1. 签名的artist和title写反了
2. 把ryo放进source把source那个放tags里去...
3. 你都用红线变速了干嘛还和绿线叠一起...尽可能不要让红线和绿线叠一起.我觉得BPM本身的变速就够了 实在不行你可以把红线的BPM/2反正都已经在变速了.

1. 00:25:390 (1) - 这变速真有必要吗...
2. 00:29:754 (5) - 间距应该是从这边加大而不是后面.
3. 00:50:118 (1) - remove nc
4. 01:14:845 (5) - 尾巴没叠好
5. 01:46:118 (1,2,3,4) - 基于你这图变速还挺多我就顺便说了, 这里真的不用递增式变速吗
6. 02:20:299 (3) - 突然变的巨圆...不觉得丑吗

TicClick wrote:

=w=

1. Offset: 151 248ms / BPM: 165,50
2. Offset: 157 050ms / BPM: 155,00
3. Offset: 157 423ms / BPM: 153,00
4. Offset: 158 599ms / BPM: 151,00
5. Offset: 159 415ms / BPM: 147,00
6. Offset: 159 956ms / BPM: 85,00
7. Offset: 162 111ms / BPM: 74,00

Now map until 02:42:921, hehe.

P.S. I highly recommend you get someone for checking.

goodbye wrote:

[general]

1. 签名的artist和title写反了 囧 窘 改了
2. 把ryo放进source把source那个放tags里去... 好的。。
3. 你都用红线变速了干嘛还和绿线叠一起...尽可能不要让红线和绿线叠一起.我觉得BPM本身的变速就够了 实在不行你可以把红线的BPM/2反正都已经在变速了. 其实是因为。。开始时就用0.5了，后面也应该如此吧。。就bpm/2来说呢就不了反正没差。。。

[Miku]

1. 00:25:390 (1) - 这变速真有必要吗... 吓人的
2. 00:29:754 (5) - 间距应该是从这边加大而不是后面. 好的
3. 00:50:118 (1) - remove nc 我随便的
4. 01:14:845 (5) - 尾巴没叠好 啊
5. 01:46:118 (1,2,3,4) - 基于你这图变速还挺多我就顺便说了, 这里真的不用递增式变速吗 嗯 加了一点。。
6. 02:20:299 (3) - 突然变的巨圆...不觉得丑吗 其实我随便的。。不过你既然说了我就改了一下形状吧

[Wonder]
01:50:481 (5) - spacing, 并且New combo 好的

懒逼了，吃饭去 一路顺风~

Snepif wrote:

Hi..

[General]

Add a fade-out to the .mp3, because it suddenly ends and it sounds kinda awful . no
Taiko has 5 timing sections, while the other diifs have 12? will ask if 1811 wanna take action




[Easy]

Most of the things I'll tell you on this diffs are suggestions to decrease the difficulty a bit since it is the easiest of the mapset.

00:03:625 (1,2) - Probably not a good idea to stack notes on easy, and also it is on the start of the song, which makes it more difficult for a begginer when playing for the first time. "not a good idea to stack notes on easy" is quite a general thing, cant apply for any map any stack. this is really fine here
00:10:898 (2) - Should be deleted, to follow the previous pattern + making it easier. ok
00:20:300 (1) - Try this.. http://puu.sh/fclf i know the reason you made this...but the BG music just dont flow like that
00:26:118 (1,2,3) - Delete (2) and replace (3) with a slider that finishes at 00:27:936- , with a repeat at 00:27:390 - , so the slider doesn't start on a red tick. nice
00:30:118 - Add a slider from here to 00:30:845, and then repeat. no
00:43:572 (1) - Finish hitsound on start nonono, not on start but reminds me to make one at tail
00:45:027 (1) - Make this a slider that finishes on the next white tick? To decrease the difficulty a bit. (I tell you all this because it is the easiest diff on the mapset.. so.. it should be like that ) i know your reason..but really, a very easy diff is not what i want in this diff, it should be a bit challenging like now, trust me, they would love it
01:08:481 (3,4) - Delete this two, and add a repeat on the previous slider. BTW, remember to distance snap after.. meh I guess you already know. this is where the drum spirit goes, i would not tolerate to lower the difficulty...
01:51:754 (3) - Move to 01:51:936 - ok
02:32:879 (3,4) - Again, stack, and also, a begginer player won't know if the stack is 1/2 or 1/1 or what. So this is not a good idea at all.
02:35:779 (3,4) - ^ ok, this was fixed
02:38:403 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end) because you added the red lines there. So add notes instead. the slider was snapped in the previous timing section, not now..

[Hard]

00:45:754 (6,1) - Confusing, looks like the small slider will have another return because of the distance, I suggest moving (6). yeah, thanks for remind
00:49:390 (5) - Delete NC, and add NC on the next slider. no
00:54:118 (1) - NC? Because it looks confusing, as the first suggestion, but it doesn't with NC. if anyone point out this, i will change
01:05:390 (3) - Remove NC. ok
01:14:845 (2,1) - Move this somewhere else because it looks ugly and it kinda covers the reverse arrow of (1). ha im not a fan of clean mapping
01:50:481 (5) - NC ok
02:02:118 - End the break here, so map from this part..maybe a spinner or something whatever you want. imo...i want people looking at the video there
02:34:148 (1)- Try http://puu.sh/fcA2 again..i see the reason but this time the music doesnt flows like that..
02:38:403 (3) - Unsnapped slider.. end.. fixed


[Insane]

I see too many problems here >.> just pointing general stuff...
The beggining sounds very random, try to follow the vocals a little bit. i didnt map it on vocal, i map it on music, delete all the stuff and you will see the reason...meh maybe the hitsounds just blend into the music too much
Also too much stacking for insane, kinda boring. orz ive been struggling long...stack , just perfectly fits the music but not actually plays fun...but unstack them ..meh just doesnt fits at all
Use jumps and antijumps only when it fits with the music, not just randomly. you can really see the reason if you hear the song more
Hmmm, this kind of problems on insane maps is caused because the mapper doesn't really play insane maps, I suggest you to see some good insane maps before checking all jumps, antijumps, random spacings, etc. and see what you can do with them. This is all I can point out.. as a player I would say it's kinda random and confusing o.o Try to use more solid patterns rather than random jumps. i only die at some 5 star map. almost FC every 4.8, dont simply put your conclusion here, this is just because our MAPPING STYLE or PLAYING style is different...you actually feel great after overcome some "bad pattern/rhythm" (not popular in osu map's pattern etc) like this one 00:31:572 (1,2,3,4,5) and some strange spacing.but that is what i wanna say on my mapping : why people just love to play first time readable map?to me, challenge is fun. you know nowadays they just challenge high bpm and thats all.

ALSOOOOOOOOOOO! 02:40:900 (1) - unsnapped spinner, and you have lots of unsnapped green lines, check them D:
do they affect gameplay?
Kay, that's all! Good luck!
And thanks my Kei <3 /me falls in love <3

L_P wrote:

do they affect gameplay?

1. Afaik it isn't allowed to make sliders slower by adding timing points with less BPM, but i'm not sure about this

• 
  
  SVM x0,5 and x1,0 is too hard for the easiest diff. Also those timing points.

1. 01:11:209 (2) - 1/2 earlier? (+ make it longer then)

1. 02:31:973 (2) - Random slowdown is Random. Remove it, since you didn't do this at the beginning as well.

1. 00:24:481 (5,6,7) - Hard to read
2. 00:25:390 (1) - O_o... Random speed up is random AND IMPOSSIBLE Q_Q'
3. 00:27:390 (5,6,7) - Hard to read
4. 00:36:300 (1,2,3,4) - Why those antijumps? D:
5. 01:01:936 (3) - Remove
6. 01:02:299 (4) - 1/2 earlier
7. 01:03:754 (1,2) - Remove
8. 02:32:879 (6,7) - Hard to read
9. 02:35:417 (5,6,7) - ^
10. 02:36:323 (10) - Why those random speed ups? ._.''
11. 02:37:423 (3,4) - Feels odd to play
12. 02:40:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doesn't fit D: I'd prefer to start that spinner here.

Snepif wrote:

I get what you say about the insane diff. I should have said "often caused because the mapper.." . I actually didn't know if it was your style, or.. idk.. Yep, confusing is fun sometimes, but I didn't really know you wanted to a make a confusing map, I thought you were trying to make a common map. Sorry then, and good luck

A s g a r d wrote:

[General]
why taiko diff has 5 red timing section???
other have 12 but taiko just have 5

SPOILER

[1811's Taiko Oni] Red timing sections at:
00:01:080, BPM of 165.000
00:13:520, BPM of 100.000
00:14:400, BPM of 63.000
00:15:352, BPM of 60.000
00:20:300, BPM of 165.000

[Miku]
Red timing sections at:
00:01:080, BPM of 165.000
00:13:520, BPM of 100.000
00:14:400, BPM of 63.000
00:15:352, BPM of 60.000
00:20:300, BPM of 165.000
02:31:248, BPM of 165.500
02:37:050, BPM of 155.000
02:37:423, BPM of 153.000
02:38:599, BPM of 151.000
02:38:799, BPM of 147.000
02:39:411, BPM of 122.000
02:40:394, BPM of 165.000

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Random Taiko Mod

1811's Taiko Oni:
- Taiko BG is missing . Do full submit to solve the problem
- Audio Lead-In: Adjust to 1000, manually in .osu notepad (At the moment it's in 1015) adjusted
Mod Info:
d= don (Normal Hitsound)
k= kat/katsu (Clap/Whistle Hitsound)
D= Big Don (Finish Hitsound)
K= Big Kat/Katsu (Clap/Whistle + Finish Hitsound)

00:01:080 (1,2,3,4): The music need a finish in those notes. So I suggest to add it, and make big kats small kat is just fine
00:06:534 (x): Add a kat no need to,there's no rhythm
00:07:989 (2): kat no ;_;
00:09:807 (1): Plays well with vocal a Big Don in this note no ;_;
00:20:300 (1): kat no ;_;
00:25:572 (2): This note sounds weird in this place, so, move 1/2 forwar (White Tick, 00:25:754) and I also think that this note would be a Big Don no its not weird, u can hear two beats over there
00:45:572 (1,1,1,1): d d k k no ;_;
00:46:754 (x): Add a don to make a Triplet (kdk) no;_;
00:48:845 (1): kat fit better with music no ;_;
00:49:209 (2,1,1): ddd ok =w=b
01:44:118 (7,8): I really don't like how to play the note (8), I think that palys better if you move 1/2 forward (Red Tick, 01:44:481) and make the pattern k k with the next note (9) nice catch changed the placements =w=b
01:47:027 (1): d no ;_;
01:47:209 (1): k no ;_;

Well That's all. Nice Taiko in General.
Good Luck with your map arigato

wcx19911123 wrote:

[1811's Taiko Oni]
make this diff's red timing sections the same with other diffs plz
kiai should end at 01:35:936 - imo

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
title shoud be World is Mine (Live Ver.)? I'm not sure.. not changing it would really be fine..
red timing sections should be the same in all diffs , even there aren't notes after some timing sections
why idolmaster in tags? I think it is unnecessary 1811 will fix it

[Young]
OD-1 , it is too high as an Easy diff imo ok...ok...
stack leniency is too low as an Easy diff , +2 at least.. fixed
00:44:300 (2,3,1,2) - this is kinda hard to play for newbies , change (2,3) into a slider? not this time..really wanna see what will happen
01:08:481 (3,4) - I strongly suggest change this to slider , this is hard for newbies to read the rhyme 这样就不大好玩了。。不过还是接到太多投诉 真的 还是fix了
01:09:754 (1,2) - this 2 sliders can blanket better 好的
01:59:209 (1,2) - try this rhyme? http://puu.sh/fiRY , kinda hard to play but fit the song much better 试过了 觉得没什么大差别 不过既然改了会变难那就算了吧
02:18:118 (3,4,5,6) - kinda hard to play imo 大丈夫
02:37:050 (1) - this slider can't snap well , cuz BPM changed , use 1 slider and 1 circle plz ok 但是觉得不要改无伤大雅。。？
02:38:403 (2) - this slider is unsnapped , need to edit code in .osu file to snap 这个就免了吧。。我不会的。。

[Wonder]
stack leniency is too high , why not use 7 as default setting? 这个 倒是觉得没啥差别？还是改了
00:08:352 (2,1) - this jump is too huge , reduce spacing plz [/color]
01:15:572 (1) - this reverse arrow is kinda invisible , change its direction plz 怎么你们都这样说。。fixed
02:01:936 - I think you should add some objects from here 这里要map的话就会变得比较难diff. spread蛋疼啊
02:18:118 (3) - this is hard to know when it end , cuz the same slider before this only repeat 1 time , just this one repeat 2 times.. if you really want to keep the rhme , I suggest change to 2 sliders 嗯
02:37:050 (1) - this end is unsnapped , need to edit code in .osu file to snap
02:38:403 (3,4) - ^
snap嘛 免了吧？反正玩着不会有问题？同上不会edit code的mapper蛋疼 如果真的需要snap帮帮我。。


[1811's Taiko Oni]
make this diff's red timing sections the same with other diffs plz
kiai should end at 01:35:936 - imo

[everybody FC this , clean map, clean map]
what's this diff name mean.. I think it's better to change diff name ha
no hitsounds and newcombo , this is unrankble , you must do some work on this diff [/color]

[Miku]
stack leniency = 2 is unrankble , +2 at least , and I suggest use 7
00:20:663 (3,1) - this anti-jump is really confusing , stack or put it far away plz 其实这么做就跟everybody FC没差别了。。做这个map就是想试试看player会怎么想（要rank的话倒是蛋疼无比）。。一下有一些相同的道理
00:22:118 (4,1) - ^
00:25:390 (1) - this speed up is unreadble , I don't know why you did this.. [/color]
00:28:300 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest make spacing the same , or it is kinda confusing 其实打着打着也不好打。。还是改了吧
00:50:845 (7) - newcombo here plz ok
02:36:323 (10) - this speed up is unreadble , and I suggest end slider at 02:36:686 - to follow vocal here 这里倒是赞同。。的说 fixed
02:40:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 1/6 streams here is unreadble , and don't fit the song at all. change to 1/4 plz ok

map's idea is good , but
it also can come out awesome maps that obey the rules 0.0 其实这个map也没有unrankable...就擦肩而过罢了吧

Teru21 wrote:

hi
I don't believe that you can make this live concert be a Beatmap ;-; (slap me) (slap you)
but it sounds good to me kyahahhahh~ i'm here because i want a m4m with you ok..
so here we are >:D

[General]
remove osb file if you are not making SB fixed

[Young]
00:03:989 - add whistle ok..
00:09:080 - remove whistle.. its not fit with the song ok

[Wonder]
00:40:663 (1,2) - i think its untidy if (1) covered (2). try this this was changed..
00:40:481 (4,1) - x:464 y:236
00:41:209 (2) - x:328 y:192
00:52:845 (4,5) - http://i41.tinypic.com/2lmbhoj.jpg curved the other side to remain the spacing..
00:59:209 (3) - 1 grid down , 4 grid right then it would break the spacing...
01:15:572 (1) - ugly slider >< haha fixed
02:25:936 (3) - 2 grid right ok..

[1811's Taiko]
a good taiko diff :3
00:01:080 (1,2,3,4) - big katu?
02:30:845 (3) - ^
02:31:209 (1) - big don

[everybody FC this-clean map-clean map]
wth with this diff name ha maybe later will keep , or just delete it? no idea..so this diff. name first.
00:03:989 - add whistle here if you want yeah i want
00:05:807 - this sounds weird. remove whistle not here..
00:06:170 - ^ ok
01:08:118 (3,4,5) - 10 grid down , so it wont covered by (2) and the (5) is placed constantly with 01:09:754 (1,3,7,9) nice
01:19:936 (5) - seems not a perfect circle try to adjust a bit

[Miku]
02:00:481 (3) - i prefer the whistle here than 02:00:663 tried..but i keep this..
02:19:572 (1,2,3) - TRAP lol ha, no change...thats what i want..
02:32:516 (5,6,7) - THIS ALSO trollol
02:40:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - RANDOM trollolol

my map is on your queue
okay!! Thats All OAO; Take my star X3

Teru21 wrote:

[1811's Taiko]
a good taiko diff :3 arigato~ :3
00:01:080 (1,2,3,4) - big katu? nope, just small katu sounds ok :3
02:30:845 (3) - ^ no ;_; sounds weird to me i guess >_>
02:31:209 (1) - big don ^

BeatofIke wrote:

Request from my modding queue.

[General] None

[Young]
-Increase Overall Difficulty to 3. it will be too high for easy/normal i think...
-Reduce the slider tick rate to 1. i will consider this..may be will change it one day

[Wonder]
-Reduce the slider tick rate to 1. no

[Miku]
-Reduce Approach rate to 8. It flows better with the music. no, phonic's senbonzakura can use AR9 , then i have even better reason for using AR9 - the spacing is quite confusing

I don't see anything wrong with your map. Sorry if my mod didn't help.

Lizbeth wrote:

Change song name to: World is Mine (Live)

Miku
There’s something I don’t like in this difficulty, and is that you seem to hide body sliders with hit burst on purpose, like saying “I’m gonna hide this to make it harder” not that they accidentally result like this. Tell me if I’m wrong because I’m just saying what it seemed to me.
Example of what I’m saying, both of the threw me off while playing.
00:50:481 (6) -
02:34:873 (4) -

yeah..you know, last time i map this when i was like "yeah i wanna map a song that is different" but lol im not experienced enough, so...imo now change to something simple and casual... but i hope 01:32:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this looks fine to you..

Galaxy
This diff is pretty cool, but at the beginning I was kinda lost with all the velocity changes. Also I think you’re not being coherent with the difficulty, sometimes this diff seems Insane, put there’s some parts that seems Hard, you should keep consistence. The distance increasing and the streams in the kiai parts just seems too much.
00:05:080 (3) - The start point of this slider isn’t following anything of the song, so it shouldn’t start there at all. Find the correct spot, beats should be placed according to beats or vocals, if not, the player is gonna miss them. fixed
00:27:390 (5) - I recommend if you shorten the slider by half beat and add a note in the next white tick sure
01:08:118 (3) - Same here kinda hard to make something here...

Wonder
01:48:845 (4,1,2,3,4) - Too hard for this diff, get rid of it. k

Young
I think is too hard for an easy. I recommend you not to use EVERY beat of the song… I mean you can give the player a break… I think the map till 00:43:572 is good, cuz you let some empty white ticks, should be the same in the entire map, this diff is for noobs and they can’t keep up beats in every white tick. I recommend removing some beats all over the map, is easy to do and doesn’t require remapping. yeah, adjusted a bit, used more long sliders

Lizbeth wrote:

Re-checking

You didn’t change the name, I really think should be “(Live)” instead of “[Live]”. ah..i give up..ok change change

Miku
02:34:873 (4) - I still don’t agree with this, make that slider body visible. roger

Wonder
02:18:118 (3) - Remove a repeat, remember to adjust distance. ok..maybe this is hard for this diff..changed..

Young
00:44:300 (2) - Delete this note umhm
00:54:118 (2) - ^ cant agree with this, cause there was a strong finish there, however change to slider instead
00:54:845 (4) - ^ im very fine with this though

Lizbeth wrote:

00:25:390 - If you change speed to x1.5 you will not exceed the 3 unique speed limit. And x1.5 suits better, x1.75 is too much.

Lizbeth wrote:

Everything fine now~ Good luck~

Blue Dragon wrote:

Hello old bubble!

General
This map has a video, but there is no No-Video download. You will have to full submit it.

Actually it is allowed.. look at this

-----------------------------------------------

[Normal]
(nazi) 01:11:209 (2) - Using grid 4, move it 1 grid down and 1 grid right. Looks a lot better. fixed

-----------------------------------------------

[Insane]
00:42:663 (7) - Maybe add a new combo? It plays a bit weird since it seems to be another pattern there >: fixed
01:46:845 (3) - Move 1 grid right for consistency with (1,2). thanks for so detail look at it! these were intentional, wish to keep it

-----------------------------------------------

[Miku]

Not a big fan of this spacing, but still pretty fun to play difficulty. orz this is my old map...look at the slider shape orz...too lazy to move them

00:54:481 (3) - Remove one repeat on this and add a new note at 00:54:754. As of now, it's really confusing to know when the slider ends. ctrl + R -ed
02:35:417 (5,6,7) - Maybe do it like this? Currently, spacing is really confusing. ok

-----------------------------------------------

I will have to pop this map because of the no-video download glitch. When you fix it (and if you want, the other things I pointed out), I'll gladly recheck this!

nold_1702 wrote:

診bat沒看到快點轉回,後果可能很嚴重

1. 00:13:520 (1) - Timing is too early.
2. 00:20:300 - You need about (+20) to this timing section's offset. By listening, you can hear that the sliders end too early, and by further testing, I have come to a conclusion of about 20-22ms late.
3. 00:25:390 (8) - x1.50 sv is too much, and is very unexpected. Before you try to defend this, don't use "I think it's fine" or "Other people can play it", cuz those aren't valid reasons for this sv increase.
4. 01:14:300 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream could use a little fixing up in the distance snapping; it is very obvious the spacing gets smaller toward the end without an obvious reason.
5. 01:50:481 (1,2,3,4) - I would recommend you use 108 degree patterns from here before moving onto the pentagon pattern with 01:51:027 (4,1,2,3,4) - ; it's all part of the same phrase, and it would be nice if it had a consistent form of pattern.
6. 02:22:481 (1) - This gets thrown off into another direction. It would be much better if either this wasn't the only object in another direction, or if this moved naturally with the stream.
7. 02:40:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would advise against a stream here since there is a bpm change, and you use a different spacing from your previous stream, which would make it even more difficulty to accurately get 100% accuracy. You can just leave this part blank until the spinner, and it won't do the map any harm. If you're mapping to the bass tremolo, then you'll have to go all the way to 02:41:757 - before you start your spinner, and that's not so cool.
8. 02:40:939 (1) - You also need a new timing section to end the spinner at the right time. Right now it ends too early.

those wrote:

Hey man. Let's make this perfect.

[Miku]

1. 00:13:520 (1) - Timing is too early. this is a live show, drum is at my offset, but vocal is later than the beat. what would you follow? drum or vocal? i chose drum...
2. 00:20:300 - You need about (+20) to this timing section's offset. By listening, you can hear that the sliders end too early, and by further testing, I have come to a conclusion of about 20-22ms late. i dont think so
3. 00:25:390 (8) - x1.50 sv is too much, and is very unexpected. Before you try to defend this, don't use "I think it's fine" or "Other people can play it", cuz those aren't valid reasons for this sv increase. using the excuse "Other people can play it" is just to say that it is rankable. when it is rankable, then the mod is your opinion, and so my reason for you is, the music here is very special, stands out from the other rhythm and melody. when some special stuff came out, i will start to think how to emphasize it. here, i use a fast slider (of course different mapper have different style, for 0108 he will use big jump)
4. 01:14:300 (2,3,4,5,6) - This stream could use a little fixing up in the distance snapping; it is very obvious the spacing gets smaller toward the end without an obvious reason. fixed
5. 01:50:481 (1,2,3,4) - I would recommend you use 108 degree patterns from here before moving onto the pentagon pattern with 01:51:027 (4,1,2,3,4) - ; it's all part of the same phrase, and it would be nice if it had a consistent form of pattern. though not sure about 108 degree but i can understand what you mean... fixed
6. 02:22:481 (1) - This gets thrown off into another direction. It would be much better if either this wasn't the only object in another direction, or if this moved naturally with the stream. actually this is intentional, it is fun after i overcome this pattern~
7. 02:40:394 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Would advise against a stream here since there is a bpm change, and you use a different spacing from your previous stream, which would make it even more difficulty to accurately get 100% accuracy. You can just leave this part blank until the spinner, and it won't do the map any harm. If you're mapping to the bass tremolo, then you'll have to go all the way to 02:41:757 - before you start your spinner, and that's not so cool. removed, start spinner there
8. 02:40:939 (1) - You also need a new timing section to end the spinner at the right time. Right now it ends too early. i assume you mean "late", added a new TP

Sakura wrote:

[Miku]
Well since those took care of that then ill mod the other diffs.

[Insane]
00:27:390 (5) - This slider looks pretty weird, are you sure you cant think of something else here? yes i can...but it doesnt seems weird to me tho, fixed
00:35:390 (4) - This slider could be prettified. i think it is just ugly dots..but the slider is pretty enough
00:55:572 (2) - Slowdown doesnt fit. i map here on the bass guitar or whatever instrument they use, and the music is like, slow down with no drum sound here, so i use slow down. i think it fits so i just trying explain some reasons here..
01:02:481 (3) - Idk what shape this slider is supposed to be but doesnt look good, how about some kinda hook shape? fixed

01:08:118 (3) - Can you blanket the previous slider end in a more circular way? tried to...but does it matter...?
01:19:936 (5) - This doesnt look good at all, the previous one was better, definitively change this one. fixed
01:28:663 (1,2,3,4) - Dont mind the random jump, but i dont see what kinda shape/pattern you want to use here. ok, will make some thing.
02:29:390 - I lose more than half my hp here, either add notes like on the other difficulties or insert a break time. mapped some thing without hitsound here

[Taiko]
The chorus sound really weird, but the rest feels fine.
It's kinda weird for a (Live) song to not include the video, and people can always disable it to begin with, so why not include it?
i forgot who told me not to put the video, but i wanted the video too, :3 added

[Hard]
01:21:390 (1) - Barely touching the next slider's border feels sloppy, it can easily be avoided and you can get a prettier slider outta it:

fixed
02:15:209 (6,7) - These really look weird, try a better curve.. fixed
02:31:973 (2) - 5 points could make it better. ok

[Normal]
00:49:390 (1,2) - If you could blanket these, it would look so much better. tried better shape...no idea on blanket it orz

That's all for now, good luck!