Oh! I'm so sorry for delay O_o
I don't know why but I have not received E-mail notification... >_<

Chocopikel wrote:

[JoJo's Normal]

1. AR and OD -1//Ok OD-1 now.
2. 00:18:453 (3) - whistle to the start of slider//No.
3. 00:23:292 (4,5,6) - this might be too hard, how about make slider at 00:23:292 (4,5)?//I don't think it's hard.
4. 00:27:163 (4,5,6,7) - same comment as before, how about make slider at 00:27:163 (4,5) and 00:27:646 (6,7)?//No,sorry.
5. 00:37:687 (1) - start of spinner at 00:37:808//Make no sence to do this.
6. 00:47:485 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - same comment as 00:23:292 (4,5,6), how about make slider at 00:47:485 (1,2,3) and 00:48:453 (1,2,3)?//Hmm, ok.
7. 00:51:235 (1) - start of spinner at 00:51:356//I wanna keep this.
8. 00:54:017 - add note
9. 00:54:259 - ^
10. 00:54:501 - ^//Feel strange after adding...
11. 00:57:404 (5) - New combo
12. 01:04:663 (4) - ^//I prefer my setting for them.
13. 01:08:654 (1) - start of spinner at 01:08:775//No.
14. 01:13:130 (5) - New combo//^
15. 01:26:316 (1) - start of spinner at 01:26:437//No.

Byakugan249 wrote:

[JoJo's Normal]
00:04:904 (1) - ooh i don't like the look of this slider. i feel that it'd look nice if this slider looks symmetrical. something like this is fine.//OK~
00:06:961 (1) - same as easy.//Really? I don't think I should reduce the volume...
00:09:501 (1,2) - the spinner-osu is covering this note which makes it hard for players too see. i suggest that you move it somewhere else so that it'd look fully visible for players to see.//Oh...I wanna just suggest them to change a better skin for playing XD
00:28:130 (1) - same as 00:06:961.
00:31:759 (5) - ^
00:35:872 (1) - ^//Ok I changed them but setting 50% volume instead.
00:40:227 (1) - yes it's at the middle but the hitburst is covering this note. same reason as 00:09:501.//Sorry don't want to change this.
00:44:824 (3) - judging where the slider is, i think players might let go of the second repeat as they're not used to this kind of rhythm. I think it'd be easier if you can remove all repeats and add another 1/1 slider.Ummm..Sorry I'd keep this for now.
00:47:848 (2,3,1,2) - this pattern might throw off beginners because they might think that 2 is connected to one and vice versa. I suggest that you do something easier and readable for players. something like this is fine for players. if you ignore this, then you can do something similar to this.//Yes changed a much more simple pattern.
01:05:146 (5) - this might throw off players because it's not following the vocals accurately. so remove this circle and add a 1/2 slider starting from 01:04:094 to follow vocals accurately.//Well,I don't think it'd be a problem in a normal diff.
01:07:566 (3,4,5) - replace this for a 1/1 repeat slider to make it easier for players?//I'll do this if this is an easy diff...
01:16:275 (1,2,3,4) - same as above but replace this for 2 1/1 sliders.//Denied for same reason.

Thanks for mod guys! ><
And sorry again for delay T.T

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [JoJo's Normal].osu

meikan336 wrote:

00:47:969 the patten of hit notes in was fine the way it was before I like this beatmap b/c of it.

where?

As requested, sorry slightly late.

[General]

Looks fine to me

[Easy]

00:05:872 (2,3) - I prefer if you place it like this http://puu.sh/oGlE, but it just preference and you don't have to do it.
00:18:453 (4) - If you really want finish here, I think you should lower the volume here, as there is no cymbal sound in the background. To be honest, I think it'd be better if you use a custom kick drum/bass sound instead through.
00:15:066 (3) - Copy (1), Ctrl+ J, add repeat and place it here instead? Just preference again. http://puu.sh/oGnD
00:32:001 (1) - I think you should use red point on this too http://puu.sh/oGqx, but again just preference.
00:35:872 (1) - Same as 00:18:453.
00:47:485 (1,2) - I think you should do slider instead like (3) & (4). They're all following the same rhythm and I really don't see why for this part, it's 2 hit circles. Also give a nice effect to the instrument (nothing > clap, nothing > clap, nothing > clap).
00:47:485 (1,3) - Depending on if you change above parts or not, combo numbers may be different. I can hear finish in the background at 00:47:485 & 00:49:421 so please put some there, as I notice you lowered the volume of most finish you put, I suggest to lower it here too.
01:00:550 (4) - I like to use slider shape sometime to represent the music, the vocal sings on the red tick on this slider (01:00:792 & 01:01:275) so represent this with a red tick right on the center? http://puu.sh/oGsq
01:05:388 (4) - Similar to above, vocal sings on the red tick, but for this one, just curve this slider?
01:06:840 (1,2) - As the prominent (cymbal + vocal) sound in the music is on the red tick here, it can be difficult to hit the hit circle properly if you rely on music to play so maybe do slider instead to make it a bit easier to play?
01:11:679 (2) - Same as 01:05:388.
01:16:517 (4) - Same as 01:00:550, just curve if you don't want to use red point.
01:22:324 (1,2) - Similar to 01:06:840, finish and vocal start on the red tick (01:22:082) so it make it hard to hit (1) properly.

Timing points
I notice the song change in volume, but you didn't put a timing point to represent this so how about...

00:09:259 - 50% volume
00:23:775 - 55% volume, Don't need to add this one if you don't want to.
00:24:259 - 60% volume
00:39:743 - 70% volume

Also for last spinner, I highly recommend fading it out rather then like this since it sound way too loud especially from 01:28:130 till end as the song greatly reduce in volume there. So I recommend putting timing point at
01:26:679 - 65%
01:27:163 - 50%
01:27:646 - 35%
01:28:130 - 20%
01:28:614 - 10%
You don't have to do it this way, but I highly recommend slowly lowering the volume rather then this.

Wow, mod for this diff turn surprisingly long, but everything is just suggestion except for fading out the spinner at the end. Diff looks good to me, but I think for future maps, you shouldn't strain from putting notes on red ticks, it really fits some part here.

[Normal]

- Take a look at what I suggest for timing point in Easy specifically (00:09:259 & 00:24:259 & 00:39:743.), I think it's better then keeping volume consistent for those part.

00:01:034 (1) - Sound better to me without the whistle. When you put the whistle, the finish sound clipped.
00:02:969 (1) - Can hear cymbal here, but not as loud as the first one so finish with reduced volume instead? No whistle on this for same reason as above.
00:07:808 - I think you should add a timing point at the middle of the spinner to reduce the volume here as the spinner spin bonus sound, sounds too loud here for me.
00:29:098 (2) - I assume you put red point to represent that you're following instrument here? I don't really agree with red points here as the music sound really "smooth" for me and doesn't have a "rough" feel to it. Subjective, so change if you want, but since all other sliders are smooth sliders (white points), this one really stood out for me. Or you can leave it straight like 00:32:969 (2).
00:43:130 (6) - Hm, intentional overlap? It doesn't look bad so you don't need to fix it.
00:43:614 (1) - I think this slider can be a bit better http://puu.sh/oGxp. Feel free to adjust it a bit more as I only spend a couple minutes on it.

318,72,43614,6,0,B|368:50|419:75|463:136|419:196,1,216,0|8

00:44:824 (3) - Finish seems better then clap (on 1st repeat and end) for me as the cymbal sound is more noticeable then the bass sound in background.
00:48:211 (2) - Similar to 00:29:098, music sound smooth here for me and red point ruins that feeling.
00:49:421 (1) - Finish (reduce volume maybe if you think it's too loud) here for cymbal in backgrounds
01:00:792 (4,6) - Cymbal in background so finishes [on (4) & begin of (6)], not sure why you're not putting them as the default finish sound great on the cymbal sound in this song
01:20:146 (4) - Finish at begin, you put it at 00:51:114 (3) so why not here?
01:24:017 (1) - This slider can be better, but I try to make it better and it was quite difficult, so I guess it's fine.

All is suggestion but finishes as I see no reason not to put them. Diff looks good otherwise.

[Hard]

-1 hp & od for better difficulty spread. Easy has 1 hp & od, Normal has 3 hp & od and Insane has 7 hp & od so changing for this diff to 5 makes it completely balance and a nicer spread.

00:07:203 (4,5,6,1,2,3) - I think you should use some timing points and make volume lower, for example, on (4), 50% volume, on (5) 40% volume, on (6) 30% volume and on (1), 20% then back to 60% or whatever you want for the finish 00:08:775 (4). Sound much better to me as the music is getting softer here.
00:30:429 (7) - Hm make this slider nicer? http://puu.sh/oGFV
00:42:163 (5) - Try to place a bit more in the center of (4) & (6) [1.00x distant snap]? http://puu.sh/oGGj
00:43:614 (1) - Same as 00:30:429.
00:51:114 (1) - ^, slider would look better especially in this diff if you snap the end properly, for example, unsnapped http://puu.sh/oGGE, snapped http://puu.sh/oGGK
00:57:646 (7) - ^
01:00:792 (5) - Should copy (7) and Ctrl+J and Ctrl+R here.
01:09:985 (7) - A bit hard to read as lot of stack on each other and slightly low approach rate so new combo here?
01:13:130 (6) - I think you should curve this slider as well as (5) is curved and they're following the same rhythm. When I see that they're different, I think the music changes which isn't really the case here.
01:13:856 (1) - I think lead nicer to jump if you do a slight jump here (1.2x distant snap maybe).
01:26:195 (1) - I recommend fading this spinner out rather then like this, look at Easy if you're not sure what to do (on the timing points section of it).

Map seem fine, but sliders need polishing

[Insane]

00:08:775 (1) - You had finish here in Easy so why not here too?
00:11:921 (5,6) - I think you should do jump instead, this way work, but I feel the map is a bit clustered here. Look at 00:08:775 (1,2,3,4,5), everything overlap each other a bit, and this goes for most of this section, so nice to have a break from this and have some jump here and there. So if you do this, you should do for 00:19:663 (5,6), 00:27:404 (6,7), etc. Won't mention them again.
01:20:146 (6,7) - I think you should stack this stream
01:21:477 (3,4,6,1) - And snap these two streams to higher distant snap. No particular reason except it play better for me.

Don't see much to mention, except for one thing, and consider it for future map. Don't hesitate to do 1/4 jumps, even through you're snapping the note to distant snap, everytime you do 1/4, it feel like the song pauses which isn't good as the song doesn't really feel that way for me. Doing jump remedies this problem and help make map follow the song a bit better and makes for a more natural play so consider it. Especially for this song where the bpm is quite low. The map doesn't play bad through, but I think with some jumps on the 1/4, would be better. Here's a quick suggestion, for example here 01:11:800 (3,4), how about stacking (3) on (4) and doing a jump?

Well map seem good to me, but could more mods as I notice some issue (nothing unrankable) which I highly recommend to change in all the diffs.

So star and good luck, don't be discourage by my big mod as most of it is just suggestions anyway.

Edit: (T) - use it to represent timing point- seem to cause error with the new system so remove them all

merchat7 wrote:

[Normal]

- Take a look at what I suggest for timing point in Easy specifically (00:09:259 & 00:24:259 & 00:39:743.), I think it's better then keeping volume consistent for those part.//Hmm,just added the 50% one.

00:01:034 (1) - Sound better to me without the whistle. When you put the whistle, the finish sound clipped. //Okay~ Removed.
00:02:969 (1) - Can hear cymbal here, but not as loud as the first one so finish with reduced volume instead? No whistle on this for same reason as above.//Okay,I thought your hitsounding is much better than me.
00:07:808 - I think you should add a timing point at the middle of the spinner to reduce the volume here as the spinner spin bonus sound, sounds too loud here for me.//Fixed.
00:29:098 (2) - I assume you put red point to represent that you're following instrument here? I don't really agree with red points here as the music sound really "smooth" for me and doesn't have a "rough" feel to it. Subjective, so change if you want, but since all other sliders are smooth sliders (white points), this one really stood out for me. Or you can leave it straight like 00:32:969 (2).//Fine, as your wish.
00:43:130 (6) - Hm, intentional overlap? It doesn't look bad so you don't need to fix it.//Yes, keep for now.
00:43:614 (1) - I think this slider can be a bit better http://puu.sh/oGxp. Feel free to adjust it a bit more as I only spend a couple minutes on it.//OK~

318,72,43614,6,0,B|368:50|419:75|463:136|419:196,1,216,0|8

00:44:824 (3) - Finish seems better then clap (on 1st repeat and end) for me as the cymbal sound is more noticeable then the bass sound in background.//Changed~
00:48:211 (2) - Similar to 00:29:098, music sound smooth here for me and red point ruins that feeling.//Uh..Perhaps keep this for now.
00:49:421 (1) - Finish (reduce volume maybe if you think it's too loud) here for cymbal in backgrounds//Added.
01:00:792 (4,6) - Cymbal in background so finishes [on (4) & begin of (6)], not sure why you're not putting them as the default finish sound great on the cymbal sound in this song//Uhhhh, added ><
01:20:146 (4) - Finish at begin, you put it at 00:51:114 (3) so why not here?//Added.
01:24:017 (1) - This slider can be better, but I try to make it better and it was quite difficult, so I guess it's fine.//Yes, just adjust a little.

All is suggestion but finishes as I see no reason not to put them. Diff looks good otherwise.

Thank you for helpful mod ~ ^^

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [JoJo's Normal].osu

almost fixed.
thanks for useful mod!

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu

phonicさん こんにちは～

thank you for the request ~

here my mod ~ （↑mod被ってたらごめんなさい～><;）

[General]

1. fine

[Easy]

1. 00:18:453 (4) - finishは合っていない気がしました。 入れるなら↓このような音にした方が違和感無いかと
   Download: soft-hitfinish.zip
2. 00:28:130 (1) - ^
3. 00:32:001 (1) - スライダー頭 ^
4. 00:35:872 (1) - ^
5. 00:38:292 (5) - リピート部にclap?
6. 00:44:582 (2,3) - リズムの提案： http://puu.sh/oNyM たまにはリズムを変えるのもありかと。 変える場合00:45:308にfinish
7. 00:47:485 (1) - finish追加
8. 00:49:421 (4) - add NCとスライダー頭にfinish追加
9. 00:54:017 (1) - これを削除して、00:54:259,00:54:743にnote置いた方がリズムは取りやすいかも。（もしくはもう1リピート増やす）
10. 00:58:130 (1) - remove NC and 00:59:098 (2) - add NC の方が良いと思います。
11. 01:00:066 (3,4,5) - 00:44:582と同じリズムの提案
12. 01:14:582 (2,3,4,5) - ^
13. 01:24:017 (1) - clap削除

[JoJo's Normal]

1. 00:06:961 (1,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/oNYE 00:08:775 includes a finish sound. but I think that is better to match it with vocal here. I feel sense of incongruity for the beginning of song ( if you use it, 00:08:292 - add green line vol5% is better. )
2. 00:20:388 (5) - remove note? ( i think sound has nothing here )
3. 00:31:759 (5) - remove clap&finish to end of the slider. ( strong sound is not here ) If put it, start of the slider is better.
4. 00:33:937 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider ?
5. 00:47:485 (1,2,3) - spacing too close. maybe is this intentional?
6. 00:58:372 (7) - I think that NC is too long in normal. here you can put that matches the vocal NC. so add NC and 00:59:098 (1) - remove NC and 01:00:792 (4) - add NC is better imo
7. 01:13:856 (6) - same as ^
8. 01:17:727 (4) - remove finish. not put more clean i will hear
9. 01:24:017 (1) - end of the slider ^ and it is very difficult to make a spiral slider . ↓ made my slider
   

   376,136,84017,6,0,B|308:48|136:48|96:160|104:272|156:348|288:348|364:320|364:216|292:168|256:196,1,648,0|4

[S o r d a 's Hard]

1. 00:33:211 (4,5,6,1) - リズムとNCの提案: http://puu.sh/oOZW ( 00:26:437 (6,7) 同じようなリズムなので、こっちの方が私は好きです )
2. 00:36:840 (6) - ヒットサウンドの提案: スライダー頭にclap消してwhistle , リピート部分にwhistle消してclap , endにclap。　00:38:533 (3) - clap追加
3. 00:45:308 (4) - finish追加?
4. 00:53:775 (2,3) - リズムの提案: バックのピアノ?にあわせるように 3を消して、2のスライダーにリピート追加。
5. 01:07:566 (3,4,5,6,7) - ヒットサウンドの提案: 3にwhistle , 6のwhistle削除 , 7にfinish
6. 01:16:759 (2,3) - 2のスライダーendのclap削除。 3にclapかfinish追加
7. 01:17:727 (5) - スライダーendのwhistle削除
8. サビにもう少しwhistle入れてもいいかなと感じました。 ↓ 時間で書いてます。
   00:56:921,00:58:372,01:05:630,01:11:679,01:12:404,01:13:856

[Insane]

1. 00:16:880 (2) - 00:16:275 (6)のヒットバーストでサークル⇒スライダーってのが分かりづらい気がします ><
2. 00:40:227 (2) - add clap ?
3. 01:16:275 (5) - add NC and 01:16:759 (1) - remove NC

Good map star☆~

頑張ってください！

some fixed arigato~

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu

kosiga wrote:

[JoJo's Normal]

1. 00:06:961 (1,1) - Suggestion of the rhythm: http://puu.sh/oNYE 00:08:775 includes a finish sound. but I think that is better to match it with vocal here. I feel sense of incongruity for the beginning of song ( if you use it, 00:08:292 - add green line vol5% is better. )//Sorry rejected since I thought there should be something on 00:08:775
2. 00:20:388 (5) - remove note? ( i think sound has nothing here )//Really sounds strange after removing this...So no.
3. 00:31:759 (5) - remove clap&finish to end of the slider. ( strong sound is not here ) If put it, start of the slider is better.//Keep this for now. I will think about that if someone else mention this.
4. 00:33:937 (3) - add whistle to start of the slider ?//No..
5. 00:47:485 (1,2,3) - spacing too close. maybe is this intentional?//Oh oh!! Fixed! Big issue here..lol~
6. 00:58:372 (7) - I think that NC is too long in normal. here you can put that matches the vocal NC. so add NC and 00:59:098 (1) - remove NC and 01:00:792 (4) - add NC is better imo
7. 01:13:856 (6) - same as ^//Ok~ Both fixed.
8. 01:17:727 (4) - remove finish. not put more clean i will hear//....Hmm, okay then.
9. 01:24:017 (1) - end of the slider ^ and it is very difficult to make a spiral slider . ↓ made my slider
   

   376,136,84017,6,0,B|308:48|136:48|96:160|104:272|156:348|288:348|364:320|364:216|292:168|256:196,1,648,0|4

   //I'm not sure if the overlapping is okay or not....But well used your code~ Looks better to mine.

Mod arigatou ~ ^^

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [JoJo's Normal].osu

Can I add "CTB Difficulty"?

JoJo's Normal... mod完這diff才發現 這是中文mapper的diff...= =



I can't find any question for other diff~

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.

that's all
good luck~

thanks~

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu

[Easy]
01:14:582 (2) - １分１５秒００６を終点にして、１分１５秒５５０にサークルを置いたほうがいいかも

[JoJo's Normal]
00:43:130 (6) - You should take care not to pile it with the former slider.

[S o r d a's Hard]
00:16:517 - 直前のスライダーをもう１つ折り返すかサークルを追加したほうがいい感じ

[Insane]
00:00:066 (1,2,3,4) - 音のなり始めがいきなり連打なのが少し気になりました。裏を返せば最初なのでリトライ重ねても大丈夫といえばそうなのですが・・・。リズムも２分の３になってるみたいなのでそれに合わせて全部スライダーの折り返しとかでもいいのかも。



譜面がだいぶ洗練されててこれくらいしか自分には提案できるとこがありませんでした(´･ω･`)
ゲストだと修正が大変なのに色々と食い荒らしてすいません;

PEPOTTI wrote:

[JoJo's Normal]
00:43:130 (6) - You should take care not to pile it with the former slider.

Hmm, I'm sure such kind of overlap is fine~~
Thanks for mod >A</

PEPOTTI wrote:

[Easy]
01:14:582 (2) - １分１５秒００６を終点にして、１分１５秒５５０にサークルを置いたほうがいいかも sorry

[Insane]
00:00:066 (1,2,3,4) - 音のなり始めがいきなり連打なのが少し気になりました。裏を返せば最初なのでリトライ重ねても大丈夫といえばそうなのですが・・・。リズムも２分の３になってるみたいなのでそれに合わせて全部スライダーの折り返しとかでもいいのかも。 sorry



譜面がだいぶ洗練されててこれくらいしか自分には提案できるとこがありませんでした(´･ω･`)
ゲストだと修正が大変なのに色々と食い荒らしてすいません; お気になさらずにー

ありがとうです>3<


>>JoJo
fast!!!!!

reqありがとーう！

提案が多いので気に入らないModは無視してください




　　[Insane]

　●　00:00:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - 赤線置かれてない場所にnote置いていいんでしたっけ・・・？　自分も把握できてないのですみません
　●　00:02:364 (4) - 1 grid 右
　●　00:02:485 (5) - 1 grid 上
　●　00:18:453 (1) - ここはHardに合わせてfinishでもいいですが、HardはGuest diffなのでお好みで
　●　00:25:590 (6) - 1 grid 下
　●　00:33:937 (1) - 1 grid 左? 微妙にずれてるような・・


　　[S o r d a's Hard]

　●　00:21:114 (1) - NC削除
　●　00:22:324 (4) - NC? このままでもいいかもです
　●　00:52:324 (2,3,4,5,1) - 丸みを帯びた配置をしてみてはどうでしょうか？


　　[JoJo's Nomarl]

　Good.


　　[Easy]

　●　00:54:259 (1,2) - 少し音が取りづらいと思ったので、スライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう


短いですが以上です。
綺麗な配置でとても良いMapだと思います
初心者Modですみませんでした！
Star★



　

配置のとこだけ少し直しました
ありがとー

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu

Guy wrote:

reqありがとーう！

提案が多いので気に入らないModは無視してください




　　[Insane]

　●　00:00:066 (1,2,3,4,5) - 赤線置かれてない場所にnote置いていいんでしたっけ・・・？　自分も把握できてないのですみません
　●　00:02:364 (4) - 1 grid 右 fixed
　●　00:02:485 (5) - 1 grid 上 fixed
　●　00:18:453 (1) - ここはHardに合わせてfinishでもいいですが、HardはGuest diffなのでお好みで
　●　00:25:590 (6) - 1 grid 下 fixed
　●　00:33:937 (1) - 1 grid 左? 微妙にずれてるような・・ fixed


　　[Easy]

　●　00:54:259 (1,2) - 少し音が取りづらいと思ったので、スライダーにしてみてはどうでしょう fixed


短いですが以上です。
綺麗な配置でとても良いMapだと思います
初心者Modですみませんでした！
Star★



　

ありがとー！！

M4M Nyan ~

Oh my mp3 , hehe =w=




That's all

Picked some~ Thanks Net-chan~ :>

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [JoJo's Normal].osu

[quote="Netsukawa"]M4M Nyan ~

Oh my mp3 , hehe =w= yeah, thanks >w<!




That's all[/quo

thanks ><!

phonic wrote:

Netsukawa wrote:

M4M Nyan ~

Oh my mp3 , hehe =w= yeah, thanks >w<!

General

• [list:db7e3]

1. Fine

Easy

• Setting

1. 1. OD +1

• Mapping

1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:00:550 (1) - Add stack note.
   2. 00:09:259 (1) - It's too suddenly for beginner to read the note. fixed
   3. 01:08:775 (4) - Remove reverse and add slider 1/1 after this slider ? fixed
   4. 01:14:098 (1) - Remove NC and NC next note. fixed
   5. 01:14:582 (2,3) - Sounds weird , like this sounds better fixed
2. Hit Sounds
   
   
   1. 00:01:034 (2) - Add whistle with finish ? fixed
   2. 00:54:743 (2) - Add clap instead whistle , sound better. fixed
   3. 01:14:582 (2) - Add finish at start of slider ? fixed

Insane

• Setting

1. 1. Fine

• Mapping

1. Mapping Design / Issue / Suggestion
   
   
   1. 00:00:550 (5) - Remove 2nd reverse sound better. fixed
2. Hit Sounds
   
   
   1. Fine

That's all

thanks ><!

~





Just stuff, I hope was helpful

Astom wrote:

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[Easy]

1. Gradually decrease volume from 00:06:840 to 00:08:775 Fixed
2. 00:43:614 (1) - whistle at beginning Fixed
3. 00:48:453 (3) - -^ Fixed
4. 00:59:098 (1) - -^ Fixed
5. 01:14:582 (1) - -^ Fixed
6. SPOILER

   try that in 01:06:840 and 01:08:050 (also reduces star rating) Fixed
7. SPOILER

   try that in 01:14:582, 01:16:033 and 01:16:759 (same as before) Fixed
8. SPOILER

   try that in 01:21:840 and 01:22:082 (same as before) Fixed

[Insane]

1. Gradually decrease volume from 00:06:840 to 00:08:775 Fixed
2. 00:16:517 (1) - clap (maybe with a little reduction of volume)
3. 00:54:743 (1) - clap
4. 00:59:098 (4) - whistle at beginning Fixed
5. 01:14:582 (1) - -^ Fixed

Just stuff, I hope was helpful

thanks!

Astom wrote:

[Jojo's Normal]

1. Gradually decrease volume from 00:06:840 to 00:08:775, also add finish to 00:06:961 (1).//Done.
2. Add a circle in 00:54:501?//No.
3. 00:59:098 (4) - whistle at beginning//Hmmmm,sorry I'd say no since I haven't used any more whistles during KIAI.
4. 01:14:582 (4) - whistle instead of finish//Sorry~
5. 01:24:017 (1) - clap at beginning, also a try this:
   
   SPOILER

   370,141,84017,6,0,B|302:53|126:53|102:173|102:277|142:337|242:349|286:325|310:309|326:285|342:241|330:209|310:185|282:177|258:181|250:197,1,648,0|4
   or maybe
   
   SPOILER

   370,141,84017,6,0,B|302:53|126:53|102:173|102:277|142:337|242:349|286:325|310:309|326:285|342:241|330:209|310:185|282:177|258:181|250:197,1,648,0|40|40|4
   there are better options for a long slider :<, maybe a heart?//Clap added...But I really don't like the code given there....

Thanks~~!

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [JoJo's Normal].osu

request from All map will be modded ~





nice song,good mapset & good luck ! <3
Have a star ~ ☆

DarknessAngel wrote:

JoJo's Normal

1. 00:54:501 - 看得出你想跟vocal，但這裡加個note跟得更完全吧 ? :O //不明白为什么你们都说要加..这里完全没vocal啊X.X 而且红线起note会很奇怪.
2. 01:08:050 (4,5) - 先是1/2重疊再來是1/1重疊，我擔心這樣對新手棘手了些
   為了不破壞你的對稱，我覺得把(5)移到上面比較好//大丈夫~首先这是normal,其次这AR完全是可读的.而且现在这样5在中间正好接下一个spinner~

Sorry no changes. But thanks!!

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from All map will be modded ~

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Insane

1. 00:05:872 (4,5) - add whistles to their head ? I think it match the voice Fixed
2. 00:15:308 (4) - should add whistle here to follow "that voice (well...I don't know its name)"
3. 00:19:663 (5) - add whistle,the reason is the same with above
4. 00:31:275 (5) - add whistle at the slider's head Fixed
5. nothing to say about mapset,good diff !

Easy

1. 01:17:243 - I don't know why you decrease the volume here,it is wired for me
2. 01:24:017 (1) - make the spinner end at 01:25:953,then add a spinner at 01:26:195 ?
   I feel it fits brtter

nice song,good mapset & good luck ! <3
Have a star ~ ☆

thank you~

thanks~

Download: Ray - sign (TV Size) (phonic) [S o r d a's Hard].osu

~Easy~
00:02:001 (2) - remove finish
01:24:017 (1) - should be ended at 01:26:195

JoJo's Normal
Looks fine

~S o r d a's Hard~
00:18:453 (2) - remove finish, not fit here

~Insane~
00:11:921 (5,6) - should have 1/4 length instead of 1/2
00:16:517 (1) - ^
00:19:663 (5,6) - ^
00:20:025 (6) - whistle here doesn't fit
00:27:404 (6,7) - should have 1/4 length instead of 1/2
00:32:001 (1) - ^
00:35:146 (6,7) - ^
- Those sliders should be fixed because the end of sliders are not synced with obvious sounds

DJPop wrote:

~Easy~
00:02:001 (2) - remove finish
01:24:017 (1) - should be ended at 01:26:195

JoJo's Normal
Looks fine

~S o r d a's Hard~
00:18:453 (2) - remove finish, not fit here

~Insane~
00:11:921 (5,6) - should have 1/4 length instead of 1/2
00:16:517 (1) - ^
00:19:663 (5,6) - ^
00:20:025 (6) - whistle here doesn't fit
00:27:404 (6,7) - should have 1/4 length instead of 1/2
00:32:001 (1) - ^
00:35:146 (6,7) - ^
- Those sliders should be fixed because the end of sliders are not synced with obvious sounds

all fixed
thanks

DJPop wrote:

Bubble

thanks!

Fine to me, I guess.

Ranked~

おめー！！！！！！！やったね！

osuplayer111 wrote:

Fine to me, I guess.

Ranked~

Thanks!!

そーださんありがとおおおおお！！

ome! > <

congrats

おめでとうー

おめでとう～