7seven wrote:

[Normal]
00:45:847 (5) - 形的に戸惑うかもしれません　 直線スライダーに変更
00:50:347 (2) - add finish　 曲の微妙な波に合わせて現状維持
01:13:597 (1) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/262830　個人的にはこちらのほうが音が取りやすかったです　 fixed
01:32:534 (3) - スタックさせたほうがいいかも？　 スライダーフォローサークルとアプローチサークルが被ってしまうので現状維持
01:55:409 (1) - delete nc　 fixed

[Hard]
00:01:222 - もう少しボリュームを上げてもいいかもしれません。音楽＝効果音だとほとんど聞こえなかったので。　 fixed
00:32:722 (4) - 位置調整したほうがいいかもしれません　 少し上に位置を調節
00:50:347 (2) - 頭にadd fnish　 曲の微妙な波に合わせて現状維持
01:31:597 (1) - この終わりのfinish外して01:32:159 (2) - こちらの頭にfinishを入れたほうが合う気がします　 fixed
02:16:597 (1) - 位置調整したほうがいいかもしれません　 Distanceと位置のバランスを調節

[Insane]
00:01:222 -　Hardと同様　 fixed
00:23:722 (3) - add nc　 fixed
00:24:097 (1) - delete nc　 fixed
01:17:347 (3) - 頭にadd finish　 no change
01:21:097 (4) - ^　 no change
01:52:222 (1) - delete nc　 no change
02:18:847 (3) - 頭にadd finish　 fixed
02:21:847 (3) - ^　 fixed

ModとStarありがとうございます

Alright let's see what I can find. found this through #modreqs

General:
i'm not sure about the filesize. try to keep it under 20mb and also, try to reduce the filesize of the vid.
ooh having a black combo color is unrankable because it's hard to read if the user removes the BG or the video. replace the black combo color for a blue combo color to match the strings i'm guessing that girl is controlling the guy
There's a chunk of kiai time at the end and there's no notes. i'm guessing that you're going for a kiai burst. add another green line beside the starting kiai to do that.

Normal:
00:37:597 (1,2) - I don't like the direction where it's taking because the slider gets in the way. I suggest that you move it here so that the slider doesn't get in the way.
00:39:097 (3,4,1) - try something like this? IMO it looks fun.
01:02:534 (2,3) - this looks clumped up and i don't like the overlapping on this. try to move the sliders around, or flip the sliders to avoid this.
01:19:222 (5) - this looks sort of hidden because the hitburst covers some of it. align it below the slider to make it easier for players to see.
01:38:909 (1) - players might think that this is a circle and not a slider. try to do something easier here.
01:47:909 (1) - ^
01:50:909 (1) - ^
01:53:909 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:01:597 (1) - This slider looks boring because of the number of repeats. try this? IMO it looks fun
02:19:597 (1,2,3,4) - do something easier? players might mess up at this part as they're not used to alternating
02:22:597 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Hard:
I guess it's fine

Insane:
why 1/2? set it to 1/4. i thought some of the notes here are unsnapped.
00:48:847 (3) - i understand the pattern here, the difference is the look of this slider compared to the other one. try to make this slider like (2) so that the pattern will flow properly.
01:27:097 (7) - a NC here because it follows the long pause?
01:42:097 (1,2,3,4) - align this jump pattern properly. the notes are out of place.
02:01:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't understand why the last 3 notes are stacked. i was expecting this to go around in a circle. suggest that you do that. it should look something like this

This is the best I can do. GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. found this through #modreqs

General:
i'm not sure about the filesize. try to keep it under 20mb and also, try to reduce the filesize of the vid. The file size of AVI was lowered however, it is difficult for me to be less than a total of 20 mb. ; ;
ooh having a black combo color is unrankable because it's hard to read if the user removes the BG or the video. replace the black combo color for a blue combo color to match the strings i'm guessing that girl is controlling the guy Changed combo color.
There's a chunk of kiai time at the end and there's no notes. i'm guessing that you're going for a kiai burst. add another green line beside the starting kiai to do that. delete KIAI time

Normal:
00:37:597 (1,2) - I don't like the direction where it's taking because the slider gets in the way. I suggest that you move it here so that the slider doesn't get in the way.　 fixed
00:39:097 (3,4,1) - try something like this? IMO it looks fun.　 no change
01:02:534 (2,3) - this looks clumped up and i don't like the overlapping on this. try to move the sliders around, or flip the sliders to avoid this.　 fixed
01:19:222 (5) - this looks sort of hidden because the hitburst covers some of it. align it below the slider to make it easier for players to see.　 fixed
01:38:909 (1) - players might think that this is a circle and not a slider. try to do something easier here.　 fixed
01:47:909 (1) - ^　 fixed
01:50:909 (1) - ^　 fixed
01:53:909 (1,2,3,4) - ^　 fixed
02:01:597 (1) - This slider looks boring because of the number of repeats. try this? IMO it looks fun This is not changed in order to lower difficulty, since it is immediately after a spinner.
02:19:597 (1,2,3,4) - do something easier? players might mess up at this part as they're not used to alternating　 fixed
02:22:597 (1,2,3,4) - ^　 fixed

Hard:
I guess it's fine

Insane:
why 1/2? set it to 1/4. i thought some of the notes here are unsnapped. fixed
00:48:847 (3) - i understand the pattern here, the difference is the look of this slider compared to the other one. try to make this slider like (2) so that the pattern will flow properly. I do not expect that this pattern differs from other it. ; ;

01:27:097 (7) - a NC here because it follows the long pause?
A pattern will be broken if it is carried out.
01:42:097 (1,2,3,4) - align this jump pattern properly. the notes are out of place. I do not think that this note is unsuitable.
02:01:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i don't understand why the last 3 notes are stacked. i was expecting this to go around in a circle. suggest that you do that. it should look something like this It seems to be the arrangement which is not intuitive.

This is the best I can do. GL

Thanks~

From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

General

[*]kiai-times hav minor difference on Normal, make it the same with the others?
[*]kiai-times should be on downbeat. like 02:01:503

Normal

00:18:097 (1)00:19:597 (2) - - hmmm, this slidertick is toooo loud, which doesn't fit the song here. reduce the volume to 50%. And same solution for others with same situation. actually, to have similar sound effect, I'm more about to suggest blended clap(combine normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap) to you.
00:54:097 (2) - whistle on the beginning

Hard

00:20:722 (3) - http://puu.sh/lI5Y
00:39:472 (2) - no need to force them the same spacing..despite the small spacing change http://puu.sh/lI6r
01:27:097 (4) - this slidertick
01:45:659 (2) - how about move it this here http://puu.sh/lI7l

Insane

01:48:097 (1) - NC here but not 01:47:909 (4) -

well, exceting song
good luck

LKs wrote:

General

[*]kiai-times hav minor difference on Normal, make it the same with the others?　 fixed
[*]kiai-times should be on downbeat. like 02:01:503　 fixed

Normal

00:18:097 (1)00:19:597 (2) - - hmmm, this slidertick is toooo loud, which doesn't fit the song here. reduce the volume to 50%. And same solution for others with same situation. actually, to have similar sound effect, I'm more about to suggest blended clap(combine normal-hitnormal and normal-hitclap) to you.　 fixed
00:54:097 (2) - whistle on the beginning　 fixed

Hard

00:20:722 (3) - http://puu.sh/lI5Ykiai-times hav minor difference on Normal, make it the same with the others?　 fixed
00:39:472 (2) - no need to force them the same spacing..despite the small spacing change http://puu.sh/lI6r　 fixed
01:27:097 (4) - this slidertick　 no change
01:45:659 (2) - how about move it this here http://puu.sh/lI7l　 fixed

Insane

01:48:097 (1) - NC here but not 01:47:909 (4) - 　 fixed

Thanks~

Yo~

Normal
00:28:597 (1,2) - can confuse players :<
01:47:722 (5,1) - looks ugly
01:50:909 (1) - delete nc
01:53:909 (1) - ^
02:01:597 (1) - boooring -_-

Hard
00:44:909 (4,2) - overlap D: looks ugly
00:58:597 (1,2,1) - plays terrible :< maybe try another placing?
01:53:909 (1,2,1,2) - oh God, why? sooo ugly D:
02:24:097 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overuse this slider is a bad idea

Insane
00:02:722 (4) - NC new pattern starts here
00:05:722 (7,1,2,3,4) - place them in another way, too boring
00:16:597 (1,2,1,2) - re-shape this sliders, please
00:23:159 (2) - should starts at 00:23:347
00:25:597 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more jumps! bigger distance

Nice map
Good luck

-Bakari- wrote:

Normal
00:28:597 (1,2) - can confuse players :<　 I cannot think that this makes it get confused.
01:47:722 (5,1) - looks ugly　 fixed
01:50:909 (1) - delete nc Since a pattern changes, it does not change.
01:53:909 (1) - ^ 　 ^
02:01:597 (1) - boooring -_-　 no change

Hard
00:44:909 (4,2) - overlap D: looks ugly　 no change
00:58:597 (1,2,1) - plays terrible :< maybe try another placing?　 fixed
01:53:909 (1,2,1,2) - oh God, why? sooo ugly D:　 fixed
02:24:097 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - overuse this slider is a bad idea　 no change

Insane
00:02:722 (4) - NC new pattern starts here　 fixed
00:05:722 (7,1,2,3,4) - place them in another way, too boring　 no change
00:16:597 (1,2,1,2) - re-shape this sliders, please　 no change
00:23:159 (2) - should starts at 00:23:347　 no change
00:25:597 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - more jumps! bigger distance
I think that this balance is excellent. Therefore, this does not change. However, if other persons say it, it may change.

Thanks!

Helloooo, my way of saying thanks for modding Ascension o/

Nice mapset, good luck.

Bobo wrote:

Helloooo, my way of saying thanks for modding Ascension o/

[General]

Your map is 20.3mb, I think the allowed limit is 20mb Capacity of a video is made smaller.

[Insane]

00:10:222 - Add a note here or give (4) a slider repeat. Since it is making on the basis of vocal, it does not change.
00:36:097 (1) - Take advice from a guy who uses this technique a lot, increase the slider velocity using an inheriting section to make the slider fit over (4) better.
00:36:659 (2) - Stack with the endpoint of (1)　 no change
00:47:909 (4) - Try to place less notes here, you're milking it..　 no change
00:54:097 (1,2,3) - Make symmetry with the x axis.　 fixed
00:55:597 (1) - 3 grids left.　 fixed
01:01:222 (3) - Stack with the startpoint of (1).　 no change
01:03:659 (2) - Vertical flip.　 no change
01:04:222 (3) - Stack with the startpoint of (1).　 no change
02:02:347 (4,5,6) - Make it a smaller pattern of (1,2,3) I wanted to change a pattern according to vocal.

[Hard]

00:07:222 (1) - Doesn't sound right :l　 fixed
00:10:222 - Add a note here or give (4) a slider. Since it is making on the basis of vocal, it does not change.
00:45:659 (2,3) - 7 grids down.　 fixed
01:27:097 (4) - Your slidertick hitsound sounds off　 fixed

[Normal]

00:28:597 (1) - Players of this level tend to let go after one slider repeat.　 changed
01:14:909 (2) - Delete this.　 fixed

Try to avoid using more than 1 slider repeat and 1/2 tapping in the easiest diff.

Thanks mod~

Mostly hitsound mods


~Normal~
00:10:597 (1) - use soft-hitsound
00:25:597 (1) - add finish at the start
00:28:597 (1) - ^
00:33:847 (4) - add finish at the end
00:45:847 (5) - ^
00:49:597 (1,3,4) - remove finish
01:21:097 - no notes here ?
01:21:378 - 2 unused timing sections
01:25:597 (2) - remove finish at the end
01:30:659 (1) - ^
01:37:597 (1) - remove finish
01:40:972 (5) - add finish at the end
01:49:597 (1) - remove finish
01:52:597 (1) - ^
01:53:722 (2) - add finish
02:16:597 (1) - remove finish
02:18:097 (1) - ^
02:19:597 (1) - ^
02:20:347 (2) - remove finish at the start, add finish at the end

~Hard~
00:13:597 (1) - start on 00:13:960 looks better
00:25:597 (1,2,1) - add finish at the start
00:27:847 (2) - add finish at the start & the end
00:45:847 (3) - add finish at the end
00:49:597 (1) - remove finish
00:51:097 (1,2) - ^
01:04:222 (2) - add finish at the start
01:22:222 (4) - add finish
01:25:597 (2) - remove finish at the end
01:37:597 (1) - remove finish
01:41:534 (8) - add finish at the end
01:49:597 (1) - remove finish
01:52:597 (3) - ^
01:53:722 (4) - add finish
02:20:347 (2) - add finish at the end

~Insane~
00:13:597 (1) - start on 00:13:960 looks better
00:19:409 (4) - move down 3 grids (tiny)
00:46:222 (5) - add finish at the start
00:51:097 (1,3) - remove finish
01:04:222 (3) - add finish
01:22:222 (6) - ^
01:26:347 (5) - remove finish
01:31:222 (10) - ^
01:37:597 (1) - ^
01:39:097 (3) - ^
01:40:972 (9) - add finish at the end
01:49:597 (1) - remove finish
01:51:096 (3) - ^
01:52:222 (1,2) - ^
01:53:722 (3) - add finish at the end
02:20:722 (4) - add finish at the start

thanks

DJPop wrote:

~Hard~
00:13:597 (1) - start on 00:13:960 looks better

~Insane~
00:13:597 (1) - start on 00:13:960 looks better

All others fixed.

Since the start timing of the contents of indication is unknown, these two are suspended.

You said things except those 2 spinners are fixed, but some of them are still unchanged.


~Normal~
01:37:597 (1) - remove finish
01:40:972 (5) - add finish at the end
01:49:597 (1) - remove finish
01:52:597 (1) - ^

~Hard~
01:25:597 (2) - remove finish
01:53:722 (4) - add finish

~Insane~
01:37:597 (1) - remove finish
01:39:097 (3) - ^

DJPop wrote:

You said things except those 2 spinners are fixed, but some of them are still unchanged.

Oops
I am sorry, it had missed.
It fixed altogether this time.

DJPop wrote:

Bubble

Thanks!!!

random bubble check, and

I think you need to increase stack leniency in all diffs
or plz use manually stack at:

[Hard]
00:44:159 (2,3) -
00:45:659 (2,3) -
01:04:034 (1,2) -
01:23:722 (2,3) -
01:25:222 (1,2) -
01:26:722 (3,4) -
01:28:034 (5,6) -
01:30:472 (5,6) -
01:37:222 (5,1) -
02:09:659 (2,3) -
02:10:409 (4,1) -
02:11:159 (2,3) -

[Insane]
00:41:159 (2,3) -
00:41:909 (4,1) -
00:42:659 (2,3) -
00:44:159 (2,3) -
01:23:159 (2,3) -
01:38:159 (2,3) -
01:40:784 (8,9) -
02:02:597 (5,6,7) -

stack leniency 0.2 is rankble ONLY if you use manually stack to make sure there aren't notes totally overlapped
fixed and call me back :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

I think you need to increase stack leniency in all diffs
or plz use manually stack at:

ok
All stack leniency was changed into 0.7.

ok, fine now
rebubbled

thank you~

one month after last post O.O



edit : Ranked!

Tamayura~ <3
gratz~ :3

おめでとう!

やったーーおめでとう！

congrats new ruler

おめでとー

おめでとうございます～

おめでとう！

おめですヾ(ﾟ∞ﾟ)ﾉ

Thanks~ ><
ありがとうー

I love this song o3o !
Congratz.

おめでとう。　

congratz first ranked~

oh damn 1st ranked map. congratz

おめでとうございます～！

yattane

Congrats your 1st ranked map~

おめでとー！

おめでとうございます！

Congrats your 1st ranked!

Congratz~