Hi
I Am Yours
00:05:600 (2,3) - spacing error here.
00:13:342 (2,3) - personally, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298122 better way to get better flow from (1).
00:15:277 (5,1) - spacing error here.
00:37:535 (1) - new combo here , according to 00:31:971 (1,2,3,4) - , It's better to not count them over 6 or 7 , hp drain 5 isn't that easy for beginner.
00:39:713 (1,2,3) - distance between (1) and (2) isn't same as (2) and (3) , so change it.
I suggest here : (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298129 (2)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298132 if you don't understand , you can ask me in-game if you choose to fix it .
00:43:826 (5,1) - I choose to insert break here If I were you.
01:19:874 (3) - ahh , feel awkward of this note, move to x:268 y:132.
01:21:568 (5) - this too x:304 y:252
01:50:842 (3) - why ended it at blue line ? , short it to 01:51:084 also the vocal end at this point.
01:52:293 (3,1) - insert break.
02:01:003 (3,1) - ^
02:11:890 (1) - really beautiful .
You Are Mine
decrease its AR to 7 please =_=a , 8 doesn't fit to this song well.
00:14:309 (1) - new combo here please, sound changed and you changed its way of jumping.
00:27:132 (1) - just in my opinion but shaping this slider to be the wave fits to this voice here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298152 (also you did it at 00:34:874 (1) - )
00:33:422 (5) - nazi* left 1 grid for complete stacking from 00:32:213 (3) - .
00:44:068 (1) - nazi* right 1 grid same above reason.
00:45:035 (3) - so then , ctrl+< 1 time and stack it at 00:44:068 (1) - 's position.
00:46:487 (6,1) - sudden jump here , consider to reduce its distance.
01:23:503 (2) - nazi* left 1 grid for complete stacking.
01:24:229 (4,6) - It's overlapped by (4) , looks not good. please move (6) a bit.
01:39:955 (7) - it's kinda trouble to read here, new combo here ? different color can relieve this issue.
01:44:551 (1) - you can shape it better I know :3.
ok , Good luck !
I Am Yours
00:05:600 (2,3) - spacing error here.
00:13:342 (2,3) - personally, http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298122 better way to get better flow from (1).
00:15:277 (5,1) - spacing error here.
00:37:535 (1) - new combo here , according to 00:31:971 (1,2,3,4) - , It's better to not count them over 6 or 7 , hp drain 5 isn't that easy for beginner.
00:39:713 (1,2,3) - distance between (1) and (2) isn't same as (2) and (3) , so change it.
I suggest here : (1) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298129 (2)http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298132 if you don't understand , you can ask me in-game if you choose to fix it .
00:43:826 (5,1) - I choose to insert break here If I were you.
01:19:874 (3) - ahh , feel awkward of this note, move to x:268 y:132.
01:21:568 (5) - this too x:304 y:252
01:50:842 (3) - why ended it at blue line ? , short it to 01:51:084 also the vocal end at this point.
01:52:293 (3,1) - insert break.
02:01:003 (3,1) - ^
02:11:890 (1) - really beautiful .
You Are Mine
decrease its AR to 7 please =_=a , 8 doesn't fit to this song well.
00:14:309 (1) - new combo here please, sound changed and you changed its way of jumping.
00:27:132 (1) - just in my opinion but shaping this slider to be the wave fits to this voice here. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/298152 (also you did it at 00:34:874 (1) - )
00:33:422 (5) - nazi* left 1 grid for complete stacking from 00:32:213 (3) - .
00:44:068 (1) - nazi* right 1 grid same above reason.
00:45:035 (3) - so then , ctrl+< 1 time and stack it at 00:44:068 (1) - 's position.
00:46:487 (6,1) - sudden jump here , consider to reduce its distance.
01:23:503 (2) - nazi* left 1 grid for complete stacking.
01:24:229 (4,6) - It's overlapped by (4) , looks not good. please move (6) a bit.
01:39:955 (7) - it's kinda trouble to read here, new combo here ? different color can relieve this issue.
01:44:551 (1) - you can shape it better I know :3.
ok , Good luck !