Breeze wrote:

BPM is fine, Offset should be 355 so that downbeat is right on long white tick

Banana wrote:

Title: da mao xian->Da Mao Xian

chick
00:15:917 (2) - 这附近有个2*的绿线，貌似不需要（如果只是为了改变距离的话按alt在界面右上角调distance spacing就好）后面类似，不重复了。全删了
00:23:042 (1,2,3,4) - 稍微跳一点（用distance spacing），正方形转个角度，不然挡住（5）的箭头。嗯
01:45:542 (7,8) - 遮挡..不喜欢，跳一下吧OK
02:14:230 (7,8) - 喜欢把这两个用滑条连一下好主意
02:17:417 (4,5) - 我是觉得这里的变速很不自然，于是用滑条（不过我已经把2*的绿线去掉了）连起来，最后排的正方形转了个角度。啥意思没看懂。
总体很好的~

atk1992 wrote:

中文歌支持！这个看拼音还以为打毛线啊哈哈
群里面看到的，随便MOD一些



chick
00:09:355 (5) - newcombo嗯
00:46:480 (4) - 故意的吗？失误
00:58:667 (7) - new..
02:00:355 (6) - n..done


对不起啊我想给KUDOSU的，但是最近要攒一些，所以只好先抱歉啦

Banana wrote:

Title: da mao xian->Da Mao Xian done
Preview Time没设..找到某个时间timing菜单最下面一个，就是设置选歌界面点上去歌开始放的时间点，每个难度一样
以下.. 本来想最后再弄，现在加了
都是个人感觉
normal有点难..
（滑条比note之间的移动要快..）
（节奏也快了，要是为新手设计的难度，半拍要尽量少） 很多原地二分音，基本还行吧。。normal
圈调大一格CircleSize:3 改了，不过似乎有点挤
00:40:105 (2,1) - 距离短了.. 没注意。。改了
00:48:730 (1) - 这个转盘。。个人感觉没必要 删了会有一小段停顿，不自然
hard
00:48:730 (1) - 还是觉得转盘奇怪。。删了
02:18:355 (1) - 结尾的转盘我觉得02:18:167开始02:19:105结束 改了

总体很好的~

atk1992 wrote:

中文歌支持！这个看拼音还以为打毛线啊哈哈
群里面看到的，随便MOD一些

ALL
KIAI全部从00:51:355和02:06:355开始 改了，之前确实太长

normal
00:41:042 (1) - spacing 改了
00:48:730 (1) - 从00:48:355开始 这个spiner删了
01:14:230 (1) - newcombo for视觉效果 改了，不过其实差不多。。
01:17:980 提前结束SPINNER，这里换成一个NOTE怎么样 好主意
01:37:855 - SPINNER，到01:37:855结束 不懂


HARD
02:16:855 (1) - newcombo done
02:17:605 (1) - newcombo done
fine


对不起啊我想给KUDOSU的，但是最近要攒一些，所以只好先抱歉啦

Scorpiour wrote:

新手mod，纯属建议:)

SPOILER

Normal:
00:15:355 (3,1,2,3) - 这里打的时候感觉很糟糕，考虑调整下节奏或者改用slider
00:46:855 (1,2) - 中间红线上感觉少了一个note
01:04:855 (3) - Slider起点的timing感觉不对，建议向前移动到红线
01:07:855 (1,2) - 同上
01:28:105 (3,4) - 中间空拍别扭
02:16:480 (6) - 考虑在这里开始新的combo


Hard:

难度已经和Insane差不多了

00:38:792 (6,7,8,9,10,1) - 间距，建议摆到同一点

第二段kiai mode的时间是不是持续的太长了
结尾段空白太长了

Insane：

00:27:355 (6,1) - 感觉跳的有些突兀
00:32:792 (3,1) - 同样是跳的问题
00:37:667 (1,2,3) - 建议摆到同一点或者按照DS的距离拉开，这样摆放略难看
00:38:980 (5,6,7,8,1) - 同上
00:50:980 (2,3) - 间距

01:32:042 (1) - 感觉spinner拉长了

结尾的空白段太长了（超过整歌的20%），请考虑做满或者切歌




蛮好的图！ 我很喜欢的说，加油

1. Add four kiai times at 00:51:370 - 01:00:370 + 01:03:370 - 01:12:370 + 01:54:370 - 02:03:370 + 02:06:370 - 02:15:370? Here's some things (read: code). (The hitsound sample for the code below is Normal-Default, the volume on the kiai time is 90%, and the volume after them is 80%.)
   

   51370,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
   60370,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
   63370,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
   72370,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
   114370,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
   123370,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0
   126370,-100,4,1,0,90,0,1
   135370,-100,4,1,0,80,0,0

2. Remove the .osb?
3. Add (Short ver.) to the title? I'm sure enough this isn't the song's full version.
4. Easy, Hard, and then Insane? Not a good diff spread, you know... (Actually, I want to make a Normal diff for this, since it looks like a nice song to map, but I have lots of modding to do :\)

1. This diff starts near the beginning of the song, and thus MUST have a lead-in. I recommend 2000, but it's up to you.
2. 01:16:120 (1,2) - You know what, we can just replace the current (2) slider with (1) (Ctrl+C then Ctrl+V), and then place (1) @ (256,76) and (2) @ (256,308). That way, we can avoid a bad overlap (well, IMO) and make it look tidier.
3. 01:45:370 (4) - NC?

1. 00:58:682 (1,2,3,1) - Uh... the inconsistency in spacing broke the map's flow here. Consider remapping this spot.

1. Name it chick's Insane? I think we're going to need to know what diff is this, and I'm sure enough this is an Insane diff.
2. 00:24:557 (2) - Unstack? Doesn't work well for me...
3. 01:41:432 (4) - ...Eh? It's just weird to have a loop slider placed like this. It doesn't play good, either, IMO. Rearrange?

[Ar3's Easy]

[Hard]

[Chick]

W h i t e wrote:

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From My Modding queue~

General

Where is kiai Time..? I want kiai time! lol...

Ar3's Easy

00:49:870 (2) - : I want to make a blanket (Suggestion) ok

01:35:995 (2) - : It is hard for Newbie player... changed a little

02:08:995 (4,1) - : ^ Maybe delete NC

Hard

00:19:682 (4,5) - : Stuck is good

00:58:307 (4,1,2) - : Oh... confusing...

Chick

01:19:870 (1) - : spacing is different fixed

01:52:682 (1) - : Slider is Weird... changed a little
or is good

Finish~ Good luck~

S h i o n wrote:

A bit late from my queue:


Ar3's Easy
01:49:870 (4) - 去掉这个，给(3)加一个来回? 因为感觉这个note有点没在vocal上 ok


Hard
01:00:557 (4,5,6,1) - 456不要原地叠，改成0.15DS的anti-jump？ 这样的话note是下一个跳note的流向，感觉不会那么突然了。
01:38:995 (1) - NC? 感觉和开头第一个单独颜色note差不多吧~ fixed
01:39:370 (2,7) - NC fixed
01:46:307 (3) - NC 01:47:245 (8) - NC 01:47:807 (1) - RNC (这一段NC好像比较乱，我的感觉... fixed
02:05:995 (4) - 最好还是和前面3个spacing一样 ok


Chick
diff name 为啥取这个呢~
00:20:620 (4) - 尾巴被挡(虽然没有全部被挡到
00:21:557 (1,2,3,4) - 可以再摆开点，不然的话00:23:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - 大间距会有点突然
00:47:245 (4) - Ctrl+R?
00:59:245 (2) - ^ ok

That's all ~

1. Not sure with the tittle. Is the tittle just Da Mao Xian or with (Big adventure)? If (Big Adventure) is the translation of Da Mao Xian, then you should remove the (Big adventure) but include it in tags.

1. Since this have become a normal diff, raise the difficulty setting. AR 4, HP and OD 3 is enough imo, and won't change the star rating much higher.
2. 00:12:370 (1) - Since it's the opening of new rythim, i think it's good to have a finish on here.
3. 00:14:620 (3) - Feel, a bit empty, how about a clap on this slider end?
4. 00:24:370 (2) - Add a finish to follow up cymbal on the back?
5. 00:25:120 (1) - I think clap on this slider end should be on 00:25:682 (2) -
6. 00:29:245 (1) - I think you miss a clap on this slider start.
7. 00:36:370 (1,3) - Finish on these slider start please. Not consistant with 00:42:370 (2,4) -
8. 00:51:370 (3) - I think you should add a new combo here, since this is a start of chorus.
9. 00:53:245 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit the stanza and downbeat. So please remove the new combo. And you should add new combo here 00:54:370 (3) -
10. 00:56:245 (1,3) - Same case as ^
11. 00:59:245 (1) - ^
12. 01:03:370 (3) - Same case as ^ so please new combo.
13. 01:04:495- Since you suddenly repeat polarity from white to red at 01:04:120 (2,1) - i highly suggest you add a note here since it will help the player to guess the rythim on 01:04:682 (1) - . Don't forget to add clap on this note, since it's very good to hear.
14. 01:06:370 (1) - Nc, i won't tell you the reason again.
15. 01:07:495- Same case as 01:04:495-
16. 01:07:682 (3) - Remove nc
17. 01:09:370 (5) - Nc
18. 01:10:495- Same as 01:04:495-
19. 01:10:682 (1) - Remove nc
20. 01:11:995 (1) - Remove nc too.
21. 01:45:370 (1,2) - You missing a finish on this two slider start.
22. 01:54:370 (5) - Nc
23. 01:55:495- Add a note with clap like previous mod.
24. 01:55:682 (1) - Remove nc
25. 01:57:370 (4) - Nc
26. 01:58:495- Add note with clap
27. 01:58:682 (1) - Remove nc
28. 02:01:495- Add note with clap
29. 02:06:370 (1) - It will be good if you add a finish here on the start since it's the begining of new chorus.
30. 02:07:495- Add note with clap
31. 02:10:495- ^ , but remove clap on 02:10:682 (3) - start since it's breaking the consistencies.
32. 02:13:495- ^

1. 00:05:995 (1) - Remove the finish please, it's too loud and overused imo.
2. 00:17:245 (5) - I think you can add a new combo here to since it's the beginning of new rythim.
3. 00:32:245 (6,7,8) - Hmm, this jump is not consistant. There's no jump like these in your previous rythim. Even it's playabl, but it can surprise some player. So i think you should ctrl+r 7 and 8 back or make a pattern that doesn't consist jump.
4. 00:41:995 (1,2) - Switch new combos please. Doesn't consistant.
5. 00:47:995 (3) - Hmm, i think you should add clap here too for clap consistencies.
6. 01:00:932 (5,6) - Please don't stack these. It's really hard to read the rythim and doesn't flow well. Also, put 01:01:307 (6) - close to 01:01:495 (1) - so it will not surpise the player with jump.
7. 01:44:057 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Doesn't very good to look at. Maybe this example will help you to improve this pattern > http://puu.sh/xU8m
8. 01:50:995 (2) - Hmm, like previous rythim, add clap at this slider start?
9. 01:53:807- If you do timing point suggestion above, you could add another timing point there to increase the volume back to 80%.
10. 02:07:682 (5) - New combo please, not consistant with your previous combo.
11. 02:10:682 (5) - ^
12. 02:15:932 (5,6) - Again, don't stack this note please. Very hard to read the rythim since it's stacked.

1. 00:20:245 (3) - Please don't make this slider overlap 00:20:620 (4) - . Because of this i thought the end of 00:20:620 (4) - was a circle. It's against rule of ranking because it doesn't have clear path.
2. 00:25:682 (1) - This slider body is really covered by previous combo hitburst. I can't see the slider body clearly unless i use costum skin. Make different pattern please, again, this is against tthe rule
3. 00:27:557 (1,2,3,4) - Why this note is a jump but 00:21:557 (1,2,3,4) - not. At least make it consistant. If you do jump, make rythim like this all jump. It really surprise me when i pass this note because it's have a jump.
4. 00:33:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^
5. 00:42:370 (1) - I think you miss a finish here at slider start.
6. 00:43:870 (1) - ^
7. 00:47:245 (4) - I think it's nice if continue your clap rythim here. So add a clap on this slider start.
8. 00:47:995 (3) - ^
9. 01:32:057- Raise the volume of timing point here by 10% please. It's too low.
10. 01:35:807 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? I don't see any reason on it. Remove it please.
11. 01:40:870 (1) - Hmm, you miss a finish at this slider start again.
12. 01:46:870 (1) - ^
13. 01:44:995 (1) - Very awkward slider. Make like this shape instead > http://puu.sh/xUpC
14. 01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - Stack this properly? Doesn't good to see imo.
15. 01:52:495- Also, raise this timing point by 10% too.
16. 01:54:370- ^
17. 02:02:620 (3) - You miss a clap here at this slider end.
18. 02:18:370 (1) - Remove clap from this spinner. Very loud and awkward to hear. Instead, change the end of this spinner to soft sound with 40% like hard diff.

AoiX wrote:

SPOILER

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
这算填老坑？我来随便打点毛线好了～
·好歹。。。把滑条消音啊 ok
·背景和打毛线大冒险没有任何关系啊

[Chick]
01:18:745 (3) - 反转箭头被部分遮挡http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/330136 fixed
01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - 我觉得这个梗实际效果并不是很好 stack
01:52:682 (1) - 感觉还可以多加几个锚点，更圆润点
Kiai呢？
我觉得音效还有很多可处理的地方，全程用一种音效而且基本只有clap听着会疲劳啊。像00:15:557 (1,2,3,4) 这种地方可以用soft音效配合使用whistle，而像00:51:370 (1,2,3)这种三声“嘿嘿嘿“则可以用finish音效来进行增强

[Hard]
感觉这个难度和chick没多大区别啊，做出点spread撒
02:07:307 (4) - 这个也有点小挡 fixed

[Normal]
N/A

总的说。。。没什么大问题，但是难度分布不太好；音效方面也还需要加工。可以找我代工哦～

Miya wrote:

SPOILER

Hi popner :3

General

1. Not sure with the tittle. Is the tittle just Da Mao Xian or with (Big adventure)? If (Big Adventure) is the translation of Da Mao Xian, then you should remove the (Big adventure) but include it in tags.

Ar3's Normal

1. Since this have become a normal diff, raise the difficulty setting. AR 4, HP and OD 3 is enough imo, and won't change the star rating much higher. ok
2. 00:12:370 (1) - Since it's the opening of new rythim, i think it's good to have a finish on here. ok
3. 00:14:620 (3) - Feel, a bit empty, how about a clap on this slider end? ok
4. 00:24:370 (2) - Add a finish to follow up cymbal on the back? ok
5. 00:25:120 (1) - I think clap on this slider end should be on 00:25:682 (2) - sounds weird
6. 00:29:245 (1) - I think you miss a clap on this slider start. added
7. 00:36:370 (1,3) - Finish on these slider start please. Not consistant with 00:42:370 (2,4) - added
8. 00:51:370 (3) - I think you should add a new combo here, since this is a start of chorus. added
9. 00:53:245 (1) - This new combo doesn't fit the stanza and downbeat. So please remove the new combo. And you should add new combo here 00:54:370 (3) - ok
10. 00:56:245 (1,3) - Same case as ^ ok
11. 00:59:245 (1) - ^ ok
12. 01:03:370 (3) - Same case as ^ so please new combo. ok
13. 01:04:495- Since you suddenly repeat polarity from white to red at 01:04:120 (2,1) - i highly suggest you add a note here since it will help the player to guess the rythim on 01:04:682 (1) - . Don't forget to add clap on this note, since it's very good to hear. ok
14. 01:06:370 (1) - Nc, i won't tell you the reason again. ok
15. 01:07:495- Same case as 01:04:495- ok
16. 01:07:682 (3) - Remove nc ok
17. 01:09:370 (5) - Nc ok
18. 01:10:495- Same as 01:04:495- ok
19. 01:10:682 (1) - Remove nc ok
20. 01:11:995 (1) - Remove nc too. ok
21. 01:45:370 (1,2) - You missing a finish on this two slider start. added
22. 01:54:370 (5) - Nc ok
23. 01:55:495- Add a note with clap like previous mod. added
24. 01:55:682 (1) - Remove nc ok
25. 01:57:370 (4) - Nc ok
26. 01:58:495- Add note with clap
27. 01:58:682 (1) - Remove nc ok
28. 02:01:495- Add note with clap
29. 02:06:370 (1) - It will be good if you add a finish here on the start since it's the begining of new chorus. ok
30. 02:07:495- Add note with clap ok
31. 02:10:495- ^ , but remove clap on 02:10:682 (3) - start since it's breaking the consistencies. ok
32. 02:13:495- ^ ok

Hard

1. 00:05:995 (1) - Remove the finish please, it's too loud and overused imo. ok
2. 00:17:245 (5) - I think you can add a new combo here to since it's the beginning of new rythim. ok
3. 00:32:245 (6,7,8) - Hmm, this jump is not consistant. There's no jump like these in your previous rythim. Even it's playabl, but it can surprise some player. So i think you should ctrl+r 7 and 8 back or make a pattern that doesn't consist jump. hmm..since there are a lot of sliders here, i think it is not so hard
4. 00:41:995 (1,2) - Switch new combos please. Doesn't consistant. it is same as 00:35:995 (1,2)
5. 00:47:995 (3) - Hmm, i think you should add clap here too for clap consistencies. there is no hitsound in music, so i don't want use clap here
6. 01:00:932 (5,6) - Please don't stack these. It's really hard to read the rythim and doesn't flow well. Also, put 01:01:307 (6) - close to 01:01:495 (1) - so it will not surpise the player with jump. ok
7. 01:44:057 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Doesn't very good to look at. Maybe this example will help you to improve this pattern > http://puu.sh/xU8m it is a symmetry of 01:42:745 (1,2,3), though change from sliders to circles
8. 01:50:995 (2) - Hmm, like previous rythim, add clap at this slider start? same as previous one
9. 01:53:807- If you do timing point suggestion above, you could add another timing point there to increase the volume back to 80%. hmm...reorganized all volume
10. 02:07:682 (5) - New combo please, not consistant with your previous combo. fixed
11. 02:10:682 (5) - ^ fixed
12. 02:15:932 (5,6) - Again, don't stack this note please. Very hard to read the rythim since it's stacked. i want to keep this

Chick

1. 00:20:245 (3) - Please don't make this slider overlap 00:20:620 (4) - . Because of this i thought the end of 00:20:620 (4) - was a circle. It's against rule of ranking because it doesn't have clear path. fixed
2. 00:25:682 (1) - This slider body is really covered by previous combo hitburst. I can't see the slider body clearly unless i use costum skin. Make different pattern please, again, this is against tthe rule fixed
3. 00:27:557 (1,2,3,4) - Why this note is a jump but 00:21:557 (1,2,3,4) - not. At least make it consistant. If you do jump, make rythim like this all jump. It really surprise me when i pass this note because it's have a jump. this section is stronger than previous one, so i want to use different patterns
4. 00:33:370 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as ^ ^
5. 00:42:370 (1) - I think you miss a finish here at slider start. added
6. 00:43:870 (1) - ^ added
7. 00:47:245 (4) - I think it's nice if continue your clap rythim here. So add a clap on this slider start. added
8. 00:47:995 (3) - ^ added
9. 01:32:057- Raise the volume of timing point here by 10% please. It's too low. it is same as previous repeat
10. 01:35:807 (1) - What's the point of new combo here? I don't see any reason on it. Remove it please. fixed
11. 01:40:870 (1) - Hmm, you miss a finish at this slider start again. added
12. 01:46:870 (1) - ^ added
13. 01:44:995 (1) - Very awkward slider. Make like this shape instead > http://puu.sh/xUpC ok
14. 01:50:620 (1,2,3,4) - Stack this properly? Doesn't good to see imo. ok
15. 01:52:495- Also, raise this timing point by 10% too.
16. 01:54:370- ^
17. 02:02:620 (3) - You miss a clap here at this slider end. added
18. 02:18:370 (1) - Remove clap from this spinner. Very loud and awkward to hear. Instead, change the end of this spinner to soft sound with 40% like hard diff. ok

Good map. I'm enjoying this. Try to search for 2 more mod then call me back.
Good luck~