Leorda wrote:

Hello

Easy
01:16:641 (1) - Make a slider like this to make a good blanket combo http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/270471 kinda change the shape..i know that it is ugly orz
01:33:550 (5,1) - This might confusing for beginners. Because when beginners click (5), the (1) is expecting that (1) is on white tick, but it's not. I suggest you to unstack together i agree with you, this may be hard and confusing for beginners, but i think the best way to map this part is like this? for the flow rhythm etc..
02:15:550 (1,2) - Why not this slider is using a blanket combo pattern? fixed
02:41:732 (1) - Why whistle? removed..that was...an accident
03:23:187 (1) - This slider is like a loop slider, but it's not. Please make another slider. Otherwise, beginners can't tell the path ok


Hard
00:53:732 (3) - This notes is almost offscreen (just a warning) if you bubble it and BAT still complain about it i will move it up..right now is a bit too low..but im so lazy to change the whole spacing orz
02:28:641 (1) - This slider is readable for me, but some teams will call this unrankable because tail slider is overlap the slidertrack. Well, it's up to you then, just sayin' changed to something that BATs wont have a chance to complain it
02:51:959 (2) - The tail slider is almost offscreen (just a warning) moved
03:27:550 (1) - The sliderborder is offscreen (not sure if this important, lol) i think i should move it a bit


Cruel
02:43:641 (7) - Why finish? finish wrong place lol
03:05:187 (1) - ^ (too spammy) ok...left a finish for slider head


Nice work~ thx compliment

yongtw123 wrote:

Overall
Difficult rhythm especially on easier difficulties! But again, I don't think this song is meant for easy rhythm.
You are placing finishes on wrong places sometimes. This is understandable for easier difficulties, but on harder ones I believe you can fix them. Please refer to the mod on easy to see what I mean.

嗯，其实都是这首歌的错 这首歌的finish很成功的制造出一种混乱紧张的气氛，如果调慢来听有些甚至是在蓝线上的。。（如第一个kiai01:40:505 (3,4) - 这俩之间，01:44:732 (1,2) - 之间，如果加note BPM 220 表示伤不起啊。。）与其一些红线勉强跟上finish不如全照普通white tick走吧。。个人是觉得这样子比较容易（但还是被发现了呵呵）当然第一次map的时候试过了。。新手表示蛋疼

[Easy]
00:41:732 ~ 01:14:459: In harder difficulties you are using the default soft-hitwhistle as hitsound, which works pretty well. I suggest you do the same for [Easy] too. As of right now, it can be too quiet.
I see that you are trying to finishes like 01:36:141 (3). Some are correctly placed, like the said one, but others, like 01:37:914 (1) just sound off. I believe you understand that some finishes should be on red ticks, not white ones, but I can understand that would be a major overhaul (and a difficulty one) to all rhythm in this difficulty. It's up to you, but if I were you, I'd spend a great deal more time on rhythm.

↑我完全了解...,而且本来easy 我已经试试看这样子map,但是膝盖最后中了火箭....orz啊以我目前的能力easy只能够做到这样子了。。我尽..力..了 呵呵

00:41:732 (1) - finish at start? ok
01:16:641 (1,2) - the drum at end sounds a bit awkward IMO, i'd consider remove them changed to sc1

[Hard]
00:54:005 (4) - whistle at start ok
02:28:641 (1) - hmm, not too eye-appealing if you ask me... /_\ ok
02:40:914 (3,4,5,1) - this part doesn't sound right, but I can't find a better one... strange... 好的
02:58:368 (4) - ^ similar situation, but let me suggest:

SPOILER

02:58:641 (5) - remove, 02:58:777 (x) - add note, 02:59:187 (1) - move to previous red tick, 02:59:596 (x) - add note,

那俩note跟vocal了，（还是你抄错了？）最后建议加的那个note用了把slider拉长的方法。感觉好多了吧？
[Cruel]
00:50:459 (1) - move a bit further from 00:50:323 (4) nazi? or some jumping suggestion? 我当成nazi做了更改。。如果我错了请slap我
02:13:096 (4) - move a bit further from 02:12:959 (3) ^
04:01:641 (5,1,2,3) - spacing 嗯。。其实本来是不小心的，后来故意弄成这样。。但是看起来还是像不小心做到这样。。不过，改了。

============================

Nice patterns. I can't say anything seriously wrong with rhythm, but I feel that there can be optimizations.

Good luck!

• 00:45:005 (1,2) - are you sure about that overlap? might come in conflict with hitburst of 1 and thus look like a circle instead of a slider to most (I'm talking about 2)
  00:48:550 (2) - ^
  00:53:187 (5,1) - i think you can align these a bit more so 1 looks like a backwards expansion of 5 (if you understand what I mean, I find such tricks funny~)
  00:55:232 (5) - stack that on 4 or move it more upwards; putting it on the same heigth feels meeh and stops the slider's flow immediatly for no reason
  00:57:005 (1,3) - i'm no fan of how the reverse-arrow reaches into the previous slider, tbh it looks ugly to me though it causes no major problems
  01:00:959 (1) - i played this as a jump first and then saw it was none; move it further away or arrange it somehow else so the player doesn't do that mistake
  01:03:414 (1,3) - no need for these overlapping, I don't like that~
  01:05:596 (1) - that sliderwhistle is so stand-alone q.q
  01:12:005 - i'd add a circle here (on top of following 1)
  01:18:823 (1,2) - first, the curve of 1 is awkward, use something more balanced; second, 2 comes in conflict with 1's hitburst
  
  I recommend to change them like this

  
  01:19:368 (3,4) - ^
  01:19:914 (1,2) - ^
  01:20:732 (5) - little nazi but put this on the brown combo's 3-spot, then arrange the following circles to it
  
  this does well imo

  
  01:21:550 (2,3,4) - a straight row of circles followed by a bowy slider is mostly meeeh, place 3 on X: 424, Y: 208
  01:23:732 (4,5,6,7) - was little hard to get these are 1/2s
  01:27:550 (5) - that curve is too compressed imo, make it go more smooth
  01:38:732 (2) - 1 grid down, 1 to the right; the current overlap with 1 feels unnecessary
  01:39:550 (5,1,2,1,2,3) - the tiny breaks in between these feel weird compared to their spacing and make it hard to play; space it out (and don't make 5/2 overlap with the upcomming slider)
  
  02:34:914 (2) - you might put this 1-3 grids up to get it lead into 3 better
  02:35:732 - add a circle on top of 5?
  
  03:40:096 (1) - put that more into the center of the previous slider, the little overlap now feels awkward
  03:59:596 (2) - that curve is too unbalanced; the beginning is way "stronger" than the ending of slider (hope you understand q.q)

Jenny wrote:

Source: CON (as it says at the end of the video) fixed
Tags: vocaloid Yuy CHRIS (as end of video says) fixed

Cruel:

• 00:45:005 (1,2) - are you sure about that overlap? might come in conflict with hitburst of 1 and thus look like a circle instead of a slider to most (I'm talking about 2)
  00:48:550 (2) - ^
  00:53:187 (5,1) - i think you can align these a bit more so 1 looks like a backwards expansion of 5 (if you understand what I mean, I find such tricks funny~)
  00:55:232 (5) - stack that on 4 or move it more upwards; putting it on the same heigth feels meeh and stops the slider's flow immediatly for no reason fixed
  
  00:57:005 (1,3) - i'm no fan of how the reverse-arrow reaches into the previous slider, tbh it looks ugly to me though it causes no major problems fixed
  
  01:00:959 (1) - i played this as a jump first and then saw it was none; move it further away or arrange it somehow else so the player doesn't do that mistake
  01:03:414 (1,3) - no need for these overlapping, I don't like that~ fixed
  
  01:05:596 (1) - that sliderwhistle is so stand-alone q.q oh...an accident
  
  01:12:005 - i'd add a circle here (on top of following 1)
  01:18:823 (1,2) - first, the curve of 1 is awkward, use something more balanced; second, 2 comes in conflict with 1's hitburst
  
  I recommend to change them like this

  
  01:19:368 (3,4) - ^
  01:19:914 (1,2) - ^ i try to bring something that is not that common...
  01:20:732 (5) - little nazi but put this on the brown combo's 3-spot, then arrange the following circles to it
  
  this does well imo

  
  01:21:550 (2,3,4) - a straight row of circles followed by a bowy slider is mostly meeeh, place 3 on X: 424, Y: 208 fixed
  
  01:23:732 (4,5,6,7) - was little hard to get these are 1/2s
  01:27:550 (5) - that curve is too compressed imo, make it go more smooth fixed
  
  01:38:732 (2) - 1 grid down, 1 to the right; the current overlap with 1 feels unnecessary fixed
  
  01:39:550 (5,1,2,1,2,3) - the tiny breaks in between these feel weird compared to their spacing and make it hard to play; space it out (and don't make 5/2 overlap with the upcomming slider) tried something
  
  
  02:34:914 (2) - you might put this 1-3 grids up to get it lead into 3 better fixed
  
  02:35:732 - add a circle on top of 5?
  
  03:40:096 (1) - put that more into the center of the previous slider, the little overlap now feels awkward fixed
  
  03:59:596 (2) - that curve is too unbalanced; the beginning is way "stronger" than the ending of slider (hope you understand q.q) fixed

Sun Rainbow wrote:

我觉得你easy后直接跳hard好像是unrankble的耶……>.>
做个normal吧？或者我帮你做？
Edit:最近开了queue之后KD好多XD
shoot star~
加入我们的queue吗？虽然知道你忙

1. 一切都很好。另外测试的时候感觉你完全不要有弃坑的想法啊很好的图，排列和节奏都没有什么问题的，所以如果你要说的感觉少点什么的话，我觉得问题有可能出在了Hitsound上。就我个人来看这个曲子音乐本身鼓点比较重加上速度又快，也许用打击感更强的hitsound会感觉好很多。
   
   于是我尝试着把所有的sample全部替换成了你的Normal:Custom1，然后感觉似乎确实要好一点。所以试试看的？
   
   另外试着找几个比较重的clap吧，给你提供2个可以参考的？不一定要用但是我觉得可以试试看？ 自己把后缀名多出来的.osb删了只保留.wav就好，论坛不让上传非图片和osu/osb以外的东西略麻烦啊……
   Download: normal-hitclap.wav.osb
   Download: normal-hitwhistle.wav.osb
   
2. 另外Easy和Hard之间的分差确实大了一点，我觉得完全可以把Easy弄的稍微难一些呀～～～或者如果你决定要加diff而又的懒的弄的话我可以考虑来发Normal因为确实很喜欢这曲子！不过说回来，其实现在这3个diff去找MAT要泡我觉得完全没问题了的说～

1. 00:40:641 - 音量感觉太低了，提高一些sample volumn吧。我个人觉得如果是soft的话这里至少要70-75%才能比较舒服。
2. • 这三个地方考虑加note？
   1. 00:43:368 -
   2. 00:45:550 -
   3. 00:47:732 -
3. 01:58:641 - 如果是我的话我就不要这个break，反正HP很低不会拖死的……后面那里也是……而且没有break感觉还能营造出一种有些紧张的气氛和歌曲的氛围刚好相应
4. 03:02:459 (4) - ctrl+r?

1. 00:51:959 (3) - 考虑拆分成slider+note？然后note正好和00:52:914 (4,1) - 做成一个三角形的pattern.
2. 02:38:187 (2) - 这里感觉不用折返会更舒服一点……
3. 03:48:005 (2) - 感觉应该放在前面红线？

1. 节奏排列真的没什么好挑的，我觉得唯一需要改进的就是再调整调整hitsound就完美了

Scorpiour wrote:

Hi there~~mod from queue~~~
恩恩就不多废话了lol

General:

1. 一切都很好。另外测试的时候感觉你完全不要有弃坑的想法啊很好的图，排列和节奏都没有什么问题的，所以如果你要说的感觉少点什么的话，我觉得问题有可能出在了Hitsound上。就我个人来看这个曲子音乐本身鼓点比较重加上速度又快，也许用打击感更强的hitsound会感觉好很多。
   
   于是我尝试着把所有的sample全部替换成了你的Normal:Custom1，然后感觉似乎确实要好一点。所以试试看的？
   
   另外试着找几个比较重的clap吧，给你提供2个可以参考的？不一定要用但是我觉得可以试试看？ 自己把后缀名多出来的.osb删了只保留.wav就好，论坛不让上传非图片和osu/osb以外的东西略麻烦啊……
   [attachment=1:74723]normal-hitclap.wav.osb[/attachment:74723]
   [attachment=0:74723]normal-hitwhistle.wav.osb[/attachment:74723]
   
2. 另外Easy和Hard之间的分差确实大了一点，我觉得完全可以把Easy弄的稍微难一些呀～～～或者如果你决定要加diff而又的懒的弄的话我可以考虑来发Normal因为确实很喜欢这曲子！不过说回来，其实现在这3个diff去找MAT要泡我觉得完全没问题了的说～ 其实我觉得gap应该是在hard和insane之间...?

Easy:

1. 00:40:641 - 音量感觉太低了，提高一些sample volumn吧。我个人觉得如果是soft的话这里至少要70-75%才能比较舒服。先65
2. • 这三个地方考虑加note？ 不了
   1. 00:43:368 -
   2. 00:45:550 -
   3. 00:47:732 -
3. 01:58:641 - 如果是我的话我就不要这个break，反正HP很低不会拖死的……后面那里也是……而且没有break感觉还能营造出一种有些紧张的气氛和歌曲的氛围刚好相应 好
4. 03:02:459 (4) - ctrl+r? 好

Hard:

1. 00:51:959 (3) - 考虑拆分成slider+note？然后note正好和00:52:914 (4,1) - 做成一个三角形的pattern. 嗯
2. 02:38:187 (2) - 这里感觉不用折返会更舒服一点…… 不了
3. 03:48:005 (2) - 感觉应该放在前面红线？ whistle吗？改了

Insane:

1. 节奏排列真的没什么好挑的，我觉得唯一需要改进的就是再调整调整hitsound就完美了

差不多就这些了，STAR支持！加油～

1. Remove sound from video.

DoKoLP wrote:

General

1. Remove sound from video. i should but i have no software to do it...

[Easy]

1. 00:38:187 (1) - Make it start at 00:37:232
2. 00:43:368 (x) - Add circle
3. 00:45:550 (x) - ^
4. 00:47:732 (x) - ^
5. 01:11:868 (x) - ^
6. 03:15:277 (2) - Make it start at 03:15:550 and remove 03:16:096 (3) ok
7. 03:17:187 (2) - Make it start at 03:16:914 ok
8. 03:19:641 (2) - Make it start at 03:19:914 and remove 03:20:459 (3) ok
9. 04:12:823 (x) - Add circle ok

[Hard]

1. 00:37:232 - Start here. Would fit better.
2. 01:18:277 (1) - Kinda hidden by that slider before.
3. 01:20:459 (1) - ^
4. 01:24:823 (1) - ^
5. 01:33:550 (2) - ^
6. 02:53:050 (4) - Reverse and remove 02:53:459 (5) ok
7. 03:49:368 (1) - Make it start at 03:49:232 make 03:49:914 (2) start at 03:49:777 and end at 03:50:187. ok
8. 04:13:300 - 04:14:868 - Spinner. ok

[Cruel]

1. 00:37:232 - Start here. Would fit better.
2. 01:00:687 (7,1) - Make the distance bigger.Otherwise it could be played as a 1/2 jump. ok
3. 01:00:959 (1) - Remove reverse and let 01:01:368 (2) start at 01:01:232
4. 01:19:641 (4) - Kinda hidden by that slider before.
5. 02:00:823 (2) - NC ok
6. 02:35:459 (4) - ~~~^
7. 02:51:550 (6,7) - Distance Snap? ok
8. 03:14:732 (3) - Reverse?
9. 03:15:141 (4) - Make it start at 03:15:005 and remove reverse.
10. 03:15:959 - 1/2 Slider and remove 03:16:096 (1)
11. 03:25:096 (x) - Add circle ok
12. 03:36:687 (2,3,4) - New Combo to make it clear that those are 1/1 and no jumps. ok
13. 04:13:300 - 04:14:868 - Spinner. ok

Good Luck! \:3/

urs4chan wrote:

umm , can i add an unranked CTB Diff ?

L_P wrote:

urs4chan wrote:

umm , can i add an unranked CTB Diff ?

Sure

nold_1702 wrote:

CTB Diffculity is now rankable

L_P wrote:

nold_1702 wrote:

CTB Diffculity is now rankable

oh my god

ertyukjh010 wrote:

您好 L_P, 中文可以對吧?

[Easy]

ar-1 od-1? easy來說我覺得稍高
00:38:187 (1) - 怪怪的不符合節奏；在00:37:368放個轉盤到00:40:641結束
01:14:459 (4) - 弄成對稱?
01:33:550 (5) - 不建議用重疊；因為後面的01:33:959 (1)是紅線開始，但是新手(甚至我==)會誤會成2個1/1；如果依照第2段的做法，也可以將這個note刪掉
03:25:368 (4) - 不好看，複製左邊的，貼上然後Ctr+H Ctrl+R

[Hard]

01:24:823 (1) - 過份重疊了，至少看到"1"
01:29:732 (1) - 轉盤代替
02:58:368 (3) - 搬到02:58:505

[Cruel]

02:41:187 (4,5,6,7) - 會看成1/4吧？完全重疊比較好

還不錯的圖，加油喔

Deif wrote:

Yes, there's no reason to keep that diff unsubmitted. Nevermind, the mapper was testing some stuff.

372,248,83187,2,0,B|308:312|212:353|116:312|52:248,1,360.000003576278,4|1

DJPop wrote:

~General~
01:50:323 - start break and end Kiai at 01:50:459
03:06:687 - start break and end Kiai at 03:06:823 in Hard and Easy, i couldnt start break in 03:06:687 (slider end there orz)_, other fixed


~Easy~
01:23:187 (3) - try this code fixed

372,248,83187,2,0,B|308:312|212:353|116:312|52:248,1,360.000003576278,4|1

01:25:368 (1) - add finish fixed
01:33:959 (1) - add finish at start fixed
03:16:914 (3) - add clap at start fixed
03:17:732 (4) - remove clap at the end fixed
03:19:096 (1,2) - add clap at start fixed
03:21:277 (1) - ^ fixed

~Hard~
- Can you set snare sounds like Cruel diff? Because they sound weird i did some green lines, hope that it is better now
00:38:187 (1) - use 34% volume like Cruel diff fixed
03:15:277 (2) - remove clap fixed
03:15:550 (3) - add clap at start fixed
03:16:914 (1) - add clap at start, remove clap at the end fixed
03:17:596 (2) - remove clap fixed
03:17:732 (3) - add clap at start fixed
03:19:368 (2) - remove clap fixed
03:19:914 (4) - add clap at start fixed
03:21:277 (1,3) - ^ fixed
03:57:823 (6) - add new combo fixed
03:57:959 (1) - remove new combo fixed

~Cruel~
00:41:323 (7) - add new combo due to speed changes fixed
01:00:414 (5) - remove whistle fixed
01:00:550 (6) - add whistle fixed
01:18:823 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - overlapped sliders don't look so good i respect your opinion but i would like to keep this if this isnt a big problem...may i? (cause i think it is special to play and quite a visual effect...)
01:42:005 (7) - add new combo fixed
01:42:414 (1) - remove new combo fixed
02:16:641 (5) - add new combo fixed
02:18:823 (5) - ^ fixed
02:36:550 (2,3) - add whistle at start, remove whistle at the end fixed
02:37:096 (4) - add whistle fixed
03:18:005 (3) - add clap fixed
03:18:141 (4) - remove clap fixed
03:18:550 (6) - add clap at start fixed
03:21:550 (3) - add clap at the end fixed
03:31:914 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - too much custom claps
I suggest remove them in (1), add at start and remove at the end in (2), and so on 1st - 6th slider, see if you like the effect now
03:36:277 (1,1,1,1,2) - remove all claps, use whistles sound better fixed
03:42:550 (3) - add clap fixed
03:42:687 (4) - remove whistle and clap fixed
03:43:096 (5) - add whistle and clap fixed
03:48:277 (7) - add new combo fixed

Need opinions from skilled CTB players.
i didnt realize that i uploaded it...it should be unsubmitted diff

Envi wrote:

Coming here from my mod queue

General
why the SV value of the easy value is 0.600000005960464? fix it to be 0,6, this can be done by fix it through the notepad ok
Add more combo color? It feels a bit dull with just two rough combo colors imo i think that it is fine

Easy
Circle size 3? X
01:33:959 (1,2) - idk with the others, but the easy difficulty, i think this kind of 1/4 beats are a bit too hard for a beginner players for play, why not make into 1/2 beats? like 01:37:914 (1,2,3) -
(and actually, it was same goes for the similar pattern with 1/4 beats after the part i mention above, so please reconsider this ><)
or if you like, make the diff name into Easy+ will do anyways, since there was a 1/4 beats that not supposed to placed on the easy diff kinda agree with you, but still wanna try this

Hard
no major flaw found here , just
03:45:277 (3) - move this a bit left, i think the flow 03:44:732 (1,2,3) - are way better if you placed on there
fix the next pattern if you agree with above ok

Insane
AR-1(although this is 220 bpm, but i think using AR8 here would be better since the song theme doesn't really feel like a really powerful type like this) X, i think AR8 is messy...
01:17:459 (4,2) - since the 01:16:914 (2) - are curved, why not make the rest curved too? I think it would be good for the flow pattern and the consistency of the pattern shape itself ok
01:31:096 (2) - same goes here, but for this, i prefer make it linear like 01:30:005 (2,4) - X

i think that's all, sorry if it was short orz
i hope this can help, and good luck

DJPop wrote:

- About diff spread, a difficulty gap between Easy and Hard is too much
there are 2 ways to fix:
1) Make Easy diff easier and make new Normal diff
2) Make Easy diff harder and rename it to "Normal", make new Easy diff is optional
- You should also ask other MAT/BAT for his/her thought


~Hard~
03:21:277 (1,3) - add clap at start
04:01:641 (3) - remove whistle (not fit) or use normal hitsounds instead
04:06:005 (4) - ^

~Cruel~
- If you use AR9, OD have to be 7 or 8, no 6
03:31:914 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I don't like claps on red ticks in this part :<
03:36:277 (1) - add whistle at start
03:36:687 (1) - remove clap
03:37:505 (1) - add whistle at start and middle


Other things are fine.

DJPop wrote:

Bubble

Jayel wrote:

Bu... bubble.... wow.. I think I'm too late to mod .... though you've asked me for modding it.
So I'll just give you star. Good luck~.

Tweelon wrote:

Had an eargasm on this song.
Also had fun to HR this map.

SPOILER

go go rank!

Mafiamaster wrote:

Your video has audio in it. Please remove it. I can do this for you if you want. yes! plz do this for me (i have no video editor....)

Here's some minor stuff that I found.

[Normal]
02:37:232 (1) - Move this a little farther away from 4's endpoint so it isn't touching? ok,i fail at DS ...

[Hard]
01:20:459 (1) - Make the start point of this slider a little more visible? fixed

arien666 wrote:

[Normal]
00:50:459 (5,1) - Swap new combo? fixed
01:39:550 (3) - meow :3? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/322814 nice idea

[Hard]
01:18:277 (1) - Seems little hidden so why don't you make it better :3?
01:20:459 (1) - ^ but hard to fix ;_;
01:24:823 (1) - 2^
01:34:641 (2) - ^

aww...tried making it more visible..

[Cruel]
01:18:823 (1,2) - Placement seems err... ;___; this is one of my "wanna try" stuffs on this map, plz~
01:19:368 (3,4) - ^
02:39:277 (1,2) - Swap new combo? i think new combo make it more visible for slider 1
02:44:596 (1) - As there's spacing, people might confuse it as 1/4. but there's new combo, it would be jump... Just stack it? ok
02:54:687 (4,1) - Swap new combo? fine with this



meow :3

Scorpiour wrote:

rank it rank it ~~~ i can't wait it to be ranked~~~really a great map & song >.<