[Ar3's Easy]

[Hard]

[Chick]

W h i t e wrote:

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From My Modding queue~

General

Where is kiai Time..? I want kiai time! lol...

Ar3's Easy

00:49:870 (2) - : I want to make a blanket (Suggestion) ok

01:35:995 (2) - : It is hard for Newbie player... changed a little

02:08:995 (4,1) - : ^ Maybe delete NC

Hard

00:19:682 (4,5) - : Stuck is good

00:58:307 (4,1,2) - : Oh... confusing...

Chick

01:19:870 (1) - : spacing is different fixed

01:52:682 (1) - : Slider is Weird... changed a little
or is good

Finish~ Good luck~

S h i o n wrote:

A bit late from my queue:


Ar3's Easy
01:49:870 (4) - 去掉这个，给(3)加一个来回? 因为感觉这个note有点没在vocal上 ok


Hard
01:00:557 (4,5,6,1) - 456不要原地叠，改成0.15DS的anti-jump？ 这样的话note是下一个跳note的流向，感觉不会那么突然了。
01:38:995 (1) - NC? 感觉和开头第一个单独颜色note差不多吧~ fixed
01:39:370 (2,7) - NC fixed
01:46:307 (3) - NC 01:47:245 (8) - NC 01:47:807 (1) - RNC (这一段NC好像比较乱，我的感觉... fixed
02:05:995 (4) - 最好还是和前面3个spacing一样 ok


Chick
diff name 为啥取这个呢~
00:20:620 (4) - 尾巴被挡(虽然没有全部被挡到
00:21:557 (1,2,3,4) - 可以再摆开点，不然的话00:23:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - 大间距会有点突然
00:47:245 (4) - Ctrl+R?
00:59:245 (2) - ^ ok

That's all ~

1. Not sure with the tittle. Is the tittle just Da Mao Xian or with (Big adventure)? If (Big Adventure) is the translation of Da Mao Xian, then you should remove the (Big adventure) but include it in tags.

1. Since this have become a normal diff, raise the difficulty setting. AR 4, HP and OD 3 is enough imo, and won't change the star rating much higher.
2. 00:12:370 (1) - Since it's the opening of new rythim, i think it's good to have a finish on here.
3. 00:14:620 (3) - Feel, a bit empty, how about a clap on this slider end?
4. 00:24:370 (2) - Add a finish to follow up cymbal on the back?
5. 00:25:120 (1) - I think clap on this slider end should be on 00:25:682 (2) -
6. 00:29:245 (1) - I think you miss a clap on this slider start.
7. 00:36:370 (1,3) - Finish on these slider start please. Not consistant with 00:42:370 (2,4) -
8. 00:51:370 (3) - I think you should add a new combo here, since this is a start of chorus.
9. 00:53:245 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit the stanza and downbeat. So please remove the new combo. And you should add new combo here 00:54:370 (3) -
10. 00:56:245 (1,3) - Same case as ^
11. 00:59:245 (1) - ^
12. 01:03:370 (3) - Same case as ^ so please new combo.
13. 01:04:495- Since you suddenly repeat polarity from white to red at 01:04:120 (2,1) - i highly suggest you add a note here since it will help the player to guess the rythim on 01:04:682 (1) - . Don't forget to add clap on this note, since it's very good to hear.
14. 01:06:370 (1) - Nc, i won't tell you the reason again.
15. 01:07:495- Same case as 01:04:495-
16. 01:07:682 (3) - Remove nc
17. 01:09:370 (5) - Nc
18. 01:10:495- Same as 01:04:495-
19. 01:10:682 (1) - Remove nc
20. 01:11:995 (1) - Remove nc too.
21. 01:45:370 (1,2) - You missing a finish on this two slider start.
22. 01:54:370 (5) - Nc
23. 01:55:495- Add a note with clap like previous mod.
24. 01:55:682 (1) - Remove nc
25. 01:57:370 (4) - Nc
26. 01:58:495- Add note with clap
27. 01:58:682 (1) - Remove nc
28. 02:01:495- Add note with clap
29. 02:06:370 (1) - It will be good if you add a finish here on the start since it's the begining of new chorus.
30. 02:07:495- Add note with clap
31. 02:10:495- ^ , but remove clap on 02:10:682 (3) - start since it's breaking the consistencies.
32. 02:13:495- ^

1. 00:05:995 (1) - Remove the finish please, it's too loud and overused imo.
2. 00:17:245 (5) - I think you can add a new combo here to since it's the beginning of new rythim.
3. 00:32:245 (6,7,8) - Hmm, this jump is not consistant. There's no jump like these in your previous rythim. Even it's playabl, but it can surprise some player. So i think you should ctrl+r 7 and 8 back or make a pattern that doesn't consist jump.
4. 00:41:995 (1,2) - Switch new combos please. Doesn't consistant.
5. 00:47:995 (3) - Hmm, i think you should add clap here too for clap consistencies.
6. 01:00:932 (5,6) - Please don't stack these. It's really hard to read the rythim and doesn't flow well. Also, put 01:01:307 (6) - close to 01:01:495 (1) - so it will not surpise the player with jump.
7. 01:44:057 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Doesn't very good to look at. Maybe this example will help you to improve this pattern > http://puu.sh/xU8m
8. 01:50:995 (2) - Hmm, like previous rythim, add clap at this slider start?
9. 01:53:807- If you do timing point suggestion above, you could add another timing point there to increase the volume back to 80%.
10. 02:07:682 (5) - New combo please, not consistant with your previous combo.
11. 02:10:682 (5) - ^
12. 02:15:932 (5,6) - Again, don't stack this note please. Very hard to read the rythim since it's stacked.

1. 00:20:245 (3) - Please don't make this slider overlap 00:20:620 (4) - . Because of this i thought the end of 00:20:620 (4) - was a circle. It's against rule of ranking because it doesn't have clear path.
2. 00:25:682 (1) - This slider body is really covered by previous combo hitburst. I can't see the slider body clearly unless i use costum skin. Make different pattern please, again, this is against tthe rule
3. 00:27:557 (1,2,3,4) - Why this note is a jump but 00:21:557 (1,2,3,4) - not. At least make it consistant. If you do jump, make rythim like this all jump. It really surprise me when i pass this note because it's have a jump.
4. 00:33:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^
5. 00:42:370 (1) - I think you miss a finish here at slider start.
6. 00:43:870 (1) - ^
7. 00:47:245 (4) - I think it's nice if continue your clap rythim here. So add a clap on this slider start.
8. 00:47:995 (3) - ^
9. 01:32:057- Raise the volume of timing point here by 10% please. It's too low.
10. 01:35:807 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? I don't see any reason on it. Remove it please.
11. 01:40:870 (1) - Hmm, you miss a finish at this slider start again.
12. 01:46:870 (1) - ^
13. 01:44:995 (1) - Very awkward slider. Make like this shape instead > http://puu.sh/xUpC
14. 01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - Stack this properly? Doesn't good to see imo.
15. 01:52:495- Also, raise this timing point by 10% too.
16. 01:54:370- ^
17. 02:02:620 (3) - You miss a clap here at this slider end.
18. 02:18:370 (1) - Remove clap from this spinner. Very loud and awkward to hear. Instead, change the end of this spinner to soft sound with 40% like hard diff.

AoiX wrote:

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Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
这算填老坑？我来随便打点毛线好了～
·好歹。。。把滑条消音啊 ok
·背景和打毛线大冒险没有任何关系啊

[Chick]
01:18:745 (3) - 反转箭头被部分遮挡http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330136 fixed
01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这个梗实际效果并不是很好 stack
01:52:682 (1) - 感觉还可以多加几个锚点，更圆润点
Kiai呢？
我觉得音效还有很多可处理的地方，全程用一种音效而且基本只有clap听着会疲劳啊。像00:15:557 (1,2,3,4) 这种地方可以用soft音效配合使用whistle，而像00:51:370 (1,2,3)这种三声“嘿嘿嘿“则可以用finish音效来进行增强

[Hard]
感觉这个难度和chick没多大区别啊，做出点spread撒
02:07:307 (4) - 这个也有点小挡 fixed

[Normal]
N/A

总的说。。。没什么大问题，但是难度分布不太好；音效方面也还需要加工。可以找我代工哦～

Miya wrote:

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Hi popner :3

General

1. Not sure with the tittle. Is the tittle just Da Mao Xian or with (Big adventure)? If (Big Adventure) is the translation of Da Mao Xian, then you should remove the (Big adventure) but include it in tags.

Ar3's Normal

1. Since this have become a normal diff, raise the difficulty setting. AR 4, HP and OD 3 is enough imo, and won't change the star rating much higher. ok
2. 00:12:370 (1) - Since it's the opening of new rythim, i think it's good to have a finish on here. ok
3. 00:14:620 (3) - Feel, a bit empty, how about a clap on this slider end? ok
4. 00:24:370 (2) - Add a finish to follow up cymbal on the back? ok
5. 00:25:120 (1) - I think clap on this slider end should be on 00:25:682 (2) - sounds weird
6. 00:29:245 (1) - I think you miss a clap on this slider start. added
7. 00:36:370 (1,3) - Finish on these slider start please. Not consistant with 00:42:370 (2,4) - added
8. 00:51:370 (3) - I think you should add a new combo here, since this is a start of chorus. added
9. 00:53:245 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit the stanza and downbeat. So please remove the new combo. And you should add new combo here 00:54:370 (3) - ok
10. 00:56:245 (1,3) - Same case as ^ ok
11. 00:59:245 (1) - ^ ok
12. 01:03:370 (3) - Same case as ^ so please new combo. ok
13. 01:04:495- Since you suddenly repeat polarity from white to red at 01:04:120 (2,1) - i highly suggest you add a note here since it will help the player to guess the rythim on 01:04:682 (1) - . Don't forget to add clap on this note, since it's very good to hear. ok
14. 01:06:370 (1) - Nc, i won't tell you the reason again. ok
15. 01:07:495- Same case as 01:04:495- ok
16. 01:07:682 (3) - Remove nc ok
17. 01:09:370 (5) - Nc ok
18. 01:10:495- Same as 01:04:495- ok
19. 01:10:682 (1) - Remove nc ok
20. 01:11:995 (1) - Remove nc too. ok
21. 01:45:370 (1,2) - You missing a finish on this two slider start. added
22. 01:54:370 (5) - Nc ok
23. 01:55:495- Add a note with clap like previous mod. added
24. 01:55:682 (1) - Remove nc ok
25. 01:57:370 (4) - Nc ok
26. 01:58:495- Add note with clap
27. 01:58:682 (1) - Remove nc ok
28. 02:01:495- Add note with clap
29. 02:06:370 (1) - It will be good if you add a finish here on the start since it's the begining of new chorus. ok
30. 02:07:495- Add note with clap ok
31. 02:10:495- ^ , but remove clap on 02:10:682 (3) - start since it's breaking the consistencies. ok
32. 02:13:495- ^ ok

Hard

1. 00:05:995 (1) - Remove the finish please, it's too loud and overused imo. ok
2. 00:17:245 (5) - I think you can add a new combo here to since it's the beginning of new rythim. ok
3. 00:32:245 (6,7,8) - Hmm, this jump is not consistant. There's no jump like these in your previous rythim. Even it's playabl, but it can surprise some player. So i think you should ctrl+r 7 and 8 back or make a pattern that doesn't consist jump. hmm..since there are a lot of sliders here, i think it is not so hard
4. 00:41:995 (1,2) - Switch new combos please. Doesn't consistant. it is same as 00:35:995 (1,2)
5. 00:47:995 (3) - Hmm, i think you should add clap here too for clap consistencies. there is no hitsound in music, so i don't want use clap here
6. 01:00:932 (5,6) - Please don't stack these. It's really hard to read the rythim and doesn't flow well. Also, put 01:01:307 (6) - close to 01:01:495 (1) - so it will not surpise the player with jump. ok
7. 01:44:057 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Doesn't very good to look at. Maybe this example will help you to improve this pattern > http://puu.sh/xU8m it is a symmetry of 01:42:745 (1,2,3), though change from sliders to circles
8. 01:50:995 (2) - Hmm, like previous rythim, add clap at this slider start? same as previous one
9. 01:53:807- If you do timing point suggestion above, you could add another timing point there to increase the volume back to 80%. hmm...reorganized all volume
10. 02:07:682 (5) - New combo please, not consistant with your previous combo. fixed
11. 02:10:682 (5) - ^ fixed
12. 02:15:932 (5,6) - Again, don't stack this note please. Very hard to read the rythim since it's stacked. i want to keep this

Chick

1. 00:20:245 (3) - Please don't make this slider overlap 00:20:620 (4) - . Because of this i thought the end of 00:20:620 (4) - was a circle. It's against rule of ranking because it doesn't have clear path. fixed
2. 00:25:682 (1) - This slider body is really covered by previous combo hitburst. I can't see the slider body clearly unless i use costum skin. Make different pattern please, again, this is against tthe rule fixed
3. 00:27:557 (1,2,3,4) - Why this note is a jump but 00:21:557 (1,2,3,4) - not. At least make it consistant. If you do jump, make rythim like this all jump. It really surprise me when i pass this note because it's have a jump. this section is stronger than previous one, so i want to use different patterns
4. 00:33:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^ ^
5. 00:42:370 (1) - I think you miss a finish here at slider start. added
6. 00:43:870 (1) - ^ added
7. 00:47:245 (4) - I think it's nice if continue your clap rythim here. So add a clap on this slider start. added
8. 00:47:995 (3) - ^ added
9. 01:32:057- Raise the volume of timing point here by 10% please. It's too low. it is same as previous repeat
10. 01:35:807 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? I don't see any reason on it. Remove it please. fixed
11. 01:40:870 (1) - Hmm, you miss a finish at this slider start again. added
12. 01:46:870 (1) - ^ added
13. 01:44:995 (1) - Very awkward slider. Make like this shape instead > http://puu.sh/xUpC ok
14. 01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - Stack this properly? Doesn't good to see imo. ok
15. 01:52:495- Also, raise this timing point by 10% too.
16. 01:54:370- ^
17. 02:02:620 (3) - You miss a clap here at this slider end. added
18. 02:18:370 (1) - Remove clap from this spinner. Very loud and awkward to hear. Instead, change the end of this spinner to soft sound with 40% like hard diff. ok

Good map. I'm enjoying this. Try to search for 2 more mod then call me back.
Good luck~

SliderMultiplier:0.9

Good Map overall. I enjoyed playing this map. Good luck with your map.

BeatofIke wrote:

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Request from my modding queue. Sorry for the long wait. Here's what I've found:

General
-> Add Kiai Time.

Normal
-> Open osu file and set the slider multiplier to 0.9 (not 0.899999999999999). this doesn't matter so i'll keep it

SliderMultiplier:0.9

NOTE: Be sure to save the osu file and 'revert to saved' on the osu editor when finished.
00:25:682 (2) - Bad polarity. Maybe change it to a 1/1 slider? Same pattern as 01:07:495 (2,3,4) or even 02:07:495 (2,3,4,5).
01:35:995 (2) - Pretty strange slider. Change it to something nicer. changed some patterns

Hard
-> Set HP drain to 5 for better difficulty spread.
-> Set Overall difficulty to 5 for better difficulty spread.

Insane
-> Nothing found.

Good Map overall. I enjoyed playing this map. Good luck with your map.

1. 00:13:682 (4) - New combo here to make combo consistant with next rythim.
2. 02:18:370 (1) - Why this spinner end still on normal sound? I told you to change it into soft hitsound with 40% volume

1. 00:55:682 (5) - New combo here to make consistant combo.
2. 00:58:682 (1,2) - This part is quite confusing with sudden jump and the repeat slider. My suggestion is remove the repeat then add a note here 00:59:057- with. It's have more good flow than previous one. You must find new pattern to fix this one.
3. 01:04:682 (6) - New combo here, same reason as above.
4. 01:07:682 (5) - ^
5. 01:10:682 (5) - ^

1. 00:47:620 (4) - You miss a clap at this slider end.
2. 01:27:745-01:53:620- Make timing volume here then organize it just like harder diff. Make the chorus section 80% and not chorus sectin 60%-70%
3. 01:55:495 (2,3) - Nazi, but 1 grid up this note will make these slider symetrical with 01:54:370 (1) -

Miya wrote:

Recheck >.<

Chick

1. 00:13:682 (4) - New combo here to make combo consistant with next rythim.
2. 02:18:370 (1) - Why this spinner end still on normal sound? I told you to change it into soft hitsound with 40% volume

Hard

1. 00:55:682 (5) - New combo here to make consistant combo.
2. 00:58:682 (1,2) - This part is quite confusing with sudden jump and the repeat slider. My suggestion is remove the repeat then add a note here 00:59:057- with. It's have more good flow than previous one. You must find new pattern to fix this one.
3. 01:04:682 (6) - New combo here, same reason as above.
4. 01:07:682 (5) - ^
5. 01:10:682 (5) - ^

Ar3's Normal

1. 00:47:620 (4) - You miss a clap at this slider end. it is consistent with other diffs
2. 01:27:745-01:53:620- Make timing volume here then organize it just like harder diff. Make the chorus section 80% and not chorus sectin 60%-70% use same green line with Chick
3. 01:55:495 (2,3) - Nazi, but 1 grid up this note will make these slider symetrical with 01:54:370 (1) -

That's all. Call me again for recheck again.

1. 01:52:870 (3) - Move this slider 1/2 backward please but keep the slider end at 01:53:620-. Doesn't follow the rythim well.

1. 00:58:682 (1,2,3) - Uh, the placement makes the flow broke, because it's suddenly goes down but goes up. Why not make a pattern like this > http://puu.sh/yg0B ?

SapphireGhost wrote:

It seems you requested this map before the Star Priority change, so you need to get +12 now. I'll leave this here in the meantime: +12 now~

mod

[Hard]
01:00:557 (4,5,6) - I think this spacing is confusing at this Approach Rate. Try changing the pattern to make it more readable on the first try. Changed

[Ar3's Normal]
00:26:995 (1) - I'd avoid using this sort of slider on the easiest difficulty because it's hard to tell how many times it repeats. Follow a simpler rhythm here instead. Change to 2 short sliders now

Let me know when everything's ready.

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