NoHitter wrote:
From my mod queue.
[General]
The title should be Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~. Add spaces after the first two exclamation points.
fixed
[Nymph's Hard]
00:04:226 (1) - IMO this NC is unneeded.
fixed
00:05:916 (1) - Same as above.
fixed
[Insane]
00:01:268 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This plays awkwardly. The music suggests that you should make them into two triples, (2,3,4) (5,6,7) instead of (2,3) (4,5,6,7).
in fact, this is following the music, not drums or lyric. this rhyme is easy to read/play imo
00:04:860 () - Add a note here. It fits better with the music and plays awkwardly as is without the note.
I follow drums here, not lyric. not hard to play, too
00:05:705 () - Same as above. same as ^
00:08:029 () - Same as above. This time it has lyrics on it too. same as ^
00:42:043 (5,6) - The two sliders here play awkwardly as well. (5) should have less one repeat, and (6) should be moved backwards then have one repeat added.
I follow music here, not downbeat. it's not hard to read or play imo
00:43:311 (2) - Might be confusing as the spacing for a 1/2 spaced note in the timeline is basically the same. I've placed similar sliders in the spoilerbox.
in fact this kind of patterns is very easy to read and play at all. and the sliders look pretty beautiful, so I'd like to keep this kind of patternsSPOILER01:46:268 (5,6) - Same as 00:42:043 (5,6).00:46:691 (2) - Same as above.
00:50:071 (2) - Same as above.
01:19:649 (4) - Same as above.
01:21:339 (5) - Same as above.
01:47:536 (2) - Same as above.
01:50:916 (2) - Same as above.
02:24:719 (4) - Same as above.
02:55:142 (4) - Same as above.
same as before
Download: Horinaka Yuki - Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~ (wcx19911123) [Gu's Easy].osuNoHitter wrote:
From my mod queue.
[General]
The title should be Hi, Gene! ~Yaa! Oh! Yeah!~. Add spaces after the first two exclamation points.
download this album.here is booklet.I think no space for these..what's more..when i see these lyrics...may be ya not yaa?...
[Gu's Easy]
02:58:522 (2,4) - (nazi) Make the tips of these two not overlap? OK
03:28:733 (1) - The start of this combo can throw off beginners since there's a strong beat at 03:28:522.don't know how to change this.and the sound of downbeat is odd and they are 1/2 notes so I think no problem
Fixed Ver. Here.wmfchris wrote:
Taiko mod as requested
(I agree with QQ姐 offset + 10 o.o)
[Taiko]
- Remove letterbox in breaks
00:02:335 - feel like a d work well here (as a response the the d K before, and it's odd to put 2-beats separated k all over there.
Fixed.
00:28:109 - k
Fixed.
01:16:701 - vocal sounds high in both white ticks but nothing in the middle, kdddk/kkddk might be better
I'm following the drums so dkkkd may better (?
01:39:940 - as an echo k sounds better here
Fixed.
整體不錯 就差了點節操
no change..since wcx thinks my diff is good enough and I also don't want to change anything...Miya wrote:
Gu's Easy
- 00:15:846 (1) - I don't recommend placing a circle on center of spinner like this since it will be stacked with the spinner hitburst. It can quite confusing for beginer.ehhh.I don't know what to say.some people can say : this note is hidden by the spinner hitburst.if I move it.some people will say:this note is too far from the spinner. then.
- 00:44:367 (2) - Switching into red tick like this is bad, since in previous note you always place note on white tick. Me too surprise when passing this section since i thought the slider will be on 00:44:156-. I suggest you make the rythim like this since it's easier to play and more readable > http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/331776 ( Don't follow the pattern, i didn't fix the pattern and the spacing)low AR with suitable distance.fine for me
- 00:47:747 (2) - ^
- 00:51:127 (2) - ^same
- 00:54:508 (1,1) - I recommend make these spinner into 1 spinner. Since 00:58:099 (1) - is quite short for beginner. This will cause beginner to surprise and miss the spinner. And it's way too close to next note. Follow normal spinner example for better gameplaytwo spinners follow diffrent things.1st follows vocal and 2nd follows instrument.and both are long enough,so.
- 01:48:592 (2) - Just like 00:44:367 (2) - same
- 01:51:973 (2) - ^
- 01:55:353 (2) - ^
- 01:58:733 (1,1) - Same as 00:54:508 (1,1) -same
- 02:04:015 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner again.again
- 02:31:057 (1) - Make this symetrical with 02:30:212 (4) - for better flow?not a big problem
- 02:42:677 (1,1) - Same case as 00:54:508 (1,1) -same
- 02:47:958 (1) - Note in the middle of spinner.same
- 03:28:522 (1) - I recommend you to move this slider 1/2 backward but make it end on 03:29:156- . Just like case above it's easier to play and more readable to beginner.I think 1/2 is more diffcult
Miya wrote:
Nymph's HardInsane
- 00:15:212 (3) - I would love to put new combo on here to make the combo consistant with previous combo.
umm, I think this is fine, the newcombo alway start at white long line(like 00:19:226 - and 00:22:606 - )
- 01:51:339 (3,4) - Orz, i almost miss at this note because i thoght it was 1/2 like your previous stacked note. I recommend you to add a note here 01:51:550- to make it more easier to read.
oh, I think this is fine, I'm following vocal here. besides this, you can read the approach circles and know there're only 2 notes easily
I know it's 2 circle. But i thogth it's 1/2 not 1/1 because of previous stack. Please consider this.wcx19911123 wrote:
- 01:51:339 (3,4) - Orz, i almost miss at this note because i thoght it was 1/2 like your previous stacked note. I recommend you to add a note here 01:51:550- to make it more easier to read.
oh, I think this is fine, I'm following vocal here. besides this, you can read the approach circles and know there're only 2 notes easily
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