1. Red - Unrankable stuff.
2. Blue - Extremely suggest you to fix this.
3. Black - Feel free to ignore this.

1. 完美!!

1. [bossandy]01:22:987 (x) - 這裡的綠線？是失誤了還是？如果沒用就刪掉吧~
2. 嘛~沒啥好挑的耶o o

1. [Nymph俺の嫁]00:38:924 (2) - 翻個身的話會更協調些.就是把中間的路線點拉到下面o o
2. [Beren]00:46:424 (2,3) - 嘛o o 像這樣的1/4我是建議slider之間不要stack啦=A=..比較好讀，嘛嘛，無所謂了..
3. [Beren]00:50:643 (6) - 為什麼不從00:50:526開始呢？那裡有明顯的vocal啊o o 用1/4銜接會是不錯的選擇.
4. [Beren]00:58:377 (1) - 好像沒必要new combo吧？和3交換一下如何？
5. [Spboxer3]01:15:487 (1,2) - 這個遮擋有些難看呢，試試這個麼？
   

   160,315,75487,6,0,B|170:258|124:210|64:220,1,160,4|0
   82,298,76190,2,0,B|177:169,1,160,8|0

   SPOILER

   
6. [Spboxer3]01:41:268 (1) - Remove new combo?
7. [微風]01:59:549 (2,3,4) - 這個spacing絕對會誤導玩家的吧o o 其次我覺得01:59:842 (3)這個note是不是應該放在01:59:901才對???
8. [微風]02:10:799 (2,3,4,5) - 這裡...雖然我也不是很確定，不過玩起來很詭異..=_=||| 感覺節奏有些off，也許換成slider會比較好..
9. [笨蛋盈+bossandy]03:14:783 (3,4,5) - BPM64(雖然寫的是128)的歌塞1/8(雖然寫的是1/4)連打真的大丈夫？我覺得明顯是overmap了，很不合適. 後面還有超多1/4我就不重複說了.(妳們太鬼畜了=A=

1. Don't use grey combo color, it blend with the SB (especially near the end) and not to mention the kiai make it even worse. I suggest to use another color maybe a light olive or light brown
2. Add a line of code under the"//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)" to replace the BG with a black background instead. This will at least fix a moment spike of the SB load on the first kiai time (not that it really matter =3=)
   

   Sprite,Background,TopLeft,"BG.jpg",0,0

1. 00:11:737 (1) - This spinner end is still too loud compare to the singer's voice when he took his breath. Add a timing section for the end of this spinner with 20% volume
2. 00:38:455 (3) - According to your hitsound pattern there should be a whistle at the end of the slider
3. 02:17:362 (2) - The custom hitsound plays a bit awkward as a slider tick, it's better if you make it into the same pattern as 02:24:862 (3,4) so there's actually something to hit for the drum sound
4. 04:09:393 (2) - The warning arrow on the break after is disrupting your SB, might as well remove the break cause it's quite short

1. 00:11:737 (1) - The same as Normal diff
2. The 3/4 slider like 00:46:424 (2) is unreasonable and doesn't play very nice, it also sounds very awkward. The same for all the notes that 1/4 beat apart on this section. Please go through them again and try to use simple rhythm instead, cause this part of the song isn't as intense as the later similar part
3. 01:05:467 (5) - Uhm are you sure about this 1/8. It's better to move it 1/8 beat back to the red tick
4. 01:29:080 (1) - Seeing how you arrange the combo, this NC (new combo) should be removed
5. 01:37:049 (1) - ^
6. 02:03:065 (3) - Following the guitar the slider end should be on 1/6, but the slider it self play weird. Mostly because how the drum is ignored and just passed away by the slider. I suggest to just change this slider into 2 circle on 02:03:065 & 02:03:299
7. 02:10:330 (1) - The clap is too sharp here, maybe remove the clap or change it to whistle which is not as sharp
8. 02:10:799 (2) - You should add finish at the end of this slider. It's very obvious on the music
9. 02:11:971 (1) - Move it back 1/4 beat to make it follow the guitar closely, seeing how you mapped to the guitar it's strange to me that this isn't a pre spinner note
10. 04:09:393 (2) - Same as Normal diff

1. Let's see codes of BG3.jpg
   
   codes

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"SB\BG3.jpg",320,240
   F,0,133592,135467,0,1
   M,0,193592,,319,240 // useless code. remove.
   F,0,193592,195467,0.9958667,0.9957333 // Is this fading? If you don't want fading, change it to one spot.
2. Here is new code for reduce SB load. Add it under "//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)". If you add a line only which Sallad4ever give, you see black in second kiai time.
   

   Sprite,Background,Centre,"BG.jpg",320,240
    F,0,195487,,1
    S,0,195487,,0.625
    F,0,253612,257362,1,0

Armin wrote:

[General]

* I saw on Google what "Chen Wo" was... and it resulted to be the album's title. If it's true, please move it from "source" to "tags". Fixed~

[Normal]

01:11:854 (1,1) - I usually don't reccomend stuff like this for an easier difficulty; as you can see the spinner is distant from the next hitobject just 1/1 Bpm and this would confuse a newbie. Change to some sliders
04:12:088 (1) - I'd make end it here 04:17:362 (x) - Sorry no change here

[Hard]

01:08:455 (3) - I'd snap its end on 1/3 BSD Fixed~
04:08:690 (3) - weird weird jump Fixed~

Shiirn wrote:

[Collab]
01:59:862 (3,4) - move to the blue and red ticks ok
02:02:362 (1) - this is 1/3, not 1/4 Oops!! Fixed~ xDD


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angelfix wrote:

瞬间unrank了。QAQ

Makar8000 wrote:

angelfix wrote:

瞬间unrank了。QAQ

2 .osb files

Breeze wrote:

恭喜啦
又多一首中文歌了XD