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DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[D.N.Angel]

*Tick rate 2 so that people can easily spot the slow downs.

• 00:24:697 (8) - This slider does not fit the music very well. I would re-arrange the pattern like so.
• 00:30:843 (2) - New combo on this note to illustrate the speed change.

nice catch,all fixed

[Overall]

This map seems pretty solid and well put together. I think there should be a hard difficulty between Normal and D.N.Angel, it's a pretty big difficulty jump. But, you already have too many difficulties here. This map could use more mods before it moves on though.

"Sekai" diff is "Hard" ! >< I think the map have good diff spread :o

Have a star.
Thanks MOD ~ :)

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [D.N.Angel].osu
Suimya
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Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Kiddo and D.N.Angel :3 updated now~
Saten
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Saten
Thanks Kiddo

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [Saten].osu
Fiya
151 posts
Joined November 2011
Fiya
snapped and fixed an inherited section that wasn't working properly

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [Fiya's Taiko Oni].osu
Suimya
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Topic Starter
Suimya
Thanks Fiya and Saten updated now :3
Yasora
2,702 posts
Joined May 2010
Yasora
yow

Easy
  1. 00:01:884 (3) - I guess, the whistle in the end should be removed into (4). like (1) and (2) before.
  2. 00:04:801 (3) - add whistle in here. for following the piano sound and consistent hitsounding
  3. 00:25:218 (3) - the clap sound in slider's end doesn't fit with the backsound. because, the clap should be in 00:25:634. move this clap into (4)'s beginning
  4. 00:28:551 (4) - same as above
  5. 00:37:301 (1) - hm, this slider is a bit untidy for me, I guess you should look at to this picture.
    224,88,37301,6,0,B|188:108|188:108|152:88|113:110|113:110|72:88,1,160,2|2
Normal
  1. 00:36:468 (5) - I guess, should be new combo in here.
  2. 00:56:051 (1) - remove this new combo, the new combo in here is unecessary since still in the same vocal imo
Hard
  1. 00:05:218 (5) - add new combo for new rhythm
  2. 00:12:092 (2) - add clap in the slider's end lol. seems not consistent if you aren't do this.
  3. 00:12:717 (4) - from the mod above, you should remove the clap from beginning into the end.
D.N.Angel
  1. 00:18:134 (1) - add clap?
Saten
  1. Nothing to say again =w=
That's all
Good luck :3
DarknessAngel
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Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Yasora-chan wrote:

D.N.Angel
  1. 00:18:134 (1) - add clap?
ok
Thanks MOD ~ :)

To sekai :

please help me add it,thanks (because just a thing ><)
lovhin456
1,965 posts
Joined December 2008
lovhin456
Hello

[General]
- Fine

[Easy]
- 00:41:884 (3,4) ~ Tiny spacing issue
- 01:19:801 ~ New combo then remove new combo on the next slider
- 01:26:051 ~ I think that without the clap it's better

[Normal]
- 01:25:426 ~ Move (5) here ?

[Hard]
- 00:00:426 ~ Add a note
- 00:02:093 ~ Move (4) here that way it follows the music more
- 00:04:384 ~ Change it to a 1/2 slider and move to 00:04:593
- 01:15:218 ~ Add 2 more repeats
- 01:16:256 (3,4) ~ A little jump between these 2 would be nice to emphisize this part

[D.N.Angel]
- 00:26:676 ~ Remove whistle, I think that it's better if you start using whistles not here
- 00:28:968 ~ Add whistle on start and remove on finish

[Saten]
- 00:33:134 ~ Maybe use 1/8 here too like you did on 00:30:009 ?

Good overall
DarknessAngel
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Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

lovhin456 wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
- 00:26:676 ~ Remove whistle, I think that it's better if you start using whistles not here fixed
- 00:28:968 ~ Add whistle on start and remove on finish no fixed,I think it is ok


Good overall
thanks MOD ~ :)

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [D.N.Angel].osu
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
IRC mod with Sekai :3

1st
21:50 <-Sekai-> : can you mod my hikari map
21:50 <-Sekai-> : :o
21:50 <Miya> : why? it's bubbled right? :o
21:51 <-Sekai-> : ._.
21:51 <-Sekai-> : kiddo said it's needs more mods
21:51 <Miya> : orz
21:51 <Miya> : he pop it?
21:51 <-Sekai-> : it's never been bubbled xD
21:51 <Miya> : o.o
21:51 <Miya> : lol, i must be wrong
21:51 <-Sekai-> : http://osu.ppy.sh/s/46520
21:51 <-Sekai-> : this
21:51 <Miya> : o.o
21:52 <Miya> : hey, i thought it's bubbled
21:52 <-Sekai-> : lol
21:52 <-Sekai-> : ;_; i wish
21:53 <Miya> : hmm, okay, i will mod it :3
21:53 <-Sekai-> : :3
21:53 <-Sekai-> : thanks
21:53 <Miya> : btw
21:53 <Miya> : you deleted the sekai diff?
21:53 <-Sekai-> : no
21:53 <-Sekai-> : renamed it to hard
21:53 <-Sekai-> : ._.
21:53 <Miya> : :o
21:53 <Miya> : that's why
21:55 <-Sekai-> : he thought Sekai is insane
21:55 <-Sekai-> : and D.N.A's is hard
21:55 <Miya> : >.<
21:55 <-Sekai-> : lol
21:55 <Miya> : yes, it can be confusing
22:00 <Miya> : sekai
22:00 <Miya> : irc?
22:00 <Miya> : i want an irc mod now, since it's more comfortable
22:00 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:00 <-Sekai-> : sure
22:01 <Miya> : ok, call me when you ready :3
22:01 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:01 *-Sekai- is editing (Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size))[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/46520]
22:01 <Miya> : sure let's start
22:01 <Miya> : first
22:02 <Miya> : i think the volume here is too low
22:02 <Miya> : 00:06:884
22:02 <Miya> : 00:06:884-
22:02 <Miya> : you lowering too much >.<
22:02 <Miya> : if you want the volume to be lowered dont lower by 20%
22:02 <-Sekai-> : in easy?
22:02 <Miya> : lower by 10% or 5%
22:02 <Miya> : yup
22:03 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:03 <Miya> : i prefer to set the volume to 65% rather than 50%
22:03 <Miya> : good :3
22:03 <-Sekai-> : maked it 60%
22:04 <Miya> : 00:13:551 (1) - i think it can be more blanket, so move the slider end one grid up?
22:05 <-Sekai-> : end point?
22:05 <Miya> : yes
22:05 <-Sekai-> : sure fixed
22:05 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:05 <Miya> : 00:16:884 (3) - miss a finish?
22:05 <-Sekai-> : lol oh yes
22:06 <Miya> : >.<
22:06 <Miya> : hmm, make this slider shape more M shape?
22:06 <Miya> : 00:17:301 (4) -
22:07 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:07 <-Sekai-> : how
22:08 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:08 <-Sekai-> : idk if i can fix this
22:09 <Miya> : maybe like this > http://puu.sh/uiTj
22:09 <Miya> : ?
22:09 <-Sekai-> : yeah :D
22:09 <-Sekai-> : code
22:09 <Miya> : i don't know how to give you a code
22:09 <Miya> : ;_;
22:10 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:10 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
22:10 <-Sekai-> : 17301 <--- search this in notepad
22:10 <Miya> : hoo i see :D
22:10 <-Sekai-> : :o
22:11 <Miya> : 100,248,17301,2,0,B|100:212|144:184|180:184|180:184|204:148|308:148|332:184|
22:11 <Miya> : rawwr it can't be copy pasted
22:12 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:12 <Miya> : here i pm forum you
22:12 <Miya> : done please check your inbox message :3
22:13 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:13 <Miya> : oh yes, don't forget to reallign the note next to it
22:13 <Miya> : like 00:19:801 (1,2,3) -
22:15 <Miya> : call me when you're done :3
22:17 <-Sekai-> : orz
22:17 <Miya> : done/
22:17 <Miya> : ?
22:17 <-Sekai-> : i dont know why it's not workign
22:17 <-Sekai-> : working
22:17 <-Sekai-> : *
22:17 <Miya> : still same?
22:18 <-Sekai-> : no it's says there is an error
22:18 <Miya> : :o
22:18 <-Sekai-> : it's seems you dont copy the whole line
22:18 <Miya> : just add it on the bottom if the line
22:18 <Miya> : :o
22:18 <Miya> : let me see
22:19 <Miya> : try the new one
22:19 <Miya> : check your inbox
22:19 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:20 <-Sekai-> : yeah it's works now
22:21 <Miya> : :3
22:22 <-Sekai-> : ok is there something else wrong with easy?
22:22 <Miya> : yes
22:22 <Miya> : let's continue
22:24 <Miya> : 00:50:634 (1,2) - i can be more blanketed
22:24 <Miya> : so move 00:51:884 (2) - 2 grid up
22:24 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:24 <-Sekai-> : done
22:25 <Miya> : 01:11:884 (1,4) - miss a finish again? >.<
22:25 <Miya> : 01:11:884 (1) - at it's start
22:25 <-Sekai-> : 4?
22:25 <Miya> : yes
22:25 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:25 <Miya> : add on it too
22:26 <Miya> : hmm, let me retest it again
22:26 <-Sekai-> : :o
22:28 <Miya> : 00:43:551 (5,1) - make more blanket please >.<
22:29 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:29 <Miya> : 00:56:051 (3) - this one too, it's touch 4, doesn't good to see, better to move the center point 1 grid away from 4
22:30 <Miya> : ok, maybe that's all for easy :3
22:30 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:30 <-Sekai-> : sure
22:30 <Miya> : move to normal?
22:31 <-Sekai-> : sure :3
22:31 <Miya> : ok :3
22:33 <Miya> : umm same problem as easy
22:33 <Miya> : 00:06:884-
22:33 <-Sekai-> : oh
22:33 <-Sekai-> : ok :o
22:33 <Miya> : 00:18:551 (4) - this one too
22:34 <-Sekai-> : ?
22:34 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:34 <Miya> : you miss a finish there >.<
22:34 <Miya> : at it's end
22:34 <Miya> : ups start
22:34 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:35 <-Sekai-> : added it
22:35 <Miya> : 00:30:634 (1) - move 1 grid right, doesn't centered properly, not good to see ;_;
22:35 <-Sekai-> : oh
22:36 <-Sekai-> : i thought it's already in the center
22:36 <-Sekai-> : xD
22:36 <Miya> : >.<
22:36 <Miya> : 00:30:634 (1) - you must be miss a whistle at it's end
22:37 <-Sekai-> : there is already a whistle at the end
22:37 <-Sekai-> : :o
22:37 <Miya> : really? not in here :o
22:37 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:37 <Miya> : ok, then move on
22:37 <-Sekai-> : really?
22:37 <Miya> : yes really >.<
22:37 <Miya> : ok, next
22:38 <Miya> : 00:59:384 (3) - why not copy & paste 00:58:134 (1) - and then ctrl+h?
22:38 <Miya> : 00:58:134 (1) -
22:38 <Miya> : it's more good imo
22:38 <Miya> : ctrl+h then ctrl +r
22:39 <Miya> : it will become like this then > http://puu.sh/ujaF
22:40 <-Sekai-> : hmm~ ok :3
22:40 <-Sekai-> : done
22:40 <Miya> : 01:00:634 (1) - this spinner could be extended, thus making player easier to pass it
22:40 <Miya> : but you must delete 01:00:217 (4) - to do so
22:40 <-Sekai-> : hmm~
22:41 <-Sekai-> : nah i
22:41 <-Sekai-> : i'll keep it =3=
22:41 <Miya> : in other word, i think that spinner is too short >.<
22:41 <-Sekai-> : no it's not D:
22:41 <-Sekai-> : it's normal
22:41 <Miya> : hmm, ok then
22:41 <Miya> : wmf told me that 3/4 spinner is still short on 140 bpm
22:42 <Miya> : so that's why i said that >.<
22:42 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:42 <Miya> : well, it's okay if you dont want to do it
22:42 <Miya> : next
22:42 <Miya> : 01:12:301 (5) - disrupts my vision, please move 1 grid up sekai >.<
22:43 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:43 <-Sekai-> : :3
22:43 <Miya> : 01:16:467 (2) - how about adding a clap on it, thus making the clap rythim start here?
22:44 <-Sekai-> : sure =3=
22:44 <Miya> : ok, let me recheck it again :3
22:47 <-Sekai-> : now hard? o.o
22:47 <-Sekai-> : btw brb :o
22:47 <Miya> : nope
22:47 <Miya> : 00:57:717 (3,1) - switch comboes?
22:47 <Miya> : i think the new combo should start on 3
22:47 <Miya> : not 1
22:48 <Miya> : ups
22:48 <Miya> : lol
22:48 <Miya> : i mean start here
22:48 <Miya> : 00:58:967 (2) -
22:48 <Miya> : not 00:58:134 (1) -
22:48 <-Sekai-> : =3=
22:49 <-Sekai-> : sure
22:49 <Miya> : 01:13:134 (1) - i don't think you need a new combo
22:50 <Miya> : it's still on the same stanza
22:50 <-Sekai-> : o.o
22:50 <-Sekai-> : but where to add the nc then
22:50 <Miya> : nope
22:50 <Miya> : just remove the nc there
22:51 <-Sekai-> : but
22:52 <-Sekai-> : it's gonna be till 11 D:
22:52 <Miya> : ??
22:52 <-Sekai-> : if i removed the NC
22:52 <-Sekai-> : ._.
22:52 <Miya> : remove nc here sekai 01:13:134 (1) -
22:52 <Miya> : orz
22:52 <Miya> : >.<
22:52 <-Sekai-> : 01:12:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
22:52 <-Sekai-> : it's gonna be like this
22:53 <Miya> : ??
22:53 <-Sekai-> : 11 combos D:
22:53 <Miya> : what is your diff?
22:53 <Miya> : im still on normal
22:53 <Miya> : orz
22:53 <-Sekai-> : no
22:53 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:53 <-Sekai-> : ....
22:53 <-Sekai-> : ..
22:53 <Miya> : >.<
22:53 <-Sekai-> : orz
22:54 <Miya> : >.<
22:54 <Miya> : please revert back about new comboes on hard, and goes to normal and do the same thing
22:55 <-Sekai-> : lol done
22:55 <-Sekai-> : xD
22:55 <Miya> : ok, that's means mod on normal is finished
22:55 <Miya> : :3
22:55 <Miya> : now, move to hard >.<
22:55 <Miya> : don't move to other diff until i say so lol
22:57 <-Sekai-> : lol
22:57 <-Sekai-> : ok
22:57 <Miya> : orz
22:57 <Miya> : i almost got ss
22:57 <Miya> : >.<
22:58 <Miya> : well, very solid for the rythim , good :3
22:59 <Miya> : oh yes the only thing i make got 100 is here
22:59 <Miya> : 01:16:051 (2) -
22:59 <Miya> : i thought it's 1/2
22:59 <Miya> : look at the spacing, orz >.<
22:59 <Miya> : you should move it further away
23:23 <Miya> : sekai is dc'ed, continue on the next irc chat
2nd
15:15 <Miya> : Sekai >.<
15:16 <Miya> : you dissapear last night
15:16 <-Sekai-> : o.o
15:16 <-Sekai-> : lol
15:16 <-Sekai-> : my net crashed
15:16 <-Sekai-> : xD
15:16 <Miya> : let's continue >.<
15:16 <-Sekai-> : o.o
15:16 <-Sekai-> : o.o
15:16 <Miya> : yes, continue on the hard diff
15:17 <-Sekai-> : lovhin456 modded it
15:17 <-Sekai-> : lol wait
15:17 <Miya> : :o
15:18 <-Sekai-> : btw
15:18 <-Sekai-> : - 00:02:093 ~ Move (4) here that way it follows the music more
15:18 <-Sekai-> : D:
15:18 <-Sekai-> : i dont understand this
15:18 <Miya> : wait
15:19 <Miya> : hoo, it means
15:19 <Miya> : 00:02:301 (4) - move to 00:02:093-
15:19 <-Sekai-> : slider end?
15:19 <-Sekai-> : or all of the slider
15:19 <Miya> : nope, the circle
15:20 <Miya> : 00:02:301 (4) - this circle
15:20 <-Sekai-> : ohh
15:20 <-Sekai-> : yeah
15:21 <Miya> : it's more good yes
15:21 <Miya> : but i think it will need a whistle here 00:02:718 (6) -
15:23 <Miya> : 00:04:176 (2,3) - and i think you should switch whistle here too
15:23 <Miya> : from slider 3 start to circle 2
15:24 <Miya> : 00:11:884 (1) - aww miss a finish again >.<
15:24 <Miya> : 00:11:884 (1) - this too >.<
15:24 <Miya> : at it's end
15:25 <Miya> : 00:18:551 (1) - this one too, at it's start
15:25 <-Sekai-> : :o
15:25 <-Sekai-> : ok added
15:26 <Miya> : 00:43:967 (1) - miss a whislte at it's start? it feels empty >.<
15:27 <Miya> : 00:51:052 (3) - an awkward whistle sound, it's not consistant with your whistle rythim imo :(
15:27 <Miya> : instead add whistle here 00:50:634 (2) - at it's start
15:27 <Miya> : and here 00:51:468 (5) -
15:28 <Miya> : sekai
15:28 <Miya> : 01:16:051 (2) - spacing :|
15:29 <Miya> : makes the flow break because the spacing
15:32 <Miya> : sekai is dced again, but my mod is finished >.<

D.N.Angel
  1. 00:07:509 (4) - Could you make it stack properly with 00:06:051 (1) - . Partly overlapped is always not good to see.
  2. 00:53:134 (4) - This one too, i think you can stack it with 00:51:884 (1) - because it's partly overlaped by slider 1. Also i think you need a whistle at this sldier start because i fell there's a gap between your whistle rythim and it's feel empty.
  3. 01:26:468 (3) - Add clap here to close your clap rythim?
Saten
  1. 00:16:051 (1) - This 1/8 kick slider will be surprising much people. If they encounter it in the first time, many people will think this as a 1/4 kick slider. Then they play it, and they surprised because it's 1/8 slider, then people will mess and got a lot of 100 in the next stream 00:16:572 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - because you suddenly change the ryhtim into 1/4. My suggestion is to make the next stream into slider. So people won't have a problem with the rythmic change so suddenly. Or just delete this sldier, and change into 1/4 kick slider.
  2. 00:33:551 (1) - Please change this whistle at the start into finish. Not consistant with finish sound at 00:46:676 (6) - end.
  3. 01:02:718- Because the drum sound start here, it will be good if you add a normal hitsound timing point with 60% volume here so it will be cover up the drum sound. If the whistle at the stream become awkward, then it's a good idea to delete the whistle.
  4. 01:23:551 (1) - At least makes this finish sound into normal one. It's not consistant with your finish sound at the kiai.
Very nice map :D
Good luck Sekai :3
DarknessAngel
2,237 posts
Joined May 2010
DarknessAngel

Miya wrote:

D.N.Angel
  1. 00:07:509 (4) - Could you make it stack properly with 00:06:051 (1) - . Partly overlapped is always not good to see. //uh... It had been stacked completely
  2. 00:53:134 (4) - This one too, i think you can stack it with 00:51:884 (1) - because it's partly overlaped by slider 1. Also i think you need a whistle at this sldier start because i fell there's a gap between your whistle rythim and it's feel empty.
    //it is fine because the thing you want me to stack is the slider's head
    //added whistle
  3. 01:26:468 (3) - Add clap here to close your clap rythim? //no
Thanks MOD ~ :)

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [D.N.Angel].osu
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Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
ok fixed everything and updated :3
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten

lovhin456 wrote:

[Saten]
- 00:33:134 ~ Maybe use 1/8 here too like you did on 00:30:009 ? will give it a try

Miya wrote:

Saten
  1. 00:16:051 (1) - This 1/8 kick slider will be surprising much people. If they encounter it in the first time, many people will think this as a 1/4 kick slider. Then they play it, and they surprised because it's 1/8 slider, then people will mess and got a lot of 100 in the next stream 00:16:572 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - because you suddenly change the ryhtim into 1/4. My suggestion is to make the next stream into slider. So people won't have a problem with the rythmic change so suddenly. Or just delete this sldier, and change into 1/4 kick slider. I had complaints about using 1/8 & 1/4 kick-sliders right after each-other, so I'm sticking with this for now.
  2. 00:33:551 (1) - Please change this whistle at the start into finish. Not consistant with finish sound at 00:46:676 (6) - end. I can't hear any finish sound in the music here
  3. 01:02:718- Because the drum sound start here, it will be good if you add a normal hitsound timing point with 60% volume here so it will be cover up the drum sound. If the whistle at the stream become awkward, then it's a good idea to delete the whistle. done
  4. 01:23:551 (1) - At least makes this finish sound into normal one. It's not consistant with your finish sound at the kiai. done
Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [Saten].osu
Suimya
6,374 posts
Joined February 2011
Topic Starter
Suimya
ok updated :3
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
For all maps, make the hitsounds audible when the note is clicked. Doesn't need to be too loud but it provides helpful feedback to the players and its rather disorienting without them.

Also 00:06:884 - kiai?

[Easy]
Map is very correct and vaguely interesting, some hitsounds would be nice to make it more interesting

[Normal]
*-* boooooooobs

[Hard]
00:47:926 (2) - reverse selection
01:16:259 (3,4) - doesn't feel like it follows the music

[Taiko Oni]
First time modding a taiko map, so bear with me :P
00:00:218 (1,2) - too early in the mp3, the players have no context to hit these
00:14:488 (4) - clap feels awkward here, maybe put it on 3 instead
00:21:988 (29) - this seems like a weird place for a clap
00:29:176 (32,33) - maybe repeat this pair of claps on 00:29:593 (36,37)?
00:55:634 (42) - clap feels out of place
01:07:822 (25) - ^, maybe put claps on 24 and 26 instead?
01:09:488 (35) - ^

[D.N.Angel]
00:01:051 (6) - not so soon on the jumps please, build up expectations for them first
00:47:926 (3) - the placement of this bothers me and I can't figure out why
00:50:842 (2) - why not just move 2 farther away from 1 to make the next spacing more obvious?
01:21:259 (5) - you are EVIL. EVIL i say.

[Saten]
First of if you are trying to reference Satan the enemy of God and all that, you spelled it wrong
00:05:218 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - if you could use inheriting timing sections to make the notes gradually louder on this stream that would be EPIC
00:16:676 (1,2,3,4,1) - not entirely sure the purpose of this deathstream
00:33:551 (1) - try a finish instead of a whistle on the start
01:26:468 (5) - partially hidden by combobursts. Why not just continue the curvy pattern you had going? It was pretty :<

Overall, as I said, the higher difficulties are well-done but the lower ones tend to feel uninteresting despite their cleanliness and coherence.
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:01:051 (6) - not so soon on the jumps please, build up expectations for them first //hmm...I feel the jump should be here,I want to keep this pattern
00:47:926 (3) - the placement of this bothers me and I can't figure out why //no change because I like this part lol
00:50:842 (2) - why not just move 2 farther away from 1 to make the next spacing more obvious? //It is to be consistent
01:21:259 (5) - you are EVIL. EVIL i say. //T.T,I like this kind of overlap
thank for modding ~ :)
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ -Sekai- chan ~ :)

Let me Re mod this map ~ I like this song soo much :3



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Saten]


  1. 00:17:717 (3,4) - Try like this Rhythm(00:18:134 - Add clap),
    sound much better with me.
  2. 00:23:968 (9) - Add new combo and Remove 00:24:384 (1).
  3. 00:33:551 - Remove whistle and Add finish,sound much better.
  4. 01:01:780 (8) - Remove circle.
  5. 01:01:884 (9) - Add new combo.
  6. 01:26:051 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make more better curve,try like this.

    212,200,86051,5,2
    228,212,86155,1,0
    248,216,86259,1,2
    268,212,86363,1,0
    284,200,86468,2,0,B|284:100,1,100,2|4

[D.N Angel]


  1. 00:33:551 - Remove clap,sound bette to me.
  2. 00:36:884 - ^
  3. 00:46:884 - ^
  4. 00:50:218 - ^
  5. 01:14:592 (7) - Add new combo.

[Hard]


  1. 00:37:926 (2) - Stack on 00:36:259 (2,3).

[Normal]


  1. OD+1 much better with normal.

[Easy]


  1. AR+1 much better with play.
  2. 00:16:884 (3) - Move to X:176 Y:272 looks better.
  3. 00:25:218 - Remove clap.
  4. 00:28:551 - ^
  5. 00:26:468 - Add clap.
  6. 00:29:801 - ^

That's all ~ Cool mapset and Nice song !!!

Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~ ;)
Saten
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Saten
Changes from Saturos & Rika

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

First of if you are trying to reference Satan the enemy of God and all that, you spelled it wrong
lol..

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [Saten].osu
Suimya
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Suimya
fixed everything in Rika's mod and updated Saten's Diff, just waiting for DNA's Fixes :3
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel

Kawayi Rika wrote:

[D.N Angel]


  1. 00:33:551 - Remove clap,sound bette to me.
  2. 00:36:884 - ^
  3. 00:46:884 - ^
  4. 00:50:218 - ^
  5. 01:14:592 (7) - Add new combo.
all fixed
thank for modding ~ :)
NC那個主意真好啊lol

Download: Horie Yui - Hikari (TV Size) (-Sekai-) [D.N.Angel].osu
Suimya
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ok updated :3
Kawayi Rika
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Kawayi Rika
OK ~ Good job ~

Good luck with rank ~

Andrea
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[Easy]

AR -1 would be much better.

[Normal]

HP Drain +1 would be much better.

Just these 2 small fixes and I can rank ^^

EDIT: Ranked~
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Gratz~ Sekai~ ><
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Nice ><
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