:332
   01:27:869 (1) - distance ~
   01:32:060 (3,4) - ^
   01:49:046 - I think this add a circle and add finish will more sense in the end~ (or 01:48:604 (4) - change clap to finish same with Jayel's Newbie)

• 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
  01:29:193 (3) - distance fix to 1.2x . It could affect play (the DS with 01:28:531 (2,3) - is so similar with 01:27:869 (1,2) - )

• 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
  00:56:987 (5) - add whistle is slider start?
  01:49:046 - add circle and add finish?

jesse7419 wrote:

Hi :3
From A-tan's mod queue

[General]

1. Timing: offset 1,417 is better. Done
2. If you have the skin,you should add below code in your all .osu file

   SliderBorder : 255,255,255

   SPOILER

   
3. If no make SB,please delete .osb file in your folder. Done
4. Add Jayel in your Tags. Done
5. The Jayel's Newbie's BG 0.0? Its Idolmaster yes

[Jayel's Newbie]

• 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
  00:10:222 (1) - add finish. Umm..and you can set Inherited to make low Vol. done
  00:43:752 (2) - prev fix to 0.8x No change
  01:28:752 (1) - ^

[Pro]

1. This is Normal? If yes,the distance should be to consistency in every note.
   00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
   00:40:222 (3) - distance fix to 0.8x No Change
   00:43:751 (2) - ^
   00:57:428 (2) - ^
   00:58:310 (4) - ^
   01:11:546 (1) - remove NC Done
   01:11:987 (2) - NC
   01:20:810 (1) - this is blocked by 01:15:516 (3) Done
   01:23:457 (1) - move to x:320 y:332 Done
   01:27:869 (1) - distance ~ No Change
   01:32:060 (3,4) - ^
   01:49:046 - I think this add a circle and add finish will more sense in the end~ (or 01:48:604 (4) - change clap to finish same with Jayel's Newbie)Done

[Star]

• 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
  01:29:193 (3) - distance fix to 1.2x . It could affect play (the DS with 01:28:531 (2,3) - is so similar with 01:27:869 (1,2) - )

[Idol Master]

• 00:10:222 (1) - NC bug
  00:56:987 (5) - add whistle is slider start? No Change whistle stays on red lines
  01:49:046 - add circle and add finish?

Done

Rhythm is well,just the slider have a little weird.
That's all I can find~
Nice song! Good Luck

Jebok wrote:

Hi there! Mod as requested from my queue...

[General]
Your spinners mostly do not fit. Also, they are ugly. I suggest not changing the approach circle of the spinners.
00:59:634 - Map the break... The song is short and this break does not fit with the song. OH and... The break HAVE to be the same on every difficulty. So remove all breaks, or use the break times in Jayel's difficulty because it works much better than your break time. Some guest diffs have different breaks

[Jayel's Newbie] Done
01:26:546 (1,2,3,4) - Don't do this combo diagonally, (1) x:256 and y:260. (2) x:216 and y:192. (3) x:296 and y:192. (4) x:256 and y:124.
01:28:751 (1,2) - Reverse selection of both (1) and (2) then place (1) x:176 and y:264 and place (2) x:336 and y:264.
Yep, that's all

[Pro] No change
00:24:340 - Map instead of putting spinner here, does not fit.
00:45:406 - ^
01:40:222 - ^
Sorry but I think that none of the spinner fit.


[Star] No Change
00:23:016 (3) - x:424 and y:176
00:31:398 - I don't think this spinner fits here. Map this part instead.
00:34:928 (4) - New combo
00:36:693 - No new combo
00:38:457 (5) - New combo
00:39:560 - No new combo
00:47:281 (5) - New combo
00:48:384 - No new combo
00:49:046 (5) - New combo
01:13:531 - No new combo
01:13:751 (2) - New combo

[Idol Master] No Change
00:32:722 (3) - Remove. Place a slider from 00:32:501 to 00:32:722 instead. Clap at the end of it.
00:34:266 (8) - x:12 and y:124
00:34:487 (9) - Remove. Copy slider (7) instead, reverse selection, and place it x:52 and y:180.
00:35:148 (1) - x:172 and y:228
00:35:590 (2) - x:280 and y:168
00:39:340 (3) - Spacing 1.00x
00:40:001 (5) - ^
00:48:825 (8) - New Combo
00:49:046 (1) - No New Combo

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Here's what I've found!

General
-> Your slider shapes and hitsounds could use some improvement. >.<
-> Source should be "THE IDOLM@STER" not "Idolmaster" or "Idol Master." Also, make sure to change it in ALL of your difficulties, not just in one of them. Done
-> Your tags are useless. Delete those tags. Your tags should NEVER be the name of artist, title, source, genre, beatmap creator (you), or difficluty. Again, make sure to remove those tags in ALL of your difficulties and not just in one of them. Done

Newbie
-> There's no background on this difficulty! Every difficulty must have a background unless it's unrankable. should be there now
-> Approach Rate +1?

Pro

Star

Idol Master
-> Your combo colors are different on this difficulty. It must be the same in ALL difficulties, unless it's unankable. Done

Map has potental, but it has some unrankable issues. This map needs more mods.

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from modding queue. Here's what I've found!

General
-> Your slider shapes and hitsounds could use some improvement. >.<
-> Source should be "THE IDOLM@STER" not "Idolmaster" or "Idol Master." Also, make sure to change it in ALL of your difficulties, not just in one of them.
-> Your tags are useless. Delete those tags. Your tags should NEVER be the name of artist, title, source, genre, beatmap creator (you), or difficluty. Again, make sure to remove those tags in ALL of your difficulties and not just in one of them.
-> Your hitsound volumes are kinda random. Make your hitsound volumes consistent in multiples of 5. For example, change 34% to 35%Done

Newbie
-> There's no background on this difficulty! Every difficulty must have a background unless it's unrankable. Should be there now
-> Approach Rate +1? Done
Pro
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty.

Star
-> This difficulty looks rankable, so I'll skip this difficulty.

Idol Master
-> Your combo colors are different on this difficulty. It must be the same in ALL difficulties, unless it's unankable. Done

Map has potental, but it has some unrankable issues. This map needs more mods.

• where is the BG of Jayel's Newbie? and I think you should be the BG name more simple.
  specify the color of sliderborder.

Jayel wrote:

You should have at least informed me if you changed the name of my guest diff
Anyways, good luck.