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Well then.. tiny changes
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Well then.. tiny changes
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Miya wrote:
Hello XavierJones.. thx for request..
General
-I see you haven't delete .osb file.. Delete it please, because you're not using any kind of storyboard element. Okay, fixed.
Normal
Same comment with the easy diff.. Great consistent spacing and beat placement , with some slider that are copied and paste without add some variation.. But the pattern is good
00:06:522 (2) - 2 grid right No.
00:22:647 (3,4,5) - this pattern is need to fix.. fix it to be like this >> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158770
dont forget to fix spacing with 1 on the next combo if you apply this fixes. Fixed.
01:58:272 (4) - 1 grid down Fixed.
02:22:647 (8) - maybe you want to rotate this.. Fixed.
02:25:647 (5,7) - ^ Fixed
03:18:897 (1) - remove new combo? Fixed
03:21:897 (1) - ^ Fixed
03:24:897 (1) - ^ Fixed
Maybe that's it my mod on the normal maps
That's all for my mod.. Your map is playable, and still fun to play, but add some variation especially in easy and normal diff, to make this map more exciting.. Good luck on ranking XavierJones Thx :3
http://puu.sh/6GKaMiya wrote:
HellDawn's Easy
Great map Consistent spacing and great beat placement
But i see some slider that i think you copied and paste it, without add some variation with it.. That monotone shape is not good..
00:35:397 (2,1,2,1) - same pattern in very close time.. I think you should use different pattern here. Done
And this slider shape is use again here > 00:43:646 (1) - Add some variation please..
01:06:146 (5) - >> make this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/158756 Done
01:20:771 (1) - oh god, i think this shape is used very much without adding some variation u_u
02:01:646 (1) - this whistle alone sound here sound weird to me.. remove it? Done
02:18:896 (6) - 1 grid up Done
02:24:146 (1) - i don't like this whistle sound here too.. maybe remove it? Done
Yes that's it.. My main critics on this map is 'add some variation on slider shape'
Mr Color wrote:
Normal
03:16:647 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - I don't think you need all this, I don't think so. you're pretty much set after the last chorus and since this is copy-pasta I don't think getting rid of it hurts the map a lot. Just place a circle or extend the spinner.
Other than that this is a fine difficulty, too bad you didn't use any curved sliders but that's okay.
Ty for mod
408,128,20797,2,0,B|313:41|203:214|108:128,1,320,0|0(if you don't know what to do with the code -> send me a pm
256,152,65046,5,2
316,196,65233,1,0
256,244,65421,1,2
196,288,65609,1,2
256,336,65797,1,0
HellDawn wrote:
Insane
00:06:172- claple baslaman yanlıs olmus finish ekle - Clap kaldirmadim ama güzel hatrin için bi finish ekledim
00:41:422- slider biraz cirkin geldi istersen buna bak tamam
Bunu alıp direk notepad e at .
00:11:984- new comboyu kaldır sonra ki slidere ekle ve sonraki slidere de finish ekle tamam
00:24:922- clap tamam
01:37:672- whistle tamam
02:02:422- bu kısım clapsiz oldugu icin hosuma gitmedi 4. circleye clap ekle ve sonraki 3. ye clapde ekle iyi olur tamam
02:07:672- finish tamam
02:18:922- bu kısımda sliderler yavas daha iyi olmazmı zaten yavas bir kısım yavas sliderlerde olursa daha müthiş olabilir daha iyi gibi ama emin degilim :p
02:22:672- bu slider ortada olursa daha hos durabilir tamam
02:28:672- ^ tamam
02:24:547- clap tamam
02:36:922- finish tamam
02:37:015- spinner burada baslarsa süper olur tamam
02:56:234- clap tamam
02:57:734- ^ tamam
03:02:047- ^ tamam
03:03:547- ^ tamam
03:13:672- ^ tamam
Normal
Approach Rate +1 4'te iyi, 5'te biraz hızlı oluyor sanki Normal için^^
Hitsounds ları kontrol etmelisin farkindayim, ona da bi el atarsin artik
Easy
00:58:672- 1 grid sol tamam
01:03:922- clap tamam
01:04:672- spinner burada baslamalı yeni oyuncuların yakalaması güc olur yeni oyuncular kadar tas düssün kafama ya u.u idare etsinler iste sorun yok xd
01:26:422- slider cirkinlesmis üsteki kırmızı küpü 2 saga cek tamam
01:24:172- new combo tamam
01:45:172- finish tamam
02:13:672- ^ tamam
02:16:672- ^ tamam
02:58:672- ^ tamam
03:15:172- spinneri burada baslat HAYIR!