Hanyuu wrote:

hi

[Easy]

00:34:32 (2) - end on white tick
00:40:63 (2) - end white tick
thanks for your mod, it do has some problem, but i think end on blue tick is better, fixed
01:36:49 (2,3) - make easier i think
01:45:96 (2) - make this slider end at the side of next circle not on the other side to make it easier too
well, in my opnion, it's not so diffcult for a rookie

i know tieff said others about the slider end but the change of speed is not good here for easy! (slider-halfbeat-beat-beat)

[Normal]
01:49:71 (1) - end white tick

[Hard]
Slider tick rate 2

The circle and slider you put here are like the normal difficulty- maybe you can make this more interesting if you not only map the voice

azuki wrote:

da da da

[Easy]
00:33:929 (2) slider end white tick
00:40:245 (2) ^

[Normal]
00:30:179 1 grid left?

[Hard]
00:12:810 (9.10) spacing near
00:22:185 (1,2) 1 tick right,i feel natural
00:28:501 (1,2) ^
00:47:448 (1,2) ^

nice map.take my star :3

blissfulyoshi wrote:

da:
00:21:69 (2) - align with the the current combo's 1
00:49:12 (2) - align with 1?
00:52:28 (2,3) - align with 1
01:00:57 (1,1,1) - make a straight line
01:10:24 (1) - I don't like how the repeat does not snap to anything in the music
01:13:40 (1) - " "
01:16:56 (1,1) - I don;t like how the second repeat does not snap to the lyrics for either slider
01:22:67 (1,1,1) - " "
01:44:98 (1) - align with 2 from previous combo?
01:51:10 (1,1,1) - make a straight line (move the yellow 1 1 grid(3) right)

da da:
y are there random bookmarks at the end?
00:30:57 (3) - align with 2
01:14:78 (4) - end on top of 2
01:25:83 (1) - align with previous combo's 2?
01:44:98 (1) - start on the end of 2 and 3

da da da:
00:12:21 (8,9) - nazi post: spacing is too large between these 2
00:34:32 (2) - this should be placed where the blue 2 was
yea, you are right, I'm so sorry for my misunderstanding
00:40:63 (2) - align with the orange 1
00:50:11 (7) - have this end on the start of 6
00:51:69 (2) - have this end directly on the end of 1
01:01:36 (1) - not the same distance from the orange 1 as the green 1 is away from the orange 1 (sorry for sounding confusing)
01:36:49 (5) - move 1 grid(3) up to make 5,6,7,8 straight

you have a few slider stacking issues, but nice map overall. Star.

sohuhard wrote:

One of my favourite singer and song!

DA DA DA
overall difficulty改到6，7比较合适，9太快。HP drain rate可以调到6以上。这样难度不会变太多。（变5星了 >.>
00:05:31() - 加一个spinner，00:06:69结束。
00:15:37 (5) - 摆圆圈的话，这个稍微调整一下。
00:17:54 (5,7) - 关掉grid，摆近一点。
00:32:15 (1,1,1) - 摆跳跳的好点，你用的0.7x的距离，这里可以用1.4x或者更大，后同。
还没做完吧 >.>

DA DA
好像所有歌曲的silder velocity都是1.6，对DA DA和DA来说快了一点，可以尝试减小一点做。
02:05:31 (1) - 在02:06:49结束。
Good

DA
01:10:24 (1) - 这个觉得中间的折返点有点不对，拆成两个slider吧。
修改了,确实有点奇怪
01:37:08 (3) - 直接放01:36:49 (2) 下面
这样是不是会对于easy来说难了点
01:46:95 (3) - ^

纵观全局，DA明明是最难的呀 >.>

Here is your star~

Alace wrote:

<Hard>
overall diff 9 is really unplayable
i suggest overall diff 7

• 00:21:69 (2) - move up by 1 cell.
  00:36:29() - remove break.
  00:38:46 (1,1,1) - may be move them left 1 cell?
  00:42:61() - remove break.
  00:52:28 (2,3) - up by 1 cell.
  00:54:45 (1,2) - may be make them strongly diagonal & mirror reflect each other horizontal.
  01:21:69 (2,3) - make reflection relatively middle's horizontal line. (move 1 down & due spacing 1 left)
  01:22:67 (1,1,1) - make it straight line.(may be with putting 01:23:07 (1) in grid center)
  01:25:83 (1,1,1) - ^ (just put them in same places such ^ )
  01:47:94 (1,1,1) - ^

• 00:06:88 (1) - make slider moooore symmetric
  00:13:20 (1) - ^
  00:21:69 (4) - up 1 cell.
  00:38:46 (1,1,1) - make reflection relatively middle's horizontal line?
  01:25:83 (1) - right by 1 cell.
  01:51:88 (1) - move down by 1 cell for symmetry.

• 00:44:98 (1,2) - stack ends.
  00:49:32 (6,7) - stack end 7 with begin 6.
  00:51:29 (1,2) - stack ends.
  00:52:28 (3,5) - stack end 5 with begin 3.
  01:11:23 (2,4) - ^
  01:13:40 (1,2) - ^
  01:14:38 (3,4) - ^
  01:16:56 (1,2) - ^
  01:16:56 (1,2) - make them straight line (or symmetric arc)
  01:24:85 (2) - I don't like how this hitcircle is covered by previous combo (2).
  01:36:49 (1) - New combo?
  01:39:65 (5,6,7) - move by 1 right.
  01:41:03 (7) - And stack it with (5) end.
  01:42:81 (1) - New combo?
  02:07:87 (4,5) - Move by 1 up....
  Well.
  02:06:88 (1,2,3,6,7,8,9) - Make it straight diagonal.
  02:07:48 (3,4,5,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  02:11:23 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  And other notes until end same procedure.

1. 00:49:12 (2) - Align with (1)s end,
2. 01:48:73 (1) - 1 left and down on Grid 3.

1. 00:32:15 (1,1,1) - Move 2 to left on Grid 3,
2. 01:08:46 (1) - Start 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2,
3. 02:16:36 (1) - Add 2 repeats.

1. 00:40:63 (2,1) - Align with (1),
2. 00:44:98 (1,2) - Stack ends,
3. 00:49:32 (6,7) - Stack beggining with end,
4. 00:51:29 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sooo, stack ends,begginings etc. lol :<,
5. 01:11:82 (4) - Stack on (2)s end,
6. 01:13:40 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sooo, stack ends,begginings etc. lol :<,
7. 01:16:56 (1,2) - Stack ends,
8. 01:50:11 (2,3) - Stack ends,
9. 02:19:521 - Maybe add note with finish?.

Takuma wrote:

I don't know why, but, when I download I only got the False Hard difficulty? Please try a full submit.
Expect a full mod later. Starred for now. :3

Alex0686 wrote:

Excuse me for being late.

General
Offset sounds a bit early. But Maybe my UO is to blame, I haven't set one.
Hit sound's volume are kinda loud.
yea, I have reduceed the hit volume

[Easy]
The drain rate is just so LOW! It won't hurt to raise it a bit. But just my own opinion.
Nothing in the actually map seem off. Just some weird feeling cause the spacing is strange because of the far away notes. But that's nazi crap.

Normal
01:13:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These kind of patterns may confuse someone, I got it the first though, but almost missed it the second time. But I guess it's fine.
01:30:968 - Wouldn't hurt to put a note here?
01:56:231 - ^
I use a slider instead
02:06:889-02:19:126 - No hit sounds? And a maybe a bit of timing sections at the right points for volume going up might be nice.

False Hard
Can't find anything, 'cept saying the overlapping patterns feel overused. But it's "Hard" so I guess that's just fine.

StarForU

Takuma wrote:

I think you should find a better spinnercircle thing. It is ugly.

[Easy]
02:05:31 (1) - Huh? This is pretty boring; a break then a spinner, then the map ends. Please if you can do anything about it, do it.
okay,I add something

[Hard]
00:12:81 (10) - The spacing is a little off. You should make (9,10,1) spacings even.
01:33:337 - Add a break?
01:51:10 (1) - I think the clap here was placed on mistake? It's not like the others, so I think you should remove the clap sound.

thank you Takuma,panda
you know that my hometown is the panda's hometown XD?

NachoPiggy wrote:

Very impressive map, storyboarding is great and the maps overall are pretty good and fun. No problems found either.


[Hard]
02:19:097 (10) - Add finish.


That's it :V

thanks for your mod and star

Inferior wrote:

+star

Leeg wrote:

Good job! Starred!

That girl from the song scares me... even more than Lazy Town's girl

Zekira wrote:

I don't like the offset...
...but I can't get anything that's VERY precise! What is this?! O_O

Offset: 563? If you don't like it then don't do it, since I just bit my ears on this one.

Takuma wrote:

*sigh* Full submit when you add images.

I have no other complaints. Except that I always laugh at 02:07:284 in Easy! HAHA.
Mnnggh, *cough* yes, I'll bubble this once you do this.

Cute, bubbled!

tieff wrote:

Gratz with bubble!