Hi kioukiou Onesama ~ 
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~
Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<
Good luck with rank ~
Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions
[General]
- Don't forgot Remove OSB file and full submit.
- Remove Un-used Enable countdown.
- Try add some KIAI Time.
- 01:29:309 - Move this break time line to here 01:29:684.
[Insane]
- 00:31:371 (10) - Add new combo,vocal start to here and too long.
- 01:19:371 (9) - ^
- 01:27:434 (6) - ^
- 01:46:371 (10) - ^
- 02:24:996 (10) - ^
- 02:43:371 (9) - ^
- 00:39:246 (2,3) - Maybe change a slider will be better.
- 01:24:434 - Add a note,have drum to here.
- 01:48:621 - Add whistle.
[Hard]
- 00:42:809 (5,6,7,8,9) - Try like this rhythm.sound much better.
[Normal]
- HP+1 or 2 much better.
That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~
Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<
Good luck with rank ~
. i've been waiting a while for a rank from you 
Congrats!