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dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy [Osu|Taiko]

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popner
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爬來
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
._.
DeeN
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DeeN
MARK
popner
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popner
20% 4.5星
感觉控制星数略难，要不你先看看？

Download: dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy (Megurine Luka) [Medium].osu
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka

DeeN wrote:

MARK
卖萌
Megurine Luka
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popner wrote:

20% 4.5星
感觉控制星数略难，要不你先看看？
先做下去吧。distance spacing有点大建议改小
yeahyeahyeahhh
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yeahyeahyeahhh
wow hollywood galaxy

Megurine Luka fan yeah!!!
Megurine Luka
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yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

wow hollywood galaxy

Megurine Luka fan yeah!!!
<3 Luka is yyy's big big fan
cmn_891127
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cmn_891127
我来晚了，还能一环么……
Megurine Luka
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:<我一直都没搞清楚几页一帖..有时候莫名其妙就二环了
Shigure Sakuya
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大哥up♂
popner
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popner
音效NC搞定

Download: dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy (Megurine Luka) [Medium].osu
wmfchris
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wmfchris
不是說這圖不rank 所以sp3犯2了麼
沒救了~
Megurine Luka
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Megurine Luka
他早就美酒了~❤
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue


Medium

  1. 00:08:214 (4) - (140,156)
  2. 00:45:311 (1) - 没必要而且不美观而且三个圈在一个地方还不同颜色实在不舒服
  3. 其实连续slider对新人不简单。。又不都是强双打的 不过算了
  4. 01:45:311 (1,2) - 没clap?
  5. 01:46:601 (1) - 1/2 early, end at the same time?
Extreme

  1. 00:09:504 (5,6) - 好像不对称...
  2. 00:10:956 (6) - ^ this one move to (260,260)
  3. 00:17:085 (8,9) - ctrl+r ? 这里叠着不好打 还不如来回跳符合音乐节奏
  4. 00:34:827 (6,7) - 压抑感太重 不如5放下面这个左移
  5. 00:45:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - 居然不是1/8不幸福
  6. 00:54:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里用那种slider梗? 听节奏的话1/4也有
  7. 00:59:827 (9,10) - ctrl+r?
  8. 01:45:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot500.jpg 这里的节奏 别看我排列没认真摆
  9. 01:47:327 (1,2,3,4) - 好梗233
大哥加油>_> star
Megurine Luka
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我的难度其他都改了除了这三个：

00:54:988 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这里用那种slider梗? 听节奏的话1/4也有 呜其实这里确实是这样的诶/A\
00:59:827 (9,10) - ctrl+r? 感觉现在这样顺一点就不改了
01:45:311 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot500.jpg 这里的节奏 别看我排列没认真摆 图挂了T_T
ignorethis
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ignorethis
tag里面加上drum'n'bass

<BASIC>
00:22:085 (2) - nazi下。。间距不太好
00:51:117 (3) - nc
00:52:407 (1) - 取消nc
00:56:924 (3) - nc
01:28:859 (2) - 这个挪到01:29:020
01:32:730 (2) - 类似上面
01:37:569 (2) - 。。略猎奇？
01:40:149 (1) - ^
01:47:407 (3) - nc

<MEDIUM>
00:22:730 (1,2,3,4) - finish太多了，建议取消一些

<EXTREME>
00:03:375 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这slider的排列方式和后面的明显不一样
00:21:440 (1,2,5) - 2和5对不太准？
00:50:472 (7,8) - 这两处不建议用这种往返slider
01:11:762 (4) - ._. 这slider有点扭曲
01:13:053 (5) - ^

好 没别的了 \:D/
Scorpiour
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Scorpiour
Hi there~~mod for request~

[General]
  1. 96kbps的MP3是unrankable的……能不能找个音质高一点的？
  2. Audio lead-in没必要，拿掉吧……
[Basic]
  1. 00:24:020 - 这个break我觉得删掉感觉更好～
  2. 呃。。似乎没啥可说的…………唔，可以的话尽量把没必要的遮挡去掉吧比如00:55:633 (2) - 01:16:924 (1) -
  3. 01:11:762 (1) - 另外Nazi一下……这个形状好像没blank好……
  4. 01:45:311 (1) - 还有这个形状也是不好看……
[Medium]
  1. 建议AR+1呢～～后面有些地方AR低了反而不是很舒服……
  2. 00:07:246 (1,2,3,4,1) - 要是我的话这里就摆五角星了（几何图形控！）
  3. 00:24:020 - 依然是建议去掉break...
[Extreme]
  1. 00:07:891 (1,2,3,4) - 这组梗的顺序感觉(1,3)互换位置，然后(2,4)互换位置，最后再(3,4)互换会流畅一些？
  2. 01:09:665 - 考虑加个note？
  3. 01:37:891 (2,3,4) - 这里的前面蓝线上似乎有节奏？而且后面白线三连打的也不是很舒服……试试这个节奏？
就这些了～～给星闪人～～加油的说～～
Megurine Luka
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Fixed most.

Updated

至于音质...SB音质应该没有关系吧
Hinsvar
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\:D/

*Note: Bolded gold ones are things you must do (or strongly recommended; usually about unrankable stuff or extreme/fatal errors). Everything in red are things that look awkward/wrong to me or something that can be improved (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler and a bit better.

>General
  1. Everything's fine around the block, I suppose?
>Basic
  1. 00:49:827 (2) - Missing Claps?
  2. 00:55:633 (2) - Clap at the beginning of the slider?
  3. 01:32:407 (4) - NC and then remove NC for 01:34:988 (1)?
>Medium
  1. 00:07:569 (2,4) - This slight overlap looks weird.
  2. 00:11:762 (2,2) - ^
>Extreme
  1. 00:07:246 (6) - NC?
  2. 01:25:311 (3) - I think using a 1/4 slider should do better than a 1/8 one.
  3. 01:34:988 (9) - NC?
  4. 01:40:794 (5) - ^
  5. 01:41:440 (9) - ^
This mapset is... awesome.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Megurine Luka
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Fixed almost all in my diffs :O

Thanks!!!
eikkaleyd
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eikkaleyd
from my queue ovo

[Extreme]
00:07:730 (4) - 可能是我错觉吗，应该往下一格到352 148
00:44:504 (5,6) - 这两个放到452 124左右，可以和00:43:698 (7,2) - 这两个对称
00:55:956 (7) - 似乎应该再往外一些，因为这8个note间距是逐渐变大的o.o
01:33:053 (5,6,7,8) - 这样如何 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/326623

[Medium]
有四个难度的话推荐还是大圈，不过大圈貌似会增加遮盖？
00:08:214 (4) - 不推荐和2有重叠部分

[Basic]
这个难度的clap怎么别的难度里好像没有o.o【这应该是不用改的
01:28:536 (1) -
01:32:407 (1) - 这两个为什么不加clap呢

没了，差不多已经够好了 :D
Reiji-RJ
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Reiji-RJ
Hello~

Basic

  1. 00:07:246 (4) - maybe whistle to the repeat? :O
  2. 00:12:407 (3) - and here to the end
  3. 00:13:698 (1) - finish please as there is one in music *^*
  4. 00:17:569 (3) - whistle on the end will be good
  5. 00:20:149 (1) - remove new combo, it's unecessary
  6. 00:22:730 (1) - ^
  7. 00:22:730 (1) - whistle to the beginning and end
  8. 01:16:924 (1) - finish
  9. 01:34:988 (3,4,5) - this is quite hard to play (as it has red tick), try this, please:
    SPOILER
    As you made here 01:29:827 (2,3) -
  10. 01:45:311 (1,2) - this is hard too (red tick again), so:
    SPOILER
    I mean, slider with red ticks plays better than circle (in easy diffs)
Medium

  • Your Medium is quite hard D: Is it Normal diff or what? I would better AR+1 here...
  1. 00:08:214 (4) - move it up to make a square with 00:07:569 (2,3,4) -
  2. 00:22:730 (1,2,3,4) - I don't like that about a half of this square is under 00:21:924 (2) - slider. So, move it, for example like that:
    SPOILER
  3. 00:45:956 - oh, hard part (but I like it)
  4. 01:06:601 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - I would better to make the ends of this slider in soft. So that the notes (in music) 01:07:891 - 01:09:182 - and so on will be in normal C:
  5. 01:46:440 (1) - I do not recommend you to use 1/4 slider streams in Normal and Easy diffs.
Extreme

  1. 00:03:859 (4,5) - spacing? Oh, but it's readable, I guess
  2. 00:09:182 (3,4,5,6) - make good square?
  3. 00:11:762 (1,2,3,4) - random jump D: maybe rearrange it? It doesn't make sense
  4. 00:25:311 (1) - finish!
  5. 00:45:956 (5) - new combo here
  6. 00:47:730 (6) - and here
  7. 00:49:020 (6) - ^
  8. 00:52:246 (14) - ^ long combo D:
  9. 01:06:117 (6) - move it down and right to make 01:05:956 (5,6,7,8) - a better triangle.
    SPOILER
  10. 01:18:214 (1,2,3,4) - make an equable square
  11. 01:20:794 (1,2,3,4) - ^
  12. 01:27:246 (1,2,3,4) - don't stack them, please. Hard to read
  13. 01:28:536 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - what with that jumps. They are random and make no sense. At least make something like this:
    SPOILER
    Triangle with 01:28:536 (1,2,3) - this three notes and then square with 01:29:020 (4,5,6,7) - and new combo on 4. (4) is in the centre of triangle and 01:29:343 (6,7,8,1) - have equal spacing and 01:29:665 (8) - is stacked with 01:28:536 (1) -
  14. 01:31:117 (7) - new combo
I love this music *^* Good luck!
Megurine Luka
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Fixed most!

Thanks guys!!
Poggo
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Hi from my mod Q ^.^


EXTREME

00:31:762(3,4,5,6) - i think better to make identical distance between notes, this will readable

oh diff sound very good but I am confused by very sharp changes spacing and not readable jumps ;w;

MEDIUM

00:48:053 - i think will sound better if you remove repeat and add 2 notes
00:49:343 - ^
00:51:601 - add note
01:04:504 - ^
01:18:698 - ^
01:21:601 - ^

I suggest to add some notes that though somehow to dilute a rhythm bcz rhythm only on white ticks really boring ;w;

BASIC

00:11:762 - maybe add note here?
01:15:633 - i think better remove one repeat bcz beginners can confused in it ;w; Can release earlier (after all the such doesn't meet any more in map)


It's all for me very good map ^.^ good luck~~
DeeN
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DeeN
anyway i did it！
all my heart

对不起LUKA啊 拖了那么久
音效上尝试了VOCAL梗 貌似和最高难度冲突 （一直没更新 做完才发觉OTL似乎EX用了CUSTOM)

Download: dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy (Megurine Luka) [Hyper].osu

音效
http://115.com/file/e7j0n417
PW:djtaka

and better BG?


Megurine Luka
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果然还是毛夫人最好了>w<
Kawayi Rika
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Hi ~ Megurine Luka ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[Extreme]


  1. 00:09:665 (6) - Try move to X:168 Y:132,looks much better.
  2. 01:00:794 (6) - Add new combo,big jump here.
  3. 01:47:891 - Add finish.

[Hard]


  1. Too hard for this diff,likes Insane...try reduce difficulty.
  2. 01:05:311 (1) - Unsnapped slider(end point).
  3. 01:05:633 (2) - ^
  4. 00:08:375 - Remove finish,sound weird.

That's all ~ Amazing mapset ~

Good luck with rank ~
Megurine Luka
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All fixed o3o

Hard的话我觉得还好，MUG的mapset普遍比其他难一点应该是正常现象（抽打
DeeN
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DeeN

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Megurine Luka ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~



Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions


[Hard]


  1. Too hard for this diff,likes Insane...try reduce difficulty.
  2. 01:05:311 (1) - Unsnapped slider(end point). /oops i use the wrong silder speed X fixed
  3. 01:05:633 (2) - ^ /^
  4. 00:08:375 - Remove finish,sound weird. /nope

That's all ~ Amazing mapset ~

Good luck with rank ~
BTW some place of sounds changed, looks like perfect now :)

Download: dj TAKA - Hollywood Galaxy (Megurine Luka) [Hard].osu
Megurine Luka
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o3o

updated
soulfear
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soulfear
那群人對Hard概念就是送分數拍子,老實說這個Hard會被挑,可以考慮Basic Standard Medium Extreme 這樣看起來也好點
受DeeN之托來看看
Megurine Luka
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嗯主要因为RB的命名就是Basic Medium Hard这样所以我没用别的OTL就多加了一个Ubt的extreme lol


先这样吧我在creator's word里写一下~
DeeN
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DeeN
just some............

SPOILER
<Extreme>

00:22:085 (7) - soft finish
00:22:730 (1) - ^
00:23:375 (4) - ^
00:23:698 - ^
效果上我会考虑的是最后一个soft finsh音量的骤减表现出停滞感不过因为有clap拍子在不能搞> >
01:16:924 (1,2,3,4) - 我的话大概会？（如下都是）

01:25:956 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 音量递减
01:34:504 (6,7,8) - reverse


意外的不难 原本看map的话觉得是大杀试玩后发觉是难得的爽快图
stream衔接的地方很舒服也很温柔没有什么很刁难人的地方(*^-^)
Megurine Luka
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UPDATED O3o
Twice_old
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为什么我感觉这个Hard略难....Insane5颗星，Hard就4.96了。我觉得可以改简单一点啊/.\

;m; 好吧我承认我OSU很叒
Twice_old
Twice_old

Fear wrote:

那群人對Hard概念就是送分數拍子,老實說這個Hard會被挑,可以考慮Basic Standard Medium Extreme 這樣看起來也好點
受DeeN之托來看看
中
Megurine Luka
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主要考虑到Medium也不简单啦，而且RB里的Hard就是Insane

lol

看情况吧如果这么反应的人多我就再多加一个diff承接medium和hard
Twice_old
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Megurine Luka wrote:

主要考虑到Medium也不简单啦，而且RB里的Hard就是Insane

lol

看情况吧如果这么反应的人多我就再多加一个diff承接medium和hard
我觉得Medium做normal非常好，可是硬要强调Medium -> Normal & Hard就感觉有点太简单了._.
Megurine Luka
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Twice wrote:

我觉得Medium做normal非常好，可是硬要强调Medium -> Normal & Hard就感觉有点太简单了._.
lol RB就是这么命名的所以比较麻烦~脑叔的http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/80732 这图婆婆的难度也是叫Hard但是难度上来说是Extra等级的了一样的道理~

这难度的命名暂时不考虑了，最多考虑在med和hard里加个adv~

kd for difficulty spread.

看我人多好o3o
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