1. Easy (1.49 stars, 145 notes)
2. Hard (2.58 stars, 311 notes)
3. Insane (5.01 stars, 635 notes)
4. Normal (2.14 stars, 209 notes)

Raging Bull wrote:

Mine are all suggestions. Feel free to use any or deny any you wish. If you say no, please explain why.

General:
Well..I can't exactly complain about BG since you can't see the black borders anyways Teehee.

Normal:
Your song setup difficulty settings are definitely not normal....I suggest you lower them all down to a more appropriate setting. Lowered them down a notch or two.
00:14:058 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems pretty squarey patterns. Perhaps add some shapes into the sliders so you can also position some notes diagonally? Added shapes and made some circle patterns.
00:32:651 (5,6) - Perhaps like this? Done.
00:34:058 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Perhaps for these 3 sections, you could create a slider with a repeat? It would be easier. Done.
00:44:058 (1) - Snap your kiai to this part at the downbeat. Snapped in all difficulties.
Pretty long break in the middle. Perhaps map the later half? Mapped.
02:04:683 - 02:23:745 While I agree it is a good idea for a slowdown, I suggest using something less drastic. Perhaps .75 so it's easier for beginners to get used to the reduced speed change. Yeah, I went ahead and raised it to .75
02:24:058 (1) - Snap kiai to this part at the downbeat. Snapped in all difficulties.
02:44:058 (6) - End kiai here. Ended.
02:51:558 (1) - Perhaps extend this spinner by 1/1? I was thinking that sounded a bit off. Fixed.
Unfortunately, the thing irks me is that it doesn't have a normal difficulty feel to it. I think it's because some lyrics end up on the red ticks and then changes again to white ticks. Perhaps use more sliders to accommodate for this change? Start sliders at white tick, end at red tick, start mapping to vocals at red tick? Something like that.
I attempted to find all the lyrical changes and did 5/4 sliders to make them easier to adjust to. Hopefully, it helped.

Hard:
00:24:058 (1,2,3,4) - For some reason this plays weird to me. I think it's because the vocals are actually 1/1 earlier. Try doing that?Actually, for this combo I didn't follow the vocals. I followed the piano in the background. I may change this in the future, but it at the moment, it sounds good to me.
00:34:058 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - Any reason for new combo spam? I suggest you NC it the way you have been for now. I'll just say that I fixed the combo spam.
00:44:058 (2) - Start kiai here.
01:08:901 (1,2,3,4,5) - Perhaps change this combo a bit to make it less squarey? I turned it into some sort of polygon.
01:24:058 (1,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1) - Please remove the combo spam again Removed.
Same note about break. Perhaps map the second half of it? Mapped.
02:24:058 (2) - Snap kiai to this note instead.
02:31:870 (1) - Perhaps remove the NC? I removed the NC for 02:32:495 instead, but thank you.
02:51:558 (1) - Extend by 1/1? Extended~

Insane:
00:27:026 (4) - Perhaps NC here since you're gonna follow your triple + NC pattern? Good idea. Added.
00:44:058 (2) - Start kiai here.
01:31:558 (7) - NC for new verse. Done.
01:34:058 (2) - Snap kiai here.
Same note about break. Map the second half of it? Mapped.
02:19:058 (x) - Perhaps add a note here like your previous pattern? Added.
02:19:370 (5) - NC here for consistency Done.
02:51:558 (1) - Extend by 1/1? Yup.

Overall I feel like the map could do a bit more polishing up. You had some squarey patterns that could probably be moved around more. Your sliders are quite linear usually. I notice you can create sliders pretty well, So you could change some of those linear sliders into delicious ones . Also for normal, perhaps you can give my map a check on the normal difficulty. I had some vocals that landed on the red tick. I'm not the best mapper around but you could give my normal a check and see how I changed from white tick to red tick.

1. fine~

1. AR-1. OD-1
2. 00:23:433 (4) - Move to the end 00:24:058
3. 01:09:683 (1) - Move to the end 01:09:995
4. 01:27:183 (4) - Move to the end 01:27:495
5. 01:35:776 (4) - Move to 01:35:620
6. 01:40:776 (4) - Move to 01:40:620
7. 02:27:183 (2) - try this!
   

1. HP-2 or 1
2. 00:39:058 (1,2,3,4) - try this! (spacing1.00x)
   
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3. 00:54:058 (6) - new combo add
4. 01:05:151 (5) - 1 grid up
5. 01:05:776 (6) - ^
6. 01:06:401 (1) - ^
7. 01:44:058 (5) - new combo add
8. 02:38:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this!
   
   SPOILER

   

1. AR+1??

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

Sorry for the delay

All suggestions

[General]

1. fine~

[Normal]

1. AR-1. OD-1 Lowered them.
2. 00:23:433 (4) - Move to the end 00:24:058 I went ahead and changed the slider, going from 00:23:745 to 00:24:214.
3. 01:09:683 (1) - Move to the end 01:09:995 I changed the slider. Made it go from 01:09:526 to 01:10:151.
4. 01:27:183 (4) - Move to the end 01:27:495 I'm actually going to keep this, just because it sounds a little better in my opinion. But thank you for the suggestion.
5. 01:35:776 (4) - Move to 01:35:620 I didn't move the notes, but I made a slider instead.
6. 01:40:776 (4) - Move to 01:40:620 Again, didn't change the notes, but made a slider.
7. 02:27:183 (2) - try this! I'm going to keep it as a 5/4 slider since (3) begins on a red tick. I don't want beginners to get confused. Thanks though.
   

[Hard]

1. HP-2 or 1 I lowered it by 1.
2. 00:39:058 (1,2,3,4) - try this! (spacing1.00x) Changed.
   
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3. 00:54:058 (6) - new combo add Changed.
4. 01:05:151 (5) - 1 grid up Moved them all.
5. 01:05:776 (6) - ^
6. 01:06:401 (1) - ^
7. 01:44:058 (5) - new combo add Didn't add a new combo for this chorus because it doesn't end like the first one does.
8. 02:38:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - try this! Changed.
   
   SPOILER

   

[Insane]

1. AR+1??

I'm going to leave this at 8 for now, just because I think 9 might be a little too fast. But if someone else says something, then I'll change it. Thank you!


Good map!!!!

merchat7 wrote:

As requested, took me longer than normal to get to this map.

[General]

No real issues and raging bull had already pointed out the bg so...

[Normal]

- Why are you placing notes on white ticks rather than on red? Some part of your diff feel off because of this. While you do not need to follow the song, it sound really weird when she sing on the red tick and you put one tick later on the white. Fix this, I will not mention this in my mod. Some parts of the song just change from the red tick to white. But I see what you're pointing out, because some red ticks are sounding a bit weird. Fixed.
-0.6x distant snapping :/ Lower the slider velocity or map to 0.8x distant snapping minimum. This is also another reason why this diff feel a little bit jerky. I just went ahead and re-mapped all the maps with 0.8x. (Except hard, of course.)
- Box pattern and straight slider. Rework them, I won't be mentioning them in my mod as well. In this difficulty, some straight sliders and box patterns may be good for a beginner, but I'll fix some of them and curve some sliders.

00:16:558 (1.2,3,4 1,2) - I'm not so sure about this type of hit circle placement for a Normal and your beatmap's easiest diff. Quite hard to hit properly. I suggest making (1,2) a slider, (3,4) a slider and (1,2) a slider. Much more beginner friendly. I didn't do exactly this, but I made most of this section with sliders.
00:20:151 (3,4) - Make (3) end where (4) is instead and remove (4). Done.
00:22:183 (2.3) - Slider feel nicer. While remapping, I actually removed this slider. (Was keeping on the red ticks.)
00:41:558 (1.2.3) - Repeating slider. Done.

Sorry for lack of suggestions for how to make the box pattern and straight sliders more interesting. I really dislike Easy and Normal that doesn't use 0.8x-1.2x distant snapping. So do that first and try to put more slider considering this is the easiest difficulty on this mapset and the rhythm of this song is quite odd.

[Hard]

01:05:776 (6) - Ctrl + J more interesting. Changed.
01:35:308 (4,5) - Slider instead. Done.

Some part of this map feel good but then you use box pattern and straight sliders. In order to make the pattern more interesting, you'll have to remap a lot. Curve all your slider is what you should do first.

[Insane]

0.6x distant snapping.... Changed to 0.8x. (Though left the streams at 0.6x. Don't know if that was a smart idea or not, but .8x streams didn't look good to me.

- Please experiment with jumps (use higher distant snapping than normal for some parts) Attempted to do some jumps.

I understand why I don't have a lot of suggestions, you used too low distant snapping so it's hard to make nice pattern since everything just feel clustered together.

Use higher distant snapping for all difficulties, curve all slider and make more interesting patterns.
Sorry for really crap mod, a lot of thing annoy me in this map.

Don't ask for recheck, I'm not fond of this song.

80,120,14058,2,0,B|176:64|336:64|416:120,1,350
256,192,15776,1,0
416,224,16401,2,0,B|304:320|160:320|48:224,1,400

360,160,18901,5,0
224,80,19526,1,0
88,160,20151,2,0,B|-48:280|88:368,1,250

256,192,21558,6,0,B|200:192|164:256|200:320|256:320,1,200
360,264,22651,2,0,B|512:264,1,150
488,344,23433,1,0

HellDawn wrote:

General
Please change to bg 800x600

Hard
OD -1

Sorry I cant motivation this map sorry ! No problem, I'll change the BG as soon as I can.

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Normal]
- Hmm, probably not too good of an idea to map to the vocals. Most are on red ticks, which could be an off throwing rhythm. I remapped this whole difficulty on white ticks.
- You have some pretty ugly sliders too. I'll point that out. ;-;

00:14:058 (1,2,3) - Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156161
Wait, that ruins the vocal pattern to the next note...

DAMN IT, more reason as to why it's a bad idea to follow vocals.
I'd more recommend going with the song, and mapping on white ticks.

BUT, if you want to, I'll mod for that just in case.
SO STARTING OVER WOOOOOO

00:14:058 (1,2,3) - Try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156166 Done.

80,120,14058,2,0,B|176:64|336:64|416:120,1,350
256,192,15776,1,0
416,224,16401,2,0,B|304:320|160:320|48:224,1,400

(Or try it yourself. If you don't know, just delete the stuff I'm talking about, and pop this anywhere under [HitObjects] in the .osu file) Well, I've never messed with the code in a beatmap before, but I just read a basic crash-course tutorial. Whenever I put this in though, it basically gave me the same (1,2,3). So I guess you just posted it to point out what sliders to fix.

00:18:276 (4) - This can now be centered Centered~

00:18:901 (1,2,3) - Try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156170 Done.

360,160,18901,5,0
224,80,19526,1,0
88,160,20151,2,0,B|-48:280|88:368,1,250

00:21:558 (1,2,3) - Try: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/156174 Done.

256,192,21558,6,0,B|200:192|164:256|200:320|256:320,1,200
360,264,22651,2,0,B|512:264,1,150
488,344,23433,1,0

ALRIGHT, NO MORE PRETTY BABYSITTING, YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M SAYING.

00:24:058 (1) - No new combo. Done.
00:34:058 (1) - If you're going to copy this like four times, at least make it nice. Makin' it nice. Awwhyeah. (Done.)
- AT LEAST MAKE THE MIDDLE POINT ONE POINT LOWER.

00:42:964 (2,3) - Soft 50% is pretty quiet on (2) Raised it to a 65% whistle.
01:04:058 - 01:07:808 - Add sliders here. Done.

01:40:308 (3) - As bad as a catmull slider. Changed it to something seemingly pretty.
02:37:808 (3) - Simply, triangles are bad. Fixed.
02:49:058 (2) - Better if this didn't touch (1) Moved (2) a point down.

BUT, GENERALLY, This is fine. Just some ugly stuff, but nothing horribad about it. \o/
[Hard]
00:21:401 (1) - Instead of a circle, a repeat slider? Done.
00:26:401 (3) - ^ Because it really seems empty otherwise. Done.

00:35:933 (1) - Too close to last combo, doesn't follow distancing. Fixed.
01:25:933 (1) - Saaaame here as aboooove. Basically, confusing. And fixed.
01:44:058 (5) - Maybe you shouldn't stack this. Unstack'd.

01:57:183 - Add a note. Done.
02:01:714 - Add a note. Done.
02:31:870 (1) - Remove dat combo. Removed.

There are actually many more places you could add notes. FIND THESE. Gotta find them all~
But generally, again, it's fine. Some parts feel a lot less empty than others though. I'll fix that.
[Insane]
- I think I should address the larger problem, which is square patterns. You have too many.
- This usually happens when you follow vocals on these songs. The words are so close, and you want to follow vocals, so you put a lot of notes together, but it always will end up looking very boxy one way or another.
- *cough* vocal following this way is usually bad *cough* Lesson learned.

I'll be the one to tell you that you'll probably have to re-map this later on. ffff. Better now than never.
Sorry, but it's true. Good luck later on though!

OzzyOzrock wrote:

Haha, it's not that much.

104523499 things actually

Magicphoenix wrote:

Hello ~
mod

General
- 800x448 picture is an unrankable size... , maybe find a better one ? Changed it.

[Insane]
I personally would prefer -1 Circle Size I guess it looks alright. Changed.

*00:14:058 (3) - Add finish Added.
*00:15:464 (9) - Distance error (Use Distance Snap and snap it properly) Fixed.
*00:19:058 (2) - Add finish Added.
*00:23:745 (x) - Add 2 circle Done.
*00:24:058 (1) - Add finish Done.
*00:29:058 (1) - ^ Done.
*01:04:058 (4) - ^ Added.
*01:09:058 (2) - ^ Added.
*01:04:683 (5,6) - Move both 1/2 back Done.
*01:05:151 (x) - Add a note if you followed above Done.
*01:07:026 - Do the pattern here like this : Done.

SPOILER

*01:09:058 (2) - Add finish
*01:14:058 (4) - ^ + New Combo Done.
*01:21:558 - Do the pattern here like this : Done.

SPOILER

*01:24:058 (1) - Add finish Done.
*01:32:964 (1,2,3,4) - Change them to a jump pattern so it keeps the consistency with 1st KIAI Done.
*01:56:089 (x) - Add note Done.
*01:56:401 (x) - ^ Done.
*01:56:558 (7) - New Combo Done.
*02:29:058 (2) - Add finish Done.
*02:39:058 (3) - ^ Done.
*02:43:433 (9) - New Combo

You miss hitsounds. Add hitsounds ! Thanks for the hitsound help.

[Hard]
Same hitsound suggestions as in [Insane]

*00:23:276 (5) - Strg + R , looks better with no overlap (ofc, fix the spacing after this) Done.
*00:54:058 (1,2) - That's a strange place you put those 2 circles. Maybe in the middle of the grid? or on the middle of the X-axis I put them in the middle of the X-axis.
*01:21:558 - Do the rhytm like this : Done.

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*01:29:058 (3) - Add NC to keep the consistency Done.
*01:39:643 (3) - This is definitely a distance error, fix it If you pay clooose attention to the ticks, you'll see why it's not, but I spaced it anyway.
*01:56:558 (7) - NC? Done.
*02:09:370 - Do the rhytm like this : Done.

SPOILER

Again, hitsounds are missing ! Add them Thanks again.

[Normal]

*00:42:964 (3) - NC Done.
*00:54:058 (7) - ^ Done.
*01:09:683 (6) - ^ Done.
*01:11:558 (1) - Remove NC if you followed above Removed.


Good luck on rank, work better on your rhythm !

Magicphoenix wrote:

General
- 800x448 picture is an unrankable size... , maybe find a better one ?

Raging Bull wrote:

Magicphoenix wrote:

General
- 800x448 picture is an unrankable size... , maybe find a better one ?

Arrrgggg liessss. It's not unrankable. Max is 1024x768. Any other resolution is fine, most just prefer 800x600/1024x768 ;_;

iPoff wrote:

Hello~
This is one of my favorite songs of all time.
I thought I would check it out and give a few suggestions, but you don't have to listen to me. ^^

Normal~
00:34:058 through 00:41:558 - It seems kind of empty here. Maybe you could add circles or something to fill in the empt spaces after the sliders? I don't know, it sounds kind of awkward to me. Added in some things.
01:25:620 (3) - Sounds a bit awkward here, too. Try something like this, maybe? (to try and follow the vocals a bit more.) Done. Thanks!

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01:57:183 - Maybe add a circle here? Done.
02:03:433 - ^ Done.
02:15:308 (2) - Maybe extend this slider to 02:16:245? Extended.
02:17:808 (4) - Extend this to 02:18:745? Sounds less empty when I tried it. c: And extended.

Hard~
00:22:339 - Maybe add a circle here? Added.
00:24:058 (1, 2, 3, 4) - I don't know, but this just sounds really weird to me. Try adding another circle or something? Added 2, actually. Sounds like it fits in the the background now.
00:53:745 - Add a circle here? Done.
01:19:839 - ^ Done.
01:32:651 - A circle here would sound nice, but it's not really necessary. ~ Didn't do it, because this pattern is following just the background music, not the lyrics. Thanks for the suggestion.
01:36:245 - Maybe add a circle here to fill up the empty space? Done.
01:58:433 - ^ Didn't add. I kinda like the little pause this space makes. But if another person says something about it, then I'll change it.

Insane~
00:34:058 - I really like the pattern here. It's pretty. ;_; (Haha, sorry. Just thought I'd let you know.~) Thank you.
00:54:214 - Maybe add a circle here? Was going to not do this, but then I thought twice and added a finish to the second note. All good now.
01:40:151 (7) - This slider sounds weird to me. ;_; Changed.
1:59:683 (2) - Maybe move this to 01:59:526? It fits more with the music. Done.
02:06:588 (5) - This circle sounds weird. D: It goes along with the light tapping that's in the background.
02:09:058 (5) - ^ ^
02:13:745 - Maybe add a circle here? Done.
02:44:214 - ^ Done.

Like I said, just a few suggestions. Hope this helped out a bit~ It did. Thanks.
I think something you should try and work on is trying to fill in those empty spaces. c: Will do~

Oh, and your sliders are really nice looking, by the way~ \o/

I wish you good luck!

iPoff wrote:

Okay, since I was bored and couldn't think of anything else to do, I decided to go out and look for a background for my desktop. While browsing, I find a background that would work really well with this map. So now I am posting it here. You don't have to use it. xD

ANYWAY, enough with my rambling. Here's the 800x600 background. c:

SPOILER

And thank you very much for the kudosu. c:
& Your welcome for the mod.~

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[Normal]
• 00:24:058 (4,1) - Add in a new combo on (4) and remove it on (1) Done.
• 00:30:308 (2) - Bleh, This anti-jump will screw some people over because they would end up hitting it too early. Went ahead and ditched the anti-jump. Spaced properly.
• 00:42:964 (1) - Remove new combo to match 00:40:464 (2). Done.
• 01:57:808 (6,1) - The space between these notes seems really awkward. I suggest mapping it. Mapped.
• 02:19:370 (1) - I would move this note over to the next white tick on 02:19:683. This is to match with 02:14:683 (1) and 02:17:183 (3) who hit on the second syllable. Done.
• 02:49:058 (2) - Add a finish on the end of this slider to match the song. Added a finish to the whole slider.

[Hard]
• 00:24:683 (4) - I would delete this note because it really doesn't go with the song. Done.
• 01:10:151 (5,1) - The space between these two notes really breaks up the flow, I would fill in the gap. Perhaps you should change (5) into a slider going until 01:10:464. Changed (5) into a slider.
• 01:16:558 (1,2) - I dunno, this pattern feels really weird to play. Try this, it follows the music well: Done.

• 01:18:589 (5,1) - Spacing is really weird and will trip people up. I think I fixed it when I did ^.
• 02:04:370 - I suggest changing the slow down rate to 0.75. 0.50 is a little to high and would trip players up. Fixed and respaced.
• 02:49:058 (3) - Add a finish to the start of this note. Made the whole thing a finish.

[Insane]
• 00:21:401 - Add in a note here to fix that awkward flow you got going on. Done. Even made it into a jump~
• 01:16:870 (3) - Remove this note. It really doesn't really go well with the music/play well. Done.
• 01:40:151 (1) - A note right after this slider you can barley hear sounds really weird and has a strange feel to it. I tried this to give it a bit of silence for the bleep in the background, but I changed it to 75% since it does sound a bit strange. (In all difficulties.) Also, thanks for getting me to look in on this. I saw that on Hard, this slider was spaced as 1/8. Fixed~
• 02:49:058 (2) - Add a finish to this note Done.

[Overall (Yeah, I guess I should start doing this often)]
• It's a pretty good map by the looks of it. Although some parts don't flow as well as they should.You should keep and eye out for those. Other than that I guess the map is fine

I think this is good enough for a star!
Have one why don't 'cha ♪

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Lol nothing much but can you bookmark your first note so it's easier for modders to find where it starts? ._. Sure. I'll do that with all my maps from now on.

Normal:
00:19:683 (3) - Err wrong distance? Fix'd.
00:24:058 (4,1) - Swap NC? Sounds better to me since it's a start of a new verse. Didn't swap, just moved the out of place one.
00:24:526 (1) - Wrong distance too?
00:34:058 (1) - ^
00:37:964 (2) - ^
00:39:058 (1) - ^ Uhh I'm not pointing out anymore distance error. Perhaps try checking through the map once or twice in case you miss something. Fixed all these.
01:08:433 (6) - Change this slider into two notes? NC should have happens where slider ends, but we can't NC slider ends only ._. Done.
01:16:558 (1) - Remove this NC? I think it's still in the same line (for lyrics)
01:19:058 (4) - NC sounds nice here with the start of a new line. Both done.

Unfortunately I can't really help much with NCing since I'm not that good with it, but it seems as though you have quite a bit of NCing inconsistency. Perhaps try resetting combo colors and NCing every new line in vocals? (Should be about every 2 stanza or so). Just do Ctrl+A and click the NC button twice.

Hard:
00:25:151 (1) - Remove NC? I don't see any reason why you need NC so fast.
00:26:401 (7) - I guess you can NC here afterwards. Done.
00:35:933 (1,1) - If you are planning on keeping this NC pattern then NC at 00:39:058 (2) so it will be consistent with 00:36:558 (1) Done.
00:43:745 (1) - Remove NC? Seems like it's still same line with the previous combo. After a bit of looking, this new combo seems like it's fine. The lines do switch, it's just kind of hard to pick up on.
00:44:058 (8) - NC here instead at the start of chorus. Snap kiai here also Guess I forgot that. Ahaha~
00:48:745 (1,2) - I think switching the NC would be better since it will be a new line at 2. Done.
01:07:651 (1) - Remove NC? You NC'd so fast and I think this is still part of the same line for lyrics as 01:06:401 (1) Done.
01:10:776 (1) - ^? I think it's still part of the same line. Done.
01:12:339 (1) - Same. Remove NC? Done.
01:18:901 (x) - Add a note? Seems as though you've been mapping to vocals so might be good here. Added.
02:01:558 (5) - NC here? I think during the piano, every 2 stanza sounds decent for NC. Added.
02:03:120 (1) - If you agree with above then remove NC here. Done.
02:38:745 (1,2) - Switching NC would seem better to me. Done.

Insane:
Seems quite packed for insane. I would pretty much use DS 1x instead of .8x but that would lead to remapping So I guess it's up to you. Or you can lower circle size hehe Honestly, I first made this difficulty with Circle Size 5, so I'll switch it back to that. Let's see how it works.
01:13:589 (1,1) - Not sure what's with the NC here. I can't here what's in the music though so go see if you can NC/remove NC somewhere else since you know the song more? Moved.
01:18:901 (1) - Add a note? Sounds empty plus it sounded weird to me since I feel like I clicked 1/2 late even though it's correct. Done.
01:21:245 (1) - Remove NC
01:21:558 (3) - Add it here instead for a new line in the verse. Done.
01:30:933 (4) - Perhaps remove slider and add two notes? One at the beginning one at the end. The slider ends at where NC should be at. NC the note at 01:31:558 if you follow this suggestion. Done.
01:32:964 (1) - If you follow above, remove this NC. Done.
01:59:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I thought it would be better if you mapped the whole piano part instead of just a portion of it. Seems empty when the piano is playing because you hear it clearly but there are no notes. Add some notes/sliders? Added some notes so it sounds a bit better.


Well the map did it improve a lot since it's no longer squarey lol. I still say you should try working on some sort of patterns for insane. They seem rather boring. Try some jumps or the over used star formation. NCing could use a little work but even I had trouble with my first map.

Maya-kira wrote:

star for a friend xD

YellowYoshi1 wrote:

Doing mods sure does expose you to some different music. Anyways, I'll try and get a least a minor bit of modding your way, I'm not great at spotting super detailed things but I'll make notes of what I can.

[General]
-Seems like the beginning of the song in all difficulties could use a bit more hitsound variance. There's a lot of normal/non-sounded beats and it gives a boring impression at first. You do quickly get into nice hitsound use later on but the beginning really could use a bit more. This problem is especially noticeable in Normal, throughout the whole song and not just the beginning. In the beginning, I felt like I couldn't really use hitsounds there, since they seemed out of place to me. But I did add and fix hitsounds in all difficulties, so thanks!

-There's a huge chunk of the song and video not used at the end, I know it's a huge pain but you might consider cutting out the excess for a bit of a file size reduction. You are within the guidelines but everyone appreciates a smaller download and chances are a BAT/MAT would also suggest cutting off excess anyways. After a bit of thinking, I've decided that the gap isn't big enough to the point where cutting needs to be done. Thank you for pointing this out, though.

[Hard]
00:15:464 - 5,6 - 6 is hidden behind the 5 slider. See my comments below in Insane about this, I'm not sure how others will feel about it but I would keep it in mind that you might change it.

01:15:308 - 4,5 - See above.

01:30:776 - 4,5 - See above.

[Insane]
01:22:339 - 4,5,6 - That 6 slider is a bit hidden under the 4 beat. I'm incredibly rusty on what is deemed acceptable these days but I know in certain instances this could be considered a problem. Moving it to the side can be an easy fix but if you like it the way it is, ask someone more experienced than me about it. I'm pretty sure these are all acceptable rule-wise. If someone brings this up, I'll be sure to change it.

About the notes about "hidden beats" I've made, I would say don't change them until you get an opinion from a more experience mapper. I actually have similar things going on in my own map that I haven't changed for this very reason.

Hopefully I was a bit of help!

• 
  Source shoule be "Nico Nico Douga".
  And add "papiyon" to tags.

• 
  HP-1. AR-1.
  SV is kinda high as easiest diff (also it's same as normal), but that's not a big deal. If you can, please try to fix.

1. 00:44:058 (1) - Add finish.
2. 01:34:058 (1) - ^
3. 02:03:745 (6) -
   
4. 02:24:058 (1) - Add finish.
5. 02:34:058 (1) - ^

• 
  The formation is good, but the rhythm is difficult for normal-players to hit because almost notes are on red line and not consistent.

1. 00:44:058 (1) - Add finish.
2. 00:52:495 (7) - Add a repeat.
3. 01:34:058 (1) - ^ to the top of slider.
4. 02:09:058 (1) - Stack it perfectly with (4).
5. 02:23:276 (4) - ^
6. 02:34:058 (1) - Add finish.

1. 00:24:526 (3,4) - These notes don't follow the music. They should be like below.
   
2. 00:29:526 (2) - ^
3. 00:44:058 (2) - Add finish.
4. 01:29:214 (x) - Add a note here.
5. 01:29:683 (2) - ^
6. 01:31:558 (1,2,3) - ^ add a note after these note as well as above.
7. 01:34:058 (1) - Add finish.
8. 02:02:183 (3) - This two-repeats-slider should start at 02:02:026. (also change it to three-repeats-slider.)
9. 02:24:058 (2) - Add finish.
10. 02:34:058 (1) - ^

1. 00:13:589 (1,2,3) - Sounds kinda weird, it's better to add a note at 00:13:745 or remove (2).
2. 00:30:933 (10) - How about adding a repeat? The flow will become better imo.
3. 00:31:870 (4) - Move it to x:184, y:64.
4. 00:44:058 (2) - Add finish.
5. 00:45:308 (8,9,10) - Looks crowded. How about the formation below?
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:04:058 (4) - Please remove finish at the end of slider, it's a bit noisy.
7. 01:31:714 (x) - Why don't add a note here?
8. 01:32:183 (x) - ^
9. 01:34:058 (2) - Add finish.
10. 01:40:308 (x) - A note should be added here to follow the vocal.
11. 01:41:401 (x) - ^
12. 01:55:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make them straight.
13. 02:05:229 (T) - Remove this grean line.
14. 02:10:308 (4) - Move it left by 1 grid with grid level4.
15. 02:24:058 (1) - Add finish.
16. 02:34:058 (2) - ^

Suzully wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

• 
  Source shoule be "Nico Nico Douga".
  And add "papiyon" to tags.

Done.

[Easy]

• 
  HP-1. AR-1. Done.
  SV is kinda high as easiest diff (also it's same as normal), but that's not a big deal. If you can, please try to fix. Changed to .80

1. 00:44:058 (1) - Add finish.Done.
2. 01:34:058 (1) - ^ ^
3. 02:03:745 (6) -
   [attachment=0:65fac]screenshot294.jpg[/attachment:65fac] Done.
4. 02:24:058 (1) - Add finish.Done.
5. 02:34:058 (1) - ^ ^

[Normal]

• 
  The formation is good, but the rhythm is difficult for normal-players to hit because almost notes are on red line and not consistent. I went through this difficulty and tried to fix the rhythm to the white ticks. Although some didn't feel right at all on the white ticks, I managed to fix a few parts.

1. 00:44:058 (1) - Add finish. Done.
2. 00:52:495 (7) - Add a repeat. Done.
3. 01:34:058 (1) - ^ to the top of slider. I assume you meant 'Add a finish', so done.
4. 02:09:058 (1) - Stack it perfectly with (4). Done.
5. 02:23:276 (4) - ^ Done.
6. 02:34:058 (1) - Add finish. Done.

[Hard]

1. 00:24:526 (3,4) - These notes don't follow the music. They should be like below. Fixed
   [attachment=1:65fac]screenshot293.jpg[/attachment:65fac]
2. 00:29:526 (2) - ^ Done.
3. 00:44:058 (2) - Add finish. Done.
4. 01:29:214 (x) - Add a note here. Done.
5. 01:29:683 (2) - ^ Done.
6. 01:31:558 (1,2,3) - ^ add a note after these note as well as above. Done.
7. 01:34:058 (1) - Add finish. Done.
8. 02:02:183 (3) - This two-repeats-slider should start at 02:02:026. (also change it to three-repeats-slider.) Done.
9. 02:24:058 (2) - Add finish. Done.
10. 02:34:058 (1) - ^ Done.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:589 (1,2,3) - Sounds kinda weird, it's better to add a note at 00:13:745 or remove (2). Removed (2).
2. 00:30:933 (10) - How about adding a repeat? The flow will become better imo. Done.
3. 00:31:870 (4) - Move it to x:184, y:64. Done.
4. 00:44:058 (2) - Add finish.
5. 00:45:308 (8,9,10) - Looks crowded. How about the formation below? Looks good. Thanks!
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 01:04:058 (4) - Please remove finish at the end of slider, it's a bit noisy. Done.
7. 01:31:714 (x) - Why don't add a note here? Added.
8. 01:32:183 (x) - ^ ^
9. 01:34:058 (2) - Add finish. Done.
10. 01:40:308 (x) - A note should be added here to follow the vocal. Done.
11. 01:41:401 (x) - ^ Done.
12. 01:55:308 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Make them straight. Done.
13. 02:05:229 (T) - Remove this grean line. Done.
14. 02:10:308 (4) - Move it left by 1 grid with grid level4. Done.
15. 02:24:058 (1) - Add finish. Done.
16. 02:34:058 (2) - ^ ^

The mapset is not bad, but needs more work.
Star for now. Good luck!

Akareh wrote:

Well, all my mods are suggestions, since I'm not very good at this.

Love the song <3

[Easy]

00:36:245 Add note with Clap It makes it feel slighty cramped for an easy. If another person says something about this, I'll change it.
00:38:745 ^same, If you want you could make an slider from 3 that ends here. ^
00:45:308 Finish this slider at 00:45:776 Done.
00:46:249 Add note here, maybe clap dunno. Added the note.
00:50:308 Finish at 00:50:75 Done.
00:51:245 Add note Didn't add. Sounded a bit cramped.
00:53:745 ^same ^
01:36:245 ^same with clap Added, but with no clap.
01:55:308 (2) Change this to an slider like the previous one, and delete new combo, delete the slider at 01:55:933 Done.

[Normal]

00:50:308 (4) end slider at 00:50:776 Trying to keep on the white ticks here. Sorry.
01:29:058 (1,2,3) This combo is a little repetitive, try something else. I only used it one other time. Keeping.

[Hard]

00:13:745 Add note here, or make (1) a slider that ends here. Added a note.
00:16:401 I think you should do this combo like this: Done.

SPOILER

00:18:901 End this slider at 00:19:214 Done.
01:03:901 Make this slider repeat Didn't do.
02:14:995 Add note Done.
02:17:495 ^same Done.
02:29:370 ^same Also you can spice a little the combo making something like this: Done.

SPOILER

You can't see it well on the image, but 4 is behind 3.

If you make the combo like this remember to space the next notes

[Insane]

In general, I think this diff needs some work on patterns, I find them kind of boring and repetitive. Also some of them are repeating throughout the song, which is not bad, but it can bore some players. I recommend you to follow some patterns of this guide, it will help make your beatmap more interesting. viewforum.php?f=61

00:13:745 Add note Decided not to do this because this was discussed in an earlier mod.
00:13:901 Add note ^
00:14:370 (6) Remove this note Didn't do. It goes with the background music.
00:39:214 Make this combo like this Done.

SPOILER

02:49:214 Add note with finish, snap it with 2 Done.

Love so far the map, but as I said, Insane can be done better ;D I'll be working hard on the patterns.
I would star this, but I don't have kudosu.

CDFA wrote:

Insane:
00:17:026 (5) - symmetry~. Move the bottom point right 1 grid, and make it even and stuff~. Done.
02:13:745 (1) - Remove NC Done.
02:14:058 (2) - Add NC Done.
02:30:308 (8) - symmetry~. The points are even, but push the middle tick in until the shape is symmetrical~. Done.
02:51:558 (1) - Add finish Done for all difficulties.

Hard:
02:02:026 (3) - Boring pattern :< Added another slider.

Hey man I kinda love you right now. Take a star. The map isn't omg sugoi, but still~.

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb file(s) and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties. Done.
If you would like, you can delete all your bookmarks to decrease the size of your .osz file by a little since you won't be needing them by the time this gets put on the server. Alrighty, done.
Nico Nico Douga should not be in the source, but the tags. I'm not too sure about this. For now, I'll keep what Suzully said to put the source, and change if I find out differently.
The composer of this song should be in the source. Watching the video it seems papiyon is the composer. ^
The video freaks me out o_o I kinda like the art style for this video, but it is a bit odd~

[Easy]
Nothing to suggest. \o/

[Normal]
This diff seems very linear. It's not very freeflowing, and a lot of it needs a fix.
I looked through this difficulty several times, but couldn't tell what you meant by 'not very freeflowing', though I did fix some linear parts.

[Hard]
Same with this diff. The hint is the overuse of vertical/horizontal sliders/spaced circles. Fixed some linear parts here too.

[Insane]
This diff, too. Everything goes in lines and lines and it's very disinteresting. You're going to have to remap this. This is in progress. I'll be starting from scratch with this. Since I have a lot more mapping experience than when I mapped this insane, I'm confident I'll be able to make a better one.

Good luck :3 Thanks.