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May'n - Chase the world (TV Size)

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Topic Starter
Ryafuka
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年5月26日 at 23:59:30

Artist: May'n
Title: Chase the world (TV Size)
Source: Accel World
Tags: opening climbb65588
BPM: 170
Filesize: 11831kb
Play Time: 01:26
Difficulties Available:
  1. Black Lotus (5 stars, 306 notes)
  2. Climbb's Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 560 notes)
  3. Cyan Pile (3.86 stars, 122 notes)
  4. Lime Bell (2.67 stars, 95 notes)
  5. Silver Crow (4.97 stars, 213 notes)
Download: May'n - Chase the world (TV Size)
Download: May'n - Chase the world (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#7th

もっと高く もっと強く


Mapset
- [Lime Bell]
- [Cyan Pilel]
- [Silver Crow]
- [Black Lotus]
- climbb's Taiko Oni by climbb65588
AoiX
:D may I make a GD?
and you can try this if you want
アクセル·ワールド OP[2012.4.7] MF|HF
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

AoiX wrote:

:D may I make a GD?
and you can try this if you want
アクセル·ワールド OP[2012.4.7] MF|HF
sorry, I don't need GD :(
thanks, but already has video this beatmap :D
Amule
fightin~
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

Amule wrote:

fightin~
thanks :D
xsrsbsns
:)
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

xsrsbsns wrote:

:)
;)
climbb65588
Does this map need a taiko diff ...?

I just want to map a taiko diff for this /.w.\
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

climbb65588 wrote:

Does this map need a taiko diff ...?

I just want to map a taiko diff for this /.w.\
If you find taiko modder by yourself,I gladly accept it :)
Of course,I can also find taiko modder with you ;)

How much time do it take for mapping? 8-)
climbb65588
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

climbb65588 wrote:

Taiko diff is done!
thanks~ :D
Topic Starter
Ryafuka
finished making~
Kitsuneko
nante tenuki mod da kore...
no kd de iiyo

[General]
00:00:384に赤線立てたほうが綺麗ね
00:00:384の赤線で音をSoftにして00:01:795に緑線でNormalに切り替え
あとさすがにTVSizeなのに3.60で最低難易度は通らないんじゃないかな…

[Scarlet Rain]
00:01:266 - 00:01:443までのスライダー置いてもいいのでは 始まる位置が他のDiffと違う

[Silver Crow]
00:01:795 (3,1) - 距離が近い 00:02:678 (1,2) - を調整
01:07:442 - ここ音要ると思う 01:07:442 に単発、01:07:619 - 01:07:795のスライダーの組み合わせとか

[Black Lotus]
01:25:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - ラスト置き方かえて(5)を中央に持ってこれたりするけれどどうでしょう http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288483
IRC Log
07:45 <Kitsuneko> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287550
07:45 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
07:45 <Kitsuneko> : ここなんだけど
07:46 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:266 (5,7) - もちょっと動かしてる
07:46 <Ryafuka> : 5ga
07:46 <Ryafuka> : nc?
07:46 <Kitsuneko> : その通り
07:49 <Ryafuka> : 五角形が
07:49 <Kitsuneko> : この形にするなら00:31:443 (6) - こっちにNCか
07:49 <Ryafuka> : きれいにならないいい
07:49 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:266 (5,7) -  X152 248
07:49 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:148 (2) - X320 Y260
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:325 (3) - X296 Y160
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:501 (4) - X188 Y144
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:678 (1) - X72 Y244
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : こんな感じ
07:51 <Ryafuka> : 00:31:795 (2,6) - ここが
07:51 <Ryafuka> : すこしずれません?
07:51 <Ryafuka> : あ、nc変えたあとです
07:52 <Kitsuneko> : ずれてました('n`
07:52 <Ryafuka> : ;A;
07:53 <Kitsuneko> : (2) 320 264
07:53 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:325 (3) - 296 156
07:53 <Kitsuneko> : これくらいかねえ
07:54 <Kitsuneko> : 00:53:943 - ここ3連打でもいいよ
07:54 <Ryafuka> : ncがあれすぎて
07:55 <Ryafuka> : わけわかんなくなったwww
07:55 <Ryafuka> : ちょっと一回こうしんします
07:55 <Kitsuneko> : 時間軸だけでみてくだしww
07:55 <Ryafuka> : れんだにしました
07:55 <Ryafuka> : (2)は
07:55 <Ryafuka> : どこです?
07:56 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:148 (2) - 元々がここかな
07:57 <Ryafuka> : あ
07:57 <Ryafuka> : できたかも
07:58 <Ryafuka> : 更新したです
07:58 <Ryafuka> : Hardそのままあげてしまったww
07:59 <Kitsuneko> : www
08:01 <Ryafuka> : だいじょうぶそうかな
08:04 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:266 (5,2) - 148 248
08:04 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:148 (4) - 320 264
08:04 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:325 (5) - 296 156
08:05 <Kitsuneko> : どうでしょうか
08:05 <Kitsuneko> : 多少なら歪んでもプレイ中わかんない
08:05 <Ryafuka> : よさげ
08:05 <Ryafuka> : よしゃ
08:05 <Ryafuka> : ありがとーー
08:05 <Kitsuneko> : うい!
Thite
Scarlet Rain
00:37:090 (2) - 終わりにホイッスル追加?
00:38:854 - ノート追加してホイッスル追加?
00:39:207 - ^
00:39:560 - ^
00:54:737 - ここもノート追加してみては?
00:58:266 (1) - ホイッスル追加?


Silver Crow
00:58:266 (1,2,3) - スライダーの頭にホイッスル追加してみてはどうかなーって


Black Lotus
00:58:266 (1) - ホイッスル追加してみては?
00:58:972 (3) - ^
00:59:678 (1) - ^
01:15:472 (3,4) - 少し距離をはなしてみては?


もう1個簡単な難易度がほしいですー

なにも言うことなかったです、good map~ :)
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

Kitsuneko wrote:

nante tenuki mod da kore...
no kd de iiyo ii mod dayo!

[General]
00:00:384に赤線立てたほうが綺麗ね らじゃだ
00:00:384の赤線で音をSoftにして00:01:795に緑線でNormalに切り替え ok~
あとさすがにTVSizeなのに3.60で最低難易度は通らないんじゃないかな…多分もうひとつつくるとおもいます;A;

[Scarlet Rain]
00:01:266 - 00:01:443までのスライダー置いてもいいのでは 始まる位置が他のDiffと違う ok~

[Silver Crow]
00:01:795 (3,1) - 距離が近い 00:02:678 (1,2) - を調整 ok~
01:07:442 - ここ音要ると思う 01:07:442 に単発、01:07:619 - 01:07:795のスライダーの組み合わせとか ^

[Black Lotus]
01:25:090 (1,2,3,4,5) - ラスト置き方かえて(5)を中央に持ってこれたりするけれどどうでしょう http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/288483 うむむむ・・・no changeで!一応ここは00:15:913 (1,2,3,4) - をコピペして持ってきているのです ;A;
IRC Log
07:45 <Kitsuneko> : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/287550
07:45 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:972 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) -
07:45 <Kitsuneko> : ここなんだけど
07:46 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:266 (5,7) - もちょっと動かしてる
07:46 <Ryafuka> : 5ga
07:46 <Ryafuka> : nc?
07:46 <Kitsuneko> : その通り
07:49 <Ryafuka> : 五角形が
07:49 <Kitsuneko> : この形にするなら00:31:443 (6) - こっちにNCか
07:49 <Ryafuka> : きれいにならないいい
07:49 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:266 (5,7) -  X152 248
07:49 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:148 (2) - X320 Y260
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:325 (3) - X296 Y160
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:501 (4) - X188 Y144
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:678 (1) - X72 Y244
07:50 <Kitsuneko> : こんな感じ
07:51 <Ryafuka> : 00:31:795 (2,6) - ここが
07:51 <Ryafuka> : すこしずれません?
07:51 <Ryafuka> : あ、nc変えたあとです
07:52 <Kitsuneko> : ずれてました('n`
07:52 <Ryafuka> : ;A;
07:53 <Kitsuneko> : (2) 320 264
07:53 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:325 (3) - 296 156
07:53 <Kitsuneko> : これくらいかねえ
07:54 <Kitsuneko> : 00:53:943 - ここ3連打でもいいよ
07:54 <Ryafuka> : ncがあれすぎて
07:55 <Ryafuka> : わけわかんなくなったwww
07:55 <Ryafuka> : ちょっと一回こうしんします
07:55 <Kitsuneko> : 時間軸だけでみてくだしww
07:55 <Ryafuka> : れんだにしました
07:55 <Ryafuka> : (2)は
07:55 <Ryafuka> : どこです?
07:56 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:148 (2) - 元々がここかな
07:57 <Ryafuka> : あ
07:57 <Ryafuka> : できたかも
07:58 <Ryafuka> : 更新したです
07:58 <Ryafuka> : Hardそのままあげてしまったww
07:59 <Kitsuneko> : www
08:01 <Ryafuka> : だいじょうぶそうかな
08:04 <Kitsuneko> : 00:31:266 (5,2) - 148 248
08:04 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:148 (4) - 320 264
08:04 <Kitsuneko> : 00:32:325 (5) - 296 156
08:05 <Kitsuneko> : どうでしょうか
08:05 <Kitsuneko> : 多少なら歪んでもプレイ中わかんない
08:05 <Ryafuka> : よさげ
08:05 <Ryafuka> : よしゃ
08:05 <Ryafuka> : ありがとーー
08:05 <Kitsuneko> : うい!
thanks mod ></

Thite wrote:

Scarlet Rain
00:37:090 (2) - 終わりにホイッスル追加? ok~
00:38:854 - ノート追加してホイッスル追加?^
00:39:207 - ^ ^
00:39:560 - ^ ^
00:54:737 - ここもノート追加してみては? no change T_T
00:58:266 (1) - ホイッスル追加?ok~


Silver Crow
00:58:266 (1,2,3) - スライダーの頭にホイッスル追加してみてはどうかなーって ok~


Black Lotus
00:58:266 (1) - ホイッスル追加してみては? ok~
00:58:972 (3) - ^ ^
00:59:678 (1) - ^ ^
01:15:472 (3,4) - 少し距離をはなしてみては? no change T_T


もう1個簡単な難易度がほしいですー
多分つくるとおもいますー;A;

なにも言うことなかったです、good map~ :)
thanks mod and star ></


> climbb65588
I changed offset of your diff~
please update
~ ;A;
Gamu
meow :3
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

-Gamu- wrote:

meow :3
meow thanks star :3
Cilvery
はろりゃふか(´^‿^`)

[Black Lotus]

00:01:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ここまでのclapをfinishにした方がいいと思います(好みかも

00:10:972 (1,2,3) - whistleあったほうがいいかなああ(ここはよくわからないけどちょっと寂しかった

00:38:501 (1,2,3,4) - "00:58:266 (1,2,3,4,1) - "ここに同じような音が入ってるのでwhistle付けた方が統一感あると思います(全体的に鳴ってると思うけど目立つ所だけ)

00:44:501 (4,1,2,3,4) - これごとちょっとずらして 00:44:501 (4) - と 00:45:560 (4) - を 00:43:619 (6) - にスタックするといいと思います

00:45:560 (4) - add whistle (00:38:501同様)

00:46:266 (1,3) - ^

00:47:678 (1) - ^

01:20:854 (6) - add finish

初心者MOD終わり~~

良い曲

頑張ってぷろりゃふか(´▽ `*)
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

Cilvery wrote:

はろりゃふか(´^‿^`) はろべりー( ◠‿◠ )

[Black Lotus]

00:01:266 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ここまでのclapをfinishにした方がいいと思います(好みかも no change T_T

00:10:972 (1,2,3) - whistleあったほうがいいかなああ(ここはよくわからないけどちょっと寂しかった ここは後ろの音が静かになってるのでこのままにしました!

00:38:501 (1,2,3,4) - "00:58:266 (1,2,3,4,1) - "ここに同じような音が入ってるのでwhistle付けた方が統一感あると思います(全体的に鳴ってると思うけど目立つ所だけ) 少し変更しましたー

00:44:501 (4,1,2,3,4) - これごとちょっとずらして 00:44:501 (4) - と 00:45:560 (4) - を 00:43:619 (6) - にスタックするといいと思います stackさせましたー

00:45:560 (4) - add whistle (00:38:501同様) no change T_T

00:46:266 (1,3) - ^ 参考にしてちょっとだけwhistleを加えましたー

00:47:678 (1) - ^ こっちはno changeでT_T

01:20:854 (6) - add finish 音が浮いちゃうのでno change T_T

初心者MOD終わり~~

良い曲

頑張ってぷろりゃふか(´▽ `*)
thanks modding~ :)
Melophobia
Hi ♥

[General]
スカーレットレインよりシアンパイルを推します(黒のレギオン的な意味で)

[Lime Bell]
00:06:913 (1) - 無理に歌詞拾う必要ない&最低難易度で1/2は避けたいのでremove
01:12:736 (3,4,1) - 難しすぎるimo

BPM高いのでSlider同士でも1/2間隔でnotes置くのを減らす事をおすすめします

[Silver Crow]
00:23:325 (2) - 1grid↑
00:25:090 (7,1,2) - (7,1)がきつめのjumpなのに対して
(1,3)は一拍置いててちょっと読みにくいかも
http://puu.sh/pdz9
こんな感じにすると流れ的にもイイかと思います
00:42:737 (1) - ちょっと形が歪
01:04:443 (5,1) - overlapするしもっと広くても十分読めるかと
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289514
01:06:384 (6) - 終点をもうちょっと上に移動

[Black Lotus]
00:06:207 (5,6,7) - Normal使うにしてはovermap気味かも・・?
00:08:854 (3) - backの音が消えるのでclap無い方がいいかなって思います 音量下げるとなお良し
00:42:737 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音に全く合ってない。。。。
00:45:560 (4,1) - 4からspacing上がるのでswitch newcombos?
00:52:090 (3) - 中途半端な位置でoverlapしてるので2,3を少し上げて
00:52:619 (1) - の始点にstack?
01:11:854 (4,5) - 曲が飛びたがって(ry
01:16:619 (4,5,6) - 5をもう少し遠くに置いて飛ばしてみた方がいいかなー
01:22:972 (1) - ザーって音要らないと思います

神譜面すぎわろた
ただせっかくAR9なのでもうちょっとjumpあるといいと思いますん

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
remove the video from this diff
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

Melophobia wrote:

Hi ♥ hi <3

[General]
スカーレットレインよりシアンパイルを推します(黒のレギオン的な意味で) 俺も作り終えてからおもってた・・・変えました~~

[Lime Bell]
00:06:913 (1) - 無理に歌詞拾う必要ない&最低難易度で1/2は避けたいのでremove ok~
01:12:736 (3,4,1) - 難しすぎるimo noteにしましたー

BPM高いのでSlider同士でも1/2間隔でnotes置くのを減らす事をおすすめします

[Silver Crow]
00:23:325 (2) - 1grid↑ ok~
00:25:090 (7,1,2) - (7,1)がきつめのjumpなのに対して
(1,3)は一拍置いててちょっと読みにくいかも
http://puu.sh/pdz9
こんな感じにすると流れ的にもイイかと思います ok~
00:42:737 (1) - ちょっと形が歪 ^
01:04:443 (5,1) - overlapするしもっと広くても十分読めるかと 参考にしてちょっと変えた!
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289514
01:06:384 (6) - 終点をもうちょっと上に移動 ok~

[Black Lotus]
00:06:207 (5,6,7) - Normal使うにしてはovermap気味かも・・? no change T_T
00:08:854 (3) - backの音が消えるのでclap無い方がいいかなって思います 音量下げるとなお良し 全diff変えましたー
00:42:737 (1,2,3,4,5) - 音に全く合ってない。。。。 一応ぼーかるあわせてる~
00:45:560 (4,1) - 4からspacing上がるのでswitch newcombos? ok~
00:52:090 (3) - 中途半端な位置でoverlapしてるので2,3を少し上げて
00:52:619 (1) - の始点にstack? ^
01:11:854 (4,5) - 曲が飛びたがって(ry ちょっと配置変えてみたー
01:16:619 (4,5,6) - 5をもう少し遠くに置いて飛ばしてみた方がいいかなー DS1.8にしたー
01:22:972 (1) - ザーって音要らないと思います soft-sliderslideいれた!

神譜面すぎわろた <3
ただせっかくAR9なのでもうちょっとjumpあるといいと思いますん うむむ・・考慮してみます

[Climbb's Taiko Oni]
remove the video from this diff remove~
thanks melo chan <3
YTYuyu
meh why not. i might as well. if you ignore any of my suggestions, please give me a reason why you ignored them. i want to hear your opinion on my suggestions.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should take a look, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
ik you add more combo colors than this. I suggest adding a blue and purple combo color to match the girl's hair and clothing.
Avoid using the white combo color and i mean fully white because it'd be hard for players to see weather if the slider is a repeat or not.
I'm guessing that the diff names are related to this show.

[Lime Bell]
00:08:942 (1) - space out this spinner because this will surprise beginners, so to make this easier, get rid of the repeat and add a circle. it should be like this
00:24:031 - add a circle for a slider to circle pattern, and to follow vocals?
00:33:913 (1) - replace this for a circle to make it easier for beginners. they might not hit (2) on time since (1) is so close.
00:38:854 (2) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the next slider?
00:43:795 (2) - same as 00:33:913.
00:59:766 (1) - same as 00:08:942 but find a way to space out this spinner.
01:06:736 (3) - extend this slider till 01:07:266 to follow the long pause accurately.
01:14:854 (3) - remove the repeat and add a 1/2 slider starting at 01:15:560 to follow vocals accurately.
01:20:942 (1) - same as 00:59:766.
01:26:942 (1) - ^

[Cyan Pile]
00:25:795 (1,2,3,4) - these notes look like they were put randomly. I suggest making a shape out of these notes to make it fun and easy for players.
00:38:854 (3) - a NC here because it follows instrumental?
00:51:737 (2) - (1) looks fine but my concern is this note because by the time the spinner is done, the hitburst is still covering this note. players might not be able to react in time to know that the second slider is there. I suggest moving it somewhere else where it can be fully visible for players.
01:12:207 (2,3,4) - replace this for a circle and a 2/1 slider starting from 01:12:383 to follow vocals accurately. it should be like this.

[Silver Crow]
00:18:383 (1,2) - the repeat doesn't fit with this part, so to make it flow better, get rid of the repeat and either add a circle or remove (2) and add a 1/2 slider to follow vocals accurately.
00:29:325 (5) - movve it up to not only avoid the overlap, but to make the end of (3,4) and the beginning of (5) like a triangle. should be like this.
00:37:619 (3) - this would be hard to read because the end of (3) is under (2), so to make it less confusing, stack the end of (3) at the end of (2).
00:39:913 (1) - here too, stack this on the end of (1) to make it less confusing for players.
01:07:442 (1,2) - remove the NC for (1) because that's where the vocals stop, and (2) should be a NC because that's where the vocals start.

[Black Lotus]
00:15:913 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a 1/3 stream to challenge players? although they're my weakness >.<
00:22:972 (1,2) - replace this for 2 1/2 sliders to follow vocals accurately. the 1/1 slider doesn't fit with the part.
00:48:384 (4) - idk if this is unrankable but i suggest fixing it because the hitburst is slightly covering the repeat arrow.

I guess that's it. i'm no timing expert but i think the timing is slightly off. talk to a timing expert to confirm this. anyways GL :D
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

Byakugan249 wrote:

meh why not. i might as well. if you ignore any of my suggestions, please give me a reason why you ignored them. i want to hear your opinion on my suggestions.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should take a look, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion.

[General]
ik you add more combo colors than this. I suggest adding a blue and purple combo color to match the girl's hair and clothing.
Avoid using the white combo color and i mean fully white because it'd be hard for players to see weather if the slider is a repeat or not.
I'm guessing that the diff names are related to this show.
The origin of this diff's name is a name of the person who appears. But, they hasn't appeared in "Anime" yet... Since I have all original novels, I can know it.
Furthermore, a combo color is dependent on the color of "Silver Crow" which is a hero, and "Black Lotus" which is the main heroine..
So, I won't change combo color..sorry :(


[Lime Bell]
00:08:942 (1) - space out this spinner because this will surprise beginners, so to make this easier, get rid of the repeat and add a circle. it should be like this ok~
00:24:031 - add a circle for a slider to circle pattern, and to follow vocals? ^
00:33:913 (1) - replace this for a circle to make it easier for beginners. they might not hit (2) on time since (1) is so close. ^
00:38:854 (2) - maybe make this a curved slider to blanket the next slider? ^
00:43:795 (2) - same as 00:33:913. ^
00:59:766 (1) - same as 00:08:942 but find a way to space out this spinner. hm.. ok,I put bigginer of spinner on red tick.
01:06:736 (3) - extend this slider till 01:07:266 to follow the long pause accurately. ok
01:14:854 (3) - remove the repeat and add a 1/2 slider starting at 01:15:560 to follow vocals accurately. ^
01:20:942 (1) - same as 00:59:766. same change~
01:26:942 (1) - ^ ^

[Cyan Pile]
00:25:795 (1,2,3,4) - these notes look like they were put randomly. I suggest making a shape out of these notes to make it fun and easy for players. These notes has formed a star ;)
00:38:854 (3) - a NC here because it follows instrumental? I change NC here 00:37:090 (1) - .Because sound has changed from here 00:38:501 - .
00:51:737 (2) - (1) looks fine but my concern is this note because by the time the spinner is done, the hitburst is still covering this note. players might not be able to react in time to know that the second slider is there. I suggest moving it somewhere else where it can be fully visible for players. no change..because there are that there is overlapping in the between slider,play has few trouble,I think. ;)
01:12:207 (2,3,4) - replace this for a circle and a 2/1 slider starting from 01:12:383 to follow vocals accurately. it should be like this. no change..I actually think that I am satisfactory in this sound.

[Silver Crow]
00:18:383 (1,2) - the repeat doesn't fit with this part, so to make it flow better, get rid of the repeat and either add a circle or remove (2) and add a 1/2 slider to follow vocals accurately. ok,I rid of the repeat and add circle.
00:29:325 (5) - movve it up to not only avoid the overlap, but to make the end of (3,4) and the beginning of (5) like a triangle. should be like this. ok
00:37:619 (3) - this would be hard to read because the end of (3) is under (2), so to make it less confusing, stack the end of (3) at the end of (2). hmm..Since this is "Hard", I hope that it is ok.. ;)
00:39:913 (1) - here too, stack this on the end of (1) to make it less confusing for players. ^
01:07:442 (1,2) - remove the NC for (1) because that's where the vocals stop, and (2) should be a NC because that's where the vocals start. no change~ It has actually good sound and follows jumped it..

[Black Lotus]
00:15:913 (1,2,3,4) - replace this for a 1/3 stream to challenge players? although they're my weakness >.< this is good sound to me..I won't change this..><
00:22:972 (1,2) - replace this for 2 1/2 sliders to follow vocals accurately. the 1/1 slider doesn't fit with the part. ^
00:48:384 (4) - idk if this is unrankable but i suggest fixing it because the hitburst is slightly covering the repeat arrow. hmm..I won't change this now..but,it may change,when said other modder.. :( I hope not become so :D

I guess that's it. i'm no timing expert but i think the timing is slightly off. talk to a timing expert to confirm this. anyways GL :D okay,I ask other modder :)
thanks modding :)
and sorry for my poor English >.<
Kuria
coming here for the small mod.

Lime Bell:
00:01:795 (1) - i think make it like this would be better, since it was easy diff, no need to make it a bit catchy.
00:19:795 (3) - remove this note here? if not, then i think you should add the notes in 00:22:619 part too, while it will makes the pattern to became a bit hard for the new player =='
00:24:031 (2,4) - remove this notes.
00:56:148 (3) - make it like this? I think the one that you made at that part that part looks a bit confusing and seems like a "trap" to the player 8-)
00:56:148 (3) - add notes here?
01:04:972 (1) - make it like this?



Cyan Pile:
Is it just me or it seems that this diff are rather seems like semi-hard/hard than normal? ==', if you like, i'm suggest you to use SV 1.0 rather than 1.2
01:03:737 (3) - move it up a bit on the endpoint of the slider?
00:54:031 (3) - move it to x360, y332
00:58:266 (1) - x236, y100
00:58:972 (2) - x56, y260
00:59:678 (3) - x284, y328
Silver Crow:
00:04:443 (2) - remove this slider, instead of that, i prefer if you make it like this:
SPOILER
from 00:04:090 into 00:06:031
[img]http://puu.sh/ptEI
[/img]
from that timeline, make this pattern

IMO it can be much better if you do it that way.
00:16:266 (2) - x156, y252
00:16:619 (3) - x324, y300
00:16:972 (4) - x216, y160
00:18:031 (4) - make it like this
01:03:737 (3) - x160, y280
Black Lotus:
00:06:295 (5,6,1,2) - for this pattern, how about make it like this one?
00:14:766 (3,4) - move this a bit to x124, y132
00:18:207 (4) - i think move this notes to x240, y204 would be better, it was a bit confusing when you placed it on x173, y257 b4
00:31:266 (5,1,2,3) - is it just me or i feel the spacing/pattern in this part seems a bit forced? o.o, if you like i'm suggest you to move the 00:31:443 (1) slider to x76, y364
00:43:619 (6) - remove the notes?
00:43:972 (2) - x408, y160
00:44:148 (3) - x380, y276
00:44:501 (4) - x280, y272
00:44:678 - 00:44:678 - i think make some jumps in this part would be better, if you agree with it, i suggest that you make it like this:
00:57:031 (4) - x392, y56
01:03:560 (2) - x252, y228
01:03:737 (3) - x364, y136
01:04:972 (2) - x144, y188
01:07:619 (1,3) - x36, y124
01:07:795 (2) - x164, y60
01:08:501 (6) - x280, y252?
01:19:090 (2) - x136, y196
01:19:266 (3,4) - x256, y120
that's all, i hope it can be helpful for you^^
Topic Starter
Ryafuka

Envi wrote:

coming here for the small mod.

Lime Bell:
00:01:795 (1) - i think make it like this would be better, since it was easy diff, no need to make it a bit catchy. no~
00:19:795 (3) - remove this note here? if not, then i think you should add the notes in 00:22:619 part too, while it will makes the pattern to became a bit hard for the new player ==' I added notes here 00:22:619 -
00:24:031 (2,4) - remove this notes. no~
00:56:148 (3) - make it like this? I think the one that you made at that part that part looks a bit confusing and seems like a "trap" to the player 8-) ^
00:56:148 (3) - add notes here? ^
01:04:972 (1) - make it like this? ok,but, arrangement becomes another thing.



Cyan Pile:
Is it just me or it seems that this diff are rather seems like semi-hard/hard than normal? ==', if you like, i'm suggest you to use SV 1.0 rather than 1.2 hm..this is just "Normal". but,I feel that it does not become a more problem :(
01:03:737 (3) - move it up a bit on the endpoint of the slider? no~
00:54:031 (3) - move it to x360, y332 ok~
00:58:266 (1) - x236, y100 ^
00:58:972 (2) - x56, y260 ^
00:59:678 (3) - x284, y328 ^
Silver Crow:
00:04:443 (2) - remove this slider, instead of that, i prefer if you make it like this: no~
SPOILER
from 00:04:090 into 00:06:031
[img]http://puu.sh/ptEI
[/img]
from that timeline, make this pattern

IMO it can be much better if you do it that way.
00:16:266 (2) - x156, y252 ok~
00:16:619 (3) - x324, y300 ^
00:16:972 (4) - x216, y160 ^
00:18:031 (4) - make it like this few was change~
01:03:737 (3) - x160, y280 no~
Black Lotus:
00:06:295 (5,6,1,2) - for this pattern, how about make it like this one? no~
00:14:766 (3,4) - move this a bit to x124, y132 ok~
00:18:207 (4) - i think move this notes to x240, y204 would be better, it was a bit confusing when you placed it on x173, y257 b4 no~
00:31:266 (5,1,2,3) - is it just me or i feel the spacing/pattern in this part seems a bit forced? o.o, if you like i'm suggest you to move the 00:31:443 (1) slider to x76, y364 ^
00:43:619 (6) - remove the notes? ^
00:43:972 (2) - x408, y160 ^
00:44:148 (3) - x380, y276 ^
00:44:501 (4) - x280, y272 ^
00:44:678 - 00:44:678 - i think make some jumps in this part would be better, if you agree with it, i suggest that you make it like this:^
00:57:031 (4) - x392, y56 ^
01:03:560 (2) - x252, y228 ^
01:03:737 (3) - x364, y136 ^
01:04:972 (2) - x144, y188 ok~
01:07:619 (1,3) - x36, y124 no~
01:07:795 (2) - x164, y60 ^
01:08:501 (6) - x280, y252?^
01:19:090 (2) - x136, y196 ^
01:19:266 (3,4) - x256, y120 ^
that's all, i hope it can be helpful for you^^
thanks modding :)
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