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LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith feat.irony

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Jzh Zehnichi
70 posts
Joined October 2010
Jzh Zehnichi
fixed based on spboxer mod :)

Download: LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Jzh Zehnichi's Part].osu
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi

ertyukjh010 wrote:



03:06:119 (1,2) - Part of a lot of this distance, it is very difficult, not suitable for this difficulty. That's what chorus is for, climaxing the difficulty.
03:08:602 (3) - The distance with 03:08:395 (2) looking like same with 03:08:809 (4). It is unread. It's... Pretty guessable.

That all~
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
thx spboxer for mod ^^
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
hello, sorry I had some stuff on real world ;_;

also hello Indonesian Beatmapers Club!

anyway, modding here because of request

[General]

  1. Dont know why I just can download the [Collab] diff, yes when I download this map with the forum thread link and score board link it just comes with the [Collab] diff, maybe a full submit may fix this, I taken manually the other diffs to mod this
    And yes, I downloaded this 3 times!!
  2. Aaand nope, are not the same irony vocals

[Normal]

Well is over 3,00 star rating, lets see if we can decrease it
  1. 00:29:706 (3) - maybe make this slider 1/2 lenght and remove the repeat, also dont forget the whistle and clap to end, just if you change it
  2. 00:39:844 (5) - hmmm I think dont add whistle to end or start of the slider will enhance the sound of the song, personally I like moar if you remove the whistle from the end, dont know what you think
  3. 00:53:706 (6) - considerate to use default normal soundset to this circle, check the effect that it has with the normal finish
  4. 01:33:430 (1) - o: ↑?
  5. 01:49:982 (1) - hmm, remove this spinner and then check the star rating, long spinners increase the star rating, dunno why but specially when are 2 spinners in a row the star rating have a tendence to increase
  6. 02:09:844 (1) - ok, here I really cant see the why of the custom whistle on repeat, there is no custom whistle on previous hitobjects, so maybe change this with a finish may sounds a bit better? please check at this
  7. 02:11:550 (1) - I like the way that this sounds witouth finish :D maybe you dont
  8. 02:38:809 (5) - hmm, the finish of start sounds good, but again I like the way this sounds witouth finish, I say that the sound effect of the song is awesome and leave it more clean will be moar soft and nice to the ears
  9. 02:57:844 (1,2,3) - can you use a pattern like 02:56:188 (1,2,3)? just move 02:58:671 (2) - to 02:58:464
  10. 03:12:533 (7) - whistle? nice double custom whistle?
  11. 03:23:913 (2) - curve this to have a soft blanket with previous slider, maybe
    stuff
    376,144,203913,2,0,B|433:146|456:208,2,110,8|2|8
  12. 03:29:292 (3) - whistle to end, previous sliders sounds so nice


[Yasora /o/]

  1. 00:39:430 (5) - whistle to start/end? sounds pretty empty :o also whistle to 00:38:809 (4)
  2. 00:52:050 (4,5) - ↑
  3. 00:53:706 (1) - as [Normal] please check the effect of finish normal soundset
  4. 01:14:188 (3) - not sure at all of this blanket, may be better, is not a big difference but dont know
    SPOILER
    320,100,74188,2,0,B|360:132|344:192|344:192|368:244,1,140
  5. 01:15:637 (2) - red control point 2 grids down, less change on blanket x.x
  6. 01:33:430 (1) - normal soundset please
  7. 02:52:878 ~ need moar creative patterns and rhythms for kiai time /o/


[Insane]

  1. 00:31:361 (3) - why dont use the custom slider tick for the tick on here o:?
  2. 00:33:430 (3) - ahm dont like this custom whistle here >_<
  3. 00:39:844 (3) - no custom whistle on repeat and end? please at least remove the whistle on repeat ;__;
  4. 00:53:706 (7) - normal soundset \:D/
  5. 01:33:430 (9) - ↑ \:D/
  6. 01:59:913 (1,2,3,4) ~ well for the copy paste, scale, rotate, maybe ctrl+r the 2nd, 4th, etc reppeteance? maybe is moar funny
  7. 02:11:499 (1) - maybe remove the whistle from all slider and re-insert it on start/end and repeats once per time, the whistle on slider body still sounding and make it sounds a bit weird, also considerate just remove the whistle here, the song has a nice sound here, dunno how will sounds to you the next slider D;
  8. 03:08:188 (2) - set the tiny grid and locate this moar straigh with previous slider please o:
  9. 03:44:085 - hmm, maybe a bouncing slider here and start the spinner on 03:45:016, to follow that sound of the song with the spinner


[Collab]

dunno if you know that I dont like collabs ;_; well lets try
  1. 00:37:775 (2) - try to get a better "inhert" on previous slider, rotate this maybe some -16º also maybe you want to improve the shape of previous slider
  2. 00:39:637 (1,2,3,4) - ehm use the same spacing that used on 00:39:119 (2,3)? tell me the reason of using a higher spacing please o:
  3. 00:52:361 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - x_x spacingfaewopn
  4. 01:07:361 ~ 01:07:671 - what is the propose of this green timelines? they have the same volume, soundset, etc
  5. 01:07:775 (3) - you can use the custom soundset, the clap has this sound, I say the clap on the repeat
  6. 01:10:050 (7) - oh this is the correct usage of soundset change
  7. 01:26:809 (1) - finish on start dont fit at all, just use custom whistle please
  8. 01:33:430 (5) - normal soundset please
  9. 01:48:119 (2) - tako-san :D
  10. 02:03:223 - please keep the custom soundset D:! ah, dont know why it sounds so weird
  11. 02:11:499 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - should be 1/8 as on [Insane]
  12. 02:39:844 ~ le random whistleing :o
  13. 03:02:809 (1) - make a moar nice to eyes slider?
    SPOILER
    104,104,182809,6,0,B|80:160|136:288|256:320|376:288|432:160|408:104,1,510,2|2
  14. 03:06:119 ~ off-topic 1/4 sliders :o

    Leorda wrote:

    [Collab rules]
    1. No overmapped
    :o :o :o
  15. 03:45:844 ~ avoid using whistles? please? ;_; or use it moar constantly


that is all, thanks for requesting me Leorda >_<

oh, star for no tou*ou related map <:
Yasora
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Joined May 2010
Yasora
collab:
fixed in 02:11:499 - 02:13:154

thanks ikari \o/

Download: LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Collab].osu

Download: LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Yasora's Hard].osu
Rei Hakurei
1,983 posts
Joined February 2011
Rei Hakurei
sebelum fix -> gw heran kenapa yang keDL cuman diff: COLLAB doang

[ikari_kyon]
no mod directing to me, so i think my part is safe by i_k~ (meh reason starring lol)
[spboxer3]
02:25:671 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - uneven spacing. normally i use Small (8px) grid, and i used 1/2 normal spacing (which is 0.7x after halved).. thanks for pointing this 0.7~0.8x spacing ^^ i feel nothing wrong here
02:36:119 (6,2) - spacing. It's just like 02:36:533 (2,4) - 's spacing. but it's different now :< thanks, fixed (raised 0.02x)

thanks for pointing it out ^^

only fixed spacingATTACH[LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Another Rei's Part].osu]

oh iya ... lagi pengen ngemod iseng nih
00:32:188 (1) - http://puu.sh/xfKS
00:37:154 (1,2) - bengkoknya aneh, coba dibikin lengkungan keduanya itu ngeblanket (2) http://puu.sh/xfLT
00:40:671 (2,3) - bikin stack di ujung slider,
00:41:499 (4,5) - bikin stack,
00:42:326 (1,2,3,4) - bikin stack
00:46:050 (6,2) - kepala (6) stack sama (2) atw sebaliknya biar lebih rapi
00:49:775 (3,2) - snap (3) ke grid, terus bikin (3) stack sama end (2), sama bikin (2) lebih simetris :) http://puu.sh/xfNE
01:48:119 (2) - bikin simetris http://puu.sh/xfOR
02:18:740 (2) - bikin kaya gini? http://puu.sh/xfPD
02:44:809 (3,4) - bikin sejajar kaya (5,6) ?
03:15:016 (4) - http://puu.sh/xfQM
  • karena bentuk slidernya mirip, kan bisa di rotate atw flip dsb. mungkin beberapa slider yang mirip bisa difix seperti itu
  1. 03:14:395 (3) -
  2. 03:13:361 (2) -
  3. 03:12:740 (1) -
  4. 03:07:775 (1) -
  5. 03:21:017 (1) -
  6. 03:25:982 (1,2) -
  7. 03:27:637 (3,4) -
  • pilih diantara ini
  1. 03:52:257 (9) - sejajarin sama 03:51:844 (7) -
  2. 03:52:464 (10) - nazi, 4 grid kiri
03:53:499 (4) - http://puu.sh/xfSe , gw liat 03:54:119 (6) - flip dari (4) ya ?, itu juga dibikin kaya gitu pointnya :)
03:53:395 (3,4,8) - gw harap posisinya sama semua ini... (gw liat (3) sama (8) beda sekitar 8px, jadi kerasa aneh)

^^

Download: LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Another Rei's Part].osu
Last edited by Rei Hakurei , edited 2 times in total.
Frizz
4,131 posts
Joined April 2011
Frizz

ikari_kyon wrote:

  1. 02:39:844 ~ le random whistleing :o They weren't there when I first mapped my own part :<
  2. 03:02:809 (1) - make a moar nice to eyes slider? done
    SPOILER
    104,104,182809,6,0,B|80:160|136:288|256:320|376:288|432:160|408:104,1,510,2|2
>w<

Download: LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Frizz's Part].osu
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu

ikari_kyon wrote:

[Collab]

dunno if you know that I dont like collabs ;_; well lets try
  1. 00:37:775 (2) - try to get a better "inhert" on previous slider, rotate this maybe some -16º also maybe you want to improve the shape of previous slider fixed
  2. 00:39:637 (1,2,3,4) - ehm use the same spacing that used on 00:39:119 (2,3)? tell me the reason of using a higher spacing please o: already fixed this issue :(
  3. 00:52:361 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3) - x_x spacingfaewopn ^
Download: LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [shikyu's Part].osu
Aoitenshi
711 posts
Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
[Collab]03:06:119 ~ off-topic 1/4 sliders :o

Leorda wrote:

[Collab rules]
  1. No overmapped
I'm not really sure about it... Maybe one more opinion and I'll change it. (Notice Frizz & Rei_Fan's Stream)
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Here you go~

http://up.ppy.sh/files/existence.rar
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
Update~

thx ikari_kyon.... Must find MAT
Jzh Zehnichi
70 posts
Joined October 2010
Jzh Zehnichi
really sorry for the late update

http://puu.sh/z54a

and yeah, i think this one is ready for MAT
Roddie
osu! Alumni
1,468 posts
Joined June 2009
Roddie
Hey there.

We would have gone through a full in-game mod but we only got one part of it done. Oh well. might as well post in the chatlog and my mod post.

General
  1. Might as well add in the epilepsy warning. Since the Storyboard is giving out a bit of flash.
Normal

Here is the chatlog.

Chatlog
I wanted to do irc modding
15:58 <Roddie> : ready to go through with it?
15:58 <Leorda> : wel, depends, if your mod is long, I can't if short, I can
15:58 <Roddie> : There are things I would like to discuss you with really
15:59 <Roddie> : something a bit important
15:59 <Leorda> : what is it?
15:59 <Roddie> : haha...
15:59 <Roddie> : its about your normal
16:00 <Leorda> : huh?
16:00 <Roddie> : well, your normal diff is fine but I'm concern about the difficulty star rating
16:00 <Roddie> : I know its not right all the time
16:01 <Roddie> : but think you can try to lower it?
16:01 <Leorda> : lower what?
16:02 <Roddie> : the difficulty star rating
16:02 <Roddie> : find a way to lower it just a little bit
16:02 <Leorda> : how about 3.000 stars?
16:02 <Leorda> : *3.00
16:02 <Roddie> : sure
16:02 <Roddie> : that works
16:02 <Leorda> : ok
16:02 <Leorda> : done
16:03 <Roddie> : oh that's it?
16:03 <Roddie> : okay
16:03 <Leorda> : I did OD -1
16:03 <Roddie> : alright
16:03 <Roddie> : also
16:03 <Roddie> : 01:15:223-
16:04 <Roddie> : a new combo here isn't fitting here really
16:04 <Leorda> : but it follow the stanza D:
16:04 <Roddie> : 01:28:464-
16:04 <Roddie> : what about this one?
16:05 <Leorda> : oh no
16:05 <Leorda> : I remove at 01:15:223 (2) -
16:05 <Roddie> : very well[code][/code]

Yasora's Hard
  1. 01:20:188 (1)-A finish on the beginning would be fitting.
Insane
  1. 02:23:085 (1, 2)-The 1st slider's hitburst and slider body is covering the 2nd slider and the reserve arrow. I advise you to fix this issue. Credit goes to Miya for pointing this out.

Collab.
  1. 03:49:154 (Jzh Zehnichi)-A new combo here is not really needed.
  2. 03:59:085 (Jzh Zehnichi) (1)-Did you forgot to add a finish here? I find a finish here very fitting.
  3. 03:56:395 (Jzh Zehnichi) (4, 5)-The 4th slider's hitburst is covering the reverse arrow of the 5th slider. I advise you to fix this issue as well. Credit goes to Miya again for pointing this out.
Me and Miya agreed that this map needs to be looked at by other modders.

I'll star this for now.
Yasora
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Joined May 2010
Yasora
thanks '~'
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
All fixed, thx Roddie. And I promise, I will ask more modder to mod this.... orz

@Jzh Zehnichi : aku udah fix part kamu....
Saten
Global Moderator
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Joined August 2010
Saten
[General]
I'd prefer if you used silenced slider-slides

[Collab]
01:30:119 (1) - try to stack this better with 01:29:085 (4) ?
02:12:637 (12) - why start this on a blue tick? I suggest you start it at 02:12:740 instead
02:19:361 (4) - Ctrl+R?
02:26:188 - feels empty here
02:36:533 (2,4,6) - 1 grid up
02:37:982 (8) - NC
02:43:361 (4) - NC here as well, otherwise it look like a tricky part
03:02:809 (1) - whistle on both sides
03:57:430 (6) - NC

[Insane]
01:07:775 (5) - NC
01:46:671 - use 60% volume here
02:23:085 (1) - add another repeat here (and Ctrl+R)? fits better imo
03:06:947 (4) - NC

[Hard]
AR+1 (AR 7 feels more comfortable imo)
01:26:395 (6,1) - NC on (6) instead

[Normal]
AR+1 (I don't think it would hurt)
01:15:223 (2) - is this here on purpose?
01:46:671 - 60% volume here
02:09:844 (1,1) - aren't these two kinda too close to each-other?
02:50:809 (4) - spacing error kinda


The Collab had most issues, the rest were fine imo~

Good luck =w=/
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
Collab:
fixed from 02:12:533 - 02:26:188

fixed for hard diff

thanks~
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
hi from my mod Q ^.^

Collab

00:43:154(3,4) - stack better
00:52:878 - remove clap
01:30:947 - i think better make so http://puu.sh/Ar15 really sound on music
01:53:292(2,3,4,5) - with whistle it sound better
02:03:430(1,3) - make this sliders more symmetric
03:02:809 - ^
03:06:119 - put here volume 50% >.< 100% it's SO A LOT OF\

Insane

00:31:361(3,1) - stack better
00:32:809 - end this slider on white tick and add note on red
01:49:982 - make this slider symmetric http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/340316
01:53:706 - maybe you make here break time?
02:01:568 - add finish
02:03:223 - ^
02:04:878 - ^
02:06:533 - ^
02:08:188 - ^

Hard

00:39:223 - add note
00:52:464 - ^
01:26:602 - i think better end slider on red tick and add note on white
01:57:223 - make here volume 5%

Soft sound very good *O*

Normal

AR -1

00:42:740 - remove this note
01:13:568(1,2) - as it to play to beginners????? http://puu.sh/Arhw correct it
01:16:464 - ^
02:06:119(7,1) - unstack this (correct spacing)
02:55:361(3,4,1) - correct spacing

I think this Normal very difficult for beginners ;w; better make it eaiser or make easy diff :shock:

It's all for me. Nice song and map, good luck~~
Rei Hakurei
1,983 posts
Joined February 2011
Rei Hakurei
Before checking mods,
02:23:085 is start of my part, why my part is totally changed till 02:26:395 (1) ?
I don't remember such that pattern..
02:23:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) ? i don't recall it. I have my backup.

[Saten's Mod]
02:26:188 - feels empty here this point i recall correctly is stream
02:36:533 (2,4,6) - 1 grid up ok
02:37:982 (8) - NC in this backup, i have NC'd ones

also, leo-chan haven't updated my part from previous mod :(

here

LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Another Rei's Part].osu

(click the filename to open, press CTRL+S to save the file!)
Jzh Zehnichi
70 posts
Joined October 2010
Jzh Zehnichi
thanks leo for fixing my part and sorry since i having hard time to get online lately :(
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
thx Saten and Katty for mod

@all collabers : aku udah fix buat kalian
Jinxy
2,777 posts
Joined February 2009
Jinxy
[SB]
Just being grammar nazi, but on 00:20:602, it should be "Proudly made by Indonesian MAPPERS". You can ignore this if changing the image would cause problems in the SB though, since it's rather minor.

[Normal]
00:34:257 (1,2,3) - Hm, wouldn't this look better if 2 was on the vertical axis? Symmetry and all.
03:25:982 (1,2,3) - I would suggest the same thing here but the distance snapping makes it impossible, so you could keep it or move the previous beats around so 3 is on the vertical axis.

[Yasora's Hard]
01:49:982 (1,1) - Cool sliders, but they aren't perfectly round, if you compare the slider border with the approach circle:
SPOILER
03:32:602 (1,1,1,1) - This... isn't really interesting. 1 beat then break then 1 beat... I would suggest mapping them out a little more like 03:45:844 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) and so on.

[Insane]
k I guess.

[Collab]
03:02:809 (1) - This slider could look a lot more better by being symmetrical. Use more slider points and Ctrl-H often to check if it's symmetrical.
I do not like Ain's spacing in parts like 03:07:775 (1,2,3,4,5), but it's an Insane map so I not really care much. It's still a jerk move though.
Last edited by Jinxy , edited 1 time in total.
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
thanks for mod

update my diff, leo
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
[General]
  1. prouds.png should say "Proudly made by Indonesian MAPPERS. It's not a big deal if it's a hassle to change though.
  2. 01:46:671 to 01:59:706 - I'm not sure why you guys mapped this part, apart from the small vocal part there's barely any music here. I think it would've been better with a break.

[Normal]

01:17:913 (4) - Delete to follow vocal?
01:46:671 (1) - Silence ticks?
01:49:982 (1) - ^
02:11:550 (1) - Move to 1/4 ~ 02:11:602

A bit hard for a normal but it's nice.

[Yasora's Hard]

01:22:464 (5) - Move this up 2-3 squares (grid 4), it looks neater.
01:29:706 (3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Move right 3-4 squares, makes 01:29:706 (3,1) - look neater next to 01:29:085 (2) - in game.
01:46:671 to 01:54:947 - Ticks are sounding bad on these sliders. I think it's better if they're silenced.
01:46:671 (1) - Shouldn't this end at 01:47:292 to follow the vocal?
01:49:982 (1) - You could probably silence the end, it sounds better.
01:53:292 (1) - ^
01:55:361 (1) - ^

Nice hard.

[Insane]

00:39:844 (3) - Align with 00:39:637 (2) - left a bit.
01:31:775 (1) - Move right so it doesn't overlap with 01:31:361 (4) - in game.
01:31:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Honestly, I think 1/8 returning slider to 1/4 stream is awkward something like 02:11:499 (1,2) - is less awkward to play imo.
01:49:982 (1) - Ticks sound bad. Silence them?
01:55:568 (1) - Silence the end.
02:03:223 (1) - This finish seems too loud, 50-70% volume is good imo.
02:06:533 (1) - ^ you could incease the volume a bit maybe as the song gets louder? =D
02:24:740 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Again I think this plays awkwardly. Also you seem to be missing a return on 02:24:740 (2) - because the song still has 1/8 beat here.
02:28:050 (1) - Align with 02:27:637 (5) - move left.
03:30:844 - Note? Stream sound is still here.
03:30:947 - ^ Start the spinner at 03:31:050 - if you do this.
03:32:602 - I think it'd be awesome if you added a note here.

Apart from the 1/8 returning slider to stream I really like this, very smooth.

[Collab]

Niva

01:47:292 (1,2) - Ticks sound bad. Silence? Also I think you should silence the return on 01:48:119 (2) - because that too sounds bad (yes I know you placed whistle lol).
01:53:292 (2,3,4,5) - Got 100s right here. It doesn't follow anything, it's sight readable but you shouldn't have to. Also the whistles sound bad; tbh I can't think of anything else that would work well except a spinner which is why I'd have left this as break time.

Yasora

02:12:223 (8,9,10,11,12) - Why no custom whistle here? Why not add whistle to 02:11:706 (3) - and 02:12:326 (9) - and 02:12:533 (11) - to keep the pattern consistent. Or maybe just remove all the whistle?
02:13:982 to 02:24:533 - I would've liked to have seen more 1/4 here to follow the rhythm of this part because 1/2 just sounds plain for an Insane. I think you can make this more exciting by following the rhythm of the song more closely.
02:24:740 (6,7,8,9) - Hmm 1/8 returning slider to 1/4 stream, this is awkward imo.
02:35:396 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistle.
02:36:740 (3) - ^
02:37:361 (6) - ^
02:37:568 (7) - ^ to the end.
02:37:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think all this should be custom whistle because the drum beat is heavy.

Frizz925

02:47:292 (4,5,6) - Move this further away from 02:46:464 (1,2,3) - the way it's spaced is deceptive, it looks like you'll repeat the stream rhythm of 02:42:533 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
03:02:602 - Note? Feels empty.
03:02:809 (1) - Hmm why follow the vocal here when you ignore it for the whole of your part? But if you want to follow the extended vocal it should end at 03:04:464 - it sounds much better.

Ain053

  1. Increase the volume at 03:06:119 it's odd to have this section suddenly quiet when the previous one was double the volume. Also to stick with the majority of the map I'd suggest using less custom whistle on this section and follow a similar pattern to the others.
  2. The way you spaced 1/4 is at odd compared with the rest of the map. D:
03:20:189 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,1,2,3,4,5) - Mega copy paste! It's only a short part, would it be hard to map something new?
03:29:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - A bit of a difficulty jump?

Jzh Zehnichi

03:46:154 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This rhythm is odd, I think you should follow the synth more closely. If not 1/2 would work, but synth would definitely be better.
03:49:154 (15) - Remove normal whistle.
03:52:775 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Same thing I said about 03:46:154 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - follow the synth more closely.

Mmm overall I think the collab could be more cohesive and some parts could work on following the synth of the song better since it's the most prominent part. I'm also surprised there's no Leo in the collab! =P

I think the collab diff would benefit from a bit more modding.
Rei Hakurei
1,983 posts
Joined February 2011
Rei Hakurei
(yasora part so long O_O and i didn't mentioned, should i say LOL ?)
02:13:982 to 02:24:533 - I would've liked to have seen more 1/4 here to follow the rhythm of this part because 1/2 just sounds plain for an Insane. I think you can make this more exciting by following the rhythm of the song more closely. idk why i should follow the style during my phase.., well.. there's a mod that makes me lowers the beat intensity.... ;_; because the "style" should be similar or somekind like that... but when i see the older collabs... there's a mapper that out-of-range from average style....
02:24:740 (6,7,8,9) - Hmm 1/8 returning slider to 1/4 stream, this is awkward imo. Hold then Go, iirc the purpose...
02:35:396 (3,4,5,6) - Add whistle. 3,4,6 yes
02:36:740 (3) - ^ i did it on purpose
02:37:361 (6) - ^ ^
02:37:568 (7) - ^ to the end. ^
02:37:982 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think all this should be custom whistle because the drum beat is heavy. ^

go there.

LiLA'c Records - Existence value and Firm faith (Leorda) [Another Rei's Part].osu

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Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
my part just until 02:26:395 :v

also fixed from 02:11:499 - 02:12:740

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60,80,142257,2,0,B|92:50|92:50|156:94|212:74,1,170,0|2
292,108,142878,2,0,B|332:144|316:200,1,85,0|0
208,192,143292,6,0,B|168:216|128:192,1,85,0|2
128,72,143706,2,0,B|104:112,1,42.5
216,72,144016,2,0,B|240:112,1,42.5,0|2
320,192,144326,1,0
320,192,144533,1,2
400,104,144740,2,0,B|400:80,16,21.25,0|0|0|0|2|0|0|0|2|0|0|0|0|0|2|0|0
424,120,145671,1,2
424,152,145775,1,2
448,176,145878,1,2
448,208,145982,1,0
472,232,146085,1,2
472,264,146188,1,2
448,288,146292,1,0
416,288,146395,5,6
344,192,146602,1,2
272,288,146809,1,2
200,192,147016,1,2
168,192,147119,2,0,B|144:192|112:160|112:136,1,85,0|2
112,104,147430,1,0
200,24,147637,2,2,B|248:24|272:64,1,85
392,64,148050,2,0,B|368:104|328:120,2,85,0|2|2
416,184,148671,1,0
384,184,148775,1,2
320,288,148982,1,2
320,256,149085,1,0
432,304,149292,1,0
432,304,149499,1,2
320,352,149706,5,0
176,312,149913,1,2
144,176,150119,1,2
224,88,150326,6,0,B|272:88,1,42.5,0|2
384,88,150637,2,0,B|336:88,1,42.5,2|0
392,192,150947,1,2
392,224,151050,1,0
376,248,151154,1,2
256,248,151361,2,0,B|264:296|224:320,1,85,0|2
128,248,151775,1,2
80,136,151982,1,0
88,104,152085,1,2
104,80,152188,1,0
128,64,152292,1,2
160,56,152395,1,0
280,56,152602,2,0,B|368:56,1,85,2|2
456,136,153016,5,4
328,248,153223,1,0
200,136,153430,2,0,B|184:72|120:40,2,127.5,4|2|0
64,192,154257,1,2
32,336,154464,1,2
256,80,154878,5,2
256,80,155085,1,2
80,264,155396,1,0
80,264,155603,1,0
336,272,155913,1,0
336,272,156119,1,2
168,232,156326,5,2
336,192,156533,1,2
168,160,156740,1,0
336,120,156947,1,2
168,88,157154,1,2
336,48,157361,1,0
168,16,157568,2,0,B|120:16|96:56,1,85,2|0
96,224,157982,5,2
96,256,158085,1,2
120,280,158188,1,0
120,320,158292,1,0
152,344,158395,1,2
192,344,158499,1,2
216,320,158602,1,0
256,320,158706,1,0
280,296,158809,2,0,B|368:272|384:168,2,170,0|0|2
328,152,159844,5,0
336,136,159947,1,0
344,120,160051,2,0,B|328:80|256:40,1,85,0|2
197,58,160464,1,8
128,104,160672,5,0
112,120,160775,1,0
104,136,160879,2,0,B|120:176|192:216,1,85,0|2
232,240,161292,1,8
320,240,161499,5,0
440,192,161706,1,2
320,144,161913,1,0
440,96,162119,1,8
320,48,162326,1,0
192,48,162533,5,2
176,64,162637,1,0
160,80,162740,2,0,B|80:176,3,85,0|0|0|2
96,168,163464,1,0
88,192,163568,1,0
88,216,163672,1,0
88,240,163775,2,0,B|104:296|160:328,1,85,8|0
216,312,164188,5,2
304,312,164395,2,0,B|352:272|376:216,1,85,2|8
336,168,164809,2,0,B|240:136,1,85,0|2
368,96,165223,2,0,B|256:64,1,85,0|8
200,64,165637,2,0,B|96:96,1,85,2|2
200,160,166050,2,0,B|96:192,1,85,0|8
80,264,166464,5,0
80,288,166568,1,0
80,312,166671,2,0,B|112:360|184:360,2,85,2|0|8
96,224,167292,1,0
117,213,167396,1,0
139,203,167499,2,0,B|196:211|226:276,2,85,2|0|8
80,144,168119,5,0
200,104,168326,1,2
80,56,168533,1,0
200,16,168740,1,8
328,16,168947,5,0
344,32,169050,1,0
360,48,169154,2,0,B|400:88|424:152,1,85,2|0
416,200,169568,1,8
408,288,169775,1,0
392,304,169878,1,0
376,320,169982,2,0,B|336:360|272:384,1,85,2|0
224,376,170396,1,8
144,352,170602,2,0,B|80:312,4,42.5,0|0|2|0|0
208,296,171223,5,0
224,280,171327,1,0
240,264,171430,1,0
256,248,171534,1,0
264,224,171637,1,2
272,200,171741,1,0
272,176,171844,1,0
272,152,171947,1,0
272,128,172050,1,0
272,104,172154,1,0
272,80,172257,1,0
184,80,172464,2,0,B|184:-8,1,85,2|0
184,80,172878,6,0,B|104:112|48:208,1,170,4|8
128,344,173706,2,0,B|232:352|312:296,1,170,2|8
328,144,174533,2,0,B|248:80,2,85,2|0|8
480,216,175361,1,2
360,264,175568,1,2
480,312,175775,1,8
360,352,175982,1,2
336,352,176085,1,2
312,352,176188,2,0,B|224:352|160:272,1,170,0|8
160,192,176809,1,2
160,168,176912,1,0
160,144,177015,2,0,B|160:56|280:32,1,170,2|8
344,80,177637,6,0,B|432:104,1,85,0|2
280,136,178051,2,0,B|192:160,1,85,0|8
352,176,178464,2,0,B|440:200,1,85,2|2
288,232,178878,2,0,B|200:256,1,85,0|8
120,256,179292,1,0
80,184,179499,5,2
80,161,179602,1,0
80,138,179706,2,0,B|102:81|142:41,1,85,0|8
192,112,180119,1,2
192,135,180222,1,0
192,158,180326,2,0,B|169:214|129:254,1,85,0|0
104,304,180740,1,8
176,344,180947,6,0,B|224:328|248:272,1,85,0|2
216,136,181361,2,0,B|168:152|144:208,1,85,0|8
296,248,181775,2,0,B|344:232|368:176,1,85,2|2
336,40,182189,2,0,B|288:56|264:112,1,85,0|8
64,158,182809,6,0,B|68:328|448:332|447:159,1,510,2|2
256,192,184464,12,0,185706
48,96,186119,6,0,B|96:96,1,42.5,6|2
144,64,186326,2,0,B|200:64,1,42.5,2|2
240,24,186533,2,0,B|270:61|240:104,1,85,8|2
48,288,186947,6,0,B|96:288,1,42.5,2|2
144,320,187154,2,0,B|200:320,1,42.5,2|2
240,360,187361,2,0,B|270:323|240:280,1,85,8|2
363,261,187775,6,2,B|422:228|424:160|362:121,1,170,2|8
336,192,188395,1,2
272,160,188602,2,2,B|224:160,1,42.5
272,224,188809,2,2,B|224:224,1,42.5
88,192,189016,2,0,B|184:192,1,85,10|0
240,80,189430,6,2,B|296:80,1,42.5
378,112,189637,2,2,B|336:112,1,42.5
432,72,189844,2,0,B|462:109|432:152,1,85,8|2
240,304,190257,6,2,B|296:304,1,42.5
378,272,190464,2,2,B|336:272,1,42.5
432,312,190671,2,0,B|462:275|432:232,1,85,8|2
360,192,191085,6,0,B|184:192,1,170,2|8
144,128,191706,1,2
80,160,191913,2,2,B|32:160,1,42.5
80,224,192119,2,2,B|24:224,1,42.5
144,256,192326,1,8
144,128,192533,1,0
187,64,192740,6,2,B|223:5|291:7|324:66,1,170,2|8
325,320,193361,2,2,B|288:378|220:376|187:317,1,170,2|2
212,192,193982,6,2,B|268:192,1,42.5,10|2
316,192,194188,2,2,B|364:192,1,42.5,2|2
384,123,194395,2,2,B|443:159|441:227|382:259,1,170,2|8
127,260,195016,2,2,B|70:224|72:156|129:123,1,170,2|2
256,48,195637,1,10
256,48,195740,1,2
256,48,195844,1,2
256,48,195947,1,2
256,48,196050,5,2
160,304,196464,1,8
400,152,196878,1,2
112,152,197292,1,8
352,304,197706,1,2
256,48,198119,1,8
432,296,198533,6,2,B|432:344,1,42.5
368,240,198740,2,2,B|368:288,1,42.5
432,184,198947,2,2,B|432:232,1,42.5,8|2
368,128,199154,2,2,B|368:176,1,42.5
464,96,199361,6,0,B|416:96,1,42.5,6|2
368,64,199568,2,0,B|312:64,1,42.5,2|2
272,24,199775,2,0,B|242:61|272:104,1,85,8|2
464,288,200189,6,0,B|416:288,1,42.5,2|2
368,320,200396,2,0,B|312:320,1,42.5,2|2
272,360,200603,2,0,B|242:323|272:280,1,85,8|2
149,261,201017,6,2,B|90:228|88:160|150:121,1,170,2|8
176,192,201637,1,2
240,160,201844,2,2,B|288:160,1,42.5
240,224,202051,2,2,B|288:224,1,42.5
424,192,202258,2,0,B|328:192,1,85,10|0
272,80,202672,6,2,B|216:80,1,42.5
134,112,202879,2,2,B|176:112,1,42.5
80,72,203086,2,0,B|50:109|80:152,1,85,8|2
272,304,203499,6,2,B|216:304,1,42.5
134,272,203706,2,2,B|176:272,1,42.5
80,312,203913,2,0,B|50:275|80:232,1,85,8|2
152,192,204326,6,0,B|328:192,1,170,2|8
368,128,204948,1,2
432,160,205155,2,2,B|480:160,1,42.5
432,224,205361,2,2,B|488:224,1,42.5
368,256,205568,1,8
368,128,205775,1,2
325,64,205982,6,2,B|289:5|221:7|188:66,1,170,2|8
187,320,206603,2,2,B|224:378|292:376|325:317,1,170,2|2
300,192,207224,6,2,B|244:192,1,42.5,10|2
196,192,207430,2,2,B|148:192,1,42.5,2|2
127,123,207637,2,2,B|69:159|71:227|129:259,1,170,2|8
384,260,208258,2,2,B|442:224|440:156|382:123,1,170,2|2
256,48,208879,1,10
176,176,209292,6,2,B|232:176,1,42.5
336,176,209499,2,2,B|264:176,1,42.5
176,240,209706,2,2,B|232:240,1,42.5,10|2
336,240,209913,2,2,B|264:240,1,42.5
176,304,210119,2,2,B|232:304,1,42.5
336,304,210326,2,2,B|264:304,1,42.5
176,368,210533,2,2,B|232:368,1,42.5,10|2
336,368,210740,2,2,B|264:368,1,42.5
256,192,210947,12,6,212602
256,192,225844,5,4
184,88,226154,1,0
184,88,226257,2,0,B|155:91|155:91|163:125|163:125|128:134,1,85,0|2
328,88,226775,1,0
328,88,226878,2,0,B|356:91|356:91|348:125|348:125|383:134,1,85,0|2
184,296,227395,1,0
184,296,227499,2,0,B|155:292|155:292|163:258|163:258|128:249,1,85,0|2
328,296,228016,1,0
328,296,228119,1,0
400,248,228326,1,2
416,208,228430,1,0
400,168,228533,1,0
256,152,228740,1,8
344,40,228947,1,8
200,56,229154,1,2
128,344,229568,6,0,B|213:344,1,85,0|2
296,192,230188,2,0,B|192:192,1,85,0|2
312,56,230809,2,0,B|397:56,1,85,0|2
400,224,231430,1,0
320,264,231637,1,0
288,296,231740,1,0
248,304,231844,1,0
112,248,232050,1,8
232,168,232257,1,8
112,88,232464,1,2
324,88,232775,5,0
324,88,232878,2,0,B|350:127|318:167,1,85,0|2
128,152,233395,1,0
128,152,233499,2,0,B|96:192|128:240,1,85,0|2
324,240,234016,1,0
324,240,234119,2,0,B|356:280|324:328,1,85,0|2
124,232,234740,1,0
124,152,234947,1,4
288,192,235361,1,4
448,84,235775,5,2
348,188,235982,1,0
300,52,236188,1,8
204,160,236395,2,0,B|156:160,5,42.5
120,176,237016,2,0,B|88:176,7,21.25
164,192,237430,6,0,B|164:244,1,42.5,2|0
204,256,237637,2,0,B|252:256,1,42.5
292,304,237844,2,0,B|249:304,1,42.5,2|0
292,256,238050,2,0,B|340:256,1,42.5
380,212,238257,2,0,B|337:212,1,42.5,2|0
380,164,238464,2,0,B|428:164,1,42.5,2|2
380,116,238671,2,0,B|337:116,1,42.5,2|0
292,72,238878,2,2,B|340:72,1,42.5,0|0
334,72,239085,5,4
Rei Hakurei
1,983 posts
Joined February 2011
Rei Hakurei
i'm so confused.

give us the truth.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
I PM Ain053, but he had no response in this day.... Maybe because of exam....

Shulin wrote:

  1. Increase the volume at 03:06:119 it's odd to have this section suddenly quiet when the previous one was double the volume. Also to stick with the majority of the map I'd suggest using less custom whistle on this section and follow a similar pattern to the others. I remove some whistle, I hope you like my hitsound what I did
  2. The way you spaced 1/4 is at odd compared with the rest of the map. D: Um, just sayin' If you see the 1/4 slider, just imagine that 1/4 slider is a circle. Just sayin' correct me if I am wrong ><
thx Shulin :D I fix those collab diff, since all Indo mappers are lazy D:
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora

Leorda wrote:

since all Indo mappers are lazy D:
I'm always fix my part and my diff but seems you never update it
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Yasora wrote:

I'm always fix my part and my diff but seems you never update it
oh, but I update it.... BTW, where is your diff? Did you update your diff?
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
udah di fix, cuma males aplod..
lagi ga mood skrng
ntar aku kasih kok
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hi Leo :D

[General]
  1. "prouds.png" grammar isn't all alright. The correct way to write that is "Proudly made by an Indonesian MAPPER!", I think. That grammar should be applied to every difficulty mapped only by 1 mapper. "Proudly made by Indonesian MAPPERS!" <- it should be writen like that and applied only in your collab difficulty. Not really an issue, just saying~ You can keep it like that, I guess.
  2. Why does "black.jpg" dissapear so awfully at 04:02:395? You should make it dissapear slow and gradually with a fade effect.
[Normal]
  1. 00:29:706 (3) - This slider looks kinda weird.. I mean, out of place with such a straight shape. Try making a blanket pattern, more like this. I think that it looks and plays much better.
  2. 00:34:257 (1,2,3) - Hmmm I'm not trying to be nazi, but with a pattern like this, you can make some symmetry since those 2 sliders have the same shape.
  3. 01:18:119 (5) - Another minor detail: this note is not placed with the same spacing as (3) and (4) (this note is a bit far away than the other two ones). Not a big deal, obviously. It's just a spacing error. You should fix it.
  4. 01:48:326 (1) - I don't find this combo really necessary. The song hasn't changed in anything so I don't get the purpose of this note. I suggest you to remove this combo. It will be also better because short combos (1~2) aren't good for beginners because they might get confused about when they have to click that note with nc.
  5. 02:11:602 (1) - This spinner starts way too early after clicking the slider (1) for a Normal difficulty. You should try something else here to avoid this. I strongly suggest you this because you don't have an Easy diff, so try to make this difficulty a bit suitable for those players that plays Easy diffs too. A easy way to avoid this is removing the repeat of (1).
  6. 02:26:809 (1) - After spinning, this note gets overlapped by the spinner's comboburst, spinner-osu and all that stuff. You should move this note a tad down so beginners can read it more easily.
  7. 02:32:809 (6) - A stream like this is not a good idea when this diff is your easiest one, so I suggest you to remove this note. I know that the stream is kinda slow, but it is still a bad idea imo.
  8. 02:42:533 (4) - ^ just the same, but instead of removing that slider, just replace it with a note.
  9. 02:53:706 (1) - This note is way too far away from the spinner's centre. That would be difficult for beginners to click after recovering their hands for a so short time. You should move it more closer to make it more newbie friendly.
  10. 03:12:533 (7) - This note should have nc instead of being at 03:12:740 (1), I think. The change of vocals happens at (7), not at (1). Also, a combo of 7 is a bit high for a Normal diff.
  11. 03:20:188 (1) - Same thing about notes too far away from the spinner's centre.

    Cool. Pretty challenging, but with a nice rhythm. You should consider adding an Easy since this difficulty is.. ehmmm.. not very appropiate to be the easiest difficulty of your mapset.
[Yasora's Hard]
  1. 00:38:809 (4,5) - That empty space between this two notes feels weird and it doesn't fit with the vocals at all. I suggest you to try this rhythm. I think that it follows better the voice.
  2. 00:52:050 (4,5) - ^ Same thing here, and I suggest you to try out here the same rhythm that I suggested you before.
  3. 01:09:223 (5) - Wow this slider shape surprised me. You make so many nice sliders, but this one looks weird and lazy. It makes your blanket combo look bad. Try to improve this shape a bit! Like this, I guess.~
  4. 01:26:602 (1) - I really dislike how this slider sounds. It just don't follow good the music. Try this rhythm. It follows much better the music to me. I also changed the ncs there intentionally, because I think that they fit more the vocals if they are like that.
  5. 01:46:671 (1) - If you're following the vocals, this slider should end at the red tick (01:47:292). Sounds better imo.
  6. 01:49:154 (4) - This note doesn't make any sense since there's no sound, so you should remove it. It feels weird to click a note when it's not following anything.
  7. 03:12:533 (1,2) - Interesting pattern, but what it matters is the rhythm, not the look, and that's why I dislike this two sliders. This ruins your pattern, but it sounds much better (imo). I think that is better to keep a good rhythm rather than making weird rhythms so you can adjust sliders and make artistic designs.
  8. 03:19:982 (2,3) - ^ Same thing as above. Sounds kinda weird. I think that you should make this part more like this to keep following properly the music.
  9. 03:21:430 (6) - ^ I suggest you to try this rhythm out and see if you like how it sounds.
  10. 03:23:292 (2) - ^ Try this instead, to follow better the music?
  11. 03:28:050 (3) - This slider sounds weird too, but in this case, I suggest you to keep it. Just move it to 03:28:257 and add a note at 03:28:050 to fill that empty space.
  12. 03:44:188 (1) - A finish at the end of this slider fits perfectly with the music in my opinion. Try it out and see if you like how it sounds.

    Nice! Some rhythms could be improved (I mentioned most of them in my mod) so I hope to be helpful. Oh, also, I think that this difficulty can be better hitsounded. I mean, it sounds really good, but you could use more samples, not just that custom soft-hitwhistle.
[Insane]
  1. 01:48:947 (5,6,7) - These notes sound off because there's no sound. Like I mentioned already in another diff (I don't remember which one), notes that aren't following a sound feel weird to click, so I think that it is better if you delete them.
  2. 03:30:947 (1) - I don't like how this spinner skips those vocals like that.. I suggest you to make this spinner end at 03:31:982, and add notes like this. It's ok, since this is a Insane diff.
  3. 03:55:775 (1) - ^ I just don't like how you skip a mappable part like this.. so streamy. I think that you should map this part, since this is a Insane diff, and skipping with a spinner like this is like a waste imo, 'cause you can perfectly add a cool and challenging final stream to end the difficulty.

    Nothing is wrong with this difficulty. It's really good, I like it a lot. It reminds me a bit my mapping style haha~
[Collab]

  • shinkyu's part:
  1. 00:38:809 (1,2) - To follow better the vocals, I suggest you to replace this two notes with a slider. Sounds much better to me at least.

    Niva's part:

  2. 01:33:430 (5) - Due to the change of "melody", I think that adding a NC here is a good idea, specially because there's a break after clicking this note so it would fit good.
  3. 01:48:119 (2) - That whistle at the repeat of this slider doesn't sound good imo.. To follow the calm voice with whistles, I suggest you to remove this whistle here and then add it to the start of this slider.
  4. 01:54:947 (3,4,5) - There's no sound so I don't get the purpose of this notes. I already said "clicking notes when there's no sound feels weird". I prefer a lot a spinner at 01:55:361 instead of those notes.

    Yasora's part:

  5. 02:03:430 (1,2,3) - (1) and (3) don't fit with the music at all if you listen carefully. I think that making a 1/2 rhythm here fits more and sounds better (like this). Try it out and see if you like it too.
  6. 02:12:326 (9) - This combo is way too long. To follow better the music, and to avoid that, adding a nc here is a good idea since the stream changes and sounds "different" (I mean, the song).
  7. 02:25:671 (7) - ^ same thing here.

    Frizz925's part:

  8. 02:52:050 (9) - If you listen carefully, a nc here fits perfectly with the music imo.
  9. 02:56:188 (1) - ^ and again. It also avoids high combo number. That's another reason of why I suggest you this.

    Ain053's part:

  10. 03:30:947 (1) - Like I mentioned already about Leo's diff.. I dislike how this spinner skips the vocals.. so I suggest you to try this rhythm instead to avoid skipping unnecesarily like that.

    Jhz Zehnichi's part:

  11. 03:48:016 (8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,1) - This nc are kinda weird.. they don't seem to follow the music. I think that nc should be more like this to follow properly the music.
  12. 03:51:430 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,1) - ^ same thing here. I think that to follow the music properly, they have to be more like this.
  13. 03:54:740 (8) - ^ if you followed that, for consistency, you should add a nc here too.


    That's all. Interesting collab. Ain053's part dissapointed me to be honest. I hate copy paste.
A nicely made mapset. The map's diff spread would be more solid if it had an Easy but now it's too late, I think. Go get this ranked already! Good luck :3
Yasora
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Yasora
my diff
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200,24,147637,2,2,B|248:24|272:64,1,85
392,64,148050,6,0,B|368:104|328:120,2,85,0|2|2
416,184,148671,1,0
384,184,148775,1,2
320,288,148982,1,2
320,256,149085,1,0
432,304,149292,1,0
432,304,149499,1,2
320,352,149706,5,0
176,312,149913,1,2
144,176,150119,1,2
224,88,150326,6,0,B|272:88,1,42.5,0|2
384,88,150637,2,0,B|336:88,1,42.5,2|0
392,192,150947,1,2
392,224,151050,1,0
376,248,151154,1,2
256,248,151361,6,0,B|264:296|224:320,1,85,0|2
128,248,151775,1,2
80,136,151982,1,0
88,104,152085,1,2
104,80,152188,1,0
128,64,152292,1,2
160,56,152395,1,0
280,56,152602,2,0,B|368:56,1,85,2|2
456,136,153016,5,4
328,248,153223,1,0
200,136,153430,2,0,B|184:72|120:40,2,127.5,4|2|0
64,192,154257,1,2
32,336,154464,1,2
256,80,154878,5,2
256,80,155085,1,2
80,264,155396,1,2
80,264,155603,1,2
336,272,155913,1,0
336,272,156119,1,2
168,232,156326,5,2
336,192,156533,1,2
168,160,156740,1,0
336,120,156947,1,2
168,88,157154,1,2
336,48,157361,1,0
168,16,157568,2,0,B|120:16|96:56,1,85,2|0
96,224,157982,5,2
96,256,158085,1,2
120,280,158188,1,0
120,320,158292,1,0
152,344,158395,1,2
192,344,158499,1,2
216,320,158602,1,0
256,320,158706,1,0
280,296,158809,2,0,B|368:272|384:168,2,170,0|0|2
328,152,159844,5,0
336,136,159947,1,0
344,120,160051,2,0,B|328:80|256:40,1,85,0|2
197,58,160464,1,8
128,104,160672,5,0
112,120,160775,1,0
104,136,160879,2,0,B|120:176|192:216,1,85,0|2
232,240,161292,1,8
320,240,161499,5,0
440,192,161706,1,2
320,144,161913,1,0
440,96,162119,1,8
320,48,162326,1,0
192,48,162533,5,2
176,64,162637,1,0
160,80,162740,2,0,B|80:176,3,85,0|0|0|2
96,168,163464,1,0
88,192,163568,1,0
88,216,163672,1,0
88,240,163775,2,0,B|104:296|160:328,1,85,8|0
216,312,164188,5,2
304,312,164395,2,0,B|352:272|376:216,1,85,2|8
336,168,164809,2,0,B|240:136,1,85,0|2
368,96,165223,2,0,B|256:64,1,85,0|8
200,64,165637,2,0,B|96:96,1,85,2|2
228,140,166050,2,0,B|124:172,1,85,0|8
80,264,166464,5,0
80,288,166568,1,0
80,312,166671,2,0,B|112:360|184:360,2,85,2|0|8
132,216,167292,1,0
153,205,167396,1,0
175,195,167499,2,0,B|232:203|262:268,2,85,2|0|8
80,144,168119,5,0
200,104,168326,1,2
80,56,168533,1,0
200,16,168740,1,8
328,16,168947,5,0
344,32,169050,1,0
360,48,169154,2,0,B|400:88|424:152,1,85,2|0
416,200,169568,1,8
408,288,169775,1,0
392,304,169878,1,0
376,320,169982,2,0,B|336:360|272:384,1,85,2|0
224,376,170396,1,8
144,352,170602,2,0,B|80:312,4,42.5,0|0|2|0|0
208,296,171223,5,0
224,280,171327,1,0
240,264,171430,1,0
256,248,171534,1,0
264,224,171637,1,2
272,200,171741,1,0
272,176,171844,1,0
272,152,171947,1,0
272,128,172050,1,0
272,104,172154,1,0
272,80,172257,1,0
184,80,172464,2,0,B|184:-8,1,85,2|0
184,80,172878,6,0,B|104:112|48:208,1,170,4|8
128,344,173706,2,0,B|232:352|312:296,1,170,2|8
328,144,174533,2,0,B|248:80,2,85,2|0|8
480,216,175361,1,2
360,264,175568,1,2
480,312,175775,1,8
360,352,175982,1,2
336,352,176085,1,2
312,352,176188,2,0,B|224:352|160:272,1,170,0|8
160,192,176809,1,2
160,168,176912,1,0
160,144,177015,2,0,B|160:56|280:32,1,170,2|8
344,80,177637,6,0,B|432:104,1,85,0|2
280,136,178051,2,0,B|192:160,1,85,0|8
352,176,178464,2,0,B|440:200,1,85,2|2
288,232,178878,2,0,B|200:256,1,85,0|8
120,256,179292,1,0
80,184,179499,5,2
80,161,179602,1,0
80,138,179706,2,0,B|102:81|142:41,1,85,0|8
192,112,180119,1,2
192,135,180222,1,0
192,158,180326,2,0,B|169:214|129:254,1,85,0|0
104,304,180740,1,8
176,344,180947,6,0,B|224:328|248:272,1,85,0|2
216,136,181361,2,0,B|168:152|144:208,1,85,0|8
296,248,181775,2,0,B|344:232|368:176,1,85,2|2
336,40,182189,2,0,B|288:56|264:112,1,85,0|8
136,24,182602,1,0
64,158,182809,6,0,B|68:328|448:332|447:159,1,510,2|2
256,192,184464,12,0,185706
48,96,186119,6,0,B|96:96,1,42.5,6|0
144,64,186326,2,0,B|200:64,1,42.5,0|0
240,24,186533,2,0,B|270:61|240:104,1,85,8|2
48,288,186947,6,0,B|96:288,1,42.5,2|0
144,320,187154,2,0,B|200:320,1,42.5,0|0
240,360,187361,2,0,B|270:323|240:280,1,85,8|2
363,261,187775,6,2,B|422:228|424:160|362:121,1,170,2|8
336,192,188395,1,2
272,160,188602,2,2,B|224:160,1,42.5,2|0
272,224,188809,2,2,B|224:224,1,42.5,2|0
88,192,189016,2,0,B|184:192,1,85,10|2
240,80,189430,6,2,B|296:80,1,42.5,2|0
378,112,189637,2,2,B|336:112,1,42.5,0|0
432,72,189844,2,0,B|462:109|432:152,1,85,8|2
240,304,190257,6,2,B|296:304,1,42.5,2|0
378,272,190464,2,2,B|336:272,1,42.5,0|0
432,312,190671,2,0,B|462:275|432:232,1,85,8|2
360,192,191085,6,0,B|184:192,1,170,2|8
144,128,191706,1,2
80,160,191913,2,2,B|32:160,1,42.5,2|0
80,224,192119,2,2,B|24:224,1,42.5,2|0
144,256,192326,1,8
144,128,192533,1,2
187,64,192740,6,2,B|223:5|291:7|324:66,1,170,2|8
325,320,193361,2,2,B|288:378|220:376|187:317,1,170,2|2
212,192,193982,6,2,B|268:192,1,42.5,10|0
316,192,194188,2,2,B|364:192,1,42.5,2|0
384,123,194395,2,2,B|443:159|441:227|382:259,1,170,2|8
127,260,195016,2,2,B|70:224|72:156|129:123,1,170,2|2
256,48,195637,1,10
256,48,195740,1,2
256,48,195844,1,2
256,48,195947,1,2
256,48,196050,5,2
160,304,196464,1,8
400,152,196878,1,2
112,152,197292,1,8
352,304,197706,1,2
256,48,198119,1,8
432,296,198533,6,2,B|432:344,1,42.5
368,240,198740,2,2,B|368:288,1,42.5
432,184,198947,2,2,B|432:232,1,42.5,8|2
368,128,199154,2,2,B|368:176,1,42.5
464,96,199361,6,0,B|416:96,1,42.5,6|0
368,64,199568,2,0,B|312:64,1,42.5,0|0
272,24,199775,2,0,B|242:61|272:104,1,85,8|2
464,288,200189,6,0,B|416:288,1,42.5,2|0
368,320,200396,2,0,B|312:320,1,42.5,0|0
272,360,200603,2,0,B|242:323|272:280,1,85,8|2
149,261,201017,6,2,B|90:228|88:160|150:121,1,170,2|8
176,192,201637,1,2
240,160,201844,2,2,B|288:160,1,42.5,2|0
240,224,202051,2,2,B|288:224,1,42.5,2|0
424,192,202258,2,0,B|328:192,1,85,10|2
272,80,202672,6,2,B|216:80,1,42.5,2|0
134,112,202879,2,2,B|176:112,1,42.5,0|0
80,72,203086,2,0,B|50:109|80:152,1,85,8|2
272,304,203499,6,2,B|216:304,1,42.5,2|0
134,272,203706,2,2,B|176:272,1,42.5,0|0
80,312,203913,2,0,B|50:275|80:232,1,85,8|2
152,192,204326,6,0,B|328:192,1,170,2|8
368,128,204948,1,2
432,160,205155,2,2,B|480:160,1,42.5,2|0
432,224,205361,2,2,B|488:224,1,42.5,2|0
368,256,205568,1,8
368,128,205775,1,2
325,64,205982,6,2,B|289:5|221:7|188:66,1,170,2|8
187,320,206603,2,2,B|224:378|292:376|325:317,1,170,2|2
300,192,207224,6,2,B|244:192,1,42.5,10|0
196,192,207430,2,2,B|148:192,1,42.5,2|0
127,123,207637,2,2,B|69:159|71:227|129:259,1,170,2|8
384,260,208258,2,2,B|442:224|440:156|382:123,1,170,2|2
256,48,208879,1,10
176,176,209292,6,2,B|232:176,1,42.5
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336,240,209913,2,2,B|264:240,1,42.5
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336,304,210326,2,2,B|264:304,1,42.5
176,368,210533,2,2,B|232:368,1,42.5,10|2
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256,192,225844,5,4
184,88,226154,1,0
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328,88,226775,1,0
328,88,226878,2,0,B|356:91|356:91|348:125|348:125|383:134,1,85,0|2
184,296,227395,1,0
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328,296,228016,1,0
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344,40,228947,1,8
200,56,229154,1,4
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296,192,230188,2,0,B|192:192,1,85,0|2
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400,224,231430,1,0
320,264,231637,1,0
288,296,231740,1,0
248,304,231844,1,0
112,248,232050,5,8
232,168,232257,1,8
112,88,232464,1,4
324,88,232775,5,0
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128,152,233395,1,0
128,152,233499,2,0,B|96:192|128:240,1,85,0|2
324,240,234016,1,0
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124,236,234740,1,0
128,152,234947,1,4
288,192,235361,1,4
448,84,235775,5,2
348,188,235982,1,0
300,52,236188,1,8
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380,116,238671,2,0,B|337:116,1,42.5,2|0
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376,72,239085,5,4
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu
My reply~

Kei wrote:

[Collab]

  • shinkyu's part: :o
  1. 00:38:809 (1,2) - To follow better the vocals, I suggest you to replace this two notes with a slider. Sounds much better to me at least. No change, I follow the instruments
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Kei wrote:

[General]
  1. "prouds.png" grammar isn't all alright. The correct way to write that is "Proudly made by an Indonesian MAPPER!", I think. That grammar should be applied to every difficulty mapped only by 1 mapper. "Proudly made by Indonesian MAPPERS!" <- it should be writen like that and applied only in your collab difficulty. Not really an issue, just saying~ You can keep it like that, I guess. // Well, if any MAT say this, I'll change
  2. Why does "black.jpg" dissapear so awfully at 04:02:395? You should make it dissapear slow and gradually with a fade effect. // Because when it closer to end, it will goes to ranking result
Everything fixed.... thx
merchat7
1,673 posts
Joined December 2010
merchat7
[General]
"prouds.png" grammar isn't all alright. The correct way to write that is "Proudly made by an Indonesian MAPPER!", I think. That grammar should be applied to every difficulty mapped only by 1 mapper. "Proudly made by Indonesian MAPPERS!" <- it should be writen like that and applied only in your collab difficulty. Not really an issue, just saying~ You can keep it like that, I guess.
I agree with this and I think you should fix this now rather than wait.

[Normal]

* = follow all if follow one

00:28:878 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/I5K6, don't have to do like this, but I feel you should put (2) higher, feel weird to hit (2) for me at current position.
00:31:154 (2) - Nicer for gameplay imo to have whistle here like 00:29:499 (2)
*00:33:430 (3) - Whistle at middle?
*00:41:292 (3) - Same as 00:33:430
*00:42:947 (2) - ^
00:48:740 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing better? (turn grid snap off) Spacing of (3) is really off to me.
00:49:775 (2,4) - Add whistle on (2) and begin of (4), make it nicer to play for me (since you have a very audible cue when you hit the notes, compare to now)
01:28:257 (2) - Whistle, similar to above, notice I mention to add hitsound when you use 1/2 rhythm to make them a bit easier to play.
01:46:671 (1,1) - Reduce the volume of these sliders tick?
01:55:568 (1) - Crescendo effect on the timing point for this spinner seem nicer than just one consistent volume.
02:05:706 (5,6,7) - Repeating slider again like (2)?
02:00:740 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/I63A Reason: listen to the sound on the first 4 white ticks after spinner, they all the same right? So it felt weird that you didn't put a hit circle on all the white ticks. Plus it's after a spinner so it's hard to get back into rhythm, that's why slider to make it easier. Repeating slider, listen to 02:01:982, that when the drum sound get louder, I don't think you want to make this part harder so just a slider instead of three hit circles.
02:56:188 (1,2,3) - This rhythm? http://puu.sh/I67U (3) is current following a hi hat sound, I prefer if it follow the bass drum.
02:57:844 (1,2,3) - ^
03:21:016 (2,3) - Repeating slider? Begin on (2) end where (3) is, to follow vocal better? Also a bit of rest, lot of hit circles in a row here.
03:23:913 (2) - Blanket (3) instead of end of (1)? http://puu.sh/I6ap
03:29:292 (3) - Whistle on the entire slider considering how there is a drum roll here or just add to repeat, but it sound off to me if the begin of the slider isn't a whistle too.

I'm a bit confuse by the whistle pattern in the first half of the song, it really feel like you forgot to add whistle there, the rest of the song sound fine to me. Also, for these three hitcircles pattern 03:00:326 (2,3,4), how about just simplifying to sliders/repeating slider?. I recommend this since it can help make your normal feel less "hard" as I notice lot of modders saying normal is a bit too hard and it shouldn't take much effort to change them. These two issues are what I"m concern about, the rest are really just my personal preference or nazi mod.

[Hard]

-Please -1hp & od, 2hp & od in Normal to 6 in Hard is too big difficulty jump imo
-I recommend -1dB to the slidertick sound, it sound louder than the custom clap (whistle) rhythm right now. I tested this, and -1dB make the volume of both sound equal to me.

01:09:223 (5,6) - Nazi, doesn't look like a good blanket to me, hmm I try to fix while keeping to spacing but impossible for me, break spacing a bit and do this? http://puu.sh/I6pF Small spacing error, should be fine for Hard since it's done for aesthetic purposes.
02:59:913 (1,3) - The slider shape is intentional? Seem like it should a bit more symmetrical, something like 03:01:568 (1,3,1,3).
03:29:292 (3,4,5,6) - Whistle on this entire part for the drums in background.
03:45:844 - 03:55:775 - Not so sure I'm fond of default whistle instead of custom whistle, default whistle just sound too soft to me compare to the custom whistle, so maybe just continue using custom whistle, if not I suggest increasing volume to 100%.

I'm fine with this diff, I thought about how to make this htsound nicer but than realize I can't do anything without forcing you to add another custom hitsound file which may affect other diff or timing point spam for default whistle. I really think something like default whistle or other similar hitsound could be use since most of the beatmap is just custom whistle. Well it's fine.

[Insane]

lol, I found more issue when doing the hitsound, here's the.osu and modtrace for hitsound. Nothing else was change, but hitsounds, so if you like all the suggestion, you can just replace this with your Insane. I may have make some mistake through, so double check first would be a good idea. Also, if you don't like all the suggestions then I hope you look through and use what you like, like you really like how I did the hitsound for a certain part, go ahead and use it. Also remember that it's just suggestion, you can add your own whistle as well and change some of the pattern/weird stuff you found, you don't need to do everything perfectly like this, it's just an example.
[ModTrace]
Insane
00:27:844 (4) - Remove the whistle.
00:28:050 (5) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:28:256).
00:28:671 (6) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:29:499 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:29:706 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:29:912).
00:30:326 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:31:154 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:31:361 (3) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:34:050 (1) - Remove the whistle on the end.
00:34:671 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:34:878 (3) - Remove the whistle.
00:35:292 (5) - Add a whistle.
00:35:706 (1) - Remove the whistle on the end.
00:36:326 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:36:533 (3) - Remove the whistle.
00:36:947 (5) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:37:775 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:37:982 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:38:188 (4) - Remove the whistle.
00:39:844 (3) - Remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:39:947).
00:40:257 (4) - Remove the whistle.
00:41:085 (4) - Remove the whistle.
00:41:292 (5) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:41:498).
00:41:913 (6) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:42:740 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:42:947 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:43:153).
00:43:568 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:44:395 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:44:602 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:44:808).
00:46:878 (5) - Add a whistle and remove the clap.
00:47:292 (1) - Remove the whistle on the end.
00:47:913 (2) - Add a whistle.
00:48:119 (3) - Remove the whistle.
00:48:533 (5) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:49:361 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:49:568 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 00:49:774).
00:50:188 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
00:51:016 (2) - Remove the whistle.
00:51:223 (3) - Add a whistle.
00:51:430 (4) - Remove the whistle.
00:52:050 (1) - Remove the whistle on the end.
01:07:154 (2) - Add a whistle.
01:07:568 (4) - Remove the whistle.
01:07:775 (1) - Add a whistle.
01:09:223 (3) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 01:09:429).
01:10:050 (5) - Add a whistle.
01:10:464 (2) - Add a whistle.
01:10:878 (4) - Remove the whistle.
01:11:085 (5) - Add a whistle.
01:17:085 (2) - Add a whistle.
01:17:499 (4) - Remove the whistle.
01:17:706 (5) - Add a whistle on the start.
01:19:154 (2) - Add a whistle and remove the clap on the end.
01:19:775 (1) - Add a clap and remove the whistle.
01:20:395 (2) - Add a whistle.
01:20:809 (4) - Remove the whistle.
01:21:016 (5) - Add a whistle.
01:22:671 (4) - Add a whistle.
01:23:706 (2) - Add a whistle.
01:24:119 (4) - Remove the whistle on the start, add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 01:24:325).
01:25:775 (3) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 01:25:981).
01:26:602 (5) - Add a whistle.
01:27:637 (3) - Add a whistle.
01:30:533 (2) - Remove the whistle on the end.
01:30:947 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on the end.
02:03:223 (1) - Remove the finish.
02:06:533 (1) - Remove the finish.
02:23:085 (1) - Add a whistle on the entire slider.
02:29:706 (1) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:33:016 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
02:42:016 (3) - Add a whistle.
02:42:223 (4) - Remove this circle.
02:43:568 (4) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 02:43:774).
02:45:223 (4) - Add a whistle on the end.
02:46:878 (4) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 02:47:084).
02:47:913 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
02:48:533 (3) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 02:48:636), add a whistle on the end.
02:50:188 (4) - Add a whistle on the end.
02:50:602 (5) - Remove the whistle.
02:53:706 (3) - Add a whistle.
02:55:361 (3) - Add a whistle.
02:57:016 (3) - Add a whistle on the start.
02:58:671 (3) - Add a whistle.
03:00:326 (3) - Add a whistle.
03:01:050 (7) - Remove this circle.
03:01:982 (3) - Add a whistle.
03:06:740 (3) - Remove the whistle.
03:06:947 (4) - Add a whistle.
03:07:154 (5) - Remove the whistle.
03:08:395 (3) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:08:601).
03:10:050 (4) - Remove the whistle.
03:10:257 (5) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:10:463).
03:11:706 (3) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:11:912).
03:13:568 (3) - Add a whistle on the start.
03:16:671 (4) - Remove the whistle.
03:16:878 (5) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:17:084).
03:19:982 (3) - Remove the whistle.
03:20:188 (4) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on the end.
03:20:602 (5) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:21:844 (3) - Add a whistle.
03:23:085 (2) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:23:499 (3) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on the end.
03:23:913 (4) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:47:499 (1) - Add a whistle on the end.
03:48:326 (4) - Add a whistle on the start, remove the whistle on the end.
03:48:740 (6) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:49:775 (3) - Add a whistle on repeat #1 (at 03:49:981), remove the whistle on the end.
03:50:395 (4) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:51:637 (4) - Add a whistle on the start.
03:52:257 (8) - Add a whistle.
03:53:085 (3) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:53:706 (4) - Remove the whistle on the end.
03:54:947 (3) - Add a whistle on the start.
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One last thing, I also put some hitsound suggestions in my mod post below, but they are mainly inconsistency things and are incase you didn't change hitsound for these sections, I've change them in the above .osu file.

00:46:878 (5) - Not whistle here like 00:33:637 (4) ?
00:53:706 (7) - You made Normal as well right? Weird that no new combo here like Normal.
01:09:223 (3,4,5) - Hitsound seem a bit inconsistent to 01:12:533 (3,4) [no whistle on (5)?, or you put whistle at 01:13:361 for vocal?]
01:11:085 (5) - New combo here or remove from 01:07:775 (1), I don't really like seeing this inconsistency much, but I understand if you don't change since I notice the patterns are different.
01:19:154 (2,1,2) - Same as 01:09:223 (clap whistle whistle, shouldn't it be whistle clap whistle?), also remove new combo from (1)? You didn't do on 01:09:844 (4,5) for example.
01:21:016 (5) - If you add new combo on 01:11:085
01:26:602 (5) - Forgot whistle, similar to 01:09:223.
01:28:464 (1,2) - Copy 01:18:533 (1,2)? If you did copy, idk, I feel the blanket of 01:18:533 looks better than here.
02:03:223 (1) - Weird finish imo, remove?
02:06:533 (1) - ^, just bass drums here, don't hear cymbal
02:09:844 (1,2,3,4) - Hmm no sliders? http://puu.sh/I6Io You can still keep to the same idea, but just slider to represent the drum (it's play every 1/2 tick here)
02:23:085 (1) - I think you should add whistle here, but use timing points to make it slowly louder.
02:38:809 (1) - SV slowdown here seem nice to me to represent the stop in instrument and emphasize in vocal, but your choice.
03:31:982 (1,2,3,4) - Possible to reduce this jump? After stream and a short spinner, this jump is very annoying to play

I hope you consider some of my hitsound suggestions, I think it would make the hitsound better. Also, I couldn't think of a nice hitsound pattern for kiai time, because you didn't map to the bass drum (e.g. 02:45:430) and I notice the blue ticks stuff were overmapped, maybe you want to consider this? I don't really mind too much, but I think hitsound can sound a bit more consistent there if this was done.

[Collab]

- I'm not sure how to approach this diff, I feel my suggestions will not fit well with the mapping style used here. Well, just a reminder, my mod is just suggestions, you are not force to change anything.
- Also consider my hitsound suggestions for Insane diff, I think some could be apply here and to make the hitsounding not too inconsistent, maybe one person should look through it?

Shikyu
00:28:257 (4,5) - Sorry nazi, can you make this two sliders better?
00:39:119 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Can you space the stream closer / make it more like a compressed stream? This look like 1/1 or 1/2 anti jumps to me and I always find myself not being able hit this part properly until I check editor.
00:48:947 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't seem to be like you're doing deaccerlated spacing here. Basically, spacing between (1) & (2) http://puu.sh/ImNy Spacing between (3) & (4) http://puu.sh/ImNI Try to make them all equal?
00:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:39:119

Since I don't see any whistle, put whistle on the 1st (big white tick / stanza) and 3rd white tick (follow the bass drum). Also, recommend adding whistle here 00:33:222 (3,5) & 00:46:464 (7,8) [begins of the slider] to follow the instrument. Also bass drum here 00:39:430 (4), so whistle here as well.

Niva
01:08:809 (4,5) - Hmm, I expect something more like this http://puu.sh/ImRo
01:31:982 (1,2,3,4) - Put whistle on all place where you can and where there is no clap to follow drum in background?

I think sliders can be better unless it's intentional? Like 01:10:257 (1) - don't look too symmetrical to me. Also I notice you use default whistle, talk with Shikyu about maybe adding to the part at the beginning as well? To have a bit of synergy throughout the map.

Yasora [@ Leorda, edit Creator's Word to reflect name change?]
01:59:913 - Start your default whistle pattern right from the start rather than at 02:03:223 ?
02:03:430 (1,3) - Slider tick sound like in Hard diff.
02:13:154 - 02:23:085 - Look at what Rei_Fan49 did with the whistle and do the same. I don't think whistle on 2nd and 4th sound good here anymore. To distinguish a little bit between the two parts, I suggest using lower volume here (-10 -20%).

Rei_Fan49
02:34:878 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Hmm, I don't like this stack pattern much, but I can't seem to grasp how to fix this, maybe you can try some other patterns?

Frizz-chan
Not sure what you're trying to do with hitsound here, but I recommend just keeping it simple and do whistle on 1st and 3rd white ticks, clap on 2nd and 4th.

Aoitenshi
Hmm, interesting, I guess that's all I have to say here, but 1/4 jumps seem off to the song to me.
03:29:292 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Also I prefer this http://puu.sh/Ina3, but fine both way

Jzh Zehnichi
03:48:119 (2,3) - I think you should keep to the sliders and make a slider starting on (2) ending on (3). The stream are simply space after the slider. Just an example http://puu.sh/Inc3
03:51:430 (4,5) - To keep to the same style, you might to do it here too

I read through the mod posts and it seem some parts need to follow the music a little better, but sorry, I'm not really a rhythm modder and I"m trying to respect mapper style a bit more. My opinion on this diff is that some parts are better than others, but this is just my opinion.

I try my best modding this, I feel I couldn't give a really good mod for this so sorry if this mod disappoint you.

Well good luck!
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Aoitenshi
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Joined February 2009
Aoitenshi
I'm going to be inactive as hell. If possible, please fix it yourself, I'm sorry. :(
shikyu
786 posts
Joined January 2011
shikyu

merchat7 wrote:

[Collab]
Shikyu
00:28:257 (4,5) - Sorry nazi, can you make this two sliders better? ok
00:39:119 (2,3,1,2,3,4) - Can you space the stream closer / make it more like a compressed stream? This look like 1/1 or 1/2 anti jumps to me and I always find myself not being able hit this part properly until I check editor. I think it's not really necessary since I use same spacing at all my part, but I'll change if other modder say same problem
00:48:947 (1,2,3,4) - Doesn't seem to be like you're doing deaccerlated spacing here. Basically, spacing between (1) & (2) http://puu.sh/ImNy Spacing between (3) & (4) http://puu.sh/ImNI Try to make them all equal? ok
00:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:39:119 look at 00:39:119

Since I don't see any whistle, put whistle on the 1st (big white tick / stanza) and 3rd white tick (follow the bass drum). Also, recommend adding whistle here 00:33:222 (3,5) & 00:46:464 (7,8) [begins of the slider] to follow the instrument. Also bass drum here 00:39:430 (4), so whistle here as well. use this suggestion for some part
Change something myself, hope it not become worse
http://puu.sh/Iuk0
Yasora
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Joined May 2010
Yasora
my diff
http://puu.sh/ID0z

collab
just added timing points at 02:03:533 until 02:04:568
http://puu.sh/ID2D
Leorda
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Topic Starter
Leorda
Fix many things and change prouds.png

Thx merchat7
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