[Easy]

00:54:48 (1,2,3,4) - Beats number 2, 3 and 4 should a bit farther from beat 1 and closer to each other (Using distance snap will help you a lot here)
00:58:28 (2) - This beat should be a bit higher.
01:35:03 (1,2,3,4,5) - Each beat should be closer to each other.
02:18:72 (3,4,5,6) - Compared to other beats in the combo, these are too close to each other (quite dumb if the other beats have the same timing as these)

[Normal]

00:31:91 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - I sincerely think these should be just one combo.
01:33:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is the sword figure different from the one you've been using? You should place beats 4 and 5 back to the original spot.

[Hard]

00:39:91 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - Again, I would put this in one combo.


Other than that, all nice. I love hard despite it's chaotic layout. It's fun ^^
Star for 'ya

Hoplite wrote:

[Easy]

00:54:48 (1,2,3,4) - Beats number 2, 3 and 4 should a bit farther from beat 1 and closer to each other (Using distance snap will help you a lot here)
00:58:28 (2) - This beat should be a bit higher.
01:35:03 (1,2,3,4,5) - Each beat should be closer to each other.
02:18:72 (3,4,5,6) - Compared to other beats in the combo, these are too close to each other (quite dumb if the other beats have the same timing as these)

[Normal]

00:31:91 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - I sincerely think these should be just one combo.
01:33:74 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is the sword figure different from the one you've been using? You should place beats 4 and 5 back to the original spot.

[Hard]

00:39:91 (1,2,3,1,1,1,1) - Again, I would put this in one combo.


Other than that, all nice. I love hard despite it's chaotic layout. It's fun ^^
Star for 'ya

Thank you very much, I'm gonna change it a bit later, I need to study for Geography
Youv' got a Kudo! ^^

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I consider this map sweet because it is well made and for this I put a star ^^ tha's all

Mukku wrote:

[00:43:081] (1,2) This jump is huge.. Are you sure you want it to be there?

Lol, well I can make it easly, I'm not gonna change it xD, but good idea though, 'cause it looks like it's impossible, but it's hard difficulty... Hard difficulty is suposse to be hard

animask wrote:

[Normal]
01:23:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing isn't right
01:33:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - Check spacing again...

[Easy]
I just noticed...you're not using grid snap in this...I think
resnap everything with grid snap

[Hard]
Grid Snap this too

Grid Snap everything first D=
....nice song choice though

Ok, I'll grid snap everything I see that needs to be changed. Thank you!

Stick Kill Bill in the source.
Maybe lower hitsounds.

Easyyyyy
Oh god I just realised something - a lot of this isn't grid snapped. >_<
00:21:54 (1) - Clap
00:22:81 (3) - ^
00:24:07 (5) - ^
00:27:87 (2) - ^
00:29:14 (4) - Finish
00:31:67 (1) - Down 1 grid, looks nasty
00:43:71 (3) - Finish
00:46:24 (1) - Remove whistle, sounds bad
00:53:21 (1) - Space this evenly please
00:53:84 (3) - Finish

You know what, there's something about this that just puts me off modding it at all. I wonder why all these people starred it?
The notes aren't grid snapped, it isn't spaced, and so much of it so... ugh I dunno how to describe it. Look at ranked maps in editor to work out the kind of stuff you're doing wrong.

Agent Spin Here wrote:

Stick Kill Bill in the source.
Maybe lower hitsounds.

Easyyyyy
Oh god I just realised something - a lot of this isn't grid snapped. >_<
00:21:54 (1) - Clap
00:22:81 (3) - ^
00:24:07 (5) - ^
00:27:87 (2) - ^
00:29:14 (4) - Finish
00:31:67 (1) - Down 1 grid, looks nasty
00:43:71 (3) - Finish
00:46:24 (1) - Remove whistle, sounds bad
00:53:21 (1) - Space this evenly please
00:53:84 (3) - Finish

You know what, there's something about this that just puts me off modding it at all. I wonder why all these people starred it?
The notes aren't grid snapped, it isn't spaced, and so much of it so... ugh I dunno how to describe it. Look at ranked maps in editor to work out the kind of stuff you're doing wrong.

... Ok, I haven't used a lot the grid snap, but you said in chat you can't hit the notes with any accuracy, I can make 100% and make an S, my brother, and others, so not using any grid snap doesn't mean you have 0 accuracy .... I'll GRID SNAP EVERYTHING -.-''

I'm here for the 2nd sight!

Normal
[00:21:540] (1, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) finish on 6th, 7th and 8th; clap the others
[00:26:610] (2, 3, 4, 5, 6) clap on 2nd and 6th; finish the others
[00:30:010] (Slider, 1, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) finish 6th, 7th, 8th and the slider; clap the others (I'm VEEERY original, I know...)
[00:36:740] (2, 4, 5, 6) clap on 2nd and 4th, whistle on... you know...
[00:41:180] Here, there is a lot to say... whistle all the sliders from here until the break, clap the 1st and the 5th red beat of both the red series until the break, finish on the 2 brown beats between brown sliders and end the 2nd brown slider of both series with a finish (whew...)
[00:48:780] (3) anticipate this slider here (same lenght!)
[00:58:910] (3) same thing...
[01:10:630] (1, 2, 3) whistle these beats (whiste + finish for the 3rd) and make them further from each other
[01:16:650] (Slider) start it her and end it on 01:21:100
[01:21:710] like upper, whistle ALL the sliders until 01:41:500 ( end the 2nd green sliders with a clap)
[01:24:880] (1, 5) finish or whistle here (do the same with the next brown series!)
[01:26:780] (1) end this slider on 01:28:070
[01:28:680] (2) clap here (and the next 2nd green beat)
[01:29:310] (3) start this one here (same lenght!)
[01:39:450] (3) ... like upper!
[01:41:980] (1) ... like upper (again...)
[01:45:780] (1, 2, 3) whistle the slider, clap the beats!
[01:55:920] (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) finish the 3rd, clap the 4th and the 5th, whistle the others
[01:59:880] (1, 1, 1, 1) whistle here (and make them further each others)
[02:13:020] (2, 4, 2, 6) finish here

Another mod is done!
I'll mod hard later; other mappers need my help! (or, at least, I hope so...)

Lokamp wrote:

I'm here for the 2nd sight!

Normal
[00:21:540] (1, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) finish on 6th, 7th and 8th; clap the others
[00:26:610] (2, 3, 4, 5, 6) clap on 2nd and 6th; finish the others
[00:30:010] (Slider, 1, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9) finish 6th, 7th, 8th and the slider; clap the others (I'm VEEERY original, I know...)
[00:36:740] (2, 4, 5, 6) clap on 2nd and 4th, whistle on... you know...
[00:41:180] Here, there is a lot to say... whistle all the sliders from here until the break, clap the 1st and the 5th red beat of both the red series until the break, finish on the 2 brown beats between brown sliders and end the 2nd brown slider of both series with a finish (whew...)
[00:48:780] (3) anticipate this slider here (same lenght!)
[00:58:910] (3) same thing...
[01:10:630] (1, 2, 3) whistle these beats (whiste + finish for the 3rd) and make them further from each other
[01:16:650] (Slider) start it her and end it on 01:21:100
[01:21:710] like upper, whistle ALL the sliders until 01:41:500 ( end the 2nd green sliders with a clap)
[01:24:880] (1, 5) finish or whistle here (do the same with the next brown series!)
[01:26:780] (1) end this slider on 01:28:070
[01:28:680] (2) clap here (and the next 2nd green beat)
[01:29:310] (3) start this one here (same lenght!)
[01:39:450] (3) ... like upper!
[01:41:980] (1) ... like upper (again...)
[01:45:780] (1, 2, 3) whistle the slider, clap the beats!
[01:55:920] (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) finish the 3rd, clap the 4th and the 5th, whistle the others
[01:59:880] (1, 1, 1, 1) whistle here (and make them further each others)
[02:13:020] (2, 4, 2, 6) finish here

Another mod is done!
I'll mod hard later; other mappers need my help! (or, at least, I hope so...)

Changed!

[easy]
fix the spacing through the whole map. It's very inconsistent. Use distance snap to keep it consistent . Make sure to use a level 3 grid.
01:46:74 - reinsert break

[normal]
fix the spacing through the whole map. It's very inconsistent. Make sure to use a level 3 grid.
00:30:01 (1) - start it at the red tick at 00:30:09
00:35:00 (7,8) - off-grid
01:24:09 (4) - remove this note
01:34:22 (4) - remove this note

[hard]
again make sure the spacing is consistent so go through the whole map again and respace. Stuff like 00:25:66 (6,1) and 00:26:93 (4,5,6,7) is not allowed.

Other than the spacing i found no issues.

starred

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vytalibus wrote:

(As of this time, I saw that you haven't done mrtn's modding. I suggest you do. I won't repeat what he had already said.)

Put "Kill Bill" in your Sources tab.
I like the idea of storyboarding this song, and you have a good concept. I suggest you continue by adding more storyboard elements.
I see two OSB files named differently. Delete the one named "Kill Bill - Battle Without Honor or Humanity (SacroiD)".
Make the "vsmedioskillbillanimereal" SB element smaller. It looks stretched out, which makes it ugly to look at.
Clean up your breaks. Delete them, then reinsert them back. You'll see that they'll have different durations when you do. Everytime someone makes you change your timing and/or your overall difficulty, I suggest you recheck your breaks.

[Easy]
01:41:35 (1) - Very dangerously near.

[Normal]
00:40:38 (1,1,1,1) - I don't see the point of putting new combo marks on this part.
00:48:78 (3) - End this on the white tick.
00:58:91 (3) - ^
01:16:65 (1) - ^
01:29:24 (3) - Move to the white tick.
01:39:45 (3) - Same as 00:48:78.

[Hard]
00:43:08 (1,2,3,4,5) - I should discourage you from making confusing and erratic jumps like the ones on this pattern, unless you know what you're doing.
00:53:21 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:17:52 (1) - Put the end back until it snaps with the white tick.
01:23:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:43:08.
01:33:75 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^, though this would just need some minor clean-up.
01:36:92 (1) - End this on the white tick before.

I haven't made mrtn's changes 'cause it was too late (12:30 a.m) xD, I'll make them now, and your's.

[OverAll]
ReSpace all the song. you have too many different spacing in your map. make sure you're not changing Distance snap value while mapping, and don't use a Hige grid.

I'll mod only timing because i can't mod your spacing/alignment.

[Normal]
01:29:24 (3) - put on white tick


[Hard]
02:16:34 (2,3) - sounds weird but is OK


RE SPACE THIS SHIT. that will be my last word.
re space and you'll have my star.

Sushi971 wrote:

[OverAll]
ReSpace all the song. you have too many different spacing in your map. make sure you're not changing Distance snap value while mapping, and don't use a Hige grid.

I'll mod only timing because i can't mod your spacing/alignment.

[Normal]
01:29:24 (3) - put on white tick


[Hard]
02:16:34 (2,3) - sounds weird but is OK


RE SPACE THIS SHIT. that will be my last word.
re space and you'll have my star.

I don't understand, I DS'd everything and still spacing Issues?, omg... Oh and thanks for calling my map "Shit".

Using lvl 3 grid much better eh?

[Easy]
00:20:91 (3) - 2 grids down and one grid left (don't forget to respace after that)
00:25:34 (7,8) - align
00:28:51 (3,4) - align
00:30:01 (1) - start on red tick
00:36:74 (2) - stack under previous (5)
00:38:01 (6) - ugly, make (6) stack under previous (3)
00:44:34 (1,2) - align?
00:53:84 (3,1) - align?
00:58:28 (2) - minor spacing
01:16:80 (1) - starts on white tick
01:21:71 (1,1) - align
01:25:51 (2,4) - align
01:26:78 (1,2,1) - i don't like this overlap.
01:31:85 (1,1,2,3) - make this become a line
01:36:91 (1,1) - ugly
01:56:23 (2,3) - spacing
01:59:88 (1,1,1,1) - make these symetric (for perfect symetry, do not use Grid snap, or don't use DS)
02:13:65 (3,4) - align
02:16:19 (3,4,1) - align
02:18:72 (3,4) - align
02:21:02 (1) - wtf with that timing????

[Normal]
00:19:96 (1,2,3) - spacing. (you weren't using grid snap?)
00:20:91 (3,1) - align
00:23:44 (4,5) - OMG stack these!
00:25:98 (1,2,3) - make (3) at the middle of (1,2)
00:25:98 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - unconstant spacing
00:34:21 (5,6) - align
00:41:18 (1) - too close imo
00:44:34 (1,2,3,4,5) - spacing
01:26:15 (5,1) - blargh@overlap. make (1) symetric
01:29:24 (3) - bad timing. make start on white tick
01:36:92 (1,2,3) - spacing
02:14:92 (1) - stack under previous (1)
02:14:92 (1,2) - align
02:16:82 (6,1) - align
02:18:72 (3,4,5) - symetry
02:20:78 (1) - bad timing. again.

[Hard]
00:25:03 (4,5) - align
00:29:14 (4) - stack under previous (4,5)
00:30:01 (1) - bad timing
00:38:01 (3,4,5) - symetry
00:43:08 (1,2,3,4,5) - don't like this pattern.
00:44:19 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - spacing
00:46:24 (1,1) - don't like overlap
00:53:21 (1,2,3,4,5) - pattern.
00:56:38 (1,1) - overlap.
00:58:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing?
01:13:48 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - this part sounds really weird imo
01:17:52 (1) - bad timing
01:40:88 (7,8) - symetry
01:43:25 (4,5) - align?
01:52:59 (2,3) - align or unalign more.
02:02:25 (1,2,1,2) - Meh! spacing
02:16:66 (3,4,5,6,8) - align?
02:19:04 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - new combos? why?

Now you can have my star.

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[Overall]

-Fix the blood sprite. Those black lines make it ugly and unprofessional.

[Easy]

00:21:54 (1) - Spacing issue. Too close to (3)
00:39:28 (6) - Finish sounds awful here. Make it a clap.
00:50:68 (2) - Clap here
00:51:31 (1) - Be consistent with your pattern, whistle this.
01:21:71 (1) - ^
01:31:22 (2) - Clap would be nice.

[Normal]

00:21:54 (1) - Spacing issue. Too close to (3)
00:58:28 (2) - Clapity clap

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