Metroid wrote:

overall
Lower the volume so it doesn't mask over the .mp3. I can't hear the vocals much in the middle of the song. Fixed
Map the whole song, it's 1:20 minutes long right now which is a little too short. Soon

Center the spinner, it's slightly moving around due to it being off center. It's already centered, the wheel is just not perfectly round

Uphill - Wouldn't uphill be harder as it's harder to bike uphill compared to downhill? I already explained this
This feels more like a Hard then a Normal. What about Hard and Insane then?
00:32:73 (1,1,1,1) - 3 single combos aren't a good thing. Fixed
00:38:81 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - I don't have to explain about the combos. Fixed

Level Ground
00:06:25 (1) - Very ninja spinner, and the next hit circles appear right before the spinner spins. This isn't ninja, so I won't change
00:20:58 (1) - Make this part of the next combo. I followed the lyrics, so I won't change
00:44:70 (10) - Move this downward of the 9 to 11 hit circles so it doesn't get covered by the 8 slider. Fixed

Downhill
00:01:22 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - Bad comboing. Fixed
00:04:25 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - Same here as above ^. Fixed
00:06:25 (1) - Dangerous ninja spinner on a insane makes it Hard As FUCK. As in hard, I won't change
00:13:18 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand. Fixed
00:20:58 (1) - Make this part of the next combo. Fixed
00:21:72 (1) - Don't have single alone combos. Note this for the next upcoming ones at this "rapping" section Fixed
00:38:81 (1,2) - Make this part of the next combo. Fixed
00:41:85 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand. Fixed
00:43:37 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Random jumps aren't fun or intuitive. This is insane, and I believe they are intuitive.
00:49:44 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand or the next combo. Fixed
00:52:67 (1) - I don't like single combos. Fixed
00:55:14 (1) - Make this part of the combo beforehand. Fixed
01:04:25 (3) - Not spaced to the 2 slider. Fixed
01:05:20 (2) - Same as^ to the 1 slider. Fixed
01:05:77 (3) - Same as ^ to the 2 slider. Fixed
01:27:80 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,3) - Ninja spinners and the hitcircles appear before the spinner. Spinners are alright
01:31:78 (4) - Don't end with a silent hit, end with a finish or something. I like it this way

Gens wrote:

[Overall]


- If this is the opening from "Over Drive", then write that in the Source box in Setup. Done

[Skin]
Could you make a "spinner-osu.png" Image? Just to not mix up skins, I say. Done
And the spinner-circle.png is not perfectly symmetrical :[ Done, I had to create one

[Timing]
Offset seems to be a little late... Can't suggest a better one due to lag D:

[Uphill]
- Lower down the beat volume abit please. (Why am I always the only one who notices about beat volume? :<) (Yes, I know you have many sections, I just say... Generally. Whistles kill my ears D:) Done

Why not map the end? It's TV Size anyway, it's short. Done

[Level Ground]
Also, I say map until the end too. Done

[Downhill]
Spacing Irregularities are forgivable here, I think. It's an Insane anyway.

~ ~ ~

Cool map~
Starred~

For the difficuties name, it is more a reference at speed, and actually, downhill is the most difficult part in a cyclist race as it is the most dangerous part.

Doomsday93 wrote:

Offset: 1,206 Done

i agree that you should call the hardest diff uphill, and call the easiet diff downhill, instead of the other way round See quote

also, good job on the skin and the storyboarding. looks really nice Thanks

[UPHILL]

00:06:91 (1) - remove this maybe? it sounds better without it imo Agreed, fixed.
00:16:96 (3) - remove one of the repeats, so it ends on 00:17:724. follows the lyrics better that way Done

no major problems

[LEVEL GROUND]

00:17:73 (5) - i'd make this a hitcircle instead of a slider. again, follows the lyrics better imo Done

[DOWNHILL]

no problems

i have to say, this is a great map. you're a natural

heres a well deserved star

tieff wrote:

Thanks to you I started watching this anime and I like it very much! ^_^