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Download: fripSide - only my railgun -Euro Beat Charger Mix- (yongtw123) [Yia's Taiko].osu
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Hi yongtw123
mod request via my queue.
[Overall]
Taiko BG & BG 都是PNG格式有點太大了 加起來快2M都要超過MP3的大小了Orz
這裡是無損的JPG格式建議替換 http://puu.sh/ncK9
Audio Lead-in 統一為2000？ （MAT BAT有時候會挑這個）
tag 裡面加youtube大丈夫？
[Normal]
比較缺hitsounds哦
00:40:294 (1) - 折返的地方加一個whistle?
00:42:617 (1) - add whistle?
00:44:165 (1) - add whistle at slider head?
01:16:681 (4) - 這樣好看些xD
needs more work on hitsounds
[Hard]
pretty cool except hitsounds.
[Insane]
00:27:520 (7) - slider尾巴向下擺感覺好一點
00:58:875 (1,2) - 是否考慮別的組合？這裡不管打起來 看起來都不太理想
Nothing bad but yeah. you need more work on hitsounds i guess.
mod request via my queue.
[Overall]
Taiko BG & BG 都是PNG格式有點太大了 加起來快2M都要超過MP3的大小了Orz
這裡是無損的JPG格式建議替換 http://puu.sh/ncK9
Audio Lead-in 統一為2000？ （MAT BAT有時候會挑這個）
tag 裡面加youtube大丈夫？
[Normal]
比較缺hitsounds哦
00:40:294 (1) - 折返的地方加一個whistle?
00:42:617 (1) - add whistle?
00:44:165 (1) - add whistle at slider head?
01:16:681 (4) - 這樣好看些xD
needs more work on hitsounds
[Hard]
pretty cool except hitsounds.
[Insane]
00:27:520 (7) - slider尾巴向下擺感覺好一點
00:58:875 (1,2) - 是否考慮別的組合？這裡不管打起來 看起來都不太理想
Nothing bad but yeah. you need more work on hitsounds i guess.
Topic Starter
I am a bit late but still thanks for the mod!S h i a wrote:
Hi yongtw123
mod request via my queue.
[Overall]
Taiko BG & BG 都是PNG格式有點太大了 加起來快2M都要超過MP3的大小了Orz YOU ARE RIGHT! OMG!
這裡是無損的JPG格式建議替換 http://puu.sh/ncK9
Audio Lead-in 統一為2000？ （MAT BAT有時候會挑這個）ok fixed
tag 裡面加youtube大丈夫？just like adding "niconico"?
[Normal]
比較缺hitsounds哦
00:40:294 (1) - 折返的地方加一個whistle?
00:42:617 (1) - add whistle?
00:44:165 (1) - add whistle at slider head?
01:16:681 (4) - 這樣好看些xD sure
needs more work on hitsounds
[Hard]
pretty cool except hitsounds.
[Insane]
00:27:520 (7) - slider尾巴向下擺感覺好一點 sure
00:58:875 (1,2) - 是否考慮別的組合？這裡不管打起來 看起來都不太理想 excellent find!
Nothing bad but yeah. you need more work on hitsounds i guess. I hesitated to place hitsound but let's see how this goes. Updated
Alright let's see what I can find.
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should take a look but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.
[General]
Remove "fripside" on the tags since that's the name of the artist.
since there's no breaks, remove the letterbox during breaks.
put To aru Kagaku no Railgun as the source because this is the opening of the song and move "BeatCharger" in the tags since that's the person who made this.
I suggest adding an easy diff since the normal diff has over 3 stars.
[Normal]
00:00:036 (1) - I think adding a finish here is effective since it's the start of the song and it matches the instrumental Sort of. and if you look during gameplay, this barely looks like a curved slider. i suggest curving it a bit more so that it'd look like a proper slider.
00:01:584 (3) - follow the curved slider suggestion above, not the finish.
00:05:842 (1) - I don't like the clap at both ends. they don't fit with this part, so to make it sound a lot better, remove the clap at the beginning, and replace the clap for a finish at the end. i think this matches the instrumental
00:12:423 (1) - add a whistle at the beginning to start the consistency.
00:14:165 (3) - adding a whistle at the beginning ruins the consistency, so remove the whistle at the beginning,
00:14:746 (1) - move the whistle at the repeat arrow instead of the beginning and the end. same reason as above.
00:15:907 (2) - the whistle should be here to keep the consistency.
00:16:294 (3) - same as above but at the end.
00:20:165 (3) - i don't like on how the whistle is at the repeat arrow. it sounds odd when it's at the red line.
00:21:713 (4) - remove the whistle if you follow the suggestion above because that ruins the consistency.
00:22:100 (5) - add a whistle here to keep the consistency.
00:22:488 (1) - the whistle should be at the end instead of the repeat arrow. same reason as 00:21:713.
00:23:262 (2,3,4,5) - move the whistles at (3,5) instead of (2,4). same reason as above.
00:29:068 (2) - since you have the whistle at (4), add it here to start the consistency.
00:42:617 (1) - remove the NC to make it easier for beginners. i think beginners might get confused because the slider has its own combo.
01:07:778 (2) - remove the whistle here. same reason as 00;21:713.
01:11:262 (5) - add whistles at the repeat arrow and the end to keep the consistency.
01:13:391 (1,2) - the whistle should be at (2) not at (1). adding the whistle at (1) ruins the consistency
01:13:971 (3) - remove the whistle at the beginning. same reason as above.
01:16:681 (4) - add a whistle at the end to keep the consistency.
01:19:778 (1,2) - since (1) on the next combo has a whistle, add whistles here to start the consistency.
01:22:100 (3) - ^ to keep the consistency.
01:23:649 (2) - remove the whistle at the repeat arrow because that ruins the consistency.
01:25:197 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks confusing because (1) and (2) are overlapping (3) but not in a good way. I suggest doing something easier than this so that it can be less confusing.
[Hard]
00:06:423 (2) - remove the whistle because it looks like it's just put there randomly.
00:27:520 (1) - remove the NC for this because it follows the long pause.
00:28:100 (1) - make this a NC because if the hard hit in the instrumental.
00:29:068 (1,2) - to make this easier, replace this for a 1/4 kick slider with 2 repeats.
00:40:294 (1) - add a finish to match the vocals.
00:46:488 (1) - ^
00:49:584 (4) - I think adding a whistle at the beginning and the end is effective as it gets easier at the part.
00:51:133 (4) - if you follow the suggestion above, add a whistle at the beginning to keep the consistency.
00:51:907 (6) - same as above but at the beginning.
01:24:810 (6,7) - same as 00:29:068.
01:41:842 (3,4) - ^
01:46:100 (1,2,3) - same as above but i'm sure you get the idea.
[Insane]
00:06:423 (1) - same as hard.
00:17:842 (1,2) - IMO this looks too easy for an insane diff. replace this for a stream to challenge players.
01:14:939 (1,2,3,4) - try doing something like this to challenge players?
01:29:842 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a stream. it'd look ok for a hard diff, but on an insane is a no no for me.
This is the best I can do. Overall the hitsounds needs work. add claps somewhere because all i hear are whistles and finishes. i suggest adding claps when you reach the chorus but at the same time, try to keep the claps consistent. anyways GL
Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should take a look but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.
[General]
Remove "fripside" on the tags since that's the name of the artist.
since there's no breaks, remove the letterbox during breaks.
put To aru Kagaku no Railgun as the source because this is the opening of the song and move "BeatCharger" in the tags since that's the person who made this.
I suggest adding an easy diff since the normal diff has over 3 stars.
[Normal]
00:00:036 (1) - I think adding a finish here is effective since it's the start of the song and it matches the instrumental Sort of. and if you look during gameplay, this barely looks like a curved slider. i suggest curving it a bit more so that it'd look like a proper slider.
00:01:584 (3) - follow the curved slider suggestion above, not the finish.
00:05:842 (1) - I don't like the clap at both ends. they don't fit with this part, so to make it sound a lot better, remove the clap at the beginning, and replace the clap for a finish at the end. i think this matches the instrumental
00:12:423 (1) - add a whistle at the beginning to start the consistency.
00:14:165 (3) - adding a whistle at the beginning ruins the consistency, so remove the whistle at the beginning,
00:14:746 (1) - move the whistle at the repeat arrow instead of the beginning and the end. same reason as above.
00:15:907 (2) - the whistle should be here to keep the consistency.
00:16:294 (3) - same as above but at the end.
00:20:165 (3) - i don't like on how the whistle is at the repeat arrow. it sounds odd when it's at the red line.
00:21:713 (4) - remove the whistle if you follow the suggestion above because that ruins the consistency.
00:22:100 (5) - add a whistle here to keep the consistency.
00:22:488 (1) - the whistle should be at the end instead of the repeat arrow. same reason as 00:21:713.
00:23:262 (2,3,4,5) - move the whistles at (3,5) instead of (2,4). same reason as above.
00:29:068 (2) - since you have the whistle at (4), add it here to start the consistency.
00:42:617 (1) - remove the NC to make it easier for beginners. i think beginners might get confused because the slider has its own combo.
01:07:778 (2) - remove the whistle here. same reason as 00;21:713.
01:11:262 (5) - add whistles at the repeat arrow and the end to keep the consistency.
01:13:391 (1,2) - the whistle should be at (2) not at (1). adding the whistle at (1) ruins the consistency
01:13:971 (3) - remove the whistle at the beginning. same reason as above.
01:16:681 (4) - add a whistle at the end to keep the consistency.
01:19:778 (1,2) - since (1) on the next combo has a whistle, add whistles here to start the consistency.
01:22:100 (3) - ^ to keep the consistency.
01:23:649 (2) - remove the whistle at the repeat arrow because that ruins the consistency.
01:25:197 (1,2,3) - this pattern looks confusing because (1) and (2) are overlapping (3) but not in a good way. I suggest doing something easier than this so that it can be less confusing.
[Hard]
00:06:423 (2) - remove the whistle because it looks like it's just put there randomly.
00:27:520 (1) - remove the NC for this because it follows the long pause.
00:28:100 (1) - make this a NC because if the hard hit in the instrumental.
00:29:068 (1,2) - to make this easier, replace this for a 1/4 kick slider with 2 repeats.
00:40:294 (1) - add a finish to match the vocals.
00:46:488 (1) - ^
00:49:584 (4) - I think adding a whistle at the beginning and the end is effective as it gets easier at the part.
00:51:133 (4) - if you follow the suggestion above, add a whistle at the beginning to keep the consistency.
00:51:907 (6) - same as above but at the beginning.
01:24:810 (6,7) - same as 00:29:068.
01:41:842 (3,4) - ^
01:46:100 (1,2,3) - same as above but i'm sure you get the idea.
[Insane]
00:06:423 (1) - same as hard.
00:17:842 (1,2) - IMO this looks too easy for an insane diff. replace this for a stream to challenge players.
01:14:939 (1,2,3,4) - try doing something like this to challenge players?
01:29:842 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a stream. it'd look ok for a hard diff, but on an insane is a no no for me.
This is the best I can do. Overall the hitsounds needs work. add claps somewhere because all i hear are whistles and finishes. i suggest adding claps when you reach the chorus but at the same time, try to keep the claps consistent. anyways GL
Topic Starter
Concerning the Artist field, I didn't change yet. I think I'll ask others for opinion, since it's usually MAT/BAT who has the final say.
Fixed a majority of rhythm suggestions in [Hard]
As for hitsounds, I tried yours, and I made two more attempts with different variations of claps/whistles, but after several hours it came back full circle. Now I think only a few whistles sprinkled here and there sounds actually better. Putting claps feels okay if consistently placed, but this song is eurobeat, meaning rhythm is not meant to be"regular". Placing whistles too much just sound piercing, and mixing claps with it becomes mayhem.
Thanks a lot for the mod anyways.
Fixed a majority of rhythm suggestions in [Hard]
As for hitsounds, I tried yours, and I made two more attempts with different variations of claps/whistles, but after several hours it came back full circle. Now I think only a few whistles sprinkled here and there sounds actually better. Putting claps feels okay if consistently placed, but this song is eurobeat, meaning rhythm is not meant to be"regular". Placing whistles too much just sound piercing, and mixing claps with it becomes mayhem.
Thanks a lot for the mod anyways.
Hi, yongtw123
My mod from request
General
- Remove "fripSide" in tags, because there is in Artist name. But add "to aru kagaku no railgan" in tags.
- Bit rate of mp3 is 320kbps. Should fix it is 192kbps.
Normal
- 00:24:036 (4,5) - Move (4) to up and left 1 grid (Symmetry with (2)), and move (5) to left 2 grids (Symmetry with (1)).
- 00:57:326 (3) - Make to this, would make symmetry with (1).
160,304,76681,2,0,B|240:360|352:320|368:232,1,259.999995350838
- 01:13:197 (x) - Add a note?
- 01:14:746 (x) - ^
- 01:16:681 (4) - Make to http://puu.sh/q2DJ , would be even more beautiful.
280,88,57326,2,0,B|216:64|152:112,2,120.000002861023
- 01:33:471 (T) - Move at 01:33:433
- 01:35:649 (2) - Slider end at 01:36:036, and add a note at 01:36:229 (x)?
Hard
- 00:26:552 (3,4) - Make to http://puu.sh/q2JL ?
- 01:05:068 (1,2,3) - Make this is an equilateral triangle, would be better.
Insane
- I don't find the problem.
That's all, that I can find them.
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!nich95 wrote:
Hi, yongtw123
My mod from requestGeneral
- Remove "fripSide" in tags, because there is in Artist name. But add "to aru kagaku no railgan" in tags. fixed
- Bit rate of mp3 is 320kbps. Should fix it is 192kbps.it's not 320kbps on avergae, here's a graph as proof.
Normal
- 00:24:036 (4,5) - Move (4) to up and left 1 grid (Symmetry with (2)), and move (5) to left 2 grids (Symmetry with (1)). i made them to slightly slant
- 00:57:326 (3) - Make to this, would make symmetry with (1). i am making it symmetrical with the following 2 objects
160,304,76681,2,0,B|240:360|352:320|368:232,1,259.999995350838- 01:13:197 (x) - Add a note? hmm, nope, sounds extra
- 01:14:746 (x) - ^ still nope
- 01:16:681 (4) - Make to http://puu.sh/q2DJ , would be even more beautiful. i get your point, but i am curving it according to the spinner lol
280,88,57326,2,0,B|216:64|152:112,2,120.000002861023- 01:33:471 (T) - Move at 01:33:433 actually i deleted this time line, not needed lol
- 01:35:649 (2) - Slider end at 01:36:036, and add a note at 01:36:229 (x)? that'll make it more complex
Hard
- 00:26:552 (3,4) - Make to http://puu.sh/q2JL ? nope, it will affect the combos after
- 01:05:068 (1,2,3) - Make this is an equilateral triangle, would be better.a larger jump, but sure why not lol
Insane
- I don't find the problem.
That's all, that I can find them.
Good luck~
您好
砲姐喔www[General]
Offset：36.4225787262209
您確定沒有錯？
[Normal]
00:14:165 (3) - 我建議刪掉它，然後00:14:359 add note
00:59:842 (2) - 我覺得在01:00:036開始比較舒服
01:53:068 - Change to Soft hit sound
[Hard]
01:05:068 (1,2,3) - Finish
01:53:068 - Change to Soft hit sound
[Insane]
01:05:068 (1,2,3) - Finish
01:53:068 - Change to Soft hit sound
That all
Topic Starter
Thanks for spotting that timing error!ertyukjh010 wrote:
您好
[General]
Offset：36.4225787262209
您確定沒有錯？strange thing happened :/, anyways fixed with timing adjustments
[Normal]
00:14:165 (3) - 我建議刪掉它，然後00:14:359 add note prefer not, the rhythm becomes too dull
00:59:842 (2) - 我覺得在01:00:036開始比較舒服 same thing above
01:53:068 - Change to Soft hit sound ok
[Hard]
01:05:068 (1,2,3) - Finish nope, that'll be too loud
01:53:068 - Change to Soft hit sound done
[Insane]
01:05:068 (1,2,3) - Finish still nope
01:53:068 - Change to Soft hit sound done
That all
Normal
00:41:068 (1) - 把这个whistle音去掉,在slider开始处加个whistle.
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^
00:59:842 (3) - 觉得在01:00:035开始好些,或者在此处加一个circle后 把slider的开始移到01:00:035
Yia's Taiko
01:06:617 (T) - timing没对准时间轴
Hard
00:12:035 (1) - 去掉这个whistle?
00:16:294 (2) - 加个whistle
00:40:294 (1) - 右移动一个格子 (lv3)
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^
01:11:842 (7) - whistle 后面的(1)去掉whistle
Insane
00:16:924 (2) - 感觉缺个whistle
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^
01:10:294 (12) - 和后面的(1)重叠
01:14:939(1,2) - x:96 y:152
01:15:326 (3) - x:416 y:224 觉得之前的间距有些过大吧
star~good luck
00:41:068 (1) - 把这个whistle音去掉,在slider开始处加个whistle.
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^
00:59:842 (3) - 觉得在01:00:035开始好些,或者在此处加一个circle后 把slider的开始移到01:00:035
Yia's Taiko
01:06:617 (T) - timing没对准时间轴
Hard
00:12:035 (1) - 去掉这个whistle?
00:16:294 (2) - 加个whistle
00:40:294 (1) - 右移动一个格子 (lv3)
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^
01:11:842 (7) - whistle 后面的(1)去掉whistle
Insane
00:16:924 (2) - 感觉缺个whistle
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^
01:10:294 (12) - 和后面的(1)重叠
01:14:939(1,2) - x:96 y:152
01:15:326 (3) - x:416 y:224 觉得之前的间距有些过大吧
star~good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:
Normal
00:41:068 (1) - 把这个whistle音去掉,在slider开始处加个whistle.ok
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^ nope to above three, there's no corresponding "cymbal-like" sound in the music
00:59:842 (3) - 觉得在01:00:035开始好些,或者在此处加一个circle后 把slider的开始移到01:00:035 i fixed it differently
Yia's Taiko
01:06:617 (T) - timing没对准时间轴 fixed
Hard
00:12:035 (1) - 去掉这个whistle? hmm, 這裡本來就沒有whistle吧@@
00:16:294 (2) - 加个whistle good
00:40:294 (1) - 右移动一个格子 (lv3) 我先跟著之前的spacing, 進入combo再變小
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^ same as Normal
01:11:842 (7) - whistle 后面的(1)去掉whistle ok
Insane
00:16:924 (2) - 感觉缺个whistle added
00:46:487 (1) - 加个finish
00:52:681 (1) - ^
00:58:874 (1) - ^ same as Normal
01:10:294 (12) - 和后面的(1)重叠 prefer not
01:14:939(1,2) - x:96 y:152
01:15:326 (3) - x:416 y:224 觉得之前的间距有些过大吧 i re-tested this part many times and i still think the spacing plays out fine, so... i won't change them for now
star~good luck
coming here from my queue (sorry it was so long orz)
here we go...
i think that's it, just the hitsound on the mapset seems to be less loud than the song itself ><
hope this can help, and good luck.
here we go...
General:
all good i think, just...
I'm not see that you're not using kiai time on this mapset, is this intentional? I think it will be better to put it on the various parts like the chorus to make it more flash and giving the player some "courage" while playing, i think placed it from 01:06:616 will be ok, the end is up to you
also turn the volume up a bit for all diff? I think the volume of the song itself are louder that the hitsound and it was kinda hard to hear the pattern rhythm while playing imo.
all good i think, just...
I'm not see that you're not using kiai time on this mapset, is this intentional? I think it will be better to put it on the various parts like the chorus to make it more flash and giving the player some "courage" while playing
, i think placed it from 01:06:616 will be ok, the end is up to you also turn the volume up a bit for all diff? I think the volume of the song itself are louder that the hitsound and it was kinda hard to hear the pattern rhythm while playing imo.
Normal:
just some suggestion
01:13:197 - add a notes here? i think it was way better if this part is a triplet rather than 2 notes, since the most similar pattern i seen on this this are consisting with 3 notes/triplet, same goes for 01:14:745
just some suggestion
01:13:197 - add a notes here? i think it was way better if this part is a triplet rather than 2 notes, since the most similar pattern i seen on this this are consisting with 3 notes/triplet, same goes for 01:14:745
Hard:
OD-1, since the notes are quite many while the diff itself are hard, i think making the OD harder wouldn't be nice for player to enjoy the diff.
00:13:487 (6) - remove this notes? instead of that, move the slider to the removed notes and adding the notes here00:13:777, to makes the patternline between 00:12:616 (2) till 00:14:261 (9) consistent? That way it can makes the pattern following the vocal voice more perfectly imo
00:51:132 (4,5,6) - makes the spacing here with DS 1,2? So the spacing will be the same as 00:50:552 (1,2,3,4), i think this way is pretty good on the flow since theyre still on the same patternline.
01:04:487 (4) - start the 1,2 DS here instead from (5)?
01:05:068 (1,2) - fix the position on this 2 notes, doesn't seems symmetrical enough when i try it. I suggest move the (2) up a bit to make it symmetrical with (1)
01:17:261 - add note here? seems missing something without it on that part
OD-1, since the notes are quite many while the diff itself are hard, i think making the OD harder wouldn't be nice for player to enjoy the diff.
00:13:487 (6) - remove this notes? instead of that, move the slider to the removed notes and adding the notes here00:13:777, to makes the patternline between 00:12:616 (2) till 00:14:261 (9) consistent? That way it can makes the pattern following the vocal voice more perfectly imo
00:51:132 (4,5,6) - makes the spacing here with DS 1,2? So the spacing will be the same as 00:50:552 (1,2,3,4), i think this way is pretty good on the flow since theyre still on the same patternline.
01:04:487 (4) - start the 1,2 DS here instead from (5)?
01:05:068 (1,2) - fix the position on this 2 notes, doesn't seems symmetrical enough when i try it. I suggest move the (2) up a bit to make it symmetrical with (1)
01:17:261 - add note here? seems missing something without it on that part
Insane:
seems good for me
seems good for me
i think that's it, just the hitsound on the mapset seems to be less loud than the song itself ><
hope this can help, and good luck.
/Queue
Lv 5 DA☆ZE
*Hmmm, the whole mapset doesn't have a kiai time O_O
*The ID of your TAIKO guest seems wrong in your tag. OSU! can recognize "[]" when searching.
*Use lower volume sliderslide ( http://puu.sh/qny9 ) if you considered it as necessary. Cuz I heard the slidersounds weird from 00:40:294 (1)
[Normal]
00:04:294 (4) - 1 grid right [nazi]
00:40:294 (1) - don't really suggest slider velocity change in your easiest diff.
00:46:487 (1) - add fin on head?
00:52:681 (1) - add fin on head?
00:54:616 (3) - 1 grid left [nazi]
00:58:874 (1) - add fin on head?
01:13:390 (1,2) - Too difficult to use two continuous hits in N diff. better change into a short slider or something.
[Hard]
Nothing really to poke at.
But I might mention that lots of three continuous hits. That might be very difficult for Hard players. And make it more like an I diff.
Doesn't really matter just mention.
[Insane]
00:10:100 (1) - though 2000 is rankable but still seems too rush..change into stream or something?
00:26:358 (1) - add fin
00:46:487 (1) - add fin on head?
I tried my best and I think that's all
Very nice mapset! Good Luck!
Lv 5 DA☆ZE
Unrankable if in red and bold[General]
Consider if in bold only
Suggested if in normal font
*Hmmm, the whole mapset doesn't have a kiai time O_O
*The ID of your TAIKO guest seems wrong in your tag. OSU! can recognize "[]" when searching.
*Use lower volume sliderslide ( http://puu.sh/qny9 ) if you considered it as necessary. Cuz I heard the slidersounds weird from 00:40:294 (1)
[Normal]
00:04:294 (4) - 1 grid right [nazi]
00:40:294 (1) - don't really suggest slider velocity change in your easiest diff.
00:46:487 (1) - add fin on head?
00:52:681 (1) - add fin on head?
00:54:616 (3) - 1 grid left [nazi]
00:58:874 (1) - add fin on head?
01:13:390 (1,2) - Too difficult to use two continuous hits in N diff. better change into a short slider or something.
[Hard]
Nothing really to poke at.
But I might mention that lots of three continuous hits. That might be very difficult for Hard players. And make it more like an I diff.
Doesn't really matter
just mention.[Insane]
00:10:100 (1) - though 2000 is rankable but still seems too rush..change into stream or something?
00:26:358 (1) - add fin
00:46:487 (1) - add fin on head?
I tried my best and I think that's all
Very nice mapset! Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Envi wrote:
coming here from my queue (sorry it was so long orz) it's ok
here we go...General:
all good i think, just...
I'm not see that you're not using kiai time on this mapset, is this intentional? I think it will be better to put it on the various parts like the chorus to make it more flash and giving the player some "courage" while playing
also turn the volume up a bit for all diff? I think the volume of the song itself are louder that the hitsound and it was kinda hard to hear the pattern rhythm while playing imo.it's mainly due to the whistles, if i make volume higher the whistles are going to stand out.Normal:
just some suggestion
01:13:197 - add a notes here? i think it was way better if this part is a triplet rather than 2 notes, since the most similar pattern i seen on this this are consisting with 3 notes/triplet, same goes for 01:14:745 nope, i am doing that for variation in rhythm, makes the map less monotonous to playHard:
OD-1, since the notes are quite many while the diff itself are hard, i think making the OD harder wouldn't be nice for player to enjoy the diff. good call, changed
00:13:487 (6) - remove this notes? instead of that, move the slider to the removed notes and adding the notes here00:13:777, to makes the patternline between 00:12:616 (2) till 00:14:261 (9) consistent? That way it can makes the pattern following the vocal voice more perfectly imo hmmm, nope, i put rhythms like this to both follow vocal and a bit of instruments
00:51:132 (4,5,6) - makes the spacing here with DS 1,2? So the spacing will be the same as 00:50:552 (1,2,3,4), i think this way is pretty good on the flow since theyre still on the same patternline. nice find but i made them as little jumps
01:04:487 (4) - start the 1,2 DS here instead from (5)? ok
01:05:068 (1,2) - fix the position on this 2 notes, doesn't seems symmetrical enough when i try it. I suggest move the (2) up a bit to make it symmetrical with (1) hmm, i tried
01:17:261 - add note here? seems missing something without it on that part sureInsane:
seems good for me
i think that's it, just the hitsound on the mapset seems to be less loud than the song itself ><
hope this can help, and good luck.
Thanks for modding!Megurine Luka wrote:
/Queue
Lv 5 DA☆ZE
[General]
*Hmmm, the whole mapset doesn't have a kiai time O_O as explained above
*The ID of your TAIKO guest seems wrong in your tag. OSU! can recognize "[]" when searching. appended tag
*Use lower volume sliderslide ( http://puu.sh/qny9 ) if you considered it as necessary. Cuz I heard the slidersounds weird from 00:40:294 (1) added
[Normal]
00:04:294 (4) - 1 grid right [nazi] ok
00:40:294 (1) - don't really suggest slider velocity change in your easiest diff. i hope it isn't that much of a slowdown
00:46:487 (1) - add fin on head? nope, doesn't correspond with instruments
00:52:681 (1) - add fin on head? (same)
00:54:616 (3) - 1 grid left [nazi] ok
00:58:874 (1) - add fin on head? still nope
01:13:390 (1,2) - Too difficult to use two continuous hits in N diff. better change into a short slider or something. there are two and three 1/8 all around this diff, so i think it's fine
[Hard]
Nothing really to poke at.
But I might mention that lots of three continuous hits. That might be very difficult for Hard players. And make it more like an I diff.
Doesn't really matter
[Insane]
00:10:100 (1) - though 2000 is rankable but still seems too rush..change into stream or something? i think it's fine
00:26:358 (1) - add fin still nope
00:46:487 (1) - add fin on head? ^
I tried my best and I think that's all
Very nice mapset! Good Luck!
here comes my mod.
[Normal]
00:40:294 (1) - 音量感覺還是有點大 降低10%~15%試試?(tips:話說現在綠線直接插就可以了吧
00:54:616 (3) - 這個還是拉正點好
01:35:648 (2) - 我聽了好幾次都感覺很怪 而且對noob感覺會坑 考慮換換？
[Hard]
00:23:261 (4,5,6,9) - 連續四個三連我不覺得是個好主意
00:40:294 (1,2) - 拉開點 保持跟前面那distance一樣(或者你做改變就是前面dis拉大點 現在dis看不出來SV變化啊
01:29:842 (1,4,7,10,7,8) - 同第一條
01:33:132 (7,8) - 拉開
[Insane]
fine
Good map.Star for it.
[Normal]
00:40:294 (1) - 音量感覺還是有點大 降低10%~15%試試?(tips:話說現在綠線直接插就可以了吧
00:54:616 (3) - 這個還是拉正點好
01:35:648 (2) - 我聽了好幾次都感覺很怪 而且對noob感覺會坑 考慮換換？
[Hard]
00:23:261 (4,5,6,9) - 連續四個三連我不覺得是個好主意
00:40:294 (1,2) - 拉開點 保持跟前面那distance一樣(或者你做改變就是前面dis拉大點 現在dis看不出來SV變化啊
01:29:842 (1,4,7,10,7,8) - 同第一條
01:33:132 (7,8) - 拉開
[Insane]
fine
Good map.Star for it.
Topic Starter
Not much changed but thanks for modding and star!Mystica wrote:
here comes my mod.
[Normal]
00:40:294 (1) - 音量感覺還是有點大 降低10%~15%試試?(tips:話說現在綠線直接插就可以了吧 hitsound volume is consistent throughout all diffs, i think it sounds okay?
00:54:616 (3) - 這個還是拉正點好 it's corresponding to the another slider several combos after
01:35:648 (2) - 我聽了好幾次都感覺很怪 而且對noob感覺會坑 考慮換換？hmm, nope
[Hard]
00:23:261 (4,5,6,9) - 連續四個三連我不覺得是個好主意 i used two sliders so it shouldn't be too daunting?
00:40:294 (1,2) - 拉開點 保持跟前面那distance一樣(或者你做改變就是前面dis拉大點 現在dis看不出來SV變化啊 since i am starting a new combo it should be fine
01:29:842 (1,4,7,10,7,8) - 同第一條 changed some to sliders
01:33:132 (7,8) - 拉開 i get what you mean but the spacing is technically correct so i'll leave them be
[Insane]
fine
Good map.Star for it.
Hiii
[General]
* Why "youtube" in tags?
[Normal]
* AR +1
00:08:939 (1) - Move to 00:09:326?
00:40:294 (1) - It is just me or this object are too far from previous object? I think small jumps are not allowed for normal diff.....
01:15:132 (2) - Remove whistle at start slider, like 01:13:971 (3)
01:35:648 (2) - End it at 01:36:035?
[Hard]
00:21:519 (4) - Unstack 00:21:132 (2), or some players thought that (4) is place under 00:21:713 (5)
00:50:552 (1,2,3,4) - What's the point having a large spacing like this?
01:04:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Good luck
[General]
* Why "youtube" in tags?
[Normal]
* AR +1
00:08:939 (1) - Move to 00:09:326?
00:40:294 (1) - It is just me or this object are too far from previous object? I think small jumps are not allowed for normal diff.....
01:15:132 (2) - Remove whistle at start slider, like 01:13:971 (3)
01:35:648 (2) - End it at 01:36:035?
[Hard]
00:21:519 (4) - Unstack 00:21:132 (2), or some players thought that (4) is place under 00:21:713 (5)
00:50:552 (1,2,3,4) - What's the point having a large spacing like this?
01:04:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
Good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!Leorda wrote:
Hiii HiiiI~
[General]
* Why "youtube" in tags? well because this mix originated from youtube?
[Normal]
* AR +1 ok
00:08:939 (1) - Move to 00:09:326? sounds good
00:40:294 (1) - It is just me or this object are too far from previous object? I think small jumps are not allowed for normal diff..... eh? well the slider is a slowdown but in order to not let people misjudge i made the spacing consistent
01:15:132 (2) - Remove whistle at start slider, like 01:13:971 (3) maybe not, it corresponds to the, uh, :eurobeat-style instrument" in background
01:35:648 (2) - End it at 01:36:035? oh man i get this plenty times but i'd really prefer to keep this QQ
[Hard]
00:21:519 (4) - Unstack 00:21:132 (2), or some players thought that (4) is place under 00:21:713 (5) fixed
00:50:552 (1,2,3,4) - What's the point having a large spacing like this? to match the crescendo? or if i made it x1.0 spacing it plays out a bit cramped to my liking
01:04:100 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^ again it's match the crescendo, but uhm, i made some changes to the jumps, hope it's better?
Good luck
Hi hi~ 就單純為了報恩而來的 xD
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Normal]
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Insane]
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Yia's Taiko]
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好了! 這次也花蠻多時間的呢 差不多50分鐘xD
加油!! 司令!!!
Good Luck :3
- 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
- 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
- 黑 : 就單純建議
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- Normal難度3.05 規則好像說要有低於3星的難度?
- tags裡的tv size感覺沒啥意義 但是應該沒差xD
[
- 00:34:487 (1) - 結尾加個finish 跟著音樂
- 01:25:197 (1,2) - 不喜歡這兩個slider的shape...>_<
- 01:32:165 (2) - 開頭彷彿少了個finish
- 01:46:487 (2) - 不知道為什麼就是覺得刪除個個note比較好 難以形容的感覺 就是從前面的3個circles變兩個 讓他有漸層的感覺
[
- 00:24:035 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 都三連擊有些無趣 試試這樣 more fun!!!
- 00:25:100 (2,3) - 改成slider? 這裡歌詞有長音
- 00:25:874 (5,1) - ^
- 00:34:874 (2) - 開頭finish
- 01:05:068 (1,2,3) - 這裡用whistle怪怪的 都改成finish比較合音樂
- 01:12:810 (5) - 加個NC? 歌詞已經換句了
- 01:30:616 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:24:035 (6,7,8,9,10,11)
[
- 00:21:519 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 這cover蠻多的...建議改掉
- 00:34:874 (3) - 開頭finish
- 01:15:326 (3,5) - 這裡jump好大啊...坑! 建議這兩個circles用Ctrl+R交換下位置 變成兩組spacing一樣的jump
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d= don ( Normal )
k= katsu ( Clap orWhistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
k= katsu ( Clap orWhistle )
D= Big Don ( Finish )
K= Big Katsu ( Clap/Whistle + Finish )
- 00:21:906 (24) - 這太吵了 而且不合音樂 把這circle往後移一格到00:22:003 然後把這circle跟下一個circle的finish刪除 就是dd 不要 D D
- 00:46:487 (29) - 這裡用D 跟著音樂
- 00:52:777 (68) - 這circle有些多餘
- 00:58:971 (110) - ^
- 01:06:616 (1) - D
- 01:19:003 (1) - D
- 01:28:487 (24) - Same suggetion as 00:21:906 (24)
- 01:46:874 (1) - 這spinner的結尾跟其他難度一致吧
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好了! 這次也花蠻多時間的呢 差不多50分鐘xD
加油!! 司令!!!
Good Luck :3
Topic Starter
結果我最後只用了一點點bossandy wrote:
Hi hi~ 就單純為了報恩而來的 xD 這裡沒有害羞表情可以用._.
- 紅 : 是我覺得一並要改的
- 藍 : 建議 但個人認為要改的
- 黑 : 就單純建議
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- Normal難度3.05 規則好像說要有低於3星的難度? at it plays like a normal? lol
- tags裡的tv size感覺沒啥意義 但是應該沒差xD lol
[
- 00:34:487 (1) - 結尾加個finish 跟著音樂 我知道你的意思但是覺得太突出了
- 01:25:197 (1,2) - 不喜歡這兩個slider的shape...>_< 閃電耶QQ
- 01:32:165 (2) - 開頭彷彿少了個finish 加了會有點突兀
- 01:46:487 (2) - 不知道為什麼就是覺得刪除個個note比較好 難以形容的感覺 就是從前面的3個circles變兩個 讓他有漸層的感覺 這個好!
[
- 00:24:035 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - 都三連擊有些無趣 試試這樣 more fun!!! 我也知道的意思但是我這樣放...呃'就說是我的執念吧
- 00:25:100 (2,3) - 改成slider? 這裡歌詞有長音 ok
- 00:25:874 (5,1) - ^ ok
- 00:34:874 (2) - 開頭finish 一樣nope
- 01:05:068 (1,2,3) - 這裡用whistle怪怪的 都改成finish比較合音樂 用finish連續三次有點吵@@
- 01:12:810 (5) - 加個NC? 歌詞已經換句了 okk
- 01:30:616 (5,6,7,8) - Same as 00:24:035 (6,7,8,9,10,11)same
[
- 00:21:519 (5,6,7,8,9,1) - 這cover蠻多的...建議改掉 故意的，因為那邊打定拍
- 00:34:874 (3) - 開頭finish QQ
- 01:15:326 (3,5) - 這裡jump好大啊...坑! 建議這兩個circles用Ctrl+R交換下位置 變成兩組spacing一樣的jump 可這是insane耶lol
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好了! 這次也花蠻多時間的呢 差不多50分鐘xD
加油!! 司令!!!
Good Luck :3
bu still thanks for the detailed modding!
[Kirisame-Marisa]
201205251630 Yia's Taiko更新 感謝
Download: fripSide - only my railgun -Euro Beat Charger Mix- (yongtw123) [Yia's Taiko].osu
Download: fripSide - only my railgun -Euro Beat Charger Mix- (yongtw123) [Yia's Taiko].osu
Topic Starter
Although I didn't fix what you suggested, still thanks for modding!Kawayi Rika wrote:
Hi ~ yongtw123 ~[General]
I'd like to not use kiai time here because if I do, it would cover almost half of the entire song, which can be quite blinding.
- No kiai time? or forgot?
[Hard]
I prefer not because (6) marks the end of the vocal.
- 01:28:294 (6) - Add new combo and Remove 01:28:487 (1).
[Normal]
Sorry
- 01:35:648 (2,3,4) - Sound weird here,try like this.
it's my intention to have the rhythm that way
That's all ~ Really nice mapset and cool mix ~
Call me back recheck ~ when you are ready ~
Since you didn't fix my mod ~ so i keep recheck sorry ~
req from PM.
[General]
00:17:068 (4) - node中点往左一格
00:20:165 (3) - 结尾不要whistle
00:26:358 (3) - 结尾finish？
00:44:165 (1) - 感觉开头不需要whistle
00:52:681 (1) - finish？
01:13:390 (1) - 最简单难度这么弄节奏和stack略危险
01:14:939 (1,2) - ^
01:16:681 (4) - http://puu.sh/BuB9
[Hard]
fine
[Yia's Taiko]
00:05:842 (20,21,22) - kdd here to follow the song's melody will be much better
00:07:584 (32) - k?
00:08:745 (39,40,41,42) - ddk k?
00:15:519 (23,24,25,26) - DDKD? a K right after 00:14:745 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - dkk dkk sound odd
00:18:229 (1,2,1) - ddk
00:25:003 (38,39) - kd?
01:31:584 (38,39) - ^
00:26:648 (48) - ^ to follow the song
00:26:165 (45) - just for playing experience, how about using k instead?
01:06:229 (1,2,1) - ddk
01:18:616 (1,2,1) -
01:12:423 (1,2,1) - dkk or sth ~_~
01:24:810 (1,2,1) - ^
[Insane]
00:44:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - flow和造型感觉都略欠了点 试试缓缓顺序然后调整下角度什么的 打着舒服点
overall this is a good map but I'm thinking if this deserve a bubble. 还是略有点犹豫:?:
[General]
- inconsistent tags. Have to be unified
- http://puu.sh/BuzZ 有的时候没clap感觉略单调 你可以试试这个
- If like what have said the song was first uploaded on youtube. You should use "Youtube" as source and move beatcharger to tags. (and beat charger already appears in title)
- taiko-bg:http://puu.sh/BuFj a unexpceted line is on the right edge of the pic. fix it if possible. Also I suggest add Yia's name to the pic/
00:17:068 (4) - node中点往左一格
00:20:165 (3) - 结尾不要whistle
00:26:358 (3) - 结尾finish？
00:44:165 (1) - 感觉开头不需要whistle
00:52:681 (1) - finish？
01:13:390 (1) - 最简单难度这么弄节奏和stack略危险
01:14:939 (1,2) - ^
01:16:681 (4) - http://puu.sh/BuB9
[Hard]
fine
[Yia's Taiko]
00:05:842 (20,21,22) - kdd here to follow the song's melody will be much better
00:07:584 (32) - k?
00:08:745 (39,40,41,42) - ddk k?
00:15:519 (23,24,25,26) - DDKD? a K right after 00:14:745 (17,18,19,20,21,22) - dkk dkk sound odd
00:18:229 (1,2,1) - ddk
00:25:003 (38,39) - kd?
01:31:584 (38,39) - ^
00:26:648 (48) - ^ to follow the song
00:26:165 (45) - just for playing experience, how about using k instead?
01:06:229 (1,2,1) - ddk
01:18:616 (1,2,1) -
01:12:423 (1,2,1) - dkk or sth ~_~
01:24:810 (1,2,1) - ^
[Insane]
00:44:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - flow和造型感觉都略欠了点 试试缓缓顺序然后调整下角度什么的 打着舒服点
overall this is a good map but I'm thinking if this deserve a bubble. 还是略有点犹豫:?:
Topic Starter
thanks for the detailed modding!LKs wrote:
req from PM.
[General][Normal]
- inconsistent tags. Have to be unified it happens that this is caused by an extra blank space somewhere in the tags of a specific diff LOL
- http://puu.sh/BuzZ 有的时候没clap感觉略单调 你可以试试这个 i tried to use it but forgive me i couldn't find a satisfactory way. this song plays a consistent beat, and adding a downbeat (using claps) isn't natural to ears.
- If like what have said the song was first uploaded on youtube. You should use "Youtube" as source and move beatcharger to tags. (and beat charger already appears in title) fixed
- taiko-bg:http://puu.sh/BuFj a unexpceted line is on the right edge of the pic. fix it if possible. Also I suggest add Yia's name to the pic fixed the line issue. as for adding the name, since the black bar at top doesn't have much space left, i put it under the title. hope it is okay
00:17:068 (4) - node中点往左一格 idk but for me nudging the node doesn't make a large difference
00:20:165 (3) - 结尾不要whistle ok
00:26:358 (3) - 结尾finish？nope, the song doesn't call for it (doesn't have it either)
00:44:165 (1) - 感觉开头不需要whistle actually..... what if i change this to play a whistle on every white tick?
00:52:681 (1) - finish？same reason as before
01:13:390 (1) - 最简单难度这么弄节奏和stack略危险 i understand your concern but i'd really like to keep the rhythm that way
01:14:939 (1,2) - ^
01:16:681 (4) - http://puu.sh/BuB9 i know your point, but i was following the curvature of the spinner. not sure if this stands to reason though
[Insane]
00:44:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - flow和造型感觉都略欠了点 试试缓缓顺序然后调整下角度什么的 打着舒服点 uhmm i believe this can be quite subjective, because for me it plays out rather smooth...
overall this is a good map but I'm thinking if this deserve a bubble. 还是略有点犹豫:?:
承蒙指教~
[Kirisame-Marisa]
Yia's Taiko 20120624更新
http://www.mediafire.com/?8k1wpbb0787obs6
http://www.mediafire.com/?8k1wpbb0787obs6
Topic Starter
Updated![Kirisame-Marisa] wrote:
Yia's Taiko 20120624更新
http://www.mediafire.com/?8k1wpbb0787obs6
M4M from my queue
General
General
- I think your mp3 quality is below average than other mp3 quality here. Perhaps you can find another mp3 that better than this one.
- This song is not from youtube. This song is from 'To Aru Kagaku no Railgun'. Put that in source. Because you find this song from youtube, doesn't mean you have to write the source from youtube. Put youtube in tags instead.
- 00:13:197 (2) - It's better to start the whistle rythim from this slider start because this is not consistant with whistle here. So please add a whistle there.
- 00:14:165 (3) - This slider is not consistant imo. Because you always follow the heavy beat from the song so this slider makes you miss a beat at 00:14:358-. It's better to remove this slider then add a circle at 00:14:358- for better consistencies and playability.
- 00:19:390 (2) - I think you will need a whistle here to make whistle rythim more consistant.
- 00:25:584 (2) - Same as before, for more consistencies add a whistle at this slider start
- 00:35:648 (3) - Same with before, for better consistencies, reduce the length of this slider to 00:36:035- then add a circle at 00:36:229. It follows the beat better.
- 00:46:487 (1) - Finish sounds at the slider start for opening of new rythim?
- 00:52:681 (1) - ^
- 00:58:874 (1) - ^
- 01:01:971 (3) - ^
- 01:03:519 (5) - ^
- 01:13:197- For better readability of the note i suggest you add a note here. There's a heavy beat there and you suddenly switch from white tick to red tick and it's make the readability suffer.
- 01:14:745- ^
- 00:40:294 (1) - How about add a finish here for the begining of new rythim?
- 00:46:487 (1) - ^
- 00:52:681 (1) - ^ at the slider start
- 00:58:874 (5) - ^
- 01:01:971 (2) - ^
- 01:03:519 (9) - ^
- 01:16:681 (1) - I think you miss a whistle here at slider start. Not consistant with other whistle rythim.
- 01:22:874 (1) - ^
- 01:25:777 (3) - ^ but at the repeat.
- 01:29:068 (4) - ^ at slider start.
- Nice hard, just hitsounds mod, orz
- 00:19:390 (6) - For better whistle consistencies i suggest you add a whistle here at slider start.
- 00:25:584 (4) - ^
- 00:39:810 (6,7) - Please keep the consistencies of 1/4 spacing here. This 1/4 spacing is not consistant with other 1/4 spacing. A little jump like this doesn't play good imo. So this should be like this for better playability > http://puu.sh/DHXc
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!Miya wrote:
M4M from my queue
GeneralNormal
- I think your mp3 quality is below average than other mp3 quality here. Perhaps you can find another mp3 that better than this one. I extracted the audio from the video on YouTube with as few transcoding as possible. This should the best I can get. Sorry
- This song is not from youtube. This song is from 'To Aru Kagaku no Railgun'. Put that in source. Because you find this song from youtube, doesn't mean you have to write the source from youtube. Put youtube in tags instead. I can understand but I am very unsure about this. I've seen songs with source labeled YouTube, and not to mention a lot of maps with NicoNicoDouga as source. It's my belief that it's the artist that's most important, so I keep it in Artist field, and since this is a remix made by someone on YouTube, at least I should point players to that direction in case they want to find out more.
Hard
- 00:13:197 (2) - It's better to start the whistle rythim from this slider start because this is not consistant with whistle here. So please add a whistle there. Throughout all diffs I am placing whistles mostly based on the high-pitched instrument in background, so there's actually no persistent pattern here. So... nope, sorry.
- 00:14:165 (3) - This slider is not consistant imo. Because you always follow the heavy beat from the song so this slider makes you miss a beat at 00:14:358-. It's better to remove this slider then add a circle at 00:14:358- for better consistencies and playability. It's my intention to have the rhythm this way. And adding circles will add to the difficulty I think?
- 00:19:390 (2) - I think you will need a whistle here to make whistle rythim more consistant. same reason as before
- 00:25:584 (2) - Same as before, for more consistencies add a whistle at this slider start ^
- 00:35:648 (3) - Same with before, for better consistencies, reduce the length of this slider to 00:36:035- then add a circle at 00:36:229. It follows the beat better. ^ and adding a circle adds to difficulty
- 00:46:487 (1) - Finish sounds at the slider start for opening of new rythim? I think I've gotten this too many times for me to ignore, so I make my compromises lol
- 00:52:681 (1) - ^
- 00:58:874 (1) - ^
- 01:01:971 (3) - ^
- 01:03:519 (5) - ^all done I think
- 01:13:197- For better readability of the note i suggest you add a note here. There's a heavy beat there and you suddenly switch from white tick to red tick and it's make the readability suffer.
- 01:14:745- ^ again it's my intention to have rhythm in this way... I hope you can understand
Insane
- 00:40:294 (1) - How about add a finish here for the begining of new rythim?
- 00:46:487 (1) - ^
- 00:52:681 (1) - ^ at the slider start
- 00:58:874 (5) - ^
- 01:01:971 (2) - ^
- 01:03:519 (9) - ^
- 01:16:681 (1) - I think you miss a whistle here at slider start. Not consistant with other whistle rythim.
- 01:22:874 (1) - ^
- 01:25:777 (3) - ^ but at the repeat.
- 01:29:068 (4) - ^ at slider start.
- Nice hard, just hitsounds mod, orz
basically I fixed most concerning finishes but none regarding to whistles, same reason as before.Cool mapset. You can call me back after you fix this mod :3
- 00:19:390 (6) - For better whistle consistencies i suggest you add a whistle here at slider start.
- 00:25:584 (4) - ^ in fact I add finish instead, maybe sounds good too if not worse?
- 00:39:810 (6,7) - Please keep the consistencies of 1/4 spacing here. This 1/4 spacing is not consistant with other 1/4 spacing. A little jump like this doesn't play good imo. So this should be like this for better playability > http://puu.sh/DHXc fixed in another way lol
Recheck
Normal
Insane
Normal
- 00:58:874 (1) - Nazi, move this slider endpoint 1 grid down to make this slider perfectly blanket with 00:58:487 (4) -
- 01:17:552 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 afterward. But end at the same spot. The 1/4 space is too surprising for beginner and normal player.
- 01:46:971 (1) - ^
- I just realized that this difficulty has a big gap with normal due it's have so many 1/4 rythim in this diff. Reduce the number of 1/4 on this diff to make it balance with normal.
- 00:27:326 (4,5) - Nazi, but these are not blanketed properly.
- 00:39:713 (4,5,1) - Spacing inconsistencies. Can break the flow.
- 00:50:552 (1,2,3) - Hmm, i don't think you should jump this note. the vocal doesn't have strong beat on it to justify the jump. So make it 1.0x like previous spacing.
- 01:27:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jump like this is very surprising and confusing in hard. You should make the spacing at least consistent.
- 01:35:648 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a bit hard and this is the only stream with 5 circle on it in this diff. You should change this stream to repeat slider like 01:41:842 (3) -
Insane
- 00:49:197 (4,1) - Very surprising jump. It really breaks the flow of the gameplay. And the antijump after it make this jump worse.
- 01:21:519 (2) - Stack this circle below 01:20:939 (8) - end? Doesn't very good to see.
Topic Starter
Thanks again for modding. I'll just go and make a [Medium].Miya wrote:
Recheck
NormalHard
- 00:58:874 (1) - Nazi, move this slider endpoint 1 grid down to make this slider perfectly blanket with 00:58:487 (4) - not sure which endpoint you are referring to but moving the whole slider down 1 grid looks good
- 01:17:552 (1) - Make this spinner start 1/4 afterward. But end at the same spot. The 1/4 space is too surprising for beginner and normal player.
- 01:46:971 (1) - ^ above two fixed
Yia's Taiko > Rename it Yia's Taiko Oni since this is insane taiko. ok
- I just realized that this difficulty has a big gap with normal due it's have so many 1/4 rythim in this diff. Reduce the number of 1/4 on this diff to make it balance with normal. ouch, i think i'll just make a new diff
- 00:27:326 (4,5) - Nazi, but these are not blanketed properly. fixed
- 00:39:713 (4,5,1) - Spacing inconsistencies. Can break the flow. fixed
- 00:50:552 (1,2,3) - Hmm, i don't think you should jump this note. the vocal doesn't have strong beat on it to justify the jump. So make it 1.0x like previous spacing. i don't know how to describe this but ultimately IMO the melody builds up "tension" until (1) which becomes a strong beat, and to reflect that i add a bit of jump here
- 01:27:326 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Jump like this is very surprising and confusing in hard. You should make the spacing at least consistent. if this is the second hardest diff of 4 osu standard diffs i think they should play fine?
- 01:35:648 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a bit hard and this is the only stream with 5 circle on it in this diff. You should change this stream to repeat slider like 01:41:842 (3) - i'll just make a new diff to balance this
Insane
- 00:49:197 (4,1) - Very surprising jump. It really breaks the flow of the gameplay. And the antijump after it make this jump worse. like i said there's a "tension" feeling going on here. maybe considering it as something like "ready...and jump!" ?
- 01:21:519 (2) - Stack this circle below 01:20:939 (8) - end? Doesn't very good to see. i want to make this note visible that's why
But I don't suppose you will be available for a second recheck lol
久違的mod (By Irc)
最近真的太懶了...居然停擺了modding和mapping 1week了 Orz... 20:27 spboxer3: : ok~IRC mod
20:27 yongtw123: : \:D/
20:29 spboxer3: : 00:11:648 - 多於綠線應該刪除
20:29 yongtw123: : :O
20:29 spboxer3: : 00:12:423 (1) - (Bug) NC需求
20:30 yongtw123: : :OO
20:30 spboxer3: : 00:23:068 (2,4) - overlaps
20:30 yongtw123: : 這個就難修了...恩....
20:31 spboxer3: : 00:37:197 (3) - 照理來說應該是這個地方開始NC會比較適當
20:31 yongtw123: : ok
20:31 spboxer3: : 00:45:713 (7) - 這個地方可以加NC來突顯這邊的特殊
20:31 yongtw123: : good
20:32 spboxer3: : 01:05:842 - 多於綠線
20:32 yongtw123: : removed
20:33 spboxer3: : 01:12:810 (1,2,3) - 該怎麼說 這個並不是在同一直線上的
20:33 spboxer3: : 如果你本意是要讓這三個在同一直線上那這就需要改了
20:33 yongtw123: : 啊真的
20:33 spboxer3: : 記得如果改了 後面的pattern好像也需要作微調 那個別忘了
20:34 yongtw123: : fixed
20:34 yongtw123: : 不過發現後面的pattern故意往下襬一點會比較平衡
20:35 spboxer3: : 01:30:616 (3) - 移到x456,y132好像會比較平均些
20:35 spboxer3: : 01:29:842 (1,3) - 的間距與01:30:229 (2,4) - 的有所區別
20:35 spboxer3: : 所以我提出這樣建議
20:35 yongtw123: : sure
20:36 spboxer3: : 01:33:906 - 與01:34:100 - 其實可以加個note來幫助一下這段空白 讓這段空白不會顯的很突兀
20:36 yongtw123: : 那邊我是給jump之後的緩衝 故意的
20:36 spboxer3: : 嗯嗯
20:36 spboxer3: : 01:40:681 (3) - 這個地方NC會比01:41:068 (1) - 來的適合些
20:37 spboxer3: : 重音段落開始處
20:37 spboxer3: : 01:43:777 (3) - ^
20:37 yongtw123: : fixed
20:37 spboxer3: : Yia's Taiko
20:37 spboxer3: : 01:34:487 -
20:38 yongtw123: : ?
20:38 spboxer3: : 這邊的kiai沒有在正確的timing上
20:38 spboxer3: : 結束點
20:38 yongtw123: : oh
20:38 spboxer3: : 差了1ms
20:38 spboxer3: : 去調一下吧~
20:38 yongtw123: : :OOOO
20:38 spboxer3: : ok~finished
anyway~ good luck
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!
Hope this new diff balances the set more
Hope this new diff balances the set more
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.
[Normal]
01:35:648 (2) - End at 01:36:035 -
[Medium]
00:13:584 (4) - Move to 00:13:487 -
00:18:229 - Add note
00:19:390 (2) - Del and put note
00:19:584 - Add slider, end it at 00:19:681 -
00:46:487 (1) - No reverse arrow (End at 00:46:777 -)
01:07:777 (4) - Move to 01:07:777 -
01:10:681 - Add note
01:12:035 (4) - Del note
01:26:358 (1) - Move to 01:26:261 -
01:31:584 - Add note
01:32:358 - ^
01:33:132 - ^
[Hard]
00:13:487 (6) - Del note and make the next slider start here (Same end as before)
00:19:681 (5) - ^
01:07:681 (5) - ^
01:09:713 (1) - No reverse arrow, end at 01:09:906 -
01:26:261 (4) - Del note and make the next slider start here (Same end as before)
[Insane]
00:00:616 (3) - No reverse arrow (End at 00:00:713 - )
00:09:616 (7) - Move to 00:09:519 -
Yes, I've modded all the diffs even if you did not respect my SP +12 max rule ^^
Love your MP3 file with 156kpbs audio, it's not common
Good luck with your map
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad.
[Normal]
01:35:648 (2) - End at 01:36:035 -
[Medium]
00:13:584 (4) - Move to 00:13:487 -
00:18:229 - Add note
00:19:390 (2) - Del and put note
00:19:584 - Add slider, end it at 00:19:681 -
00:46:487 (1) - No reverse arrow (End at 00:46:777 -)
01:07:777 (4) - Move to 01:07:777 -
01:10:681 - Add note
01:12:035 (4) - Del note
01:26:358 (1) - Move to 01:26:261 -
01:31:584 - Add note
01:32:358 - ^
01:33:132 - ^
[Hard]
00:13:487 (6) - Del note and make the next slider start here (Same end as before)
00:19:681 (5) - ^
01:07:681 (5) - ^
01:09:713 (1) - No reverse arrow, end at 01:09:906 -
01:26:261 (4) - Del note and make the next slider start here (Same end as before)
[Insane]
00:00:616 (3) - No reverse arrow (End at 00:00:713 - )
00:09:616 (7) - Move to 00:09:519 -
Yes, I've modded all the diffs even if you did not respect my SP +12 max rule ^^
Love your MP3 file with 156kpbs audio, it's not common
Good luck with your map
Topic Starter
Thanks for modding!Arnold0 wrote:
From Let me TRY to mod your maps
As said in my queue I'm a newbie modder so my mod might be bad. no problem mate!
[Normal]
01:35:648 (2) - End at 01:36:035 - this is intentional rhythm
[Medium]
00:13:584 (4) - Move to 00:13:487 - that'd make this diff too difficult in terms of rhythm
00:18:229 - Add note intentional rhythm, and following the vocal somewhat, actually
00:19:390 (2) - Del and put note
00:19:584 - Add slider, end it at 00:19:681 - i think using a repeating slider makes this part easier?
00:46:487 (1) - No reverse arrow (End at 00:46:777 -) i kind of get your point but that creates too large a gap in rhythm so nope~
01:07:777 (4) - Move to 01:07:777 - again, rhythm complexity issue
01:10:681 - Add note again, intentional and following the vocal
01:12:035 (4) - Del note good suggestion, overhauled
01:26:358 (1) - Move to 01:26:261 - again, rhythm complexity
01:31:584 - Add note
01:32:358 - ^
01:33:132 - ^ above 3 all same^
[Hard]
00:13:487 (6) - Del note and make the next slider start here (Same end as before) nope, that corresponds to an instrument and a hitsound
00:19:681 (5) - ^
01:07:681 (5) - ^ same
01:09:713 (1) - No reverse arrow, end at 01:09:906 - changed
01:26:261 (4) - Del note and make the next slider start here (Same end as before) nope, same reason as the first
[Insane]
00:00:616 (3) - No reverse arrow (End at 00:00:713 - ) it fits the instrument actually?
00:09:616 (7) - Move to 00:09:519 - very very good find
Yes, I've modded all the diffs even if you did not respect my SP +12 max rule ^^ thank you very much!
Love your MP3 file with 156kpbs audio, it's not common
Good luck with your map
IRC mod a single diff by request:
22:04 loveFantasy: : 嗯嗯
22:04 loveFantasy: : 00:17:068 (1,2,3) - 我會group成 (3,1,2) 或 (1,1,2) 覺得比較合歌
22:04 yongtw123: : 只是要怎麼截文...
22:05 loveFantasy: : /savelog
22:05 loveFantasy: : 01:00:423 (1) - 然後這邊我覺得有點style 就覺得怪怪的
22:05 yongtw123: : 哦哦?
22:05 loveFantasy: : 我會下 白-白 紅-紅的兩個長的吧
22:05 yongtw123: : 等等 前面的(312) (112)什麼意思啊?
22:05 loveFantasy: : (3,1,2) 意思是你把new combo移到原本的(2)上
22:06 loveFantasy: : (1,1,2) 是原本的(2)上一個new combo
22:06 loveFantasy: : 01:26:358 (1,2,3,4) - 然後這邊我覺得
22:06 yongtw123: : 喔喔 是個NC mod
22:06 loveFantasy: : new combo直接跟高白線 有助於讓人了解是對稱的3/4 mapping
22:06 loveFantasy: : 畢竟我剛剛也有個100出在這
22:06 yongtw123: : 恩恩
22:07 loveFantasy: : 01:34:100 (X)
22:07 loveFantasy: : 不衝突你內心的難度設定的話 我是會想加個東西
22:07 loveFantasy: : 應該就這四條而已吧
22:08 yongtw123: : 喔 那個break我是故意家的 畢竟是個medium所以想說jump之後給個緩衝
22:08 loveFantasy: : 嗯嗯
22:09 loveFantasy: : 因為那邊有 drumroll 啦 XD
22:09 yongtw123: : 是沒錯啦(姚明face
22:09 loveFantasy: : 其實我就覺得完成度基本到rank了
22:04 loveFantasy: : 嗯嗯
22:04 loveFantasy: : 00:17:068 (1,2,3) - 我會group成 (3,1,2) 或 (1,1,2) 覺得比較合歌
22:04 yongtw123: : 只是要怎麼截文...
22:05 loveFantasy: : /savelog
22:05 loveFantasy: : 01:00:423 (1) - 然後這邊我覺得有點style 就覺得怪怪的
22:05 yongtw123: : 哦哦?
22:05 loveFantasy: : 我會下 白-白 紅-紅的兩個長的吧
22:05 yongtw123: : 等等 前面的(312) (112)什麼意思啊?
22:05 loveFantasy: : (3,1,2) 意思是你把new combo移到原本的(2)上
22:06 loveFantasy: : (1,1,2) 是原本的(2)上一個new combo
22:06 loveFantasy: : 01:26:358 (1,2,3,4) - 然後這邊我覺得
22:06 yongtw123: : 喔喔 是個NC mod
22:06 loveFantasy: : new combo直接跟高白線 有助於讓人了解是對稱的3/4 mapping
22:06 loveFantasy: : 畢竟我剛剛也有個100出在這
22:06 yongtw123: : 恩恩
22:07 loveFantasy: : 01:34:100 (X)
22:07 loveFantasy: : 不衝突你內心的難度設定的話 我是會想加個東西
22:07 loveFantasy: : 應該就這四條而已吧
22:08 yongtw123: : 喔 那個break我是故意家的 畢竟是個medium所以想說jump之後給個緩衝
22:08 loveFantasy: : 嗯嗯
22:09 loveFantasy: : 因為那邊有 drumroll 啦 XD
22:09 yongtw123: : 是沒錯啦(姚明face
22:09 loveFantasy: : 其實我就覺得完成度基本到rank了
Topic Starter
1st mod: fixed NC
2nd mod: although a 3-repeat does seem a bit sudden, fiddling around with rhythms i still like the original
3rd mod: fixed NC
4th mod: the break is a buffer after the small jumps
Thanks for modding!
2nd mod: although a 3-repeat does seem a bit sudden, fiddling around with rhythms i still like the original
3rd mod: fixed NC
4th mod: the break is a buffer after the small jumps
Thanks for modding!
wow nice map.it is best only my railgun map for me. why i have 0 kudosu remaining
normal:
Medium: oops.my bad. you said, this is "intentional rhythm" in old mod. i support this now.
00:18:423 (2) - move to 00:18:229?. i wanted sound here.
Insane:
OD8plz. OD7 is poor for this great map.
00:03:519 (2) - NC instead of previous (1)
00:06:616 (2) - ^
00:05:842 (1) - remove NC
00:13:971 (2) - NC instead of previous (1) if you follow the vocal
00:14:745 (1) - remove NC,I think you need not to add nc on start of streams every times
good luck for your rank
p.s. I DLed this at random.and i modded to get kd and shoot star :p
really hope for this rank/
Medium: oops.my bad. you said, this is "intentional rhythm" in old mod. i support this now.
00:18:423 (2) - move to 00:18:229?. i wanted sound here.
Insane:
OD8plz. OD7 is poor for this great map.
00:03:519 (2) - NC instead of previous (1)
00:06:616 (2) - ^
00:05:842 (1) - remove NC
00:13:971 (2) - NC instead of previous (1) if you follow the vocal
00:14:745 (1) - remove NC,I think you need not to add nc on start of streams every times
good luck for your rank
p.s. I DLed this at random.and i modded to get kd and shoot star :p
really hope for this rank/