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supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size)

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Fumika
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 17 สิงหาคม 2555 at 18:55:53

Artist: supercell
Title: Kokuhaku (TV Size)
Source: GUILTY CROWN
Tags: koeda ending ryo nich95 bestz2541 No_Gu NoGu climbb65588
BPM: 180
Filesize: 14595kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. bestz's Easy (1.84 stars, 77 notes)
  2. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 506 notes)
  3. Gu's Insane (5 stars, 259 notes)
  4. Hard (4.97 stars, 223 notes)
  5. Nich's Normal (4.28 stars, 133 notes)
  6. Taiko Muzukashii (4.76 stars, 328 notes)
Download: supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size)
Download: supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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告白

Map Set
bestz's Easy : by bestz2541 (Done)
Nich's Normal : by nich95 (Done)
Hard : by Me (Done)
Gu's Insane : by No_Gu(gudbye) (Done)
Taiko Muzukashii : by Me (Done)
Climbb's Taiko Oni : by climbb65588 (Done)
hichman's CTB : by hichman (Done but didn't upload)Download Here

Modder list
1.Envi (Kuria)
2.S o r d a (Taiko|Osu!)
3.banvi
4.aabc271 (Taiko)
5.Naryuga (Taiko)
6.Snowy Dream
7.Saten(-san)
8.-Bakari-
9.[CSGA]Ar3sgice
10.Byakugan249
11.haha5957
12.Garven
13.ZHSteven (CTB)
14.Sandpig
15.h-728
16.palinus
17.Leorda
18.Seph (CTB)
19.MMzz (Bubbled #1)
  1. Jericho2442 (Popped #1)
20.bossandy (Taiko)
21.MMzz (Again) (Re-Bubbled #2)
22.Garven (Again) (Popped #2) and (Re-Bubbled #3)
23.Sync (Popped #3)
Last edited by Fumika , edited 67 times in total.
Star Stream
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Star Stream
Timing check


SPOILER
22:24 <Star_Stream> : hey
22:25 <Netsukawa> : Hmm ?
22:25 *Star_Stream is editing (supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52228]
22:25 <Netsukawa> : :D ?
22:25 <Star_Stream> : timing check request taken from LKs
22:25 <Netsukawa> : lol
22:25 <Star_Stream> : and
22:25 <Star_Stream> : http://puu.sh/zLUv
22:25 <Star_Stream> : try using them
22:26 <Netsukawa> : let me try
22:30 <Netsukawa> : Oh
22:30 <Netsukawa> : It's work ><
22:30 <Star_Stream> : :3
22:30 <Netsukawa> : Post it
22:30 <Star_Stream> : thanks
Fumika
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Fumika
LKs
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LKs


timing revision
Fumika
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Fumika
Thanks for offset , BPM !
Laurier
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Laurier
new map!! owo/
Fumika
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Fumika

Laurier wrote:

new map!! owo/
Yeah , GC =w=
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
done. http://puu.sh/Aabt
btw..some things about hitsound.I want to lower soft-hitnormal's volume,it's noisy for me.Also higher clap and whistle's volume.Then add 2 silent soft-sliderslide.That's my thoughts.you can agree or disagree.
Fumika
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Fumika
I change something if you don't mind...just add some note and -1 OD ;w; , I will make a EXTREME diff one orz
SUBSTAC9
288 posts
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SUBSTAC9
nice :)
Kuria
1,390 posts
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Kuria
yo

SPOILER
15:08 <Netsukawa> : Envi !
15:09 <envi> : wut!
15:10 <Netsukawa> : Do you take a mod request ?
15:11 <envi> : no!
15:11 <Netsukawa> : orz...
15:11 <Netsukawa> : then
15:11 <Netsukawa> : play this again
15:11 *Netsukawa is listening to (supercell - Kokuhaku (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52228]
15:11 <envi> : k w8
15:12 <Netsukawa> : Feel wrong with offset
15:12 <Netsukawa> : and BPM
15:13 <envi> : which diff?
15:13 <Netsukawa> : Insane !
15:15 <envi> : i think it s nothing wrong with the bpm
15:16 <envi> : well dunno in a super specific way
15:16 <Netsukawa> : and offset
15:16 <envi> : same
15:16 <Netsukawa> : orz...
15:17 <envi> : anyways, 2nd time i saw a weird slider since hacking to the gate
15:18 <envi> : btw 00:16:822 -
15:19 <envi> : why not spinner than a slider here? D:
15:19 <envi> : if it was me, i think ill put the spinner from 00:16:322 -
15:19 <envi> : till here 00:17:655 - lol
15:19 <Netsukawa> : not my diff...
15:19 <Netsukawa> : orz
15:19 <envi> : np, just telling my opinion xP
15:20 <Netsukawa> : I just telling you to mod this map lol
15:20 <envi> : but i dont want to D:
15:20 <envi> : so bored
15:20 <Netsukawa> : lol
15:20 <envi> : well, maybe irc
15:20 <Netsukawa> : sure
15:20 <envi> : since im too lazy to write many stuff
15:20 <Netsukawa> : only hard diff :3
15:21 <envi> : sv 1,48? :O
15:21 <Netsukawa> : Yes
15:21 <envi> : why not 1,5
15:21 <Netsukawa> : Nope ~
15:21 <envi> : oki
15:21 <Netsukawa> : just random sv lol
15:22 <envi> : 00:03:011 (1) - hmm
15:22 <envi> : im not sure but i think its better if you just change this into notes
15:22 <envi> : notes here 00:03:011 (1) -
15:22 <Netsukawa> : Sounds weird D:
15:22 <Netsukawa> : I want to keep that
15:23 <envi> : even weird with a hitsound in here 00:03:011 (1) - D:
15:23 <Netsukawa> : The instrument sound !
15:23 <envi> : the vocal are also stop in here 00:02:844 - though
15:23 <envi> : ok]
15:23 <envi> : 00:08:344 (6) - overlap with 00:07:344 (4) -
15:24 <envi> : i prefer you move this 6 right a bit
15:24 <envi> : the repeat point
15:24 <Netsukawa> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/354851 ok ?
15:25 <envi> : im not really sure
15:25 <Netsukawa> : orz
15:25 <envi> : but if you play it with default, it was really hard to read that pattern
15:25 <Netsukawa> : w8'
15:25 <envi> : default skin
15:26 <envi> : you done?
15:27 <Netsukawa> : done !
15:27 <envi> : 00:23:349 (1) - the shape is not clear enough imo
15:27 <Netsukawa> : How
15:28 <envi> : if you want to make the checklist slider in this, i prefer to make it more wide on the red point part
15:28 <Netsukawa> : Hmm
15:29 <Netsukawa> : Ahhh
15:29 <Netsukawa> : keep it
15:29 <Netsukawa> : next ;w;
15:29 <envi> : k
15:30 <envi> : 00:38:682 (1) - i think adding clap here would be better, or it is just me?
15:31 <Netsukawa> : just you lol
15:31 <envi> : its kinda weird if the loud part start from here 00:38:848 - ~o~
15:34 <envi> : 01:02:848 - i know that you wanna follow the instrument in this part, but since this one is a hard level, i dont
15:34 <envi> : think that make this a repeat slier is a good idea
15:34 <Netsukawa> : orz
15:35 <envi> : consider change it into notes?
15:35 <Netsukawa> : I think this isn't a triplet stream should be fine ;w;
15:35 <envi> : just take a consideration then later
15:35 <Netsukawa> : า
15:35 <Netsukawa> : k
15:36 <envi> : 01:22:682 (3) - hmmm
15:36 <envi> : same reason as what im mention above
15:36 <Netsukawa> : It's trap slider \:D/ !
15:37 <envi> : i think it would be better if you move the endpoint to downleft a bit \:D/
15:37 <envi> : every advanced player hater complicated things \:D/
15:37 <envi> : hate*
15:37 <Netsukawa> : lol
15:37 <envi> : same as this! 01:24:015 (7) -
15:37 <Netsukawa> : that fine =w=
15:38 <envi> : k
15:38 <envi> : i think thats all for now, i wanna try it myself first
15:40 <Netsukawa> : Post the log and I will give you some cookies
15:40 <Netsukawa> : ww
15:40 <envi> : lol i just realized that all the beats are covered from start till end
15:40 <envi> : ok
Fumika
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Fumika
Thanks ! , Uploaded.
S o r d a
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S o r d a
from in-game

[overall]:
  1. Climbb's Taiko Oni,Gu's Insane have some unsanpped notes. open AImod
[Gu's Insane]:
  1. 00:34:515 (2) - move to x221 y96? looks good to me
  2. 00:36:682 (1,2) - i feel this part faraway jump good to me widen spacing a little more?
  3. 00:39:348 (5) - add NC I felt that I was strange
  4. 00:49:348 (3,4,5) - too hard stack to me move to somewhere
[Hard]:
  1. OD+1
  2. 00:16:155 (6) - Add NC
  3. 00:38:598 (1) - are you sure? maybe move to 00:38:682 - ?
[Normal]:
  1. 00:22:013 (3) - i feel newbie player's too hard reverse see change it?
[Easy]:
  1. 01:00:682 - useless this line?
All diff Nice map<3
Have a star~ good luck with Ranked Netsukawa!
banvi
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Joined June 2009
banvi
modreq from in-game

Red: You must fix it. (Unrankable stuff)
Blue: You should fix it. (but it's up to you)
Black: Just suggestion

[bestz's Easy]
  1. 01:03:349 (1) - remove clap at the middle? it sounds weird because it doesn't fit the music well imo. :/
[Nich's Normal]
  1. 00:06:677 - I hope you add a note here! I think it seems to fit the music better.
  2. 00:16:155 (1) - add new combo due to spinner new combo bug
  3. 00:24:682 (3,4) - consider to change a silder to follow the vocal? And it would be better flow.
  4. 00:27:349 (3,4) - ^
  5. 01:00:015 (4) - change the direction like this↓? It looks clean for me.
    SPOILER
  6. 01:06:515 (3) - remove clap at the end? it sounds weird because it doesn't fit the music well imo. :/
  7. 01:11:848 (2) - ^
  8. 01:14:515 (2) - ^
  9. 01:17:182 (2) - ^
[Hard]
  1. 00:00:678 (1) - unsnap at the end D:
  2. 00:23:349 (1) - Umm, I like this slider shape. However I worry that it's unrankble. I'm not sure though... ;w;
    But I think it's better to change the shape a bit (move a little the end point)
    SPOILER
  3. 00:38:598 (1) - I saw sorda's suggestion. But I have another idea. Extend to 00:38:848? It also good for me.
  4. 00:52:182 (1,2) - Hmm, change like this↓? It would be better for the gameplay.
    SPOILER
  5. 01:17:515 (2,3) - The spacing is too narrow.
  6. 01:20:515 (4,5) - ^
  7. 01:24:015 (7) - same as 00:23:349 (1)
  8. 01:27:432 - Set the volume to 5% same as other diffs?
[Gu's Insane]
  1. 00:32:015 (3) - Hmm, this is overlapping with HP bar... It looks not good :<
Good luck~ ;)
Fumika
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Fumika

banvi wrote:

modreq from in-game ow thank you ><

Red: You must fix it. (Unrankable stuff)
Blue: You should fix it. (but it's up to you)
Black: Just suggestion

[Hard]
  1. 00:00:678 (1) - unsnap at the end D: :arrow: Changed
  2. 00:23:349 (1) - Umm, I like this slider shape. However I worry that it's unrankble. I'm not sure though... ;w;
    But I think it's better to change the shape a bit (move a little the end point)     :arrow: Changed
    SPOILER
  3. 00:38:598 (1) - I saw sorda's suggestion. But I have another idea. Extend to 00:38:848? It also good for me. :arrow: Changed
  4. 00:52:182 (1,2) - Hmm, change like this↓? It would be better for the gameplay. :arrow: Changed
    SPOILER
  5. 01:17:515 (2,3) - The spacing is too narrow. :arrow: That just my style for Hard diff !
  6. 01:20:515 (4,5) - ^ :arrow: ^
  7. 01:24:015 (7) - same as 00:23:349 (1) :arrow: Changed
  8. 01:27:432 - Set the volume to 5% same as other diffs?
:arrow: Changed

Good luck~ ;)
S o r d a's mod is changed too ! , Thank you you guys.
Nichiyouki
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Nichiyouki

S o r d a wrote:

[Normal]:
  1. 00:22:013 (3) - i feel newbie player's too hard reverse see change it? I might fix, if people have told to this again.

banvi wrote:

[Nich's Normal]
  1. 00:06:677 - I hope you add a note here! I think it seems to fit the music better. Added, and I changed (3,4) is slider in 00:05:344
  2. 00:16:155 (1) - add new combo due to spinner new combo bug Added
  3. 00:24:682 (3,4) - consider to change a silder to follow the vocal? And it would be better flow. Ok, fixed
  4. 00:27:349 (3,4) - ^ But this isn't fixed.
  5. 01:00:015 (4) - change the direction like this↓? It looks clean for me. Ok, fixed
    SPOILER
  6. 01:06:515 (3) - remove clap at the end? it sounds weird because it doesn't fit the music well imo. :/ I think this is no problem.
  7. 01:11:848 (2) - ^ ^
  8. 01:14:515 (2) - ^ ^
  9. 01:17:182 (2) - ^ ^
Thank you for mod :)
No_Gu
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No_Gu
SPOILER

S o r d a wrote:

[Gu's Insane]:
  1. 00:34:515 (2) - move to x221 y96? looks good to mek
  2. 00:36:682 (1,2) - i feel this part faraway jump good to me widen spacing a little more?n
  3. 00:39:348 (5) - add NC I felt that I was strange k mistake
  4. 00:49:348 (3,4,5) - too hard stack to me move to somewhereslider here so I think no problem

banvi wrote:

[Gu's Insane]
  1. 00:32:015 (3) - Hmm, this is overlapping with HP bar... It looks not good :<hmm fine to me
To Net:I still think the volume of hitnormal is too noisy..I try to turn down it.use it as "normal-hitnormal soft-hitnormal soft-hitnormal2" if you like.if you don't like them,you can keep yours~
http://puu.sh/EL1e
Fumika
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Uploaded
Betsuto
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Betsuto
EDIT : ใส่โน๊ตตั้งแต่แรกของเพลง
EDIT : แก้ HIT SOUND บางส่วน

เอาปายยย - http://puu.sh/ELsp
Fumika
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UPLOADED
aabc271
osu! Alumni
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aabc271
As requested by Netsukawa, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

-----------------------

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]

As usual, all fine :3

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

00:13:427 ( 16 ) - Blue note ? imo this sounds better ( This is for fitting dkd at 00:12:011 ( 6 ~ 8 ) )

Well, can't mod more because the notes are totally following the drum .______.

The map is OK overall ~

While it could be good to follow the drum, this makes the diff a bit repeating

Maybe it's only me, but I think some more custom patterns will make the diff more interesting ~

Rating : 8.5/10 ( +1 : Consistency of hitsounds & patterns ( Following drum reasonably ) )

----------------------------------------------

[Taiko Muzukashii]

Although SV 1.3 is fine, you may consider using SV 1.4, even if it's an easier muzukashii. The default SV for taiko is always 1.4, regardless of the difficulty ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

  • For 00:17:989 ~ 00:28:682, as only red notes are used and I understand this is a style, it's your choice whether to change the following or not ~

    00:20:504 ( 10 ) - Blue note ?

    00:23:186 ( x ) - Add a blue note ?

    00:25:848 ( x ) - ^

    00:28:015 ( 36 ~ 39 ) - Add a note at 00:28:182, and use o o o o O ?
00:33:348 ( 57 ) - Red note ?

00:34:015 ( 60 ~ 67 ) - o o o o o o o o ? ( 1/1 )

00:39:182 ( 80 ~ 81 ) - o O ?

00:48:432 ( 123 ) - Delete this note ? A sudden, single 1/4 doesn't look good imo ~

The map is OK overall ~

Good to see that the diff is quite friendly to newer players :3

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : Good diff balance )

Star and good luck ~ ;)
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
Hi, here my mod requested in-game by Net~

  • [General]
  1. Unsnapped notes in Gu's Insane. Fix them.
Below is just suggestions~ feel free to ignore if you dont like.

  • [Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:56:015 (160) - Delete (to follow the vocal)
  2. 00:59:182 (177) - don?
  3. 01:14:848 (247) - (around here) like this? -->
  4. 01:17:682 - add a note (maybe d?
  5. 01:24:848 (279) - Delete (possibly newer player feel it hard to read)
  • [Climbb's Taiko Oni]
  1. 00:07:344 (11,12,13) - (rhythm) like this? -->
  2. 00:36:515 (117,118) - kkd?
That's all~ GL! :)
Fumika
1,432 posts
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Fumika

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Netsukawa, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

[Taiko Muzukashii]

Although SV 1.3 is fine, you may consider using SV 1.4, even if it's an easier muzukashii. The default SV for taiko is always 1.4, regardless of the difficulty ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

  • For 00:17:989 ~ 00:28:682, as only red notes are used and I understand this is a style, it's your choice whether to change the following or not ~

    00:20:504 ( 10 ) - Blue note ? :arrow: ok

    00:23:186 ( x ) - Add a blue note ? :arrow: ok

    00:25:848 ( x ) - ^ :arrow: ok

    00:28:015 ( 36 ~ 39 ) - Add a note at 00:28:182, and use o o o o O ? :arrow: ik
00:33:348 ( 57 ) - Red note ?

00:34:015 ( 60 ~ 67 ) - o o o o o o o o ? ( 1/1 )

00:39:182 ( 80 ~ 81 ) - o O ? :arrow: just o O

00:48:432 ( 123 ) - Delete this note ? A sudden, single 1/4 doesn't look good imo ~ :arrow: ok

The map is OK overall ~

Good to see that the diff is quite friendly to newer players :3

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : Good diff balance )

Star and good luck ~ ;) Where is your star =w= !

Naryuga wrote:

Hi, here my mod requested in-game by Net~

  • [General]

    [list:6327e][Taiko Muzukashii]
  1. 00:56:015 (160) - Delete (to follow the vocal) :arrow: no~
  2. 00:59:182 (177) - don? :arrow: no
  3. 01:14:848 (247) - (around here) like this? --> :arrow: ok
  4. 01:17:682 - add a note (maybe d? :arrow: ok
  5. 01:24:848 (279) - Delete (possibly newer player feel it hard to read) :arrow: ok
That's all~ GL! :)
Thanks you guys xD
Snowy Dream
2,195 posts
Joined September 2009
Snowy Dream
Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[bestz's Easy]
00:07:344 (1) - umm..why newcombo?


[Nich's Normal]
00:06:677 (1) - whistle
00:08:011 (3) - ^
00:42:015 (1) - finish at the beginning
00:44:682 (1) - ^
00:47:348 (1) - ^
00:52:682 (1) - ^
00:55:348 (1) - ^


[Hard]
00:26:015 (1) - not stack completely? (or just separate from each other)
00:41:682 (1) - delete finish
00:42:015 (2) - finish
00:44:349 (1) - delete finish
00:44:682 - finish
00:47:015 - delete finish
00:47:349 (1) - finish
.....


[Gu's Insane]
00:13:945 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
00:18:489 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
00:18:655 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:18:655 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:155 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
00:19:322 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:322 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:655 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:655 (2) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:19:988 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:19:988 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:20:322 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
00:20:322 (4) - Unsnapped slider (end).
00:05:177 (1) - 这是什么奇葩slider....=-=
00:14:665 (3) - finish？
00:41:348 (2,3,4) - 突然减速不和谐...
01:00:848 (2) - 距离偏大
01:27:182 (7) - 纯粹一个circle不行嘛....

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:17:991 (1) - newcombo

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Great Mapset :3
Good Luck with Rank
Fumika
1,432 posts
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Topic Starter
Fumika

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Queue
-------------------------------------------------
[bestz's Easy]
00:07:344 (1) - umm..why newcombo? :arrow: ok, delete

[Hard]
00:26:015 (1) - not stack completely? (or just separate from each other) :arrow: use 0.1 for this slider
00:41:682 (1) - delete finish :arrow: ok
00:42:015 (2) - finish :arrow: no
00:44:349 (1) - delete finish :arrow: ok
00:44:682 - finish :arrow: no
00:47:015 - delete finish :arrow: ok
00:47:349 (1) - finish :arrow: no
..... .....

[Taiko Muzukashii]
00:17:991 (1) - newcombo :arrow: ok

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Great Mapset :3
Good Luck with Rank
Thanks Snowy >< !
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki

Snowy Dream wrote:

[Nich's Normal]
00:06:677 (1) - whistle No
00:08:011 (3) - ^ ^
00:42:015 (1) - finish at the beginning I felt that sound is strange.
00:44:682 (1) - ^ ^
00:47:348 (1) - ^ ^
00:52:682 (1) - ^ ^
00:55:348 (1) - ^ ^
Thank you for mod, but I didn't fix.
aabc271
osu! Alumni
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aabc271

Netsukawa wrote:

aabc271 wrote:

As requested by Netsukawa, I'm coming for a Taiko mod ~
Let's go ~

Blue~ Critical issues. You must fix this
Purple~ It's better to fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only. Change only if you want to

[Taiko Muzukashii]

Although SV 1.3 is fine, you may consider using SV 1.4, even if it's an easier muzukashii. The default SV for taiko is always 1.4, regardless of the difficulty ~

Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~

  • For 00:17:989 ~ 00:28:682, as only red notes are used and I understand this is a style, it's your choice whether to change the following or not ~

    00:20:504 ( 10 ) - Blue note ? :arrow: ok

    00:23:186 ( x ) - Add a blue note ? :arrow: ok

    00:25:848 ( x ) - ^ :arrow: ok

    00:28:015 ( 36 ~ 39 ) - Add a note at 00:28:182, and use o o o o O ? :arrow: ik
00:33:348 ( 57 ) - Red note ?

00:34:015 ( 60 ~ 67 ) - o o o o o o o o ? ( 1/1 )

00:39:182 ( 80 ~ 81 ) - o O ? :arrow: just o O

00:48:432 ( 123 ) - Delete this note ? A sudden, single 1/4 doesn't look good imo ~ :arrow: ok

The map is OK overall ~

Good to see that the diff is quite friendly to newer players :3

Rating : 8/10 ( +0.5 : Good diff balance )

Star and good luck ~ ;) Where is your star =w= !
I forgot to star, sry > <

Now starred :)
Saten
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Saten
[General]
Add a soft-slidertick to the Normal custom hitsounds
Is the timing really correct? the kiai part felt somewhat off (maybe it's just me)

[Gu]
00:08:761 (1) - silence this spinner a bit?
00:48:848 (2,3) - not sure about this stacking, could be somewhat confusing. place it on the other side instead?
SPOILER
00:59:182 (6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - I like this part but, it's so crowdy imo. How about scaling this part by 1,5x
SPOILER

[Hard]
00:25:348 (7,1) - custom stack? try to make it look like the original stacking (↘)
00:33:015 (5,2) -make a prettier overlap?
01:22:682 (3,4,5) - The spacing between (3) & (4) looks pretty unequal compared to the rest of the combo (also the way the slider-end is headed at the opposite direction), make the spacing somewhat more equal at least on (3,4,5)?

[Nich]
AR+1? (Sure you don't have that high SV, but the BPM says something different here. I think it's better for the flow)
00:24:682 (3,2) - might be an issue with the hit-burst overlapping the repeat, but in the end you'll be able to see it in time I guess..
00:58:015 (1) - soft finish instead?

[bestz]
00:11:344 (1) - I think you can make this slider more pretty/curvy
00:49:682 (4) - why not a custom 2 whistle here instead? Like the rest of the previous patterns.


That's all =w=/
Betsuto
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Saten wrote:

[General]
Add a soft-slidertick to the Normal custom hitsounds
Is the timing really correct? the kiai part felt somewhat off (maybe it's just me)

[bestz]
00:11:344 (1) - I think you can make this slider more pretty/curvy - FIXED
00:49:682 (4) - why not a custom 2 whistle here instead? Like the rest of the previous patterns. - Huh ? ... I forgot it , now I change it.

That's all =w=/
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Saten wrote:

[Nich]
AR+1? (Sure you don't have that high SV, but the BPM says something different here. I think it's better for the flow) Ok, fixed
00:24:682 (3,2) - might be an issue with the hit-burst overlapping the repeat, but in the end you'll be able to see it in time I guess..
00:58:015 (1) - soft finish instead? Ok, fixed
Thank you for mod :)

http://puu.sh/EXCO
riffy
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riffy
:? oh. as promised

[General]
clear

[Gu's Insane]
unsnapped notes
od - 1
00:38:515 - circle here

[Hard]
00:37:348 (3,1) - y u no stack?
01:26:015 (1,1,1,1) - it looks so random. remove new combos. please

[Nich's Normal]
00:12:344 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/EZ5a
00:14:993 (2) - this one looks really strange :/ i suggest you to use circles instead
00:26:348 (2) - reverse arrow covered by hitburst. unrankable
00:51:348 (3,1) - almost overlap
01:25:849 (3) - use 1/2 slider instead

[bestz's Easy]
hm.. nice one

~~~~~~~
gl~
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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from my queue


Hard

  1. 00:18:493 (2) - reverse arrow may be hidden here http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357682 , you can move up a little
  2. 00:24:682 (5,6,7) - maybe move left a little - -" http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357684
  3. 00:25:848 - better stack a note here to make constant flow
  4. 00:44:182 (8) - this note plays awkward imo... remove it?
  5. 00:44:349 (1,2) - The stressed beat (bokura) here is mapped as repeat slider end, while those at 00:39:349 (3) and 00:42:015 (2) are slider starts /.\ I think it's better to make them constant as it's a Hard diff , so better for small jumps slider head.
  6. 00:50:182 (2,3) - ^ and why is the spacing...
  7. also it would be better if you add finish on these parts o.o
  8. 01:17:015 (2,3) - ...why??
  9. 01:21:015 (5) - ^
Gu's Insane

  1. 00:45:182 (3,4) - ...怎么这么坑爹 00:40:348 (4,1) 00:43:015 (4,1) 说好的1/2呢
  2. 00:46:015 (1) - ...而且居然是1/4 根本不科学!!
  3. 01:03:015 (6) - 这个如果跟vocal从这里开始的话比较舒服 speed 1.0x http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/357693
  4. 01:04:848 (2) - 这个跳得不好 还不如叠着
  5. 01:06:848 (4) - jump?
  6. 01:23:848 (2) - blanket算了我还有没有人性._.
  7. 233
Nich's Normal

  1. 00:22:013 (3) - personally I think it's rankable, but this is just a Normal diff, beginner players may be confused what it is ;_;
  2. 00:26:348 (2) - ;_; this is completely hidden repeat, no please
  3. 00:42:015 (1) - finish on head..?
  4. 00:44:682 (1) - ^
  5. 01:06:515 (3) - add clap at reverse..?
Bestz's Easy

  1. can't find anything sorry ;_;
that's all

Good luck~
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-Bakari- wrote:

[Nich's Normal]
00:12:344 (3,4) - http://puu.sh/EZ5a I think it isn't a problem on the rhythm.
00:14:993 (2) - this one looks really strange :/ i suggest you to use circles instead For me think that it isn't strange.
00:26:348 (2) - reverse arrow covered by hitburst. unrankable fixed
00:51:348 (3,1) - almost overlap fixed
01:25:849 (3) - use 1/2 slider instead no

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Nich's Normal

  1. 00:22:013 (3) - personally I think it's rankable, but this is just a Normal diff, beginner players may be confused what it is ;_; fixed
  2. 00:26:348 (2) - ;_; this is completely hidden repeat, no please fixed
  3. 00:42:015 (1) - finish on head..? no
  4. 00:44:682 (1) - ^ ^
  5. 01:06:515 (3) - add clap at reverse..? no
Thank you for mod :)

My diff
http://puu.sh/F0eK
YTYuyu
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Alright let's get started. mod requested in-game :).
Bold: Unrnkable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. I'll give you my opinion, advice or if i'm curious about something.

[General]
CLEAR!

[bestz's Easy]
00:00:678 (1) - you should make this a NC. it's no big deal, but it's an unrankable bug.
00:06:011 (3) - Make this note a NC because the lyrics change through the repeat arrow.
00:12:678 (2) - switch the hitsounds for the repeat arrow and the end. that clap at the repeat arrow makes me feel uncomfortable and i find it unfitting with this part.
00:40:682 - add a 2/2 slider here, remove that 1/1 slider and add a circle to where the cymbals clash. i think it'll be straight forward as it goes with the vocals a lot better.
00:43:348 - ^
00:44:015 (3) - how about making this a curved slider for a smoother flow to the next note? i'm not feeling the flow on this pattern since the next slider is a curved slider.
00:46:015 - ^
00:48:682 - add a 1/1 slider to follow the long pause in vocals.
01:04:682 (2) - same as 00:12:678, and curve this slider more so that it'd make a mini border for the previous slider. like this.
01:15:349 (2) - ^
01:22:015 (4) - make this a NC because of new lyrics. i find it odd that it's technically going around in a circle but that note isn't a NC
nice diff, but fix the remaining sliders' hitsounds like at 00:12:678. i might've overlooked a few.

[Nich's Normal]
00:06:677 (1,3) - to be consistent with the last few notes, add whistles here. idk why the rhythm suddenly stopped. it sounded so good IMO.
00:14:337 (1) - The drums are still going from this, so add a clap at the end of the slider.
00:15:489 (3) - I heard cymbals on the end of this slider, so add a finish there to match it in the song.
00:22:013 (3) - Change the direction of this slider. i don't like how (1) is overlapping the repeat slider. with a BPM this high, i don't think players would react to this in time.
00:26:348 (2) - this looks unrankable because the hitburst is covering the repeat arrow and with a BPM this high, players won't be able to react in time to realize that there's a repeat on the slider.
00:41:682 (4) - replace the whistle for a finish. the whistle isn't loud enough and the cymbals are louder than the whistle..
00:44:348 (4) - ^
00:46:682 (3) - ^
01:06:515 (3) - remove the clap at the end. it sounds unfitting and it ruins the consistency in claps.
01:11:848 (2) - ^
01:14:515 (2) - ^
01:22:349 (2) - change the direction of this slider. i don't like how the other slider is overlapping the repeat arrow. tbh it bothers me during gameplay.

[Hard]
Maybe increase the HP and OD by 1 to give a bit of a challenge for players?
00:02:011 (4) - maybe unstack this to give off a nice pattern? that stack surprised me causing me to mess up. i think it'll flow smoother to the next note during gameplay, not to mention it'll be consistent with your slider patterns.
00:07:344 (4) - ^
00:38:349 (6) - to keep the flow going, make this a curved slider. this straight slider breaks the flow since the last 3 sliders in this combo are curved sliders.
00:46:849 (7) - same as 00:41:692 on normal.
00:54:515 (1,2) - remove the NC for (1) because the lyrics are still going from this slider. (2) should be a NC because the lyrics change.
01:08:349 (1) - what does the whistle match in the song? remove it because it sounds unfitting with the claps in effect.
01:27:015 (1) - that repeat arrow is slightly being covered by the hitburst and that might mess up players. instead make this a 1/2 slider and add a circle to make it easier and so that it'd be fully visible to see for players.

[Gu's Insane]
00:19:655 (2,3) - I suggest that you keep the spacing consistent for a smoother flow with this combo. i think players might expect r jump between these 2 notes, and it'd play to the point i felt uncomfortable since i'm moving my cursor in a jumpy motion.
00:39:182 - maybe add a circle to follow the vocals in the song?
good job on this diff. probably my favorite diff out of the whole mapset.

i guess that's it. Star and GL :D
Fumika
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Almost changed ! , Thank you for mod you guys !
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No change with taiko diff 0.0
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[General]

I wish for hitsounds were there from 00:17:991 (1) this part to kiai other then the bass-drum going back.. I know you are reserving clap (snare drum, it seems) for kiai..
but it felt kinda empty to me, why not just add something like soft-hitwhistle that doesnt really effect the map much? ignorable but just saying here


[Easy]

01:26:515 (3) - move this ti 01:26:348 and extend a bit so it ends on 01:27:348..?

[Hard]

01:07:015 (4,5,6,7,8,9) - http://puu.sh/FdI8 this ??




omg i couldnt find much!! my modding sux xD

good luck! nice map ~
Nichiyouki
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Almost fixed...
Thank you for mod, Byakugan249 :)

http://puu.sh/FwJG
My Angel Kitteh
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My Angel Kitteh
http://puu.sh/GkK8
requested CTB diff lol

and star :d
Fumika
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OK
Garven
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Garven
Did a quick glance since it's supercell <3

[General]
Timing feels off. Try 23331 for the last offset.

Tick rate 2 fits this song best.

[Easy]
00:11:344 (1) - I'd prefer more recovery time after a spinner for this level of an Easy.
00:18:661 (1) - ^

Don't kudosu please.
Betsuto
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Betsuto
OK
I'm ignore "add note from Byaku's mod"
All fix !

http://puu.sh/H5yR
ZHSteven
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Mod for CTB diff:

Generally well made.
But I think you need to consider where you need a jump and where do not.
And some of the rythm seems not fit well with the song...

*(UNRANKABLE)00:09:011 (1) - this spinner is too close to the note, it will make player hardly differentiate which is the correct note and which is the spinner.
So you need to make it start at 00:09:011 -

Please do same thing for 00:16:489 (1) - , 01:27:664 (1) -


First part, some of the note seems not fit well with the music..
00:01:844 (4) - I don't think this unexpected hyper is suitable here.. but anyway, keep it if you think it is good enough.
like 00:03:011 - (6) - , I suggest to move to 00:03:177 - .
00:06:344 (6) - I suggest to make it a triple instead of a slider
00:08:011 (11) - why not keep the note pattern?
suggestion:
00:13:844 (3,4) - better not use this kind of pattern.. it looks not good, just like standard mode.
00:16:489 (1) - ^


second part, you need to think twice before you put jumps:

00:21:175 (2,3,4,5) - seems eggpain here.. please try to use other pattern.
00:24:164 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:23:186 (7) - this hyper not fit with the music. please try to place it in between 00:22:683 (6,1).
00:25:997 (1,3) - in my opinion, make this 2 slider in 45 degree works better
00:28:664 (2) - change direction?

00:33:664 (4,1) - maybe you can try to create a jump for this 2 with adjusting the previous slider.
00:38:664 (1,2) - reduce this jump by half will be better.
00:41:664 (5,1) - try to create a jump here.
00:43:831 (2,3,4) - reduce this and create a jump at 00:44:331 (5,1) - .
00:46:831 (8,9) - reduce this jump. not fit the music.
00:46:997 (9,1) - you can create a jump here.
01:02:830 (7) - strange here.. try to improve.. (in fact I am out of ideas here...ORZ)

kiai part is well made.

01:04:664 (1) - make it same position as 01:05:164 (4) - to create a jump.
01:11:164 (4,5,1) - reduce jump here.. this kind of jump not good.
01:13:831 (1,2,3) - ^

that is all.

Please put the jump at the right place,(which is the music is higher) and your map should be better and better.
My Angel Kitteh
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ZHSteven's mod

ZHSteven wrote:

Mod for CTB diff:

Generally well made.
But I think you need to consider where you need a jump and where do not.
And some of the rythm seems not fit well with the song...

[size=150]*(UNRANKABLE)00:09:011 (1) - this spinner is too close to the note, it will make player hardly differentiate which is the correct note and which is the spinner.
So you need to make it start at 00:09:011 -

Please do same thing for 00:16:489 (1) - , 01:27:664 (1) -


First part, some of the note seems not fit well with the music..
00:01:844 (4) - I don't think this unexpected hyper is suitable here.. but anyway, keep it if you think it is good enough.
like 00:03:011 - (6) - , I suggest to move to 00:03:177 - .
00:06:344 (6) - I suggest to make it a triple instead of a slider
SPOILER
00:08:011 (11) - why not keep the note pattern?
suggestion:
SPOILER
00:13:844 (3,4) - better not use this kind of pattern.. it looks not good, just like standard mode.
00:16:489 (1) - ^


second part, you need to think twice before you put jumps:

00:21:175 (2,3,4,5) - seems eggpain here.. please try to use other pattern.
00:24:164 (2,3,4,5) - ^
00:23:186 (7) - this hyper not fit with the music. please try to place it in between 00:22:683 (6,1).
00:25:997 (1,3) - in my opinion, make this 2 slider in 45 degree works better
SPOILER
00:28:664 (2) - change direction?
SPOILER

00:33:664 (4,1) - maybe you can try to create a jump for this 2 with adjusting the previous slider.
00:38:664 (1,2) - reduce this jump by half will be better.
00:41:664 (5,1) - try to create a jump here.
00:43:831 (2,3,4) - reduce this and create a jump at 00:44:331 (5,1) - .
00:46:831 (8,9) - reduce this jump. not fit the music.
00:46:997 (9,1) - you can create a jump here.
01:02:830 (7) - strange here.. try to improve.. (in fact I am out of ideas here...ORZ)

kiai part is well made.

01:04:664 (1) - make it same position as 01:05:164 (4) - to create a jump.
01:11:164 (4,5,1) - reduce jump here.. this kind of jump not good.
01:13:831 (1,2,3) - ^

that is all.

Please put the jump at the right place,(which is the music is higher) and your map should be better and better.
ty, Steven <3
fixed a lot, but not all

http://puu.sh/IvGx and here's diff
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I made some little adjustment to soft-hitwhistle. I hope it can mix better with the drum of the music now (precondition: your timing is correct)

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Gu's Insane

00:41:164 - it feels a little awkward to skip this note imo, I recommand moving 00:41:330 (2) to this point, and rearrange the pattern here (for example stack 1&2. anything you like).
00:45:497 - I think with a note here will be better...I don't quite understand why you skip it
(if you follow the base track 00:44:997 (2) should be removed as well, but I still recommand following the vocal here)
00:45:664 (3) - this 3/4 slider makes no sense to me...I don't know what you aimed at, but 1/2 seems better.
00:46:497 ~ 00:46:664 - same thing as the first 2 I mentioned, and a 1/2 slider here will help make the flow better imo.



Hard

00:44:331 (1,2) - I think 2 should be a repeat slider instead of 1, it will follow the music better imo.
00:49:664 (1,2,3) - similar stuff, it seems a slider should be started from this point: 00:49:997. mb change 2&3 into repeat sliders instead of 1&2
01:26:997 - I think it should be normal sample instead of normal sample c1?
01:27:330 (2) - sounds better to me without whistle


Nich's Normal

fine


bestz's Easy

00:48:349 (3,2) - 2 notes at same time point
01:26:848 - remove clap?
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Thank you very much !
h-728
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Thank you for request

[General]
  • the timing of hit sounds of 00:17:989 sounds something strange, but I can't find better timing so I don't say about this...
    but how about remove whistle and it maybe sound better
[bestz's Easy]
  • unify the timing section with other diffs.(also you must fix Kiai Time and preview point)
    00:11:344 (1) - too far from the center. I think the note after the spinner should be put to more center.
    00:15:156 (2) - remove these notes because this circle is on the red tick. this is Easy, so you should make rhythm more easier imo.
    how about this rhythm?
    SPOILER
    00:16:406 (4) - NC. spinner new combo bug
    00:20:672 (3) - NC. this combo seems too long.
    00:26:015 (4) - ^
    00:31:348 (3) - ^
    00:36:015 (3) - ^
    00:40:349 (2) - there is no sounds to emphasize in music here and newbie players will be confused by these rhythm. so you shouldn't put circle here.
    to put the note like as 00:50:015 (1) is better.
    00:43:015 (2) - ^
    00:43:015 (2) - ^
    00:48:348 (3) - remove this "circle". no one can clear here
    01:00:515 - this break time seems unnecessary. remove, and put some notes.
[Nich's Normal]
  • AR -1? I feel too fast with 5
    00:08:677 (1,1) - I want more interval between these notes. to be shorten the spinner...but it may not match with the music
    remove 00:11:344 (1) and lengthen the spinner to 00:08:677 (1), or if you don't like it, how about put 00:11:344 (1) more closer to the center?
    00:58:097 - this inheriting section doesn't snapped
    01:00:664 (1,1) - same as above, it seems too short. how about this rhythm?(like as later section)
    SPOILER
    01:25:497 (2,3) - how about replace with one slider? because these notes are both on red tick.
    01:26:331 (6) - move to 01:26:497 and it will follow the music well imo.
overall, I think this Normal is a little hard for Normal.
consider reduce circles on red tick or replace 1/2 reversing slider to 1/1 slider.

[Hard]
  • 00:03:844 (3) - covered with previous slider, the start point can't be almost found.
    00:25:330 (7,1) - very nazi. how about remove stacking? because only these notes are stacked in this section.
    01:00:331 (9,1) - in my image of the song, these notes should be separated. because the melody changed.
    01:08:664 (2) - add finish to the head? I feel something lonely to hitsound.
    01:16:664 (1) - ^
[Gu's Insane]
  • 00:03:344 (1,2) - I think it's better to closer them. it looks hard to read rhythm visually.
    00:16:822 (1,1) - remove stacking? because these sliders have different SV. I think they should be separated.
    00:48:831 (2,3) - remove stacking? because of hitburst, it seems a little hard to read the rhythm of (3)
    00:57:831 (4,5,1) - stack them to easy to read rhythm. the distance of these notes are same as ..for example 00:49:331 (3,4,5).
    so visually it may be confusing.
    01:02:831 (6) - don't be silent the end of slider
    01:08:664 (1) - same as Hard
    01:16:664 (1) - ^
    01:27:164 (7) - replace with a circle? covered with hitburst, someone can regard this slider as a circle. also, this slider is very short.
that's all.

btw my first play of CTB
this is the game that I dodge the fruits, isn't it?
SPOILER
palinus
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[bestz's Easy]

01:14:015 (1) - move end point one grid to x:256 y:200
01:19:349 (1) - ^ move some grid points and it look better

[Nich's Normal]

01:26:331 (4) - move it to 01:26:497 (4) -

[Hard]

00:08:344 (6) - this would fit better in my opinion
00:25:830 - put a hit circle over the slider here?
00:41:997 (2) - would fit better at x:384 y:100
00:52:164 (1) - i didn't see any other stacking at this part so maybe unstack the hitcircle with the slider?
01:12:331 (3) - woulf fit better at x:400 y:168

[Gu's Insane]

Looks good too me x.x


I hope I was helpful
Nichiyouki
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Some fixed...

Thank you for mod, h-728 and palinus :)

http://puu.sh/K8zN
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no change
Betsuto
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h-728 wrote:


Thank you for request

[bestz's Easy]

  • 01:00:515 - this break time seems unnecessary. remove, and put some notes.- Ignore
All FIX !
Thanks 4 Mod

http://puu.sh/KaZ6
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