Katty Pie wrote:

<3

Insane

00:47:188 - add note sound better
00:49:097 - ^
00:55:642 - ^
01:16:506 - this slider not the equal

172,120,76506,6,0,B|212:56|296:56|340:120,1,200,0|8

01:52:915 - add note
01:57:279 - ^
02:01:233 - http://puu.sh/qy8G and add note on 02:02:188
02:03:824 - add note
02:09:552 - ^
02:11:733 - ^
02:13:915 - ^
02:57:552 - ^
02:59:733 - ^
03:01:915 - ^
03:04:506 - i think better make stream from 5 notes
03:06:279 - add note
03:08:461 - ^
03:10:642 - ^
03:13:233 - maybe stream?
03:15:006 - add note
03:17:188 - ^
03:19:370 - ^
Just with threefold notes sounds more variously and interestingly, and so all monotonously and equally (

Good luck <3

01:16:506 - this slider not the equal

172,120,76506,6,0,B|212:56|296:56|340:120,1,200,0|8

Ylinestra44 wrote:

FINALLY!
Done re-doing my diff.
Here it is, with new jumps, new notes, and new symmetry.
I hope it is good, because I won't re-do it again! xD

ertyukjh010 wrote:

hello,

[General]

Offset 19779.3460150491 → 19780 okay

[Easy]

03:23:052 (1) - completed stack with 03:20:870 (4) at reply. done

[Kyshiro's Normal]

02:39:961 - useless inherited point

[Yli's Hard]

01:40:506 (7) - Nc here
01:40:779 (1) - Remove NC

[Insane]

02:24:961 - useless inherited point done
02:39:961 - ^ done

THat all

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY

SPOILER

1. 02:26:324 (1) - This spinner should end at 02:29:597. done

ertyukjh010 wrote:

[Kyshiro's Normal]

02:39:961 - useless inherited point Fixed

Philippines wrote:

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

1. 00:24:688 (2) - Move to x:268 y:88. Fixed
   
   
2. 00:42:142 (2) - Inconsistent Spacing from previous and next notes. [/color]Not really necessary, it won't cause any confusion because the 2 sliders before it explain the next ones.
   
   
3. 01:56:870 (1) - Remove the red point of the 3rd point of this slider. To remove the red point, simply right click on it and it will turn white. Fixed

L_P wrote:

hi :3

General : good map with interesting jump etc very good for players between 20000-40000 to practice jump

score spread wasnt that good...

Insane

00:43:233 (5,6) - make it different from note 3,4 to make it more interesting example bigger spacing/ rotation etc changed

00:45:415 (5,6) - ^ (i suggest bigger spacing here) changed

01:20:324 (7) - maybe move it somewhere between note 1 and 2 (so that note 5,6,7 have more even spacing and to create an antijump between 7 and next combo's note 1) no, I don't want to make an antijump

01:29:597 (1) - finish changed

02:02:324 (1) - feel like here MUST create a jump (as the vocal hints me with high pitch blablabla) changed

02:07:779 (4,5) - same..maybe make the spacing smaller like this http://puu.sh/rdX8 no, it would be too easy

02:56:870 (1) - could make better shape imo changed

02:59:051 (1) - ^ changed

03:31:779 (1) - stack with note 4? no, the distance is bigger

want a star? i see so many stars already, if you want me to star another map (or you are so kind to let me keep my kudos) , whatever you wanna do pls pm me...

good luck on ranking this , map was good enough to be ranked as your first rank map

L_P wrote:

want a star? i see so many stars already, if you want me to star another map (or you are so kind to let me keep my kudos) , whatever you wanna do pls pm me...

Aleks719 wrote:

irc mod

19:00  *Aleks719 is editing (Simon Curtis - Super Psycho Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/44132]
19:00 <Aleks719> : i want to make irc mod
19:00 <MystykAMV> : okaaaaaaaay :3
19:01 <Aleks719> : hard, normal, insane - 02:39:414 - unsnapped section
19:01 <Aleks719> : it's important cuz of slowdown (0.5x)
19:07 <Aleks719> : time to fix it again
19:08 <Aleks719> : offset 2317
19:09 <Aleks719> : -8 from your and replace earlier for correct work of osu! symbol in main menu
19:09 <Aleks719> : soooo resnap all notes, sections, preview time
19:11 <Aleks719> : fix it, update and poke me, ok?
19:11 <MystykAMV> : how do I resnap rpeview time?
19:12 <Aleks719> : just set preview time on new place after new offset. same places for all diffs~
19:19 <Aleks719> : add 8-bit into tags http://puu.sh/u80H
19:19 <Aleks719> : see on the name of page on the top
19:21 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/u820 http://puu.sh/u822
19:21 <Aleks719> : fix please~
19:21 <Aleks719> : and update again
19:21 <MystykAMV> : why are there unsnapeefjeőoptoptueoáatuep
19:21 <Aleks719> : don't ask me o/
19:23 <Aleks719> : hit0.png - looks in times bigger than 50,100, 300.. better to make it smaller too
19:28 <MystykAMV> : what do you mean look in times bigger?
19:28 <MystykAMV> : I didn't make the skin
19:28 <Aleks719> : http://puu.sh/u85A
19:28 <Aleks719> : Х looks sssoooooo big
19:28 <MystykAMV> : ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
19:28 <Aleks719> : then ask to make it smaller
19:29 <Aleks719> : or do it by yourself
19:29 <MystykAMV> : okaaay
19:29 <MystykAMV> : I'll send a pm to that person
19:30 <MystykAMV> : next?
19:31 <Aleks719> : want to keep only 2 colours?
19:31 <MystykAMV> : yes
19:34 <Aleks719> : 03:31:771 - don't silence note please
19:34 <Aleks719> : volume ~20% at least
19:36 <MystykAMV> : okay done
19:36 <MystykAMV> : on both easy and insane (the others are fine, right?)
19:37 <Aleks719> : in guest hard better make hp-1
19:39 <Aleks719> : meh, kinda problem
19:39 <Aleks719> : max score in hard very close to insane
19:39 <MystykAMV> : aww well is it really a big problem?
19:40 <Aleks719> : not so... but better make a difference
19:40 <Aleks719> : no one will play insane if you can get same score
19:41 <MystykAMV> : then well, maybe mention in your post?
19:41 <Aleks719> : yes, i'll put it in my post
19:44 <Aleks719> : 02:30:680 (1) - hard, add fininsh
19:50 <Aleks719> : maybe i suck in game
19:50 <Aleks719> : but this note in insane
19:50 <Aleks719> : 01:34:225 (1) - 
19:50 <Aleks719> : confused me so much
19:51 <Aleks719> : it places right on the center
19:51 <MystykAMV> : then where should I put it so that it stays symmetric?
19:51 <Aleks719> : and approach circle it almost invisiable
19:51 <Aleks719> : just somewhere from the center
19:52 <MystykAMV> : http://puu.sh/u8gL
19:52 <Aleks719> :  okay
19:54 <Aleks719> : normal
19:54 <Aleks719> : 00:30:680 (1) - add clap to the reverse
19:55 <Aleks719> : 01:11:044 (3) - clap to the end
19:56 <Aleks719> : 01:29:589 (1) - add finish
19:57 <Aleks719> : it's spinner?
19:57 <Aleks719> : you can add to the end only
19:57 <MystykAMV> : okay xD
19:57 <Aleks719> : 01:47:044 (1,2) - better to make symmetrical
19:58 <MystykAMV> : I think you should tell that to Kyshiro?
19:58 <MystykAMV> : and isn't it symmetric?
19:58 <Aleks719> : i mean playfield center
19:59 <MystykAMV> : ohhhhhhhhh
20:01 <MystykAMV> : okay
20:02 <Aleks719> : 02:17:589 (4) - make here 40 or 45% of volume
20:02 <Aleks719> : i mean on this section
20:02 <Aleks719> : too quiet
20:03 <Aleks719> : easy
20:05 <Aleks719> : 01:29:590 (1) - add finish here again)
20:06 <Aleks719> : 02:30:680 (1) - finish to the start
20:07 <Aleks719> : 02:37:226 (1) - maybe make 1/1 longer and +finish?
20:07 <Aleks719> : only as suggestion
20:09 <Aleks719> : but finish should be loud, replace section with 60% to the end of spinner
20:10 <Aleks719> : that's all
20:11 <Aleks719> : i'll post log in thread

Aleks719 wrote:

forgot to add

Yli's Hard
pretty nice diff, only some suggestions
diff has a lot of triples. more than in Insane. Change some of them into sliders with reverses.. it will reduce max score and difficulty for consistency. Done, but kept some triplets on "Trippin'"
03:23:589 (2,3) - make stacks like this better, there are some of them in diff Fixed those I found

Aleks719 wrote:

AR9 looks too fast in Hard, but seems funny for me. enjoy your bubble

• Tick rate 2 is damn perfect for this map <3

• I must admit that the beginning was pretty bland, with 1/1 rhythms all the time, but the diff rapidly became more interesting. I'm pleasantly surprised, this is a quite good Easy. There are a few things that could be improved though:

1. You missed two claps. It was probably done on purpose to avoid having a constant normal-clap hitsounding because you think it would sound bad, but I think it gives the map some flow that you should break only for special patterns. These are the claps you missed:
   1. 00:30:680 (4) - slider's end
   2. 01:49:771 (5) - slider's end
2. There are a few finishes you missed as well that would add amazing flow to the map, because it would give the patterns more symmetry and make the map more consistent with itself. These are suggestions though, but consider them:
   1. 00:43:771 (3) - Add a finish on the beginning of this slider to have the same hitsounding as 00:41:589 (1) - ?
   2. 01:05:589 (2,3) - These would sound so much better with finishes on their beginning. The vocals go for a loud note at the beginning of each of these sliders, and the first one 01:03:407 (1) - does have a finish.
   3. 01:14:316 (4) - Same.
   4. 02:02:316 (2,3) - Same idea.
   5. 02:11:044 (4) - Same.
   6. 02:32:862 (1,3) - Here again, for symmetry, add a finish on the beginning of these sliders ?
   7. 02:59:044 (2,3) - Same as 01:05:589 (2,3) -
   8. 03:07:771 (3,1) - Same. Also, to keep your comboing consistent, remove the new combo on (1).
   9. 03:18:680 (1) - Here again, same idea. And remove the new combo as well. Then add one on 03:20:862 (4) - to stay consistent.
   10. 03:27:407 (3) - Same.
3. Finally, some other problems:
   1. 00:48:680 (5) - This slider breaks the comboing, because it ends where a new combo should be. It'd be much better to fix that. Also it's a bit long, and it makes some claps miss, which sounds rather bad. (and it isn't symmetric). What I suggest is to make it end 1/1 earlier, and add a circle where it ended with a new combo.
   2. 00:53:044 (1) - For consistency with the rest of the map (pretty much a new combo every second big white tick), remove this new combo.
   3. 01:15:407 (5,1,2,3,4) - There is a problem with this whole pattern. First of all, the comboing is inconsistent, because the slider are badly palced: they end where new combos should be. Second of all, by using a return on 01:15:407 (5) - you make the vocals at 01:16:498 - "passive", that is, the player doesn't have to click them (and there should be a finish at that spot). This is inconsistent with the beginning of the kiai and plays badly. To stay consistent with the beginning of the kiai, too, 01:17:044 (1) - remove this new combo. 01:17:589 (2) - This slider breaks the comboing as well, since the new combo should be on 01:18:680 - but the slider ends there.
   4. 01:37:225 (5) - Here again, the slider breaks the comboing: the new combo should be at 01:38:317 - but the slider ends there.
   5. 01:44:862 (1) - To be consistent in your comboing, remove this new combo.
   6. 01:53:589 (3,1,2) - Bad pattern here again. First, the new combo shouldn't be there. Second, the slider placement doesn't go with the previous long slider. Delete (1) and move (2) where it was, then add a note where (2) ended with a new combo.
   7. 02:12:135 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same problems as for 01:15:407 (5,1,2,3,4) -
   8. 02:35:044 (3) - Add a new combo to keep your comboing consistent.
   9. 02:46:498 (2) - Same.
   10. 03:11:044 (2) - The repeat breaks the comboing. (see above)
   11. 03:15:953 (3) - This slider is badly placed. Its end is a highlight in the song (which I wanted you to highlight with finishes) and should be clicked, but the slider ends there and makes it passive.
   12. 03:24:680 (3,1) - Badly placed slider for (3), and remove the new combo on (1).

1. The sliders are too fast and the spacing is way too big... Difficulty settings are pretty high too.
2. 00:19:771 (1,3) - Sorry but these sliders look awful. The very sharp turn that isn't linear makes a sharp angle in the border, while the other has a smoothish curve, and it looks really bad. As you went for linear sliders for the whole map, make these linear as well.
3. 00:38:316 (4) - This clap sounds weird. If you had used that kind of pattern consistently in the map, it would have been okay, but this is the only time you use a double clap like this. To stay consistent, remove it.
4. 00:45:953 (1,2,3) - Change the arrangement on this pattern. (2) is hidden under 00:45:407 (3) - which is not acceptable in Normal difficulties.
5. 00:50:316 (3) - This slider is partially hidden under two hitbursts. Move it away.
6. 00:50:862 (4,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing (and because (4) is the beginning of the sentence, not (1) ), swap these new combos.
7. 00:54:134 (6) - Hidden under the previous slider's track and hiburst.
8. 00:57:407 (1) - This is a bit nazi of me, but change the curve a bit so the slider's end (and the repeat arrow) don't get covered by 00:56:316 (4) - and its hitburst.
9. 01:05:589 (1) - Just like for Easy, a finish here would sound amazing, be it only for symmetry in the patterns.
10. 01:07:771 (1) - Same.
11. 01:14:316 (4,1) - For consistency with the rest of the map, swap the new comboes. Also add a finish at 01:14:317 - for the same reason as Easy.
12. 01:16:225 (3,4,1,2) - This pattern is bad. The slider placement breaks the comboing and the consistency of the map. The new combo should be on 01:16:498 - for consistency, but a slider ends there. Also, this is a strong note in the song and should be clicked, but sliderends make it "passive" (just like Easy), which plays bad. 01:17:317 (1) - This shouldn't have a new combo, while 01:18:680 (3) - should.
13. 01:38:316 (1) - With all the room you had to place this slider, you chose the one that would result in the ugliest overlap with 01:36:953 (2) - . There are so many easy ways to fix this overlap, I don't even know why you didn't do it.
14. 01:56:316 (5,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing, swap these new combos.
15. 01:56:862 (1,2) - These sliders are missing claps. It sounds really empty without them.
16. 02:02:316 (1) - Just like above (and Easy), add a finish on this slider's beginning.
17. 02:04:498 (1) - Same.
18. 02:11:044 (3) - For consistency, add a new combo here. Also add a finish ?
19. 02:13:225 (5) - Add a new combo here too for consistency. Add a finish as well ?
20. 02:15:407 (1,2,3) - Any reason why the claps are suddenly not on the downbeats (that is, second and fourth white ticks) ? It sounds sudden, and quite bad.
21. 02:30:680 (1) - Change this slider's orientation so that its repeat arrow doesn't get covered by the hitburst from 02:29:316 (2) -
22. 02:39:953 (2) - Starting with this slider (included), the claps are on the wrong tick. It sounds pretty bad and really inconsistent with the rest of the map. It ends with 02:48:135 (3) - this clap.
23. 02:55:772 (3) - VERY bad repeat. It breaks absolutely everything you've done in the diff before: the comboing and the kiai patterns. This makes 02:58:498 (2) - this slider bad for the same reasons.
24. 03:01:225 (5) - Add a new combo here for consistency with the other kiais.
25. 03:07:771 (7,1) - For consistency, swap the new comboes. Also add a finish on (7)'s first beat (following my previous suggestions) ?
26. 03:09:953 (3,1) - Swap the new comboes here too. And add a finish on (3)'s first beat ?
27. 03:11:862 (3) - Very bad slider placement. The new combo is where it repeats. Delete it and replace with circle (with a new combo)+slider.
28. 03:16:498 (3,1) - Swap these new combos for consistency. Also add a finish on (3)'s first beat ?
29. 03:18:680 (3) - Add a new combo here, remove 03:19:771 (1) - this one and add one on 03:20:862 (3) - for consistency. Also add a finish on 03:16:498 (3) - this slider's first beat ?
30. 03:23:043 (1) - Add a finish on this slider's first beat ?
31. 03:24:680 (3) - Bad slider placement again... You know what to do by now, I think.
32. 03:26:862 (2) - Same...

• Because of Aleks' post, I was expecting a superinsane Hard with AR9 and ridiculous settings, but holy shit, this Hard is absolutely fantastic. There are a few things I think could be improved though:

1. 00:36:680 (6,1) - Surprising jump, given that the other transitions to new comboes didn't have any jump at all, neither before nor after, and I don't think anything in the song calls for this. Please remove this jump and keep the spacing consistent to make the diff consistent.
2. 00:45:407 (6,1) - Same. Even though you're transitioning into a new part of the song with different patterns and stuff, having such a big sudden jump isn't a good idea. It kind of ruins the effect.
3. 00:45:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seeing you kept a standard hitsounding on the patterns after this one, remove the clap on (3).
4. 00:57:953 (2) - Remove the clap on this to keep your comboing consistent.
5. 00:59:044 (5) - This slider is badly placed. It breaks the comboing and the patterns. I understand why you placed a slider here, but it'd be better to just have a circle here, and a circle at 00:59:589 - with a clap and a new combo (removing the one on 00:59:862 (1) - of course) to keep the patterns consistent.
6. 01:01:225 (4) - Same comment.
7. 01:14:316 (1) - That's nazi, but move the middle node so it's pretty much in the middle of the two others. The slider will look much better this way. Kind of like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315607
8. 01:38:316 (1) - Remove the clap on this slider's beginning. It sounds bad and is inconsistent.
9. 01:43:225 (3) - This slider's repeat is hidden under the hitbursts from 01:42:134 (5,6) - . Also change the orientation of 01:44:044 (4) - for the same reason.
10. 01:51:407 (1) - Same comment as earlier: surprising jump. I'd suggest to make a triangle with 01:50:862 (5,6,1) - like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315608
11. 01:59:044 (1) - This spinner breaks the next patterns... Remove it and add something to replace it, but make sure there is a circle at 02:00:135 - with a new combo and a finish exactly in the center of the map. Then remove 02:00:680 (1) - this new combo, and swap these: 02:02:316 (7,1) - and 02:04:498 (7,1) -
12. 02:43:770 (4,1) - For consistency, swap these new comboes.
13. 02:45:952 (3,1) - Same.
14. 02:48:135 (2,1) - Add a new combo on (2) and remove the other one for consistency.
15. For consistency, swap these new comboes: 02:59:044 (5,1) - 03:01:225 (4,1) - 03:27:407 (6,1) -
16. 03:23:044 (1) - Missing finish.

1. AR9 doesn't really fit imo... And OD7 is WAY TOO LOW. At least raise OD to 8.
2. These jumps are really exaggerated. They make the map feel quite weird, honestly... Like it's trying to be harder than it should be.
3. You missed the finishes. Follow what I said in Easy and Normal to add them, it sounds much better with them.

Odaril wrote:

Yli's Hard

• Because of Aleks' post, I was expecting a superinsane Hard with AR9 and ridiculous settings, but holy shit, this Hard is absolutely fantastic. :3 There are a few things I think could be improved though:

1. 00:36:680 (6,1) - Surprising jump, given that the other transitions to new comboes didn't have any jump at all, neither before nor after, and I don't think anything in the song calls for this. Please remove this jump and keep the spacing consistent to make the diff consistent. Removed it and changed the following notes a bit to keep symmetry
2. 00:45:407 (6,1) - Same. Even though you're transitioning into a new part of the song with different patterns and stuff, having such a big sudden jump isn't a good idea. It kind of ruins the effect. Changed, too
3. 00:45:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seeing you kept a standard hitsounding on the patterns after this one, remove the clap on (3). Removed
4. 00:57:953 (2) - Remove the clap on this to keep your comboing consistent. Done
5. 00:59:044 (5) - This slider is badly placed. It breaks the comboing and the patterns. I understand why you placed a slider here, but it'd be better to just have a circle here, and a circle at 00:59:589 - with a clap and a new combo (removing the one on 00:59:862 (1) - of course) to keep the patterns consistent. Changed
6. 01:01:225 (4) - Same comment. Same consequence
7. 01:14:316 (1) - That's nazi, but move the middle node so it's pretty much in the middle of the two others. The slider will look much better this way. Kind of like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315607 Fixed that
8. 01:38:316 (1) - Remove the clap on this slider's beginning. It sounds bad and is inconsistent. Done
9. 01:43:225 (3) - This slider's repeat is hidden under the hitbursts from 01:42:134 (5,6) - . Also change the orientation of 01:44:044 (4) - for the same reason. After minutes of trying, I changed it in a good way
10. 01:51:407 (1) - Same comment as earlier: surprising jump. I'd suggest to make a triangle with 01:50:862 (5,6,1) - like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315608 Done
11. 01:59:044 (1) - This spinner breaks the next patterns... Remove it and add something to replace it, but make sure there is a circle at 02:00:135 - with a new combo and a finish exactly in the center of the map. Then remove 02:00:680 (1) - this new combo, and swap these: 02:02:316 (7,1) - and 02:04:498 (7,1) - Changed all
12. 02:43:770 (4,1) - For consistency, swap these new comboes. Swapped
13. 02:45:952 (3,1) - Same. Same
14. 02:48:135 (2,1) - Add a new combo on (2) and remove the other one for consistency. Done
15. For consistency, swap these new comboes: 02:59:044 (5,1) - 03:01:225 (4,1) - 03:27:407 (6,1) - Swapped these, too
16. 03:23:044 (1) - Missing finish. Added

Odaril wrote:

SPOILER

Okay, Aleks' post scared me about Hard being AR9. Let's check this out.

General

• Tick rate 2 is damn perfect for this map <3

Easy

• I must admit that the beginning was pretty bland, with 1/1 rhythms all the time, but the diff rapidly became more interesting. I'm pleasantly surprised, this is a quite good Easy. There are a few things that could be improved though:

1. You missed two claps. It was probably done on purpose to avoid having a constant normal-clap hitsounding because you think it would sound bad, but I think it gives the map some flow that you should break only for special patterns. These are the claps you missed:
   1. 00:30:680 (4) - slider's end
   2. 01:49:771 (5) - slider's end
2. There are a few finishes you missed as well that would add amazing flow to the map, because it would give the patterns more symmetry and make the map more consistent with itself. These are suggestions though, but consider them:
   1. 00:43:771 (3) - Add a finish on the beginning of this slider to have the same hitsounding as 00:41:589 (1) - ?
   2. 01:05:589 (2,3) - These would sound so much better with finishes on their beginning. The vocals go for a loud note at the beginning of each of these sliders, and the first one 01:03:407 (1) - does have a finish.
   3. 01:14:316 (4) - Same.
   4. 02:02:316 (2,3) - Same idea.
   5. 02:11:044 (4) - Same.
   6. 02:32:862 (1,3) - Here again, for symmetry, add a finish on the beginning of these sliders ?
   7. 02:59:044 (2,3) - Same as 01:05:589 (2,3) -
   8. 03:07:771 (3,1) - Same. Also, to keep your comboing consistent, remove the new combo on (1).
   9. 03:18:680 (1) - Here again, same idea. And remove the new combo as well. Then add one on 03:20:862 (4) - to stay consistent.
   10. 03:27:407 (3) - Same.
3. Finally, some other problems:
   1. 00:48:680 (5) - This slider breaks the comboing, because it ends where a new combo should be. It'd be much better to fix that. Also it's a bit long, and it makes some claps miss, which sounds rather bad. (and it isn't symmetric). What I suggest is to make it end 1/1 earlier, and add a circle where it ended with a new combo.
   2. 00:53:044 (1) - For consistency with the rest of the map (pretty much a new combo every second big white tick), remove this new combo.
   3. 01:15:407 (5,1,2,3,4) - There is a problem with this whole pattern. First of all, the comboing is inconsistent, because the slider are badly palced: they end where new combos should be. Second of all, by using a return on 01:15:407 (5) - you make the vocals at 01:16:498 - "passive", that is, the player doesn't have to click them (and there should be a finish at that spot). This is inconsistent with the beginning of the kiai and plays badly. To stay consistent with the beginning of the kiai, too, 01:17:044 (1) - remove this new combo. 01:17:589 (2) - This slider breaks the comboing as well, since the new combo should be on 01:18:680 - but the slider ends there.
   4. 01:37:225 (5) - Here again, the slider breaks the comboing: the new combo should be at 01:38:317 - but the slider ends there.
   5. 01:44:862 (1) - To be consistent in your comboing, remove this new combo.
   6. 01:53:589 (3,1,2) - Bad pattern here again. First, the new combo shouldn't be there. Second, the slider placement doesn't go with the previous long slider. Delete (1) and move (2) where it was, then add a note where (2) ended with a new combo.
   7. 02:12:135 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Same problems as for 01:15:407 (5,1,2,3,4) -
   8. 02:35:044 (3) - Add a new combo to keep your comboing consistent.
   9. 02:46:498 (2) - Same.
   10. 03:11:044 (2) - The repeat breaks the comboing. (see above)
   11. 03:15:953 (3) - This slider is badly placed. Its end is a highlight in the song (which I wanted you to highlight with finishes) and should be clicked, but the slider ends there and makes it passive.
   12. 03:24:680 (3,1) - Badly placed slider for (3), and remove the new combo on (1).

Kyshiro's Normal

1. The sliders are too fast and the spacing is way too big... Difficulty settings are pretty high too.
2. 00:19:771 (1,3) - Sorry but these sliders look awful. The very sharp turn that isn't linear makes a sharp angle in the border, while the other has a smoothish curve, and it looks really bad. As you went for linear sliders for the whole map, make these linear as well.
3. 00:38:316 (4) - This clap sounds weird. If you had used that kind of pattern consistently in the map, it would have been okay, but this is the only time you use a double clap like this. To stay consistent, remove it.
4. 00:45:953 (1,2,3) - Change the arrangement on this pattern. (2) is hidden under 00:45:407 (3) - which is not acceptable in Normal difficulties.
5. 00:50:316 (3) - This slider is partially hidden under two hitbursts. Move it away.
6. 00:50:862 (4,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing (and because (4) is the beginning of the sentence, not (1) ), swap these new combos.
7. 00:54:134 (6) - Hidden under the previous slider's track and hiburst.
8. 00:57:407 (1) - This is a bit nazi of me, but change the curve a bit so the slider's end (and the repeat arrow) don't get covered by 00:56:316 (4) - and its hitburst.
9. 01:05:589 (1) - Just like for Easy, a finish here would sound amazing, be it only for symmetry in the patterns.
10. 01:07:771 (1) - Same.
11. 01:14:316 (4,1) - For consistency with the rest of the map, swap the new comboes. Also add a finish at 01:14:317 - for the same reason as Easy.
12. 01:16:225 (3,4,1,2) - This pattern is bad. The slider placement breaks the comboing and the consistency of the map. The new combo should be on 01:16:498 - for consistency, but a slider ends there. Also, this is a strong note in the song and should be clicked, but sliderends make it "passive" (just like Easy), which plays bad. 01:17:317 (1) - This shouldn't have a new combo, while 01:18:680 (3) - should.
13. 01:38:316 (1) - With all the room you had to place this slider, you chose the one that would result in the ugliest overlap with 01:36:953 (2) - . There are so many easy ways to fix this overlap, I don't even know why you didn't do it.
14. 01:56:316 (5,1) - To stay consistent in your comboing, swap these new combos.
15. 01:56:862 (1,2) - These sliders are missing claps. It sounds really empty without them.
16. 02:02:316 (1) - Just like above (and Easy), add a finish on this slider's beginning.
17. 02:04:498 (1) - Same.
18. 02:11:044 (3) - For consistency, add a new combo here. Also add a finish ?
19. 02:13:225 (5) - Add a new combo here too for consistency. Add a finish as well ?
20. 02:15:407 (1,2,3) - Any reason why the claps are suddenly not on the downbeats (that is, second and fourth white ticks) ? It sounds sudden, and quite bad.
21. 02:30:680 (1) - Change this slider's orientation so that its repeat arrow doesn't get covered by the hitburst from 02:29:316 (2) -
22. 02:39:953 (2) - Starting with this slider (included), the claps are on the wrong tick. It sounds pretty bad and really inconsistent with the rest of the map. It ends with 02:48:135 (3) - this clap.
23. 02:55:772 (3) - VERY bad repeat. It breaks absolutely everything you've done in the diff before: the comboing and the kiai patterns. This makes 02:58:498 (2) - this slider bad for the same reasons.
24. 03:01:225 (5) - Add a new combo here for consistency with the other kiais.
25. 03:07:771 (7,1) - For consistency, swap the new comboes. Also add a finish on (7)'s first beat (following my previous suggestions) ?
26. 03:09:953 (3,1) - Swap the new comboes here too. And add a finish on (3)'s first beat ?
27. 03:11:862 (3) - Very bad slider placement. The new combo is where it repeats. Delete it and replace with circle (with a new combo)+slider.
28. 03:16:498 (3,1) - Swap these new combos for consistency. Also add a finish on (3)'s first beat ?
29. 03:18:680 (3) - Add a new combo here, remove 03:19:771 (1) - this one and add one on 03:20:862 (3) - for consistency. Also add a finish on 03:16:498 (3) - this slider's first beat ?
30. 03:23:043 (1) - Add a finish on this slider's first beat ?
31. 03:24:680 (3) - Bad slider placement again... You know what to do by now, I think.
32. 03:26:862 (2) - Same...

Yli's Hard

• Because of Aleks' post, I was expecting a superinsane Hard with AR9 and ridiculous settings, but holy shit, this Hard is absolutely fantastic. There are a few things I think could be improved though:

1. 00:36:680 (6,1) - Surprising jump, given that the other transitions to new comboes didn't have any jump at all, neither before nor after, and I don't think anything in the song calls for this. Please remove this jump and keep the spacing consistent to make the diff consistent.
2. 00:45:407 (6,1) - Same. Even though you're transitioning into a new part of the song with different patterns and stuff, having such a big sudden jump isn't a good idea. It kind of ruins the effect.
3. 00:45:953 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seeing you kept a standard hitsounding on the patterns after this one, remove the clap on (3).
4. 00:57:953 (2) - Remove the clap on this to keep your comboing consistent.
5. 00:59:044 (5) - This slider is badly placed. It breaks the comboing and the patterns. I understand why you placed a slider here, but it'd be better to just have a circle here, and a circle at 00:59:589 - with a clap and a new combo (removing the one on 00:59:862 (1) - of course) to keep the patterns consistent.
6. 01:01:225 (4) - Same comment.
7. 01:14:316 (1) - That's nazi, but move the middle node so it's pretty much in the middle of the two others. The slider will look much better this way. Kind of like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315607
8. 01:38:316 (1) - Remove the clap on this slider's beginning. It sounds bad and is inconsistent.
9. 01:43:225 (3) - This slider's repeat is hidden under the hitbursts from 01:42:134 (5,6) - . Also change the orientation of 01:44:044 (4) - for the same reason.
10. 01:51:407 (1) - Same comment as earlier: surprising jump. I'd suggest to make a triangle with 01:50:862 (5,6,1) - like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/315608
11. 01:59:044 (1) - This spinner breaks the next patterns... Remove it and add something to replace it, but make sure there is a circle at 02:00:135 - with a new combo and a finish exactly in the center of the map. Then remove 02:00:680 (1) - this new combo, and swap these: 02:02:316 (7,1) - and 02:04:498 (7,1) -
12. 02:43:770 (4,1) - For consistency, swap these new comboes.
13. 02:45:952 (3,1) - Same.
14. 02:48:135 (2,1) - Add a new combo on (2) and remove the other one for consistency.
15. For consistency, swap these new comboes: 02:59:044 (5,1) - 03:01:225 (4,1) - 03:27:407 (6,1) -
16. 03:23:044 (1) - Missing finish.

Insane

1. AR9 doesn't really fit imo... And OD7 is WAY TOO LOW. At least raise OD to 8.
2. These jumps are really exaggerated. They make the map feel quite weird, honestly... Like it's trying to be harder than it should be.
3. You missed the finishes. Follow what I said in Easy and Normal to add them, it sounds much better with them.

Mapset was interesting. Insane is meh because it's trying too hard to be difficult... And AR9 doesn't fit.

• Nothing to say.

1. 00:54:680 (7,1) - For consistency with the rest of the map, exchange these new combos.
2. 02:06:681 (1) - To end the finish hitsound pattern and stay consistent with the first kiai, add a finish here.
3. 02:13:226 (6) - You forgot to add a finish on this slider's first beat.
4. 02:15:407 (1) - Add a finish here as well (same as 02:06:681 - )
5. 02:53:590 (2) - It feels weird to have a finish on this slider's end. The song goes almost silent at this point, so the note shouldn't be highlighted at all.
6. 03:03:407 (1) - Same as 02:06:681 -
7. 03:11:044 (6) - To stay consistent in your finish patterns, this one shouldn't have a finish.
8. 03:18:680 (1) - You forgot to add a finish here and to remove the new combo.
9. 03:20:862 (1) - Same as 02:06:681 -
10. 03:29:589 (1) - Same as 02:06:681 -

1. 00:20:862 (3) - You forgot to remove this slider's finish after copying the first one =p
2. 00:49:498 (2) - Missing clap on this slider's middle beat.
3. 01:14:316 (1) - Missing finish on this slider's first beat.
4. 01:16:498 (4,1) - Missing finish on (4)'s first beat. Also, to stay consistent in your comboing, exchange the new combos. And add one on 01:18:680 (3) - .
5. 01:39:680 (3) - Missing clap on this slider's last beat.
6. 02:17:589 (4) - Add a new combo on this to stay consistent with the first kiai.
7. 02:32:862 (3) - Consider adding a new combo on this so that the patterns are perfectly symmetric.
8. 02:46:499 (1) - There shouldn't be a clap in this slider's end.
9. 02:55:498 (1) - Badly placed spinner. It starts a bit soon after the previous beat and is followed too soo by the next one... It also breaks the comboing and the patterns in the kiai.
10. 02:58:498 (2) - Bad repeat here as well... Refer to my previous post (don't forget the finish).
11. 03:18:680 (1) - Missing finish on this slider's first beat.
12. 03:24:680 (3) - Bad repeat here as well.
13. 03:26:862 (3) - Same.

1. 02:48:679 (2,1) - Very surprising jump. I don't really understand why you'd place a jump here either. It plays kinda wrong, because you try to highlight something through the jump that doesn't need to be highlighted.
2. 02:50:861 (4,1) - Same.
3. 02:53:044 (4,1) - Same.

1. 02:49:226 (2,3) - This jump is really too big. It comes quite surprisingly too.
2. 03:26:316 (1,3) - For consistency in your comboing, exchange the new combos.
3. 03:30:135 (2) - Missing clap on the slider's first beat.

Odaril wrote:

Yli's Hard

1. 02:48:679 (2,1) - Very surprising jump. I don't really understand why you'd place a jump here either. It plays kinda wrong, because you try to highlight something through the jump that doesn't need to be highlighted.
2. 02:50:861 (4,1) - Same.
3. 02:53:044 (4,1) - Same.

Fixed all~

Odaril wrote:

Rechecking.

Kyshiro's Normal

1. 00:20:862 (3) - You forgot to remove this slider's finish after copying the first one =p
2. 00:49:498 (2) - Missing clap on this slider's middle beat.
3. 01:14:316 (1) - Missing finish on this slider's first beat.
4. 01:16:498 (4,1) - Missing finish on (4)'s first beat. Also, to stay consistent in your comboing, exchange the new combos. And add one on 01:18:680 (3) - .
5. 01:39:680 (3) - Missing clap on this slider's last beat.
6. 02:17:589 (4) - Add a new combo on this to stay consistent with the first kiai.
7. 02:32:862 (3) - Consider adding a new combo on this so that the patterns are perfectly symmetric.
8. 02:46:499 (1) - There shouldn't be a clap in this slider's end.
9. 02:55:498 (1) - Badly placed spinner. It starts a bit soon after the previous beat and is followed too soo by the next one... It also breaks the comboing and the patterns in the kiai.
10. 02:58:498 (2) - Bad repeat here as well... Refer to my previous post (don't forget the finish).
11. 03:18:680 (1) - Missing finish on this slider's first beat.
12. 03:24:680 (3) - Bad repeat here as well.
13. 03:26:862 (3) - Same.

Odaril wrote:

Hi.

Kyshiro's Normal: 01:15:680 (3) - missing clad on middle beat and 01:16:498 (4) - on second beat. Also 01:16:498 (4,1) - exchange the new combos.Fixed
02:56:862 (1) - missing finishAdded
02:58:498 (3,4) - Make this pattern slider-circle, so that the new combo can be placed on the circle. And don't forget claps/finishes =oFixed
03:03:407 (1,2,3) - There's no real reason to change the clap pattern here. It sounds weird.Dunno why it's like that o-o fixed

that's about it
don't kd