Ok lets see.
[General]
All green timing sections that happen just before spinner ends should be at the spinner ends instead. Like they are currently, they interrupt the volume while you stil spin, and that sounds bad if you ask me.
[Easy]
A bit hard for a hard, but I guess the HP drain is lenient enough for less skilled people to atleast pass it. Just a commentary I guess.
[Ijou Ari]
At first I thought this was the easier diff of the two, but I don't think so, I find it a bit harder. It also yields more score.
That's about it! Forum PM me once you apply your changes please.
[General]
All green timing sections that happen just before spinner ends should be at the spinner ends instead. Like they are currently, they interrupt the volume while you stil spin, and that sounds bad if you ask me.
[Easy]
- Everything is unsnapped, you need to resnap correctly.
- AR+1, AR2 is too slow for the speed of the map.
- I am against tickrate 2 for easy diffs, it makes it sound too busy while the note spread is sparse, but it works i suppose, up to you.
- 01:21:835 (4) - Should remove the finish from here, it goes against the rhythm in the song and sounds bad.
- 01:38:549 (3) - Not fond of that finish at the end, but this one doesn't kill the rhythm atleast, up to you if you want to remove it or not.
- 02:18:978 (4) - Same thing here, this finish goes against the rhythm in the song. It would be much better if it was at, for example, 02:18:406 (3) instead.
- 02:35:692 (3) - Same has 01:38:549 in this mod.
- 03:15:559 - Make this timing section a soft hitsound, with the normal hitsound the end doesn't seem silenced. Actually this goes for all diffs where you want to silence the spinner ends, use a soft hitsound set for them, with normal they are still audible.
- Same hitsound comments about this diff just like in easy.
A bit hard for a hard, but I guess the HP drain is lenient enough for less skilled people to atleast pass it. Just a commentary I guess.
[Ijou Ari]
At first I thought this was the easier diff of the two, but I don't think so, I find it a bit harder. It also yields more score.
- 00:55:845 (1) - Eh, what is this? :p This looks and sounds bad. If you want to immitate the sound from the music, make a slider from 00:55:845 to 00:56:131 and maybe make it wiggly or something, or just have a circle. This slider is completely meaningless and awkward.
- 02:01:273 (2,3) - Whoa something went horribly wrong here!
- 02:10:845 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) - Whole diff is a bit overmapped, but this is just silly. You followed the music and the vocals pretty nicely and even added intensity with the SV changes, however you just mapped a random stream which doesn't fit at all and is a bit awkward to hit as the spacing from the previous object is quite huge. Maybe think of some slider jumps instead? Would be much better and enjoyable to play atleast.
- 02:41:273 (1,2) - Whoa something went horribly wrong here!
03:12:702 (4,5) - This spacing needs to be bigger. It's readable as it is now, but it's just awkward for no apparent reason, as the final note doesn't really make a positional pattern.
- 00:20:416 (3,4) - This spacing needs to be fixed. I know you had a 1/8 here, but I find this 1/4 to be much better btw, so I would like if you don't bring your 1/8 back (this goes for all of similar things), it plays a bit strange and the approach circles blend with each other so on occasion it's possible to only notice it as a one note instead of 2.
- 00:24:988 (5,6) - Same thing.
- 00:28:416 (2,3) - Why not put that finish on 3 instead of the 2? It sounds much better.
- 00:55:845 (7) - I always found this strange, why not extend it to 00:56:131 so it follows the music better? Would feel better too.
- 02:19:559 (1,2,1,2) - The spacing between each slider pair is a bit big and could be misread, you should change it so each pair has smaller spacing.
- 02:51:273 (3) - You need to reposition this slider a bit, either a bit up or down, like it is now, it's almost unnoticeable it's a slider because of the chain of hitbursts from a previous stream. You do see it, but I think it's a bit too late when you do. See this picture, I rotated the slider 3 by 10 degrees and slider 4 by -10 degrees, you still keep your pattern, but you avoid this problem, it also looks nice since it still connects with the upcoming notes 5, 6, etc.
- 03:04:988 (5,6) - Spacing!
- 03:08:131 (1,2,3,4,5) - This spacing is a bit extreme and too inconsistent. Try changing your pattern to this? I think it plays better like this and looks nicer too.
- 03:09:559 (5,6) - Spacing!
That's about it! Forum PM me once you apply your changes please.