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Ezequiel Serrano - Es el Robot Gigante (TV Size)

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Jebok_old
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Joined May 2011
Jebok_old
Hi there!

Normal
00:19:738 (4,1) - Okay well, you should have the same snapping as you did with the (1) and (2) at 00:18:742, it makes no sense to make it different.
It's quite a good difficulty, so there is only one thing ^ :oops:

Dificil
Due to the quality of the mp3, you should lower the volume down further by about 10%. Making it 50%.
00:19:938 - Should have Normal hit sounds here, there is no point of having a bit just before.
00:26:570 - If you do the ^, here you can just make it more exciting for kiai time just like you wanted by simply rising the volume more. So as he says the same thing 3 or 4 times, you can increase the volume by 5% or 10% more. So e.g 00:26:570 - 50% vol. but at 00:29:770 vol is 55% and at 00:32:970 vol is 60% and then finally at 00:36:170 it is 65%.

Gigante
All is pretty much the same as I said for Dificil. If I can add anything to it, I think you should space 2,3,4,5,6,7 taking place at 00:36:970 a bit more symmetricaly. They seem to be a bit displaced.

That's all, good beatmap :oops:
Fenya
1,655 posts
Joined September 2009
Fenya
Hi :3 ♥
Mimoddapena

General:
Haras un Easy? o.o

Normal:
Buena diff /o/
Arreglaria todos los sliders que veo simetricamente feos, pero no lo hare, seria muy nazi c:
Arregla los spacing de los sliders que estan asi: http://puu.sh/u9et Algunos estan muy juntos y otros separados... Creo que deberias ponerlos en la misma distancia.
00:26:570 (1) - Spacing...
00:30:570 (2) - Spacing, si lo hiciste a proposito, ignora esto... O podrias corre el (1) 2 grid hacia la derecha, arreglar el spacing del 2 y correrlo 2 grid hacia la derecha... Si quieres Dx
00:42:570 (4) - Esta muy cerca del spinner... Y si lo eliminas y corres el spinner? imo~

Dificil:
00:22:928 (2,4) - No crees que se veria mas lindo si tuvieran simetria? http://puu.sh/u9kL

Gigante!:
No encontre errores... Y no te quiero modear los Sliders, so, nada por aqui \o\
Te gustan los Streams?

XD


Bueno, supongo que sabes como modeo... Espero haber ayudado aun que sea en algo pequeño XD
Buen Map, Buena suerte~ n.n
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Solo hice un cambio xD.

Download: Ezequiel Serrano - Es el Robot Gigante (TV Size) (iMercurial) [Normal].osu
Starry_old
Starry_old
Such a short song , so mod won't be very long.

[General]

Clean.

[Normal]

00:09:772 (1) - Can you tidy this slider up? Looks ugly.
00:19:738 (4) - Remove this note.
00:30:570 (2) - Can you add a finish to the start of the slider.

[Dificil]

00:07:380 (1) - Finish
00:08:177 (1) - ^
00:08:974 (1) - ^
00:09:772 (1) - ^
00:10:569 (1) - ^
00:11:366 (1) - ^
00:12:164 (1) - ^
00:12:961 (1) - ^
00:15:353 (3) - Move to next white tick.
00:15:154 - add Note here Should look like this (http://puu.sh/ubTR)

[Gigante!]

Add the finishes same spot as Dificil diff.
-Hyde
486 posts
Joined March 2011
-Hyde
Gigante!
Al momento de jugar esta dificultad hay algunas cosas que molestan un poco.
00:08:974 (1,2,3) - Estas notas me parecieron confusas. Tal vez deberías poner el slider (1) en el cuadrante I (de la derecha superior) y el slider (2) en el cuadrante III (en la izquierda inferior). Creo que se juega mejor así.
00:20:037 - En esta parte podrías agregar otra nota como parte del stream o dejarlo así para hacer más difícil el mapa. No veo que afecte el ritmo así que ya es decisión tuya :3

Difícil
00:14:157 (2) - Creo que esta parte está fuera de ritmo ~
En lo personal yo haría algo así:
00:14:157 - Agregar una nota aquí.
00:14:356 - Poner un slider que termine en: 00:14:755 (En los Ticks rojos)
00:14:954 - Slider con "Reverse arrow" en: 00:15:353, y que por último termine en: 00:15:752
00:15:951 - Y agregar una nota aquí.
Es todo para esta dificultad. Al menos lo que yo veo.

Normal
No le veo problema $:

hahaha Buena suerte, espero haberte ayudado en algo S:
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Sorry, no changes.
Realazy
Elite Mapper
1,004 posts
Joined June 2011
Realazy
Oh hi !

[General]

You should map the intro in [Dificil] and in [Gigante!].
Can you make your sliders look neater please?
The entire mapset has a lack of hitsounds.
[Normal] is 3,18 star rating, either add an easy with a lower star rating or lower the star rating of Normal.

[Normal]

Add that kiai fountain at the end of the map for consistency.


00:00:190 (1,2,3,4) - Make spacing between them larger/consistent?
00:10:569 (2) - Add a 1/1 slider here?
00:12:164 - ^
00:14:356 - What about a 1/2 slider?
00:32:970 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try a star pattern?
00:39:370 - 00:42:170 - Add a spinner.


[Dificil]

00:07:380 (1,2) - (and others) Try sometimes using this rythm pattern ?
00:13:758 (1,2,3,4) - This doesn't sound right, change it
00:17:944 - Add a note
00:27:170 (2) - This jump is too large and doesn't fit, either remove the note or make the spacing smaller.
00:27:370 (3) - Ctrl+R?
00:30:370 (2) - Same as 00:27:170 (2) -

[Gigante!]

00:08:974 (1,2,3) - This spacing is way too large, change it.
00:10:569 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^

In my opinion, this mapset needs more work, but it's fine.

sorry if I sounded harsh
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Thanks.

Download: Ezequiel Serrano - Es el Robot Gigante (TV Size) (iMercurial) [Normal].osu
Crimmi
1,947 posts
Joined June 2009
Crimmi
Modding, CrimmiStyle!!

From my Mod Resqueue!!

Suggestion.
Gotta Fix.

[Normal]

00:19:938 (1) - Spacing?

Dificil

This diff lacks a bit of hitsounds, but i'm gonna suggest some if you decide to add:

00:13:758 (1) - finish?
00:14:157 (2) - Whistle?
00:15:752 (4) - ^
00:17:346 (3) - ^
00:20:137 (2) - finish?
00:21:333 (4) - Whistle?
00:22:130 (6) - ^
00:23:725 (3,4) - ^
00:26:570 (1) - finish?
00:29:770 (1) - ^
00:32:970 (1) - ^
00:36:170 (1) - ^


[Gigante!]

Nothing~

Good luck!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thank you /o/ Workin' a bit harder.
Regou
1,936 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou
Quick check~♪

[Gigante!]
00:08:974 (1,2) - VERY DIFFICULT TO PLAY PLEASE CHANGE THIS PATTERN
00:12:164 (1,2) - ^
00:14:257 (2) - ...should start at 00:14:356 and end at 00:14:755
00:16:350 - Add a note?
00:29:770 (1,2,3) - Not in same spacing
00:31:770 (4,5,6) - Try ctrl+r, it does better
00:33:270 (2,3) - Dislike this kind of placement lol (imo)
00:34:070 (2,3) - ^
00:39:370 (1) - A spinner doesn't fit here...

[Dificil]
00:12:363 (2) - Add note?
00:19:340 (3,4) - Too confusing for just a hard diff
00:19:938 (1,2) - Spacing
00:20:735 (3,4) - ^
00:39:370 (1) - Same as the Insane diff...

[Normal]
This diff should also have a *Cool* diff name \:D/
00:19:738 (4,1) - Spacing...
00:40:170 (2) - Should be 2~3 grid up :p

GL!
...Oh wait, you didn't finish the hitsounding!?
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
@Regou: Gigante in spanish means "Giant" (Insane Diff), Dificil means "Hard" and Normal means "Normal", same traduction.

Just sayin'.

And no, Help with hitsounds is still needed.
Regou
1,936 posts
Joined July 2010
Regou

iMercurial wrote:

@Regou: Gigante in spanish means "Giant" (Insane Diff), Dificil means "Hard" and Normal means "Normal", same traduction.

Just sayin'.

And no, Help with hitsounds is still needed.
Oh I see~ D:
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3

:idea: general


  • Settings
    (For the setting/general issue.)
  1. Inconsistency in Countdown: [Normal]

Normal


  • Settings
    (For the setting. like Song Setup/timing or break time~)
  1. It's 3.18 stars. It's very dangerous stars setting for the easiest diff.
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:24:921 (5,6,1) - uneven spacing.
  2. 00:26:570 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 00:29:770 (1,2,3) - ^
  4. 00:42:570 (4) - NC? I think It's a Paragraph for the rhythm. so I suggest you can add NC for this way.

Dificil



  • Hitsound
    (For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:26:570 (1) - finish?
  2. 00:42:570 - used 35% finish? (same as Normal)
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. none~

Gigante!



  • Overlaps
    (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  1. 00:23:326 (2,3) -
Hitsound
(For my listened. Just some suggest for the hitsound.)
  1. 00:26:570 (1) - finish?
  2. 00:42:570 (1) - 35% finish?
mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)
  1. 00:06:568 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - uneven spacing.
  2. 00:08:974 (1,2) - Sudden big jump. It's very scary to player.

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

that's all
good luck~
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Thanks for mod~

Download: Ezequiel Serrano - Es el Robot Gigante (TV Size) (iMercurial) [Normal].osu
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
ahora baje sin video ;D

[Giganton!]

  1. 00:08:974 (1,2,3) - pegale un ctrl+j para que no quede mal cubierto por 00:07:380 (1,2,3,1,2,3)
  2. 00:13:758 - de ser posible, por favor mueve la linea del normal soundset al final del slider 00:13:758 (1) - y agrega un finish al inicio de este y un pequeño whistle al final del mismo
  3. 00:14:356 (2) - whistle al inicio y al final, ojo no al cuerpo del slider
  4. 00:14:954 (3) - dale un whistle al inicio y al final, al repeat un finish
  5. 00:16:549 (1) - whistle
  6. 00:16:948 (3,4) - whistle al final de estos dos
  7. 00:18:144 (5) - whistle
  8. 00:18:343 (6) - whislte en el cuerpo del slider acompaña ese efecto en la cancion, ademas de un soft finish al final suena bastante bien
  9. 00:18:941 (1,3,7) - whistle o clap si no te agradan mucho los normal whistle
  10. 00:19:838 (8) - un finish en tick azul no me suena muy bien
  11. 00:20:137 - coloca la linea del soft soundset a 00:20:336 y el finish debe ir al inicio del slider 00:20:137 (1)
  12. 00:19:838 (8,9,10,1) - ah otra cosa, el stack leniency le da una forma algo rara a esto, porque no cambiar la alineacion del todo el stream en lugar de dejarselo al stack leniency?
    SPOILER

    digo no se xD no estoy demasiado imaginativo por la gripe
  13. 00:20:137 (1,2) - whistle al final de cada slider
  14. 00:21:333 (3) - finish tal vez
  15. 00:22:130 (5) - whistle aca porfa
  16. 00:22:529 (1,2) - whistle al final de cada slider
  17. 00:24:522 (4) - whislte al inicio, finish al repeat y al final ↓
  18. 00:25:718 (5) - finish!
  19. 00:27:170 (3) - clap (patron mas abajo)
  20. 00:27:970 (3) - clap
  21. 00:28:370 (3) - clap
  22. 00:28:770 (6) - clap
  23. 00:29:170 (3) - clap
  24. 00:29:370 (4) - clap
  25. 00:29:570 (6) - clap
  26. 00:29:770 (1) - finish al inicio del slider
  27. 00:30:370 (3) - clap al inicio del slider
  28. 00:31:170 (4) - clap
  29. 00:31:570 (3) - clap
  30. 00:31:970 (6) - clap
  31. 00:32:370 (3) - clap
  32. 00:32:570 (4) - clap
  33. 00:32:770 (6) - clap
  34. 00:33:570 (3) - clap
  35. 00:34:370 (3) - clap
  36. 00:34:570 (1,5,1,5,7) - claps
  37. 00:36:170 (1,2) - esta parte me sabe un poco vacia, un slider largo desde 00:36:170 hasta 00:36:770, luego copiar este mismo slider a 00:36:970 (2), dale una distancia amplia entre el inicio del primero y segundo, finish al inicio de cada slider, quedaria 00:37:570 (3) - doble objeto en tick, screen:
    SPOILER
  38. 00:37:570 (3) - clap
  39. 00:38:570 (6) - clap
  40. 00:38:970 (7) - clap
no me fije bien la locacion de las notas D;

[Dificil]

creo que puedes usar un hitsounding similar a lo que te sugeri arriba
  1. 00:10:370 (4) - no me agrada este stack, ademas el acorde de guitarra termina en el anterior (3), solo sugerencia personal
  2. 00:26:570 (1) - no finish al final
  3. 00:27:970 - te perdiste el vocal "ro~"
  4. 00:31:170 - ↑
  5. 00:34:370 - ↑
  6. 00:37:570 - ↑
  7. 00:39:370 (1) - termina el slider spinner* en el mismo tick que en la diff de arriba?

[Normal]

como esta sobre 3,00 star rating te voy a molestar un poco e_e
  1. 00:01:784 (2,3,4,5) - 00:00:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - 0,8x de spacing por favor
  2. 00:08:177 (1) - a modo de seguir los acordes de guitarra: extiende este slider hasta 00:08:775 y elimina 00:09:174 (3)
  3. 00:11:366 (3) - extiende este slider hasta 00:12:562, el repeat deberia quedar en el tick rojo 00:11:964, soportando ese efecto de acelerado de motor
  4. 00:16:549 (1) - extiende este slider hasta 00:16:948, y borra la nota que esta en este lugar
  5. 00:17:346 (2,3) - no stack?
  6. 00:18:742 (1,2) - no me agrada el doble hit que tienen estos 2, tal vez borrar (1) dejando (2,3,4) en un bonito 1/1, agrega nuevo combo en (1), oh si y tu diff ya esta en 3,00 si seguiste lo de arriba
  7. 00:42:670 (1) - borra este slider para durar lo mismo que las otras diff? ademas wo sorpresa, tienes 2,82 de star rating xD

hasta ahi
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Listo, quedo de 3,00 Star Rating, algunas cosas no las quise cambiar pero no tuve opción :P

Download: Ezequiel Serrano - Es el Robot Gigante (TV Size) (iMercurial) [Normal].osu
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
excelente
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Lindo avatar ambos.
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
[*]Normal

Do not tick off "Enable Countdown".

[*]Dificil

00:09:772 (1,2,3,4) - Move to x:376 y:52 so as to make a jump like previous patterns
00:18:941 (1,2) - spacing error
00:19:938 (1) - A redical jump,i think it would be better to close this note to previous slider.

[*]Gigante!

00:25:718~00:26:316 (x) - add 4 circles and make a crescendo?
00:26:570 (1) - add finish


Good luck!
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
  • General
  1. Hay inconsistencia en countdown en cuanto a la dificultad [Normal]. Tiene countdown en 3. Realmente no sé si es un problema ya que es una guest difficulty, pero recomendaria que se cambie a 0 para mas consistencia al mapset.
  • [Normal]
  1. 00:17:546 (4) - Esto no suena bien. Si te fijas, se mantiene la vocal, así que seria mejor si haces un ritmo mas así (reemplazando por un slider):
    SPOILER
  2. 00:26:570 (1) - Creo que queda mucho mejor y da mas enfasis a esta parte si ponés el whistle en el comienzo en vez de en el final de este slider. En el final del slider suena raro y como que no parece que enfatize "ES" y "MI", que es lo que parece que quisiste hacer.
  3. 00:27:370 (2) - ^
  4. 00:29:770 (1) - ^
  5. 00:30:570 (2) - ^
  6. 00:42:670 (1) - Este spinner podria resultar ser confuso ya que queda empieza muuuuuuuuuy antes de clickear la nota (1) para una dificultad Normal. Te recomiendo que lo borres o muevas mas lejos para que no comienze ni aparezca hasta antes de poder clickear (1). Ah y en caso que lo dejes, no cambies nada o algo, el spinner debería terminar en 00:44:970 ya que suena mucho mejor con ese ruido que suena al final.

    Hmm ritmo raro en algunas partes pero no está mal. Puede mejorarse mucho más en mi opinión. c:
  • [Dificil]
  1. 00:09:772 (1,2,3,4) - Unstack? Personalmente, creo que se siente raro que se stackee en esta parte ademas me parece que quedaria mejor si no está stackeado.
  2. 00:17:546 (4,5) - Lo mismo que dije en cuanto a esta parte en la Normal: Reemplaza estas dos notas con un slider porque se mantiene la vocal, por lo tanto~ slider!
  3. 00:24:921 (1) - Me parece que deberias mappear esta parte en vez de poner un spinner. No le veo mucho sentido y en mi opinión, no suena bien ni parece seguir algo en concreto.
  4. 00:27:970 - Acá como que te falto una nota en todas las partes que dice "Ro" de Robot pero se ve intencional. Solo te digo que me parece que hace que suene mucho mejor el pattern si agregas una nota en todas estas partes que te digo.

    Tiene ritmo parecido a [Gigante!], así que me gusta mucho también.
  • [Gigante!]
  1. 00:13:758 (1,2) - Deberías mover la linea verde de cambio de samples aqui porque el cantante comienza a cantar justo en esta nota, y cuando canta usas samples soft así que.. eso! Ah y, estos sliders no suenan muy bien con la voz. Te sugiero que pruebes hacer este pattern:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:21:333 (3) - Por qué hay un finish en esta nota? no se siente que nada cambie en la cancion como para un finish.
  3. 00:24:522 (4) - En mi opinion, suena mucho mejor acorde a la vocal si solo dejas finish en el comienzo y en el repeat del slider. En el final no. Fijate si te gusta. n.n
  4. 00:34:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Uhm creo que esto esta un poquito overmapped o.o o tal vez no. Bleh, me gusta como suena. Supongo que está bien.
  5. 00:37:770 (4) - Como es el final de la canción podrías agregar finish en esta nota para más enfasis y eso.
  6. 00:38:570 (6,7) - ^ Lo mismo pero esta vez a estas dos notas.

    La diff. que mas me gusto de el mapset. Suenan muy bien los pattern que hiciste en el Kiai mas que nada.
ES- MI- ROBOT GIGANTE! Me gusto mucho el ritmo de la diff. Gigante. Suerte Dante/Mr.Bigot!
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Acá esta la diff fixeada en code como me pediste :P

Y con respecto al ritmo raro, realmente me costo darle buen ritmo teniendo en cuenta como es la canción y que es una Normal xD, pero fixee todo.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Ok, Hagamos esto. Perdon por hacerte esperar :P

[General:]

- En Dificil y Gigante! deberias mapear desde la Intro, creo que es una TV Size, entonces deberias aprovechar la cancion completa, si no haces esto al menos desactiva el Audio Lead-In ya que empezas a mapear en 00:06:568 (Es decir que tenes todo eso de Lead-In)
- Preview Point: No me gusta mucho que este mismo en el comienzo de la cancion (en el momento 0). Me parece que estaria bien si lo pones en 13360 (Donde comienza la Vocal).
- En las Secciones de Soft Hitsounds deberias incrementarle el Volumen porque se escucha realmente bajo. Por lo menos intentalo subir en un 10/15%.

[Normal:]

Settings:
--> El Overall Difficulty se me hace que esta un poco alto, viendo que es la dificultad mas facil. Estaria bien si lo reducis en un tick (OD-1)

00:18:343 (5): Esta nota no juega del todo bien en est Tick Rojo, es como que intenta jugar con el Instrumental pero no lo hace del todo bien. Esta Nota juega mejor con la Voz y el Instrumental a la vez si la moves 1/2 hacia adelante (hasta 00:18:542), luego deberias agregarle un Finish y me parece que un New Combo tambien seria recomendable y razonable para esto (Deberias eliminar el New Combo en la Nota Siguiente)
00:27:370 (2): Quiero imaginar que el Whistle al final del Slider no es Intencional. Porque realmente se escucha mal y es inconsistente con el resto de tus proximos patterns. Deberias eliminarlo de aca
00:28:170 (3): Siguiendo tus patterns de Whistle, causaría un buen efecto si le agregas uno al Comienzo de este Slider. En mi opinion sigue completamente el ritmo
00:31:370 (3): (^)
00:34:570 (5): (^)

Buena dificultad, aunque de vez en cuando se siente algo dificil para ser la mas facil del mapset pero bueno nada mayor :P

[Dificil:]

Settings:
- En algunas partes se siente extraño el map a causa del bajo Overall Difficulty. Me parece que deberias aumentarlo en un tick (OD+1)

00:11:636 (1): En general estos patterns estan siguiendo lo mismo en la cancion (o por lo menos no se nota un cambio aparente), por esto creo que seria algo innecesario este New Combo, seria mejor si lo remueves de aca. Lo mismo tendrias que hacer con el combo en 00:12:164 (Removerlo, por las dudas xD)
00:20:137 (2): A la hora de jugar el map, me esperaba un Finish en esta nota. Es como una parte para enfatizar, en mi opinion deberias agregarselo

- En rasgos generales me gusto esta dificultad :D

[Gigante!:]

- Misma razon que en Dificil, usa Overall Difficulty incrementado en 1 Tick (OD+1)

00:09:273 (1,2): La verdad este salto (en 1/4) no fluye bien al ser relativamente grande, ademas no le veo motivo para que este ahi. El unico motivo razonable que le pude encontrar es que lo hallas hecho para forzar algo de simetria y por eso esta ahi. De todas maneras tienes a un gran jugador de Standard en el mapset como es Bruno, asi que podrias pedirle que testee esta parte y que te de una conclusion :P
00:12:363 (1,2): (^)
00:12:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1): Se vería bien un poco de simetria. Intenta hacer algo como lo que esta en el Screenshoot de abajo, facil, al primer Slider (1) hacele copy/paste para que te quede el segundo (1) y ubicalos en el mismo eje de las (y), luego reposiciona las otras notas de una manera mas o menos parecida a como lo hice yo:
SPOILER
00:19:340 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1): Este pattern va bien hasta llegar a (8), este tipo de patterns en general no me gustan porque le sacan fluidez al mapa, por la razon de que es un Stream de muchas notas (unstacked) y luego te toca una parte Stacked donde se tiene que parar notoriamente. Como hago usualmente leo los mods de los maps que tengo que modear, vi lo que te dijo kyon y en general creo que seria lo mas coherente. Deberias hacerlo como el te dijo :P
00:23:924 (2,3): Este Overlap de (3) con el Slider (2) es feo de jugar (principalmente para la visual del jugador). Es mejor si lo mueves un poco hacia arriba a (3), para que te quede mas o menos en x:256 y:156

- En general el map esta bien, se escucha bien, pero para esta dificultad deberias trabajar un poco mas la posicion de las notas siempre para obtener mejor fluidez.

Eso seria todo lo que tengo por ahora.
Me gusta el ritmo que tiene el mapa en general. Le faltaria algun que otro hitsound, pero como te dije in-game suena bien sin ellos tambien :P.
Espero que te sea de ayuda.
Buena Suerte con TU ROBOT GIGANTE!!! y te dejo una estrella ;) Ahora puedo dormir tranquilo xD
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP

iMercurial wrote:

HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
General

SPOILER

Normal

I cant hear hitsounds please change volume to %50 or %60
00:42:670- unrankable hitsounds volume. please change (%30)

Dificil

Nice diff but why you didnt add claps ?

Gigante!

00:24:522- it would be better if you do CTRL + H
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic

HellDawn wrote:

00:42:670- unrankable hitsounds volume. please change (%30)
Since when 5% is unrankable lol.

Como sea, acá te dejo la diff con algunos fixes.
Akiyama Mizuki
2,711 posts
Joined March 2009
Akiyama Mizuki
From my modding queue!

[Normal]
00:11:366 (3) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/321176
00:12:961 (4) - ^

[Hard]
00:15:154 (3) - whistle
00:15:353 (4) - ^ at reverse arrow
00:39:370 - ^

[Insane]
00:09:772 (1,3) - whistle
00:16:748 (2) - x104 y132
00:19:340 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - oh no no
00:21:732 (4) - finish

yeah! gigantic gigantic!
btw, i don't it's great as Noisestorm - Solar
that was amazing :3
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hi there~

General
  1. I think your second kiai time on normal should end 00:42:670- too since it's not a guest diff.
  2. Find a better mp3? I think it's quite low on quality so it doesn't good to hear.
Normal
  1. 00:08:177 (1) - Why this slider doesn't have a whistle on it's end while your other next note consist of whistle? So, it's better to add at this one too.
  2. 00:12:961 (4) - This one doesn't have a good symetrical shape. Use this code below?
    210,127,12961,2,0,B|222:155|255:163|255:163|288:155|301:127,1,120,8|2
  3. 00:14:556 (2) - Move to 00:14:356- since the 'ko' sound are on that spot. You follow vocal at this rythim 00:13:758 (1,3,4) - so make that circle follow vocal too.
  4. 00:28:170 (3) - Umm, same as above. This slider symetrical can still be improved. Use this code below?
    272,108,28170,2,0,B|325:62|380:108,3,120,2|8|0|8
  5. 00:30:570 (2) - Miss a finish at the start? Your slider at 00:27:370 (2) - consist a finish.
  6. 00:33:770 (3) - ^
  7. 00:36:970 (2) - ^
Dificil
  1. 00:07:380 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Hmm, i think this part needs to add more hitsound. There's just a finish sound at that part, and i think it's not enough. Here a couple suggestion from me, you can add a clap/whistle at the time i mention :
    1. 00:07:579 (2) - at the start
    2. 00:08:376 (2) - ^
    3. 00:09:174 (2) - ^
    4. 00:09:971 (2) -
    5. 00:09:971 (2) - at the start
    6. 00:11:566 (2) - ^
    7. 00:12:363 (2) - ^
  2. 00:15:353 (4) - Add a whistle here, it's not consistant with whistle at 00:14:157 (2) - and 00:16:948 (3) -
  3. 00:19:340 (3,4) - Omg, a jump in 1/4 rythim. It's very hard to play and make the flow break very bad. Keep in mind that this is hard diff, not insane. At least make this 2 slider into 1 repeat.
  4. 00:22:928 (2) - I feel empty at this point, you can add a whistle at this slider start to cover up that empty part.
  5. Hmm, your kiai time just consist finish sound too. Well add some hitsound at that kiai time, it will make this diff more good to hear. At least refer to the clap/whistle rythim that i have mention.
  6. 00:42:770- Why this diff doesn't have a spinner on this time? It good to make all the diff end at the same spot. So add spinner here that start here and end at 00:44:970- like normal diff.
Gigante!
  1. 00:09:273 (2) - Overuse finish sound at the start. I think it's better to remove it.
  2. 00:24:522 (4) - Hmm, not symetrical again. Use this code below? 
    412,104,24522,2,0,B|412:148|376:192|376:192|412:236|412:288,2,200,2|4|4
  3. 00:32:970 (1) - Miss a finish here at the start? It's not consistant with your next and previous finish sound.
  4. 00:42:770- Same as Dificil diff.
Maybe that's all from me. Well, your map is quite good, but i think it's need more few improvement. Oh, yes, and i think Darksonic diff could use more hitsound. It's just feel empty.
Good luck~
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Diff

Thanks for mods.
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[Normal]
The volume is too low. You should increase them by at least 15% imo.
End Kiai at 00:42:670 to make consistent?

[Dificil]
00:09:174 (2) - remove finish and add clap at head?
00:14:157 (2) - move like this so it will looks better: http://puu.sh/w4IP (also move 00:15:353 (4) for symmetry)
00:24:124 (4) - remove whistle at head and add whistle at end?

[Gigante!]
00:13:758 (1,2) - the spacing between them is misleading, please fix it
00:19:340 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - nazi - the shape is not so good. you can open distance snap and disable grid snap to put stream like this more smooth
00:24:124 (3,5) - stack them?
00:32:970 (1) - move 1 grid(L4) left or it looks weird (also move 00:33:770 (1) 1 grid right for symmetry)

That's all I can find. GL~
eldnl
Former osu!catch Champion: 2013
2,930 posts
Joined March 2010
eldnl
this.
Cygnus
1,517 posts
Joined December 2011
Cygnus
  • Normal
  1. 00:00:190 (1,2,3,4) - Scale these notes up please. They're too near from each other.

  2. AR +1

  • Dificil
  1. 00:42:170 - Add a note here?

  2. HP Drain, Overall Difficulty +1

  • Gigante
  1. 00:42:170 - Add a note here? :O

  2. OD +2 :O

  3. I'm not really sure about your sliders D: It doesn't really go with the rhythm D:
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
yo

Normal
  1. Kiai time: I suggest to move the end of this kiai in 00:42:670 like others diff
  2. 00:06:568 (1) - add clap in the beginning? I know in there is downbeat, but the drum sound is matching with clap sound imo
  3. 00:09:772 (1) - this slider seems a bit weird in my eyes =w= make that same with 00:08:177 (1) ?
  4. 00:39:370 (1) - add finish sound the beginning? seems the rhythm already change in here
Dificil
  1. 00:09:174 (2) - add clap in the slider's beginning? the sound similar with 00:07:579 (2,2)
  2. 00:16:948 (3) - I think the whistle sound should in the slider's beginning, not in the end. since in beginning seems very empty imo
  3. 00:18:343 (6) - add whistle in the beginning? seems fit with the song i guess..
  4. 00:27:370 (3) - add finish sound in slider's beginning? the sound similar with 00:26:570 (1)'s beginning. also, the normal diff already do that.
  5. 00:30:570 (3) - ^
  6. 00:33:770 (4) - ^ but just add finish
  7. 00:36:970 (2) - same as 00:27:370
Gigante
  1. 00:09:772 (1) - why not add finish in here? .3.
  2. 00:27:370 (1) - same as in dificil difficulty
  3. 00:30:370 (3) - ^ but in the slider's end
  4. 00:33:770 (1) - same as in dificil difficulty
That's all
Good luck .w.
Yu-Izanagi-12
314 posts
Joined March 2012
Yu-Izanagi-12
Hi from my queue
I've honestly found no errors it looks good to me
Good Luck
x847606653
524 posts
Joined January 2011
x847606653
hi.just suggestion

Normal
00:19:938(1) move to (153.90)?it looks more beautiful
00:31:370(3) the 2nd point move to (154.114)?

Difici
00:20:928(2) why not add a point to make the slider like 00:10:768?
00:24:124(4) ^
00:42:670 green line is not useful.delete it?

Gigante!
none

good map.good lucky._.
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Fixed.
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
Hi
from Fang Team's Queue
Let's mod

Red : must fix(Unrankable)
Bold : should fix

[General]

inconsistency Lead-in, unify that plz

[Normal]

SPOILER
00:08:177 (1,2) - parallel with 00:09:772 - this?
Fine~

[Dificil]

SPOILER
00:10:370 (4) - some players confusion this note. can you fix it?

[Gigante!]

SPOILER
00:19:340 (3) - Can you try make this stream, more pretty?
00:24:522 (4) - Remove Finish at tail?

Fine~
all Fine

Star~

Have a good time :D
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
If you watch it clearly, the normal diff starts in the first offset, but the "dificil" and "gigante" diff starts later... A different lead-in on diffs isn't unrankable
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
YEAH SHORT MAPS WOO YEAH

THIS ROBOT IS HUGE.

Overall:
Add English Tags? (ie. "Chicks Dig Giant Robots" and whatever series this is from)

Insane:
k

Hard:
Use more claps on 2 and 4, especially during the kiai~
00:10:370 (4) - Add clap?

Normal:
Start at same time as other diffs, or have other diffs start here.
Make sure you claps are on 2 and 4

It's cool stuff.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
3,826 posts
Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Hi there \:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. Nothing to poke at, I suppose.
>Normal
  1. 00:09:772 (3) - NC?
  2. 00:11:366 (5) - ^
>Dificil
  1. Don't want to map the pre-offset part?
>Gigante!
  1. Just like in Dificil, maybe map the pre-offset part?
Eh... Seems to be a great mapset. Feel free to not give me a kudosu for this \:D/

Good luck on the way 8-)

EDIT: I just realized that Darksonic made the Normal diff. My God.
Last edited by Hinsvar , edited 1 time in total.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

CDFA wrote:

YEAH SHORT MAPS WOO YEAH

THIS ROBOT IS HUGE.

Overall:
Add English Tags? (ie. "Chicks Dig Giant Robots" and whatever series this is from)
YEAH, GIANT ROBOT IS GIANT! /o/

Also, about tags, that must be fixed... thank you CDFA.

I wanna map Octagon with one of your octagonal guest diffs.
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang

iMercurial wrote:

If you watch it clearly, the normal diff starts in the first offset, but the "dificil" and "gigante" diff starts later... A different lead-in on diffs isn't unrankable
oh.... sry ;_;
and thanks for give me information
I will develop with your advice :3
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Fixed.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Todos putos /o/
MMzz
Elite Mapper
3,979 posts
Joined June 2009
MMzz
Lmao this nostalgia. I used to love this show.

This is gonna be short probably because the song isn't very long.

  • [Gigante!]

    00:08:974 (1,2) - I think this might be to far of a jump for you fast it's going. Maybe think of something shorter? It's fine the way it is, I just feel really uneasy about it.
    00:24:124 (3) - move this circle up and left a little so it's directly on the line.
    00:24:522 (4) - Now for some nice symmetry, instead of this slider you could use 00:23:326 (2) and flip it horizontal, and reverse it so it starts at the top and add the repeat. Should look like this in the end. http://puu.sh/wXXo
    00:25:718 (5) - Then put this in the same spot 00:24:124 (3) was.
    00:33:270 (2) - Straighten this slider up so it's exactly parallel to the previous. It looks crooked.
    00:34:070 (2) - ^
    00:34:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Linear streams like this are ugly and really hard to play, maybe remake it and have more of a wave shap?
    00:37:570 (3) - new combo

  • [Dificil]

    00:19:639 (4) - I'm not sure if you can do small stream jumps like this in a hard. I would remove a repeat on this note then move it 1 tick forward so it's two triplets in a row. (Note: I am not sure so this might be ok.)
    00:19:938 (1,2) - remove combo from 1 and add it to 2.
    00:22:529 (1,2) - ^

  • [Normal]

    All is good here!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

MMzz wrote:

Lmao this nostalgia. I used to love this show.
That's why I just mapped this song.
makeamove
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
makeamove
[General]

- Me parece -no estoy seguro- que el primer offset sería mejor en 200. La guitarra sí suena bien en el offset que tenes ahora, pero la batería suena mejor en 200 (lo que querría decir que la guitarra y batería estan a destiempo por unos pocos ms??), y para esta parte es lo que importa en sí.

- 00:42:170 (x)- Imaginate si saliera un "SI!" de storyboard ahí :D

[Normal]

00:10:569 (4) - New combo y saca el NC del siguiente slider.
00:28:170 (3) - Sería mejor si le pones whistle a todos los repeat (conservando los finish y clap como estan)
00:31:370 (3) - ^
00:34:570 (5) - ^
00:37:770 (3) - Lo mismo
00:42:770 (1) - Sacá este spinner, queda muy corto y muy cerca de la nota anterior por lo que hace que sea dificil de hacer 300 para newbies.
Hmmm en esta diff tenemos un problemita.. para ser la diff mas fácil del mapset hay algunas partes demasiaaaaaaaaaaado confusas para un newbie - ejemplos: 00:13:758 (1,2,3) - (ritmo no muy intuitivo), 00:18:941 (1,2,3,1) - otra vez muy muy muy confuso y difícil de leer para principiantes. Mi sugerencia sería simplificar esas partes para que sea una Normal-tirando a Easy. Espero no haberte confudido mucho xD pero como está ahora, es como... esas partes no pegan con la diff.. no se si me explico :/ No puede hacerlas alguien que no sepa jugar casi.

[Hard]

00:07:579 (2,1,2,1,2) - Son necesarios tantos new combo? Queda mejor si sacas los NC de 00:08:177 (1) - y de 00:08:974 (1) - .
00:08:974 (1) - ^
00:13:758 (1,2,3,4) - Suena mal mal mal.. no se intenta otra cosa pero suena feo esto o.o trata de seguir más la vocal.
00:17:546 (4,5) - Reemplazar con slider - suena muy.. vacío
00:19:938 (1) - Dos problemas con esta nota: Sacale el new combo y poneselo al siguiente slider, y el otro problema, en una Hard no puede haber jump en streams. Unila al resto del mini-stream. Muy difícil de leer para Hard.
00:27:970 (1) - Saca el new combo y poneselo al siguiente slider. Lo mismo para todos los pattern de triplets estos.
00:29:370 (5) - Suena mucho mejor y menos repetitivo si reemplazas esto por una sola nota en el tick blanco.
00:32:570 (5) - ^
00:35:770 (5) - ^
00:38:970 (7) - ^

[Insane]

00:12:762 (3) - No me gusta como queda esta nota tan cerca del slider anterior cuando todos los pattern anteriores tienen un spacing más grande.
00:18:941 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Forma fea tiene el stream o.o parece un paraguas xD hace la curva esa más suave.
00:28:970 (1) - Saca el new combo
00:29:370 (4) - Pone new combo
00:32:170 (1) - Remove nc
00:32:570 (4) - Add nc
00:34:570 (1) - El overmap no me molestaba mucho pero acá ya es demasiada verdura el stream ese :/ el overmap no siempre queda feo si es poco o suena muy bien, como era el caso, pero este stream ya es verdura!

Eso es todo. Aclaro que mi Kathe me ayudó con muchas cosas <3 es mia!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
C-C-Combo...

Meh, no vale la pena, gracias.

Pd: Y dejá a mi stream verdura ahí... es un stream a 150bpm, no le hace daño a nadie.
makeamove
1,127 posts
Joined July 2010
makeamove

iMercurial wrote:

C-C-Combo...

Meh, no vale la pena, gracias.

Pd: Y dejá a mi stream verdura ahí... es un stream a 150bpm, no le hace daño a nadie.
Stream fruta va a ser cuando lo juegues en ctb
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ok fue malísimo
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei

Snepif wrote:

Stream fruta va a ser cuando lo juegues en ctb
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ok fue malísimo
HAHAHAHAHA tontito <3
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Qué boludo, gosh xD
Kryptogram
600 posts
Joined December 2010
Kryptogram
Hola iMercurial

General

  1. Inconsistencia en el AudioLeadIn:
    - [Dificil] : 0
    - [Gigante!] : 0
    - [Normal] : 2000
  2. Que te parecen estos combo Colours:
    SPOILER


    Combo1 : 192,192,192
    Combo2 : 255,128,0
    Combo3 : 0,128,255
    Combo4 : 255,255,0

    Funcionan muy bien con el video, deberias probarlos
  3. Intente con algunos custom-hitclaps y me gusto como sono este en el Kia time

    Descargame

    Para escucharlo debes poner el Audio en Normal - Custom1
Normal

  1. 00:12:961 (2) - 1 grid a la derecha para que quede centrado
  2. 00:39:370 (1) - Agrega finish, suena bien
  3. 00:40:970 (3) - Agrega finish al inicio
Dificil

  1. 00:19:340 (3) - La primera vez que jugue en dificil me confundieron este y el siguiente slider http://puu.sh/x6Un unelos mas para percatarse de que son seguidos
  2. 00:32:570 (5) - Ponle repeats hasta 00:32:970 (x) y agregale finish al final suena bien
  3. 00:32:970 (1) - Remueve nota si hiciste la sugerencia de arriba
  4. 00:39:370 (1) - Agrega finish, va con el ritmo de fondo
Gigante!

  1. OD + 1 o 2 es muchisimo mas Dificil que 6
  2. 00:18:144 (5) - Remueve el finish agregalo en 00:18:343 (6) - Al iniciar el slider
  3. 00:39:370 (1) - Agrega finish
Lamento no poder ayudar en mucho, Espero que te vaya bien

Buena suerte ! y mi estrella !
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
Hi there ;D


[General]
Why Gigante! and Dificil don't have any notes in intro?
You can add some note easily due to its very short length.
Or remove notes from Normal diff where in intro. But I suggest the way above.


[Gigante!]
OD 6 would be better for Insane diff.
00:20:037 (10,1) - This is the only different to others that streams and a slider patterns. I mean you'd better unstack them.
00:38:170 (5) - NC


[Dificil]
00:16:748 (2) - Add whistle
00:20:137 (2) - Add whistle to tail


[Normal]
I recommend highly HP 3 and OD 3 for flawless mapset : Star Rating will be decreased. 3.06 → 2.97, and 100 score will be decreased. So don't worry. Others are fine.


Good luck >w<
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
'cuz Normal is a guest diff... and I wanna start the mapping in the drums part.
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Thanks for mods.
Yusu Aoi
214 posts
Joined October 2009
Yusu Aoi
Hey there^^
Because I had a one year pause, it's just my suggestions:)

Normal:
Fine, nothing found^^

Dificil:
00:29:370 (5) The distance between (5) and (1) is a little too high?

Gigante!:
00:10:868 (2) maybe stack end of this slider with note (1) 00:09:772?
00:13:659 (6) 1 grid up?
00:28:970 (1,2,3) Maybe stack it on x:184 y:200 ?

Nice song! :D

Feel free to not giving me a Kudosu^^ Ohhh.. I forgot about the star.. sry :)) Here it goes^^
Yuzeyun
7,650 posts
Joined September 2010
Yuzeyun
A mod from me is always from the Heussian Blur ~

[General]

Preview point better be @ 182ms
Timing 1 : 150,50BPM | 182ms
Timing 2 : 150,50BPM | 7373ms
Timing 3 : 150,00BPM | 26582ms
"lamejorseriedelahistoria" => LOL

[Normal]
00:20:934 (3) - It would be better to put it @(184,240)
00:39:370 (1) - 
148,128,39370,6,0,B|200:76|252:128,1,120,0|8
00:40:170 (2) - ^ CT+J
00:03:379 (3) - NC as the length between notes is large (4bt)
Combo color issues, please fix this.

[Difícil]
I felt it a little too hard for a Hard and I feel the NC's are slightly overused at the beginning (Though you put HP5 which is nice enough)
AR6 instead of 7 ?
OD6 instead of 5 ?
00:08:177 (1) - Del NC
00:08:974 (1) - ^
00:11:366 (1) - ^
00:12:164 (1) - ^
00:17:546 (4,5) - As the syllable is held, maybe replace by a slider and unstack ?
00:19:938 (1) - Spacing, it's not so intuitive after this kind of "stream" (I can't really think this is a stream)
00:24:921 (1) - Map it instead of putting a spinner ?

[Gigante!]
WTF did I play O_o
However, I saw that the OD is terribly low for something which is a real Insane, put 7 or 8 ?

00:12:164 (1,2) - What's that jump ? Narrow it down, it's very fast (~4,5x @SV 2 is just batshitcrazy)
00:13:758 (1) - The difficulty of the song suddenly drops, which is a big problem as if the player managed to pass it barely and can't continue because of that drop. Don't be afraid of slightly overmapping it by adding some 1/2s or 1/4s as long as they don't ruin the map itself.
00:26:570 (1) - Until that point the song can be a pain if you have a low life, try making the above part a bit easier than the part beginning by this note ?
00:37:570 (3) - NC ?
00:36:970 (2) - Unsure about this one but ^?

Otherwise this is a cool map, a cool song of a series I didn't watch when I was younger (I can't remember correctly when this was broadcasted on CN)
kurohana
520 posts
Joined October 2010
kurohana
mod req <3

General

tags areb't the same in all diffs, fix that

well, that was short...
a good map :3 couldn't find something, good luck ^^
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[General]
Normal only sample diff name.

[Dificil]
00:19:639 (4,1) - too far this spacing

[Gigante!]
00:13:758 (1,2,3) - I'm don't like this spacing. please follow a same distance snap.
00:37:570 (3,4,5,6,7) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/329749 try this pattern

Normal is fine
Darksonic
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Darksonic
No changes on my diffs.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Thank you Muya, I haven't noticed of the wrong spacing on "Gigante" :3
Shulin
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Joined August 2009
Shulin
General:

  1. mp3 quality is bad it sounds like a youtube rip. Try to find a clearer version preferably without the sound effects because it'd be strange if someone downloads the no video version and gets an mp3 with lots of SFX.
  2. Try to have some consistency with hitsounds and new combos across all difficulties.
  3. I think you should add an Easy to balance out the mapset, since it's a short song it shouldn't take too long.
Normal:

  1. I think this should start and finish in the same place as the other difficulties.
  2. Hitsounds sound way too quiet, especially compared to the other difficulties. I'd recommend increasing it to at least 50%
00:19:938 (1) - Reposition this so there's less overlap with 00:19:340 (2) - ?
00:40:970 (3,1) - Spacing. An anti jump is bad in a Normal imo.

Dificil:

  1. I feel this difficulty would play smoother without the returning 1/4 sliders.
00:09:772 (1,2,3,4) - Space this out a little more? Maybe with a jump between 00:09:174 (2,1) - for consistency?
00:18:343 (5) - Space this out more so it doesn't overlap with 00:17:546 (4) - ?
00:20:137 (2) - Move this so it doesn't overlap with 00:19:938 (1) -
00:21:333 (4) - Space this out a little more?
00:21:732 (5) - Finish?
00:26:570 (1,2,3) - These jumps are are little big compared to the rest of this section.

Gigante!:

  1. 00:06:568 (1) - to 00:13:659 (6) - could do with more hitsounds than just normal finish. Some suggestions below.
  2. 00:13:758 to 00:25:718 (5) - apart from the stream this much easier than rest of the map. Maybe try to follow the instruments some more to make it harder and less out of sync with the rest of the map?
  3. 00:26:570 (1) - to 00:36:170 (1) - I think normal clap is overdone here especially on the streams and triples. It also sounds too loud, 50% volume would be a better fit here.
00:07:978 (3) - Clap?
00:08:775 (3) - ^
00:08:974 (1,2) - This 1/4 slider jump is pretty huge. I suppose it's okay but it doesn't play very well imo.
00:09:572 (3) - Clap?
00:10:370 (4) - ^
00:11:167 (3) - ^
00:11:964 (3) - ^
00:12:164 (1,2) - I feel the same about this 1/4 jump too. It's actually bigger than some of your 1/2 jumps ?_?
00:12:762 (3) - Clap?
00:12:762 (3) - Remove finish?
00:16:948 (3) - Finish start?
00:18:343 (6) - Remove finish from the end?
00:22:529 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:23:326 (2) - New combo here? Also, finish start.
00:24:522 (4) - Remove finish from the end, add whistle?
00:28:570 (4,5,6) - I think this would look better if you placed it to the left of 00:28:170 (1,2,3) - instead of the right.
00:37:770 (4) - New combo?
00:37:570 (3,4,5,6,7) - Make a symmetrical pattern here? Right now the placement looks kind of random.

That's it from me. Good luck ~ !
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Only Suggestions, huh?
jossieP
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jossieP

Shulin wrote:

General:

  1. mp3 quality is bad it sounds like a youtube rip. Try to find a clearer version preferably without the sound effects because it'd be strange if someone downloads the no video version and gets an mp3 with lots of SFX.
sayin this suggest that you can find a better mp3, can you?
you would be a pro if you can find a better mp3 <_< you accept the challenge?
mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_

Shulin wrote:

General:

  1. I think you should add an Easy to balance out the mapset, since it's a short song it shouldn't take too long.
Spread, Spread xD.
Bueno como amo esta serie y me dejaste hacer la diff. (te la pedi porque vi un par de mods que jodian con la diff. Spread y porque me encanta la serie, parece repetitivo xD), ya esta hecha, me tomo menos trabajo de lo que pensaba :D
Espero que te guste, y si agregas la diff. no te olvides de mi nombre a los tags!!!
Ahora anda por mas mods y Rankea esto!!!!!! :P

Download: Ezequiel Serrano - Es el Robot Gigante (TV Size) (iMercurial) [Facil].osu
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
A por todas.
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Hey, sorry for the delay

[General]
Fix the Audio LeadIn in Dificil and Gigante, which is 0, or in Normal, which is 200. Your choice.

[Dificil - Gigante]
I suggest to map the first part someway.

Fine.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Sorry but no, Normal starts 6 seconds before than dificil and gigante, so I won't do it
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Hello!

Genaral

  1. All diffs have custom names except Normal. Rename it? :O
  2. Do you have mp3 with better quality? If not, you need to ask if such quality is rankable D: It feels like 92kb/sec.
Facil

  1. 00:06:568 (3) - remove finish

    That's all :D
Normal

  1. 00:04:974 (4) - new combo here
  2. 00:06:568 (3) - and remove from here!
  3. 00:06:568 (1) - I heard that the ends of sliders don't snap to new offset D: And it isn't snapped too. Rearrange it, for example:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:08:177 (2,4) - make them parallel
  5. 00:14:356 (2,3) - make a slider from 00:14:356 - to 00:14:954 - , or add a note to 00:14:755 -
  6. 00:18:742 - add here a note or delete 00:18:343 (5) - and add to 00:18:542 - with finish
  7. 00:22:529 (1) - finish to the end
  8. 00:39:370 (1) - finish to the beginning
  9. 00:40:970 (3,1) - bad spacing. Try to move it down? D:
Dificil

  1. Why not start this diff from the very beginning? As Easy and Normal
  2. 00:09:772 (1,2,3,4) - don't like this jump, make this:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:13:758 (1,2,3) - try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:19:340 (3,4,1) - hm... plays hard. Try this:
    SPOILER
    Add repeat to (3) and move (4) to 00:19:738 - and remove (1).
  5. 00:21:333 (4) - why 1/1 rhythm again? Noo, make it quite harder! At least like this:
    SPOILER
Gigante!

  1. Again, why not start this diff from the very beginning? As Easy and Normal
  2. 00:14:157 - add a note. I don't like this empty spacing
  3. 00:16:350 - ^
  4. 00:21:333 (3) - again, 1/1, whyyy, it's Insane! Make it hard!
    SPOILER
  5. 00:37:770 (1,2,3,4) - make it look nicer (at least square)
I remember this cartoon :O
Like it! Good luck!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
@Reiji... Those names are the Spanish translation of the normal difficulties.

Easy: Facil
Normal: Normal
Hard: Dificil

Gigante: Giant: Insane
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ

iMercurial wrote:

@Reiji... Those names are the Spanish translation of the normal difficulties.

Easy: Facil
Normal: Normal
Hard: Dificil

Gigante: Giant: Insane
Oh, I get it. Sorry :<
me noob
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
No problem :3
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
From Bass' and Akemi's mod queue.
[General]
Lead-in-time are inconsistent trough difficulties.


[Normal]
  1. 00:19:738 (3) - move 1 grid left to make symmetrical with 00:18:941 (1) -
  2. 00:19:938 (1) - move 1 grid left too

[Dificil]
  1. 00:09:772 (1,2,3,4,1) - make like this?
    Click!
Nice map :3.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Some crap has been modified... thank you.
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Fixed some stuff.
Cilvery
346 posts
Joined May 2011
Cilvery
Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Facil]
00:05:771 - add finish

00:29:370 - add clap

00:31:370 - ^

00:35:370 - add clap

00:39:370 - add finish

[Normal]
00:08:974 - 1grid up

00:22:130 - add finish

00:28:170 - 1grid down

00:39:370 - add clap


[Dificil]
00:22:130 - add finish

00:09:174 - remove finish

00:10:370 - add clap

00:36:170 - 1grid down

00:41:770 - add whistle

[Gigante!]
00:07:380 - 1grid left

00:07:679 - ^

00:09:971 - add clap

00:10:370 - ^

00:38:570 - add finish

00:38:970 - remove finish

00:41:770 - add whistle
--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
\(´∀ `*)/
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
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Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
No Changes in my diff. Sorry :(
Darksonic
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Joined November 2010
Darksonic
Eze hace el mod por mi, ya que solo hago un cambio minimo, move la nota 00:08:974 (2) a x:388 y:64, nada mas.
Mystyk
osu! Alumni
950 posts
Joined June 2011
Mystyk
Here's my mod, since you requested, but I won't guarantee it will be helpful :P

Faci:
Well it was nice, only one small thing, that is not really important :P
00:34:570 (3) - you could make that line in the middle straight, cuz it looks like this - http://puu.sh/ywUG

Normal:
HP Drain Rate and OD +1?, it's only a little bit bigger than easy, so I think you can raise it :P
00:03:379 (3,4) - why not put these on the places of (1,2)? I think it doesn't look so good like this, not liek it's so noticeable, just a suggestion
00:11:366 (1) - those anchor points doesn't seem to be symmetrical, why don't you just copy and flip 00:12:961 (2)?
00:18:941 (1,2,3) - I think these sound weird, and it's as if (1) was late, I would suggest this - http://puu.sh/ywXm
the diff was nice, only the slider anchor points (or whatever they are called) weren't, but whatever :P

Dificil:
Nothing much, just why is the beginning not edited, while it was edited on the other difficulties?
And +1 on HP Drain Rate

Gigante!:
The same thing as above about not editing to the beginning.

00:26:570 (1) - I think this shouldn't be so close to 00:25:718 (5), maybe ctrl+R with this? 00:27:370 (1,2,3)
It seemed fine, there were some kind of big jumps, but it's a nice difficulty.
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
3,473 posts
Joined July 2011
Flask
Hi :3 ! Request From CLANNAD Mod queue~

I love the BG :D !

[General]
There's a unsnapped red line on 00:07:380 - , you better to change it x_x . (well of course you can still keep it)
KIAI Time doesn't same in every diff .
Use Offset 26570 to the preview time .
[Facil]
Well I will choose Easy to the diff name but it's OK :D


Fine >w< !

[Normal]
00:10:569 (4,1) - too far ._.
00:24:522 (4) - move left 1 gird (gird level4) because of the spacing ._.

[Dificil]
choose Hard yeah :\

00:19:639 (4) - it's hard to find there are 2 backs here because (3) has just 1 back , try add a note to instead of the last back.

[Gitante!]
Fine.



Very good :D Cannot wait anymore to rank !
Good luck!
Shizuroh
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Shizuroh
dem gigantic robot.

Facil = easy if i trust my fail france even although this is spanish
00:28:970 (4,5,1) - they all should go 2 grids up and 1 grid left

Normal = Normal
Nothing? D:

Dificil = difficult XD
00:00:190 - Y U NO HAVE SOMETHING HERE XD why is easy and normal mapped here and difficult here not? D:
00:07:978 (2,1) - why is there such a big gap while they are all 1/2?
00:08:775 (2,1) - ^
00:18:343 (5) - i think this should be 1 grid right
00:26:570 (1,2,3) - lolwut spacing o3o

Gigante = omg gigantic? o3o
00:00:190 - same question goes for at difficult
00:20:037 (10,1) - instead of stacking, put some spacing like what you did at the other circles

GIGANTIC >//v//<
Jesss
814 posts
Joined November 2008
Jesss
Mod Requested and accepted from My Modding Queue

No estaría mal si moddeara en español, ya que es nuestro idioma en común, ¿no?
Vaya forma en la que se cambió el sistema para moddear...estoy aún en la Old School! D:

General
- La calidad del Audio del Beatmap...pero puedo entenderlo...
- ¿Es mi imaginación, o no tienes asignado un buen Preview Point?

Facil
00:09:772 (3) - Muévelo a la posición X:332 Y:176 Next:1,02x Grid lvl4 para que el map tenga esa sensación de secuencia.

Normal
Habrán cambios sutiles en coordenadas, para la simetría, claro xD
- 00:08:177 (1,2) - Muévelo a X:256 Y:128 y que quede con una inclinación como esta:
SPOILER
- 00:09:772 (3,4) - Haz copy-paste del anterior combo, inviértelo y luego alínealo con 00:08:974 (2) - quedaría algo así:
SPOILER
- 00:11:366 (1) - A consecuencia de la nueva ubicación, Ponlo en las siguientes coordenadas Grid LVL4 X:116 Y:192
- 00:12:961 (2) - respetando el espacio entre combo, quedaría de maravilla puesto en la siguiente coordenada X:212 Y:24
- 00:13:758 (1,2,3,4,5) - Coordenadas gridlvl4: X:384 Y:80
- 00:14:755 (3) - Ponlo en coordenada X:228 Y:164
- 00:14:954 (4) - ^
- 00:15:353 (5) - es un slider con un modelado algo Rándom...quedaría mejor modelado de esta forma:
SPOILER
- 00:16:549 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seleccionar todo el combo y ubicar en la siguente Coordenada X:352 Y:76
- 00:23:725 (2) - Posiciónalo en X:184 Y:136
- 00:24:124 (3) - ^ X: 236 Y:56
- 00:24:522 (4) - ^ X: 328 Y: 24
- 00:24:921 (5) - ^ X: 416 Y: 60
- 00:26:117 (6) - ^ X: 332 Y:328
El resultado sería algo como esto:
SPOILER
- 00:26:570 (1) - X:192 Y:324
- 00:27:370 (2) - X:108 Y:140
- 00:28:170 (3) - X:256 Y:216
- 00:29:770 (1,2) - X 388 Y:208
- 00:31:370 (3) - X:184 Y:136
- 00:32:970 (1) - X: 260 Y: 88
- 00:33:370 (2,3,4,5) - algo como esto:
SPOILER
- 00:36:170 (1,2) - selecciónalos y ubícalos en X:120 Y:156
- 00:37:770 (3,4,5,6) - X: 316 Y: 240 el combo en forma de V (o algo así), me explico:
SPOILER
- 00:39:370 (1,2,3) - Haz este patrón (recomiendo remodelar los sliders...están algo raros):
SPOILER
La composición está bien hecha, pero aún hay bastante por hacer en la organización de los items.

Dificil
- 00:09:772 (1,2,3,4) - Muévelo a la siguiente coordenada X:361 Y: 32
- 00:10:569 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^ X:416 Y:208
- 00:16:948 (3) - Modela un poco mejor el slider...una referencia
SPOILER
- 00:21:333 (3,4,5) - Rotar 26 grados y ubicar en las coordenadas X:332 Y:116
- 00:22:529 (1,2,3,4) - ubicar en la coordenada X: 256 Y: 276...Quedaría algo como esto:
SPOILER

Gigante!
¿No deberías poner la apertura del signo de Admiración? :justcurious:
Wowowow...es gigantona la difficulty...lol
- 00:14:157 (2) - Alinear con el final del slider 1 hacia la izquierda (coordenadas X:48 Y:92)
- 00:14:356 (3) - Alinear con el Circle anterior (Coordenada X:48 Y:112)
- 00:14:954 (4) - Copia el slider 3 pero con su debido retorno (conservar el mismo modelado), rótalo 180º clockwise y un Reverse Selection, luego pósalo con las siguientes coordenadas X:228 Y:88
- 00:15:951 (5) - Ponlo en X: 220 Y:44
- 00:36:170 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,1) - Parece que a Megas se le descargó el combustible...LOL...muy pobre esa parte del map :S

...Si no les gustó el moddeo, apenas estoy empezando a retomarlo e intentando apegarme a nuevos estándares (? xD (más de un año sin pasarle mod a un mapa ._.)

¿El proceso de estrellado ahora son con KudoStars? vaya que ahora es un poco más complicado estrellar maps...pero aún así te mereces una Star de mi parte ;)

P.S.: peppy...Y U NO fix the spoilerbugs?
Last edited by Jesss , edited 1 time in total.
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

Jesss wrote:

Vaya forma en la que se cambió el sistema para moddear...estoy aún en la Old School! D:
La Old School siempre va a ser mejor que la New School.
Shizuroh
1,771 posts
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Shizuroh

iMercurial wrote:

Jesss wrote:

Vaya forma en la que se cambió el sistema para moddear...estoy aún en la Old School! D:
La Old School siempre va a ser mejor que la New School.
that moment when you gave kudosu to jess but to the other two no kudosu....
Darksonic
2,805 posts
Joined November 2010
Darksonic
No es que en mi diff los "items" estén mal organizados, si no que están puestos así a propósito, pero bueh, después veo el modeo, ahora me voy a dormir :P
jossieP
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Joined May 2010
jossieP

SkyDevil wrote:

that moment when you gave kudosu to jess but to the other two no kudosu....
ask yourself why
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
If a mod doesn't help me in anyway, then I don't need to give a kudosu.

Read the rules the next time.
mancuso_JM_
osu! Alumni
4,615 posts
Joined October 2010
mancuso_JM_
Por que tanto nazi en mi dificultad?? me deprime :(... No hay cambios en mi diff. (No Changes on my diff.)
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Es que son todos putos (?
Shizuroh
1,771 posts
Joined October 2010
Shizuroh

iMercurial wrote:

If a mod doesn't help me in anyway, then I don't need to give a kudosu.

Read the rules the next time.
at least tell me what was wrong, or else it will look like you didn;t see it or ignore it ._. (that's why i was wondering why i got no kd)
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ iMercurial ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Gigante!]


  1. 00:16:948 - Add finish sound much better.
  2. 00:23:326 - ^

[Dificil]


  1. 00:23:326 - Same as Gigante.

That's all ~nice short mapset ~

Good luck with rank ~
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial
Only followed the finish on 00:16:948.

Thank you Rika.
Darksonic
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Darksonic
LO' PIBEH PIDEN LA BUBBLE (?
Leorda
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Joined June 2009
Leorda
iMercurial desu!!

[Facil desu!]
00:16:948 (2) - Add clap at tail slider? Like 00:13:758 (1)?
00:18:542 (3) - ^
00:23:326 (1) - Remove clap at tail slider
00:24:522 (2) - Add clap


[Normal desu!!]
00:17:346 (3) - Add clap?
00:17:546 (4) - Add clap at tail slider?
00:40:970 (3) - ^


[Dificil desu!!!]
* AR +1?


[Gigante desu!!!!]
00:10:370 (4) - Add clap?
00:20:137 (1) - I think unstack better, because sometimes players are missed that head slider....


desu!
Mercurial
Topic Starter
Mercurial

Leorda wrote:

[Dificil desu!!!]
* AR +1? Nope.avi, I like the AR6 Hards :3


[Gigante desu!!!!]
00:10:370 (4) - Add clap? Sure
00:20:137 (1) - I think unstack better, because sometimes players are missed that head slider.... Nope.avi, this is still readable.


desu!
mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_

Leorda wrote:

iMercurial desu!!
[Facil desu!]
00:16:948 (2) - Add clap at tail slider? Like 00:13:758 (1)? Ok
00:18:542 (3) - ^ Not really, I can't sound anything in the music. This sounds bad when I add it.
00:23:326 (1) - Remove clap at tail slider No, fit fine with the music, and with my hitsounds pattern, I prefer to keep that
00:24:522 (2) - Add clap Sounds loud to have a clap in this position
Thanks for mod, Leorda.
Meh... puedes agregar ese Clap de 00:16:948 (al final del Slider) por mi Mercu?
Darksonic
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Joined November 2010
Darksonic
All fixed, thanks.
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Re-Mod!~

Insane:
00:18:941 - Don't use normal hitsounds for this section~. You can keep it for the stream, I guess, but the claps just sound awkward.

Hard:
AR +1?
00:17:546 (4) - Space this out a bit more so it doesn't overlap with the end of (3) (might have to turn off distance spacing)

Normal:
Fine

Easy:
00:18:542 (3) - Add whistle on end of slider?

Kawaii :>~. Sorry if this is small, the map is just pretty goods :>
Mercurial
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Mercurial
Thank you for your quick reponse CDFA Moe
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