[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Good map, so All suggestions ^^

[SHD] //supa hard?
00:16:204 (1) - whistle on the head
00:38:172 (1) -

this

[attachment=0:6b061]r3672-1.JPG[/attachment:6b061]

太近(2)...
01:08:012 (2) - whistle on the head
01:08:927 (1,2,3,4) - clap on the head
01:12:955 (3,4) - clap
01:12:955 (3,4) - clap/finish

[HD]
00:47:326 (2,3) - swap 2 and 3?//OK
00:23:527 (1) - finish

[NM]

00:29:385 (1) - ctrl+J ctrl+H ctrl+R, put back//OK
00:30:850 (3) - ^//OK
00:30:484 (2) - put it in the hole = =//OK

[EZ]

00:26:456 (1) - 不够弯 ^^//足够了
01:01:238 (4) - whistle
01:10:392 (1) - whistle

ok, that's all~ Good song and map, I like it ^.^

-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤Hihi~！
❤开始modding~！

❤总的来说

SPOILER

❤所有难度01:42:612其实我觉得可以把这个点之后那条绿线移过来。//OK~
❤瞬间kiai time 用的很神奇。。一开始我还以为是没删干净的绿线，结果发现我果然是个新人。。

❤【SHD】diff

SPOILER

00:27:005 (3) - 总感觉这个的形状不是很圆但又说不上来，感觉有点不对称，你觉得呢？//Check完發現,有一些不足之處...Fixed~

强烈建议：01:17:532从这里加一个 WARNING标志的SB，因为从这里开始难度感觉有一个不小的跨度。//...我對SB一無所知,所以我在Creator's Words提及了~
我很喜欢这个难度~！虽然我pass不能。。。

❤【HD】diff

SPOILER

没问题~！

❤【NM】diff

SPOILER

没问题~！

❤【EZ】diff

SPOILER

00:39:637 (2,3) - 这两个要不要弄成一样形状的？//不用了,謝謝建议~
00:45:495 (2) - 顺时针转三度会不会平行一点？Ok~

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非常好的图，hitsound也找不出什么问题，有星☆星了一定会补上~！
为rank做准备吧~！
新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议。

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
fine.


Easy:
fine.


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:54:145 (3,4) - 很nazi：稍微拿上来点吧 有点太往屏幕下边了//Okay~
Hitsound
01:27:966 (1,2,3,4) - 突然变13白线的clap很别扭 我是不太喜欢 24就挺好的 感觉没必要变13//Changed,是現在1234都有
01:33:824 (1,2) - 同上//同上[


HD:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:08:927 (1) - 感觉没必要newcombo放着吧 放下一个感觉更好看点 3连不同颜色神马的蛤蛤//Okay~

SHD:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:08:744 (4,5,1) - 这个不减spacing了？满意外的 因为连打只有这用了普通spacing 建议还是缩小//Changed to 0.5x


除了SHD的spacing我觉得有必要改 其他几个难度都很nazi 嘛赶快去找mat吧 够8star我就省一个啦 good luck~

94,313,48058,5,8
2,223,48424,1,8
59,107,48790,1,8
59,107,48973,1,0
186,126,49339,1,0
186,125,49521,1,8
208,252,49889,1,4

368,192,17669,5,0
345,39,17852,1,0
274,176,18035,1,8
413,107,18218,1,0
260,82,18401,5,0

Louis Cyphre wrote:

[General]
any reason why you disable letterbox during breaks? Because I thank it is unnecessary...
[EZ]
I was about to complain about 1/2 rhythm on easy, but spacing is enough big so it' pretty noticable and i think it's fine.
00:39:637 (2,3) - i enjoyed previous sliders, and my face suddenly turns from ": )" to ": |" when i saw these sliders ._. , i won't post code of fixed sliders, because i know very well that you can do it by yourself! :3 Ok,Changed~
[NM]
00:11:811 (1) - remove new combo. Ok~
00:48:059 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - perfect star for you :3 : Fixed!

94,313,48058,5,8
2,223,48424,1,8
59,107,48790,1,8
59,107,48973,1,0
186,126,49339,1,0
186,125,49521,1,8
208,252,49889,1,4

01:54:328 (4) - a bit offscreen ;w; Fixed!
[HD]
01:04:168 (4) - like this http://puu.sh/coUz Fixed!
[SHD]
00:03:024 (4) - one grid down and one grid left to make pattern flawless :3 Fixed!
00:17:669 (1,2,3,4,1) - refix Fixed!

368,192,17669,5,0
345,39,17852,1,0
274,176,18035,1,8
413,107,18218,1,0
260,82,18401,5,0

00:30:117 (1,2,3,4,1) - ^ for more wider pattern use ctrl+s Fixed!
Well feels ridiculous that stream part, not sure, i'll leave this to YGO.

YGOkid8 wrote:

General:
- I reckon you should re-enable the letterboxing. You would only normally disable it if there's video or storyboard, cause it gets in the way. Without it, it not only looks really empty during break time, but it also helps us with when the break ends and such. Ok,Enable the Letterbox~

EZ:

00:20:598 (1) - imo with sliders like these, they look (and play) better like this, moved down a bit. Notice how it doesn't exactly flow into the slider: Ok~



00:29:385 (1) - Move around here? Ok~



00:44:030 (1) - Move up + left some number of grids, for the same concept of 00:20:598 (1). No change...
00:46:959 (1,2,3,4) - This formation instead? Ok~



01:44:076 (1) - Rotate 90 degrees (selection centre). don't want to see it overlap with the next (1) >_> Fixed!

NM:

01:08:927 (2,3,4,5,1) - Ooh, this place would look nice with an arc \:D/ code if you want to use it Good idea,Changed~

40,256,68927,5,0
104,372,69294,1,0
236,384,69660,1,0
356,332,70026,1,0
376,200,70392,5,0

01:28:699 (2,3) - Don't really like how (2) flows into (3), but i can't really think of how to change it. Changed~
01:47:005 (3) - Flip shape horizontally? Ok~

HD:
- Fine.

SHD:
- Fun streams are fun <3
- On the other hand, I didn't really like it near the beginning. imo, flow was dodgy and some stuff didn't look really nice.

00:14:740 (1) - Sliders hurt my eyes Changed~
00:18:767 (3,4) - Switch position of these two:arrow: Ok~
00:24:259 (4) - 我的眼睛 Ok,Changed...
00:27:921 (1) - It burns Something Changed
00:39:637 (1) - I can't mod anymore (lol just kidding).

Hmm, map looks good, but I think SHD could get a few more mods. Forum PM me when you say, get 5 more mods. Okay~

KingsAL2 wrote:

==General==

==SHD==
-- Combo Problem --
00:04:122 (7) - new combo (The new sentence of the song) Remove 00:04:488 (1) No change,I put NC every per 4 Beat...
00:08:882 (1) - Maybe remove new combo and new combo for 00:09:797 (3). Afterall, remove 00:10:346 (1). No change,I put NC every per 4 Beat...
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
00:45:495 (1,2,3) - However, I think you should put 2 in space of 1 and 3
-- Other(S) --
Lovely ~

==HD==
-- Combo Problem --
00:03:939 (5) - New combo (Sencely) and remove 00:04:488 (1) No change,I put NC every per 4 Beat...
01:26:502 (1) - Remove new combo No...
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
-- Other(S) --
00:20:598 (1) - I think it a bit low for the map Ok~

==OVERALL==
LIKE : Well, This map is wating for Rank. So I cant do any thing ~
UNLIKE : No mods I can find D:

goodbye wrote:

[SHD]
00:18:035 (3) - 没叠好 Ok
00:55:747 (1,2,3) - 这个可以摆更好看点. slider可以更圆一点而且123的头部至少要看起来是等间距的比较好:arrow: Ok
00:57:211 (1,2,3) - ^:arrow: Ok
01:01:605 (1,2,3) - ^:arrow: Ok

01:43:527 (1) - 这里开始的最后一段我觉得你间距放得太开了 可以用0.5x处理这里或者不要用note堆太开 多用点slider或者note挨近一点放比较配音乐...
特别是01:48:836 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 和01:53:413 (1,2,3,4,5,6) 有一點地方改了~

[HD]
00:07:417 (1) - 这slider的形状不太好看... 这slider的形状好好看...
01:12:406 (2) - 这个稍微有点下:arrow: Ok

spboxer3 wrote:

[general]

1. lerretbox 需要統一 Ok.

[EZ]

1. 00:39:637 (2) - 摸到HP Bar了 需要改 想改但不知怎樣改...

[NM]

• '

1. AR+1看起來會比較順 新手說太快了...

[SHD]

• 
  01:07:463 (1,2) - 沒有對稱圓弧 如果想對稱弧度 那就讓01:08:012 (2) - 完全貼近於前段的連打[naz]i 看不見了...
  
  連打太近了只有slider比較跳打起來不夠爽阿XDD 連打再放遠一點的話,會像made of fire一樣的殺人了

[Taiko]

1. AR和HP都用6吧 因為是Oni 本身都夠難了...
   
   

紅色是unrankable的 一定要改 藍色的是需要討論的問題 黑色就只是建議


俺完全是來騙KD的xDD 騙得好!

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[EZ]
00:13:275 (3) - Remove whistles from start and end (leave repeat). OK
00:26:456 (1) - Finish on start, clap on end. OK
00:38:172 (1) - Clap on end. OK
01:27:600 (3) - Clap. OK
01:27:966 (1) - Remove clap from start.
01:29:431 (2) - ^
01:33:824 (1) - Remove clap?

[NM]
01:33:824 (1,2) - I think move the claps from start to end like (3,4) of this combo. OK

[HD]
01:07:463 (1) - Remove finish and add whistle so that it's like all the other difficulties. OK

[SHD]
The streams in the kiai are too close together for that slider velocity, so the sliders between them are much shorter than they look. I'm not sure what you can do about this other than space out the streams or reduce the slider velocity (BPM multiplier change) for the kiai section.
Other than that, all good.

Nice.

1. 01:08:744 (5, 6, 1)-A triple here doesn't sound right to me. Consider having this become a double. You know, something like this?
   
2. 01:11:857 (1, 2)-I don't like the curves of these sliders. ): I suggest fixing them up a bit. Take these for example:
   Slider 1
   Slider 2
   
   Oh, and here's the code for it just incase.
   
   

   88,132,71857,6,0,B|148:220|76:308,1,192.000004577637
   172,364,72406,2,0,B|252:292|352:340,1,192.000004577637

1. 01:11:673 (4)-Try and stack this properly on the end of slider 1.
2. 01:36:021 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8)-I would suggest keeping the spacing on these close to this note on 01:35:930. You know, something like this? Oh, and don't forget to use the distance snap on the rest of the notes afterwards~

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  
  General :

1. 所有的Timing最好都在節奏上
2. 為何Preview Point不在kiai time上 把他設置在01:19:179吧
   
   EZ :
   
3. 00:39:637 (2) - 太高了 會碰到HP bar
4. 01:33:824 (1) - 用clap感覺怪怪的 改用finish吧
5. 01:53:596 (3) - 中間的whistle刪除
   
   NM :
   
6. 00:04:122 (2) - 很小的spacing錯誤
7. 01:05:998 (1) - 加whistle感覺好怪
   
   Taiko Oni :
   
8. 太鬼畜了...這時叫Taiko Oni好像太普通了XD
   
   HD :
   
9. 沒東西說...
   
   SHD :
   
10. 00:02:474 (1) - 加whistle
11. 00:14:191 (X) - 加個note
12. 00:14:740 (1) - 去whislte
13. 00:48:058 (3,4) - 這種擺法太APP取向了... 複製前面的1,2 然後Ctrl+>吧
14. 這大Spacing不要緊嘛...
    
    
    務必要閱讀~!

    紅色:是我覺得unrankable的 藍色:建議 但個人認為要改的 黑色:就單純建議

YGOkid8 wrote:

i'm baaack o/ sorry for delay, hope you don't mind

NM:
00:23:527 (1,2) - With (2) slider, copy and paste (1) slider and flip horizontally (same position). Fixed~

hmm... i'm still feeling meh with SHD diff. compared to the rest of the map, this difficulty really DOES let it down. not only does it not look too appealing, but it isn't the most fun thing to play either. i asked Odaril for his opinion, and (to put it in a nice way), he said it had "no flow", and was "quite bad".

at this point, rather than point out all the many things to improve it, i think it'd just be better to re-map it. if you don't think you can improve it with a re-map, you could get a guest diff., or you can postpone the map until you obtain more mapping experience to make a much better map in the future. otherwise yeah, map is not ready for a bubble yet.

L_P wrote:

hi...hope i could find something
well, only suggestion, feel free to reject or ignore any

easy
01:18:996 - 卖萌的绿线(为何每一个diff都有这条线呢 绿线上没有任何note绿线后也没有 是不会有作用的。。 他們是用作修改音量
55,381 绿线resnap 這沒有關係~
01:42:978 - 绿线resnap(每一个diff也一样 這沒有關係~


normal
00:05:953 (1) - 因为这个没有blanket到什么的，不如把curve弯向另一边 OK
01:18:996 - 同有卖萌线
01:27:966 (1) - 头finish OK


taiko
00:05:770 - 加个note? OK
后面因为我是沙包所以mod不出请见谅

HD
01:05:449 (4) - 删whistle?
01:07:463 (1) - meh强烈觉得whistle破坏了美感 OK
01:21:742 (4) - ctrl+R?制造惊喜 ...

早
SHD
00:10:346 (5) - cancel repeat, try something else OK
00:18:584 (2,3,4,1) - 这里，我觉得spacing似乎一下子增加了太大（尤其是notes的），不如小一点 沒問題
00:22:062 (1) - 依照这首mapping style我这里其实expect的是一个长slider It fine for me...
00:46:044 (2,3) - 建议这里先不要跳，更加能够强调下一个跳 差不多..
01:07:463 (1) - 右移一两格吧，不然就干脆跳大一点，现在的spacing没有相同也没有跳。。。嗯？ OK
01:12:406 (2) - 建议这个放在上面一点的位置，然后01:12:955 (3) - 这个可以排在比较直线下来的位置。。感觉flow会比较好 差不多...
01:27:600 (5) - 如果这个spacing是故意的，那么 01:29:065 (5,1) - 、01:30:529 (5,1) - 这些也把spacing弄大一点吧 （后面也有 OK

haiz因为最近没人mod没人给star所以我要自费。。。请见谅 不要緊~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ 7odoa ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[SHD]

1. 01:38:676 - 这个停顿有点突然,直接加个note全连上会更好. 這個停顿是用作強調後面的感覺,像01:37:211一樣~

[EZ]

1. 01:00:140 (3) - 把这个转过来吧 会好看些. 改了~!

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///< 謝謝!~

Good luck ~

Thu Sep 22, 2011 10:32 pm (over 7 months ago)

1. Rename "Taiko Oni" to "TK" to match the scheme of difficulty names.
2. Add tags "Taiko" because I can't search taiko specific difficulties by "Taiko"
3. Fixed SC issue at [SHD] 00:05:403 (4,5)

WVSagi wrote:

[General]

Background
taikobg.jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.
la grand bleu(nm).jpg is 800x600, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. It is fine~

[All .osu Files]

Combo Colours
Inconsistency in combo colours:

- [EZ] :

Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 0,255,0

- [HD] :

Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 0,255,0

- [NM] :

Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 0,255,0

- [SHD] :

Combo1 : 0,0,255
Combo2 : 0,255,255
Combo3 : 0,255,0

- [TK] :

Combo1 : 159,64,255
Combo2 : 159,255,64 Taiko diff can have another combo colour~

[EZ]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:55:387 (snap to 00:55:381)
01:07:424 (snap to 01:07:463)
01:42:985 (snap to 01:42:978)

[HD]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:14:699 (snap to 00:14:740)
00:55:387 (snap to 00:55:381)
01:42:985 (snap to 01:42:978)

[NM]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:55:387 (snap to 00:55:381)
01:07:424 (snap to 01:07:463)
01:42:985 (snap to 01:42:978)

[SHD]

Snapping

Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
00:14:699 (snap to 00:14:740)
00:55:387 (snap to 00:55:381)
01:42:985 (snap to 01:42:978) It is fine because it's not kiai start/end.

[TK]

Breaks
Consider adding a break before 01:32:474. should not have any break at Taiko diff.

XPJ38 wrote:

It is "Le grand bleu" in French, not "La" It is a shame that the artist didn't check for a grammar mistake in the song title.

Anyway, congratulations