DarknessAngel wrote:

request from ★(oﾟ∀`从'∀ﾟo)★-Gamu- and D.N.Angel's Modding Queue ~
sorry,I'm 10 days late lol


[notice]Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Kitsneko

1. 01:03:358 (1) - I think ctrl + R will be better,because it need more spacing between [01:02:843 (3)] & [01:03:358 (1)]　no change T_T
2. awesome diff ~ <3

Ryafuka

1. 01:15:529 (2,4,2,4,6) - I think remove those whistle will be brtter imo sorry,no change T_T
2. 01:38:672 (4,5,6) - please make their spacing larger,it will have players confuse(look at [01:29:758 (3,4,5)]) ^
3. I don't like some of spacing in this diff :O

Wang Yuanji

1. fine

General is good,but I hope you can consider to fix some of spacing like this hmm..thanks suggestion,but I won't change these..
nice song & pretty mapset
S.T.A.R ! !
good luck ~



p.s : Don't give me kudosu

-General-

-Kitsuneko-

kurohana wrote:

01:54:786 (4) - new combo? add NC to 01:54:615 (3) instead it

KingsAL2 wrote:

Randomly pick. (Just want to improve my forgot modding skill.)

By AL2 modding queue
==General==

==Ryafuka==
-- Combo Problem --
02:02:329 (4) - new combo (For new spacing) ok~
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
02:08:158 (3,1) - Quite hate this simi-jump ok~ I made stack here!
-- Other(S) --

==OVERALL==
LIKE : //
UNLIKE : (Quite strange from some of the spacing.)

KingsAL2 wrote:

==Kitsuneko==
-- Combo Problem --
02:34:215 (1) - REmove it then new combo for 02:34:386 (2) fixed
-- Sound --
-- Spacing --
00:30:429 (1,2) - Wondering if 1 and 2's spacing is x1.0 but why 2,3,4,5 is x1.3? fixed
-- Other(S) --
01:09:872 (1,2,4) - A bit confuse others. Can you change the position of 2 and 4. Then that would be better. keep sorry

LunarSakuya wrote:

Kitsuneko
01:08:329 (1) - style suggestion http://puu.sh/nWl8 keep
02:10:044 (3) - Add finish added
03:17:244 (4) - ^ added. also 01:02:843 (3) is same rhythm.added Finish here.

LunarSakuya wrote:

hello ^^

Ryafuka
00:27:237 (1) - Add finish no~
02:14:329 (2) - Ctrl + R ok~
02:27:529 - Add note? no~
02:45:186 (2,3) - Could make a slider ^
03:36:272 (1,2,3,4) - Try a back and forth pattern: http://puu.sh/nWim ok~

Good luck!! Hanatan <3 <3

Leorda wrote:

Hey

[Ryafuka]
00:58:558 (1,2,3) - Spread this stacks, because some players are hard to read because they expecting that this stack is 1/2 click. Just suggestion, though no change T_T
01:54:101 (1) - That pauses are confusing, unstack it?　^
03:25:986 (6) - Add 1 repeating slider? ok~

Byeeeee

lililia wrote:

Awesome song and map. Star~



Ranked待ってます(｀・ω・´)ゞ

1. Song Setup - tags - 鏡音リン入れてるなら「vocaloid」も入れたほうが良いかと
2. KIAI TIME - 2nd KIAI TIME end(02:49:986) - これの前のスピナーですが、全diff vocalに合わせているようなのでスピナーendを統一してはどうですか？ patcheさんのだけ02:49:644ですが、vocal合わせならこれが正しいかと。 合わせてKIAI endも02:49:644に。

1. 00:50:586 - 不要な緑線
2. 01:19:386 - 音量大きすぎな気がします。 前の音量+10%くらいの方が良いかと。もしくは1,2,3のnote 70⇒80⇒90とか。
3. 01:34:386 - 不要な緑線
4. 01:35:929 (1) - endを01:36:958まで持ってきた方がプレイしやすいと思いました。
5. 03:09:015 (2,1) - ここのDSは0.9xの方が良いかと。 合わせて 03:10:215 (1) - remove NC
6. 03:11:244 (2) - finish置いてないのはわざと？
7. 03:24:529 - 不要な緑線

1. 01:03:872 (3) - why use 1/6rhythm ? i think that it is correct in 1/4 (Leorda has already said ><)
   
2. 01:04:986 - Unnecessary green line
3. 02:37:301 (3) - add NC ( same as 01:30:101 (1) , 03:56:844 (1) )

1. 00:21:493 (4) - noteが00:21:812の方が私はしっくりきます
2. 00:29:791 - normal-hitsoundに変えてるので音量少し大きい気がしました。30%くらいで良いのでは？ あとここだけNormalに変えてるのに少し違和感あったので00:31:706もNormalにしてみては？
3. 01:00:101 (7) - add NC and 01:00:615 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:26:329 (2,3,4,5,6) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/ovb2
5. 02:33:529 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^
6. 02:46:301 - 不要な緑線
7. 03:39:015 (1) - 03:38:844 (5) ここでもう次の歌詞始まってしまっているので、スピナーstartを03:39:358に下げ、03:39:015,03:39:186にnote置いた方がいいんじゃないかと思いました。
8. 03:41:501 (1) - スピナーの終わり方が中途半端な気が >< 03:43:129 (1,2) - これを消して、スピナーendを 03:43:129にしてみてはどうですか？

1. 00:47:244 - 不要な緑線
2. 03:53:929 - ^
3. 03:53:929 (2) - サークル03:53:929のみに。 今のスライダーでいくなら03:54:272にサークル置いても良い気がしました。

kosiga wrote:

Ryafukaさん こんにちは～ こんにちは！

from m4m queue ~

here my mod ~

[General]

1. Song Setup - tags - 鏡音リン入れてるなら「vocaloid」も入れたほうが良いかと
2. KIAI TIME - 2nd KIAI TIME end(02:49:986) - これの前のスピナーですが、全diff vocalに合わせているようなのでスピナーendを統一してはどうですか？ patcheさんのだけ02:49:644ですが、vocal合わせならこれが正しいかと。 合わせてKIAI endも02:49:644に。 changed

[Ryafuka]

1. 00:21:493 (4) - noteが00:21:812の方が私はしっくりきます
2. 00:29:791 - normal-hitsoundに変えてるので音量少し大きい気がしました。30%くらいで良いのでは？ あとここだけNormalに変えてるのに少し違和感あったので00:31:706もNormalにしてみては？
3. 01:00:101 (7) - add NC and 01:00:615 (1) - remove NC
4. 01:26:329 (2,3,4,5,6) - リズムの提案: http://puu.sh/ovb2　no~ T_T
5. 02:33:529 (2,3,4,5,6) - ^ ^
6. 02:46:301 - 不要な緑線
7. 03:39:015 (1) - 03:38:844 (5) ここでもう次の歌詞始まってしまっているので、スピナーstartを03:39:358に下げ、03:39:015,03:39:186にnote置いた方がいいんじゃないかと思いました。
8. 03:41:501 (1) - スピナーの終わり方が中途半端な気が >< 03:43:129 (1,2) - これを消して、スピナーendを 03:43:129にしてみてはどうですか？
   二つ以外変えました！

Good map ~ star☆~

頑張ってください～

Patche and Wang Yuanji's diff almost fixed

kosiga wrote:

[Kitsuneko]

1. 00:47:244 - 不要な緑線 deleted
2. 03:53:929 - ^ deleted
3. 03:53:929 (2) - サークル03:53:929のみに。 今のスライダーでいくなら03:54:272にサークル置いても良い気がしました。 んーkeepで

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Wang Yuanji]

01:03:358 (1,2,1) - This is pretty confusing.
02:03:015 (6) - New combo.
02:03:358 (1) - Remove new combo.
all fixed.

[Ryafuka]

01:34:215 (7,1) - Sounds pretty weird. ok~

That's it, I guess!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks good.

Bubbled~

Dangaard wrote:

the timing of the 2nd and 3rd offset is too late, move the 2nd to 00:41:749 and the 3rd to 00:42:434
both -10ms in effect

Dangaard wrote:

rebubbled

Shiirn wrote:

fixed a slider or two in ryufuka's diff

good enough i suppose