12BARRY21 wrote:

下好音效了@w@
你看看吧:3

AIR315 wrote:

恩......
我覺得我還是自己下好了......
謝了:33

ertyukjh010 wrote:

在低潮期下花了1小時隨便做了Orz 做爛了不要罵我(逃 做的還不錯阿=w=

吐糟一下怎麼我覺得00:25:059 - 這部份更像Kiai www 恩......我也有點這麼覺得=3=

12BARRY21 wrote:

下好音效了@w@
你看看吧:3

AIR315 wrote:

恩......
我覺得我還是自己下好了......
謝了:33

明明都經常見面，直接說不就好嗎www XD

ertyukjh010 wrote:

我才不是甚麼神Mapper QAQ

wmfchris wrote:

._>

mjw5150 wrote:

XD

128,304,10290,6,0,B|192:340|268:344,1,144,8|0
220,253,11213,2,0,B|291:274|366:260,1,144,8|0

DarkDunskin wrote:

Hi, you asked me for a mod, here it is~

[ERT's Easy]
00:43:059 (1) - Remove finish from slider start, doesn't sound good imo.
00:49:520 (3) - Add finish on Slider End.
01:50:905 (4) - ^
02:05:213 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This part hasn't become as beautiful as the res of your diff. Make it either a symmetrical square or think of another pattern for these Circles.

[5150's Normal]
00:11:213 (2) - Rotate that slider by -13° with the "rotate by" Option so it fits better in the curve of the previous slider, then copy/paste it in exchange for (3) and Ctrl+h/j it to keep it symmetrical. Or use this Code for it:

128,304,10290,6,0,B|192:340|268:344,1,144,8|0
220,253,11213,2,0,B|291:274|366:260,1,144,8|0

01:31:059 (1) - minor spacing error.

[Escape]
Nothing bad here, just fine o.o
Good Hitsounding, well done~ Thanks~

[Wmf's Taiko]
Since I mapped a Taiko for the same Song its hard for me to imagine another Rhythm that works with it, but this actually works somehow~

General: OD - 1? I played your diff several times now and can't manage to get 95% ^^" Maybe its just a bad day.

Just a few Suggestions for finish notes here:
00:09:136 (36,37) - Remove Finish please?
00:09:828 (39) - Delete previous Note, add Finish on this one?
00:39:367 (176) - ^
00:50:444 (230) - ^
01:03:367 (294) - ^
01:25:520 (407) - ^
01:40:290 (476) - ^
01:51:367 (527) - Remove Whistle and add fFinish?
02:04:290 (594) - Delete previous Note, add Finish on this one?
02:11:674 (634) - ^

All in all this map is quite nice~
I hope I could help somehow, good luck! Thanks~

Bobo wrote:

Hiiiii, in-game mod request.

[Escape]

00:07:982 (3) - Try this http://puu.sh/pRuS Hum......
00:09:597 (1,2) - I would just stack with (3).
00:31:751 (7) - Stack on (1)
00:31:867 - Add a note, stack with (7,1) :33
00:35:905 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Try to avoid NC spamming like that. I think it's not bad :33
00:50:444 (1) - Delete NC
01:02:905 (2) - Move it out from underneath (1)
01:36:828 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Try to avoid NC spamming like that. Perhaps 3 triplets per combo? :33
02:22:751 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Again with the NC spamming ;~; lol

[Normal]

00:22:751 (3) - Clap on all slider points :3
00:26:674 (2,3) - Clap on start points.
00:39:136 - Add a note here, position (3,4,5,6) so they flow towards (1) http://puu.sh/pRza
00:40:520 (2,3) - May have to reposition these
00:45:597 (4,5) - Clap on startpoints.
00:56:674 (4,5) - ^
01:45:828 (3) - Clap on all slider points.
01:52:290 (2) - Make it the same as (1), flows better.
01:54:136 (4) - ^

[Easy]

00:29:213 - Clap
00:34:059 - ^
02:18:367 - ^


Normal could use a lot of work

7odoa wrote:

[General]
ComboColour2和3的色彩太相近了... lol......我覺得還好><

[ERT's Easy]
00:22:751 (1) - 刪NC
02:17:213 (1) - 刪NC

[5150's Normal]
HP-1
01:03:367 (6) - finish
01:03:367 - 把這綠線後移至01:03:482,不然01:03:367 (6) - 的聲量會太細...

[Wmf's Taiko]
雖然沒大事,但建議Circle Size設定到5.
可以set OD=5嗎? 我HR S不起來 T.T
01:25:520 ~ 01:27:367 -為何容昜起來了?這部分應比01:10:751 ~ 01:25:520 難一些才對吧~

[Escape]
HP-1 我也覺得HP調8有點高......可是為了多一點分數也只能調8了lol
00:36:367 (1,1) - 刪NC,1Combo出現NC感到太短... 我覺得現在這樣還不錯阿XD
00:37:751 (1,1) - ^ ^
01:03:367 - 把這綠線後移至01:03:482,不然01:03:367 (3) - 的聲量會太細... Done
01:25:059 (4) - 用1/4 我覺得這裡用1/8感覺不錯:33
02:03:367 (9) - 加NC
02:23:213 (1,1,1) - 刪NC
02:25:059 (1,1,1) - 刪NC
02:24:597 (1,1,1,1) - 試試這樣? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/293006 :33

Nice song & Map~
沒有甚麼問題了,Star&Good luck!~ 謝謝了~

Thite wrote:

ERT's Easy
00:33:828 (3) - how about put like this? looks better for me~

SPOILER

01:24:597 (4,5,1) - these stacks are bit hard for beginner?


5150's Normal
00:02:444 (1) - add finish this slider's top
00:17:213 (1) - add finish?
00:25:059 (2) - add new combo here like 01:25:982 (1)
01:10:751 (1) - ^
01:30:828 (4,1) - spacing is bit weird
02:01:059 (5) - move this note to x128 y156, looks better for me
02:01:059 (5) - how about add finish this slider's top?


Escape
00:35:674 (7) - add new combo here?
01:36:597 (6) - ^
have nothing to say to this diff >.<

good map~ Thanks~

DarknessAngel wrote:

ERT's Easy

1. ERT的神拉條出現啦，第一個滑條出現我就跪了 DNA您又誇獎我QAQ (話說第1個滑條只是普通的5點弧形
2. 對於這難度我只有一點要說，太多1/1節奏啦，Easy其實是最容易讓「擅長拉條的製圖者」發揮的難度說， 關於這點我近來也在後慮，是不是該改變做法；一直以來我是以滿滿的1/1作為基礎，但是近來有人說這種對新人是很困難，只是我沒有發覺(說原因是我太觸QAQ)；近來我會後慮大幅度改變做EZ的方法....前提是騙夠300KD QAQ
   我還在期待你能做出一些新奇的造型來，還我期待啊啊啊啊啊Dx 哪裡有甚麼新奇QAQ 話說Dx看起來是不開心吧www
3. 什麼都沒找到於是多幾個評論來充當MOD內容還挺好用

[/notice]

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from in-game

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Escape

1. 00:08:905 (5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡的音樂有變小的趨勢，我覺得把這5個clap的音量調到60%比較合適 我再考慮看看:33
2. 00:41:213 (1) - 這頭上的clap很不好聽啊，我是認為whistle替代還不錯但你沒用到whis所以就算了 lol
3. 00:43:290 (2) - 這種2連的，把clap放在藍線上就顯得很違和，刪掉它會舒服許多的 我覺得聽起來感覺還不錯阿
4. 00:44:213 (7) - ^ ^
5. 00:45:136 (1) - ^ ^
6. 00:49:751 (2) - 這clap一聽就知道是多出來的orz 刻意放在那個位置的0.0
7. 00:50:444 - 同樣的Part我就不多說囉，按照前面的改會好聽很多的
8. 01:23:674 (1,2,3) - 長條中的箭頭還有(3)的clap刪掉試試看，我了解你想用clap做強調效果但是用太多會導致吵雜，也造成原本要的強調效果分散
9. 01:28:520 (6) - 如果想在clap上作文章的話，在這note上加個，從01:25:982開始聽聽看 恩,還不錯......我再想想吧:33
10. 01:32:213 (4,5) - 這之間的跳比你之前用的都還大的多，何況這又是4連的折返slider，讓人不好反應的情況下距離又太大實在不好，試試看連同01:31:982 (3)一起調整成這樣，不影響flow和對稱，也減低了點spacing 再考慮看看:33
11. 01:42:136 - 這part之中有3連的音效是clap,clap,none，怎麼聽都是很奇怪的，刪掉中間的比較好 會嗎lol
12. 01:50:674 (2) - 這clap和01:49:982 (2)不一樣，是處在不同顏色的線上啊...刪掉它
13. 這排列很好，你對間距的控制變精準了。這難度只要音效再注意點就非常好囉 ~ :3 嗯嗯><

5150's Normal

1. 00:08:905 (5,6,7,1,2) - 這裡的音樂有變小的趨勢，我覺得把這4個clap的音量調到60%比較合適
2. 我根本找不出啥來啊orz

ERT's Easy

1. ERT的神拉條出現啦，第一個滑條出現我就跪了
2. 對於這難度我只有一點要說，太多1/1節奏啦，Easy其實是最容易讓「擅長拉條的製圖者」發揮的難度說，我還在期待你能做出一些新奇的造型來，還我期待啊啊啊啊啊Dx
3. 什麼都沒找到於是多幾個評論來充當MOD內容還挺好用

好圖 ~
還你之前love story的星ww(我射星無節操的毛病又犯啦orz) XD
good luck ~ 謝了~

AIR315 wrote:

DarknessAngel wrote:

AIR315 wrote:

幾乎都沒改啊，枉費我這麼用心mod
說真的，那段真的很難聽
雖說改不改是由你決定，但到底還是不想讓這種音效出現在ranked譜裡啊...

nicktoons wrote:

More sonic maps! MOAR!!!
P.S. love it. [Escape] is just great, here's a star.
P.P.S. I haven't played resently, so i wonder: why there are no usuall stars? only kudosu ones?

1. fine

1. fine to me

1. 00:19:059 (1) - remove NC. Judging from overall balance, I thought that there did not need to be this NC
2. 00:23:674 (4,1) - spacing too far. Is this intentional? this was only this place,I was worried about it o.o
3. 00:27:136 (3) - add clap to start of the slider. ( 00:26:674 (2) - Because they put you clap to start and end, I thought as a little lonely sound and EDIT: why only here is double clap o.o? If you put a double clap here, i think would be better put to the same place, such as)　ex:00:33:828 (1,2,3),01:27:367 (3,4),01:34:982 (1,2,3)
4. 01:03:367 (6) - add finish ?
5. 01:23:674 (4) - remove clap to repeat of the slider. In the same way as 00:22:751 (3), I prefer not put a clap　
6. 01:27:367 (3) - add NC ?
7. 02:13:520 (5) - add NC ( same as 02:17:213 (1) )

1. 00:07:982 (3) - add NC. Change of rhythm was hard to understand to me.
2. 00:35:674 (7) - Suggestion of form and the flow: http://puu.sh/qSK5 I prefer it better this way flow( about x216,y188)

kosiga wrote:

Hi~ AIR315~ Hello~

thank you for the request~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. fine

[ERT's Easy]

1. fine to me

[5150's Normal]

1. 00:19:059 (1) - remove NC. Judging from overall balance, I thought that there did not need to be this NC
2. 00:23:674 (4,1) - spacing too far. Is this intentional? this was only this place,I was worried about it o.o
3. 00:27:136 (3) - add clap to start of the slider. ( 00:26:674 (2) - Because they put you clap to start and end, I thought as a little lonely sound and EDIT: why only here is double clap o.o? If you put a double clap here, i think would be better put to the same place, such as)　ex:00:33:828 (1,2,3),01:27:367 (3,4),01:34:982 (1,2,3)
4. 01:03:367 (6) - add finish ?
5. 01:23:674 (4) - remove clap to repeat of the slider. In the same way as 00:22:751 (3), I prefer not put a clap　
6. 01:27:367 (3) - add NC ?
7. 02:13:520 (5) - add NC ( same as 02:17:213 (1) )

[Escape]

1. 00:07:982 (3) - add NC. Change of rhythm was hard to understand to me.
2. 00:35:674 (7) - Suggestion of form and the flow: http://puu.sh/qSK5 I prefer it better this way flow( about x216,y188)

There is no problem in the rhythm This is all that I thought. If you do not want to change Please do not throw the kudosu

Good map~ Star☆~ Thanks~

Good luck~ Thanks~

Kenezz wrote:

[5150's Normal]
01:27:367 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, now the before combo is too short compared with the others in this part.

Kenezz wrote:

Hi Hello~
Kenezz's Bakamod~

[ERT's Easy]
02:26:559 (1) - Move this spinner 1/4 to forward and reduce by 1/4, now are too close of the before slider, this change is too recommendable because if the spinner appear too soon and could be are confusing to the rookie players.

[5150's Normal]
01:27:367 (1) - Maybe remove the new combo, now the before combo is too short compared with the others in this part.

[Wmf's Taiko]
-Disabled the letterbox during breaks here. Done

[Escape]
-For me te diff don't presents any problem, just I see many shorts combos when not is necesary, but well imo not is a big problem, btw great diff. Thanks~

Okay, that's all, I hope to helps you.
Good Luck. Thanks ><

Kenezz wrote:

Sorry for the delay ></ It's OK >3<
Re-check time~

[Escape]
-The end of the first kiai time is different compared with the others diffs (here end up at the blue tick), fix it please. Done

Fix this and pokes me~ OK :33

1. According to a few sources (from a quick Google search), the artist is not spelled correctly. "Harnel" is written with two "l"s, so it would be "Harnell".
   (You might want to fix that Taiko bg too!)
2. I believe that the offset is a little late. Try giving it -10ms. Sounds more on-spot to me!
   And remember to resnap everything!

1. Well, my main complaint about this one is that EVERYTHING is one beat appart. Even though that might be as easy as it should be, it can get pretty monotonous. So for next time, my advice is to try to variate the distance (in time) between objects - of course, as long as that follows the music!