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bibuko - Crayon

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val0108
1,430 posts
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Topic Starter
val0108
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年9月24日 at 3:48:53

Artist: bibuko
Title: Crayon
Tags: Vocaloid shidu those Hatsune Miku
BPM: 200
Filesize: 5312kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Crayon (5 stars, 701 notes)
  2. Easy (1.64 stars, 101 notes)
  3. Hard (5 stars, 424 notes)
  4. Insane (5 stars, 573 notes)
  5. Normal (4.34 stars, 206 notes)
  6. tTaiko (5 stars, 957 notes)
Download: bibuko - Crayon
Download: bibuko - Crayon (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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～赤いクレヨン～

*STORY*
SPOILER
ある夫婦が、かねてより夢であった一軒家を購入した。中古物件ではあったが、ほとんど新築同然で、しかも破格値であったため、一も二もなく手に入れたものだった。

ある日、廊下に落ちている赤いクレヨンを見つける。夫婦には子供はなく、家に誰かが入って来た形跡もない。その時は気に留めなかったが、同様の怪異が次々と起こるに至り、夫婦はこの家について調べ始める。

その結果、この家には、もうひとつ部屋があってしかるべき空間があることが判明する。 意を決した夫婦は、その「隠された部屋」周辺の壁紙を剥がす。

するとそこには、釘打ちされた扉があった。恐る恐るその扉を開けると、何も無い部屋が。

しかし、その部屋の壁一面は、びっしりと赤い文字で埋め尽されていた。

おかあさんごめんなさい！ここから出して！おかあさんごめんなさい！ここから出して！おかあさんごめんなさい！ここから出して！おかあさんごめんなさい！ここから出して！おかあさんごめんなさい！ここから出して！おかあさんごめんなさい！ここから出して！…
ttaiko by those

Spactator's CTB
Thank you!!
Last edited by val0108 , edited 55 times in total.
Wishy
2,974 posts
Joined September 2010
Wishy
ごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさいごめんなさい
Spectator
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,820 posts
Joined February 2011
Spectator
Can I make a CtB diff for this map too? :)

(btw Talent Shredder CtB 60% done! Will upload soon)
inaba-tan
609 posts
Joined August 2010
inaba-tan
taiko作っていいですかー？
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
val0108

Spectator wrote:

Can I make a CtB diff for this map too? :)

(btw Talent Shredder CtB 60% done! Will upload soon)
sure
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
val0108

inaba-tan wrote:

taiko作っていいですかー？
suree
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
Hey val. Here's my diff and background image.
And a star.

Download: Hatsune Miku - Crayon (val0108) [ttaiko].osu

inaba-tan
609 posts
Joined August 2010
inaba-tan
finish :D

Download: Hatsune Miku - Crayon (val0108) [inaba's Taiko].osu
Low
2,006 posts
Joined July 2011
Low
A request by those from my queue. I really don't have much to mod as it isn't finished yet.

[General]

-- This is still a WIP, so upload it to be one.
-- I love the way you designed the sliders to match the guitar.

[Normal]

Looks nice.

[ttaiko]

02:05:298 (3) - Unsnapped slider end.

[Hard]

00:08:148 (3,1) - These notes could be blanketed better. Try something like this.
00:08:298 (1,2) - Odd overlap between these two sliders.
01:04:548 (5) - The end of this slider is completely covered by the previous slider's slider-track. I'm not sure if this is rankable in a hard difficulty.
01:17:148 (2) - Make this farther away from the previous slider. Just a bit.

[Insane]

00:09:873 (9) - Make this slider a bit farther away like this.
00:12:273 (6) - ^
01:02:448 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - There was a map unranked for something like this. This is unrankable, so please change it.
01:12:498 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^
02:06:198 (1,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ^

Good luck!
NabeyaN
16 posts
Joined March 2011
NabeyaN
クレヨン、待ってました～
KanaRin
1,886 posts
Joined April 2010
KanaRin
wait for you!
I like this song so much haha
(btw i have >40 songs by bibuko \o/
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those

KanaRin wrote:

wait for you!
I like this song so much haha
(btw i have >40 songs by bibuko \o/
Where do you get them all?!
raririn
1,002 posts
Joined October 2011
raririn
:3
those
3,136 posts
Joined November 2010
those
Here's the change.

MRMR_old
44 posts
Joined November 2011
MRMR_old
Star (●･̆ ･̆●)
DontTalkwithMir
DontTalkwithMir
Lovely song, great for CtB maps. :D
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
おねがい 出して　出して　出して　ここから出して
もう二度としないから これからはいい子にしてるから
どうか許して ごめんなさい　ごめんなさい　ごめんなさい
真っ暗な場所に独りぼっちは怖い怖い
怖いの
nekitkas
35 posts
Joined June 2011
nekitkas
On hard notes arent staying on ticks
grumd
1,790 posts
Joined October 2010
grumd
Finally. First val's map I can singletap.
Miyuki
17 posts
Joined November 2010
Miyuki
very fun map and good song :)
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
as requested

[General]
  1. 500ms audio lean-in
[Crayon]
  1. 00:43:108 (1) - prevent to use slidertick like this next time, it makes map sound not the same as play.
  2. 01:03:208 (2) - move this more out
  3. 01:03:658 (2) - ^
  4. 01:13:108 (2) - ^ won't repeat for the left ones
  5. 01:57:658 (1) - make the shape more clear?
  6. 02:05:158 (3,1) - a bit close? try reverse 02:05:008 (2,3) they two
  7. 02:06:658 (2) - ^ won't repeat for the left ones
[Hard]
  1. 01:31:558 (1) - lost new combo
[Easy]
  1. 00:05:758 (1,1) - a bit too fast for an easy diff
  2. 00:25:108 (1,1) - too apart, set the note closer to the center
  3. 01:29:908 (1,1) - ^
  4. 00:55:258 (2) - lost new combo
[ttaiko]
  1. unsnapped notes
  2. 02:05:308 (3) - recalculate this slider's length
so cut version :'(
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
lol graved? seems replys are not preventing maps from gravinng now
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
val0108

Colin Hou wrote:

lol graved? seems replys are not preventing maps from gravinng now
sorry,reup just now.I'll fix your mods.

thanks
val0108
1,430 posts
Joined January 2010
Topic Starter
val0108

Colin Hou wrote:

as requested

[General]
  1. 500ms audio lean-in
[Crayon]
  1. 00:43:108 (1) - prevent to use slidertick like this next time, it makes map sound not the same as play.Ｆｉｘ
  2. 01:03:208 (2) - move this more out
  3. 01:03:658 (2) - ^
  4. 01:13:108 (2) - ^ won't repeat for the left ones
  5. 01:57:658 (1) - make the shape more clear?
  6. 02:05:158 (3,1) - a bit close? try reverse 02:05:008 (2,3) they twoＦｉｘ
  7. 02:06:658 (2) - ^ won't repeat for the left ones
Ｆｉｘ

[Hard]
  1. 01:31:558 (1) - lost new combo
Ｆｉｘ

[Easy]
  1. 00:05:758 (1,1) - a bit too fast for an easy diffＦｉｘ
  2. 00:25:108 (1,1) - too apart, set the note closer to the centerＦｉｘ
  3. 01:29:908 (1,1) - ^Ｆｉｘ
  4. 00:55:258 (2) - lost new combo
Ｆｉｘ

[ttaiko]
[list][*]unsnapped notesＦｉｘ
[*]02:05:308 (3) - recalculate this slider's length[/listＦｉｘ]

so cut version :'(
thanks!!
Spectator
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
1,820 posts
Joined February 2011
Spectator



SPOILER
osu file format v9

[General]
AudioFilename: Crayon.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 500
PreviewTime: 61858
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 2
LetterboxInBreaks: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 62448,91248
DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Crayon
Artist:Hatsune Miku
Creator:val0108
Version:Spec's CTB
Source:bibuko
Tags:Vocaloid shidu those

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
Video,0,"video.avi"
0,0,"BG.jpg"
//Break Periods
2,81708,89308
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,148,96
Combo2 : 231,221,105
Combo3 : 96,175,255
Combo4 : 255,91,91

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180,180,35758,1,8
96,104,35908,2,0,B|160:124|198:57|198:57|276:56,1,200,2|2
316,56,36283,1,2
356,56,36358,2,0,B|416:44|472:52,1,100,8|2
216,316,36658,1,2
360,240,36808,1,2
216,152,36958,2,0,B|140:161|100:149,1,100,8|2
352,340,37258,5,6
184,192,37408,1,0
384,256,37558,1,8
204,172,37708,1,0
416,164,37858,1,2
232,152,38008,1,2
444,64,38158,1,8
260,132,38308,1,6
372,60,38458,6,0,B|348:76|348:76|324:104|260:120,1,100,2|2
40,328,38758,2,0,B|72:308|72:308|88:284|152:268,1,100,8|2
424,336,39058,2,0,B|388:228,1,100
376,204,39283,1,2
360,168,39358,1,8
340,132,39433,1,8
320,96,39508,2,0,B|254:80|186:88|126:124,1,200,6|2
128,124,39958,1,8
424,180,40108,1,2
424,180,40183,1,2
424,180,40258,2,0,B|400:120|348:108|304:96|304:96|252:36|160:72,1,300,4|0
424,180,40858,5,4
184,188,41008,2,2,B|112:188,2,50,12|0|2
324,188,41308,2,2,B|380:188,2,50,12|0|2
256,288,41608,2,2,B|256:368,2,50,12|0|2
60,308,41908,6,0,B|132:316|168:284|168:284|256:288,1,200,6|2
344,292,42358,2,0,B|380:288|380:288|418:288|418:288|464:280,1,100,8|2
276,208,42658,5,2
372,188,42808,2,0,B|400:184|400:184|444:180|444:180|484:188,1,100,2|8
56,216,43108,6,0,B|76:176|76:176|164:112|164:112|180:68,1,200,2|14
216,56,43483,1,2
256,52,43558,2,0,B|362:33,1,100,2|12
392,44,43783,1,2
424,68,43858,1,2
448,100,43933,1,2
472,128,44008,2,0,B|464:164|464:164|476:192|476:192|460:244|472:348,1,200,14|6
440,304,44758,6,0,B|392:292|392:292|320:304,1,100,8|2
72,304,45058,2,0,B|120:320|120:320|192:304,1,100,0|2
256,216,45358,1,8
204,128,45508,2,0,B|152:72|84:72|22:137,1,200,6|2
28,128,45958,1,8
308,256,46108,2,0,B|360:312|428:312|490:247,1,200,2|2
488,212,46483,1,2
488,176,46558,1,8
204,128,46708,1,2
448,92,46858,6,0,B|332:72,1,100,6|2
308,72,47083,1,2
268,60,47158,2,0,B|212:48|144:44,1,100,8|2
440,280,47458,1,8
224,180,47608,1,14
328,180,47758,1,2
224,180,47908,6,0,B|161:224|80:179|88:97,1,200,14|2
292,236,48358,2,0,B|252:264|197:305,1,100,8|2
392,284,48658,2,0,B|356:316|304:352,1,100,8|2
196,336,48958,1,8
160,324,49033,1,2
120,316,49108,1,2
84,300,49183,1,2
48,280,49258,6,0,B|48:176,1,100,4|2
464,64,49558,2,0,B|464:188,1,100,8|2
148,152,49858,2,0,B|148:52,1,100,2|8
364,172,50158,1,2
104,276,50308,2,0,B|180:356|296:284,1,200,6|2
436,268,50758,6,0,B|316:208,1,100,8|2
104,168,51058,1,2
256,20,51208,1,2
256,20,51283,1,2
256,20,51358,1,8
256,20,51433,1,0
256,20,51508,1,2
256,20,51583,1,2
256,20,51658,6,0,B|152:76,1,100,6|2
88,132,51958,1,8
192,236,52108,1,2
92,216,52258,1,2
248,152,52408,2,0,B|352:96,1,100,2|8
444,308,52708,6,0,B|228:308,1,200,4|2
88,240,53083,1,2
88,240,53158,2,0,B|212:240,1,100,8|2
348,196,53383,1,2
348,196,53458,2,0,B|244:196,1,100,8|2
88,144,53683,1,0
88,144,53758,2,0,B|204:144,1,100,8|2
424,272,54058,6,0,B|332:356|228:280,1,200,6|8
156,172,54508,1,2
244,64,54658,1,2
360,64,54808,2,0,B|408:44|468:48,1,100,2|8
244,152,55108,2,0,B|320:152|372:180|416:240,1,200,6|2
436,260,55483,1,2
456,284,55558,1,10
282,237,55708,1,2
297,255,55783,1,2
314,274,55858,1,2
330,293,55933,1,2
346,312,56008,1,2
363,331,56083,1,2
378,349,56158,2,0,B|310:298|250:297|194:351,1,200,8|6
136,256,56608,5,2
88,236,56683,1,2
44,216,56758,1,8
140,128,56908,2,0,B|40:88,1,100,2|8
464,128,57208,2,0,B|364:88,1,100,2|8
256,36,57508,2,0,B|304:92|200:160|264:240,1,200,6|2
254,226,57883,1,2
254,226,57958,1,8
352,220,58108,1,2
376,224,58183,1,2
400,232,58258,1,2
416,252,58333,1,2
428,272,58408,1,2
432,296,58483,1,8
424,320,58558,1,8
412,340,58633,1,8
392,356,58708,1,8
368,360,58783,1,8
344,356,58858,6,0,B|292:368|292:368|236:336,2,100
40,48,59308,2,0,B|88:36|88:36|148:68,2,100
340,140,59758,1,10
104,320,59908,2,0,B|108:264|100:216,2,100,12|2|2
416,252,60358,2,0,B|408:304|412:360,2,100
420,216,60733,1,10
428,180,60808,1,8
436,144,60883,1,8
436,108,60958,2,0,B|432:72|432:72|436:40|436:40|444:0,1,100
68,60,61258,5,14
344,164,61408,1,14
68,348,61558,1,14
260,192,61858,5,0
260,192,62158,1,0
168,32,62458,6,0,B|232:16|300:36,1,124.999998137355,6|2
428,312,62758,2,0,B|388:324|388:324|352:304|352:304|304:313,1,124.999998137355,8|2
480,166,63058,5,2
360,212,63208,2,0,B|320:224|320:224|284:204|284:204|236:213,1,124.999998137355,2|8
480,166,63508,5,6
296,120,63658,2,0,B|256:132|256:132|220:112|220:112|172:121,1,124.999998137355,2|2
480,166,63958,5,8
264,32,64108,2,0,B|212:52|212:52|120:28|120:28|96:56|64:60|24:60,1,250,2|2
32,124,64483,2,0,B|32:60,1,62.5,2|8
32,224,64708,1,2
428,264,64858,2,0,B|304:192,1,125,2|0
276,180,65083,1,2
232,156,65158,2,0,B|108:84,1,125,2|0
288,64,65458,1,0
32,224,65608,1,0
140,280,65758,1,0
32,336,65908,6,0,B|106:338|148:304|148:304|276:356,1,250,6|2
316,340,66283,1,2
364,328,66358,1,8
488,204,66508,1,2
368,76,66658,1,2
368,76,66733,1,2
368,76,66808,1,2
368,76,66883,1,2
368,76,66958,1,8
368,76,67033,1,8
368,76,67108,1,8
368,76,67183,1,8
368,76,67258,6,0,B|248:92|248:92|124:16,1,250,6|10
48,140,67708,1,2
136,244,67858,2,0,B|256:196,2,124.999998137355
468,152,68308,2,0,B|512:232|512:232|492:336|388:332,1,249.99999627471,6|2
356,328,68683,1,2
308,320,68758,2,0,B|256:320|212:320|212:320|180:320,2,125
20,184,69208,2,0,B|72:184|116:184|116:184|148:184,2,125
256,88,69658,5,12
152,192,69808,1,2
256,316,69958,1,8
352,192,70108,1,2
112,80,70258,1,8
256,316,70408,1,2
400,80,70558,1,10
256,72,70708,6,0,B|248:104|248:104|253:147|253:147|248:204|236:280|236:280|260:328,1,250,6|2
244,332,71083,1,0
232,348,71158,1,0
150,93,71308,1,10
141,106,71383,1,8
132,120,71458,1,8
124,132,71533,1,8
116,144,71608,1,2
108,156,71683,1,2
100,168,71758,1,10
92,180,71833,1,2
84,192,71908,1,10
76,204,71983,1,2
68,216,72058,6,0,B|28:276|64:344,1,124.999998137355,6|2
256,116,72358,1,8
416,88,72508,6,0,B|460:152|416:232,2,124.999998137355
256,116,72958,5,8
88,208,73108,2,0,B|132:272|88:352,1,124.999998137355,6|2
256,112,73408,5,2
416,208,73558,2,0,B|460:272|416:352,1,124.999998137355,8|2
256,112,73858,5,0
72,88,74008,2,0,B|116:152|72:232,1,124.999998137355,0|8
256,112,74308,5,4
416,200,74458,2,0,B|460:264|416:344,1,124.999998137355
256,112,74758,5,8
132,224,74908,2,0,B|176:288|132:368,1,124.999998137355
256,384,75208,6,0,B|256:332|256:332|256:364|256:364|256:304|256:268|256:268|251:185,1,250,2|6
252,180,75583,1,2
252,160,75658,2,0,B|194:109|119:114,1,124.999998137355,2|2
36,208,75958,1,8
248,268,76108,2,0,B|306:319|381:314,1,124.999998137355,2|2
464,220,76408,1,8
128,196,76558,5,8
256,336,76708,1,2
384,188,76858,1,10
256,48,77008,1,2
256,48,77158,1,0
256,48,77308,1,0
128,316,77458,1,14
188,348,77533,1,10
256,364,77608,1,8
324,356,77683,1,8
384,316,77758,1,14
64,88,77908,5,0
304,128,78058,1,2
204,204,78208,2,0,B|168:216|136:232|136:232|72:248,1,125,2|0
172,104,78508,2,0,B|208:44|288:40|288:40|340:68|428:72,1,250,0|2
412,76,78883,1,2
428,80,78958,2,0,B|440:116|440:116|432:156|432:156|436:212,1,125,2|2
264,216,79258,5,12
372,192,79408,1,2
476,152,79558,1,2
244,120,79708,5,12
144,168,79858,1,2
44,220,80008,1,2
464,284,80158,5,12
368,240,80308,1,2
264,200,80458,1,2
44,264,80608,5,14
148,300,80758,1,10
248,332,80908,1,10
364,296,81058,5,2
476,48,81208,2,0,B|440:32|440:32|412:32|412:32|372:40,1,100,8|6
256,192,89908,12,4,91258
128,88,91558,6,0,B|192:72|272:120|272:120|336:88,1,200,8|2
40,152,92008,2,0,B|40:108|40:40,1,100,2|8
184,200,92308,2,0,B|360:332,1,200,2|2
392,320,92683,1,2
440,320,92758,2,0,B|480:288|544:256,1,100,4|0
468,50,93058,2,0,B|424:72|384:104,1,100,6|0
336,104,93283,1,0
288,104,93358,2,0,B|192:40,1,100
128,152,93658,6,0,B|92:152|64:160|64:160|24:176,1,100,6|2
384,232,93958,2,0,B|420:232|448:224|448:224|488:208,1,100,8|0
256,192,94258,1,2
168,128,94408,2,0,B|140:76|164:24,1,100,2|8
320,144,94708,2,0,B|362:169|384:208|384:208|433:223|504:232,1,200,6|2
312,304,95083,1,2
264,288,95158,2,0,B|200:272|168:264,1,100,8|2
28,352,95458,5,8
60,204,95608,1,2
88,184,95683,1,8
120,168,95758,1,8
152,152,95833,1,8
184,144,95908,2,0,B|248:188|320:172|350:100,1,200,6|2
152,248,96358,2,0,B|208:268|272:280,1,100,8|2
488,112,96658,5,10
488,112,96808,2,0,B|424:96|352:80,1,100,2|8
120,88,97108,5,2
120,88,97258,2,0,B|172:87|232:72,1,100,6|8
240,104,97483,1,8
256,136,97558,1,8
440,192,97708,1,8
424,224,97783,1,8
408,256,97858,1,8
232,344,98008,1,8
216,312,98083,1,8
200,280,98158,1,8
40,240,98308,6,0,B|60:172|144:168|144:168|192:96,1,200,6|2
448,88,98758,2,0,B|348:32,1,100,8|2
40,240,99058,2,0,B|140:296,2,100
464,264,99508,2,0,B|400:168|400:168|308:124,1,200,2|2
288,120,99883,1,0
256,104,99958,2,0,B|136:56,1,100
40,208,100258,2,0,B|144:248,1,100,2|2
168,256,100483,1,2
200,264,100558,1,8
416,272,100708,1,2
416,272,100858,22,0,B|288:248,1,100,6|2
480,48,101158,1,2
256,104,101308,1,8
80,152,101458,2,0,B|128:136|192:112,2,100,2|2|8
432,272,101908,2,0,B|368:232|336:288|336:288|232:304,1,200,6|2
480,152,102358,2,0,B|376:104,1,100,0|2
94,239,102658,2,0,B|142:248|195:206,1,100,0|2
176,188,102883,1,2
164,168,102958,1,10
152,148,103033,1,10
136,128,103108,22,0,B|88:64|88:64|92:48|92:48|48:12|48:12|56:76,1,200,6|2
216,112,103558,2,0,B|336:108,1,100,8|2
76,180,103858,5,2
264,156,104008,2,0,B|384:152,1,100,2|8
132,240,104308,5,2
316,204,104458,2,0,B|436:200,1,100,6|8
431,200,104683,1,10
446,200,104758,1,2
468,288,104908,1,12
460,312,104983,1,2
452,336,105058,1,2
240,352,105208,1,12
248,328,105283,1,2
256,304,105358,1,2
168,160,105508,6,0,B|196:204|176:248|176:248|112:252|76:336,1,200,6|2
32,120,105958,2,0,B|124:52,1,100,8|2
464,96,106258,2,0,B|372:164,1,100,8|2
352,168,106483,1,2
320,184,106558,1,8
288,106,106708,6,0,B|282:21|185:-12|131:67,1,200,2|2
135,76,107083,1,2
128,100,107158,1,2
456,152,107308,1,12
192,208,107458,1,2
440,296,107608,2,0,B|415:287|415:287|421:260|421:260|369:327|280:299,1,200,12|6
112,200,108358,6,0,B|88:216|88:216|64:232|64:232|24:248,1,100,8|2
376,96,108658,2,0,B|412:88|412:88|439:70|439:70|480:64,1,100,0|2
196,124,108958,1,8
448,192,109108,1,6
200,280,109258,1,2
280,336,109408,6,0,B|310:331|310:331|337:313|337:313|374:306,1,100,0|8
448,88,109708,2,0,B|418:93|418:93|391:111|391:111|354:118,2,100
196,260,110158,1,8
172,252,110233,1,2
148,244,110308,1,2
124,236,110383,1,2
100,228,110458,5,6
48,144,110608,2,0,B|88:104|152:120,2,100,2|8|2
456,232,111058,2,0,B|416:272|352:256,2,100,2|8|2
24,160,111508,6,0,B|96:48|232:136,1,200,6|4
488,224,111958,2,0,B|416:336|280:248,1,200,8|8
160,232,112408,1,2
308,208,112558,1,8
348,220,112633,1,2
384,240,112708,1,2
408,272,112783,1,2
432,304,112858,6,0,B|440:256|444:184,1,100,14|2
472,24,113158,2,0,B|448:48|416:64|416:64|384:128|304:120,1,200,8|2
64,160,113608,1,2
160,248,113758,1,8
288,296,113908,2,0,B|400:336|480:216,1,200,4|2
456,200,114283,1,2
440,168,114358,1,8
208,80,114508,1,2
57,12,114658,2,0,B|4:64|36:124,1,100,2|2
36,124,114883,1,2
40,148,114958,1,8
40,172,115033,1,2
36,196,115108,1,2
24,220,115183,1,2
16,244,115258,6,0,B|56:284|56:284|124:284,1,100,6|2
496,140,115558,2,0,B|456:100|456:100|388:100,1,100,8|2
48,64,115858,2,0,B|88:88|144:96,2,100
248,144,116308,6,0,B|296:124|296:124|392:132|392:132|464:104,1,200,6|2
427,174,116683,2,0,B|371:210,1,50,2|8
328,280,116908,5,8
344,312,116983,1,8
360,344,117058,1,10
208,220,117208,1,10
168,232,117283,1,8
128,248,117358,1,10
320,136,117508,1,10
336,104,117583,1,10
352,72,117658,6,0,B|392:48|392:48|464:48,1,100,6|2
132,94,117958,2,0,B|164:126|164:126|236:142,1,100,2|2
24,280,118258,2,0,B|77:291|77:291|109:323,2,100
0,160,118708,6,0,B|-24:220|16:248|16:248|60:292|28:352,1,200,6|2
64,336,119083,1,2
96,328,119158,2,0,B|204:252,1,100,8|2
200,256,119383,1,2
232,240,119458,1,2
264,224,119533,1,2
296,208,119608,1,2
328,192,119683,1,2
360,184,119758,2,0,B|377:193|377:193|373:218|373:218|403:225|403:225|378:278|399:331|463:349,1,200,8|4
463,147,120208,6,0,B|464:104|464:32,1,100,2|8
208,48,120508,2,0,B|256:48|336:48,1,100
48,148,120808,2,0,B|48:96|48:24,1,100,2|8
141,336,121108,2,0,B|230:339|230:339|253:278|318:247,1,200,4|2
336,256,121483,1,2
368,256,121558,2,0,B|416:264|480:272,1,100,8|2
80,296,121858,6,8,B|56:176,1,100,2|0
432,88,122158,2,8,B|456:208,1,100,2|0
32,76,122458,6,0,B|83:99|160:96,1,100,14|2
160,104,122683,1,0
192,112,122758,2,0,B|308:69,1,100,14|2
320,72,122983,1,2
352,72,123058,1,12
504,224,123208,1,2
320,344,123358,1,2
181,62,123508,6,0,B|195:211,1,150,12|2
344,152,123808,2,0,B|336:192|320:232|376:272|360:288|344:360,1,200,6|2
256,72,124258,5,8
228,76,124333,1,8
200,80,124408,1,8
172,84,124483,1,8
144,88,124558,1,2
116,92,124633,1,2
88,96,124708,1,2
60,100,124783,1,2
32,104,124858,5,14
256,280,125008,1,14
480,136,125158,1,14
48,248,125458,37,0
152,264,125608,1,2
256,280,125758,1,0
368,272,125908,1,2
464,248,126058,1,6
160,280,126208,6,0,B|120:260|120:260|88:284|88:284|32:280,1,124.999998137355,2|8
256,352,126508,5,2
184,240,126658,2,0,B|144:220|144:220|112:244|112:244|56:240,1,124.999998137355,2|2
328,328,126958,5,8
208,200,127108,2,0,B|168:180|168:180|136:204|136:204|80:200,1,124.999998137355,6|2
400,304,127408,5,2
232,160,127558,2,0,B|192:140|192:140|160:164|160:164|104:160,1,124.999998137355,8|2
264,112,127858,6,0,B|192:96|192:96|136:72,1,125,2|2
376,168,128158,2,0,B|448:184|448:184|504:208,1,125,2|2
0,256,128458,2,0,B|136:224,1,125,8|2
160,232,128683,1,2
200,232,128758,2,0,B|320:272,1,125,8|2
472,88,129058,6,8,B|352:48,2,125
88,184,129508,1,6
416,240,129658,2,0,B|346:218|264:208,1,125,2|2
256,200,129883,1,2
216,192,129958,1,8
352,96,130108,1,2
98,239,130258,5,8
128,248,130333,1,2
160,256,130408,1,2
192,264,130483,1,2
224,272,130558,1,8
256,280,130633,1,2
284,288,130708,1,8
316,296,130783,1,8
348,304,130858,6,0,B|377:321|394:313|394:313|441:321|467:367,2,124.999998137355,6|2|8
136,120,131308,2,0,B|116:104|92:112|92:112|48:112|16:56,1,124.999998137355,2|2
368,40,131608,2,0,B|388:56|412:48|412:48|456:48|488:104,1,124.999998137355,2|2
284,361,131908,2,0,B|254:315|254:315|184:272|184:272|64:288,1,250,6|2
72,248,132283,1,2
72,208,132358,2,0,B|72:144|72:88|72:88|72:40,1,125,8|2
440,176,132658,2,0,B|440:240|440:296|440:296|440:344,1,125,8|2
180,164,132958,1,0
332,164,133108,1,0
256,344,133258,5,8
180,164,133408,1,2
332,164,133558,1,8
180,312,133708,2,0,B|129:309|129:309|77:257,1,124.999998137355,2|8
332,72,134008,2,0,B|384:75|384:75|436:127,1,124.999998137355,2|8
80,160,134308,6,0,B|168:128|224:240|224:240|264:224|336:216,1,250,6|2
328,216,134683,1,0
368,208,134758,1,8
488,40,134908,1,0
472,72,134983,1,0
456,96,135058,1,0
296,312,135208,5,8
264,304,135283,1,8
240,296,135358,1,8
208,288,135433,1,0
176,280,135508,1,2
152,272,135583,1,2
128,264,135658,6,0,B|8:216,2,125
384,120,136108,2,0,B|504:168,2,125
256,48,136558,1,0
320,304,136708,2,0,B|256:320|256:320|196:300,1,125,6|0
88,272,137008,5,2
448,232,137158,2,0,B|376:240|324:196,1,125,8|2
192,88,137458,2,0,B|120:96|68:52,1,125,8|2
320,296,137758,2,0,B|392:288|444:332,1,125,8|2
88,272,138058,2,0,B|136:216|220:224,2,125
452,68,138508,2,0,B|420:72|420:72|364:28|364:28|312:28,1,124.999998137355,2|0
256,192,138808,5,2
168,296,138958,1,8
344,296,139108,1,6
48,72,139258,2,0,B|107:81|171:89,1,125,2|2
208,96,139483,1,2
248,104,139558,1,8
464,312,139708,2,0,B|404:302|340:294,1,125,2|2
256,192,140008,1,2
344,296,140158,1,8
168,296,140308,1,2
416,356,140458,6,0,B|344:388|292:332,1,124.999998137355,6|2
256,336,140683,1,2
211,340,140758,2,0,B|167:387|95:355,1,124.999998137355,12|2
256,288,141058,5,8
256,219,141133,1,8
256,150,141208,1,8
256,81,141283,1,8
256,12,141358,1,8
472,56,141508,22,0,B|428:113|361:96,2,124.999998137355
36,288,141958,2,0,B|88:344|164:340,2,124.999998137355
256,12,142408,1,0
256,344,142558,1,0
256,219,142708,6,0,B|256:176,15,31.25
256,192,143458,12,4,145258


Done!

sorry for delay~
Garven
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Garven
Sorry, delays, busy, low star priority, blah blah. q:

[Easy]
This has a leadin of 507 instead of 500 like other diffs.
00:01:258 (1) - This spinner feels really short and unnecessary for an Easy.
00:35:458 (1) - Pretty soon after a spinner for an Easy. This is a really fast BPM, so there needs be a lot of time afterward.
01:12:058 (1) - Way too soon after a spinner
01:39:058 (1) - Soon after spinner.
02:15:658 (1) - Yep
I think you went a little overboard on the spinner use. Also the blatant copy paste, but whatever. q:

[Normal]
00:02:458 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - With the low approach rate and fast slider speed, this section looks really really cluttered. Try spreading these patterns out a bit

[Taiko]
00:12:658 (2,1,2,3) - Why 1/6?
00:33:808 (1,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - ^ Going against the 1/4 rhythm here.
etc. I really don't like those 1/6 rhythms here. It sticks out against your otherwise fairly strong following of the percussion.
01:01:708 (4) - Compare the length of this to 02:05:308 (3) - this
Really nice to hear a taiko following the percussion primarily. Nice

[Hard]
01:11:158 (1,1,1) - I'm not really understanding the decrease in slider velocity here.
01:12:058 (1,2,3,1) - These are kind of awkward to play in that the point in which you click to start the slider feel on the wrong emphasis. You want to follow the emphasis' on the gomennnasai like what you did with 01:14:008 (3,5,7) - by leading the beat with a slider.
01:21:208 (2) - I think the speed difference here is a little drastic considering the preceding sliders (01:20:608 (4) - ) Maybe do a .75x speed here instead

[Insane]
01:21:208 (2) - The same speed change thing from Hard.
02:22:708 (1) - This flowed better ctrl + h and ctrl + .'d
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