Lolicore Flandre wrote:

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[Kazumi's Hard]

sexy~
AR -1?
OD -1? well i will immediately change if u ask CS-1 lol
Looks like a Insane too me, name it Kazumi's Hard+ XD?
The first kiai section, The double-clap doesnt sound very good to me ;A;
01:11:879 (1,2) - too high! ok i'll set it lower
01:20:213 (1,2) - a bit too high dont you think? hmm.. no O_o i dont think so
02:35:630 (3) - ^ no this one is not high
02:42:817 (3) - too hight again,its covering the HP bar which is unrankable it's not covering the HP bar =/ well but if u say so..
03:01:879 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - way too high! ok..

thx for modding ^^

Download: Refresh - Summertime (ekowraith remix) (Katty Pie) [Kazumi's Hard].osu

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested on my queue.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun

[General]
I see 2 osb files. delete one of them and do a full submission. oops delete ^^
Since you're using SB elements during the break, you should remove the letterbox during breaks as it gets in the way during gameplay. i think with it all ok


[Danmae's Normal]
00:18:963 (1) - *nazi* move this down to avoid the alight overlap on (2). fixed
01:01:880 (1) - are you sure that you want this slider here? i suggest stacking it on (1) so that it'd be fully visible for players to see.
01:02:713 (2,3) - if you follow the suggestion above, move this so that the end of (2) stacks on the end of (1).
01:33:963 (2) - stack this on the end of (2). it'd flow a lot smoother and it'd be visible for players to see. fixed
02:05:005 (2) - make this slider repeat once. i find the 2nd repeat to the end unfitting to the song. ik it's supposed to follow that long pause, but it doesn't flow that smoother to the vocals. fixed
02:23:963 (2,1) - 2 problems: personally i don't like the looks of these sliders because it plays weird during gameplay IMO, and the overlap from these 2 sliders looks bad because when i played it during gameplay, i got a bit lost, but i caught on as the slider pattern progresses. to put it in simple terms, this pattern is confusing for players IMO. correct it ^^
02:30:213 (1,1) - ^ hm i I will leave these =З
02:36:880 (1) - this slider is invisible to see by the previous slider, and that makes it hard for players to see where the slider is. move it where it can be fully visible to see for players. hm this slider manages to disappear before there will be a following but if someone else will point to it I will change
i might have overlooked a few bad overlaps here and there. go back to the map and fix them, but overall this could be better but not bad.

i'll do the other 2 diffs tomorrow when i wake up. in the meantime no kd until i'm finished with the full mod.

Byakugan249 wrote:

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[Kazumi's Hard]
decrease the OD by 1. IMO it looks a bit too hard for players. od is fine imo
00:17:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make this a proper star pattern. when i played this, it plays weird during gameplay and i felt a bit uncomfortable. it should be like this. (6) should stack on (1) to go back to where it started. nah i didnt do this unintentionally
00:36:046 (2) - either face this vertically, or move this somewhere else to avoid the slight overlap on (1). done
01:12:921 (4) - do Ctrl+R for a smoother flow from the previous note. i'll make this reverse
01:35:213 (1) - this wave slider can look a lot smoother and nicer. when i reached this slider, i realized that it breaks the flow to the next note IMO.k
01:56:671 (4) - similar to 00:46:046. nah
01:57:921 (4) - replace this for a 1/2 slider followed by a circle to follow the vocals a lot accurate. hmm.. no
03:23:129 (2) - similar to 00:46:046. r u telling me to place a jump here? to make this harder? o_O
i suggest replacing some of the short streams for a 1/4 kick slider to make it easier for players. don't overdo the streams on a hard diff otherwise, it'd look hard for players who play in hard diffs. but overall i think this map needs more work. there's several parts i don't like because i felt uncomfortable playing this diff, and same comment about the overlaps. urg.. i did try to reduce streams in my diff (i dont think i overused it?) O_o anyway thx for modding

update~

Download: Refresh - Summertime (ekowraith remix) (Katty Pie) [Kazumi's Hard].osu

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Insane]
00:26:463 (4) - why is the repeat arrow facing up? it makes the slider look bad during gameplay, so face the repeat arrrow horizontally to make it look nicer during gameplay. nope i think this slider fine ^^
03:25:421 (2) - why don't you stack this on the end of (6)? the overlap looks bad during gameplay IMO. correct this place)
overall there's several patterns that look too easy like the streams or triplets . the majority of them go in a straight line and that makes it too easy and boring IMO. try to change up your triplets and streams to make it fun for other players. blaaah all have different tastes Thx for mod

Philippines wrote:

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• Hard

1. 00:30:838 (1,2,3,4) - Try to fix the overlaps you have here. fixed
   
   
2. 01:24:380 (2,3) - This overlap too. k
   
   
3. 02:34:796 (5,6) - Ctrl + R. no
   
   
4. 02:50:213 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This doesn't make any sense. Don't put a stream here please. ok.. O_o
   
   
5. 03:27:921 (1) - I believe this spinner should start on 03:27:713. ok
   
   
6. Reduce AR and OD by 1. no

thx for modding ^^

Download: Refresh - Summertime (ekowraith remix) (Katty Pie) [Kazumi's Hard].osu

1. Pretty SB!
2. Uhm about the skin, since you added a hitcircle.png and a hitcircleoverlay.png, you also need to include an approachcircle.png and a sliderborder color to complete the hitcircle set.
3. Please add to tags the name of the creators of those guest diffs.
4. I think that "ekowraith remix" needs to be capitalized (Ekowraith Remix).

1. 00:32:921 (2,3,1) - Please don't place notes like this. They're very hard for beginners to read this kind of overlapped notes. They get covered with their hitbursts. Here's a screenshot:
   
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2. 00:54:796 (2) - Why is this note here? There's no sound, and it is very closer to the start of the next spinner. I highly recommend you to delete it.
3. 00:56:880 (1) - This note get's overlapped with the spinner-osu. Move it more down so it doesn't get covered up.
4. 00:57:713 (1) - Very unnecesary new combo. Short new combos might be confusing for beginner players. They might get a bit confused about when they have to click that note alone with new combo.
5. 01:03:546 (1) - This kind of sliders (aka burai sliders) aren't rankable. Please change this slider shape for a rankable one. A simple curved shape would work well. The worst thing is that you used this slider a lot of times. You'll have to change them all.
6. 02:08:338 (1,2) - You stack notes and sliders like this a lot of times. This is not unrankable, obviously, but thinking about gameplay, it gets boring.
7. 02:48:338 (1,2,3,4,5) - A bitHard pattern for a Normal diff.
   03:01:046 (4,1,2) - This sliders get overlapped by themselves. Try to avoid overlappings, at least in this kind of difficulties. You should place sliders in a more intuitive way. Perhaps more clean, like this:
   
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   Well that's it. The difficulty settings seems ok. I just suggest a remap. Try to look at a ranked normal diff and then remap this one.

1. 00:15:213 (1) - A whistle at the end of this slider sounds good with the vocals to me.
2. 00:16:254 (3) - A whistle at the start of this one fits nice too. How about adding it?
3. 00:16:879 (5) - In this case, I disagree about this whistle here. It sounds better with the voice if you remove it imo.
4. 00:17:921 (3) - How about adding a whistle here and also to 00:18:129 (4)?
5. 00:18:963 (1) - Whistle at the start of this slider to keep following the voice?
6. 00:19:588 (3) - ^
7. 00:20:213 (4) - Again, I disagree about this whistle. Doesn't seem to follow the vocals at all. Remove it?
8. 00:26:880 (1) - ^
9. 00:28:546 (1,2) - The space between this 2 notes feels kinda empty. How about replacing this notes with a long slider? Again, this is to follow better the voice.
10. 00:40:213 (4) - And again lol remove this whistle?
11. 00:43:546 (1) - A whistle at the end of this slider sounds great to me.
12. 00:55:004 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this, but if I'm not wrong, this kind of sliders with weird nodes aren't rankable.
13. 01:03:546 (2,3) - The space between this 2 sliders feels.. weird to me ;-; but I don't have idea of what I can suggest you to do instead.
14. 01:18:859 (2) - I dislike how this note sounds. It's in a blue tick, and the "clap" sound of the song itself it's at the white tick, so the sample also make it sound more weird.
15. 02:10:213 (5,1) - Emptiness again. Maybe try this instead to avoid emptiness?
    
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    I like very much this difficulty. It looks so clean and cool. I just.. feel this like a.. Hard+. It has some big jumps for a Hard diff and some.. insane-ish stuff but I like it.

1. 00:40:213 (1) - I personally dislike this claps a lot ;-; I don't see their purpose, they don't seem to be following your clap pattern at all.
2. 00:53:650 - Add a note here? This feels a bit empty, and a bit.. weird to play because in this tick there's a missing beat of the whole stream. Well this is on purpose I guess, but I like way more how it sounds if you map all the stream.
3. 02:39:275 - ^
4. 02:39:692 - ^
5. 02:42:609 - ^
6. 02:51:359 - ^
7. 02:52:609 - ^
8. 02:54:275 - ^ Well I'll stop spamming this. I think this about all of your streams that sound like that.
9. 03:05:734 (2) - This feels a bit overmapped because there's no sound here, so I recommend you to remove this note.
10. 03:09:900 (3) - ^
11. 03:18:234 (5) - ^
12. 03:28:130 (7) - Unnecessary slider with repeat. A bit overmapped again. This one should be a long slider without that repeat.
13. 03:28:546 (1) - A finish at the end of this spinner sounds nice. Add finish?
    
    A bit overmapped in some parts but pretty nice difficulty. I like it!

1. 00:23:338 (3) - First of all, this pattern is sudden, the finish on the reverse is too surprising, i suggest to make something like this, take a consistent rhythm. i understand you wanna make variation, but it should be clear for begginners : http://puu.sh/xg0P ( you can also replace the 3 & 4 i placed by a slider. )
   
2. 00:35:213 (1) - lolwut? this structure x) http://puu.sh/xg1d
   
3. 00:41:880 (1) - I don't really see the NECESSARY of this : http://puu.sh/xg1C if you catch what i mean.. i see CONFUSING against beginners players. ( and it affect on every next slider like this one for sure ! )
   
4. 01:18:546 (3) - This clap is randomly placed because these who are placed before are in a consistent rhythm.
   
5. 01:33:546 - in this parts, every Normal HS inherited sections are useless, remove them
   
6. Then on this part, add finishes for suit the (3), because it's the only one who has a finish HS.
   
7. 02:18:546 - Add a Note with a whistle, the inherited section is here for that.
   
8. 02:18:755 (5) - Put finishes on the both extremities of this slider, it sounds A LOT better, and suit the music.
   
9. 02:38:338 - Click on the following button : http://puu.sh/xg4X because it's a short break and it looks better to me, but if you don't want it's ok~
   
10. 02:41:671 - Same as ↑
    
11. 02:56:880 (1) - Finish the beginning of this note and Clap the end.
    
12. 02:58:963 (4) - Clap the beginning, i don't understand here why you didn't put claps, because you sometimes follow this Clap Rhythm

1. Please no, I don't like the "+", it's a Normal or it's a Hard. Because a Normal a bit harder is a Hard.
2. 01:16:880 (1,2) - Sorry to say that, but it's horrible, first of all, it's not symmetrical, second, it's overlapping too much and going to be ugly, i suggest to make the sliders exactly same as the 2 one after but flipped verticaly~.
3. 01:28:546 (1) - Melody not finished, so you should delete the new combo~.

1. OH DEAR IT'S AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
2. Though, i would call this diff an Insane. due to the streams and the jumps~ it's your choice.

1. 00:30:005 (8,1,2,3,4) - This stream is a cool exemple of overmapping
2. 00:33:234 (2) - Ohai ↑
3. 01:32:088 (6) - Overlap this note with the next one, for make the jump effect~
4. 01:55:005 (6) - Put this note in the centre of the screen i mean x: 256

Kei wrote:

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Hii!

[Kazumi's Hard]
This difficulty doesn't have an epilepsy warning like the other diffs. Please add that warning to this diff too.

1. 00:15:213 (1) - A whistle at the end of this slider sounds good with the vocals to me. nah, i followed the instrument in this part
2. 00:16:254 (3) - A whistle at the start of this one fits nice too. How about adding it?^
3. 00:16:879 (5) - In this case, I disagree about this whistle here. It sounds better with the voice if you remove it imo.^
4. 00:17:921 (3) - How about adding a whistle here and also to 00:18:129 (4)?
5. 00:18:963 (1) - Whistle at the start of this slider to keep following the voice? hmm ok
6. 00:19:588 (3) - ^
7. 00:20:213 (4) - Again, I disagree about this whistle. Doesn't seem to follow the vocals at all. Remove it? no..
8. 00:26:880 (1) - ^ k
9. 00:28:546 (1,2) - The space between this 2 notes feels kinda empty. How about replacing this notes with a long slider? Again, this is to follow better the voice. hmm.. i'll consider abt this
10. 00:40:213 (4) - And again lol remove this whistle? k
11. 00:43:546 (1) - A whistle at the end of this slider sounds great to me. done
12. 00:55:004 (1,2) - I'm not really sure about this, but if I'm not wrong, this kind of sliders with weird nodes aren't rankable. uhm? well i'll fix this if there's 1 more tell me to
13. 01:03:546 (2,3) - The space between this 2 sliders feels.. weird to me ;-; but I don't have idea of what I can suggest you to do instead. lol ok
14. 01:18:859 (2) - I dislike how this note sounds. It's in a blue tick, and the "clap" sound of the song itself it's at the white tick, so the sample also make it sound more weird. actually there r lots of clap on blue tick in this diff, instead of 2nd beat. If u get the flow i think it's fine? o_o
15. 02:10:213 (5,1) - Emptiness again. Maybe try this instead to avoid emptiness? i disagree
    
    I like very much this difficulty. It looks so clean and cool. I just.. feel this like a.. Hard+. It has some big jumps for a Hard diff and some.. insane-ish stuff but I like it.

Musty wrote:

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[Kazumi's Hard]

>kazumikos
Oh dear pro mapping incoming

OH DEAR IT'S AWESOMEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
Though, i would call this diff an Insane. due to the streams and the jumps~ it's your choice. yes.. it's a bit hard, but compared with [Insane] this is still easier ^^ , i think i'll keep it like this for now

thx for modding =D

Download: Refresh - Summertime (ekowraith remix) (Katty Pie) [Kazumi's Hard].osu

HellDawn wrote:

Easy

01:20:213- this circle too far previous note.
01:33:546- finish
01:34:380- ^ <--- fixed all


Normal

00:41:880- +finish
00:45:213- ^
00:48:546- ^
00:56:880- ^
01:53:546- ^ <--- not changes

Hard

Nice diff *-*

Insane

00:41:880- finish
00:45:213- ^
00:56:880- ^
01:10:213- ^
02:33:546- i think sliders unrankable cuz cant catch them <--- fixed all

Leorda wrote:

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Hi there

[Kazumi's Hard]
00:30:421 (7) - Replace this into a slider that end at 00:30:630 for following rhythm? then what am i suppose to do with 00:30:838 (1) - ? o_o
00:56:254 (5,6) - Reverse this place (Ctrl+R) to make a triangle pattern? done
02:17:088 (4) - This object is touch the HP Bar fixed

Bobo wrote:

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[Hard]

Seems like a pretty big difficulty hike in comparison to [Normal], perhaps you should tone down the difficulty settings a little bit. Especially the AR. no.. cant use ar 7

02:39:484 (4,5,6) - 3 notes stacked underneath a slider endpoint, was a little hard for me to read. How about spacing them out like you have in previous patterns like this such as 01:27:192 (2,3,4,5)? fixed

That's all for this diff, the only thing that really bothers me is the difficulty curve. This feels more like a light Insane.

thx for modding
http://www.mediafire.com/?i54by3whpxb3fr4

alacat wrote:

[Kazumi's Hard]
●Approach Rate and overall diffculty -1 ? nah
AR 8 ,OD 7 same Insane diff

●02:54:692 - add note? done

●03:14:588 - ^ k

good map set :3

1. 00:15:213 (1) - 1 grid right+slight curve down to make a blanket with 00:16:046 (2) - ?
2. 00:50:213 (1) - Remove the New Combo to make this pattern like the others
3. 01:01:463 (4,5) - Change the slider 4 like this,to make a better looking blanket with the note 5
4. 02:02:296 (5) - 4 grids down to make this match with 02:00:630 (2) - ? (you can eventually change the sliders' shapes/positions to make the spacing right)
5. 02:16:046 (1,2) - Allign the slider 2 with 1
6. 03:10:213 (1) - Put this here?
7. 03:28:546 (2) - 1 grid down and left to make the blanket better?

1. 00:33:754 (4) - Manual stack this?
2. 01:09:796 (4) - 3 grids down and left,just to make 01:08:963 (2,3,4) - a better triangle pattern,and to make this alligned with 01:08:963 (2) - ?
3. 02:19:380 (1,2) - I think a pattern like this would be better here (if you want,you can put a note like now instead of a repeat with the slider 2)
4. 02:23:963 (2) - I know this could be considered as a "jump",but I suggest you to move this slider 2 grids right,just to make this encircle in a better way
5. 02:23:546 (1) -
6. 03:27:297 (2) - Make this slider stacked with the end of 03:25:630 (2) - ?
   
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1. 01:02:504 (4) - Put the last waypoint of this slider 4 grids up and 2 left,just to make the blanket with 01:02:192 (2) - better?
2. 02:17:296 (1) - Put the 2nd waypoint 2 grids down for the same reason as above?

1. 00:33:338 (2) - Remove the clap at the begnning?
2. 00:49:588 (8,9) - Why don't you curve this in opposite sides?
3. 02:32:713 (3) - Allign this with 02:32:505 (2) - by moving it 1 grid right (nazi,fix only if you really want :3)
4. 03:15:942 (1) - I don't really see the reason on why you used a NC here... Even if it fits with the pattern,it doesen't fit really well with the song's rythm. Remove this?
5. 03:21:880 (5) - NC here and remove NC on 03:22:505 (1) - to follow the previous patterns?

hichman wrote:

Requested mod.

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[Hard]

00:43:338 empty place, add circle
01:00:005 ^
02:10:421 ^
02:15:630 ^
It's a quite hard, i guess it must be easier - decrease approach rate.

urhmm sorry but no change =/

-kevincela- wrote:

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Kazumi's Hard

01:02:504 (4) - Put the last waypoint of this slider 4 grids up and 2 left,just to make the blanket with 01:02:192 (2) - better?
02:17:296 (1) - Put the 2nd waypoint 2 grids down for the same reason as above?
fixed

thx for modding ^^
http://uploaded.to/file/j9vef0pd