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StylipS - MIRACLE RUSH (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Kotone
瞎了開挂
LKs

不会打 纯顶
No_Gu
教练我也要打麻将
kanpakyin
DarknessAngel
m4m ~ :)


Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice


Insane

  1. 00:06:425 (3) - 就我的感覺而言,連續用2個以上的whistle不是很舒適,聽的耳朵癢癢的,刪掉這個whistle我覺得比較好
  2. 00:08:032 (3) - 在這裡加個whistle能強調vocal
  3. 00:13:567 (1) - 我覺得如果要強調slider頭上的音效的話,用大音量的鼓聲我覺得比較好,預設的whistle有些突兀了
  4. 00:38:121 (8,9) - 我覺得把(8)刪掉,然後再賦予(9)一個跳作為強調vocal的效果我比較中意
    位置的話放這裡 ? 這樣逆向交叉的跳我個人還滿喜歡的
  5. 01:00:353 (1,3) - 我覺得刪掉這兩個whistle比較帶勁lol
  6. 01:11:782 (1,3) - 同上
  7. 01:11:782 (1,2,3,4) - 這正方形歪囉,我把它擺正看就變成這樣
  8. 01:19:282 (7) - 加上NC
  9. 01:23:567 (1) - 你給變慢的slider加NC卻不給變快的,你偏心!
  10. 01:28:032 (5) - 給這note個NC我認為很合適,因為2個finish、最後一個物件、方便玩家判斷、美觀之類的\:D/

Gu's Hard

  1. 00:00:710 (1) - 這短折返slider尾部的whistle絕對違和啊!刪掉之後一整個舒服多了 ~
  2. 00:06:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - 你和karen說好在同個時間點一起放星星嗎 ? ww。嘛,我要說的其實是00:06:782 (5) -
    把這長條ctrl + r , + h + j然後調好間距,開口朝右上這樣順多了
    哦我還注意到一點,頭上加個normal - finish對應音樂中的重音好像還不錯耶 ?
  3. 01:01:425 ~ 01:01:782 - 依照你whistle的下法,這裡不能有whistle的(看看01:12:853 (2)附近的音效),不然就只留01:01:782 (4) - 頭上的
    順便一提,1/4的連3個whistle非常不好聽啊orz
  4. 00:44:817 (4,5) - ctrl + r 嗎 ? 剛好這裡還能跳,改這樣我比較喜歡
    其實是因為我個人是不喜歡這種note組成一線或一個弧的lol

Normal

  1. 00:13:210 (2) - 尾部音效,同Ins
  2. 00:23:567 (6) - 為這個finish降點音量(大約10%)怎麼樣 ? 感覺這樣會跟著音樂中的鑼聲有所起伏
  3. 01:18:925 (2) - you know
  4. 01:21:067 (1,2,3) - 總覺得加clap比較有強調意味
  5. 01:11:782 - 雖然人聲還在但音樂已經完全轉小,把這2個note的音量減個10、15%好像比較好

Easy

  1. 00:46:782 (3,4,1,2) - 我喜歡這段的音效 ~ >A<
  2. 00:58:210 (3) - 難怪我感覺好吵,尾部的finish我覺得是沒必要的,刪掉比較好


好圖超好歌
nice job & good luck
S.T.A.R !!!
:)
Topic Starter
Kotone
thx~updated~
@谷子:減速slider那裏音量我弄成30%了 你就聽我話一次吧
JauiPlaY
Hi
一些建議:

[General]
Fine.

[Easy]
00:03:925 (1) - 拉前面藍線
01:03:567 - 這不加note超違和的
01:17:139 (2) - 這里不適合用這種節奏
有點難,然後前半部分把好多24白線都漏掉了...那些要用來clap啊

[Normal]
00:02:853 (2) - 頭whistle
00:03:925 (1) - 同Easy
00:13:210 (2) - 這個whistle太突兀
00:35:353 - 多馀綠線
01:06:246 (5) - 頭可以clap
01:18:925 (2) - 同00:13:210 (2)

[沒屁股]
01:00:353 (1,2) - 頭尾全加上whistle,不然真跟沒加一樣
01:28:210 (1) - 拉前面藍線

[Insane]
00:38:389 - 多馀綠線
01:08:925 (4) - Hidden reverse arrow may be unrankable.

That's all, good luck~
Topic Starter
Kotone
up~thx
No_Gu
Kuria
Come here for a small mod^^:

Easy:
I think changed the AR +1 would be better here, since with the way i'm looking at this while play, it flows the rhythm in this diff nicely
00:42:496 (1) - i think when the first time i'm try this diff, i'm noticed that this slider are looks a bit weird comparing with others, if you like, why you just not make it curved like this?

Normal:
00:02:853 (2) - move it to the right a bit, the previous position of that slider are kinda confusing while played first time, maybe since the spacing was a bit too near with the previous slider.

Gu's Hard:
IMO using circle size 3 here a way better for reading the map pattern, when i'm played the diff with the original CS, some part of the pattern are a bit confusing.
If you're agree with above statement, just ignored what i'll write under this^^:
00:00:800 (1) - reduce the slider length by 1? it will be looks like this:
00:06:068 (1,2,3,4,5) - make more space for each notes here? i think the previous spacing are kinda too small here, making the cursor movement feels so sharp there
00:17:853 (1,1) - about this part, actually it's not really matters when playing, but the moment i'm arrived at that part, the cursor movement between the endpoint of the first slider and the beginning of the second slider are a bit too short imo (i think you're trying to follow the vocals at the first slider there, maybe?), so i think if you do it like this:
SPOILER
make the SV multiplier at the 00:17:853 to 1.0 again, but make the slider into like this, a bit longer:

the slider

and then re-positioning the 00:18:210 (1) slider with distance snap
dunno if it makes the pattern more dull or not, but i think it's pretty fine this way
00:25:353 (1,2,3,4,5) - make a space for each note here too
00:36:782 (1,2,4,5,6,1) - ^

Insane:
HP Drain -1, OD -1, since the notes are quite a lot in this diff, i think making the higher difficulty doesn't make the map itself enjoyable at all o.o
00:03:389 (4,5,6) - make more space in between each note here, imo it was too hard too follow each notes there when play since the jump space are too narrow there.
SPOILER
more spaced jumps?
00:57:496 (4,5,6,7) - same as above, make a more space between notes here
SPOILER
spaced jumps too
01:13:746 (5,7,1,2,3,4) - inconsistent spaced jumps here(i think, the jump between 2-3 seems a bit forced)? I think if you make it like this it will be make the pattern way more flowed:

01:18:925 (4) - move this one down with distance spacing 1.6, it was too jumpy between 01:18:746 (3,4,1) jump
if you did the statement above, then move a bit down the 01:18:567 (2) and 01:18:746 (3) with a same distance spacing as above too^^
SPOILER
it will be look like this later:


I think that's all what i'm found and felt in all the diff :3, but overall the mapset are good!
Topic Starter
Kotone
wow~very long mod,thank you
I will check it when I use computer

EDIT: up
No_Gu
Topic Starter
Kotone
<3
Pokie
業餘騙kd的來了


[General]
  • - 這裡什麼都沒有
    - 其實不太喜歡kiai的clap, 尤其在Easy那斷續的效果十分悲劇…再加上和其他音效的契合度不高 D:


[Easy]
  • - 嗜哩神馬都木有


[Normal]
  • 00:08:210 (4,1) - TvT這裡vocal被切成1/2有點違和
    01:08:210 (4,5,6,1) - 目測有點擠...


    [沒_谷]
    [list:1ce40]
00:21:960 (4) - 總感覺這個疊在(3)後面比較符合你的排列
00:26:782 (1) - 這個倒是可以往上移一些, 因為前面五角星是1.5x間距呢, 接一個1.0的容易按早了
不然就像後面一樣弄重疊
00:59:639 - 不妨加個note
01:01:603 (2,3,4) - 這裡的三連聽著稍怪, normal綠線移到(4), (3)刪whistle? (其實2也刪更好, 因為這裡不像01:06:068 (3,4) - 是一串連打)
01:24:639 (3,1) - 坑爹呢(摔!) 這種1/1 stack我只感到了滿滿的惡意 TvT

還有貌似有一部份的多餘timing線…求驗證
00:46:782 -
01:02:496 -
01:09:282 -



[Insane]
  • - 由於電腦面臨崩潰於是我選擇相信卡人淫的品質而將mod這一個難度的重任交給下一位modder了
CPU核心燒到100度了不來烤肉嗎
Topic Starter
Kotone
來烤鴨
No_Gu

Pokie wrote:

沒_谷]
[list:f8bb9]00:21:960 (4) - 總感覺這個疊在(3)後面比較符合你的排列我是比较喜欢1/1stack的啊其实。。
00:26:782 (1) - 這個倒是可以往上移一些, 因為前面五角星是1.5x間距呢, 接一個1.0的容易按早了
不然就像後面一樣弄重疊
00:59:639 - 不妨加個note这里想空
01:01:603 (2,3,4) - 這裡的三連聽著稍怪, normal綠線移到(4), (3)刪whistle? (其實2也刪更好, 因為這裡不像01:06:068 (3,4) - 是一串連打)BGM其实34是二连的,但是感觉不加2还是蛮怪的,然后删了点whistle
01:24:639 (3,1) - 坑爹呢(摔!) 這種1/1 stack我只感到了滿滿的惡意 TvT说实在的我觉得这里停。。大丈夫

還有貌似有一部份的多餘timing線…求驗證
00:46:782 -
01:02:496 -
01:09:282 -
烤鸭

Download: Stylips - MIRACLE RUSH (TV Size) (karenying) [Gu's Hard].osu
Melophobia
Random mod~

[Easy]
00:00:710 (1,2,3,4) - this pattern is too hard for an Easy because so many notes are on red tick,
try something like this instead
http://puu.sh/qHGA
01:03:210 (3) - remove clap

[Normal]
01:21:067 (1) - finish
01:23:210 - reduce volume here cuz back music disappears
01:27:496 (5) - add a clap at the end instead of whistle?

[Hard]
00:12:139 - change to normal sound?
00:15:353 (1) - add finish at the beginning
01:10:710 (5) - add finish at the end
01:20:710 (4) - ^

[Insane]
01:08:925 (4) - i'm not sure about this, but it's really hard to see reverse arrow
01:27:496 (4) - add a clap at the end instead of whistle?

yeah that's all~ nice map <3
ysaitoh
;) :arrow:
wmfchris
(Just wonder StylipS or Stylips, see another miracle rush pending)

[Timing]
1068
1073

[Insane]
00:02:853 (2,6) - hmmm stack
00:21:067 (1) - 感覺(1)尾果一下明顯冇(1)頭大聲 remove clap at the end
00:26:067 (5) - [Nazi] curve得唔似(6), 中間果點-> (96,164)
00:27:496 (3,4,5) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/300944
01:26:067 (3) - ^

[Easy]
00:20:710 (2) - 由於後後面斷左 呢個finish聽上黎怪怪地
00:34:639 (2) - remove finish at the end 中間同結尾要有個對比

1) Normal, Easy 個ending spinner太短
2)

Po Po Pokie姐 wrote:

其實不太喜歡kiai的clap, 尤其在Easy那斷續的效果十分悲劇(其實finish都係)…再加上和其他音效的契合度不高 D:
3) 沒屁股不自重, too hard between normal and insane
No_Gu

wmfchris wrote:

(Just wonder StylipS or Stylips, see another miracle rush pending)
其实我觉得这H不算太难。。而且我也想不到怎么弄简单。。如果真不够泡的标准的话我再改好了
Topic Starter
Kotone

wmfchris wrote:

[Timing]
1068
1073

:arrow: I think 1068 s better,no change...

[Insane]
00:21:067 (1) - 感覺(1)尾果一下明顯冇(1)頭大聲 remove clap at the end :arrow: I like something like this more >_>


[Easy]
00:20:710 (2) - 由於後後面斷左 呢個finish聽上黎怪怪地 :arrow: 沒辦法...
00:34:639 (2) - remove finish at the end 中間同結尾要有個對比 :arrow: changed to whistle

2)

Po Po Pokie姐 wrote:

其實不太喜歡kiai的clap, 尤其在Easy那斷續的效果十分悲劇(其實finish都係)…再加上和其他音效的契合度不高 D:
:arrow: Asked other 'hitsounder' and they said ok._.
3) 沒屁股不自重, too hard between normal and insane
:arrow: I think it isn't too hard....
Other fixed~ thx
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~
     
  1. : 是我覺得一並要改的
  2. : 建議 但個人認為要改的
  3. : 就單純建議
     
    [ General ]
     
  4. 我感覺timing有點錯誤 每次到01:28:032 finish的聲音感覺都會晚了一些 >_<
     
    [ Easy ]
     
  5. 00:14:996 (4) - 這裡用finish感覺頗奇怪的 >_<
  6. 00:17:853 (1) - 開頭加個whistle不?
  7. 00:34:639 (2) - 結尾用finish吧 如果覺得太大聲的話調低一點音量
     
    [ Normal ]
     
  8. 00:13:212 (2) - 這結尾的whistle聽起來好怪>_<
  9. 00:28:212 (1) - 看起來是有多多餘...這NC
     
    [ 掛's Hard ]
     
  10. 00:17:853 (1) - 這聽起來怪怪的 在00:18:032結束吧
  11. 00:44:639 (3) - 加個NC 這裡有個大跳
  12. 01:23:567 (1) - Same as 00:17:853 (1) -
     
    [ Insane ]
     
  13. 00:49:817 (4,1) - Ctrl+R
  14. 01:23:567 (1) - Same as 掛's Hard
     
      --------------------------------------------------------
渣mod! 拖了那麼久真不好意思>_<
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
Kotone
@boss 謝了

EDIT:
1.Fixed some of boss's mod
2.Timing checked by LKs http://puu.sh/s6hm
3.Big change of Hard :roll:

and back up the original hard
http://puu.sh/s6g4
NatsumeRin
路过
No_Gu

NatsumeRin wrote:

路过
围观
Topic Starter
Kotone

NatsumeRin wrote:

路过
抱大腿
wmfchris
再嘈我搵你老公好好調教你
Ako Atanashi
mod下感觉不错
Andrea
Cute map song and song <3

Ranked~
Frostmourne
Congratz !~~~~~~~~~~~
Akemi_Homura
yeah~ saki~~ <3
gratz~ \w/
Gabriela
This very good! =)

Congratz! ~
S o r d a
yey congratz!
YTYuyu
OMG Karen-chan you did it! i'm so glad you're back to ranking your own maps because i love your mapping style. congratz on the rank ;)
Meowcenaries
congrats
wmfchris




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Kitsuneko
Congrats~ ;)
Sekai
gratz Karen-chan >w<// ~
BeatofIke
osuplayer111 back on BAT duty. :D
Stefan
Congrats for rank \o/

BeatofIke wrote:

osuplayer111 back on BAT duty. :D
hoLysoup
Topic Starter
Kotone
Thank you all~>_<
No_Gu
盈盈最帅了有木有
Pokie
:)
blissfulyoshi
Sort of late, but congratz! (Also congratz for the first miracle rush ranked!)
AIR315
Congratz~
JoJo
刚起床...lol
Grats bakaying!
Melophobia
congratz~
KayeSara
congratz~
Snowy Dream
T T差2个100 就SS了
>v<rank祝贺
HourglassO
爽图 :D
Hard SS with hidden #16 so far
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