1. Try to use some whistle in here. Like Winber's difficulty more better imo
2. 00:10:298 (1) - don't put the note in center of spinner. That will overlap with hitbursh.png after spinning finished. That's not easier read by newbie players
3. 00:30:690 (4) - use normal hitsound for this one? For consistency hitsounding
4. 00:56:572 (4) - I think add finish sound in slider's beginning is not bad too
5. 01:00:494 (1) - same as 00:10:298

1. Rename this osu file in folder, when I editing that displayed like %28TV Size%29 %28.....blah blah lol
2. I think fine in here

1. AR +1? Seems better fine imo
2. 00:05:396 (4) - add whistle in slider's beginning? I think the piano sound is supporting this
3. 00:45:592 (2) - add finish in slider's beginning? more give better effect with the song
4. 00:46:180 (3) - same as above

1. HP +1? seems more better I think
2. 00:00:886 (5) - add new combo?
3. 00:05:396 (6) - add whistle in slider's beginning? same reason with 00:05:396 (4) in Weezy's Hard
4. 00:16:376 (2) - same as above, but in here the reason is heard too silent in here
5. 00:17:945 (4) - here same as above
6. 00:20:690 (1) - same think as 00:10:298 (1) in Easy difficulty
7. 00:26:768 (3) - add whistle?
8. 00:33:239 (1) - same think as 00:10:298 (1) in Easy difficulty
9. 00:43:043 (4) - why not stack it with (3)'s tail, I think same with 00:40:690 (5,1)
10. 00:45:592 (1,2) - just my suggestion, try to add finish in slider's beginning? more giving better effect when play
11. I think you need learn how to make some slider art. you slider seems not tidy to me, but whatever :3/ *ah in easy too

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi mod by request via mod queue omg this song again XD

Easy

1. Try to use some whistle in here. Like Winber's difficulty more better imo no because it'd sound weird if i do that.
2. 00:10:298 (1) - don't put the note in center of spinner. That will overlap with hitbursh.png after spinning finished. That's not easier read by newbie players Alright Fixed.
3. 00:30:690 (4) - use normal hitsound for this one? For consistency hitsounding then that would ruin the consistency i'm following. every normal hitsound on the first downbeat.
4. 00:56:572 (4) - I think add finish sound in slider's beginning is not bad too i was thinking about this. alright.
5. 01:00:494 (1) - same as 00:10:298 Fixed.

Insane

1. HP +1? seems more better I think no i don't want to make other players fail that easily.
2. 00:00:886 (5) - add new combo? it'd look odd if i do that.
3. 00:05:396 (6) - add whistle in slider's beginning? same reason with 00:05:396 (4) in Weezy's Hard then that would ruin the consistency i'm following.
4. 00:16:376 (2) - same as above, but in here the reason is heard too silent in here no i want to keep this part silent because the singer's vocals are low. i don't want to use the hitsounds here besides the normal hitsounds which is following the drums because it'd be too loud
5. 00:17:945 (4) - here same as above ^
6. 00:20:690 (1) - same think as 00:10:298 (1) in Easy difficulty alright i moved the pattern up.
7. 00:26:768 (3) - add whistle? alright i see what you're following.
8. 00:33:239 (1) - same think as 00:10:298 (1) in Easy difficulty same as 00:20:690
9. 00:43:043 (4) - why not stack it with (3)'s tail, I think same with 00:40:690 (5,1) ooh good point. fixed.
10. 00:45:592 (1,2) - just my suggestion, try to add finish in slider's beginning? more giving better effect when play Fixed.
11. I think you need learn how to make some slider art. you slider seems not tidy to me, but whatever :3/ *ah in easy too

That's all
Good luck (:

Nymph wrote:

I really think the sliderslide is pretty for this song, so I may suggest a silence one, at least for some part of the music, especially at the beginning.

Nymph wrote:

Weezy's Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:08:141 (1) - this slider feels very far away from the center... not very comfortable to hit, so maybe using CTRL+R? (although this is just suggestion) Naw, centering it is like a normal/easy diff.
00:09:513 (1) - this timing section after here is not snapped well, I don't know if it is on purpose but just give a remind here, because I think soft finish is much better for the normal finish you were using here, so I guess maybe this is a timing section snapped error. Did this on purpose and not changing it! like it the way it is

Hitsound
00:33:239 (1,2,3,4) - I think it is not very good to use claps at here, just feel it is better to use claps after the kiai, gives me a better feeling for transition, just suggestion. Its a build up to kiai time, and claps work great here
01:11:866 (4) - same as I said in the normal diff, maybe silence the end of this slider? *points to wimber's response

LKs wrote:

Weezy's Hard

Consider HPD-1, it's same with Insane Sine you suggested AR to go up 1 which i do agree on, I find it that the HP will be too low if i did this
AR+1 too Done
00:05:396 (4) - whistle at start of slider Done
00:35:003 (2) - unify to use clap like 00:37:749 (1) Done
00:36:572 (2) - ^
00:47:552 (2) - ^
00:49:121 (2) - ^
00:57:749 - missing a note with clap here Done


SV is kinda fast for a Hard difficulty I totally disagree.

Yasora-chan wrote:

Weezy's Hard

1. AR +1? Seems better fine imo Already changed
2. 00:05:396 (4) - add whistle in slider's beginning? I think the piano sound is supporting this Aldready changed
3. 00:45:592 (2) - add finish in slider's beginning? more give better effect with the song Nope the finishes fill too forced, and right now it makes a build up for the next combo
4. 00:46:180 (3) - same as above Same as above

Leorda wrote:

Hello there

Easy
00:10:298 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu in gameplay. This makes hidden for beginners
00:34:611 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. Could be hidden for beginners

Nice work~

Leorda wrote:

Cheezy's Weezy's Hard
00:08:141 (1) - The repeating slider is covered by spinner-osu fixed
Nice work~

Leorda wrote:

Winber1's Normal
00:21:278 (3) - Remove 1 repeating slider? no sorry
00:33:435 (1) - The sliderbody is covered by hitbursts and spinner-osu. This could be hard to read for beginner who play this fixed
01:11:866 (3) - The head slider is overlapped by spinner-osu in gameplay. This makes hidden for beginners god these spinners are annoying. Tried to fix. I kinda failed to fix it. Whatever. I think it's fine anyways lolllll

TheVileOne wrote:

General

Inherited sections seem to be off by 1ms. Move them all back by 1.
Preview time is also off. It should be 34610 in all difficulties.

for now i'll keep it. if someone else suggests the same thing, then i'll change it.


Insane

00:24:023 (2) - Move the last move point sligghtly down to line it up with the next slider. adjusted properly
00:54:611 (1,2) - This just doesn't sound like a jump IMO. How about this instead?
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273984 Fixed.
00:58:533 (3,4) - Perhaps line up slightly better? nope this is intentional.



Well made right off the bat.

TheVileOne wrote:

Hard

Nothing serious, feel free to not consider it
00:25:788 (2) - This slider looks out of place. changed a tad bit
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/273966 (This seems like a better option)
00:27:356 (5) - Perhaps not as important, but for consistency, consider changing this one as well.
00:35:984 (1) - I just don't like this... again changed a bit but not a big change, i like it

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.


[Insane]
Insane diff should include at least some sv change. 01:00:101's a good place to slow down. no but i think 2454 is a place to slow down since it follows the piano.
00:20:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make this pentagram regular. Start with one, then rotate the next one 144 degrees about playfield centre. Repeat. Then reposition. i don't see a problem with this. i think it looks fine as it is.
01:16:376 (4) - Add whistle at head nope the clap is already there. it'd sound weird if i add both the clap and whistle here.
01:25:592 (2) - Add whistle no. i made this a normal sampleset because it's following the drums. IMO the normal whistle wouldn't fit with this part.

Good luck :3

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[Weezy's Hard]
00:50:298 (1,2) - Make these two have rotational symmetry; right now it looks awkward. Do it like you did with 01:16:964 (1,3) -
guess u modded this before the update....

Good luck :3

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[General]
uh.. I think you need find a better video, I think the original one is 16:9.. the one you using is 4:3 now, looks really weird sorry this is the best video i can find for this song.

[Easy]
why not use custom hitsounds, the slider is too noisy to me.. that's because Weezy's using them.
and I suggest turn all normal hitsound timing section's volume down a bit, the normal-hitnormal sound too loudAlright reduced to 50%
hitsound is really odd to me in this diff, I suggest to remap hitsound on this diff I made a few changes to the hitsounds.
rhyme and patterns are fine o.o

[Insane]
HD+1, it is now kinda low as an Insane diff imo I swear i thought i changed that. fixed.
00:00:886 - add newcombo, cuz the spacing is changed but rhyme is same as before, newcombo can make it easier to read ohh i see. alright then.
00:09:317 - add note here, I think here really need something to follow the music nope since Weezy doesn't have the a circle i'm not gonna do the same thing.
00:30:690 - add newcombo, or this pattern is really too hard to read no because the lyrics don't change. i'm following the combo through vocals and instrumental.
00:47:160 (1) - I suggest stack it on 00:47:062 (4) - , or it looks weird when playing.. alright, it felt kind of weird when i played this.
01:05:200 (6) - move this sldier to 01:05:003 - and add a note at 01:05:592 - , sound/play much better fixed but i added a 1/2 slider at 01:05:592 to follow the vocals accurately.
01:06:572 (2,3) - ^, yep, just do something like this

Easy and Insane need some more work imo
good luck o.o/

meiikyuu wrote:

hey sorry for the lateness ~ pls ignore if u don't like :d


Insane
00:09:513 (5) - this location is a bit odd for me? when it's touching the yellow slider and all, etc. xD maybe u can move it a bit. nothing serious though alright i'll move it a bit.
00:26:768 (3) - NC no then the combo would be too short from (1,2), and plus i'm following the instrumental, not the vocals.
00:47:160 (5) - remove NC nope following the drums.


i liked the hitsounds ~ good luck why ty <3

wcx19911123 wrote:

[Winber1's Normal]
00:33:435 - the normal-whistle sound kinda odd to me, maybe just me..
00:42:062 - remove newcombo plz, I don't know why you leave a lonely combo at 00:41:474 - i'm just emphasizing the background vocals? i think it's fine.
00:43:631 - ^
00:54:611 - ^
00:56:180 - ^
01:21:278 - ^
01:22:847 - ^
nice diff o.o

SapphireGhost wrote:

If this gets bubbled, please instantly PM me about it. Gotta keep the combo going.

yes

wcx19911123 wrote:

from my queue

[Weezy's Hard]
00:28:141 - add note o.o? Naw, doesn't flow to my liking
01:26:376 - I suggest add note here with finish, and spinner start at 01:26:474 - . sound/play much better imo Done

meiikyuu wrote:

Hard
00:58:141 (1) - add clap? Doesn't fit right
01:23:827 (4) - make this the same slider shape as 3? it flows better imo It is, its just rotated

ertyukjh010 wrote:

Hello, Byakugan249

[Easy]

00:31:474 (1) - The spinner length is too short, this will lead to new players do not have enough time to rotate, also make it easier to miss. Please increase the length of the spinner or other instead. alright did something else.
00:45:592 - Useless inherited point oops forgot to remove that. fixed.


That all

winber1 wrote:

I don't know if Byakugan changed the inherited timings or not, but right those inherited timing points that you listed don't even exist lol.

Lolicore Flandre wrote:

Love this song, hope it gets ranked :3/

1. I've seen you used normal hitsound to fit drum sound at the beginning, but why not keep doing so in the last part? Such as 00:24:807 (2) slider end, 00:26:376 (2) - and so on..

1. 00:03:827 (9) - (nazi)Move this 3-4 tick down looked more pretty, for a better curve, you know
   Yours:
   
   My thought
   
2. Well, in other diff they both used normal hitsound to fit drum sound like 00:12:258 (1), 00:15:396 (6) or so, so maybe use normal hitsound for these for a coconsistency? Still depends on yourself
3. 00:45:592 (2,3) - Add finish to slider head sounds nice
4. 00:56:572 (3) - ^

1. 00:55:003 (2) - Add a finish here sounds nice
2. 00:56:572 (3) - ^, if you do so, better to remove whistle
3. 01:11:474 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use normal hitsound for all these notes seems fit music more, yea just like you do to 01:25:592 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10)

Breeze wrote:

[Easy]

1. I've seen you used normal hitsound to fit drum sound at the beginning, but why not keep doing so in the last part? Such as 00:24:807 (2) slider end, 00:26:376 (2) - and so on.. trust me, i've tried that and i find the normal hit finish unfitting to the song.

[Insane]

1. 00:55:003 (2) - Add a finish here sounds nice alright. it matches with the instrumental after all.
2. 00:56:572 (3) - ^, if you do so, better to remove whistle i don't remember adding a whistle here at all. oh well fixed.
3. 01:11:474 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Use normal hitsound for all these notes seems fit music more, yea just like you do to 01:25:592 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10)

hmm sure. i find it unfitting at 1st. i also gave some thought into this, until you came along.

NoHitter wrote:

From my queue (Sorry it took so long.)

[General]
Is it just me, or do some of the background images look stretched? it's just you i guess. i don't see any of the BGs stretched.

[Easy]
00:00:102 -> 00:07:945 - The hitsounds at this part sounds very loud. I suggest lowering the volume to 30% or 40%. hmm alright. 40%.


[Insane]
00:00:102 -> 00:07:945 - The hitsounds at this part sounds very loud. I suggest lowering the volume to 30% or 40%. same as easy.
00:05:396 (6) - IMO this slider should end at 00:05:984. I don't hear any beat at 00:05:788. well yes that's true but the slidertick wouldn't fit with this part so that's why i made this a 1/1 slider.
00:09:513 (5) - Kind of unsure with this sudden anti-jump. The spacing of 00:08:141 (1,2,3,4) is similar to the spacing of this note.
00:30:298 (1,2,3,4,5) - I suggest you change this pattern. The current one doesn't play that well. well so much for my new mapping style . alright did something else.
00:41:474 (1) - You should remove new combo here. For consistency with 00:54:023 (6) and 00:55:592 (5).
00:43:043 (1) - Same as above. oh wow...alright then.
00:46:768 (1) - Remove new combo. IMO too soon for a new combo. i made this a NC because i want this to follow the drums. i'd remove the NC if the vocals are still going, but there's a sudden pause during the song.
01:11:474 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - You could arrange this into a better pattern like this maybe? i hope i did it right...fixed.
01:19:905 (5) - IMO don't overlap this with 01:19:121 (3). Looks bad aesthetically. i knew someone would say this. fixed.
01:26:474 (1) - Whistle sounds noisy IMO. Remove it. i disagree. it'd sound empty without a whistle here.

NoHitter wrote:

[Winber1's Normal]
Good difficulty!
00:02:062 (4) - If you're to follow the rhythm set by 00:00:886 (2,3), then this note should be moved 1/2 backwards to 00:01:866. i guess. I actually originally didn't want a 3/2 rest there, but I used that sort of rhythm a lot later on anyways lol. changed
00:41:474 (1) - Remove new combo? Unneeded IMO. to be honest i really like that new combo actually . I'm consistent with it at least. I would like to keep it unless it really causes a big problem
00:43:043 (1) - Same as above.
00:54:023 (1) - Same as above.
00:55:592 (1) - Same as above.
01:20:494 (1) - Same as above.
01:22:258 (1) - Same as above.

1. I firstly found that BG pics look weird and I got the original pics later on.
   It's obvious that you compressed this pic wrongly(aspect ratio) I guess the rest of BGs have same problem so please re-cut them correctly.
2. offest 92

LKs wrote:

From wmf's queue

[General]

1. I firstly found that BG pics look weird and I got the original pics later on.
   It's obvious that you compressed this pic wrongly(aspect ratio) I guess the rest of BGs have same problem so please re-cut them correctly. i don't see that at all. when it comes to finding BGs and resizing them, i'm really bad at that.
2. offest 92 yup it works fixed. it sounded a bit too early after all.

[Easy]

00:15:788 (1,2) - Don't appreciate you used 2 random sliders but not copy&paste and rotating hmm alright. whenever i do 2 sliders that look the same, i tried to make them the same by hand. doing the copy and paste shows that i'm a lazy mapper.
00:37:749 (1) - http://puu.sh/BPdx
01:09:121 (3) - http://puu.sh/BPec hint: look at the small delta-shaped region shaped by the curve and the center node. try to make it a equilateral triangle when mapping to get a symmetrical slider. Alright just to make it nice.


[Insane]

hmm, sorry 249 this diff is not that decent in all aspects. I think you lack an aesthetic sense, musicality, and flow sense. Sry this sounds hurtful but I've to point out the fact and in this way can you improve your skills. which is why i posted this on wmf's queue. ik that it isn't ready for a bubble but I wanted to find ways on how to improve my mapping style. after seeing my 1st ranked map, it played horribly, so the reason i mapped this is because i want to try out my new mapping style. i wanted advice from an experienced modder before i can ask non-BAT/MAT modders. if you notice from my other posts, there were 2 MATs well 5 including you but they or you weren't a MAT at the time. and a BAT that modded this. i was expecting advice on how to make my diffs better, but they gave me a list of suggestions. ik that's the point in modding, but if they gave me advice, that'll make improve in mapping. since you gave me advice, i can ask non-MAT/BAT modders to mod this map.

Before mapping, consider: whether a circle/slider is needed here; on earth use a 1/1 slider or two circles when confront different conditions; mapping symmetrical patterns instead of random arrangement; using resonable spacing changes; 00:13:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is a line(?) fits good here; 00:20:690 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - is this pentagon perfect http://puu.sh/BPns

I can't pick all issues out, good luck 249. I know you've been a hardworking and not bad modder :3

00:00:102 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
00:50:298 (1,2,3) -
00:09:905 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
00:46:768 (1,2,3,4,1) -

LKs wrote:

[Weezy's Hard]

00:21:866 (8,1,2) - they look so twisted. I'd suggest http://puu.sh/BPhW
01:18:337 (1) - http://puu.sh/BPiJ Whats to change here :S

Cilvery wrote:

Hi~ <request from my queue>

[Easy]
00:00:092 - 1grid right it'll be at the middle, but it won't make a difference during gameplay.

01:01:268 - add whistle Sure it matches with the instrumental.

01:02:444 - ^ there's a normal hit-hitsound so it'll sounn bad if i do this.

01:29:111 - remove whistle no this whistle shows that the song is over. it'll sound empty if there's no whistle on the spinner.


[Insane]
01:01:268 - remove finish with add whistle Did this...

01:01:660 - add whistle didnt do this becuase of the normal hit-hitsound.

01:02:052 - ^ did this.

01:02:444 - ^ same as 01:01:660.

01:24:797 - add finish there's no cymbals in this part. just the drums so no.
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good luck!!

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

>>Aoi's Mod

default=suggestion||bold=notice||red+bold=unrankable
General

1. BGx4 not in right scale....use this:http://puu.sh/CJDo Hurray ty

Insane

1. 00:03:425 (3,4) - remove note.they're no meaning listen again. it follows the instrumental if you listen carefully.
2. 00:15:778 (1) - reduce volume of this finish sound alright 50%
3. 00:20:680 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - the pattern looks bad.use "Create Polygon Circle" to make a better one nuh uh. the thing is i always do my star patterns by hand and i want to make it as perfect as possible. i always want to do something myself. i don't want a program to do all the work for me.
4. 00:33:229 (1) - ^ ^
5. 00:37:739 (1) - remove finish.it sounds so strange Alright i'll replace it for a whistle.
6. 00:50:288 (1) - ^ ^
7. 01:11:660 (5,6,7) - [Nazi](5,7) 1grid up;(6) 2grid up.let them follow the border of (2) ahh i see. fixed.
8. 01:25:582 (2) - I suggest a new combo here for now i'll keep it. i want to hear other modders' opinions about this.

Easy

1. 01:05:974 (1,2) - overlap of border looks bad.make (2) one grid up Adjusted properly.

Snowy Dream wrote:

Mod request from Snowy Dream's Request
-------------------------------------------------
[General]
Offset: 111-113 plz!
Yours is wrong :<
nope that's incorrect. it sounded too late for me.

[Insane]
00:24:405 (3) - spacing ik that but this is intentional. i want
00:42:837 (4,5) - ctrl+r? alright. since i did a jump on the combo, i need to be consistent with this one as well.
--------------------------------------------------
OK that's all
Wonderful Mapset
Good Luck :3

1. What's the point of soul in Sekai taiko diff? It's better to use word that show the difficulty of than using random word, like oni or muzukashi.

1. 00:13:425 (3) - This combo is more longer than your other combo, i think you can add a new combo in this circle to reduce the combo size.
2. 00:18:915 (3) - ^
3. 00:34:601 (1) - There should be a clap/normal hitsound/whistle on this slider repeat to cover up the drum sounds from the music. It's not same with 00:47:150 (1,3) -
4. 00:36:170 (2) - ^
5. 01:00:484 (1) - This circle should be on 01:00:876- instead since the drum sounds i on that time. Being at this time is not follow anything and it's not consistant with your next normal hitsounds rythim.
6. 01:23:229 (1) - I hear a cymbal sounds at this slider end, so a finish sounds will fit there.

1. 00:04:601- How about adding a circle here? It's follow the piano better imo.
2. 00:21:268 (3) - A normal player wouldn't expect this slider to have 2nd repeat since you just use 1 repeat at this sider 00:20:680 (2) - . This can be confusing to normal player. You should reduce the number of repeat then add a circle on this time 00:21:856- for easier gameplay.
3. 00:57:935 (1) - Overused clap sounds imo. It's better to remove it.
4. 00:58:915 (3) - ^ at the slider end.
5. 01:06:954 (2) - It's better to add a finish sounds here at the end of slider to follow up your previous finish rythim.
6. 01:20:091 (5) - A finish sounds will be good here since there is a cymbal sounds from the music.
7. 01:24:601 (1) - Overused clap soud agian imo. Better to remove it.

1. 01:13:817 (1) - A finish sounds at this slider start is really fit with the beginning of new rythim from the song.

1. 00:09:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm sure you can add a couple of whistle to make hitsounds more interesting.
2. 00:13:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you can map this to better pattern rather and rythim than just 1/1 jumpy notes. A couple of 1/2 slider and 1/2 circle is more interesting than just a 1/1 circle spam. Oh yeah, don't forget to add some whistle too if you follow my suggestion above.
3. 00:15:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^
4. 00:44:993 (7) - Hmm, can make this slider more blanket so it will be like this > ? Also, this slider is too low. Maybe you can move this pattern 00:43:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit up so this slider can be higher a bit.
5. 01:11:954 (8,9) - Move 8 to 196,260 and 9 to 184,224 so this stream 01:11:464 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - will be more symetrical.
6. 01:24:797 (1) - A soft finish sounds will be nice if you placed here at the slider start since in this time there is a cymbal sounds.

Miya wrote:

Random checking from #modreqs :3

Easy

1. 00:13:425 (3) - This combo is more longer than your other combo, i think you can add a new combo in this circle to reduce the combo size. sure just for that, not to mention it also follows the instrumental.
2. 00:18:915 (3) - ^ ^
3. 00:34:601 (1) - There should be a clap/normal hitsound/whistle on this slider repeat to cover up the drum sounds from the music. It's not same with 00:47:150 (1,3) - i think the finish is loud enough to cover up the drums in this part.
4. 00:36:170 (2) - ^ ^
5. 01:00:484 (1) - This circle should be on 01:00:876- instead since the drum sounds i on that time. Being at this time is not follow anything and it's not consistant with your next normal hitsounds rythim. alright. i thought it'd be a good idea if i add that circle to follow the small clash in the cymbals, but the drums sounds loud enough, so i'm moving it there.
6. 01:23:229 (1) - I hear a cymbal sounds at this slider end, so a finish sounds will fit there. orz you have good ears. fixed.

Weez's Hard

1. 01:13:817 (1) - A finish sounds at this slider start is really fit with the beginning of new rythim from the song. since Weez told me to do this, fixed.

Insane

1. 00:09:895 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm sure you can add a couple of whistle to make hitsounds more interesting. no i made this part with no hitsounds because it represents the introduction to the song. the beginning is the sneak peek of what you're gonna see in the map.
2. 00:13:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Maybe you can map this to better pattern rather and rythim than just 1/1 jumpy notes. A couple of 1/2 slider and 1/2 circle is more interesting than just a 1/1 circle spam. Oh yeah, don't forget to add some whistle too if you follow my suggestion above. no if i change this, i'm gonna have to do the same thing to 01:01:268. after giving some thought, i'm gonna change it up.
3. 00:15:778 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ again this part has no hitsounds besides the finish because it represents the introduction to the map.
4. 00:44:993 (7) - Hmm, can make this slider more blanket so it will be like this > ? Also, this slider is too low. Maybe you can move this pattern 00:43:621 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - a bit up so this slider can be higher a bit. hmm? please show me a screenshot so that i can understand a lot better.
5. 01:11:954 (8,9) - Move 8 to 196,260 and 9 to 184,224 so this stream 01:11:464 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - will be more symetrical. (8) is already there, but if i move (9) to the left, the symmetrical shape will be gone. i'm guessing that this is what you suggested, but this is mine. you may not see a difference, but look at the gap between (9,2), i'm trying to make the gap equal to (3).
6. 01:24:797 (1) - A soft finish sounds will be nice if you placed here at the slider start since in this time there is a cymbal sounds. added a finish but keeping the normal hit-hitsound. yes it matches the cymbals, but i added the normal hit-hitsound to cover up the drums in the song.

Allright, it seems you work very hard on this map 249. Feel free to call me again whenever you ready

Miya wrote:

Winber1's Normal

1. 00:04:601- How about adding a circle here? It's follow the piano better imo. meh, idk i like it like that some reason
2. 00:21:268 (3) - A normal player wouldn't expect this slider to have 2nd repeat since you just use 1 repeat at this sider 00:20:680 (2) - . This can be confusing to normal player. You should reduce the number of repeat then add a circle on this time 00:21:856- for easier gameplay. your suggestion would make it harder to read for a beginner imo since it adds more notes and crowds the playfield a little bit more. I had realized this, and I decided this was the best way without having to change the rhythm of what I mapped. To be honest I wouldn't expect a beginner to think that if the previous slider had 1 repeat, then this would therefore have 1 repeat as well. And if the beginner actually DOES realize that, I would also assume he/she would be to good enough to also realize the spacing between this note and the next long slider. So basically, I think it's fine
3. 00:57:935 (1) - Overused clap sounds imo. It's better to remove it. i guess.
4. 00:58:915 (3) - ^ at the slider end. im keeping this one.
5. 01:06:954 (2) - It's better to add a finish sounds here at the end of slider to follow up your previous finish rythim.ok. and it's spelled rhythm**
6. 01:20:091 (5) - A finish sounds will be good here since there is a cymbal sounds from the music. no, doesn't really make sense since I have another finish right afterwards
7. 01:24:601 (1) - Overused clap soud agian imo. Better to remove it. i guess

1. 00:33:425 (1) - I think finish here at the start of the slider is very loud and not good to hear imo. It's better to remove it.
2. Are you forget to update winber diff 249? All my previous mod is not fix here >.<

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13:15 <Byakugan249> : miya do you mind if i can send my map through forum pming?
13:15 <Miya> : send your map?
13:16 <Byakugan249> : check my soul?
13:16 <Miya> : oh, let''s do it now if you don't mind after i fixing short ver stuff
13:16 <Byakugan249> : IRC?
13:17 <Miya> : if you don't mind
13:17 <Byakugan249> : alright then
13:18 <Byakugan249> : let me know when you're ready
13:18 <Miya> : alright
13:35 <Miya> : alright, i'm done with short ver stuff
13:39 <Miya> : 249? you there?
13:39 <Byakugan249> : yea im here
13:41 <Miya> : wait i'm eating ice cream first
13:41 <Byakugan249> : ahh it's summer so ok
13:51 <Miya> : alright, done
13:51 <Miya> : the ice cream was delicious
13:52 <Byakugan249> : what flavour?
13:52 <Miya> : vanilla and chocolate :3
13:52 <Byakugan249> : mou~
13:52 <Miya> :
13:53 <Miya> : start with easy >.<
13:53 <Byakugan249> : alrighty
13:53 <Miya> : 00:34:601 (1,2) - i'm still want to make this consistent with later part
13:53 <Miya> : so put 00:34:601 (1) - whistle at the repeat
13:53 <Byakugan249> : oh umm i did that because it's the introduction to the kiai
13:53 <Miya> : 00:36:170 (2) - move whistle from startpoint to repeat
13:54 <Miya> : but still it's not consistant to your later part
13:54 <Byakugan249> : which is why i want to make it a bit harder as it progresses
13:55 <Byakugan249> : IMO doing the same pattern would be boring so i want to change my pattern up
13:55 <Byakugan249> : but i applied the whistle
13:56 <Miya> : okay then. it's not major problem
13:56 <Miya> : 01:11:072 (1,2,3) - how about use normal hitsound in this note with increased volume gradually?
13:57 <Miya> : i think it's more fit with the song
13:57 <Byakugan249> : it'd sound awkward for me. i focus on consistency more than the song itself
13:57 <Miya> : o.o
13:57 <Miya> : you said consistencies but you make previous part not consistent :/
13:58 <Byakugan249> : nooo
13:58 <Byakugan249> : when it comes to hitsouding
13:58 <Byakugan249> : hitsounding*
13:58 <Byakugan249> : patterns are different
13:58 <Miya> : i don't mean pattern before
13:58 <Miya> : i mean hitsounding
13:58 <Miya> : hitsounding here is not consistant with your later part 00:34:601 (1,2) -
13:59 <Miya> : here not consistent with 00:47:150 (1,3) -
13:59 <Byakugan249> : alright i'll do that but i'll feel uncomfortable if i do apply that
14:00 <Byakugan249> : wait...
14:02 <Miya> : 01:16:954 (5,1) - switch combo here >.<
14:02 <Miya> : not consistant to your other combo
14:02 <Byakugan249> : wait are you talking about the sliders in that part?
14:02 <Miya> : huh?
14:02 <Miya> : what part?
14:03 <Miya> : what part you don't understand?
14:03 <Byakugan249> : umm... at 00:34:601 and 00:47:150
14:03 <Miya> : yup
14:03 <Byakugan249> : ohh
14:03 <Byakugan249> : i thought you were talking about the circles
14:03 <Miya> : no >.<
14:03 <Miya> : i'm talking about the hitsound on those sliders
14:03 <Miya> : not consistant
14:04 <Byakugan249> : ahh ok i'll fix them
14:04 <Byakugan249> : i misunderstood D:
14:04 <Miya> : good :3
14:05 <Byakugan249> : wait can i added the whistle at the end to match the vocals and to be consistent with insane?
14:05 <Byakugan249> : add*
14:05 <Miya> : where? o.o
14:05 <Byakugan249> : 1st kiai (1,2)
14:05 <Miya> : where? what time?
14:05 <Byakugan249> : 00:34:601 (1,2) -
14:06 <Miya> : i know, but you want to add whistle at those end point?
14:06 <Byakugan249> : yea. insane has it and i think it goes well with the vocals
14:07 <Miya> : sure
14:07 <Miya> : but make it consistant to your later part
14:07 <Byakugan249> : right
14:08 <Byakugan249> : done
14:08 <Miya> : good
14:08 <Miya> : fix this combo pattern 01:16:954 (5,1) -
14:08 <Miya> : switch combo in that part >.<
14:08 <Miya> : have you done it?
14:08 <Byakugan249> : did that already
14:08 <Miya> : good
14:09 <Miya> : okay, maybe that's all for easy
14:09 <Miya> : move to insane :3
14:10 <Byakugan249> : oh good if you want to do rechecks for normal and hard, talk to winber and weez
14:11 <Miya> : they online now?
14:11 <Byakugan249> : no they're sleeping
14:11 <Miya> : okay, i will post it on the forum
14:12 <Miya> : 00:00:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can you make this jump have consistant spacing at every combo?
14:12 <Miya> : i'm comfortable with these jump
14:12 <Miya> : not*
14:12 <Byakugan249> : the 1st one i'll do
14:13 <Byakugan249> : ther last 2 ill keep. i dont want to ruin the shape
14:13 <Byakugan249> : the*
14:13 <Miya> : i'm start not feeling comfortable when moving to these combo 00:00:876 (1,2,3,4) -
14:13 <Miya> : 00:00:680 (4,1) - this anti jump really break the flow
14:13 <Byakugan249> : yea i see that
14:13 <Byakugan249> : ill see if i can change it up
14:13 <Miya> : 00:00:876 (1,2) - try to ctrl+r this
14:14 <Byakugan249> : yea that works
14:14 <Miya> : hmm wait
14:15 <Byakugan249> : hold on that'd look like a surprise jump for players
14:16 <Miya> : http://puu.sh/EYKh
14:16 <Miya> : this is the best imo
14:16 <Miya> : rearrange note to be like that >.<
14:17 <Miya> : and hitsounds too
14:17 <Byakugan249> : alright then
14:17 <Byakugan249> : the flow keeps going from there
14:17 <Byakugan249> : lol no need
14:17 <Byakugan249> : i mean the hitsounds
14:17 <Miya> : oh ok >.<
14:17 <Miya> : since i just randomly ctrl + r those note
14:17 <Miya> : so hitsounds get messy >.<
14:17 <Byakugan249> : ahh alright
14:19 <Miya> : 00:08:719 (4,5) - can you reduce those finish volume to 70%?
14:19 <Miya> : it's feel too loud imo >.<
14:20 <Byakugan249> : ooh i did add this but then i remapped this
14:20 <Byakugan249> : alright then
14:20 <Miya> : 00:53:817 (7,8) - make this note jump?
14:21 <Byakugan249> : 00:55:386 (4,5) - i wanna be consistent with this
14:21 <Miya> : so it's consistant like this note 00:41:072 (6,7,8) -
14:21 <Miya> : yeah do jump too at that note
14:21 <Byakugan249> : orz this will be tough
14:22 <Miya> : no problem, since it's insane and it will be consistant to your previous pattern
14:23 <Miya> : here's sample pattern > http://puu.sh/EYNX
14:24 <Miya> : for the next note i like to make it stack under 2 to make consistant spacing > 00:55:386 (4,5) -
14:24 <Miya> : ups
14:24 <Miya> : http://puu.sh/EYON
14:24 <Byakugan249> : http://puu.sh/EYOG i did this
14:24 <Miya> : well, no problem
14:25 <Byakugan249> : http://puu.sh/EYP2 and this
14:25 <Miya> : hmm, okay
14:26 <Miya> : 01:00:091 (1,2,3,4) - i don't think jump here is fit with the song >.<
14:27 <Byakugan249> : hmm alright i'll just stack it
14:27 <Miya> : 01:24:797 (1,10) - use soft finish on these note please
14:27 <Miya> : it feels weird when you suddenly switch to soft finish to normal finish
14:28 <Byakugan249> : if you remove it you'll hear the sound of the drums in the song
14:28 <Miya> : but still, it's awkward to hear due to your previous finish rythim :/
14:29 <Byakugan249> : alright i'll remove the finish for (1) and i'll replace the sampleset for (10)
14:31 <Miya> : 00:29:895 (5,6) - no need to have increased spacing again in this jump, imo
14:32 <Miya> : there's no sounds from the music that fit for increased jump
14:32 <Byakugan249> : were near the kiai, so i want this part to be like the climax
14:32 <Byakugan249> : we're
14:32 <Miya> : you don't need
14:32 <Miya> : you already have 00:33:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
14:32 <Miya> : i think it's enough
14:32 <Byakugan249> : ahh going too far?
14:32 <Miya> : yeah
14:32 <Byakugan249> : alright then ill stack it
14:34 <Miya> : 00:14:993 (7,8) - here too >.<
14:34 <Miya> : no need for increased spacing
14:35 <Byakugan249> : following instrumental. when i map insanes, i do jumps to follow the instrumental in the song
14:35 <Byakugan249> : mainly
14:35 <Miya> : i know
14:35 <Miya> : but the volume here 00:14:993 (7,8) - doesn't increase etc
14:35 <Miya> : so just stack them like before
14:36 <Byakugan249> : there goes my newly developed mapping style
14:36 <Byakugan249> : alright
14:36 <Miya> : it's important to keep jump consistent >.<
14:36 <Miya> : so people don't rage about it
14:36 <Byakugan249> : alright i'll keep that in mind
14:37 <Byakugan249> : 00:00:092 (1,2,3,4) - do the same thing here?
14:37 <Miya> : yup, i think you should do the same thing too
14:38 <Miya> : stack this 00:00:092 (1,2) -
14:38 <Miya> : so the flow will be better
14:38 <Byakugan249> : wait stack them together?
14:38 <Miya> : if you don't want to stack them, then make another pattern >.<
14:38 <Byakugan249> : oh i can do that
14:39 <Miya> : 00:26:758 (4) - add new combo here to keep consistencies?
14:40 <Byakugan249> : nope matching the color in the video
14:40 <Miya> : oh my, if you sacrifice consistencies for matching color for the video is not a good thing
14:41 <Byakugan249> : umm how's this at the beginning? http://puu.sh/EYXc
14:41 <Byakugan249> : oh it's not?
14:41 <Miya> : good pattern
14:41 <Miya> : yeah :/
14:41 <Miya> : not all people will download the video
14:41 <Byakugan249> : uh oh idk what color i should change it to...
14:42 <Byakugan249> : i dont wanna use pink since sae's coming up
14:42 <Miya> : very dark blue will do
14:42 <Miya> : http://puu.sh/EYY1
14:42 <Byakugan249> : that's purple
14:43 <Miya> : >.< yeah that purple
14:43 <Byakugan249> : oh well i applied the color
14:43 <Miya> : good
14:43 <Miya> : 00:41:072 (6) - add nc here too imo for consistencies
14:43 <Miya> : and for the jump
14:43 <Byakugan249> : color?
14:44 <Miya> : ah wait
14:44 <Miya> : dark blue will do
14:44 <Miya> : 00:42:837 (4) - here too
14:44 <Miya> : green will do
14:44 <Byakugan249> : wait dark blue for the 1st?
14:45 <Miya> : yup
14:45 <Miya> : http://puu.sh/EYZy
14:45 <Byakugan249> : orz i have to make that next combo orange?
14:45 <Miya> : make this combo orange > 00:43:621 (1) -
14:46 <Byakugan249> : ahh ok fixed
14:46 <Miya> : well for consistencies, add a nc at this one too 00:53:817 (7) -
14:46 <Miya> : 00:55:386 (1) -
14:47 <Byakugan249> : both fixed
14:47 <Byakugan249> : wait color?
14:47 <Miya> : default color will do
14:47 <Miya> : no need for custom color
14:47 <Byakugan249> : alright
14:48 <Miya> : put a nc for this one too 01:04:405 (5) -
14:48 <Byakugan249> : alright consistency with the next combo
14:48 <Miya> : hmm, maybe that's all for insane
14:49 <Miya> : hit sounds is nice imo
14:49 <Byakugan249> : oh? really?
14:49 <Byakugan249> : tbh hitsounds are my weakness when i map
14:49 <Miya> : umm wait
14:49 <Miya> : 00:33:817 (4) - how about whistle here?
14:50 <Byakugan249> : what does it match?
14:50 <Miya> : i think it's have same rythim with the end of this spinner 00:31:562 (1) -
14:50 <Byakugan249> : no it'll interfere with the normal hitsounds
14:50 <Miya> : okay no problem
14:51 <Byakugan249> : which is following the drums
14:51 <Byakugan249> : are*
14:51 <Miya> : yup
14:51 <Miya> : that's all for insane
14:52 <Byakugan249> : alright ty...post this when you do weez and winber's mod
14:53 <Miya> : ok
14:53 <Byakugan249> : aww man i have to sleep
14:53 <Byakugan249> : getting late where i am
14:53 <Miya> : yeah go to sleep >.<
14:54 <Miya> : it's very late for you
14:54 <Byakugan249> : hai hai

1. 01:11:856 (3) - Hmm, this is a bit confusing due the slider is hidden by spinner hitburst. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378084 . I think you should find another pattern to make this less confusing.

1. 00:56:562 (3) - I can hear a cymbal sound at this slider start. Perhaps a finish would be good there.
2. 00:58:131 (1) - If you follow suggestion above, i think you should add another finish here since it will synchronize with previous and next finishes.

SapphireGhost wrote:

If this gets bubbled, please instantly PM me about it. Gotta keep the combo going.

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